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Amita ji, I have told you once and I say once again, forget all the things and come back. We are all waiting for you.
🖤🖤🖤
आकाश जी ! फेस्टिवल सीजन है तो लोग व्यस्त होंगे ही ।
अमिता जी भी आयेंगी लेकिन शायद थोड़ा समय लगे ।
कैसे कोई आपने प्रशंसकों को निराश कर सकता है । इतना प्यार... इतना अपनापन... इतनी इज्जत.... और कहां मिलता है । इस फोरम की यही तो सबसे बड़ी ताकत है ।
 

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Update 13

Ruchika meri taraf dekhne lagi tu maine use kaha ki jo pasand hai le lo. Usne kuch nahi liya tu bahar aakar puchhne par usne kaha "aap mujhe baad me le dena, abhi college jaldi jana hai aur dusra Mom ko kya bataungi" Maine use kuch na kehte hue bike se college chhod diya. Vo tu chali gayi lekin Mohanlal ke dil me khalbali macha gayi.

Mohanlal vahan se jaane Laga Lekin Aaj uska man bahut vichlit tha aur uska Dil Kah Raha tha ki kash thoda waqt aur mil jata Ruchika ke sath gujarne ke liye. Lekin ye Mumkin nahin tha aur bhari man se vah Ghar ki taraf chal pada.

Ghar pahunch kar Sandhya ne poochha "kya baat hai bahut der laga di" to uske jawab mein Mohanlal ne kaha ki "Sandhya ke liye gehne lene chala gaya tha aur lekar use college mein de kar aaya hun"

Sandhya baat jaankar bahut Khushi Hui chalo ek kam to nipata aur usse khushi iss baat ki thi ki uski beti aaj acchi lagegi. Uske baad vo jakar Mohanlal ke liye chai lekar aai tu Mohanlal apani socho me gum the aur apane aap se lad rahe the ki Sandhya ke chai lane se unki tandra bhang hui aur jab chai dene ke liye vo jhuki tu uska pallu sarak gaya tu Mohanlal ke man me aane laga ki vo kaise apani biwi ko us dard se chutkara dilwaye tu usne bade pyaar se usse apane paas baitha liya aur usko kaha ki vo bhi apani chai le aaye aur sath me baith kar piye.

Sandhya bahana karne lagi lekin Mohanlal ki zid ke samne uski ek na chali aur vo bhi chai lekar aa gayi. Donon chai pine lage tu Mohanlal usse bade hi pyaar se baat karne laga aur usko apani chikni chupadi baton me fansa kar kah raha tha ki vo uske sath Doctor ke paas chalkar pata kar le ki koi beemari hai tu uska ilaj karwa lete hain.

Sandhya usse kehne lagi ki usse Doctor ke paas jane me dar lagta hai ki agar kuch badi beemari hui tu fir usko hospital me admit hona padega aur uske bacchon ka khyal koun karega.

Mohanlal ne apane ek hath ko uske kandhe par rakhkar kaha "Tum aise hi chinta kar rahi ho, ek baar Doctor ko dikha kar apane dar ko khatam kar lo", Sandhya ne kaha "agar kuch badi baat hui tu".

Mohanlal ne uski gardan ke peeche se hath nikalkar uske kandhe ko pakad kar apane aagosh me lete hue uske mathe ko chumkar usse kaha "Dekho jab tak ham dikhayenge nahi tu hame pata kaise lagega ki baat choti hai ya badi, aur chalo main ek minute ke liye maan lete hain ki baat badi hai, jiske liye mera dil nahi manta fir bhi agar badi hai tu uska ilaj karwayenge aur aajkal tu har beemari ka ilaj hai"

Sandhya bhi uski baat sunkar bhavuk ho gayi aur apane chehre ko Mohanlal ke kandhe par rakhkar aane lagi ,"Agar kuch bada hua tu mere bad mere bacchon ka kya hoga"

Mohanlal: (uske kandhe ko salhaate hue) Tum to bagair kuchh jaane itni badi baat bol rahi ho, ho sakta hai ki kuchh ho hi na aur tumne pata nahin kya kya soch Liya

Sandhya: aur kuchh hua to
Mohanlal: to uska ilaaj karenge

Sandhya: ilaaj ke liye aise kahan se aaenge
Mohanlal: Tum paison ki chinta kyon kar rahi ho aur dusri baat yah man kar kyon chal rahi ho ki tumhen koi bahut badi bimari ho gai hai

Sandhya: mujhe aisa lag raha hai
Mohanlal: Main tumhari ab kuchh nahin sununga aur chalo taiyar ho jao tumhen doctor pass le chal raha hun

Sandhya: Fir bacchon ka kya hoga
Mohanlal: ab bacche bacche nahin rahe vah bade ho gaye hain (uski aankhon mein Ruchika ka akas ubhar aaya)

Sandhya: Fir bhi
Mohanlal: Tum nahin chahti ki tum normal life jio aur jindagi ko enjoy karo

Sandhya: main kyon nahin chahungi mujhe maloom hai ki Main main aapko pichhle kai salon se sukh nahin de payi hun. Main to chahungi ki aapko pura Sukh dun lekin man mein ek Ajeeb sa dar hai

Mohanlal: (Uske Gaalo ko sehalate hue aur uske hothon per Apne anguthe se malte hue) baki baten chhodo aur chalo doctor ke paas

Sandhya Mohanlal ki baat mankar taiyar hokar aa gai aur vah donon bike per uh baithkar Doctor ke paas jaane lage tu aaj Mohanlal ko feel hua ki jaise peeche Sandhya nahi Ruchika baithi ho.

