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Adultery Rudra (adventure story) ( Completed )

Kya me is story me magic aur super natural power add karu

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Dhamesh singh (dad) died

Jyoti singh (mom) died

Rudra (hero)

Rahul (side hero)

Anjali (rudra's love interest and sister of rahul) died

Sanjana (mother of rahul and anjali) died

Siddharth (father of rahul) died

Bade papa= sujit singh sodhi (died but his body captured by igris) unexplored character

Mahamahim (friend of igris) unexplored character

Sura (friend of igris) unexplored character

Aacharya (friend of igris) unexplored character

Balveer (son of sujit singh sodhi) 1st villain

niraj pandey (rahul ke chacha) 2nd villain

Choudhary (died but his body captured by myasur) unexplored character 3rd villain

Mr. X (kaal) slave of mayasur 4th villain

Mohini (another asur and slave of mayasur) 5th villain

Daitya (somer relationship with rahul and rudra) unexplored character

Paritosh thakur (famous business man friend of raj singh) unexplored character

Raj singh (city ka mla) unexplored character

abhay = CBI chief ki post par hai (friend of siddharth)

Abhi (cbi officer and friend of Rudra)

Sam cbi officer and junior of abhi

Arun cbi officer and junior of abhi

Dev cbi officer and junior of abhi

Sangeeta cbi officer and junior of abhi

Ram sharma (criminal killed by rudra (beast) brother of sahdev)

Sahdev UCA ka agent "agent lion" and friend of rudra

Some secret police services

STF (secret task force)

SST (secret service team)

UCA (under cover agency)

Bhau another villain of story killer by rudra (beast)

Ranga another villain of story killer by rudra (beast)

Lucky hacker from underworld killed by bhau

Shankar mahadevan (olg PM of india killed by abhi slave of bhau)

Trilochan another villain of story killer by rudra and also slave of mohini

Ojha slave of trilochan another villain of story killer by rudra

Sukka guardian of rudra in isla planet

Zeba guardian of rudra in isla planet

Friends of rudra in isla planet

harry isla ke main city ka prince unexplored character

simona Sirius desh ki princess unexplored character

somi Sirius desh ki second princess unexplored character

kayko argon desh ka prince unexplored character

sayli sinour desh ki princess unexplored character

Another characters

Lord of the spiritual beasts (rahul)

Lord of dragons

Lord of demon warriors (agrasen)

Lord of demon magicians

Professor albus principal of royal magic academy in isla

Professor snape professor and co founder of royal magic academy in isla

Professor Hagrid professor in royal magic academy in isla

Professor oak professor and Co founder of the royal magic academy in isla

Professor nura professor and Co founder of the royal magic academy in isla

There are more characters are comming in story

Main villain???
 
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Update 141

Ab meri shiksha ki shuruaat ho gayi thi har din aacharya mujhe mayavi sjaktiyon ke kuch naye taur tarike sikhate aur mere andar ki aniyantrit shakti ko niyantrit karne ke liye bhi mera margdarshan karte toh in dino me meri aur un baki 5 shishyon me bhi maitri ho chuki thi

Mene ab tak unhe kewal itna bataya tha ki me maharaj viraj ka putra hoon aur uske baad mere saath hui har ghatna ke baare me bhi unhe bataya lekin mene abhi tak unhe meri asli pahchaan ke baare me nahi bataya tha

Toh wahi ab meri shiksha ki shuruaat hue 6 mahine ka samay ho gaya tha in 6 mahinon me aacharya yuhan ne mere andar ke mayavi shaktiyon ko ek alag hi star tak badha diya tha unke dwara diya hua gyan mere andar ke urja ko aur bhi jyada badha diya tha

Aage badhne se pahle un 5chon shishyon ka ek short introduction

P) Pruthvik :- kushal dhanurdhar

J) Jwala :- kushal talwaarbaj

N) Neera :- mahan jadugar

B) Bizli :- mahan yodha

V) Vayu :- jadui hathiyaar banane me parangat

In pachon ke naam aacharya ne hi rakhe the inke andar ke tatvon ko pahchaan kar

Ab aage

Is waqt me aur pruthvik gufa ke dusri taraf yudh aabhyas kar rahe the ki tabhi waha par vayu aa gaya

V :- (hum dono se) aacharya ne hum sabko ekatrit hone ka aadesh diya hai jaldi chalo

Uski baat sun kar hum doni bhi uske saath gupah ke andar chal pade jaha aacharya ke saath baki sab bhi maujood the

Aacharya :- mujh se milne se pahle tum sab ki pahchaan jo bhi thi jaisi bhi thi tum sab ne use bhulake apne aap ko mere aur meri shiksha ke adheen kar diya isliye mujhe tum sabhi pr garv hai mere shishyon (kuch soch ke) aaj me tum sabko mere dwara lagaye sare bandhano se mukt karta hu aaj se tum sabhi is duniya me mere shishyon ke roop me alag pahchaan banaoge aaj tum sabki shiksha khatam hui mene tumhe jitna shikhana tha utna shikha diya hai ab tumhe us shiksha ka kaise istemaal karna hai woh tum jano ab se tum aajad ho

