Fantasy RUDRADIP- The God And Devil

[Aj1980]

बहुत ही खूबसूरत अपडेट भाई

 

[Scorpionking]

Fantastic update bhai maza aa gaya anpe hero ki body lockdown kar di . Waiting for next update

 

[Anandlive]

Bhai pura story me kyu timepas karte ho aadha update to ansh se bat karne me he laga diya usse bat thoda short me kiya karo bhai aur waise v update week me 1 dete ho fir se 1 year aur aage le kar jaoge story kya bhai update acha tha fir v bura laga ho to sorry bhai

 

[sorbobhuk]

UPDATE 61

PM- (Us Soldiers ko Ishara karte huye kahte hai) Us Budhe Insan ko lekar aa jao.. wo bhi Adab se....

Soldier-Yes Sir....

Ye kahkar wo Vaha se Chale jata hai us Budhe Insan ko lane ke liye ab Itna Kuch ho raha hai..

Vaha par Wo bhi The Rock ka Naam Lekar To ab Aap sab Jaan hi gaye honge ki....

Kon aa gaya hoga Vaha par wo bhi ek Budhe Insan kr Bhesh me The Rock ka Naam Lete huye..........................................

AGE.................



Wo Soldier ek Budhe Insan ko Apne sath lekar aa gaya... Aur ye kya wo Budha to Ek lathi ke sahare chal raha tha...

Wo Budha aisa chal raha tha jaise wo bahut hi taqad lagakar Chalne ki koshish kar raha hai....

Uske Hath aur uski Body chalte huye thodi thodi hil rahi thi...

Jaise har ek Budhhe ki hoti hai... Wo budhe ke ate hi Usko ek Chair de di baithne ke liye aur wo us Chair par baith gaya...

Vaha par Baithe sab Officers aise dekhne lage ki Unko vakayi me Shak hone laga ki Yaar ye The Rock ka koi Aadmi kaise ho sakta hai...

Itna Budha... Jo khud lathi ke sahare chal raha hai... Wo kya kisi aur ke liye kaam karega...

Wo sabhi use bahut ghur ghur se dekh rahe the Tabhi hamare President Bolte hai...

President- Ji Apka Naam kya hai Aur Aap yaha par Kyu aye hai...

Ab Aap sabko Pata hi hai To mai direct mudde par ata hu...

Mai- (Budhe ki Abaj me) Sir Naam me Kya rakha hai aur rahi Kaam ki baat to Ji mai Aap sabse Bahut hi Mahatvpurn baat karne aya hu...

President- Thik hai To Phir Kaam batao Aapko kya kaam hai Hum sabse...

Mai- Sir actually kya hai na Wo jo The Rock hai na usne Aaj Tak Logo ke bhalayi ke liye bahut se kaam kiye hai..

Par kya hai na Kuch Rishwat khor uske raste me aa hi jate hai.. aur bana banaya huva Kaam bigad dete hai...

Ye har samay hota aa raha hai... Aur sath hi uske naam ka gair fayda bhi wo sab Utha rahe hai..

ki Wo Don hai aur Underworld Ka koi Hai... Drugs bechta hai ladkiya supplykarta hai wo ye karta hai wo karta hai....

Na jane aise kitni Afwaye uske bare me phaili huyi hai is India me..Jo bhi Aap sabne suna hai wo sab Jhuth hai...

aur wo sach me India ko Help kar raha hai Progress karne ke liye...

President- Ye baat hum kaise maan le ki wo Sach me yahi Karta hai aur Baki log uska Fayda uthate hai..

Mai-Ye Mai Proof kar sakta hu Sir Par...

President- Par kya?

Mai- Uski Kuch Khwahishe hai jo wo Pura karna chahata hai To sabse pahle Aapko wo Pura karna hoga

President- The Rock kya Chahata hai humse Abhi ye Batao...

Mai-Wo chahata hai ki ye Jo The Rock hai Wo Illigal se ab Legal ho jaye... Aur uske raste me kisi bhi tarah ki Phir wo kaisi bhi Kyu na ho Problem na Aye...

Ye baat sunte hi vaha par Baithe sab Officers hasne lagte hai Kyu ki Sach me us Budhe ne matlab maine baat hi aise ki thi unko hasi ani hi chahiye... Par wo sach bhi to tha...