Vo donon Doctor ke paas panhuch gaye tu vanha 2 patients pehle se wait kar rahe the, unka number aane par vo andar gaye tu Doctor se baat ki aur fir vo Sandhya ko examination room me le gayi aur Mohanlal ko bahar bhej diya. 30 minute baad Mohanlal ko bulaya gaya tu Doctor jo ek adhedh umar ki mahila thi usne kaha "Maine acchi tarah se check kar liya hai aur jayada ghabrane ki baat nahi hai, Haan thodha ilaj lamba chal sakta hai, maine sari baatein Sandhya ko samjha di hain aur thodhi baatein mujhe tum se akele me karni hain isliye Sandhya Tum bahar intezar karo"

Sandhya ke bahar jane par Doctor ne kaha ki "Dekho usko yoni ki jo muscles hain vo intercourse ke waqt tight ho jati hain jiska karan janna itna aasaan nahin hota, kai baar ye problem temporary hoti hai aur kai baar bahut lambe waqt tak chalti hai aur aise waqt me tumhe Uske sath jabardasti nahi karni aur use ye bhi nahi lagna chahiye ki tum iss vajah se usse dur ho rahe ho. Sex ki jarurat tumhari bhi hai aur uski bhi hai, intercourse nahin karna hai jab tak vo theek na ho jaye, lekin dusre tarikon se usko relax feel karwana jaruri hai, nahi tu beemari bad jayegi. Tumhe kitna bhi gussa aa raha ho ya mood kharab ho lekin uske samne kabhi bhi mat dikhana kyoui uska seedha asar uski manodasha par padega aur beemari theek hone ki bajaye badh jayegi"

Mohanlal: Maine tu kabhi bhi usse gussa nahi kiya hai fir uska iss tarah se behave karna.
Doctor: Dekho jaisa ki maine pehle bhi kaha hai ki iss beemari ka theek se bata pana ki kyoun shuru hui bahut mushkil hai, lekin iske kai karan ho sakte hai jaise

1. kisi baat ka dar
2. Bachpan me ghati koi ghatna
3. Bacche ke janam ke baad yoni ki muscles ka kuch jayada sikudna
4.Early menopause
5. Anxiety
6. Psychological

aur bhi bahut kuch hai, lekin iss beemari ko dur karne ke liye sanyam ki jarurat hai.

Fir Doctor ne Sandhya ko bulakar in donon ki counseling ki aur kuch khane ki dawaiyana aur exercise batai aur hamesha khush rahene ke liye kaha. Usne kuch Tests bhi bataye lekin ye kaha ki 3 mahine lagatar dawai khane ke baad karana.
usne sabse jayada jaruri baat batai ki 'tum donon me asalii prem ki jarurat hai jo sharirik tu ho lekin bina sehvaas ke aur sanyam rakhe'

Vanha se nikalne ke baad ghar panhuch kar Sandhya preshan hone lagi aur kehne lagi 'Main ab aapke layak nahi rahi aur aapko patni ka sukh bhi nahi de paungi'

Mohanlal: (Usko apane aagosh me lete hue aur uske mathe ko chumte hue) Tum bilkul bhi iss bare me mat socho, maine kabhi bhi tum se iss bare me shikayat ki hai ? Dekho ab tu tumhe khush hona chahiye ki tumhe koi bahut badi beemari nahi hai. Ye tu theek ho jayegi, thodha waqt lagega, intezar kar lenge.

Sandhya: (subakte hue) Main aapko sukh nahi de sakti, aap dusri shadi kar lijiye
Mohanlal: Tum tu bina baat ke preshan ho rahi ho, Sahvaas hi tu nahi kar sakte baki sab kuch tu kar sakte hain aur vo bhi kuch waqt ke liye, tum jab theek ho jaogi tu fir kar lenge.

Sandhya: Tab tak main budhi ho jaungi aur aapke kisi kaam ki nahi ranhugi.
Mohanlal: Pehli baat tu tumhe budha hone me bahut waqt hai, dusra kuch waqt me tum theek ho jaogi. Tum tu abhi Ruchika ki badi behen lagati ho na ki maa

Sandhya: (muskarate hue) jab bhi mouka milta hai chedne lagte ho

Mohanlal uski baat sunkar Sandhya ko kas kar pakad leta hai aur uske rasbhare honthon ko apane honthon me jakad leta hai aur dhire dhire chusne lagta hai aur Sandhya bhi usse support karne lagti hai aur donon dhire dhire ek dusre ke sharir ko feel karne lagte hain, parantu Mohanlal apane man par niyantran karte hue usse aaram se baitha deta hai aur kehta hai 'Tum bahut acchi ho'

Sandhya sharmane lagati hai aur fir kitchen se kuch khane ka lekar aati hai aur donon bade pyaar se ek dusre ko chedhte hue khana khate rahe.

Fir Sandhya ne Mohanlal ko Ruchika ko lane ke liye kaha tu Mohanlal bike lekar Ruchika ko lene chala gaya.

Mohanlal jab Ruchika ko lene panhucha tu function khatam ho chuka tha aur vo college ke bahar bus stand par wait kar rahi thi. Uske sath uski ek saheli bhi wahi wait kar rahi thi aur donon hi thodha ghabrai hui thi.
Jab vo usse lene panhucha tu function khatam ho chuka tha aur Ruchika college ke bahar bus stand par wait kar rahi thi. Uske sath uski ek saheli bhi wahi wait kar rahi thi aur donon hi thodha ghabrai hui thi.

Unko us tarah dekhkar Mohanlal ne puccha ki kya hua tu usne jawab me itna hi kaha "Jaldi chalo"

Mohanlal ne kaha baitho tu vo donon hi mere peeche bike par baith gayi. Ab seat ki lamabi kam hone ki vajah se mujhe thoda aage hona pada lekin fir bhi Ruchika mujhse bilkul sat gayi kyounki uski saheli uske pichhe baithi thi. Uske sattne se Ruchika ki chuchiyan Mohanlal ki peeth se dabne lagi jo ki bahut hi naram aur mulayam lag rahi thi. Uska iss tarah ka saparsh usse ek ajib si feeling de raha tha, lekin uska dimagh kah raha tha ki ye kya soch raha hai vo teri beti hai. Abhi Dil aur dimag mein ladai chal rahi thi kuch aisa hua jisse Mohanlal ko ekdam se bike rokani padi aur jo kuch hua usse sochkar Mohanlal ki aankh khul gayi
Good that Mohanlal could convince Sandhya for medical help.


Amita ji, tell me one thing,

Are you a Doctor?


These things are known to a Doctor that too who is experienced one.
Anyhow good going.
 

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I don't like Sandhya's nature, how many times Mohanlal has said but Sandhya does not agree, only after going to the doctor will you know what the problem is. Eventually Mohanlal managed to convince Sandhya. Sandhya is a over thinking woman. I am not saying here that sandhya is wrong but she is very good. Ruchika was nervous in the bus stand, that means something happened.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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I think it's just normal.
It is more so related to her illiteracy and fear of something big.

