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Fantasy Rudradev pariwar ka rakshak

Abe tak ki kahani aapko kaise lagi dosto

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mashish

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update ..23

wahi delhi se kaffi dur ratan sahar me
ratan singh ke haveli me
ek behad khubsurat ladki apne aalishan bed pe so rhe thi uske chehre pe ek dilkash muskan thi
jo sayad sapne me aapne sapno ke raaj kumar ko he dekh rhe hogi sayad .........

ab aaghe .....

tbe us ladki room me ek bhut khubasurat se mahila aati hai

our bhut he pyaar se soyi huyi ladki ko phele mathe pe fir halke se gaal pe kiss karte huye ladki ko jagati hai

ourat .....good morning meri jaan dekho uth jaao subha ho gayi hai

ladki ek jabardast angdai lete huye
ladki ...good morning my love ummmmm aaah
aapka chehra dekhe bina hamari subha nai na hoti my love my sweet mom

Mom....accha accha hame pya hai ki aapki subha kitni acchi hoti hai

mom....aapki muskaan bta rhe hai ki aapne fir se wohi sapna dekha hai
kyu thik kha na hamne

ladki ..ji mom aapko to ota hai sab kuch ham aapse kuch be to nai chhupate hai aap hamari jaan be ho our sweet se mom kam dost jyada hehehe

mom ...accha gudiya jaldi tyaar ho jaao sab aapka naste pe wait kar rhe hai
ladki ...ok mom ham abe aaye aap chaliye
( galo ko kich kar bhag gai bathroom me)
ladki ki mom puri pagal hai par meri jaan be to hai
meri khushiyo ki chabi meri muskaan meri jaan

( ji ha ladki ka name muskaan hai ..ghar me our friends pyaar se khusi bulate hai inki mom ke siway koi muskaan nai bulata hai )

bahar khusi ki dadi ..maya devi
ek baar fir se intro ho jaye chota sa

ratan singh rathore khusi dada ji
Maya devi khusi dadi maa
raguveer singh (veer ) rathor khusi papa
janvi devi khusi mom ( room me yahi thi khusi ke saath )
) rupali ka vivaah ho chuka hai jab unka roll aayega tab intro de dunga (

muskaan urf khusi janvi rathore ( raghuveer our jangi ke beti )

maya devi ....janvi hamari khusi kha rah gai kya abe be apne sapne ke raaj kumar me khoi huyi hai

janvi ...nai maa wo aa rhe tyaar ho kar ke
maya devi ....veer beta aaj aapko khusi ke saath jana hai
Veer ...kha ja rhe hai khusi maa saa
maya devi ..wo apni kisi dost se milne dusre sahar ja rhe hai ab akeli to jane nai de sakti apni gudiya ko
is leta tum saath me jaao
Veer ...maa saa aaj jana jeuri hai kya meri mitting hai aaj office me jruri
ratan singh ...nai veer aap jaao mitting ham dekh lenge our waise be ab ham delhi sift ho rhe hai to lage hath yaha ke head office ke jo jruri mulajim hai unko be phele he waha bhej kar aaghe ka kaam sambhalne ko bol deta hai

veer ...jaisa aapko thik lage papa

khusi apne dada dadi ke gale lagte huye
khusi ...good morning dadu good morning dadi jaan

idar veer jhuta muh fula leta hai
Khusi....ummmm good morning I love you dad
veer ....good morning my angels I love you too hmmm

Jangi devi ..chalo muskaan nasta kro aapko apni dost se milne jana hai na
aapke papa ja rhe hai aapke saath
khusi ...ok mama
inko yahi chodte hai our chalte hai
delhi rana mension ...
dev ko gaye huye aaj ek din ho chuka tha
mohini devi ne to mano dev ke bina sanse lena be manzur na tha
dev se bichhadne ka sadma laga tha mohini devi ko unhone be bistar pakad liya tha
sabko lag rha tha mohini devi devi thik jaldi he khud ko dev ki judai se bahar nikal legi

sabi rana family member dining tebul pe the mohini ko chod kar kintu kisi ka be dil nai tha nasta karne ka
rani maa...aisa kab tak chalega rudra beta hamko sab ko sambalna padega
agar aap sab udasin rhege to waha pe dev ko be accha nai lagega
aap sabko pata hai na dev ko dur se he pata chal jata hai kon udasin hai our kon khus

divya ...dadi maa ham kya kre hame prince ki bhut yaad aa rhe hai
ham unke bina nai rah sakti hai hai