President- kya... Aur Us The Rock ko aisa kyu lag raha hai hi Hum use Legal bana denge. Aur usko koi rokega bhi nahi...

Mai-Kyu ki Wo Kuch aisa kar sakta hai Jo Aap sab nahi kar sakte aur nahi Aap use Kabhi soch sakte ho.. aur nahi aap Us Soch ke karib bhi Ja sakte ho...

Balki agar sach Bolu to The Rock ko yaha and ki koi Jarurat hi nahi tha wo Apna Kaam khud hi kar leta Bina Apke samne aye aur aur Law Todte huye...

Aur aap usko Kabhi bhi matlab kabhi bhi Touch bhi nahi kar pate uske marji ke Khilaf...

Par kya hai na wo chahata hai ki Ye Jo kar raha hai Crime se ladna aur Criminal se ladna isme ache logo ki Jaan ko kuch nahi hona chahiye...

Aur inme Agar wo kuch kare to usme India Government ka Bhi haath ho kyu ki Unka bhi Vahi kaam hai Jo wo kar raha hai...

Par India Government ki bhi na ek Boundary hai unko ye sab Apni had me rahkar karna padta hai...

Ab us Tarah ke Example dene ki jarurat nahi hai mujhe Kyu ki Aap sab us baat ko jante bhi ho aur pahchante bhi ho....

Aur rahi The Rock ki baat To uska Koi Rule nahi hai Koi Boundary nahi hai Bas Galat mat karna aur Galat mat sahna...

Aur isiliye wo aisa chahata hai Ki wo sab Aap sabke sath Milkar kare...

Isse Jyada Mai kuch aur nahi kahna chahata baki Aap sab Log Khud samajdar ho...

Aur nahi ho to Yaha par Baithkar Aap sab Desh ko Chala nahi rahe hote...

Meri baat sunte hi vaha par ek Officer apni Jagah se gusse se khade hokar kahta hai...

Police Officer-Ye kya Battamizzi hai.. Ye to hamara Badnami ho rahi hai yaha par...

Agar hum chahe Na to us The Rock ko chutkiyo me masal sakte hai. Aur usko Jail me dalkar maar bhi sakte hai Pata hai...

Aur Hamari Sarkar Sab tarah ke Criminals aur Crimes se ladne ko Hamesha Ready rahti hai aur isme hum kisi ki Madad lena jaruri nahi samajhte...

Mujhe uski bacho jaisi Baat par hasi aa gayi thi to mai uske karara jawab par aram se sawal karte huye kaha...

Mai-Aisa hai to Phir aaj tak Aap sab usko kyu nahi pakad paye... Sirf usko hi nahi baki sab Criminals ko bhi...

Yahi to mai kah raha hu ki yahi par Aakar apki soch khatam ho jati hai. Aur uski Soch to yahi se Start ho jati hai...

President us Officer ko Shant karte huye baithne ko kahte hai aur Phir wo kahne lagte hai...

President- Thik hai Tum ye kah rahe ho to Sabit karke dikhao ki Hum Tumhe Legal kyu kare...

Aur use Wo sab Adhikar Kyu de jo wo Chahata hai aur sabse badi baat yaha par Baithne ki Post kyu de de...

Mai- pahli baat use Yaha par apke sath Baithkar Meeting karne ki Jarurat nahi hai... wo Apka Kaam hai wo Khud kar liya kijiye...

Aur rahi Dusri baat Sabit karne ki To Aapke Jitne bhi Soldiers hai Phir Chahe wo is India me har ek Divison ke bhi Kyu na ho....

Unke Andar chahe kitna bhi Hunar kyu na ho Phir chahe wo Power ka ho Technology ka ho aur Weapons Handling ka ho...

Ya Phir aur konse bhi Chij ka Kyu na ho ye Sab Uske Samne Fika hai Fika...

Iska Matlab Apke Divison ke sabse Behatarin aur Kabil Soldiers The Rock ke samne kuch bhi nahi suna Aap logo ne Kuch bhi nahi....

Aur Rahi tisri baat to wo waqt ane par...

Meri Baat sunkar to sab Pal bhar ke liye shant baithe rahe jaise pindrop Silence

Par dusre hi Pal wo sab Apna Pet pakadkar hasne lage sath me Apne President aur PM ke cheharo par bhi hasi aa gayi thi...

