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storystoryline kafi achi hai aur ap character ke expression ko sahi dhang se dikha bhi rhe ho
Romance RONNIE aur KHUSHI(XFORUM EXCLUSIVE)
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storystoryline kafi achi hai aur ap character ke expression ko sahi dhang se dikha bhi rhe ho
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Review ke liye thanks bro
Ye romantic story hi hai bro
Sabse bada challenge hai mere liye ,sab mujhe thriller stories ke liye hi shabashi dete hai
Is story me mai sirf romance par focus karna chahta hoon
Full try kar raha hoon.saath dete rahiye
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Review ke liye thanks madam
storyline kafi achi hai aur ap character ke expression ko sahi dhang se dikha bhi rhe ho
Meri stories basically thrill aur suspense based hoti hai
Lekin ise poori tarah romantic banane ki koshis kar raha hoon
Aise hi story ko follow kijiye
Saath dete rahiye
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Ronnie apna bag pack kar ja hi raha tha ki saamne khadi ho gayi ek ladki
"Aap ja rahe ho??"dukhi swar me boli wo ladki
"Jana to padega naina ,lekin jald wapas bhi aunga"naina ke baalon ke upar haath ferte hue ronnie bola.
"Sun apna khayal rakhna,har roz phone karna,time pe khana kha lena.."suman bolti hi ja rahi thi
"Offo maa, DEHSHI ja raha hoon america nahi.aap zyada tension na lo"maa ko samjhate hue ronnie bola
"Jeete raho beta,jaise tumhara bada bhai apne naam ke mutabik ek aadarsh ban gaya hai,tumhe bhi wahi karna hai.mera aashirvad hamesha tumhare saath hai"brijesh Pandey ne ronnie ko gale laga liya.aur apne aansuon par zor lagaya
Abhi wo ro to nahi sakte warna ronnie ka man bujh jayega jaate waqt
Lekin isse suman ko koi fark pada.bade bete ke saath saath chota beta bhi aaj chala gaya padhai poori karne.rote rote haal behal tha uska
Khair sabse bida lekar ronnie apna baggage liye apne hostel ke samne tha
"Oh tu bhi yahan a gaya??"ek awaz aayi aur muskurate hue ronnie ne peecha mudkar dekha
3 m yani maru,mantra aur mohit khade the
Yani ye teeno ko bhi admission mil hi gaya
Hadh hai bhai
"Pair rakhne se pehle jaan le ,ye maru ka area hai,yahan dhang se...."Bolte Bolte ronnie ne apni ungli se mantra ke sar ko apne se door kiya
"Kyun be maru??fir se panga lega??bachpan se hi to maar khate hue aaya hai"ronnie bola
"D dekh ronnie apna power mat dikha ,sirf aadarsh bhaiyya ke karan mai chup hoon warna.."maru bola
"Warna??"ronnie aage badhte hue bola
"W w warna tujhe dekh leta,lekin yaad rakhna maari se paala pada hai tera"bol bhag khadi hui 3 m
"Sab ke sab chutiye hai yahan"sar hilate hue ronnie aage badh gaya
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Khushi ne bhi apne hostel me pair rakha.bohut hi khush thi wo
Ek naye safar ki shuruaat hui thi
"Arey khushi??"ek jaani pehchani awaz aayi khushi ko
"Sameer ??yahan??omg mujhe to yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai"khushi Sameer ke gale lagte hue boli
"Mera to admission ho gaya hai sarojini me, tumhara bhi??"Sameer ne poochha
Khushi ne aankh maarte hue sawal ka jawab diya
Sameer bohut khush tha.lagta hai bhagwan ki yahi marzi hai ki khushi ko ek din propose kare
"Kahan kho gaye janab??"khushi ne Sameer ko uske khayalon se bahar nikala
"K kuch nahi khushi"Sameer jhepte hue bola
"Waise Sameer wo area koun si hai??"khushi ne poochha
"Wahi ghatiya soch rakhne wale vivekanand school aur college usi taraf hai"Sameer bola
Yani wo kameena ronnie wahi hoga,aaj nahi to kal saamna hoga tab dekh legi khushi
Shaam ko market me khushi Sameer ke saath ghoomna gayi
Tabhi t shirt aur half denim me ronnie dikhai diya use
Khushi khud top aur jeans me thi.
Dono ki nazrein mili
"Dekh rajat ek bandariya ke saath ek chuchandar"ronnie ke aise Bolte hi vivekanand ke saare students hasne lage
"K khushi chalo chalte hai,in badmasho ke muh lagna thik nahi hai"Sameer ghabrate hue bola
Aur khushi ka haath pakadkar kheenchte hue bola
"Nahi Sameer,chup rahe to ye log hame KAMZOR samjhenge.jo hum nahi hai"khushi boli aur Sameer ka haath chudakar khadi ho gayi
"Jo bola hai seedhe seedhe bol kaala bhains"khushi ke ye Bolte hi saare sarojini ke students hasne lage
Ronnie kuch bolne hi wala tha ki police patrolling ki gaadi wahan se Guzarne lagi
Khushi ko ghoorte hue chala gaya ronnie,khushi bhi 'i don't care 'wala attitude dikhakar chali gayi
"Aap ja rahe ho??"dukhi swar me boli wo ladki
"Jana to padega naina ,lekin jald wapas bhi aunga"naina ke baalon ke upar haath ferte hue ronnie bola.
