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Romance Rishty Naaty (Family Ke sath)

Story apko kaisi lagi.....?

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Salu12

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Read krke Ek Baar review zarur dena ke aage yahi se continue krun ya nhi....

Bhai story to bhot achi ha magr ap ko pahly ek complete karni chahya ta ka readers ko koi pareshni na ho update ki agr do hogi to ap ko update dane me pareshni hoge plz ap pahly ek story complete kare
Agr mane koch galt kaha ho to sory
 
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Bhai story to bhot achi ha magr ap ko pahly ek complete karni chahya ta ka readers ko koi pareshni na ho update ki agr do hogi to ap ko update dane me pareshni hoge plz ap pahly ek story complete kare
Agr mane koch galt kaha ho to sory


Bro Men Apki baat se sehm hun

main pehle apni pehli story complete krunga phir ye story likhna shuru abhi to just is story ko start kiya......
 

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Hello Friends Men Ye story ka 1st update diya tha mager ap men kisi ne zyada response nhi diya

Islye ab new start krne wala hun Ab men jo start krunga end bhi isi start ka krunga………………………….

Rishty Naaty(Bheno ka piyar)

Sabse Pehle Thoda introduction de du….

(Introduction)

Mera naam Hai Faisal Baloch Is story mera naam yahi hai meri age 18 hui h men abhi college men hun…men ek gaon rehta hun…dikhne men Handsome Hun Ya nhi mere ko nhi pta leken khud ko shishe men dekh ke men apny apko handsome samjhta hun ab log kiya samjhty hain ye mujhe thodi pta hoga…ye to A**h hi jaane….
Faisal ke dada ki death ho chuki h

Faisal ke dada ko 1 beta (Faisal ke abu) 3 betiyan hui(intro baad men kr dunga)



Dadi abhi tk zinda hain (story men dadi ko dadi hi likhuga islye name ka koe faida )

Mere Dad Ka Naam Hai Ahmed Baloch Age 43 h
Gaon men Zameendar h Bahut he ache dil wale hain hamesha dusre ko maded krty hain ….

ami ka naam Rehana h age 42 h Ami ki death ho chuki h Rehana Ki 2 betiyan hai aur ek beta(faisal) …

Choti ami ka naam h Firdos h age 38 Bahut firdos ache khiyalo wali aurat hai Rehana ke death ke baad isne hi Ahmed aur Ahmed ke family ko sambhala inki choti age men shadi ho gyi to isko ek beti h firdos ki pehli shadi wala Shoher ek car accident men mar gya phir isne Ahmed se shadi ker li….

Badi bhen ka Naam Esha h Age 21 Abhi Uni Men h 2nd year h (abhi itna kafi h )

Choti badi bhen Ka Naam Usha h age 20 abhi uni ke 1st men h Dono bhen ek sat uni jati h (abhi itna kafi h)

Choti ami ke beti ka naam Sana h Age 18 ye faisal ke sath hi padhti h aur sath hi college jati h…


Aur bhi bahut se chracters hain Un sbka intro entry hone ke baad ker dunga..

Update 1 (past)

Faisal ki Ami ki death faisal ki delivery ke daoran ho gyi thi Ahmed ko Apni Biwi ke chale jaane ka bada sadma lga….
Is sadme men wo apni betiyon aur faisal ko bhul ker Ahmed ne Sharab ko hi apna sathi bana liya sara din apny kamre rahne lga….

Faisal ki dadi ne Faisal aur faisal ki bhenon ko dekha


Khair Rehana ki death ko 15 din guzer gai…

Ek raat Ahmed nashe se chur Apny kamre pada hua tha..

Faisal ki dadi kamre men enter hoker ahmed ke pass ayi aure uske Kandhe per hath rakh diya

Ahmed ko bhi abhi kisi kandhe ki zarurt thi jis se wo ro ker apny dil ka hal byan kr ske Ahemd ne apni maa ke kandhe per sar rakhke rone lga…faisal ki dadi ne thodi der ahmed ko rone diya…

Faisal ki Dadi; Ahmed kiya ho gya h tumhe tum to aisa nhi the na …. Rehana ke jaane ka dukh sirf tumhe nhi is ghr ko bhi hai… tumhe rehana ko bhulana hi hoga …tumhe ab bachon ki parwarsh dekhni h ager tum aisa tut jaogy to kaise chalega tumhary bachon ka kiya hoga … …sirf aj raat h tumarhy pass jitna rona h ro lo kalse mujhe apna beta wapis chahye…

Ye keh ker faisal ki dadi baher chali gyi.............