Anyway good review
 

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Bohut sahndar lajawab update thee Sandheya ka matter aak turha say iysey mahelawo kay leya aak namuna hay joo waqt pay apny kisi roog ka elaj sahi nahi kurwaty or uss ko lumba khechty hay ager yea elaj woo suru main hee kurwaty tuu bohut see samsyawo say buch jaty khar chaloo suker hay baat maani tuu lakin Mohanlal tuu lugta hay kay Ruchika kay leya uss ka dil dhurkna suru huu gaya hay mohabat apna roop badal rahi hay must update thaa Amita jee khass turr pay sub Nariyoo kay leya bohut acha sabak deya hay
You are right, however majority of the population is like this.

Actually whatever we perceive is because of environment around us.

But in actual practice it's altogether different.

There are people who wouldn't take any medicine whatsoever it may be.

Good review
 

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Update 14

Mohanlal ne kaha baitho tu vo donon hi mere peeche bike par baith gayi. Ab seat ki lamabi kam hone ki vajah se mujhe thoda aage hona pada lekin fir bhi Ruchika mujhse bilkul sat gayi kyounki uski saheli uske pichhe baithi thi. Uske sattne se Ruchika ki chuchiyan Mohanlal ki peeth se dabne lagi jo ki bahut hi naram aur mulayam lag rahi thi. Uska iss tarah ka saparsh usse ek ajib si feeling de raha tha, lekin uska dimagh kah raha tha ki ye kya soch raha hai vo teri beti hai. Abhi Dil aur dimag mein ladai chal rahi thi kuch aisa hua jisse Mohanlal ko ekdam se bike rokani padi aur jo kuch hua usse sochkar Mohanlal aankh khul gayi.

Mohanlal ko vo drishye aaj bhi yaad tha aur uss ko sochkar use pasina aa gaya.

Ek jeep peeche se teji se aayi aur usme baithe ek ladke ne Ruchika ki saheli ko uski peeth par kuch mara jisse vo bike se girne lagi aur bike ko tez jhatka laga aur bike ka balance bigad gaya tu Mohanlal ne bike ko sadak ke kinare gadde me jane se bachne ke liye break maar di lekin Ruchika iss sab me bahut dar gayi aur cheekh maar kar Mohanlal ko kas kar pakad liya.

Jeep ne bike se aage nikal kar rasta rok liya aur usmein se koi 4 hate cutte ladke nikale aur bike ke paas aane lage. Ruchika ki saheli (Seema) bike se neeche utar gayi aur chot lagne se uski peeth par bahut dard ho raha tha aur uski aankhon se aansu bahe rahe the aur vo bahut dari hui thi. Mohanlal ne Ruchika ko bhi neeche uttarne ke liye kaha lekin vo dar ke mare Uttar nahi rahi thi tu usne usse bade pyaar se kaha ki darne ki jarurat nahi hai. Vo Uttar gayi aur Mohanlal bhi, lekin Ruchika usse chhodne ko taiyar nahi thi. Mohanlal ne use uski saheli ko sambhalne ke liye kaha aur vo aage jakar un ladko ke paas panhucha.

Mohanlal ne poochha ki kya baat hai to usmein se ek ladka Ne Ruchika ki saheli ki taraf hath se isshara kiya aur bola "is chamiya Ko yanha chhod aur tu nikal"
Mohanlal ko uski baat sunkar bahut gussa aaya aur usne kaha ki ladki tu uske sath hi jayegi.

Mohanlal ki baat sunkar uss ladke ne kaha "abe tujhe samajh nahin a rahi, kahin aisa Na ho ki tu apne hath pair se sahi salamat hi na rahe, yah to Maine tujhe sharafat se kaha tha ek ladki ko chhod aur tu ja, agar tu nahin gaya to tere liye achcha nahin hoga'

Mohanlal ka itna sunna tha ki uska gussa bahut badh gaya aur vo uske munh per ek mukka maar deta hai aur tab uske do sathiyon ne dusri taraf se jakar Ruchika aur uski saheli ko pakad liya.

Mohanlal ne dekha tu uska khoon kholna laga kyounki vo ladke un donon ke sath badtamizi kar rahe the jisse uska para satve aasman par jane laga lekin usne apane aap ko shant rakha hua tha Kyounki usse un donon ladkiyon ko pehle bachana tha baki sab baad me.

Tabhi un mein se ek ne Ruchika ko apani aur khichate hue bola, “Chhamiya us launde se kya chipak rahi thi, aa ja rani jo tujhe chahiye wo to hamare paas bhi hai.” aur sab hasne lage. Mujhe gussa aaya aur unhe gaali dete hue kaha ki bakwaas band karo nahi to achha nahi hoga. Wo chaaron kehne lage, “Munna achha to ab tum logon ke saath nahi hoga, pehle tu ham ek ladki ko le ja rahe the, lekin ye dusri tu aur bhi kadak hai, aaj in donon ke sath raat bhar maze karenge aur agar tu apani jaan ki salamati chahta hai tu jaldi se bhaag yanha se, nahi tu abhi tera kirya karam kar denge (un ladkoo ke sardar ne ek bada sa chaku nikal liya"

Mohanlal ne kaha "Theek hai jo tumhe karna hai karo lekin mujhe tu jane do"

In ladko ka sardar jisko Mukka mara tha usne kaha "Tu jayega tu sahi lekin pehle uss mukke ka hissab tu karna padega na" ye kah kar vo Mohanlal ki taraf aane laga aur ab vo thodha laparvah lag raha tha aur chaku ko apani pocket me rakhte hue Mohanlal ki taraf mukka mara lekin Mohanlal iss ke liye taiyar tha aur usne mukke wale hath ko pakad kar hath marod diya aur uski gardan ko apani bazu me kaid kar liya jisse vo chhut na paye.

Mohanlal ne un ladko se kaha ki "ladkiyon ko chhod do nahi tu tumhare sardar ki gardan mrod dunga". Ve dar gaye lekin himmat dikhate hue bole "abe nahin chhodenge"

Tab Mohanlal ne Sardar ki jeb se chaku nikal kar unki taraf lehrate hue kaha chhod de nahi tu uda dunga iss ki gardan. Sardar ko iss tarah fasta dekh unohone ladkiyon ko chhone ke liye maan liya lekin sath hi Sardar ko chhodne ke liye kahane lage tu ye tay hua ki vo ladkiyon ko chodenge aur Mohanlal unke sardar ko.

Hua bhi aisa hi aur ladkiyaan darkar Mohanlal ke peeche aa gayi aur usse chipak gayi. Mohanlal ne un ladko se kaha nikal jao yanha se nahin tu accha nahi hoga. Pata nahi kaise unme se ek ladka ek danda apane hath me le aaya aur chaku wale hath par maar diya tu chaku chitak kar dur ja gira aur hath me dard ki tej lahar daud gayi, lekin Mohanlal ne apane ko sanyamit karte hue ek kick maar di jisse vo ladka dur ja gira aur unhe chetawani dete hue kaha ki bhag jao.