Par wo hasi Jyada der tikne wali nahi hai ye unko nahi pata tha...

Tabhi Phir se ek Officer kahta hai

Officer- The Rock Itna Bada Shatir Khiladi hai to Phir Ek Budhhe ke Piche Chupke kyu Baitha hai Samne Kyu nahi ata...

Agar Tum Jaisa kah rahe ho waisa hota to Tumhe Nahi Bhejta balki wo Khud aa jata...

Mai Apni Jagah se uthte huye normal tune me kahta hu...

Mai- Kon Bola ki The Rock nahi aya aur wo ek Budhe ke piche chupke baitha hai Balki mai Khud hi The Rock hu ab Boliye...

Ye sunte hi Vaha Par jitne bhi the Sab Shock ho gaye the... Puri tarah se Shock...

Par abhi bhi unme kuch himmat baki thi wo isliye kyu ki Maine abhi Tak Us Budhe ki Acting nahi chodi thi...

Balki abhi bhi mai Us 80 Saal ke budhe ki Tarah hi Baatein kar raha tha aur uni ke Tarah Chaldhal kar raha tha...

Phir wo Police Officer Kahta hai...

Officer- Aisa hai to Phir ho Jaye ek Muqabla... India ke har Divison me bahut se Intelligent aur Kabil Soldiers hai...

Aur Sath hi me wo sab Shatir aur ladayi me Mahir bhi hai...

To unme se Abhi Hamare sath Kuch aye huye hai To kya Tum unse ladkar Apne Aap ko Proof kara sakte ho...

Aur Phir hume batao ki Tum hi The Rock hu aur Hoshiyaar aur Taqadwar bhi...

Hume dikhao ki Tum sach me Legal hone ki Kabil ho Uske baad hi Hum kuch Soch payenge...

Ye Sunte hi President Bolte hai...

President- Nahi aisa Kuch nahi hoga yaha par... Are Aap Log us Budhe ki Halat to dekho...

Aap logo ko lagta hai Ki wo un sab Jabanj Soldiers se ladh payega...

Mai-Koi baat nahi Sir .. Aap wo mat sochiye. Aap us baat ka tension mat lijiye..

Aap to ye Sochiye ki ye Jo Aapke Jabanj Soldiers hai kya wo mujhse ladh payenge...


Ye baat Sunkar to vaha par Jitne bhi Officers the unke sath sath President aur PM ke Ego ko Bahut thes Pahuchi...

Aur ab to unko Apna Abhimaan bachana tha to Apne PM kahne lage...

PM-Thik hai Jaisa Tum Chaho... Tum agar Apne Maut ko Dawat hi de rahe hai to hum kon hote hai is rokne wale...

(Apne Sabhi Officers ki Aur dekhte huye) Hamare har ek Divison me se 5 Sabse Kabil aur inteligent Soldiers ko Yaha par Bulao....

Waise us Meeting Hall me kuch Aur bhi Space tha... To Jaise hi PM ne Order de diya Sab Divison me se 5-5 Soldiers aa gaye Aur mere Samne khade ho gaye...

Aur Phir mai Apni Lathi ke Sahare chalte huye Dusri Taraf khada ho gaya... Ye Scene dekhkar President kahte hai...

President- Sabse Pahle Har ek Divison ka 5th Rank wala Hi usse Ladega baki ke piche ho jao... Aur ha Jaan se mat marna bas Ghayal karna hai...

Uske Baad baki ke Piche hat gaye aur Ab mere Samne takriban 25 ke Najdik Soldiers the...

Waise Unhe sambhalna Mere Baye pair Ka Kaam tha... Par mai Apna Khel bigadna nahi chahata tha. Aur sath hi Apna Maja kirkira nahi karna chahata tha

Isliye mai Apne Lathi ke sahare waise hi Vibrate hoye huye khada raha...

Wo Sabhi Officers aur sab Log Jitne bhi vaha par the wo Sab Ye Scene dekhne ke liye bahut hi Betab the ki Age kya hone wala hai...

Waise un Soldiers ko ye bhi Pata nahi tha ki Mai kon hu aur Mujhse lada kyu ja raha hai..

bas unko Yahi Orders mile the ki Age wale budhe ko Ghayal karna hai wo bhi 1-2 mukke me hi... Wo bhi jyada Jor se na Marte huye....