Aacharya ki har ek baat sidha hum sabke hrudyon pe prahar kar rahi thi bhale hi mujhe 6 mahine hue the phir bhi mera judaav aacharya aur baki sabhi se ho gaya tha jaha aacharya ko me apne pita ke sthaan par maanta tha toh baki 5chon ko apne bhai bahan ke roop me toh wahi baki 5chon toh bachpan se aacharya ke saath the unke liye ye kisi jhatke se kam nahi tha lekin phir bhi hum sabhi ne ise guru aadesh samajh kar swikaar kar liya

Me :- thik hai aacharya parantu hum abhi tak aajad nahi hue hai guru shishya ke nate ka sabse bada karya shesh hai aap humse humara kartavya aur jag ka sabse bada punya nahi chin sakte

Meri baat sun kar jaha aacharya ke mukh par muskaan cha gayi thi toh wahi baki pachon mujhe shock se dekh rahe the lekin jald hi woh bhi mere kahne ka arth samajh kar mere saath khade ho gaye the

Aacharya :- tum kis punya ki baat kar rahe ho rudra

Me :- har guru ka kartavyw hota hai ki woh apne sabhi shishyon ko ek smaan maan kar unhe shiksha pradaan kare aur har shishya ka kartavya hota hai har guru aadesh bhagwaan ka aadesh samajh kar us par amar kare

Aacharya :- woh tum sab puri nishtha aur mehanat se karte ho

Me :- lekin kisi bhi shishya ka ek kartavya aur hota hai ki apne guru ke dwara diye gaye shiksha ka karj woh guru dakshina dekar utaare aur wahi uske jeevan ka sabse bada kartavya aur punya hai

P :- sahi kaha rudra ne guruvar boliye aadesh dijiye

Me :- (apne ghutno pe baith ke) boliye aacharya aapne hum sab ko shishya banane se pahle hi guru dakshina ke baare me soch liya tha ab batane me kya harz hai

Aacharya :- tumhe kaise pata

Me :- aap jante hai mujhse kuch bhi anjaan nahi hai ab boliye

Mujhe ghutnon par baitha dekh kar baki 5chon bhi apme ghutnon par baith gaye

Sab ek saath :- BOLIYE GURUVAR AADESH DIJIYE

Hum sab ko ek saath aise dekh kar aacharya ke aakhon me khushi ke aasu aa gaye

Aacharya :- agar tum sab yahi chahte ho toh thik hai lekin mujhe guru dakshina dene se pahle sabko mera itihaas janna hoga

Kahani aacharya ke jubani

Me aacharya yuhan is grah se door kruk grah ke ekaki raja ka raj guru aur raj salahakar tha mene use aur uske sare vansh uske sare pariwaar ko mene apni shiksha se apne gyan se sawara apne vidyaon se waha ke har ek shipahi ko puri sena ke saman shaktishali banaya tha apni shaktiyon se uske pure rajya ko nawaja tha

Lekin phir bhi jab mujhe uske madad ki jarurat thi toh usne mujhe bhikari bol ke apni raj sabha aur rajya se nishkashit kar diya aur woh itne pe bhi nahi mana toh usne mujhe maarne ke liye apne sabse shaktishali sipahiyon ko bhej diya lekin woh ye bhul gaya ki unhe yudhkala shikhane wala me hi hoon

Aur isi wajah se mujhe uske grah ko chodke is grah par aa gaya jaha mene apne badle ki aag ko shant karne ke liye yojna banane laga jis liye me yaha waha bhatak raha tha ki tabhi meri nazar ek bache par gayi jo pahle se hi shaktishali tha jise bas sahi shiksha ki jarurat thi jo me use dene laga aur aise hi woh 1 balak ki sankhya ab 5 ki ban gayi thi sab ko mene aisa taiyar kiya tha

Jisse woh akele puri sena par bhari pade aur jab ek saath ho jayenge toh pure grah ko tabah kar sakenge woh 5chon ab mera ghamand ban gaye the jis wajah se ab me apne badle ke liye taiyar tha ki tabhi mere samne rudra aaya

Jisne un 5chon ko ek saath ek pal me hara diya ya yu kahu usne mere ghamand ko hara diya lekin jab mujhe uski asliyat ka pata chala toh mano mujhe bramhastra mil gaya tha uski shakti itni thi ki pure bramhand ko akela tabah kar sakta hai

Lekin uske baad woh 6 mahine jab woh humare saath raha toh in 6 mahino me main apne sabhi shishyon ko apne putra saman samajhne laga tha jisse ab mujhe lagne laga ki me bhi wahi kar raha hoon jo sabne rudra ke saath kiya lekin jab woh sabhi 6 ke 6 mere saamne apne ghutno pe baith ke mujhse guru dakshina dene ke liye utsah dikha rahe the toh mujhe pata chala ki mene koi astra shastra nahi balki 6 mahan manushyon ko banaya hai

(rudra's pov)

Aacharya :- yahi meri kahani hai jo ki abhi adhuri hai aur use pura tum 6 karoge (mujh se) me chahta hoon tum kewal wahi shaktiyon ka istemaal karoge jo tumhe mere dwara prapt hui hai