"Sun apna khayal rakhna,har roz phone karna,time pe khana kha lena.."suman bolti hi ja rahi thi
"Offo maa, DEHSHI ja raha hoon america nahi.aap zyada tension na lo"maa ko samjhate hue ronnie bola
"Jeete raho beta,jaise tumhara bada bhai apne naam ke mutabik ek aadarsh ban gaya hai,tumhe bhi wahi karna hai.mera aashirvad hamesha tumhare saath hai"brijesh Pandey ne ronnie ko gale laga liya.aur apne aansuon par zor lagaya
Abhi wo ro to nahi sakte warna ronnie ka man bujh jayega jaate waqt
Lekin isse suman ko koi fark pada.bade bete ke saath saath chota beta bhi aaj chala gaya padhai poori karne.rote rote haal behal tha uska
Khair sabse bida lekar ronnie apna baggage liye apne hostel ke samne tha
"Oh tu bhi yahan a gaya??"ek awaz aayi aur muskurate hue ronnie ne peecha mudkar dekha
3 m yani maru,mantra aur mohit khade the
Yani ye teeno ko bhi admission mil hi gaya
Hadh hai bhai
"Pair rakhne se pehle jaan le ,ye maru ka area hai,yahan dhang se...."Bolte Bolte ronnie ne apni ungli se mantra ke sar ko apne se door kiya
"Kyun be maru??fir se panga lega??bachpan se hi to maar khate hue aaya hai"ronnie bola
"D dekh ronnie apna power mat dikha ,sirf aadarsh bhaiyya ke karan mai chup hoon warna.."maru bola
"Warna??"ronnie aage badhte hue bola
"W w warna tujhe dekh leta,lekin yaad rakhna maari se paala pada hai tera"bol bhag khadi hui 3 m
"Sab ke sab chutiye hai yahan"sar hilate hue ronnie aage badh gaya
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Khushi ne bhi apne hostel me pair rakha.bohut hi khush thi wo
Ek naye safar ki shuruaat hui thi
"Arey khushi??"ek jaani pehchani awaz aayi khushi ko
"Sameer ??yahan??omg mujhe to yakeen hi nahi ho raha hai"khushi Sameer ke gale lagte hue boli
"Mera to admission ho gaya hai sarojini me, tumhara bhi??"Sameer ne poochha
Khushi ne aankh maarte hue sawal ka jawab diya
Sameer bohut khush tha.lagta hai bhagwan ki yahi marzi hai ki khushi ko ek din propose kare
"Kahan kho gaye janab??"khushi ne Sameer ko uske khayalon se bahar nikala
"K kuch nahi khushi"Sameer jhepte hue bola
"Waise Sameer wo area koun si hai??"khushi ne poochha
"Wahi ghatiya soch rakhne wale vivekanand school aur college usi taraf hai"Sameer bola
Yani wo kameena ronnie wahi hoga,aaj nahi to kal saamna hoga tab dekh legi khushi
Shaam ko market me khushi Sameer ke saath ghoomna gayi
Tabhi t shirt aur half denim me ronnie dikhai diya use
Khushi khud top aur jeans me thi.
Dono ki nazrein mili
"Dekh rajat ek bandariya ke saath ek chuchandar"ronnie ke aise Bolte hi vivekanand ke saare students hasne lage
"K khushi chalo chalte hai,in badmasho ke muh lagna thik nahi hai"Sameer ghabrate hue bola
Aur khushi ka haath pakadkar kheenchte hue bola
"Nahi Sameer,chup rahe to ye log hame KAMZOR samjhenge.jo hum nahi hai"khushi boli aur Sameer ka haath chudakar khadi ho gayi
"Jo bola hai seedhe seedhe bol kaala bhains"khushi ke ye Bolte hi saare sarojini ke students hasne lage
Ronnie kuch bolne hi wala tha ki police patrolling ki gaadi wahan se Guzarne lagi
Khushi ko ghoorte hue chala gaya ronnie,khushi bhi 'i don't care 'wala attitude dikhakar chali gayi
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Happiness of life : to love & be loved
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for starting new thread story ka plot kafi shandaar hai
aadarsh aur dolly ka character jabardast hai
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- 6,793
- 25,233
- 219
Thanks a lot review ke liye
story ka plot kafi shandaar hai
aadarsh aur dolly ka character jabardast hai
Aap aise hi saath dete rahiye