Incest Rishta

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Update 10

Ghar jab panhuche tu Mohanlal apane hi khayalon me khoya hua tha aur unke aane se vo khayalon se nikalkar apane aap ko sambhalate hue unhe bataya ki Ruchika so gai hai, isliya shor na karte hue baate karenge jo un donon ne maan li.

Drawing room me aakar sab ne baith kar baatein karni shuru ki

Mohanlal: Beta ab tumhari padhai kab tak khatam ho jayegi.
Aditya: Papa last semester hai, 3-4 mahine aur hain, vaise agale hafte se placement shuru ho rahi hai.

Mohanlal: Tum placement yanha nazdik ki logo ya dur ki.
Aditya: Papa, nazdik ki job me paise kam milenge aur shuru me hi agar compromise kar liya tu fir puri jindgi pachtana padega.

Mohanlal: Tu Tum bahar ki job karoge ya Foreign ki karoge.
Aditya: Jo bhi better opportunity milegi vo chahe desh ki ho ya videsh ki use pane ki puri koshish karunga.

Mohanlal: Agar tumhe bahar ki ya Foreign ki job mol jayegi, mujhe tu bahut khushi hogi, lekin Tumhari Mom ko fir mere sath ya tumhare saath jana padega kyounki vo akele tu nahi rah sakti na.
Aditya: Papa ye baat tu aap theek kah rahe hain.

Mohanlal: Sandhya ab tum taiyari karlo mere sath jane.ki
Sandhya: Abhi tu kafi time hai, abhi se preshan kyoun hona, jab waqt aayega tab dekhenge.

Mohanlal: Lekin sochana tu padega hi na
Sandhya: Aap kab se chinta karne lage, aap tu kabhi bhi kisi chij se nahi ghabraate the, ab kya ho gaya hai.

Mohanlal: Gabhra nahi raha hu, aage kya karna hai vo soch raha tha, vaise tu jo hona hai vo hokar hi rahega.
Sandhya: Aapki inhi baton se hi tu mujhe shakti milti hai.

Mohanlal: Aditya, yaar ye batao ki ab tum bade ho gaye ho aur saath me samajhdar bhi tu ye batao ki koi girlfriend bhi banai hai ki nahi.
Aditya: kya Papa aap bhi na, mujhe padhai aur khelkud se hi fursat nahi milti

Mohanlal: Yaar aisa kaise ho sakta hai, Jawan ho, handsome ho aur padhne likhe bhi ho, tu ye kaise ho sakta hai ki kisi ladki ki tum par nazar na padi ho
Aditya: Papa, chhodo na, aap bhi kya le baithe.

Mohanlal: Yaar tum tu aise Sharma rahe ho, jaise ladki ho, vaise agar nahi batana tu koi baat nahi.
Aditya: Papa aisa kuch nahi hain, ek hai jiska abhi pata nahi ki vo meri girlfriend bani hai ki nahi

Mohanlal: (Smiles) ye hui na baat, ab lag raha hai mera beta Jawan ho gaya hai, ban jayegi agar nahi bani tu, vaise kaisi dikhti hai
Aditya: (Sandhya ko dekhte hue) Papa kya bataun, hain tu vo bahut hi khubsurat aur dil ki bhi bahut acchi hai lekin abhi pata nahi ki vo meri girlfriend bani hai ki nahi aur ye bhi clear nahi hai ki banegi bhi ki nahi

Mohanlal: Dekho yaar agar tumhe pasand hai tu lage raho, girlfriend tu vo ban hi jayegi, mujhe tum par pura vishwas hai
Aditya: (chere par dabi hui muskan ) Papa ek problem aur bhi hai bi ye hai ki vo mujhse umar me thodhi badi hai

Mohanlal: are yaar umar ka pyar se koi matlab nahi hai, bas dil milna chahiye aur jab dil mil gaye tu vo sabse aham hai. Sabse badi baat donon ko ek dusre ke prati samarpan ki bhavna honi chahiye.
Aditya: (Sandhya ko dekhte hue) Papa abhi tu ye bhi nahin pata ki vo girlfriend hai bhi ki nahi

Sandhya thodha sharmakar un donon ki baate sunkar vanha se jane lagati hai aur kehti hai "Aap donon gappe maro, main thodha kaam nipta leti hu". Vanha se jane ke baad man hi man muskarati hai aur sochati hai ki "kitna besharam hai baap se baat kar raha hai aur baap Ko kah raha ki aapki biwi ko girlfriend banane ki baat kar raha hu. Aur baap hai ki anjane me bete ko uksaa raha hai ki ja beta bana le girlfriend, umar ka koi matlab nahi hain"

Mohanlal: kyoun baat nahi hui usse abhi tak
Aditya: hui hai ek do baar, lekin confused lag rahi thi

Mohanlal: kyoun
Aditya: Use shayad lag raha ho ki uski umar mujhse thodhi jayada hai

Mohanlal: are bhai uske sath ghumo firo, uske sath dhire dhire khulkar baat karo aur agar tumhare dil milte hain tu umar ka koi matlab nahi hai
Aditya: Par Papa log kya kahenge aur use kya kehkar ghumane le jaun

Mohanlal: Dosti tumne karni hai ya logon ne? Agar tum donon ko accha lagata hai ki nahi ye important hai na ki log kya kanhege. Aur ghumne ke liye tumhare paas bhanon ki kami hai jo itna intelligent hai ki bachpan se hi naye naye bahaane banakar khelkud ki chize mujhse le jata tha vo ye nahi kar sakta, main nahi maan sakta

Abhi ye donon baat kar hi rahe the ki Ruchika uthakar aa gai aur un donon ki baat sunkar puchane lagi "kisse Dosti ho rahi hai"

Aditya: Di, kuch nahi vo Papa bata rahe the ki kisi se dosti kaise ki jati hai
Ruchika: Hame bhi koi gur do na ki kaise girlfriend aur boyfriend banaya jata hai aur usse ghumne ke liye kya bahane karne hain

Vo sab khilkhiakar hansne lage ki Tabhi vanha Sandhya bhi aa gai aur kehne lagi "Beta tum uth gayi ho to pehle khana kha lete hai kyonki tumhe kal jaldi nikalna hai"