Me :- me aapko wachan deta hoon unki barbaadi ke har kan me aapka ansh chalkega

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Update 141

Ab meri shiksha ki shuruaat ho gayi thi har din aacharya mujhe mayavi sjaktiyon ke kuch naye taur tarike sikhate aur mere andar ki aniyantrit shakti ko niyantrit karne ke liye bhi mera margdarshan karte toh in dino me meri aur un baki 5 shishyon me bhi maitri ho chuki thi

Mene ab tak unhe kewal itna bataya tha ki me maharaj viraj ka putra hoon aur uske baad mere saath hui har ghatna ke baare me bhi unhe bataya lekin mene abhi tak unhe meri asli pahchaan ke baare me nahi bataya tha

Toh wahi ab meri shiksha ki shuruaat hue 6 mahine ka samay ho gaya tha in 6 mahinon me aacharya yuhan ne mere andar ke mayavi shaktiyon ko ek alag hi star tak badha diya tha unke dwara diya hua gyan mere andar ke urja ko aur bhi jyada badha diya tha

Aage badhne se pahle un 5chon shishyon ka ek short introduction

P) Pruthvik :- kushal dhanurdhar

J) Jwala :- kushal talwaarbaj

N) Neera :- mahan jadugar

B) Bizli :- mahan yodha

V) Vayu :- jadui hathiyaar banane me parangat

In pachon ke naam aacharya ne hi rakhe the inke andar ke tatvon ko pahchaan kar

Ab aage

Is waqt me aur pruthvik gufa ke dusri taraf yudh aabhyas kar rahe the ki tabhi waha par vayu aa gaya

V :- (hum dono se) aacharya ne hum sabko ekatrit hone ka aadesh diya hai jaldi chalo

Uski baat sun kar hum doni bhi uske saath gupah ke andar chal pade jaha aacharya ke saath baki sab bhi maujood the

Aacharya :- mujh se milne se pahle tum sab ki pahchaan jo bhi thi jaisi bhi thi tum sab ne use bhulake apne aap ko mere aur meri shiksha ke adheen kar diya isliye mujhe tum sabhi pr garv hai mere shishyon (kuch soch ke) aaj me tum sabko mere dwara lagaye sare bandhano se mukt karta hu aaj se tum sabhi is duniya me mere shishyon ke roop me alag pahchaan banaoge aaj tum sabki shiksha khatam hui mene tumhe jitna shikhana tha utna shikha diya hai ab tumhe us shiksha ka kaise istemaal karna hai woh tum jano ab se tum aajad ho

Aacharya ki har ek baat sidha hum sabke hrudyon pe prahar kar rahi thi bhale hi mujhe 6 mahine hue the phir bhi mera judaav aacharya aur baki sabhi se ho gaya tha jaha aacharya ko me apne pita ke sthaan par maanta tha toh baki 5chon ko apne bhai bahan ke roop me toh wahi baki 5chon toh bachpan se aacharya ke saath the unke liye ye kisi jhatke se kam nahi tha lekin phir bhi hum sabhi ne ise guru aadesh samajh kar swikaar kar liya

Me :- thik hai aacharya parantu hum abhi tak aajad nahi hue hai guru shishya ke nate ka sabse bada karya shesh hai aap humse humara kartavya aur jag ka sabse bada punya nahi chin sakte

Meri baat sun kar jaha aacharya ke mukh par muskaan cha gayi thi toh wahi baki pachon mujhe shock se dekh rahe the lekin jald hi woh bhi mere kahne ka arth samajh kar mere saath khade ho gaye the

Aacharya :- tum kis punya ki baat kar rahe ho rudra

Me :- har guru ka kartavyw hota hai ki woh apne sabhi shishyon ko ek smaan maan kar unhe shiksha pradaan kare aur har shishya ka kartavya hota hai har guru aadesh bhagwaan ka aadesh samajh kar us par amar kare

Aacharya :- woh tum sab puri nishtha aur mehanat se karte ho

Me :- lekin kisi bhi shishya ka ek kartavya aur hota hai ki apne guru ke dwara diye gaye shiksha ka karj woh guru dakshina dekar utaare aur wahi uske jeevan ka sabse bada kartavya aur punya hai

P :- sahi kaha rudra ne guruvar boliye aadesh dijiye

Me :- (apne ghutno pe baith ke) boliye aacharya aapne hum sab ko shishya banane se pahle hi guru dakshina ke baare me soch liya tha ab batane me kya harz hai

Aacharya :- tumhe kaise pata

Me :- aap jante hai mujhse kuch bhi anjaan nahi hai ab boliye

Mujhe ghutnon par baitha dekh kar baki 5chon bhi apme ghutnon par baith gaye

Sab ek saath :- BOLIYE GURUVAR AADESH DIJIYE

Hum sab ko ek saath aise dekh kar aacharya ke aakhon me khushi ke aasu aa gaye

Aacharya :- agar tum sab yahi chahte ho toh thik hai lekin mujhe guru dakshina dene se pahle sabko mera itihaas janna hoga

Kahani aacharya ke jubani

Me aacharya yuhan is grah se door kruk grah ke ekaki raja ka raj guru aur raj salahakar tha mene use aur uske sare vansh uske sare pariwaar ko mene apni shiksha se apne gyan se sawara apne vidyaon se waha ke har ek shipahi ko puri sena ke saman shaktishali banaya tha apni shaktiyon se uske pure rajya ko nawaja tha

