Romance RONNIE aur KHUSHI(XFORUM EXCLUSIVE)
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Story halki si complicated hai bro
Fir bhi maine jitna ho sake simplify kiya hai
Chandanpur aur harikaganj ki dushmani sadiyon se chali a rahi hai
Ek dange me kai log maare gaye.fir court ne faisla liya ki DEHSHI ki zameen dono shahron me kisi ki nahi hai
Yahan dono shahar apna school aur college khole taaki bacche nafrat ko bhula sake
Raghav khanna brijesh pande ka khas aadmi apne bete aadarsh ko vivekanand school me admission dilakar kuch logo ko ek saath dekha
Poocha to unhone bataya ki wo harikaganj ke hai.shaq hone par ki ye log dono shahar ke nahi hai raghav brijesh pande ko khabar dene hi wala tha ki use maar dala gaya
Brijesh Pandey ne aadarsh,uski maa suman sur chote bhai ronnie ko apne paas rakh liya
Baaki to aapko pata hi hai
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Ronnie aaj bohut khush tha,khushi ko acha sabak sikhaya tha usne
Ladki ka attitude aasmaan ko choo raha tha
Aaj use achi neend aayegi
Tabhi uska mobile bajta hai
"Ronnie jaldi a yahan a ja kuch harikaganj ke gunde ek ladki ke saath........"phone cut jaata hai
Ronnie ek jump ke saath utha khada hua aur daudte hue phone me bola
"Kahan hai tu??"ronnie bola
"Yahi town hall me jaldi a"awaazein aayi doosri aur se Awaz aayi
"Koun ho tum waise ??"ronnie ne poochha
"Wo baad me pehle jaldi aao"awaz aayi phone par aur phone cut jaata hai
Ronnie jab town hall pohuncha kaafi raat ho chuki thi
Kahi koi nazar nahi a raha tha
Darwaza khula hua tha
Ron ke ander ghusa town hall ke.aur ek parchai ne darwaza halke se bandh kar diya
"BACHAO BACHAO"Achanak ek ladki ki awaaz aayi
Ladki ke kapde fatne ki awaazein aayi.aur wo ladki ronnie ke upar gir gayi
"BACHAO MERI IZZAT BACHAO KOI"lakdi ki awaazein abhi bhi a rahi thi
Ronnie door hatne ki koshish karne laga ki ...
DHADAM.....
darwaza toot gaya
Saamne aadarsh aur bharti ke alawa kaafi students aaye the light jala diya tha bharti ne
Fate kapde lekar daudkar bharti se lipat gayi khushi
"B bhaiyya mai.."ronnie ka safai sunne se pehle hi
GHADDD
ek zordar ghoosa pada aadarsh ka
"You scoundrel,rapist, Bastard tujhe is institute me admission Mila aur tune ye kiya??"
Aadarsh ne fir RONNIE ko uthakar ek aur kaatne wala tha ki
"Aur zyada naatak karne ki zaroorat nahi hai aadarsh,is sabka kachha chittha kal subah sabke saamne hoga"bharti boli
"Bharti please ise daba do.ronnie ko kal hi rusticate kiya jaayega,my humble request to you"aadarsh emotional ho gaya
Bharti chaunk gayi aadarsh ke is roop ko dekhkar
Kai baar is ladke ne bharti ko musibat se nikala tha,kabhi bhi ehsan ki Keemat nahi mahangi thi
Kal hi usne shweta ko sahi salamat ghar pohuncha diya.bhai ki galti ki saza aadarsh ko kyun mile???
"Thik hai thik hai,mai khushi se request karunga ki wo ise zyada issue na banaye.chalo sab"bol apne group ko le chali gayi bharti
Ronnie ko sabne ghinouna look diya aur chale gaye
"Kabhi socha nahi tha ron ki tu itna girega,dushmani apni jagah .ye kaam thik nahi hua"maru bolkar chala gaya
Sab chale gaye sirf RONNIE akela reh gaya
Khushi ki hasi uske jaano tak a rahi thi
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"Tujhe nahi lagta ye galat hua khushi??"shweta boli
"Huh as if I care??"KHUSHI carelessly boli
"Lekin jo bhi hai,itna ghinouna ilzaam lagana kahan tak jayaz tha ??"shweta boli
"Everything is fair in love and war"aankh maarte hue khushi boli
"Whatever Maine tera kaam kar diya na"Shweta boli
"Isliye to treat milegi,chal nayi movie aayi hai"haath kheenchte hue movie le gayi khushi
DEHSHI me ek hi theatre hai.wahi par dono movie dekhte hue wapas a rahe the
"Kaafi raat ho gayi nahi??"shweta boli
"Haan yaar,tu ruk.mai thoda aage dekhti hoon koi auto ya kuch milega"bol khushi a gayi
"Zyada door mat ja khushi ye jagah thik nahi hai,kaafi raat bhi ho gayi hai"Shweta boli
Khushi ne ansuni kar di shweta ki baatein aur aage badhne lagi
Ja hi rahi thi ki
Achanak kisi ne muh ko dabakar apne saath le gaya auto par
Aur auto bhag gayi full speed par