Ruchika: Mera tu abhi aapke paas rehne ka dil tha lekin kya karu kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai
Sandhya: koi baat nahi, chalo jaldi se dinning table par aa jao, main dishes lagati hu

Aditya: chalo main aapki madad kar deta hu
Sandhya: nahi rehne de main kar lungi

Aditya Sandhya ki baat na mantey hue uske piche piche jatey hue kehta hai "koi baat nahi, aaj ki party me mera bhi yogdan hona chahiye na"

Kitchen me jab vo donon panhuche tu khane peene ka saman bade bartno me rakhne lage tu kuch bade bartan cupboard me upar the tu Sandhya ne Aditya se utarane ke liye kaha tu Aditya ne hath badha kar cupboard ko kholane laga tu vo Kyounki Sandhya ke bilkul peeche khada tha tu aisa lag raha tha ki Aditya ekdam se Sandhya ke upar ladh sa gaya ho aur iss sab me Aditya ki chahti Sandhya ki peeth se ragad khane lagi, hua tu ye sab anjane me hi sahi lekin donon ke man me ek chingari laga gaya.

Jab Aditya Jo apane panje ke bal par khada tha bartan lekar neeche lane laga tu uska pait ne neeche aate hue Sandhya ke naram naram nitambon se ragad khai jo donon ki bhavanaon ko thodha aur bhadkane me madad kar raha thi. Jab Aditya ko iss ka ehsaas hua tu vo thodha peeche hat gaya aur apani bhavanaon Ko kabu me karne laga aur chupke se kuch bartan lekar drawing room me chala gaya.

Udhar Sandhya ko bhi ek alag hi ehsaas hone laga aur iss ehsaas ki vajah se vo duvidha me aa gayi ki ye kya ho raha hai, ek taraf tu uski soyi hui bhavanayen bhadakane lagi aur dusri taraf usse ye ehsaas hone laga ki kuch galat ho raha hai. Vo inn bato ko lekar apane me hi gumsum hone lagi.

Aditya vapis kitchen me aaya tu dekhta hai ki uski mom gumsum lag rahi thi tu use laga ki shayad uski mom usse naraz hai lekin iss waqt usne iss bare me koi baat na karna hi theek samjha aur chupke se do dishes ke bartan lekar vanha se drawing room me aa gaya. Vo apne man me sochne laga ki abhi apani Mom se dur rahega.

Sandhya kitchen me soch rahi thi ki vo drawing room me kaise jaye kyounki soch soch kar vo kabhi khush hoti tu kabhi Sharma jati ki ye kya ho raha hai, uski saansen teevar gati se chalne lagati tu usse lag raha tha ki iss naye ehsaas ne usse ek nayi alhadh yuvti jaisa bana diya hai jo kisi mard ke pehle saparsh ko feel karke khush bhi hoti hai aur sharmati bhi hai.

Usne socha ki kanhi uski manodasha ko koi pehchan na le, isliye usne ek nakli hansi apane chere par ooud li aur drawing room me aa gayi janha par Teeno the. Usne sabse kaha, "aa jao party karte hain"
Sab Dinning table par aa gaye aur subah ki tarah hi baithe lekin iss baar Maa beta donon hi apane khayalon me gumsum the aur nazar jhukaye baithe the, lekin ek baat thi chingari tu donon ke dilon me lag chuki thi aur isliye kankhiyon se bich bich me ek dusre ko nihar lete the aur jab nazre milti tu aisa pesh karte jaise kuch hua hi na ho parantu donon ke dilon me tufan uthna shuru ho gaya tha.

Ruchika Mohanlal ko khate hue nihar rahi thi aur kai baar aisa hua ki khate hue uske sar ke balon ki lat aage uske chere par aa gayi tu vo jhatka dekar use peeche karti tu Mohanlal ki nazre uske chere par jam jati aur isharo me puchta ki kya hua tu vo aankhon ke ishare se kehti ke sab theek hai. Bich bich me Mohanlal uski gardan aur urojon ke upar ke hisse ko niharne lagte tu vo Mohanlal ko tang karne ke iraade se apane aanchal se apane aap ko iss tarah dhak leti ki uske uroj nazar na aaye.

Mohanlal apane chere ko modkar Sandhya ki taraf karke iss tarah pesh aate ki jaise vo Usse chidhane ke liye Sandhya ke urojon ko lalchai nazro se iss tarah dekhne lagta ki Ruchika ko bura lage.

Iss tarah chuhalbaji karte hue khana khatam karke Icecreem kha rahe the tu Mohanlal ne sab ko baitha liya aur kehne lage

Mohanlal: Dekho ho sakta hai ki mujhe ek jaruri kaam se videsh jana pade aur ho sakta ki main 6 mahine ya usse jayada bahar rahu
Sandhya: aapne pehle tu bataya nahi
Mohanlal: Tumhari beti aai thi tu isliye main tumhe disturb nahi karna chah raha tha.
Sandhya: kab jana hoga
Mohanlal: Dekho abhi kah nahi sakta lekin ek mahine ke bhitar jana hi padega. isliye main tum sab ko jo batane ja raha hu use dhyaan se suno
1. Ye makaan maine shuru me hi Sandhya ke naam karwa diya tha taki koi problem na ho.
2. Sandhya ka account aisa hai ki agar paisa na nikale tu vo automatically FD me rahta hai aur aaj ki date me kareeb 2 lakh hai lekin 20 din se pehle uss paise ko na nikalna nahi tu 10000 interst ka nuksaan ho jayega. 20 din baad jab Marji nikalo ya savings account ki tarah use karo.
2. Aditya maine tumhare har birthday par kuch na kuch ikkatha karne ki chahat se paisa FD me dalta raha taki bade hone par kaam aaye. Ab tum adult ho chuke ho aur tumhari FD aaj se theek 2 mahine baad mature ho jayegi aur iska pura paisa automatically tumhare account me joki kareeb 10 lakh hoga panhuch jayega.
3. Ruchika tumhare account me bhi FD ka paisa 15 din baad mature hone wali FD ka kareeb 2 lakh panhuch jayega

Ye sab main aap logon ko bata raha hu taki mere peeche koi problem na ho

Aditya: Papa aapne tu mujhe fansa diya
Mohanlal : kaise
Aditya: Aap bahar chale jaoge, Di bhi bahar ja rahi hai job ke liye tu agar meri bhi job bahar lag gayi tu kya Mom akeli ranhegi.

