Aap ki thread pe ladkiyan achche khase tadad me hai. Aur wo barabar review bhi diye ja rahi hai. Bahut badhiya.
Story actually Rita madam ki hai jo multi millionaire business woman hai. Aur uski sexual journey par hai.
Adultery ho ya Incest ho ya koi bhi sexual story ho , direct sex scene me wo romanch nahi aata jo seduction me aata hai.
Agar Nayak and Nayika ke bich Sex ho gaya , eska matlab story ka " The End " bhi ho gaya. Esliye sex scene ko darshane se pehle kafi lambi chauri bhumika aur environment banane padte hai. Love birds ke bich chote chote sexual encounters dikhane padte hai.
Waise ye aap ki pahli story hai to thoda bahut mistakes hona jayaz hi hai. Dhire dhire aap bhi ek mature writer ban jayengi.
Story badhiya likh rahi hai . Bas , choti choti baten dhyaan me rakhne ki jarurat hai.
Sabhi updates bahut hi badhiya the Rita madam.
Outstanding n Amazing.