Pata nahi baki teeno ne kya aapas me isshara kiya ki vo sab ikkhathe hokar Mohanlal par kud pade tu Mohanlal ne unke vaar se bachate hue ek ko laat aur dusre ko mukka maar diya tu teesre ne Mohanlal ke pait me maar diya. Fir kya tha Mohanlal ne apana gussa un teeno par khub nikala lekin iss beech me ek ladka nazar bachakar ladkiyon ke paas panhuch kar unhe pakad liya tu vo chillai.
Mohanlal ne unke chillany ki awaz sunkar us par chalang laga di lekin iss se hua ye ki Mohanlal usse lete hue un ladkiyon se dur ho gaya parantu baki ke do ladke ladkiyon ke paas panhuch kar un donon ke kapade khichane lage jisse kapde kuch had tak fat gaye.

Jab Mohanlal ne ye dekha tu uss par bhut sawar ho gaya aur un ladko ko apani laat ghunso par rakh diya aur un sab ko khub maara aur itna mara ki vo sab adhmari halat me ho gaye aur Police ko inform karne laga tu vo uske paanv pakdne lage.
Tab usne puccha ki kyoun tum iss ladki ke peeche pada tha tu usne bataya ki iss ladki ne uski ganv me beizzati ki thi tu uska badla lene ke liye ye sab kiya. Mohanlal ne unhe chetawani dekar vanha se bhaga diya ki ainda iss ke aaspas bhi nazar aaya tu ghar me ghus kar marunga. Unhone Seema ko vachan diya ki vo aage se uske aas paas bhi nahi fatkenge.
Unke jane ke baad vo donon ladkiyaan jo ab tak khub dari hui thi thodhi unki jaan me jaan aayi lekin in donon ke kapde fatne se unke ubharon ka kafi hissa nagan ho gaya tha aur iss halat me unhe ghar le jana theek nahi tha tu main unhe bike par baitha kar ek acchi jagah par bike rokkar dukan par phone karke apne ek sathi ko do Readymade suit aur do chadar lane ke liye bola aur jagah batai ki jaldi se le aaye. Ladkiyon ko ek bade se ped ke peeche chupne ke liye kah diya.

Jab vo kapde aur chadar de gaya tu Mohanlal ne use dhanyawad kah kar bhej diya aur ladkiyon ko vo kapde dekar kaha ki chadar bhandhkar kapde badal lo tu unki jaan me jaan aayi.

Jab vo donon naye suit pahankar aayi tu khaàskar Ruchika us suit me bahut khubsurat lag rahi thi. Usne iss tarah ka suit pehli baar pehna tha jisme uske sharir ke katav bilkul nazar aa rahe the. Seema bhi bahut khubsurat thi lekin Mohanlal ki nazar tu Ruchika par se hat hi nahi rahi thi.

Seema: kya baat hai Jeeja ji, Ruchika kanhi bhagi nahi ja rahi hai.
Mohanlal: Jeeja ji !

Seema: Aap meri saheli ke boyfriend ho tu mere Jeeja ji hue na
Ruchika: kya bak rahi hai, tu janti bhi hai ki ye koun hain

Seema: Tera boyfriend hai aur koun
Ruchika: kuch bhi bake ja rahi hai

Seema: agar tu nahi bateygi tu pata nahi chalega ki ye tera boyfriend hai
Ruchika: ye mere boyfriend nahi hain

Seema: kya baat hai, tujhe chhodne aur lene aata hain aur aaj tu tere liye bade acche gehne bhi lekar aaya hai.
Ruchika: bas kar, ye mere boyfriend nahi hain

Seema: Agar aisi baat hai tu main isse apana boyfriend bana leti hu
Ruchika: Tujhe kuch sharam bhi hai, jo man me aata hai bake ja rahi hai.

Seema: aisa maine kya kah diya, agar ye tera boyfriend hai tu theek hai aur nahi hai tab main apana number lagaungi aur iss handsome aur smart shaksh ko apana boyfriend bana lungi

Ruchika: (chillate hue) ye mere PAPA hain
Seema: ha...ha...ha..ha...ha...
Ye tere PAPA hain, mazak accha hai. Teri aur inki umar almost barabar hogi, Haan thodha bahut bada hoga, lekin Papa banne layak tu nahi hai
Ruchika: Ye sach me mere PAPA hain

Seema: Ha...ha...ha...ha.....
samajh gayi ye tere
Personal and psychological admirer
(PAPA) hain
Nice update.
Fantastic definition of PAPA.

First feeling of touch is always sensual.

Good Mohanlal saved both girls.


But why he didn't tell that he is Ruchika's father?
 

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There is no shortage of bad people in our society today, such dirty people are found in every area or every street. Don't know how they do such ridiculous actions.
Seema understood father as lover.
:lol::lotpot::lol:
I loved the way Mohanlal handled the situation and faced it strongly. The action scene was awesome. Ruchika will have more respect and love for her father due to this accident
Mohanlal seems very beautiful and smart even at this age, so Seema could not understand. But Seema's talk will definitely have an effect in Ruchika's mind.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Nice review
 

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Bohut shandar kya must scene thaa Mohanlal jee nay 4,4 harami lundoo koo dhol chuta dee wasay ager Police koo bulwa kay un baygaruto koo pukerwadaty tuu zyada acha huta mujh koo woo Murd murd hee nahi lugta joo aak Aurat Mahela kee azat pay haath dalay uss ka reap kuray or serf or serf budla lanay kay leya yea Murd kee shaan hee nahi Murd too woo huta hay joo dusman kee bhi aurat kee ezat kee hefazut kurta hay wah bhi Mohanlal sahab nay tuu dhamal dall dee Seema tuu pagel huu gai hay must hay bhai must hay agay dekhty hay kya huta hay
Nice review
 

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Update 15

Ruchika: Ye sach me mere PAPA hain
Seema: Ha...ha...ha...ha.....
samajh gayi ye tere
Personal and psychological admirer
(PAPA) hain

Ruchika: He is my father
Seema: Don't joke, it's not possible.