Mohanlal: are yaar abhi tu tum yanhi par ho na
Aditya: Papa 3 mahine baad tu job ke liye bahar jana hi padega aur tab tak aap ke hisaab se aap bahar hi honge.

Mohanlal: agar aisa hua aur tumhe bura na lage tu Mom ko apane sath le jana
Aditya: (Sandhya ki taraf pyar bhari nazro se dekhte hue) Papa mujhe tu koi problem nahi hogi, lekin pata nahi Mom mere sath jana bhi chahengi ya nahi

Superb update.

Read twice to understand it.

It has been written beautifully and intelligently. It has given lots of hints which as per my understanding is

Mohanlal is making arrangements so that he could live separately.

He was hinting Aditya to take care of his mother like girlfriend.


Aditya and Sandhya both have started feeling the heat.

Nice and intelligent update

 

[divyaa]

Wish all
Happy Diwali

 

[kamdev99008]

Wish all
Happy Diwali

आपको व सभी मित्रों को सपरिवार
दीपावली
की शुभकामनाएँ​

 

[Abhinav sharma]

Bahi log ab shayad update nahi aayega to is story ko mera pranaam

 

[divyaa]

Update 11

Mohanlal: agar aisa hua aur tumhe bura na lage tu Mom ko apane sath le jana
Aditya: (Sandhya ki taraf pyar bhari nazro se dekhte hue) Papa mujhe tu koi problem nahi hogi, lekin pata nahi Mom mere sath jana bhi chahengi ya nahi

Sandhya: Jab waqt aayega tab ki tab dekhenge.
Mohanlal: Tu fir theek hai, ab subah jaldi nikalna hai tu chalo fir ab sotey hain.

Ruchika: Main aaj Mom ke sath sona chahungi
Sandhya: Haan haan kyoun nahi, chal main tumhare kamre me aati hu

Uske baad Mohanlal, Aditya aur Ruchika apane apane kamare me chale gaye aur Sandhya kitchen me kaam khatam karke apane bedroom me aayi tu Mohanlal ne use kaha ki "Jayada der tak jagna mat, jaldi so jana kyounki subah jaldi nikalna hai", Sandhya ne usse aashwasan diya ki "chinta karo, Ruchi ko jaldi sula dungi, aap aaram karo".

Uske jane ke baad Mohanlal sone ki koshish kar raha tha lekin use aaj ki baatein bhi yaad aa rahi thi, lekin thake hone ke karan jaldi hi neend ke aagosh me chala gaya.
Neend ke aagosh me use sapne me vo din yaad aane laga jis din vo Ruchika ke liye ghagra choli laya tha.

Vo ghagra choli lekar bahut khush hui aur vo use pehankar mere paas aayi aur ghumakar apane aap ko dikhkar puchane lagi "kaisi lag rahi hu",
Mohanlal usse dekhta hi rah gaya kyounki jisse vo ab tak bacchi samajhta tha vo tu ek navyauvna ban chuki thi, kyounki uske sharir ke utar chadav bilkul viksit ho chuke the aur usko pehli baar laga ki Ruchika ab badi ho gayi hai. Mohanlal uski khubsurti aur chadhati jawani me khoya hua tha tu Ruchika uske bilkul karib aakar fir bade pyar se pucchane lagi "batao na ki kaisi lag rahi hu main"

Mohanlal: Bahut acchi lag rahi hai, ab meri princess badi ho gayi hai, inn kapado me bahut pyari lag rahi ho
Ruchika khush ho gayi aur daudkar Mohanlal ke gale lag gayi tu pehli baar uske chote chote santre jaise urojon ne Mohanlal ki chathi ka saparsh kiya tu usse ek aisi anubhuti hui jo bayan nahi ki ja sakti, usne bhi apane hatho ko lejakar uski peeth par rakh diye aur dhire dhire uski peeth ko sehlate hue use kehne lage ki "ab tum badi ho gayi ho aur bahut pyari gudiyai lag rahi ho"

Tabhi Sandhya ne use bola "Ja kapde badal le nahi tu kharab ho jayenge, fir kal kya pahenegi"
Ruchika: Mera tu mann hai ki main ab aise hi kapde pehna karun.
Uski baat sunkar Mohanlal ne man me sochne laga ki "agar ye roj roj aise kapde pehnegi tu mere liye tu bada mushkil ho jayega, ye itni khubsurat hai ki mujhe pata nahi kya ho raha hai, fir tu shayad main koi bahut badi galti hi na kar baithu"

Sandhya ne usse kaha "Papa ne tujhe aise kapde dilwa diye, main tu tujhe kabhi na dilwaun aur jayada mat uddo, Papa ne bhi ek baar dilwa diye, baar baar nahi dilwayenge"

Ruchika: Mere Papa hain aur aap dekh lena baar baar dilwayenege, mujhe Mana nahi kar sakte. Aap dekh lena main kal hi Papa ke sath jakar naya suit lekar aaungi, kyoun Papa dilwaoge na

Mohanlal: (apane vicharo me khoye hue) Huunh
Ruchika: Dekha Mom, main pehle hi keh rahi thi ki Papa mujhe Mana nahi karenge.
Sandhya: Accha accha Papa ki laadli, abhi jakar kapde badal.