Lekin phir bhi jab mujhe uske madad ki jarurat thi toh usne mujhe bhikari bol ke apni raj sabha aur rajya se nishkashit kar diya aur woh itne pe bhi nahi mana toh usne mujhe maarne ke liye apne sabse shaktishali sipahiyon ko bhej diya lekin woh ye bhul gaya ki unhe yudhkala shikhane wala me hi hoon

Aur isi wajah se mujhe uske grah ko chodke is grah par aa gaya jaha mene apne badle ki aag ko shant karne ke liye yojna banane laga jis liye me yaha waha bhatak raha tha ki tabhi meri nazar ek bache par gayi jo pahle se hi shaktishali tha jise bas sahi shiksha ki jarurat thi jo me use dene laga aur aise hi woh 1 balak ki sankhya ab 5 ki ban gayi thi sab ko mene aisa taiyar kiya tha

Jisse woh akele puri sena par bhari pade aur jab ek saath ho jayenge toh pure grah ko tabah kar sakenge woh 5chon ab mera ghamand ban gaye the jis wajah se ab me apne badle ke liye taiyar tha ki tabhi mere samne rudra aaya

Jisne un 5chon ko ek saath ek pal me hara diya ya yu kahu usne mere ghamand ko hara diya lekin jab mujhe uski asliyat ka pata chala toh mano mujhe bramhastra mil gaya tha uski shakti itni thi ki pure bramhand ko akela tabah kar sakta hai

Lekin uske baad woh 6 mahine jab woh humare saath raha toh in 6 mahino me main apne sabhi shishyon ko apne putra saman samajhne laga tha jisse ab mujhe lagne laga ki me bhi wahi kar raha hoon jo sabne rudra ke saath kiya lekin jab woh sabhi 6 ke 6 mere saamne apne ghutno pe baith ke mujhse guru dakshina dene ke liye utsah dikha rahe the toh mujhe pata chala ki mene koi astra shastra nahi balki 6 mahan manushyon ko banaya hai

(rudra's pov)

Aacharya :- yahi meri kahani hai jo ki abhi adhuri hai aur use pura tum 6 karoge (mujh se) me chahta hoon tum kewal wahi shaktiyon ka istemaal karoge jo tumhe mere dwara prapt hui hai

Me :- me aapko wachan deta hoon unki barbaadi ke har kan me aapka ansh chalkega

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Aaj ke liye itna hi

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Update 141

Ab meri shiksha ki shuruaat ho gayi thi har din aacharya mujhe mayavi sjaktiyon ke kuch naye taur tarike sikhate aur mere andar ki aniyantrit shakti ko niyantrit karne ke liye bhi mera margdarshan karte toh in dino me meri aur un baki 5 shishyon me bhi maitri ho chuki thi

Mene ab tak unhe kewal itna bataya tha ki me maharaj viraj ka putra hoon aur uske baad mere saath hui har ghatna ke baare me bhi unhe bataya lekin mene abhi tak unhe meri asli pahchaan ke baare me nahi bataya tha

Toh wahi ab meri shiksha ki shuruaat hue 6 mahine ka samay ho gaya tha in 6 mahinon me aacharya yuhan ne mere andar ke mayavi shaktiyon ko ek alag hi star tak badha diya tha unke dwara diya hua gyan mere andar ke urja ko aur bhi jyada badha diya tha

Aage badhne se pahle un 5chon shishyon ka ek short introduction

P) Pruthvik :- kushal dhanurdhar

J) Jwala :- kushal talwaarbaj

N) Neera :- mahan jadugar

B) Bizli :- mahan yodha

V) Vayu :- jadui hathiyaar banane me parangat

In pachon ke naam aacharya ne hi rakhe the inke andar ke tatvon ko pahchaan kar

Ab aage

Is waqt me aur pruthvik gufa ke dusri taraf yudh aabhyas kar rahe the ki tabhi waha par vayu aa gaya

V :- (hum dono se) aacharya ne hum sabko ekatrit hone ka aadesh diya hai jaldi chalo

Uski baat sun kar hum doni bhi uske saath gupah ke andar chal pade jaha aacharya ke saath baki sab bhi maujood the

Aacharya :- mujh se milne se pahle tum sab ki pahchaan jo bhi thi jaisi bhi thi tum sab ne use bhulake apne aap ko mere aur meri shiksha ke adheen kar diya isliye mujhe tum sabhi pr garv hai mere shishyon (kuch soch ke) aaj me tum sabko mere dwara lagaye sare bandhano se mukt karta hu aaj se tum sabhi is duniya me mere shishyon ke roop me alag pahchaan banaoge aaj tum sabki shiksha khatam hui mene tumhe jitna shikhana tha utna shikha diya hai ab tumhe us shiksha ka kaise istemaal karna hai woh tum jano ab se tum aajad ho