Aur Tabhi ek Soldier Mere Samne aya Aur Achanak se Pata nahi kya huva Mujhe Na mera Hath hila aur nahi mera Pair utha....

Aur nahi mai Apni Jagah se hil paya... Ek tarah se kaha jaye to Lakwa marna mai Jaha khada tha jis Halat me khada tha waisa hi khada rah gaya...

aur tabhi Us Age wale Soldier ne Bahut hi Jor se mere muh par Mukka maar diya....

Aur us Mukke se mai 5--6 Feet piche jakar Gir gaya aur wo bhi Bahut buri halat me...

Mere Muh se Khun bhi nikal raha tha... Par ye Huva kaise yaar...

Mujhe wo Soldier jab maar raha tha tab Mujhe sab Slow motion me dikh raha tha...

par na Jane kyu mai use chahakar bhi rok nahi paya aur mai Aone Hath pair hila nahi paya...

mujhe khud hi samaj me nahi aya ki aisa Kyu huva... Aur sath hi Muh se Khun bhi....

Aur mai Us Jagah Pada raha.. Mujhe pata nahi Kyu par Dard bhi bahut ho raha tha...

Jaise Mera Pura Jabda hi hil gaya ho par ye kaise ho sakta hai yaar...

Aur ye Scene dekhkar jo bhi us Meeting hall me baithe the sab Hasne lage...

Meri Is Halat ko dekhkar... Tabhi wo IPS Officer Kahta hai...

Officer- Kya huva The Rock ko Hamare In sare Soldiers ko dekhkar Tumhari sari Taqad chali gayi hai kya... Sari hawa phhhhusssssss.... Banke ud Gayi...

Are Tumne to abhi hamare ek Soldier ka Sirf ek hi mukka khaya hai aur Tumhari ye Halat ho gayi...

Aur kya kah rahe the Tum... Tum aise ho Waise ho Tum hi The Rock ho..

Ab To tumhe bhi yaad aa gaya hoga Ki Tum kon ho jo koi bhi ho par hamare Samne kuch bhi nahi ho...

Ye kahkar wo Officer hasne laga aur Sath me Baki sab Officers bhi... Tabhi President kahte hai...

President- Koi jarurat nahi hai Ab ye Fight karne ki... Jo proof hona tha wo Ho gaya ab us Budhe ko yaha se lekar chale jao...

Un Officers ki Hasi Sunkar mujhe bahut hi Ajib lag raha tha balki mai To Un sabko Abaj bhi nahi sun pa raha tha...

Mera Dimag Sunnn... padh gaya tha Mai apne hi soch me gum tha ki aise kaise ho sakta hai...

Tabhi un Logo ke sath aur ek Hasi mujhe sunayi di jo kuch jani pahchani si lagi..

Us hasi ko pahchante hi Mujhe Sab yaad aa gaya aur mai sab Samaj gaya ki Mere Sath aisa kaise ho sakta hai...

Ab wo Abaj yani Apna B Ansh Apni Kamini Hasi Haste huye kahta hai...

B Ansh-(Haste huye) Kya huva be... Nikal gayi Teri sab hekdi... The Rock Sale Buddhhee...

Tune Aaj mujhse Itni Pyari Chut chin li.. To uska Badla lete huye maine to bas Tere Itne bade Power me se Chota sa Hissa Lockdown kar diya.. Ab Maja aya na Tere ko...

Ye kahkar wo Phir se hasne laga... Aur phir kahta hai...

B Ansh-Dekh liya na Meri baat na Manane ka result... Ab age se Tu meri baat ko talne ke liye 1000 baar sochega

Uski ye Baat sunkar mujhe To us par pahle to bahut Gussa aya par Sala Gussa Nikalu kispe..

ye sala to Khud mai hi hu na...Dusra koi hota to usko maar bhi deta...par ye Isse mujhe sulah karni hi padegi...

Mai-(Man me) Are Bhai Mujhe Maaf kar de Yaar... Mai age se Aisa kabhi nahi karunga...

Tu Jo kahe ya Jo karne ko kahevahi karunga aur Rahi Aaj ki Baat To maine Tujhe kal lene ko Kaha tha na uski. To Phir tune aisa kyu kiya ...