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"T tum??y y yahan kyun laye ho mujhe??"khushi boli
"Yahan isliye laya hoon ki wo kaam poora kar doon jiske liye tumne mujhpar ilzaam lagaya tha"ronnie bola
CHARRRRRRRR
kandhe ka kapda faad Diya ronnie ne
"NAHIIIIIII,mere paas mat aana.mat aana"khushi Paseene se,aansuon se poorri tarah laal ho gayi
CHARRRRR
baaye kandhe ka kapda bhi faad dala ronnie ne
"Pair padti hoon tumhare,maaf kar do .... please"bol bilakh bilakh kar rone lagi khushi,aankhen bandh kar li
Achanak uske kandhe par kuch sat sa gaya.usne aankhen aur zor se band kar li
Lekin lekin ye to koi jacket tha
"Pata chala??"ronnie bola
Khushi ne ronnie ki aur dekha
"Pata chala ek rape pidita kaise sehti hai sab??pata chala uska dard??pata chala kitna sehna hota hai use??pata chala is desh me kitni ladkiya is ghinauni dushkarm ka shikar hote hai??"ronnie bolta gaya
Aur khushi roti rahi
"Unke saath un aise ladkon ka bhi mazak banaya jo bina kuch kiye hi fans jaate hai"ronnie bolta hi ja raha tha
"Khair apna hostel jao,aur haan aaj ke baad aisa kisi ke saath aisa na karna warna koi bhi kisi ladki ko rape se bachane nahi aayega"bol ronnie apna baggage liye chala gaya
Station kuch hi door tha.
"Thanks maru,itna karne ke liye"ronnie ek feeki muskurahat ke saath bola
"Itne saal tere se compete karte aaya hoon.itna to pata hi hai ki tera character kaisa hai"maari bola
"Chal fir milenge chandanpur me,mera safar yahi khatam hota hai"bol bye karke nikal gaya ronnie
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"Are mai to darr hi gayi thi tu kaise aayi??"shweta boli
"Shweta please mujhe kuch der ke liye akela chor de"khushi boli
"Lekin..."
"Please.."khushi boli aur bed par let gayi aur foot foot kar rati rahi
Itni badi nadani ho gayi usse??dushmani to har students ka har students ke saath hai
Bharti didi ka aadarsh bhaiyya ke saath hai
Chandarpur ka harikaganj ke saath hai.lekin shayad aajtak kisi ladki ya ladke ne ek doosre par itna ghinouna laanchan lagaya hoga
Ronnie...ron .....usne bhi kai baar ladai kiya tha khushi ke saath lekin itna ghinoune tarike se kabhi nahi kiya tha
Chi..aaj chahta to ronnie uski zindagi barbaad kar sakte tha.waise bhi wo ja raha tha.kya ukhaad leti uska lekin wo.....
Kyun?????
Ladki ka attitude aasmaan ko choo raha tha
Aaj use achi neend aayegi
Tabhi uska mobile bajta hai
"Ronnie jaldi a yahan a ja kuch harikaganj ke gunde ek ladki ke saath........"phone cut jaata hai
Ronnie ek jump ke saath utha khada hua aur daudte hue phone me bola
"Kahan hai tu??"ronnie bola
"Yahi town hall me jaldi a"awaazein aayi doosri aur se Awaz aayi
"Koun ho tum waise ??"ronnie ne poochha
"Wo baad me pehle jaldi aao"awaz aayi phone par aur phone cut jaata hai
Ronnie jab town hall pohuncha kaafi raat ho chuki thi
Kahi koi nazar nahi a raha tha
Darwaza khula hua tha
Ron ke ander ghusa town hall ke.aur ek parchai ne darwaza halke se bandh kar diya
"BACHAO BACHAO"Achanak ek ladki ki awaaz aayi
Ladki ke kapde fatne ki awaazein aayi.aur wo ladki ronnie ke upar gir gayi
"BACHAO MERI IZZAT BACHAO KOI"lakdi ki awaazein abhi bhi a rahi thi
Ronnie door hatne ki koshish karne laga ki ...
DHADAM.....
darwaza toot gaya
Saamne aadarsh aur bharti ke alawa kaafi students aaye the light jala diya tha bharti ne
Fate kapde lekar daudkar bharti se lipat gayi khushi
"B bhaiyya mai.."ronnie ka safai sunne se pehle hi
GHADDD
ek zordar ghoosa pada aadarsh ka
"You scoundrel,rapist, Bastard tujhe is institute me admission Mila aur tune ye kiya??"
Aadarsh ne fir RONNIE ko uthakar ek aur kaatne wala tha ki
"Aur zyada naatak karne ki zaroorat nahi hai aadarsh,is sabka kachha chittha kal subah sabke saamne hoga"bharti boli
"Bharti please ise daba do.ronnie ko kal hi rusticate kiya jaayega,my humble request to you"aadarsh emotional ho gaya
Bharti chaunk gayi aadarsh ke is roop ko dekhkar
Kai baar is ladke ne bharti ko musibat se nikala tha,kabhi bhi ehsan ki Keemat nahi mahangi thi
Kal hi usne shweta ko sahi salamat ghar pohuncha diya.bhai ki galti ki saza aadarsh ko kyun mile???