Vo chali gayi lekin Mohanlal ko bahut badi preshani me daal gayi. Usse tu samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki ye kya ho raha hai kyonki Vo yaad kar raha tha ki uska khila hua Masum chere, chauda matha aur uske neechy bahut hi sundar halki neeli aankhe jo bahut hi àakrshak thi, jaise kisiko nimantran de rahi ho, gulab ki pankhudiyo jaise honth aur chere ke neeche surahidaar gardan. Gardan ke neeche seene par uski choli me kase hue uroj jo chote chote perfect gol santre lag rahe the aur aisa lag raha tha ki choli uske santro par rakh kar naap li gayi ho. Pehli baar usne dekha ki choli ke gale me urojon ka bahut hi chota hissa nazar aa raha tha jiski rangat aisi thi jaise dudh me sindoor ko mila diya ho. Choli aur lehnge ke bich samtal pait aur uspar gehri nabhi tu aisi thi ki vo kisi bhi Jawan ya budhe ki jaan le le.

Choli me se nikalte uske gore gore bazu bahut hi aakrshak lag rahe the. Ye jarur tha ki hathon aur bazuon par dhyan se dekhne se chote chote balon ke royen nazar aate the lekin vo bhi uss par bahut aache lag rahe the.

Ghagre me uski lambi patli tange bahut hi pyari lag rahi thi.

Jab usne apane aap ko ghumakkar dikhaya tu peeche se uske lambe lambe baal uske nitambon tak panhuch rahe the. Bahut hi patli kamar aur uske neeche kase hue Nitamb aise the jaise ki vo bahar ko nikle hue the aur aisa partit hota tha jaise do gaindon ko ek sath sath milkar rakh diya ho, kya manmohak drishye uttapan kar rahe the aur vo dono aapas me uske chalne par ragad khate the.

Ek taraf tu uski khubsurati use preshan kar rahi thi aur dusari taraf vo apane aap ko kos raha tha ki vo apani beti ke bare me kya soch raha hai. Fir agale hi pal vo apane aap ko samjhane lagta ki uske ghar me ek bahut hi sundar ful khilane wala hai tu uski raksha karna uska farz hai, sath me ye bhi uske dil me chal raha tha ki uski bagiya me jo ful hai chahe ya na chahe uski sugandh tu usko bhi milti rahegi. Uska dimagh kah raha tha ki sugandh tu milegi lekin uskoo chuna uske liye varjit hai kyounki vo uska baap hai. Aise hi khayalon me vo uss raat so gaya.

Agle din Ruchika ka function tha tu vo jab vahi ghaghra choli pehan kar aayi tu ek baar Mohanlal ka dil fir machal gaya lekin iss baar usne apane upar kabu rakhate hue apane vichaaron ko lagam laga kar khud ko bhavshunya dikhane ki koshish karne laga lekin uske dil me usko dekhkar aisi khalbali mach rahi thi ki use khud samajh nahi aa raha tha, use aise lag raha tha ki jaise Ruchika ek chumbak ho aur vo ek lohe ka tukda jo uski taraf apane aap hi khichane ko taiyar khadha ho parantu usko kisi ne chumbak ki taraf na jane dene ke liye pakad rakha ho. Lekin usko dekhte hi Mohanlal ka dil ucchal kar uske paas panhuch jata tha aur vo uski khubsurati ka kayal ho gaya.

Vanha par Sandhya ne kaha ki jaldi se nashta kar lo aur Ruchika ko chhod do tu ek baar fir se vo usse bade gaur se dekhne laga tu Ruchika ne puchha ki "kya dekh rahe ho Papa"
Mohanlal ne kaha "Tum bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho lekin mujhe kuch kami bhi lag rahi hai aur samajh nahi aa rahi ki vo kya hai"

Uski baat sunkar Sandhya bhi Ruchika ko gaur se dekhne lagi aur usne bhi kaha "Ruchi tum vakai bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho. Tumne ghagra choli tu pehan liya hai lekin tumne koi bhi gehna nahi pehna hai, isliye tum paramparik Rajasthani nahi lag rahi ho. Tumhe kuch halke gehne pahnne padenge jisse tum asal me paramparik lag sako.

Ruchika: ab kya karu
Sandhya: Tum kal jab Papa ke sath gayi thi tu kharid lati, ab koi dukane thodhi na khuli hongi
Sandhya: Mere paas jo hain vo bahut bhari hain aur vo tum par acche nahi lagenge isliye Papa ko bolna ki naye le denge.
Ruchika: Lekin abhi kya karu

Sandhya: aisa karo ki abhi tu college chali jao aur tumhare Papa thodhi der baad jab dukane khulengi tu tumhare liye lekar college me se denge.
Ruchika: Lekin college me dhundege kaise

Sandhya: Aisa karo ghar vala mobile tum apane sath le jao, jab tumhare Papa lekar aayenge tu tumhe mobile par phone kar denge aur Tum bahar aa jana.

Tab Ruchika ne Mohan tandra bhang karte hue boli ,"Papa, theek hai na ki aap mere liye gehne la denge"
Mohanlal: gehne?

Sandhya: Haan iska gala, kaan aur hath khali khali lag rahe hain, isliye aap isko college chhod kar bazar se iske liye gehne lekar isko college me mobile par bula kar de dena.

Mohanlal: (Ruchika ke gale aur kaan ki taraf dekhte hue) ye saath jati tu iski pasand aur iske naap ke hi le deta
Sandhya: Konse asli lene hai, chandi ke bina pani chadhe lane hai, andaje se le lena

Mohanlal: Theek hai jo hukum, pura karenge.
Tabhi Ruchika boli "mujhe college chhod do na", Mohanlal ne usko ek baar fir se niharate hue kaha "chalo" aur usne bahar jakar Motorcycle nikali aur Ruchika uske peeche baithi tu Usse aaj kuch alag anubhuti honrahi thi kyounki Ruchika ne aaj pehli baar shayad koi perfume lagaya tha jiski sugandh uske nathunon se jakar uske dil ko chedh rahi thi.

What a description!

Marvelous,
Nice way of presentation for the first attraction.
Superb

 

[divyaa]

Update 11

Mohanlal: agar aisa hua aur tumhe bura na lage tu Mom ko apane sath le jana
Aditya: (Sandhya ki taraf pyar bhari nazro se dekhte hue) Papa mujhe tu koi problem nahi hogi, lekin pata nahi Mom mere sath jana bhi chahengi ya nahi

Sandhya: Jab waqt aayega tab ki tab dekhenge.
Mohanlal: Tu fir theek hai, ab subah jaldi nikalna hai tu chalo fir ab sotey hain.