B Ansh- Kyu kiya matlab... Tune tera Wada Toda mujhse kiya huva to Us baat ki Tujhe koi na koi Saja to milni hi chahiye na...

Varna tu sudhrega nahi.. aur Phir se aisi Galtiya karta hi rahega... Isliye Tujhe Punish karna jaruri tha...

Mai-Mujhe Maaf kar de mere bhai... Agar tera punish karna ho gaya ho To kya Please hum jis kaam ke liye aye the use kare...

B Ansh-(Haste huye) Teri Saja Abhi tak Puri nahi huyi hai samje...

Mai-Are mere Bhai... Mujhe maaf kar de yaar Tujhe Baad me jo saja deni hai de de par abhi ke liye To tu mera Sath de de Please.....

B Ansh- Acha chal thik hai Abhi ke liye Tujhe maaf kar deta hu... Par dobara agar kabhi bhi aisi Galti ki na To Yaad rakhna...

Mai Kya karunga aur kya karwaunga Jo Tu kabhi soch bhi nahi Payega...

Mai- Ha Thik hai mere Bhai Ok Done...

B Ansh-Done Dana Done...To Uth Aisa kyu Baitha huva hai...

Mai- Sale Pahle niche girata hai aur Phir puchta hai ki Aisa niche kyu baitha hai...

B Ansh- Ha chal Ab Uth Aur Ladh inse Mere Sher... Apne Ijjat ka Sawal hai...

Uth Sale Uth...Pahle is Mukke wale ko maar Bahut tej se mara tha sale ne Abhi bhi Dard ho raha hai...waise Tera Dard Mera jo hai...

Mai-Ha Jab Wo hume maar raha tha tab Tujhe Apni Ijjat ki Nahi padi thi jo abhi Soch raha hai...

Tab to Tu So gaya tha Na mujhe Bandhkar...

B Ansh-(Apni Kamini Hasi Haste huye) hihihi....Kya karu Ab mai Kamina jo hu wo bhi Aisa Waisa nahi Pura ka Pura D.........

Wo sab Chod Ab uthta hai Ya Phir se mai vahi Kar du...


Mai- (Uthne ki Koshish karte huye) Koi jarurat nahi Mai Uth leta hu Bhai...

Ab mai Uthte huye President se kahta hu....

Mai- Koi baat nahi hai Sir... I am Ready.. Mai to bas Aapke in Soldiers ki Powers ko dekh raha tha ki Aakhir inme kitna Dum hai... Jo mujhme Ladhne Ka Himmat rakhta hai....

Lekin (Na karte huye) Aahhaammmm... Kuch bhi nahi hai inme...Chalo ab Apni Puri Taqad se Aa jao Dekhte hai..

B Ansh- Chal Jhutha.... Sale Aisa kah raha hai ki Tune ye Sab Jaan bujkar kiya Abe Chuchiye Mera Naam le Mera.....Waise Mera Naam kya hai......

Mai-(Man me) Tu Kuch der ke Liye Shant nahi baith sakta hai kya? Mera Mind Divert mat kar kaam karne de mujhe Disturb mat kar abhi mujhe...

Ab mai Apni Baat un sab se Continue karte huye kahta hu ki...............................

(Agla Update jald hi.....)

bahut badhiya update.... rudra ne buddhe ke bhesh liya or sab uspe hash raha hai....or challenge bhi kiya president agree ho geya or soldier ko ladne ke kaha....liken ye kya hua B Ansh to mind block kar diya rudra ka....ab usse faysala ho geya hai ab dekhte hai kya hota hai.. or B Ansh ne shayed ye bolne wala tha ki main puri ki pury kamina hu bilkul D se mujhe lagta hai Devil kehna chahta tha...waise agla update kab aayeha

 

[Arjun Singh 72]

Awesome update
B ansh bhi Kamal ka h
Keep posting

 

[Kashif.143]

MEGA UPDATE 49

Maine usko Bahut Joro se Hug Kiya huva tha.. Usko Apni Baho me lekar mere dil ki Ek Alag hi Sukun aa raha tha...

Aur Tabhi Phir se usi Samay mere Dil me aur ek Dard mahush huva mere sine me...

