Motaland2468
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Madam jo aapki galti batata usko to aapne report krke uska to muh hi band kr diya to aapki galti batayega kaun are puchha to hota meri story jisko itne log pasand kr rhe hai tumne bakvaas kaise keh di magar lgta hai aapko bhi sach sunne ki aadat nhi haiThanksfor me
Sooo nice of u dear Chauhan sir,my inspiration.Tum se hi inspire ho kar ,iss story ka naam rakha hai.Pehli story par sirf ek negative comment aya tha, to mene story halt kar di ,sochne ke liye ke kaha galti hui hai, second part apni galti ko thik karke fir likhungi, meri pehli story hai to kafi long vese,jo mene sochi hui hai.