Ruchika: yaar tum meri baat maan kyoun nahi rahi ho
Seema: Tum bakiyon se jhuth bolo, lekin main tumhari sabse pakki saheli hu, tab bhi mujhse chupaogi. Manti hu ki tune apane boyfriend ko dusro se chupane ke liye use PAPA bana diya

Ruchika: Vo sachi me mere PAPA hain, tum maan kyoun nahi rahi ho
Seema: Theek hai maan leti hu, matlab ki ye shaksh tera boyfriend nahin hai
Ruchika: Haan

Seema: tab tu meri line clear hai, ab main inko apana boyfriend banungi
Ruchika: Vo mere Papa hain

Seema: Mujhe usse bhi koi problem nahi hai, agar ye tere Father bhi hain tu kya hua, mere boyfriend tu ban hi sakte hain

Ruchika: kuch bhi bake ja rahi hai
Seema: Jara soch aisa Jawan Mard kanha milega jo aaurto ki raksha ke liye apani jaan jokham me daal de, main tu sach me inn par fida ho gayi hu

Ruchika: Bhagwan ke liye bas kar

Mohanlal jo kafi der se chupchap inn donon ki guftgu ka maza le raha tha tu usne kaha "Tum donon theek ho na, koi chot tu nahi lagi. Agar lagi ho tu pehle Doctor ke paas chalen, nahi main tum logon ko chhod deta hu.

Seema: Mujhe tu mamuli khornch aayi hai, jispar main ghar jakar dawai laga lungi. Lagta hai Ruchika ko gehri chot aayi hai.
Ruchika: nahi nahin main bhi theek hu, thodhi bahut chot lagi hai, theek ho jayegi.

Mohanlal: Tu chalo, fir baitho
Aur fir vo donon Mohanlal ke peeche bike par baith gayi tu Mohanlal ne bike ko aage badha diya. Ruchika ke ubharon ka Mohanlal ki peeth par dabne se Mohanlal ki bhavnayen fir se bhadakane lagi, lekin kuch na bolte hue bike ko aage badha diya.

Thodhi der ke baad Ruchika ne Mohanlal ko bike rokane ke liye kaha tu usne bike ko roka aur Seema ne bike se uttarkar Mohanlal ko hath jodkar Thanks kaha aur ye bhi kaha ki "aapne aaj meri jindagi bachayi hai, main aapnka karj kabhi bhi nahi chuka paungi" ye kahte hue uski aankhon me aansu the.

Mohanlal ne usse kaha ki "ye tu mera farz tha, agar main tum logoo ko nahi bachata tu ye mey liye dub marne jaisi baat thi, isliye apane man par koi bhi bhoj na rakho aur hansi khushi aise ghar jao ki jaise kuch hua hi na ho"

Seema ne ek baar fir Thanks kaha aur Ruchika ko kaha 'PAPA' tumhe mubarak ho. Vo usse chedh kar hanste hue chali gayi. Uski baat sunkar Ruchika tu asmanjas ki sthiti me aa gayi aur Mohanlal ne bike ko aage badha diya. Kuch der ke baad
Ruchika: Papa, Aap Seema ki baaton ka bura na manna, vo batuni hai, lekin dil ki bahut acchi hai.
Mohanlal: (Uski baato par dhayan na dete hue) Ye batao apani maa ko kya batogi
Ruchika: Unko bata dungi ki kaise ladai hui aur kapde fatne ki vajah se ye kapde badle hain

Mohanlal: Tumhe aage padhai karni hai ya ab se ghar baithna hai.
Ruchika: Mujhe tu padhai karni hai aur bahur saari padhai karni hai

Mohanlal: Tu apni maa ko ladai ke bare me bilkul na batana, nahi tu vo dar jayengi aur tumhara ghar se nikalna band ho jayega, fir padhai likhai tu bhul hi jao.

Ruchika: Papa main kabhi Mom se jhuth nahi bolti, unhe sab bata deti hu.
Mohanlal: Ye tu acchi baat hai aur main ye nahii kah raha hu ki na batao lekin aaj nahi balki kuch salo baad jab tum padh likh kar kisi kabil ho jao tu bata dena aur sath me ye bhi kah dena ki meri vajah se nahi batai thi.

Ruchika: Mera man tu nahi maan raha hai
Mohanlal: Soch lo main tumhe iske aage kuch nahi kanhuga, jo tumhara faisla hoga main uske saath hu

Ruchika: aap sahi kah rahe ho ki Mom ko ladai ka pata chalne par vo mujhe kabhi bhi ghar se bahar nahi nikalne dengi, isliye aap hi batao ki main kya kanhu.

Mohanlal: Ek kaam karo, apani maa ko kehna ki tumhari saheli ko tumhari dress pasand aa gayi thi tu tumne usse de di aur tumne uske kapde pahan liye.

Ruchika ko Mohanlal ki baat pasand aayi aur fir donon ghar aa gaye tu Sandhya ne sabse pehle deress ke bare me puccha tu Ruchika ne ussi jawab se Sandhya ko shant kar diya aur fir usne Ruchika ke gehno ki taraf bhi dekhkar unki tariff ki.

Abhi vo inhi socho me baitha hua tha ki use kitchen se khatarnpatar ki awaz aayi jise sunkar vo bahar aaya tu dekha ki din hone wala hai aur Sandhya subah ki chai aur nashta bana rahi thi, jab usne Mohanlal ko dekha tu

Sandhya: aap uth gaye, main tu aapko uthane aane wali thi
Mohanlal: Haan, jaldi jana hain na

Sandhya: Aap chalo main chai lekar aati hu aur Ruchi ko bhi utha deti hu

Mohanlal apane kamre me aa jata hai aur fresh hone lagta hai, Sandhya bhi chai lekar aa jati hai. Mohanlal Ruchika ke bare me pucchata hai tu vo batati hai ki vo bhi uth gayi hai.

Sandhya: kya aapka videsh jana jaruri hai
Mohanlal: Jaruri nahi hota tu main kyon jata, lekin tum kaise rahogi.

Sandhya: Rah lungi, vaise bhi ab bacche bade ho gaye hain, Ruchika tu ja rahi hai, Aditya ki bhi padhai puri hone wali hai, isliye chinta ki koi baat nahi hai.