Ye Dard bhi utna hi Tej tha jitna ki Pahle ka Tha par Ditya ne Mujhe Gale lagaya huva tha...

Isliye mujhe itna Jyada Dard nahi huva jitna Pahli Baar huva tha bas us Dard ii Feeling huyi Mujhe aur ek Ahat si lagi mere Dil me...

Ab ye Kaisa Dard hai ye to Jald se jald dekhna hi hoga mujhe...

Usse pahle Koi anhoni na ho Jaye... Mai yahi Sab Ditya ko Gale lagaye soch Raha tha............................................

AGE............................


Idhar Dharti par Usi Jungle me to Mahol ab aur bhi Bahut Bhayanak aur Dardnaak ho Gaya tha...

Par Hum chalte hai usse Pahle jaha par wo Aghori Tantrik Ritika ke Sab Powers Chinne ke Baad Sonam aur Rasika ke pass ja raha tha...

Wo Aghori un Dono ke Samne Jakar Khada ho Gaya..

Aur Un Dono Sundariyo ko Apni hawasi Najar se Takne laga...

Aghori- (Khush Hote huye) Wahhh.... Kya Roop diya hai in Dono ko...Sach me agar inki mujhe Jarurat nahi hoti to Mai in Dono ko Apni rakhail bana Deta...

In Dono ko hi Kya (Ritika ki Taraf dekhte huye) Use bhi.. par Mujhe Abhi usse bhi Bahut Jaruri kuch kaam hai uske Baad Tum Sab ko Dekh lenge...

Ye kahkar wo Aghori Tantrik bahut hi Jor jor se Hasne laga...usi ke tarah hi uski Hasi bhi Bahut hi Khatarnaak thi..

Jo us Jungle me rahte Dusre Janwaro ko bhi Darakar rak deti thi...

Tabhi us Tantrik ne Apne right hath me kuch Bhasm liya aur Kuch Mantra Padhne laga...

aur uske Baad wo Bhasm usne Rasika aur Sonam ke body par Phek Diya...

Wo Bhasm Unke Body par padte hi wo Dono Hosh me aa gayi.. waise unhone Sab dekha to tha...

par Wo Dono kuch samaj nahi pa rahi thi Par jaise hi un Dono ki Chetana Wapas aa gayi..

waise hi wo Dono Samaj gayi ki Us Aghori Tantrik ne Unki Ritika Di ke Sath Kya Kiya hai...

Iski bajah se wo Dono bhi Bahut Krodhit ho gayi thi us Tantrik par..Aur Usi Gusse me Sonam kahne lagi...

Sonam-(Gusse me) Kamine Tantrik Tune Hamare Ritu Di ke Sath ye Kar Acha kaam nahi kiya..

Ab Hum Dono Tumhe nahi chodenge jalakar Rakh Kar denge Tujhe.. Maut se bhi Badtar Halat ho jayegi Teri...

Rasika-(Gusse se) Tujhe Kya Laga Tu Humhe Wash me Kar ke Kuch Bhi Kar sakta hai..

Par ye Teri Sabse Badi Bhul hai..Tu Hume chu bhi nahi Sakta..

Kyu ki Jab bhi Tune Hume Chune ki Koshish kari To Tera Kaal Tere Samne aa Jayega Samaj Gaya..

Aur Mai ek Jin hu Jo Chahe Kar sakti hu..Aur tu Ab mere Hatho se Bach nahi sakta...

Itna Kahkar wo Dono bhi Us Tantrik ki Taraf ane lagi.. Par ye Kya wo Dono to Apni Jagah se Hil bhi nahi pa rahi thi..

Hil Kya wo Dono to Apne Body ka Ek bhi Part Move nahi Kar Pa rahi thi...

Aur ye Dekhkar wo Tantrik to bahut Jor jor se Hasne lagta hai aur haste huye...

Apne Shishya ki Taraf dekhte huye kuch Ishara karta hai. Ye vahi Shishya the Jo Kuch Ajib tarah ka Sangit aur Mantra Padhkar Yagya me Ahuti de rahe the...

Aghori ka Ishara Pate hi uske Sare Shishya ne Apna Sangit Bajane ka aur Mantra Padhkar Ahuti dene ke Karya ko Tivra Gati se badhate hai..