Aacharya ki har ek baat sidha hum sabke hrudyon pe prahar kar rahi thi bhale hi mujhe 6 mahine hue the phir bhi mera judaav aacharya aur baki sabhi se ho gaya tha jaha aacharya ko me apne pita ke sthaan par maanta tha toh baki 5chon ko apne bhai bahan ke roop me toh wahi baki 5chon toh bachpan se aacharya ke saath the unke liye ye kisi jhatke se kam nahi tha lekin phir bhi hum sabhi ne ise guru aadesh samajh kar swikaar kar liya

Me :- thik hai aacharya parantu hum abhi tak aajad nahi hue hai guru shishya ke nate ka sabse bada karya shesh hai aap humse humara kartavya aur jag ka sabse bada punya nahi chin sakte

Meri baat sun kar jaha aacharya ke mukh par muskaan cha gayi thi toh wahi baki pachon mujhe shock se dekh rahe the lekin jald hi woh bhi mere kahne ka arth samajh kar mere saath khade ho gaye the

Aacharya :- tum kis punya ki baat kar rahe ho rudra

Me :- har guru ka kartavyw hota hai ki woh apne sabhi shishyon ko ek smaan maan kar unhe shiksha pradaan kare aur har shishya ka kartavya hota hai har guru aadesh bhagwaan ka aadesh samajh kar us par amar kare

Aacharya :- woh tum sab puri nishtha aur mehanat se karte ho

Me :- lekin kisi bhi shishya ka ek kartavya aur hota hai ki apne guru ke dwara diye gaye shiksha ka karj woh guru dakshina dekar utaare aur wahi uske jeevan ka sabse bada kartavya aur punya hai

P :- sahi kaha rudra ne guruvar boliye aadesh dijiye

Me :- (apne ghutno pe baith ke) boliye aacharya aapne hum sab ko shishya banane se pahle hi guru dakshina ke baare me soch liya tha ab batane me kya harz hai

Aacharya :- tumhe kaise pata

Me :- aap jante hai mujhse kuch bhi anjaan nahi hai ab boliye

Mujhe ghutnon par baitha dekh kar baki 5chon bhi apme ghutnon par baith gaye

Sab ek saath :- BOLIYE GURUVAR AADESH DIJIYE

Hum sab ko ek saath aise dekh kar aacharya ke aakhon me khushi ke aasu aa gaye

Aacharya :- agar tum sab yahi chahte ho toh thik hai lekin mujhe guru dakshina dene se pahle sabko mera itihaas janna hoga

Kahani aacharya ke jubani

Me aacharya yuhan is grah se door kruk grah ke ekaki raja ka raj guru aur raj salahakar tha mene use aur uske sare vansh uske sare pariwaar ko mene apni shiksha se apne gyan se sawara apne vidyaon se waha ke har ek shipahi ko puri sena ke saman shaktishali banaya tha apni shaktiyon se uske pure rajya ko nawaja tha

Lekin phir bhi jab mujhe uske madad ki jarurat thi toh usne mujhe bhikari bol ke apni raj sabha aur rajya se nishkashit kar diya aur woh itne pe bhi nahi mana toh usne mujhe maarne ke liye apne sabse shaktishali sipahiyon ko bhej diya lekin woh ye bhul gaya ki unhe yudhkala shikhane wala me hi hoon

Aur isi wajah se mujhe uske grah ko chodke is grah par aa gaya jaha mene apne badle ki aag ko shant karne ke liye yojna banane laga jis liye me yaha waha bhatak raha tha ki tabhi meri nazar ek bache par gayi jo pahle se hi shaktishali tha jise bas sahi shiksha ki jarurat thi jo me use dene laga aur aise hi woh 1 balak ki sankhya ab 5 ki ban gayi thi sab ko mene aisa taiyar kiya tha

Jisse woh akele puri sena par bhari pade aur jab ek saath ho jayenge toh pure grah ko tabah kar sakenge woh 5chon ab mera ghamand ban gaye the jis wajah se ab me apne badle ke liye taiyar tha ki tabhi mere samne rudra aaya

Jisne un 5chon ko ek saath ek pal me hara diya ya yu kahu usne mere ghamand ko hara diya lekin jab mujhe uski asliyat ka pata chala toh mano mujhe bramhastra mil gaya tha uski shakti itni thi ki pure bramhand ko akela tabah kar sakta hai

Lekin uske baad woh 6 mahine jab woh humare saath raha toh in 6 mahino me main apne sabhi shishyon ko apne putra saman samajhne laga tha jisse ab mujhe lagne laga ki me bhi wahi kar raha hoon jo sabne rudra ke saath kiya lekin jab woh sabhi 6 ke 6 mere saamne apne ghutno pe baith ke mujhse guru dakshina dene ke liye utsah dikha rahe the toh mujhe pata chala ki mene koi astra shastra nahi balki 6 mahan manushyon ko banaya hai

(rudra's pov)

Aacharya :- yahi meri kahani hai jo ki abhi adhuri hai aur use pura tum 6 karoge (mujh se) me chahta hoon tum kewal wahi shaktiyon ka istemaal karoge jo tumhe mere dwara prapt hui hai

Me :- me aapko wachan deta hoon unki barbaadi ke har kan me aapka ansh chalkega

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Aaj ke liye itna hi

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Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai VAJRADHIKARI bhai....
Nice and beautiful upddate.....
 