Ruchika: Main aaj Mom ke sath sona chahungi
Sandhya: Haan haan kyoun nahi, chal main tumhare kamre me aati hu

Uske baad Mohanlal, Aditya aur Ruchika apane apane kamare me chale gaye aur Sandhya kitchen me kaam khatam karke apane bedroom me aayi tu Mohanlal ne use kaha ki "Jayada der tak jagna mat, jaldi so jana kyounki subah jaldi nikalna hai", Sandhya ne usse aashwasan diya ki "chinta karo, Ruchi ko jaldi sula dungi, aap aaram karo".

Uske jane ke baad Mohanlal sone ki koshish kar raha tha lekin use aaj ki baatein bhi yaad aa rahi thi, lekin thake hone ke karan jaldi hi neend ke aagosh me chala gaya.
Neend ke aagosh me use sapne me vo din yaad aane laga jis din vo Ruchika ke liye ghagra choli laya tha.

Vo ghagra choli lekar bahut khush hui aur vo use pehankar mere paas aayi aur ghumakar apane aap ko dikhkar puchane lagi "kaisi lag rahi hu",
Mohanlal usse dekhta hi rah gaya kyounki jisse vo ab tak bacchi samajhta tha vo tu ek navyauvna ban chuki thi, kyounki uske sharir ke utar chadav bilkul viksit ho chuke the aur usko pehli baar laga ki Ruchika ab badi ho gayi hai. Mohanlal uski khubsurti aur chadhati jawani me khoya hua tha tu Ruchika uske bilkul karib aakar fir bade pyar se pucchane lagi "batao na ki kaisi lag rahi hu main"

Mohanlal: Bahut acchi lag rahi hai, ab meri princess badi ho gayi hai, inn kapado me bahut pyari lag rahi ho
Ruchika khush ho gayi aur daudkar Mohanlal ke gale lag gayi tu pehli baar uske chote chote santre jaise urojon ne Mohanlal ki chathi ka saparsh kiya tu usse ek aisi anubhuti hui jo bayan nahi ki ja sakti, usne bhi apane hatho ko lejakar uski peeth par rakh diye aur dhire dhire uski peeth ko sehlate hue use kehne lage ki "ab tum badi ho gayi ho aur bahut pyari gudiyai lag rahi ho"

Tabhi Sandhya ne use bola "Ja kapde badal le nahi tu kharab ho jayenge, fir kal kya pahenegi"
Ruchika: Mera tu mann hai ki main ab aise hi kapde pehna karun.
Uski baat sunkar Mohanlal ne man me sochne laga ki "agar ye roj roj aise kapde pehnegi tu mere liye tu bada mushkil ho jayega, ye itni khubsurat hai ki mujhe pata nahi kya ho raha hai, fir tu shayad main koi bahut badi galti hi na kar baithu"

Sandhya ne usse kaha "Papa ne tujhe aise kapde dilwa diye, main tu tujhe kabhi na dilwaun aur jayada mat uddo, Papa ne bhi ek baar dilwa diye, baar baar nahi dilwayenge"

Ruchika: Mere Papa hain aur aap dekh lena baar baar dilwayenege, mujhe Mana nahi kar sakte. Aap dekh lena main kal hi Papa ke sath jakar naya suit lekar aaungi, kyoun Papa dilwaoge na

Mohanlal: (apane vicharo me khoye hue) Huunh
Ruchika: Dekha Mom, main pehle hi keh rahi thi ki Papa mujhe Mana nahi karenge.
Sandhya: Accha accha Papa ki laadli, abhi jakar kapde badal.

Vo chali gayi lekin Mohanlal ko bahut badi preshani me daal gayi. Usse tu samajh hi nahi aa raha tha ki ye kya ho raha hai kyonki Vo yaad kar raha tha ki uska khila hua Masum chere, chauda matha aur uske neechy bahut hi sundar halki neeli aankhe jo bahut hi àakrshak thi, jaise kisiko nimantran de rahi ho, gulab ki pankhudiyo jaise honth aur chere ke neeche surahidaar gardan. Gardan ke neeche seene par uski choli me kase hue uroj jo chote chote perfect gol santre lag rahe the aur aisa lag raha tha ki choli uske santro par rakh kar naap li gayi ho. Pehli baar usne dekha ki choli ke gale me urojon ka bahut hi chota hissa nazar aa raha tha jiski rangat aisi thi jaise dudh me sindoor ko mila diya ho. Choli aur lehnge ke bich samtal pait aur uspar gehri nabhi tu aisi thi ki vo kisi bhi Jawan ya budhe ki jaan le le.

Choli me se nikalte uske gore gore bazu bahut hi aakrshak lag rahe the. Ye jarur tha ki hathon aur bazuon par dhyan se dekhne se chote chote balon ke royen nazar aate the lekin vo bhi uss par bahut aache lag rahe the.

Ghagre me uski lambi patli tange bahut hi pyari lag rahi thi.

Jab usne apane aap ko ghumakkar dikhaya tu peeche se uske lambe lambe baal uske nitambon tak panhuch rahe the. Bahut hi patli kamar aur uske neeche kase hue Nitamb aise the jaise ki vo bahar ko nikle hue the aur aisa partit hota tha jaise do gaindon ko ek sath sath milkar rakh diya ho, kya manmohak drishye uttapan kar rahe the aur vo dono aapas me uske chalne par ragad khate the.

Ek taraf tu uski khubsurati use preshan kar rahi thi aur dusari taraf vo apane aap ko kos raha tha ki vo apani beti ke bare me kya soch raha hai. Fir agale hi pal vo apane aap ko samjhane lagta ki uske ghar me ek bahut hi sundar ful khilane wala hai tu uski raksha karna uska farz hai, sath me ye bhi uske dil me chal raha tha ki uski bagiya me jo ful hai chahe ya na chahe uski sugandh tu usko bhi milti rahegi. Uska dimagh kah raha tha ki sugandh tu milegi lekin uskoo chuna uske liye varjit hai kyounki vo uska baap hai. Aise hi khayalon me vo uss raat so gaya.