Matlab wo Ab aur Jor jor se aur Bahut hi Speed se Apna Karya Kar rahe the...

Par uska Asar ye huva ki Rasika aur Sonam Dono Apna hosh Phir se khone lage...

aur unke Madhuri Sangit aur Us Mantra Shakti me Wo Dono wash hone lagi...

par Phir bhi wo Dono Apne Aap ko sambhalte ja rahi thi...

Aghori-(Jor jor se haste huye) Tum Dono Apne Aap ko Apni Jagah se Hil bhi nahi pa rahi ho aur Chali ho mujhse Ladhne...

Kuch bhi Kaho Tum dono me Himmat Bahut hai Par Kya Kare Jyada der tak nahi...

Kyu ki Tumhare is(Ritu ki taraf ishara karte huye) Budhi ki Tarah hi Tum Dono ka bhi Mai vahi Hasra karunga...

Ye kahkar wo Phir Se Apne Kamini hasi Hasne laga aur ye Dekhkar wo Dono Bahut hi Gusse me aa gayi..

waise wo Apni Jagah se Hil to nahi sakti Par Apni Shaktiya to Use Kar sakti hai Isliye unhone vahi Rasta Apnaya...

Sonam-( Gusse se) Kamine Tantrik ye Dekh.....

Ye kahkar Sonam ne Apne Muh se ek Bahut hi Badi Aag us Tantrik ke upar Phek di..

Ek Dragon ke Muh se Nikli Aag bahut hi Bhayanak aur Khatarnaak hoti hai..

Usse Na jalne wali Chij bhi Aise jal jati hai jaise kuch ho hi na....

Aur Sonam ke Muh se Aag nikalte hi Rasika ne bhi Apne Ankho se Bahut se Tir nikale Jo sidha Jakar Aghori ki Taraf Jane lage...

Waise us Aghori ne Aag ko to Dekh liya tha Par uske Piche nikle Tir kaman ko nahi..

Isliye wo Apni Shaktiyo se Sonam ki Aag ko to rokne me Safal ho Gaya..

Par Uske Piche se nikalte Agni me Jalkar aur bhi khunkhar huye Tir ko nahi..

aur wo Tir jakar sidha uske Body par upar se niche tak lage...

Us Aag se Tapte huye aur us Aag me lipte huye Tir Jakar sidha uske Hath aur Pet,Chati Pair Sabhi Jagah par lage...

Us Tir lagne ke Karan wo bahut hi Jor jor se Dard ke mare chillane laga..

Kyu ki Sach me Wo In Tiro ke liye Tayar hi nahi tha.. Par akhir wo bhi ek Aghori Tantrik hi tha na...

Aur upar se use Ritu ki Sari Taqade Jo hasil ho gayi thi.. isiliye wo Apne Aap ko healing karne me Safal ho Gaya...

Use wo Dard Jyada der sahan nahi karna pada. Kyu ki Usne Apne Body ko is Tarah Garam Kiya...

Apne Andar ki Heat ko usne Bahar laya ki wo Sabhi Tir usme Jalkar Pighal Gaye aur kahi Gayab hi ho Gaye...

Aur uski Body bhi Pahle Jaisi ho gayi.. Jaha par pahle us Tantrik ka Aisa Haal Dekhkar...

Rasika aur Sonam Hasne lagi thi aur Haste huye kah bhi rahi thi...

Rasika-Dekha na Humse Panga lene ka Hasra..ye to Chota sa Namuna hai Abhi nahi Ruka to bahut kuch Hoga Tere....

Par iske Age wo kuch bol hi nahi Payi Kyu ki Tabhi us Tantrik ne Apne Aap ko Thik Kar Diya tha...

ye Dekhkar to wo Dono dar to nahi gayi par kuch Shock Jarur huyi thi...

Ab Hasne ki Bari Phir se Tantrik ki thi aur Upar se wo Dono Apna hosh bhi khote ja rahi thi...

Aghori- Kya kah rahi thi Tum Dono. Mujhe haraogi Par Pahle Apne Aap ko To bachke dikhao..

Ye kahkar wo Phir se Hasne laga par is Baar bahut hi Gusse se un Dono se kahne laga...

Aghori- Par ab Bas... Bahut huva ye Khel ab waqt najdik aa Gaya hai Wo Dekho amawashya bhi Shuru ho chuki hai...