kas1709

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Update 141

Ab meri shiksha ki shuruaat ho gayi thi har din aacharya mujhe mayavi sjaktiyon ke kuch naye taur tarike sikhate aur mere andar ki aniyantrit shakti ko niyantrit karne ke liye bhi mera margdarshan karte toh in dino me meri aur un baki 5 shishyon me bhi maitri ho chuki thi

Mene ab tak unhe kewal itna bataya tha ki me maharaj viraj ka putra hoon aur uske baad mere saath hui har ghatna ke baare me bhi unhe bataya lekin mene abhi tak unhe meri asli pahchaan ke baare me nahi bataya tha

Toh wahi ab meri shiksha ki shuruaat hue 6 mahine ka samay ho gaya tha in 6 mahinon me aacharya yuhan ne mere andar ke mayavi shaktiyon ko ek alag hi star tak badha diya tha unke dwara diya hua gyan mere andar ke urja ko aur bhi jyada badha diya tha

Aage badhne se pahle un 5chon shishyon ka ek short introduction

P) Pruthvik :- kushal dhanurdhar

J) Jwala :- kushal talwaarbaj

N) Neera :- mahan jadugar

B) Bizli :- mahan yodha

V) Vayu :- jadui hathiyaar banane me parangat

In pachon ke naam aacharya ne hi rakhe the inke andar ke tatvon ko pahchaan kar

Ab aage

Is waqt me aur pruthvik gufa ke dusri taraf yudh aabhyas kar rahe the ki tabhi waha par vayu aa gaya

V :- (hum dono se) aacharya ne hum sabko ekatrit hone ka aadesh diya hai jaldi chalo

Uski baat sun kar hum doni bhi uske saath gupah ke andar chal pade jaha aacharya ke saath baki sab bhi maujood the

Aacharya :- mujh se milne se pahle tum sab ki pahchaan jo bhi thi jaisi bhi thi tum sab ne use bhulake apne aap ko mere aur meri shiksha ke adheen kar diya isliye mujhe tum sabhi pr garv hai mere shishyon (kuch soch ke) aaj me tum sabko mere dwara lagaye sare bandhano se mukt karta hu aaj se tum sabhi is duniya me mere shishyon ke roop me alag pahchaan banaoge aaj tum sabki shiksha khatam hui mene tumhe jitna shikhana tha utna shikha diya hai ab tumhe us shiksha ka kaise istemaal karna hai woh tum jano ab se tum aajad ho

Aacharya ki har ek baat sidha hum sabke hrudyon pe prahar kar rahi thi bhale hi mujhe 6 mahine hue the phir bhi mera judaav aacharya aur baki sabhi se ho gaya tha jaha aacharya ko me apne pita ke sthaan par maanta tha toh baki 5chon ko apne bhai bahan ke roop me toh wahi baki 5chon toh bachpan se aacharya ke saath the unke liye ye kisi jhatke se kam nahi tha lekin phir bhi hum sabhi ne ise guru aadesh samajh kar swikaar kar liya

Me :- thik hai aacharya parantu hum abhi tak aajad nahi hue hai guru shishya ke nate ka sabse bada karya shesh hai aap humse humara kartavya aur jag ka sabse bada punya nahi chin sakte

Meri baat sun kar jaha aacharya ke mukh par muskaan cha gayi thi toh wahi baki pachon mujhe shock se dekh rahe the lekin jald hi woh bhi mere kahne ka arth samajh kar mere saath khade ho gaye the

Aacharya :- tum kis punya ki baat kar rahe ho rudra

Me :- har guru ka kartavyw hota hai ki woh apne sabhi shishyon ko ek smaan maan kar unhe shiksha pradaan kare aur har shishya ka kartavya hota hai har guru aadesh bhagwaan ka aadesh samajh kar us par amar kare

Aacharya :- woh tum sab puri nishtha aur mehanat se karte ho

Me :- lekin kisi bhi shishya ka ek kartavya aur hota hai ki apne guru ke dwara diye gaye shiksha ka karj woh guru dakshina dekar utaare aur wahi uske jeevan ka sabse bada kartavya aur punya hai

P :- sahi kaha rudra ne guruvar boliye aadesh dijiye

Me :- (apne ghutno pe baith ke) boliye aacharya aapne hum sab ko shishya banane se pahle hi guru dakshina ke baare me soch liya tha ab batane me kya harz hai

Aacharya :- tumhe kaise pata

Me :- aap jante hai mujhse kuch bhi anjaan nahi hai ab boliye

Mujhe ghutnon par baitha dekh kar baki 5chon bhi apme ghutnon par baith gaye

Sab ek saath :- BOLIYE GURUVAR AADESH DIJIYE

Hum sab ko ek saath aise dekh kar aacharya ke aakhon me khushi ke aasu aa gaye

Aacharya :- agar tum sab yahi chahte ho toh thik hai lekin mujhe guru dakshina dene se pahle sabko mera itihaas janna hoga

Kahani aacharya ke jubani

Me aacharya yuhan is grah se door kruk grah ke ekaki raja ka raj guru aur raj salahakar tha mene use aur uske sare vansh uske sare pariwaar ko mene apni shiksha se apne gyan se sawara apne vidyaon se waha ke har ek shipahi ko puri sena ke saman shaktishali banaya tha apni shaktiyon se uske pure rajya ko nawaja tha