Ye raat hi bhi nikl gyi…

Faisal ki dadi baher khule Ground men Bethi hui
Uske pass hi Faisal soya hua tha
Ahmed apny kamre se baher nikla chalte hua apny ami ke pass aya ahmed ne jhuk ker apni ami ke pair chune chahi mager bich men hi faisal ki dadi ne rok diya…

Faisal ki dadi; Jeete raho khush raho…..

Ahmed ne apny bete aur dekha jo abhi so raha tha
Ahmed ki ankhen chamak uthi bina ek pal gwaye jhuk ker apny bete ka matha chum liya…

Ahmed; Ami Aj se men apni New zindagi shuru karne wala hun is men apki duaon ki sakht zarurt h…

Faisal ki dadi; Meri duain hamesha tumahry sath hain beta……

Barhal waqat tezi se gurzne lga faisal ki dadi bachon ko sambhalti aur ahmed kaam per dhiyan dena lga

Faisal ki dadi ke kehne per ahmed ne dusri shadi kerli kyu ke faisal ki dadi ek sath 3 bachon ko sambhalna mushkil ho gya tha

Firdos ki pehle shoher se 1 beti hui phir inki shoher ki car accident men maot ho gyi

firdos ne ahmed se shadi kerli….

Barhal waqat apni raftaar chalne lga
After 11year

Firdos ke piyar ne ahmed ko apna bana liya
Faisal ki dadi bhi relex ho gyi thi
Firdos ne sab bachon ko ek jaisa hi piyar diya
Na kisi ko zyada na kissi ko kam…
Ab esha 12 year aur usha 11 year ho chuki thi

Faisal aur sana das saal ke ho chuke thy….


(Aagy meri zubani jb men sixth class men pohncha )

“Faisuuu Uthho dekho kitna time ho gya……

Me; nhi ami mujhe aur sona h……

Firdos(ami); utho dekho tere school ka time ho raha h ager tum jaldi nhi ki to bus chali jayegi….

Me; nhi pehele ap sanu(sana) ko jaake uthao phir uthuga……

Firdos; ye larka bhi na) Sana to kb ki uth chuki h wo tyar ho rahi h vese bhi aj tera new class ka first day …. Aur first day miss nhi karna chahye…

Me; First day class ka yaad ate hi uchal pada) Kiyaa ami apne pehle kyu nhi bataya…..

Firdos; Acha Meri galti chal uth jaldi…

Me; Ami ko gale lga ker aur dono gaal per kiss karke bola) Ap kabhi galt nhi ho skti ap dunya ki best ami ho…..

Firdos; mery galo per kiss krti hui) haan pta h mujhe … acha men nashta lgati hu tum ache se tyaar hoker aa jao. ..

Me; Theek h ami

Phir Ami chali gyi men school uniform nikal ker fresh hone chala gya…

After 15 minutes

Ache se tyaar hoker niche aya…..

Nashte ki table per sari foj bethi thi

Esha/usha/sana/abu/ami/dadi/

Me; A.A And Good morning everyone(ye mera roz ka tha jb bhi dining table nashta karne ata to ye bolta)

Sab; W.S Good Morning
Men Jaake sana ke pass beth gya….

Nashta karty hue ami hidayaten bhi deni lgi mujhe aur sana ko school men wo na karna ye na karna

Phir nashta karne ke bag leker sabse pehle dadi se piyar liya phir abu fir ami aur sana ne bhi phir ghr se baher aa gye

Bus pe chad ke rawana ho gye school.ki trf joke shehr men tha

5th class pass Apny gaon men kiya gaon men sirf itna hi tha iske aagy ka Nhi tha (study)

Islye ami aur abu ne shehr men admission karwa di aur bus bhi karwa ke di fees badi thi leken abu ne manage ker liya
Esha 8 aur Usha 7 men thy in dono ka school hmse alg tha inko dusri bus lene ati thi…..

