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Phele Pyaas bhujne wala tuo mileNice and hot update......
Reeta ye pyas aab dekhi nhi jati ab to bujha hi do uski pyas ....
Sanju please don't mindShayad aap ne mere baaton ka matalab nahi samgha madam.
Story kisi bhi subject par likhi gayi ho , ek background ya basic bahut jyada important hota hai.
( Aap ese galat mat samajhna )
Ye kahani business woman Rita ke sexual journey ki hai. Uske sexual relations ki hai. Esliye wo es story ki Nayika hi kahi jayegi.
1st page par aap dekhiye. Rita ko Heroine hi kaha gaya hai. Agar Rita story ki Nayika hai to slowly slowly uske sexual transformation par fokas karna chahiye. ( Means no hurry )
Mere kahne ka matalab tha ki koi bhi sexual relations aasani se nahi ban jata. Girls ho ya boys , bahut papad belne padte hai. Yadi symptoms positive me hai tab bhi shuruwat me chote chote hi sexual encounters hote hai. Phir jab dono pair ek dusre se puri tarah khul jate hai tab jakar unke bich sexual relation banta hai.
Maine aise bahut story dekha hai jiske shuruaat me readers to bahut milte hai lekin yadi kahani track se utarte hue nazar aayi to phir bhag khade hote hai. Baad me bahut hi kam readers hote hai unke thread par.
Waise madam bahut badhiya likh rahi hai. Lekin hamara bhi Farz banta hai na ki unhe ham guide kar sake . Wo first time likh rahi hai. Maine jyada to nahi likha hai lekin nobles hazaron ke tadad me padha hai.
Social , thriller , relegion , political , sports , entertainment , sexual etc bahut bahut jyada padha hai.
Aur yadi main kisi ke thread par story padhne pahuch gaya to last updated tak saath deta hu.
Aap ne Panjabi me story likha hai aur mujhe Panjabi jyada samajh me nahi aata hai.
Ha , agar English , Hindi , Hinglish , Bangla me hota to jarur padhta.
Waise aap ke comments bahut dekha hai maine. Bahut badhiya review deti hai aap.
Aur waise bhi ladies ke liye mere dil me shuru se hi soft corner hai.
I can't see a damsel in distress.![]()
maine aapki story padhi..aap achha likh rahi hai..pure seduction ke sath story chal rahi hai..bas ek gujarish hai ki rita ka jo dream boy ho matlab jo hero ho woh uska beta hi hona chahiye..baki log taraste rahe rita ke liye lekin rita apne bete ki ho jaye..aur rita ka love adventure, sexual adventure apne bete ke sath aage badhe..!!Sanju please don't mindRajizexy woh mere pyar ma bol deti hain
kahbi kabhi aapne sahi kaha heroine Rita hi hai Jo business woman aur uski life ma sab kuch hai but Sex nahi aur ye story usi per hai jese apne dream boy ki talash hai jo iss story ka hero hai aapki buhat si baton k sath ma sehmat hon aur koshish hogi aapko follow karo![]()
Sanju dear,u r right but readers of today are very impatient, they don't like stories showing seduction.Sex in every or alternate update is their demand.Sanju ji meri story English font me he, please ek baar adha ghanta spare karke read Karo,ab tak ki story tum jaise intelligent person ko,adhe ghante se jyada nahi lagega read karne ke liye.If sex is not shown in an update,then friends of both sexes start sending messages ,that ur story is getting boring,put some gifs nd sex.OK dear Sanju, please do read my story nd give your valuable comments.Bye dearShayad aap ne mere baaton ka matalab nahi samgha madam.
Story kisi bhi subject par likhi gayi ho , ek background ya basic bahut jyada important hota hai.
( Aap ese galat mat samajhna )
Ye kahani business woman Rita ke sexual journey ki hai. Uske sexual relations ki hai. Esliye wo es story ki Nayika hi kahi jayegi.
1st page par aap dekhiye. Rita ko Heroine hi kaha gaya hai. Agar Rita story ki Nayika hai to slowly slowly uske sexual transformation par fokas karna chahiye. ( Means no hurry )
Mere kahne ka matalab tha ki koi bhi sexual relations aasani se nahi ban jata. Girls ho ya boys , bahut papad belne padte hai. Yadi symptoms positive me hai tab bhi shuruwat me chote chote hi sexual encounters hote hai. Phir jab dono pair ek dusre se puri tarah khul jate hai tab jakar unke bich sexual relation banta hai.
Maine aise bahut story dekha hai jiske shuruaat me readers to bahut milte hai lekin yadi kahani track se utarte hue nazar aayi to phir bhag khade hote hai. Baad me bahut hi kam readers hote hai unke thread par.
Waise madam bahut badhiya likh rahi hai. Lekin hamara bhi Farz banta hai na ki unhe ham guide kar sake . Wo first time likh rahi hai. Maine jyada to nahi likha hai lekin nobles hazaron ke tadad me padha hai.
Social , thriller , relegion , political , sports , entertainment , sexual etc bahut bahut jyada padha hai.
Aur yadi main kisi ke thread par story padhne pahuch gaya to last updated tak saath deta hu.
Aap ne Panjabi me story likha hai aur mujhe Panjabi jyada samajh me nahi aata hai.
Ha , agar English , Hindi , Hinglish , Bangla me hota to jarur padhta.
Waise aap ke comments bahut dekha hai maine. Bahut badhiya review deti hai aap.
Aur waise bhi ladies ke liye mere dil me shuru se hi soft corner hai.
I can't see a damsel in distress.![]()