Agle din Ruchika ka function tha tu vo jab vahi ghaghra choli pehan kar aayi tu ek baar Mohanlal ka dil fir machal gaya lekin iss baar usne apane upar kabu rakhate hue apane vichaaron ko lagam laga kar khud ko bhavshunya dikhane ki koshish karne laga lekin uske dil me usko dekhkar aisi khalbali mach rahi thi ki use khud samajh nahi aa raha tha, use aise lag raha tha ki jaise Ruchika ek chumbak ho aur vo ek lohe ka tukda jo uski taraf apane aap hi khichane ko taiyar khadha ho parantu usko kisi ne chumbak ki taraf na jane dene ke liye pakad rakha ho. Lekin usko dekhte hi Mohanlal ka dil ucchal kar uske paas panhuch jata tha aur vo uski khubsurati ka kayal ho gaya.

Vanha par Sandhya ne kaha ki jaldi se nashta kar lo aur Ruchika ko chhod do tu ek baar fir se vo usse bade gaur se dekhne laga tu Ruchika ne puchha ki "kya dekh rahe ho Papa"
Mohanlal ne kaha "Tum bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho lekin mujhe kuch kami bhi lag rahi hai aur samajh nahi aa rahi ki vo kya hai"

Uski baat sunkar Sandhya bhi Ruchika ko gaur se dekhne lagi aur usne bhi kaha "Ruchi tum vakai bahut khubsurat lag rahi ho. Tumne ghagra choli tu pehan liya hai lekin tumne koi bhi gehna nahi pehna hai, isliye tum paramparik Rajasthani nahi lag rahi ho. Tumhe kuch halke gehne pahnne padenge jisse tum asal me paramparik lag sako.

Ruchika: ab kya karu
Sandhya: Tum kal jab Papa ke sath gayi thi tu kharid lati, ab koi dukane thodhi na khuli hongi
Sandhya: Mere paas jo hain vo bahut bhari hain aur vo tum par acche nahi lagenge isliye Papa ko bolna ki naye le denge.
Ruchika: Lekin abhi kya karu

Sandhya: aisa karo ki abhi tu college chali jao aur tumhare Papa thodhi der baad jab dukane khulengi tu tumhare liye lekar college me se denge.
Ruchika: Lekin college me dhundege kaise

Sandhya: Aisa karo ghar vala mobile tum apane sath le jao, jab tumhare Papa lekar aayenge tu tumhe mobile par phone kar denge aur Tum bahar aa jana.

Tab Ruchika ne Mohan tandra bhang karte hue boli ,"Papa, theek hai na ki aap mere liye gehne la denge"
Mohanlal: gehne?

Sandhya: Haan iska gala, kaan aur hath khali khali lag rahe hain, isliye aap isko college chhod kar bazar se iske liye gehne lekar isko college me mobile par bula kar de dena.

Mohanlal: (Ruchika ke gale aur kaan ki taraf dekhte hue) ye saath jati tu iski pasand aur iske naap ke hi le deta
Sandhya: Konse asli lene hai, chandi ke bina pani chadhe lane hai, andaje se le lena

Mohanlal: Theek hai jo hukum, pura karenge.
Tabhi Ruchika boli "mujhe college chhod do na", Mohanlal ne usko ek baar fir se niharate hue kaha "chalo" aur usne bahar jakar Motorcycle nikali aur Ruchika uske peeche baithi tu Usse aaj kuch alag anubhuti honrahi thi kyounki Ruchika ne aaj pehli baar shayad koi perfume lagaya tha jiski sugandh uske nathunon se jakar uske dil ko chedh rahi thi.

But one question when Ruchika was to sleep why Sandhya assured Mohanlal that she would make Ruchika to sleep early?

 

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On the one hand, it is being planned to send Sandhya and Aditya and on the other hand Mohanlal and Ruchika as well, which means father and daughter and son and mother together and there will be no fear of anyone, you have very Concept of good preparation.
You are continuing the present as well as the past, I love it. Mohanlal was attracted to his own daughter and lost in her beauty, but tell me what Ruchika used to think at that time. Mohanlal fulfills Ruchika's every wish as he loves Ruchika dearly. I can understand Mohanlal's heart, he is confused.
As always the update was great, You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Intelligent review

 

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Update 12

Tabhi Ruchika boli "mujhe college chhod do na", Mohanlal ne usko ek baar fir se niharate hue kaha "chalo" aur usne bahar jakar Motorcycle nikali aur Ruchika uske peeche baithi tu Usse aaj kuch alag anubhuti honrahi thi kyounki Ruchika ne aaj pehli baar shayad koi perfume lagaya tha jiski sugandh uske nathunon se jakar uske dil ko chedh rahi thi.
Jab vo bike par ja rahe the tu aaj Mohanlal apane hosh me nahi tha.

Jab use chhod kar Mohanlal vapis jane laga tu Ruchika smile karke college me chali gayi aur Vo uski smile me kho gaye aur us smile ke bare me sochne laga.

Vanha se nikal kar vo vapis jane ki bajaye ek janne vale sunar ke paas gaya aur usse Ruchika ke liye chandi ke gehne dikhane ke liye kaha tu usne chhedte hue puccha 'kya baat hai aaj subah subah hi, kya bhabhi ji naraz ho gayi jo us ko khush karna pad raha hai" Uski baat sunkar Mohanlal ne usse kaha
"are yaar chhodo na, bas kuch halke gehne dikha do" Dukaan daar ne usse bhari gehne lene ke liye bhi kaha lekin usne halke gehne hi pasand kiye aur unhe lekar vo Ruchika ke paas jane laga.