Note; Read kerke ek baar review zaror dena bhai log
Akhir pta to chale kaisa likha 2 ghante se likh raha hun aur like krna na bhoole
 

zopion

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:congrats: bro for starting new thread
i hope this thread will rock the story section
your first update is awesome :superb:
 
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Nice update dost start good ha
Hello Friends Men Ye story ka 1st update diya tha mager ap men kisi ne zyada response nhi diya

Islye ab new start krne wala hun Ab men jo start krunga end bhi isi start ka krunga………………………….

Rishty Naaty(Bheno ka piyar)

Sabse Pehle Thoda introduction de du….

(Introduction)

Mera naam Hai Faisal Baloch Is story mera naam yahi hai meri age 18 hui h men abhi college men hun…men ek gaon rehta hun…dikhne men Handsome Hun Ya nhi mere ko nhi pta leken khud ko shishe men dekh ke men apny apko handsome samjhta hun ab log kiya samjhty hain ye mujhe thodi pta hoga…ye to A**h hi jaane….
Faisal ke dada ki death ho chuki h

Faisal ke dada ko 1 beta (Faisal ke abu) 3 betiyan hui(intro baad men kr dunga)



Dadi abhi tk zinda hain (story men dadi ko dadi hi likhuga islye name ka koe faida )

Mere Dad Ka Naam Hai Ahmed Baloch Age 43 h
Gaon men Zameendar h Bahut he ache dil wale hain hamesha dusre ko maded krty hain ….

ami ka naam Rehana h age 42 h Ami ki death ho chuki h Rehana Ki 2 betiyan hai aur ek beta(faisal) …

Choti ami ka naam h Firdos h age 38 Bahut firdos ache khiyalo wali aurat hai Rehana ke death ke baad isne hi Ahmed aur Ahmed ke family ko sambhala inki choti age men shadi ho gyi to isko ek beti h firdos ki pehli shadi wala Shoher ek car accident men mar gya phir isne Ahmed se shadi ker li….

Badi bhen ka Naam Esha h Age 21 Abhi Uni Men h 2nd year h (abhi itna kafi h )

Choti badi bhen Ka Naam Usha h age 20 abhi uni ke 1st men h Dono bhen ek sat uni jati h (abhi itna kafi h)

Choti ami ke beti ka naam Sana h Age 18 ye faisal ke sath hi padhti h aur sath hi college jati h…


Aur bhi bahut se chracters hain Un sbka intro entry hone ke baad ker dunga..

Update 1 (past)

Faisal ki Ami ki death faisal ki delivery ke daoran ho gyi thi Ahmed ko Apni Biwi ke chale jaane ka bada sadma lga….
Is sadme men wo apni betiyon aur faisal ko bhul ker Ahmed ne Sharab ko hi apna sathi bana liya sara din apny kamre rahne lga….

Faisal ki dadi ne Faisal aur faisal ki bhenon ko dekha


Khair Rehana ki death ko 15 din guzer gai…

Ek raat Ahmed nashe se chur Apny kamre pada hua tha..

Faisal ki dadi kamre men enter hoker ahmed ke pass ayi aure uske Kandhe per hath rakh diya

Ahmed ko bhi abhi kisi kandhe ki zarurt thi jis se wo ro ker apny dil ka hal byan kr ske Ahemd ne apni maa ke kandhe per sar rakhke rone lga…faisal ki dadi ne thodi der ahmed ko rone diya…

Faisal ki Dadi; Ahmed kiya ho gya h tumhe tum to aisa nhi the na …. Rehana ke jaane ka dukh sirf tumhe nhi is ghr ko bhi hai… tumhe rehana ko bhulana hi hoga …tumhe ab bachon ki parwarsh dekhni h ager tum aisa tut jaogy to kaise chalega tumhary bachon ka kiya hoga … …sirf aj raat h tumarhy pass jitna rona h ro lo kalse mujhe apna beta wapis chahye…

Ye keh ker faisal ki dadi baher chali gyi.............

