Fantasy RUDRADIP- The God And Devil
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RD ne geeta ke bare main bhai ko bahut achhe se bataya aur wahan apne manager ko bhi bheja kyoki ab phir se geeta ki company ka ghata nahin hone dena chahta aur is bar RD company ka naam bhi jud gaya to wo dubegi to inka naam ki bhi value giregi lekin dusri bat ye kon sa sakhs aa raha hai jise rd lekar aa raha hai Aur last sonam kya mast lag rahi hai
RD aaj full mood main aa gaya tha lekin ye kya kiss rok liya sonam ne 
jyada hi laja rahi hai 
aur to aur ladkiyon main rahkar apni powers bhi bhula bethi sukra ho rd ne yad dila diya aur sab kuch achhe se handle kese karna hai ye bataya lekin ab jate wakt rd ne uska hath tham liya apna kiss lene ke liye kyoki apna hero koi kam adhura kese chod sakta hai ab sonam pe ye hoga 
aur agar geeta ke tarah yahan bhi kiya to 
Samajh lena 
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Bhai aap updates padhte ho ya robot ki trh copy karte hoIttu Sa Update√ Bhai se baaten ho gayin,
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Shandaar & Awesome
Sabse pehle to Congratulations for 100 pages...
Geeta ke baare me, chalo achchha hai, ki use bhi hero ne set kar diya
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√ Kya hoga jab bhai cheeka se milenge, kyonki jaisa ki aapne bataya tha, chika ka colour blue ya green tha shayad, matlab fully alian lagta hai...
To (Jadu) ko dekhkar bhai ka reaction kaisa hoga?
Ye dekhna baaki hai.
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√ Dialog - "Bhai- waise Rudra Mai Kya kahta hu....
Mai-Mai samaj Gaya Bhai "
Bhai hero to samajh gaya, par apun ke kuchh samajh na aaya, ho sake to plzz reply me samjha dena, varna aage ke update me..
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√ Bhai Jahan tak mujhe yaad hai, sonam to pehle hero ki itni deevani hua karti thi,
ki aisi situations ke bahane dhundha karti thi,
ki kaise vo hero ke kareeb aa jaye,
Or usne ye baat jab bhi kahi thi,
Jab hero ne sonam ko haraya tha,
Tabh sonam ne kaha tha- "Aaj se main aapki patni hun or ab main aapka pichha nahin chhodungi".
To phir ab sonam ko kya ho gaya,
Jo vo itne nakhre kar rahi hai,
Apun ko to sonam par gussa aa raha hai, or last me hero ne jab uska hath pakda to tirchhi nazron se dekh rahi thi... Sonammmmm Teri to
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√ Shayad ab sonam sabke minds ko copy karegi, tabh jakar papa ke sath bussiness karegi.
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√ Bhai aap se ek request hai,
Jo ladki bachpan me R.D se pyaar karti thi, jab hero divya ko pyaar karta tha, tabh us ladki ne R.D ko apne birthday par bulakar proposed kiya tha, or phir uske mom-dad shift ho gaye the, matlab shaher chhod kar chale gaye the,
Uska naam to yaad nahin aa raha,
Par uska charecter mujhe bohot pasand aaya tha, vahi thi, jisne hero ko kiss karna sikhaya tha,
Jo last me hero se ye bolkar gayi thi ki vo hero ko kabhi nahin bhulegi.
Bhai request ye hai ki ek baar usse or milva do..
KEEP POSTING
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KEEP SMILING
Ye starting waali ladki to mind mein door door tak nhi thi
Aapki is review se yaad aaya
U r a brilliant writer
Isme koi shaq nhi
Lekin aap ek brilliant reader bhi h
Or brilliant reviewer bhi
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Bhai aap updates padhte ho ya robot ki trh copy karte ho
Ye starting waali ladki to mind mein door door tak nhi thi
Aapki is review se yaad aaya
U r a brilliant writer
Isme koi shaq nhi
Lekin aap ek brilliant reader bhi h
Or brilliant reviewer bhi
Bas bhai pehle main reader hi tha.. or vo ladki achanak hi yaad aa gayi..
Uska charecter vakai kabil e tareef tha, par uski aakhiri mulakaat bohot zyada Emotional thi... Kasam se us update ko padhkar mere aakhon me aansu aa gaye the . Us wakht...
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Thanks for the admiration dear.