Lekin phir bhi jab mujhe uske madad ki jarurat thi toh usne mujhe bhikari bol ke apni raj sabha aur rajya se nishkashit kar diya aur woh itne pe bhi nahi mana toh usne mujhe maarne ke liye apne sabse shaktishali sipahiyon ko bhej diya lekin woh ye bhul gaya ki unhe yudhkala shikhane wala me hi hoon

Aur isi wajah se mujhe uske grah ko chodke is grah par aa gaya jaha mene apne badle ki aag ko shant karne ke liye yojna banane laga jis liye me yaha waha bhatak raha tha ki tabhi meri nazar ek bache par gayi jo pahle se hi shaktishali tha jise bas sahi shiksha ki jarurat thi jo me use dene laga aur aise hi woh 1 balak ki sankhya ab 5 ki ban gayi thi sab ko mene aisa taiyar kiya tha

Jisse woh akele puri sena par bhari pade aur jab ek saath ho jayenge toh pure grah ko tabah kar sakenge woh 5chon ab mera ghamand ban gaye the jis wajah se ab me apne badle ke liye taiyar tha ki tabhi mere samne rudra aaya

Jisne un 5chon ko ek saath ek pal me hara diya ya yu kahu usne mere ghamand ko hara diya lekin jab mujhe uski asliyat ka pata chala toh mano mujhe bramhastra mil gaya tha uski shakti itni thi ki pure bramhand ko akela tabah kar sakta hai

Lekin uske baad woh 6 mahine jab woh humare saath raha toh in 6 mahino me main apne sabhi shishyon ko apne putra saman samajhne laga tha jisse ab mujhe lagne laga ki me bhi wahi kar raha hoon jo sabne rudra ke saath kiya lekin jab woh sabhi 6 ke 6 mere saamne apne ghutno pe baith ke mujhse guru dakshina dene ke liye utsah dikha rahe the toh mujhe pata chala ki mene koi astra shastra nahi balki 6 mahan manushyon ko banaya hai

(rudra's pov)

Aacharya :- yahi meri kahani hai jo ki abhi adhuri hai aur use pura tum 6 karoge (mujh se) me chahta hoon tum kewal wahi shaktiyon ka istemaal karoge jo tumhe mere dwara prapt hui hai

Me :- me aapko wachan deta hoon unki barbaadi ke har kan me aapka ansh chalkega

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Aaj ke liye itna hi

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Nice update....
 

dhparikh

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Update 141

Ab meri shiksha ki shuruaat ho gayi thi har din aacharya mujhe mayavi sjaktiyon ke kuch naye taur tarike sikhate aur mere andar ki aniyantrit shakti ko niyantrit karne ke liye bhi mera margdarshan karte toh in dino me meri aur un baki 5 shishyon me bhi maitri ho chuki thi

Mene ab tak unhe kewal itna bataya tha ki me maharaj viraj ka putra hoon aur uske baad mere saath hui har ghatna ke baare me bhi unhe bataya lekin mene abhi tak unhe meri asli pahchaan ke baare me nahi bataya tha

Toh wahi ab meri shiksha ki shuruaat hue 6 mahine ka samay ho gaya tha in 6 mahinon me aacharya yuhan ne mere andar ke mayavi shaktiyon ko ek alag hi star tak badha diya tha unke dwara diya hua gyan mere andar ke urja ko aur bhi jyada badha diya tha

Aage badhne se pahle un 5chon shishyon ka ek short introduction

P) Pruthvik :- kushal dhanurdhar

J) Jwala :- kushal talwaarbaj

N) Neera :- mahan jadugar

B) Bizli :- mahan yodha

V) Vayu :- jadui hathiyaar banane me parangat

In pachon ke naam aacharya ne hi rakhe the inke andar ke tatvon ko pahchaan kar

Ab aage

Is waqt me aur pruthvik gufa ke dusri taraf yudh aabhyas kar rahe the ki tabhi waha par vayu aa gaya

V :- (hum dono se) aacharya ne hum sabko ekatrit hone ka aadesh diya hai jaldi chalo

Uski baat sun kar hum doni bhi uske saath gupah ke andar chal pade jaha aacharya ke saath baki sab bhi maujood the

Aacharya :- mujh se milne se pahle tum sab ki pahchaan jo bhi thi jaisi bhi thi tum sab ne use bhulake apne aap ko mere aur meri shiksha ke adheen kar diya isliye mujhe tum sabhi pr garv hai mere shishyon (kuch soch ke) aaj me tum sabko mere dwara lagaye sare bandhano se mukt karta hu aaj se tum sabhi is duniya me mere shishyon ke roop me alag pahchaan banaoge aaj tum sabki shiksha khatam hui mene tumhe jitna shikhana tha utna shikha diya hai ab tumhe us shiksha ka kaise istemaal karna hai woh tum jano ab se tum aajad ho