Vo jab Ruchika ke paas ja raha tha tab vo uske baare me hi soch raha tha ki ye gehne uspar kaise lagenge, yahi baat vo tab bhi soch raha tha jab in gehno ko kharid raha tha. Vo apane aap se lad bhi raha tha ki kya ek baap ka apani beti ke bare me iss tarah ki soch kaise ho sakti hai. Lekin uska dil ye bhi keh raha tha ki vo ek ladki bhi to hai. Uski antaraatma usko dusre hi pal dhikkarne lagti ki

"ye kya kar rahe ho, 'ladki bhi hai' tu kya jo bhi sundar ladki ho uske bare me tum aisa sochoge aur vo bhi apani beti ke liye, kuch tu sharam karo"

Yeh sochate hi usne bike ko break maar kar rok li aur use kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha ki vo kya kare. Kafi der sochane ke baad usne apane man ko pakka karke ye decide kiya ki vo usse apani beti hi samjhega aur sirf normal baat karega.

Yeh sochte hi
Mohanlal ne Ruchika ko phone karke bataya ki vah 10 minut mein college pahunch raha hai tab Ruchika ne kaha ki vo gate ke bahar milegi. Mohanlal college pahuncha Tu dekha ki vah college gate per uska intezar kar rahi thi. Mohanlal ne use vah gehne pakdakar jaane laga tu Ruchika ne usse kaha ki "achcha hota aap hi mujhe pahna dete"

Uski baat sunkar Mohan Lal ki soi hui bhavnayen ekdum fir se bhadakne lagi aur vah Ruchika ko dekhte hue sirf itna hi kaha "yahan achcha nahin lagega Tum ise khud pahan lena". Ruchika yah baat sunkar udas ho gayi aur aisa laga Jaise uska chehra bhuj gaya ho. Uski yah halat Mohanlal se bardasht nahin hui aur usne Ruchika se kaha "chalo bike per baitho, lekin pahle yah batao ki college mein kya bologi"

Ruchika khush hokar Mohan Lal ke piche bike per baith gai aur kahane lagi ki "usne Madam se pahle hi gehne lane ke liye bol diya hai" tu Mohanlal ne bike ko aage badha diya aur sochne Laga ki isko Gehne kahan par pahnahun. Mohanlal Ruchika se kaha ki "Ghar chalte hain aur vahin per gehne pahuna dunga" Jaise hi usne yah baat suni to ekadam se kaha "nahin nahin mujhe Ghar nahin Jana aap mujhe kahin Raaste mein pehna do"
Mohanlal ne socha ke raaste mein pahnane se koi un donon ko dekh lega aur tarah tarah ki baten banayega, isliye vo usse lekar ek acche se restaurant mein Main le gaya aur family cabin mein jakhar baithe.

Restaurant subah ka waqt hone ki vajah se bilkul Khali tha. Jaise hi family cabin mein baithe tu ek waiter ko bulakar do coffee aur sandwich ka order diya.

Waiter ke jaane ke baad Ruchika ne vo gehne dekhe tu khush ho gayi aur Mohanlal ko aankhon ke ishare se pehnane ke liye kaha.
Mohanlal ne necklace uthaya aur khada hokar Ruchika ki chair ke peeche jane laga tu Ruchika ne apani oodni ko utar kar dusri chair par rakh diya tu Ruchika ke ubharon ka kuch hissa dikhai dene laga aur Mohanlal (jisne socha tha ki use beti samjhega aur normal behave karega) ka rakt parvah badne laga.

Mohanlal khada hua tu baithi hui Ruchika ke ubharon ke andar tak ka nazara nazar aane laga. Mohanlal ne jaise hi necklace ko uski gardan par rakha tu uski ungliyon ne Ruchika ki gardan ko saparsh kiya aur Mohanlal ne uski gardan se baal hatakar necklace ka hook lagane laga lekin uski nazar Ruchika ke ubharon par hi thi. Uske hathon ka saparsh pehli baar Jawan hoti Ruchika ko accha lagne laga aur uski bhavanaon ko bhi bhadka gaya. Vo bhi soch me ped gayi ki ye kya ho rahe hai.

Necklace pehnane ke baad Mohanlal jhumke uthane ke liye aage aaya tu dekha ki Ruchika nazare jhukaye apane me khoyi hui hai.
Mohanlal ne uska dhyaan batane ke liye pucha ki " Jhumke pehan logi ki vo bhi pehnau", tu vo boli

"agar khud pehnna hota tu fir main yanha kyoun aati, aap pehli baar mere liye gehne laye hain, ye tu main aapse hi pehnungi"

Mohanlal ne ek chair kheench kar uske nazdik kar li aur uske ek kaan me jhumka dala tu fir se uske hathon ka saparsh apane kaan me hone se usko accha bhi lag raha tha aur kuchh kuchh ajib sa bhi kyounki use kaan me gudgudi aur dil me halchal ho rahi thi.

Mohanlal ka bhi haal bura tha kyounki uske naram naram kaan me hath lagate hue vo aanand ke sagar me gotey kha raha tha, lekin in goton me se nikalte hue us kaan me jhumka pehnane ke baad dusri taraf ki chair ko uske nazdik karke us kaan me bhi jhumka pehnane ke ke liye jaise hi kaan me dalne laga tu Ruchika ke munh se "aauch" nikla tu puchhne par pata laga ki Jhumke ka pin ched me na jakar uske kaan ko chubho gaya tu Mohanlal use "Sorry" bolne laga tu Ruchika ne nam aankhon se kaha ki koi baat nahi.

Mohanlal us kaan ko apane anguthe aur ek ungali ki sahayata se halke halke malte hue use aaram dene laga. Mohanlal ka iss tarah kaan malna Ruchika ke liye ek aisi anubhuti thi jo shabdon me bayan karna mumkin nahi hai.

Fir Mohanlal ne apane munh se garam garam swash kaan ke uss hisse par dalne laga janha par Ruchika ko chubhan hui thi. Ruchika tu mano ek alag hi duniya me panhuch gai. Jab use aaram mil gaya tu usne dusra jhumka pehnane ke liye kaha.

Mohanlal ne use bade dhayaan se aur bahut pyar se us kaan me bhi jhumka pehnaya aur pehnane ke baad aakar uske samne ki chair par baith gaya tu Ruchika kehne lagi "kaisi lag rahi hu" Tab tak Ruchika ne apani oodni ko nahi oodha tha.
Mohanlal use dekhkar bahut khush nazar aa raha tha kyounki vo gehne uss dress ke sath bilkul match kar rahe the aur Ruchika ki khubsurti me char chand laga rahe the. Mohanlal se uske ubharon ka drishye bardasht nahi ho raha tha tu usne kaha ki oodni ko ood lo. Ruchika ne uski baat bina prashan kiye maan li.