Ye raat hi bhi nikl gyi…

Faisal ki dadi baher khule Ground men Bethi hui
Uske pass hi Faisal soya hua tha
Ahmed apny kamre se baher nikla chalte hua apny ami ke pass aya ahmed ne jhuk ker apni ami ke pair chune chahi mager bich men hi faisal ki dadi ne rok diya…

Faisal ki dadi; Jeete raho khush raho…..

Ahmed ne apny bete aur dekha jo abhi so raha tha
Ahmed ki ankhen chamak uthi bina ek pal gwaye jhuk ker apny bete ka matha chum liya…

Ahmed; Ami Aj se men apni New zindagi shuru karne wala hun is men apki duaon ki sakht zarurt h…

Faisal ki dadi; Meri duain hamesha tumahry sath hain beta……

Barhal waqat tezi se gurzne lga faisal ki dadi bachon ko sambhalti aur ahmed kaam per dhiyan dena lga

Faisal ki dadi ke kehne per ahmed ne dusri shadi kerli kyu ke faisal ki dadi ek sath 3 bachon ko sambhalna mushkil ho gya tha

Firdos ki pehle shoher se 1 beti hui phir inki shoher ki car accident men maot ho gyi

firdos ne ahmed se shadi kerli….

Barhal waqat apni raftaar chalne lga
After 11year

Firdos ke piyar ne ahmed ko apna bana liya
Faisal ki dadi bhi relex ho gyi thi
Firdos ne sab bachon ko ek jaisa hi piyar diya
Na kisi ko zyada na kissi ko kam…
Ab esha 12 year aur usha 11 year ho chuki thi

Faisal aur sana das saal ke ho chuke thy….


(Aagy meri zubani jb men sixth class men pohncha )

“Faisuuu Uthho dekho kitna time ho gya……

Me; nhi ami mujhe aur sona h……

Firdos(ami); utho dekho tere school ka time ho raha h ager tum jaldi nhi ki to bus chali jayegi….

Me; nhi pehele ap sanu(sana) ko jaake uthao phir uthuga……

Firdos; ye larka bhi na) Sana to kb ki uth chuki h wo tyar ho rahi h vese bhi aj tera new class ka first day …. Aur first day miss nhi karna chahye…

Me; First day class ka yaad ate hi uchal pada) Kiyaa ami apne pehle kyu nhi bataya…..

Firdos; Acha Meri galti chal uth jaldi…

Me; Ami ko gale lga ker aur dono gaal per kiss karke bola) Ap kabhi galt nhi ho skti ap dunya ki best ami ho…..

Firdos; mery galo per kiss krti hui) haan pta h mujhe … acha men nashta lgati hu tum ache se tyaar hoker aa jao. ..

Me; Theek h ami

Phir Ami chali gyi men school uniform nikal ker fresh hone chala gya…

After 15 minutes

Ache se tyaar hoker niche aya…..

Nashte ki table per sari foj bethi thi

Esha/usha/sana/abu/ami/dadi/

Me; A.A And Good morning everyone(ye mera roz ka tha jb bhi dining table nashta karne ata to ye bolta)

Sab; W.S Good Morning
Men Jaake sana ke pass beth gya….

Nashta karty hue ami hidayaten bhi deni lgi mujhe aur sana ko school men wo na karna ye na karna

Phir nashta karne ke bag leker sabse pehle dadi se piyar liya phir abu fir ami aur sana ne bhi phir ghr se baher aa gye

Bus pe chad ke rawana ho gye school.ki trf joke shehr men tha

5th class pass Apny gaon men kiya gaon men sirf itna hi tha iske aagy ka Nhi tha (study)

Islye ami aur abu ne shehr men admission karwa di aur bus bhi karwa ke di fees badi thi leken abu ne manage ker liya
Esha 8 aur Usha 7 men thy in dono ka school hmse alg tha inko dusri bus lene ati thi…..

Note; Read kerke ek baar review zaror dena bhai log
Akhir pta to chale kaisa likha 2 ghante se likh raha hun aur like krna na bhoole
 
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