Mohanlal: Tum mere sath chalo na
Sandhya: Abhi tu aap jao, main kaise ja paungi, mere paas tu Pasport bhi nahi hai. Na hi mujhe angreji aati hai, kanhi gum ho gayi tu vapis bhi nahi aa paungi. Aap ko hi mubarak ho videsh yatra, main yanhi khush hu

Mohanlal: Main tu pata nahi kab se kah raha hu ki angreji seekh lo, dansvi bhi kar lo, nahi tum tu meri baat manti hi nahi ho.
Sandhya: Ab main iss umar me kanha se ye sab karu

Mohanlal: kanha se umar ho gayi hai, acchi khasi Jawan ho aur aajkal ki ladkiyon ko maat de sakti ho, agar tum college chali jao tu koi pehchan nahi sakta ki tum unse bade bacchon ki maa ho, vo sab tumhe ham umar hi kanhege

Sandhya: kya subah subah hi chedne lage
Mohanlal: Maine tu vahi kaha hai jaisa tum dikhti ho

Sandhya: kya baat karte ho chala tu jata hi nahi, ghutno me dard rahta hai aur aap kehte ho ki main Jawan hu
Mohanlal: Ye dard tu tumhari khud ki vajah se hai, tum pata nahi kyon jaan bujh kar theek hona hi nahi chahti, jab dekho ek din dawai khai nahi ki shuru ho jati ho ki mujhe chaakar aate hain, ji michlata hai aur pata nahi kya kya. Doctor ne kaha tha ki teen mahine lagatar dawai khani hain aur tumne khai nahitu test bhi nahi hue tu fir theek kaise hogi. Main tu ab bhi yahi kanhuga ki teen mahine lagatar dawai kha lo aur test karwa kar theek hone ke liye jo bhi doctor kahe mano.

Sandhya: accha koshish karti hu, ab aap taiyar ho jao nahi tu late ho jaoge.

Sandhya chali gayi aur Mohanlal naha dhokar taiyar ho jata hai. Tab tak Sandhya bhi nashta laga deti hai aur dinning table par Ruchika aur Aditya bhi aa jate hain. Sab milkar nashta karte hain aur nashta karte hue sab ke man me bahut kuch chal raha tha lekin upar se sab shant lag rahe the.

Nashta karne ke baad sab ek dusre se gale mile aur man me bichadne ka dukh bhi tha aur aage aane wale dino ki khushi bhi thi. Fir Cab aa gayi tu Mohanlal aur Ruchika usme baith gaye aur bye karke chal diye.

Mohanlal ne Ruchika ke kandhe par hath rakhkar use apne paas kar liya aur dhire dhire uske kandhe ko sahlane laga aur thodha sa Ruchika ne Mohanlal ki aur jhukkar apana sar uske kandhe par rakh diya. Safar koi 4 ghante ka tha tu Ruchika ko neend aa gayi.

Raste me ek jagah cab ko rokkar donon chai peene ke liye Uttar gaye aur driver ko bhi kah diya ki vo bhi chai pee le. Donon chai peene ke liye jab chair par aamne samne baithe tu Mohanlal ne Ruchika ki udasi ka karan pucha tu usne kaha "pata nahi kyoun aisa lag raha hai ki jaise Mom se aakhri baar mil ke aayi hu"

Mohanlal ne uske hath par apne hath ko rakhne ke baad usse kaha "dekho Jo hoga accha hi hoga, abhi se aisa mat socho aur meri mano tu uss bare me bilkul bhi dhayan na do, bas khush raho aur ab tu tumhara mere sath rahne ki iccha puri hone ja rahi hain.

Ruchika ke chere par ek feeki si hansi aayi aur kahane lagi ki "samajh nahi aa raha ki khush honu ya dukhi"

Mohanlal aur Ruchika ne chai khatam ki aur cab me aakar jaise hi baithe tu Ruchika ko aagosh me lete hue sula diya kyounki Mohanlal chahta tha ki vo jayada na soche aur apane dimagh ko shant rakhe. Mohanlal ke aagosh me ek husnpari thi aur kafi samay ke baad vo uske sath iss tarah se thi tu uske jajbaat tu bhadakane hi the tu vo usko sotey hue niharate hue uske kandhe aur sar ko sehlata raha.
Nice flashback.

What is the problem with Ruchika?

Why did she utter 'it was her last meeting with Mom'

Is it some suspense or a hint?

Anyway good update.


Your story is too good and requires time to understand.

It looks that each sentence rather word has been written purposefully
 

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Update 16

Mohanlal aur Ruchika ne chai khatam ki aur cab me aakar jaise hi baithe tu Ruchika ko aagosh me lete hue sula diya kyounki Mohanlal chahta tha ki vo jayada na soche aur apane dimagh ko shant rakhe. Mohanlal ke aagosh me ek husnpari thi aur kafi samay ke baad vo uske sath iss tarah se thi tu uske jajbaat tu bhadakane hi the tu vo usko sote hue uske kandhe aur sar ko sehlata raha.

Ruchika tu neend ke aagosh me chali gayi aur Mohanlal beete hue lamho me kho gaya.
Mohanlal ko yaad aaya ki us hadse ke do din baad hi vo tour par chala gaya lekin usko lag raha tha ki kuch peeche chhut gaya hai aur vo kya hai use samajh nahi aa raha tha.

Uske mann me Ruchika ki khubsurti kucch iss kadar baith gayi thi ki uski halat saanp chchundar jaisi ho gayi thi kyonki uska ek dil tu uski khubsurti aur adaon ka diwana ho gaya tha aur dusra dil kehta tha ki vo uska baap hai aur aisa sochana bhi paap hain. Vo apani bhavanaon ko apane man me hi dabaye hue tha lekin kabhi bhi kisi par jahir nahi hone diya tha.
Haan ye jarur tha ki jab bhi uska man vichlit hone lagta vo Ruchika ki selfie ko dekhkar khush ho leta tha. Ye vo selfie thi jo usne restaurant me khinchi thi jab vo usse gehne pehnane gaya tha.

Mohanlal us baat ko yaad karke aaj bhi muskura diya aur Ruchika ko pyar se niharne laga aur fir se beeti yaadon me kho gaya.

Itna jarur tha ki pehle vo Ruchika ki har iccha ko puri karne ki koshish karta tha, lekin ab uska mann karta tha ki uske bina mange hi uske liye nayi nayi chize lekar jaye. Pehle vo sirf Sandhya ke liye bina mange le jata tha lekin ab vo Ruchika ke liye bhi aisi cheeze dundhta tha jisse vo usko khush kar sake.

Aise hi din bitte rahe aur Ruchika Inter me bhi sirf First division nahi balki uski University me position aayi thi, jab usko yah pata laga tu vo bahut khush hua aur usne Ruchika ko kuchh gift dene ki sochi. Usne iss bare me bahut socha ki kya diya jaye ki vo alag bhi ho lekin ghar ke dusre log aitraaz bhi na karen.