ye sab abe baat kar he rhe the ki bahar se garud ne guru ji ke aane ki suchna di
rani maa ne ek baar sabko dekha fir chal padi bahar sabke saat
divya...dadi maa kya hamari prince wapis aa gaye hai
komal .nidhi chanchal sheetal sonalika veer sab bahar ki our doud laga dete hai ( unko lga sayad dev wapis aa gaya hai )

kintu sabko nirasha he mili
sab log guru ji ko parnam kiya
divya ..guru ji hamare prince kaha hai kya wo wapis aa gaya hai
guru ji ...nai divya putri aapke prince hamare saath nai aaye hai
wo gurudev ke saath me shiksha gathan kar rhe hai
unko aana abe sambhav nai

rani maa ...guru ji kaise aana sambhav huwa
Guru ji ...maharani ji gurudev ne kuch saman bhijwaya tha wohi dene aaye the ham


Rani maa ...kaisa samaz guru ji
guru ji ...maharani ji our rudrapartap aap hamare saath me aawo
dono guru ji ke saath chal diye baki sab andar

guru ji ...maharani nikat bhavisya me aapki dono putriyon our aapki 5 rajkumariyon pe kuch anisht hone ka khatra hai
aapki 5 potiy our veer ke leya gurudev ne ye oshdi bhejwayi hai jo aap unko har subha dengi utne ke saath me he

( gurudev ne kuch aisiya rani maa ko di apni bagwa jhole se nikal kar )
guru ji ....our ye lejiya swarn ke kade aap inko aapni dono putriyon our nati natin ke leya

guru ji ....maharani ji aap sawayam ye kade un 4 ko phena de ek baar phenne ke baad ye keval our keval dev he nikal sakta hai unke phen te he ye adrisya ho jayege is leya aapko gabrana nai hai

rana ji ...guru ji kya ye sab jruri hai
Guru ji ...ha rana ji ye jruri hai gurudev ke pass divyadrushti hai wo bhavisya me hone wale khatre ko dhyaan me rakh kar he sab kiya hai

fir ek our sisi nikal kar dete huye
Guru ji ...ye lijiye ye aapki bahu mohini devi ke leya hai
is osdi ko aap apni bahu me mathe pe hatho me our pawo me lagana hai har roj

rani maa ..kyu guru ji mohini beti ko kya huwa hai
guru ji ....wo ab tab he thik ho payegi jab dev lout aayega abe wo bistar se nai uth payegi dev ki shayya ke bina

rani ma rana ji our ek our saksh sock se
ye aap kya kah rhe hai guru ji
guru dev ...ye satya hai maharani aap chahe to kisi chikitsak se pta kar sakti hai
Wo dekh our sun payegi likin kuch be karne me asamarth hai

Guru ji ab aaghya de

Sab wapis mension me lout aaye rani maa mohini ke pass chali gai
Dilawar singh ne veer ki karaal art ki trennig chalu karwa di thi

Isi bich sabko
( divya komal chanchal sheetal nidhi ko raat me sapna aata tha jisme me wo sab alag alag jagha yudh kala ki shiksha leti kintu subha ko unko kuch yaad nai rahta tha siway un logo ke badan me ho rhe takawat our dard ka )

rani maa roj aise he sabko wo dawa jo guru ji ne di the pilaati thi jiss se sab ki dard our thakawat dur ho jati thi

samya apni raftar se chalta rha veer ne apne pita se training puri kar li

sab bacchi abe college jane lage the
divya m.b.a our sheetal kar rhe thi
komal medical scince
chanchal computer networkig related
nidhi police force ke leya tyaari karne lagi the

aise he samya bota our dev ka 18 va birthday aane wala tha
dev apni training puri kar chuka tha abe usko intjaar tha apne 18 ve janam din ka jab uski sabi saktiya aa jad ho jayegi our dev divya talwaar ko daran kar payega .
kya dev divya talwaar daran kar payega
kya rudra ki sampurn sakti dev daran kar purna rup se rudradev ban payega ......


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Kalyansurya

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bhai rurda ka bachpan bhi 1 ya 2 update rakna tha to aur acha hota baki apki marji
update is awesome .........................
waiting for next..............................................

Maffi chahta hu bhai first story hai na to etna nai soch paya
Kosis kruga ki flashback aaye tab kuch khubasurat pal dev ke bachpan ke dekha pau
 

Kalyansurya

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First of all congrats bro Kalyansurya
For starting this amazing story.
Concept was good.
Aur ab tak to kahani ka flow bohut hi acha bana huwa hai ab dekhte hai agey jab dev apni shaktiya pakar pori tarah se rudradev banta hai tab kya hota.
Thanks for for beautiful comments bhai intjaar to mujhe be hai rudradev ka
 
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