"Thik hai thik hai,mai khushi se request karunga ki wo ise zyada issue na banaye.chalo sab"bol apne group ko le chali gayi bharti
Ronnie ko sabne ghinouna look diya aur chale gaye
"Kabhi socha nahi tha ron ki tu itna girega,dushmani apni jagah .ye kaam thik nahi hua"maru bolkar chala gaya
Sab chale gaye sirf RONNIE akela reh gaya
Khushi ki hasi uske jaano tak a rahi thi
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"Tujhe nahi lagta ye galat hua khushi??"shweta boli
"Huh as if I care??"KHUSHI carelessly boli
"Lekin jo bhi hai,itna ghinouna ilzaam lagana kahan tak jayaz tha ??"shweta boli
"Everything is fair in love and war"aankh maarte hue khushi boli
"Whatever Maine tera kaam kar diya na"Shweta boli
"Isliye to treat milegi,chal nayi movie aayi hai"haath kheenchte hue movie le gayi khushi
DEHSHI me ek hi theatre hai.wahi par dono movie dekhte hue wapas a rahe the
"Kaafi raat ho gayi nahi??"shweta boli
"Haan yaar,tu ruk.mai thoda aage dekhti hoon koi auto ya kuch milega"bol khushi a gayi
"Zyada door mat ja khushi ye jagah thik nahi hai,kaafi raat bhi ho gayi hai"Shweta boli
Khushi ne ansuni kar di shweta ki baatein aur aage badhne lagi
Ja hi rahi thi ki
Achanak kisi ne muh ko dabakar apne saath le gaya auto par
Aur auto bhag gayi full speed par
-------------------------------------------------------------------------------
"T tum??y y yahan kyun laye ho mujhe??"khushi boli
"Yahan isliye laya hoon ki wo kaam poora kar doon jiske liye tumne mujhpar ilzaam lagaya tha"ronnie bola
CHARRRRRRRR
kandhe ka kapda faad Diya ronnie ne
"NAHIIIIIII,mere paas mat aana.mat aana"khushi Paseene se,aansuon se poorri tarah laal ho gayi
CHARRRRR
baaye kandhe ka kapda bhi faad dala ronnie ne
"Pair padti hoon tumhare,maaf kar do .... please"bol bilakh bilakh kar rone lagi khushi,aankhen bandh kar li
Achanak uske kandhe par kuch sat sa gaya.usne aankhen aur zor se band kar li
Lekin lekin ye to koi jacket tha
"Pata chala??"ronnie bola
Khushi ne ronnie ki aur dekha
"Pata chala ek rape pidita kaise sehti hai sab??pata chala uska dard??pata chala kitna sehna hota hai use??pata chala is desh me kitni ladkiya is ghinauni dushkarm ka shikar hote hai??"ronnie bolta gaya
Aur khushi roti rahi
"Unke saath un aise ladkon ka bhi mazak banaya jo bina kuch kiye hi fans jaate hai"ronnie bolta hi ja raha tha
"Khair apna hostel jao,aur haan aaj ke baad aisa kisi ke saath aisa na karna warna koi bhi kisi ladki ko rape se bachane nahi aayega"bol ronnie apna baggage liye chala gaya
Station kuch hi door tha.
"Thanks maru,itna karne ke liye"ronnie ek feeki muskurahat ke saath bola
"Itne saal tere se compete karte aaya hoon.itna to pata hi hai ki tera character kaisa hai"maari bola
"Chal fir milenge chandanpur me,mera safar yahi khatam hota hai"bol bye karke nikal gaya ronnie
------------------------------------------------------------------------------
"Are mai to darr hi gayi thi tu kaise aayi??"shweta boli
"Shweta please mujhe kuch der ke liye akela chor de"khushi boli
"Lekin..."
"Please.."khushi boli aur bed par let gayi aur foot foot kar rati rahi
Itni badi nadani ho gayi usse??dushmani to har students ka har students ke saath hai
Bharti didi ka aadarsh bhaiyya ke saath hai
Chandarpur ka harikaganj ke saath hai.lekin shayad aajtak kisi ladki ya ladke ne ek doosre par itna ghinouna laanchan lagaya hoga
Ronnie...ron .....usne bhi kai baar ladai kiya tha khushi ke saath lekin itna ghinoune tarike se kabhi nahi kiya tha
Chi..aaj chahta to ronnie uski zindagi barbaad kar sakte tha.waise bhi wo ja raha tha.kya ukhaad leti uska lekin wo.....
Kyun?????
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Thanks a lot bro review ke liye
Jaisa maine sabse kaha tha ki ye story mere liye bohut challenging hai kyunki romance ko mai zyada nahi nikhar pa raha hoon.
Is story par sabse zyada jaan laga raha hoon
Saath rahiye