Jab Mohanlal ghar panhucha tu ghar me khushi ka mahol tha, Sandhya ka bartav tu aisa tha jaise ki exam usne paas kiya ho na ki uski beti ne. Aditya tu khelkud me hi jayada busy tha. Mohanlal Sandhya aur Ruchika ke liye kapde laya tha aur Aditya ke liye ek naya Cricket Bat.

Sandhya ne Mohanlal ko kaha ki beti itne acche numbari se paas hui hai usse koi acchi si gift tu deni thi.
Mohanlal ne Sandhya se kaha ki "gift tu deni chahiye lekin vo ham donon ki tarai se honi chahiye, isliye tum batao ki kya ho". Tab Sandhya ne usse sone ki chain dene ki baat kahi jo ki Mohanlal ko pasand aayi aur usne usse saath chalkar lane ke liye kaha lekin usne bahana bana diya tu usse akele hi jakar lani padi.

Jab vo chain lekar aaya tu Sandhya ne uss chain ki kafi tariff ki aur Ruchika ko bulakar usse kaha ki Papa tere liye gift laye hain tu Mohanlal ne usse dete hue kaha ki ye un donon ki taraf se hai tu usne donon ko dhanyvaad kaha.

Mohanlal tu usko khush dekhakar apane dil me thandhak mahasus kar raha tha, usse samjh nahi aata tha ki uske sath ye kya ho raha hai.

Uska man karta tha ki vo Ruchika ke saath bahut sari meethi meethi baatein karte hue uski khubsurti ko apani netro se raspan kare, usko kanhin ghumane le jaye, usse nayi nayi cheeje uski pasand ki dilwaye aur uski hansi aur athkeliyoun ka aanand le. Jab bhi uske man me aise vichar aate tu uski antaraatma usse dhikarati ki apani beti ke bare me aise neech vichar. Tab vo apani antaraatma se kehta ki vo tu sirf use khush dekhna chahta hai.

Uski antaraatma usse kahti ki koun sa baap apani beti ki khubsurti ka raspaan karta hai. Tab vo sharam se apana chera jhuka leta aur prann karta tha ki vo ab uske bare me aisa vaisa kucch nahi sochega.

Lekin jo hona hota hai usse koi nahi rok sakta. Ek baar ki baat hai ki Ruchika college me padh rahi thi tab Mohanlal tour se ghar vapis aaya tu Sandhya ne kaha ki "aap tu jayada samay bahar hi rahte ho. Bacchon se college jane ke baad khaas taur par jab vo late hone lagte hain tu usse unki chinta hoti hai aur jayada chinta Ruchika ki hoti hai. Vo chahkar bhi unse sampark ka koi bhi sadhan na hone ke Karan nahin kar paati. Isliye main chahti hun ki aap donon bacchon ke liye ek ek mobile la do taki main unse sampark kar sakun"

Mohanlal ne uski baat mante hue donon baccho ko bulaya aur unko bataya ki tumhari Mom tum donon ko Mobile lene ke liye kah rahi hai tu aisa karo ki chalo tumhe Mobile dilwa deta hu. Aditya tu match ka bolkar chala gaya aur kaha ki jo bhi mobile uske liye layenge vah usse manjur hoga. Tab Sandhya aur Ruchika ko market chalne ke liye kaha tu Sandhya ne kaam ka bahana karke nahin gai aur Ruchika ko Mohanlal ke sath bhej diya.

Ruchika Mohanlal ke sath us hadse ke baad kabhi akele nahi gayi thi. Aaj us hadse ke karib ek saal baad vo bike per baith kar ja rahi thi. Mohanlal apane prann par kayam tha parantu aaj kafi samay baad vo Ruchika ke sath iss tarah jane se fir se apne man ke andar paida hone wali bhavanaon ko daba nahin pa raha tha.

Uska man kar raha tha ki aaj vo usse ghumaye, bahut sari bate kare aur ho sake tu uske man ki baat janne ki koshish kare. Dhire dhire vo city me panhuch gaye aur market me bike khadi karke mobile lene chal diye. Market me bhid bahut thi tu pata nahi Ruchika ko kya sujha ki usne apane danye hath se Mohanlal ka banyan hath pakad liya aur uske saath saath chalne lagi. Mohanlal tu uske aisa karne se aanandit ho gaya.

Bheedh kafi thi aur log chalte hue ek dusre se ragad kha rahe the. Kai baar aisa hua ki logon ke chalne se Ruchika ko logon se bachne ke liye Mohanlal se sattna pad raha tha tu Mohanlal ki soyi hui bhavanayen fir se jagne lagi aur vo bhulne laga ki saath chalne wali ladki uski beti hai, usse tu bas ye lag raha tha ki iss waqt ek bahut sundar ladki uske saath kadam se kadam milakar chal rahi hai aur vo iss baat se hi apane aap ko duniya ka bahut hi khushnasib insaan samjhne laga.

Ruchika ne hath iss tarah thama hua tha ki donon ki hatheliyon ne ek dusre ko jakda hua tha, jabki Mohanlal ka man kar raha tha ki vo uski ungliyon me apani ungliyon ko daalkar kaskar pakad le, parantu vo abhi jaldibaji karke iss khel ko bigadana nahi chahta tha aur jo ho raha tha ussi me hi khush rahne ki koshish kar Raha tha.

Mohanlal apani duniya me khoya hua tha ki side se kisi ka dhakka lagne se baap beti bilkul ek dusre se sat gaye aur itna hi nahi Ruchika ke ubharon ne Mohanlal ki chathi ka saparsh karke uske man me khalbali macha di. Ruchika ko bhi iss baat ka abhaas hua lekin ye sab anjane me hone ki wajah se vo ignore kar gayi.

Abhi thodha aage chale the ki kuch ladke teji se aage nikalane ki koshish kar rahe the jis vajah se Mohanlal aur Ruchika ne dhakkon se bachane ke chaakar me ek dusre ki taraf ghumana pada. Abhi ghume hi the ki donon ke peeche se dhakke lage jis vajah se Ruchika ka sharir pura ka pura Mohanlal ke aagosh me aa gaya. Ruchika ka seena aur uske ubharon ne Mohanlal ki chahti se takrakar unke kuchalne me koi kasar nahi chhodi kyounki un dono ke seene aapas me baat kar rahe the.
Kyounki ye sab ek dam se hua tha tu Ruchika ki saans lene ki gati badhne se uske seene ke ubharon ne upar neeche hokar Mohanlal ke chathi ko ragdne lage. Mohanlal ka rakt parvah badne laga aur bhavnayen aniyantit hone lagi.