Abhi Ruchika ne odhani odhi hi thi ki waiter ne knock kiya tu Mohanlal ne usse andar bulaya tu vo coffee aur sandwiches laya tha aur table par rakhkar bola "Sahab kuch aur chaiye tu aap bell baja dena" aur bolkar vo chala gaya.

Uske jaane ke bad Mohanlal ne Ruchika se nashta karne ke liye kaha to usne ek sandwich uthaya aur Mohanlal ki taraf le jakar uske munh se laga diya tu Mohanlal ne bade pyar se a ek tukra kat liya aur khane laga to Ruchika bade pyar se use khate hue dekhne lagi aur aur kaha "Thank you"

Mohanlal ne usse kaha "kis baat ka Thanks meri Baby doll" aur usne bhi dusra sandwich uthakar Ruchika ke komal honthon ko taraf badaya tu usne bhi ek tukda kaat liya aur khane lagi Nazar niche karke kehne lagi "aap mere liye pehli baar gehne lekar aaye jo mujhe itna aacha laga ki aap ko bata nahi sakti"

Mohanlal ne usse kaha "pehli baat tu Thanks ki koi jarurat nahi hai kyonki tum meri Baby doll ho aur bachpan se lekar aaj tak maine tumhari baat kabhi taali hai. Main to kabhi nahin chahta tha ki tumhare liye Chandi ke gahne laun, Main to yah chahta tha ki tumhare liye sone ke a ya heree Jadit gehne laun, ye sab tu maine majburi me kiya hai kyonki tumhe jaldi thi"

Uski baat sunkar Ruchika ko Mohanlal par bahut pyar aane laga aur usne kaha ki "aapke yah gehne Mere liye sone chandi ya hire Jadit gehno se jayada keemti hai aur main inhe bahut sambhal kar rakhingi"

Mohanlal ne sandwich ki taraf dekha tu us par Ruchika ki lipistic ka nishaan aa gaya tha tu vo nishaan ek baar fir se uski bhavanaon ko bhadkane lage aur jane anjane me uski nazar Ruchika ki taraf jakar vo uske honthon ko khubsurti ko dekh raha tha tu jab Ruchika ne uski taraf dekha tu usne apana sandwich ek baar fir uski taraf badha diya tu Ruchika ne bhi apane sandwich ko uski taraf badha diya tu donon ne ek dusre ke sandwich ke tukde ko kaat kar khane lage tu Mohanlal ko uski lipstick ka taste bhi aane laga aur vo aanand me khone laga.

Ab Mohanlal ne apane sandwich ki taraf dekha tu uspar bhi lipstick lagi hui thi tu Mohanlal man hi man prasaan hone laga aur bich bich me fir se lipstick ka aanand lene ke liye vo Ruchika ko khila kar apane aur uske sandwich se uske labon par lipstick ko khata raha lekin indirectly.

Sandwich ke saath saath coffee ko bhi vo donon ek dusre ke sath share kar rahe the tu Ruchika ke hothon par lagi lipstick dhire dhire Mohanlal ke munh se hotey hue uske pait me panhuch rahi thi lekin uska asar dil par jayada ho raha tha.

Nashta khatam karne ke baad Ruchika ne kaha ki ek photo tu khinch lo taki vo bhi dekh sake ki vo kaisi lag rahi hai tu Mohanlal ne sharat se kaha "Photo ki kya jarurat hai, uski aankhon me hi dekh le use dikh jayega".

Ruchika ne bura sa munh banaya tu Mohanlal ne kaha "Photo acchi chahiye ki nahi tu smile karo". Ruchika ki smile karti hui photo jab usne dekhi tu boli "kya oodni ke sath khinch li, necklace tu dikh hi nahi raha tu usne oodni Uttar di aur Mohanlal par ek baar fir se bijliyan gira di.

Mohanlal ki nazar na chahte hue bhi uske urojon par jakar tik gayi, lekin apne ko sambhalte hue camere ki nazar se uske urojon ka aanand leta raha aur fir ek photo khinch li, jisse dekhkar Ruchika bahut khush hui aur fir oodni oodh li.

Uske baad bill pay karke bahar jane lage tu Mohanlal ne Ruchika se kaha ki uski lipstick kharab ho gayi hai, vo usse thik kar le. Ruchika ne sharmate hue nazar neechi karke kaha ki "Uske paas lipstick nahi hai"

Tab Mohanlal ne kaha ki Ghar chale tu Ruchika ne mana kar diya ki "Mom ko kya bataungi" Fir Mohanlal ne use salah di ki nai le lo tu usne baat maan li aur vo donon lipstick lene ke liye ek dukan par gaye tu use lipstick dilwai tu salesgirl kehne lagi ki makeup ka aur bhi saman dikhaun.

Ruchika meri taraf dekhne lagi tu maine use kaha ki jo pasand hai le lo. Usne kuch nahi liya tu bahar aakar puchhne par usne kaha "aap mujhe baad me le dena, abhi college jaldi jana hai aur dusra Mom ko kya bataungi" Maine use kuch na kehte hue bike se college chhod diya. Vo tu chali gayi lekin Mohanlal ke dil me khalbali macha gayi.

Nice presentation of first love/attraction encounter. This encounter has teased Ruchika as well. Let's see what is in store ahead

 

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At first Mohanlal loved Ruchika like a cute baby girl, but now his mind is slowly flowing, Ruchika's face, the fragrance of her body, her lips everything attracts Mohanlal and he himself cannot understand what is happening to him.
But now Ruchika has also grown up, she can also test right and wrong, so does she understand this or is it all happening in the unknown.
The jewelry wearing scene was very cute and exciting. There is a lot of love between the father and daughter and both are very happy, but who is happy for what reason, it matters.
Heart got happy after reading today's update. You are writing very well, Now let's see what happens next, Till then waiting for the next part of the story.
Thank You...
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Your review is equally appealing as the story.