Aacharya ki har ek baat sidha hum sabke hrudyon pe prahar kar rahi thi bhale hi mujhe 6 mahine hue the phir bhi mera judaav aacharya aur baki sabhi se ho gaya tha jaha aacharya ko me apne pita ke sthaan par maanta tha toh baki 5chon ko apne bhai bahan ke roop me toh wahi baki 5chon toh bachpan se aacharya ke saath the unke liye ye kisi jhatke se kam nahi tha lekin phir bhi hum sabhi ne ise guru aadesh samajh kar swikaar kar liya

Me :- thik hai aacharya parantu hum abhi tak aajad nahi hue hai guru shishya ke nate ka sabse bada karya shesh hai aap humse humara kartavya aur jag ka sabse bada punya nahi chin sakte

Meri baat sun kar jaha aacharya ke mukh par muskaan cha gayi thi toh wahi baki pachon mujhe shock se dekh rahe the lekin jald hi woh bhi mere kahne ka arth samajh kar mere saath khade ho gaye the

Aacharya :- tum kis punya ki baat kar rahe ho rudra

Me :- har guru ka kartavyw hota hai ki woh apne sabhi shishyon ko ek smaan maan kar unhe shiksha pradaan kare aur har shishya ka kartavya hota hai har guru aadesh bhagwaan ka aadesh samajh kar us par amar kare

Aacharya :- woh tum sab puri nishtha aur mehanat se karte ho

Me :- lekin kisi bhi shishya ka ek kartavya aur hota hai ki apne guru ke dwara diye gaye shiksha ka karj woh guru dakshina dekar utaare aur wahi uske jeevan ka sabse bada kartavya aur punya hai

P :- sahi kaha rudra ne guruvar boliye aadesh dijiye

Me :- (apne ghutno pe baith ke) boliye aacharya aapne hum sab ko shishya banane se pahle hi guru dakshina ke baare me soch liya tha ab batane me kya harz hai

Aacharya :- tumhe kaise pata

Me :- aap jante hai mujhse kuch bhi anjaan nahi hai ab boliye

Mujhe ghutnon par baitha dekh kar baki 5chon bhi apme ghutnon par baith gaye

Sab ek saath :- BOLIYE GURUVAR AADESH DIJIYE

Hum sab ko ek saath aise dekh kar aacharya ke aakhon me khushi ke aasu aa gaye

Aacharya :- agar tum sab yahi chahte ho toh thik hai lekin mujhe guru dakshina dene se pahle sabko mera itihaas janna hoga

Kahani aacharya ke jubani

Me aacharya yuhan is grah se door kruk grah ke ekaki raja ka raj guru aur raj salahakar tha mene use aur uske sare vansh uske sare pariwaar ko mene apni shiksha se apne gyan se sawara apne vidyaon se waha ke har ek shipahi ko puri sena ke saman shaktishali banaya tha apni shaktiyon se uske pure rajya ko nawaja tha

Lekin phir bhi jab mujhe uske madad ki jarurat thi toh usne mujhe bhikari bol ke apni raj sabha aur rajya se nishkashit kar diya aur woh itne pe bhi nahi mana toh usne mujhe maarne ke liye apne sabse shaktishali sipahiyon ko bhej diya lekin woh ye bhul gaya ki unhe yudhkala shikhane wala me hi hoon

Aur isi wajah se mujhe uske grah ko chodke is grah par aa gaya jaha mene apne badle ki aag ko shant karne ke liye yojna banane laga jis liye me yaha waha bhatak raha tha ki tabhi meri nazar ek bache par gayi jo pahle se hi shaktishali tha jise bas sahi shiksha ki jarurat thi jo me use dene laga aur aise hi woh 1 balak ki sankhya ab 5 ki ban gayi thi sab ko mene aisa taiyar kiya tha

Jisse woh akele puri sena par bhari pade aur jab ek saath ho jayenge toh pure grah ko tabah kar sakenge woh 5chon ab mera ghamand ban gaye the jis wajah se ab me apne badle ke liye taiyar tha ki tabhi mere samne rudra aaya

Jisne un 5chon ko ek saath ek pal me hara diya ya yu kahu usne mere ghamand ko hara diya lekin jab mujhe uski asliyat ka pata chala toh mano mujhe bramhastra mil gaya tha uski shakti itni thi ki pure bramhand ko akela tabah kar sakta hai

Lekin uske baad woh 6 mahine jab woh humare saath raha toh in 6 mahino me main apne sabhi shishyon ko apne putra saman samajhne laga tha jisse ab mujhe lagne laga ki me bhi wahi kar raha hoon jo sabne rudra ke saath kiya lekin jab woh sabhi 6 ke 6 mere saamne apne ghutno pe baith ke mujhse guru dakshina dene ke liye utsah dikha rahe the toh mujhe pata chala ki mene koi astra shastra nahi balki 6 mahan manushyon ko banaya hai

(rudra's pov)

Aacharya :- yahi meri kahani hai jo ki abhi adhuri hai aur use pura tum 6 karoge (mujh se) me chahta hoon tum kewal wahi shaktiyon ka istemaal karoge jo tumhe mere dwara prapt hui hai

Me :- me aapko wachan deta hoon unki barbaadi ke har kan me aapka ansh chalkega

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Aaj ke liye itna hi

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Nice update....
 
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