Mohanlal ka ek hath apane aap hi uski kamar par panhuch gaya aur usse sehlate hue usne Ruchika se puccha "Theek ho na", usne sirf itna hi kaha "Haan". Uske baad Mohanlal uski kamar me hath dale dale aage badh raha tha tu Ruchika ko lag raha tha ki vo usse bheedh se bachane ke liye kar raha hai, lekin Mohanlal tu un Palo ka jayada se jayada aanand lena chah raha tha.

Donon Mobile ki dukan par panhuche tu ek salesman in donon ko bahut sare mobile dikha raha tha aur unke features bata raha tha tu Ruchika ko jo mobile pasand aa raha tha vo thodha sa mehnga tha isliye usne use alag rakhne ke liye bola lekin uski nazar baar baar us mobile par ja rahi thi jo Mohanlal ne note kar li.

Jab vo decide nahi kar pa rahi thi tu usne Mohanlal se puchha ki kounsa Mobile lu tu Mohanlal ne kaha "Tumhe jo bhi pasand hai le lo"

Ruchika ne ek sasta wala Mobile bataya tu Mohanlal ne kaha pasand hai tu le lo, lekin Ruchika ke chere par aise bhav the jaise ki vo majburi me le rahi ho. Mohanlal ne us mobile ke bare me puccha jis par Ruchika ki nazar thi tu Salesman ne uska price bataya lekin saath me ye bhi bataya ki uske saath ek scratch card bhi hai jisme ho sakta hai ki aapko inam nikal aaye aur aapko mobile free me bhi mil sakta hai.

Mohanlal ne usse kaha ki theek hai aap isse dijiye. Jab scratch card ko scratch karna tha tu usne vo Ruchika ko de diya aur scratch karne ke liye kaha tu uske chehre ki muskan dekhkar Mohanlal tu gadgad ho gaya. Ruchika ne dhadkate dil se us card ko scratch kiya tu usme ek code nikla aur vo code jab salesman ko diya gaya tu usne kaha "Sahab Mubarak ho, aap ne teen din ka couple tour India ke kisi bhi jagah ke liye jeeta hai"

Ruchika tu bahut khush hui aur Mohanlal ne details ke bare me puchha tu usne bataya ki "Isme aapko do logon ke liye India me Flight tickets, rehna, khana aur tour ab free hai aur ye offer agle ek saal tak valid rahegi ". Ruchika tu ye jaan kar bahut khush hui aur Mohanlal ke bazu ko pakad kar apani Khushi ka izhar kar rahi thi.

Mohanlal ne vaisa hi ek aur mobile ke lene ke liye puccha tu Salesman ne kaha ki dusre mobile par vo ek hazar ka discount bhi dega. Tab scratch card ke bare me puccha tu usne kaha ki vo bhi milega. Dusre scratch card me 2000 ka discount nikla. Tab donon Mobile ki payment karke naye Sim card dalwa kar jo ki thodhi der me chalu hone the lekar nikale hi the ki samne se Seema (Ruchika ki saheli) ne un donon ko pakad liya aur kaha "Hello, Ruchika and her PAPA"

Ruchika usko dekhkar chownk gayi aur man me sochne lagi ki ab ye fir usse chedhegi, jaise ye roj roj College me chedhti hain, lekin usse koi tarika nahi milta tha usko jawab dene ka.

Seema ne usse kaha ki vo kucch saman lene aayi thi, ab thak gayi hai aur uska coffee peene ka man tha tu kisi restaurant me ja rahi thi, lekin akele man nahi kar raha tha ki vo donon mil gaye. Usne un donon ko bhi saath chalne ke liye kaha tu Ruchika mana karne lagi tu Seema ne usse chedhte hue kaha "dar lag raha hai ki uske PAPA ko boyfriend bana lungi" Uski baat sunkar Ruchika chidh gayi aur kaha chal aaj tere saath coffee jarur piyenge.

Mohanlal jo ab tak chup tha usne un donon ko kaha "lado nahi, chalo tum donon ko coffee main pilaunga". Fir vo teeno ek acche se restaurant me jane lagte hain aur vanha par ek family room me jakar baithte hain aur khane pine ka order kar dete hain. Jab vo order ka wait kar rahe the tu

Seema: (Mohanlal se mukhatib hokar) Aaj aapse kafi waqt ke baad mili hu, lekin jab se aap se mili hu, main aapse impressed hu aur Main aap se dosti karna chhahti hu
Ruchika: kya bol rahi hai

Seema: Main inse dosti kar rahi hu, isme kuchh galat hai kya, vaise tum chinta na kar inse dosti karne ke baad bhi tu meri best friend hi rahegi.

Ruchika: Tumhe aur kuchh nahi sujhta
Seema: Jab se inse mili hu, mere din aur Raat ka chain lut gaya hai. Main tu bas inke khayalon me khoyi rehti hu.

Ruchika: Tu hosh me tu hai

Abhi aur koi baat hoti usase pehle waiter order serve kar gaya aur uske jane ke baad Mohanlal jo chupke chupke un donon ki baton ka maza le raha tha ne un donon ko khane ke liye kaha. Unohone apani coffee ki taraf dekhte hue baat fir se shuru kar di

Seema: Hosh tu kho chuki hu, jab se inhe dekha hai.
Ruchika: tu pagal ho gayi hai

Seema: Haan bilkul pagal ho gayi hu, maine tu teri vajah se apne dil par pathar rakha hua tha ki ye tere boyfriend hain, lekin ye tu tere boyfriend na hokar tere PAPA hai tu meri line clear hai aur main inhe apana boyfriend banana chahti hu, lekin inki agar Marji hogi tu, nahi tu koi baat nahi

Ruchika: bass kar aur ab tum iske aage kucch nahi kahogi, Main sab janti hu ki tum mujhe kyoun chedh rahi ho aur jo baat tum sunna chahti ho tu sun aur dhyan se sun. Tu sahi kah rahi thi ki tu inki girlfriend nahi ban sakti Kyounki ye sahi me mere boyfriend hain, aur tu ab chup karke coffe pi aur hame akela chhod de
Beautifully written update.

Nice to see how both got attraction and feelings about each other.

Good going
 
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