Tum Dono ki Bali dekar Mai Saitan ko Khush karunga. Par usse pahle Mai Tum Dono ki Sari Taqade chin lunga..

Jiski bajah se Mai aur bhi Balshali aur ShaktiShali Bhagwan ban Jaunga...

Par Tumhari Sari Shakti lene ke Baad bhi Mai Sirf ek Chij Tumhare Andar Rahne dunga...

aur wo hai Tumhara ye Apratim aur Dil ko moh lene Wala Saundarya..

Kyu ki iske bagair to mujhe Age ka karya karne me Bilkul bhi Maja nahi ayega aur Mera Sara Maja Kirkira ho Jayega...

Ye kahkar wo Phir se Hasne laga Par is Baar ki uski Hasi Dekhkar Sach me Wo Dono bhi Dar gayi thi..

Kyu ki usne kaha hi Kuch Aisa tha aur unhone ye Sab Pahle dekha bhi tha Unke Ritu Di ke Sath...

Isliye Unhe ab pata chal Gaya tha ki Sach me Aghori Tantrik bahut hi Jyada Khatarnaak aur ShaktiShali ho Gaya hai...

Wo Dono to uska kuch bhi nahi Kar nahi sakte..Aur ab unka bhi Vahi Hasra hone Wala hai..

Par wo Dono Ant Tak Apni Himmat nahi harne wali thi.. Yahi to Unhone RD se sikha tha..

Tabhi Phir se us Tantrik ne Apne hath me Ek Bhasm liya aur Kuch Mantra Padhne laga...

aur wo Bhasm un Dono ke Body par Phek Diya aur Ankhe band Kar Apne Dono Hath phailaye vahi Par Khada Raha...

Aur ye Kya vahi par ek Bahut hi Badi Roshni chamakane lagi..

Aur wo Roshni kahi aur ki Nahi Rasika aur Sonam ke Body ke Andar ki Thi..

Unke Body me se nikalti Roshni sidha Jakar us Aghori Tantrik ke Andar ghus rahi thi..

Aise Kuch hi der me Wo Sari Roshni us Tantrik ke andar Jane ke Baad hi wo Roshni Kam hone lagi aur ab Sab Pahle ki Tarah Hi Normal ho Gaya...

Lekin is waqt Ek Chij vaha Par Normal nahi thi wo hai Vaha ka Najara...

Kyu ki wo Najara ab kuchAlag hi Dikh Raha tha. Jaha par Rasika aur Sonam Apne Adhe Jin aur Adhe Dragon ke Roop me khadi thi...

To vahi par Ab ek Normal Ladkiyo ki Tarah hi Khadi thi Lekin ha ek baat aur ho gayi thi...

Vaha par Unke Sundarta ko Hath bhi nahi laga tha wo Pahle ki Tarah Attractive aur Sundar thi...

RASIKA

Ha Par ek Baat thi Unki Shaktiya Jane ki Bajah se unka Tej Pahle Jitna nahi tha wo usse ab Bahut Kam ho Gaya tha...

SONAM

Bas Unke Tej Jane ki Bajah se wo Dono Pahle se kuch Kam Sundar Dikh rahi thi...

Waise un Dono ki Jab Shaktiya Ja rahi thi Tab un Dono ko Dard to bahut ho raha tha..

aur wo Dard se Tilmilakar Chilla bhi rahi thi Jaise kuch der pahle Ritika Chilla rahi thi..

Par vaha par Unki ye Chikhe sunne Wala koi bhi nahi tha...

Aur yahi wo Samay tha Yahi wo Dard tha Jo RD ko mahsus huva tha Jab Usne Ditya ko Gale lagaya huva tha...

aur Kuch soch Raha tha.. isi Dard ke bajah se Uske Dil me bhi ek Tej Dard ho raha tha...

Kyu ki un Sab ka RD se Dil hi Dil ka Rishta Jo ho gaya tha.. Par ye baat Abhi Tak RD ko Shayad Pata nahi Chali thi...

Wo Sab RD se ek ho Gaye the Matlab RD ki Jaan me inki Jaan basti hai aisa kahna Galat nahi hoga...

Par vaha Ditya ke Gale lagne ki bajah se use ye Dard utna Mahsus nahi huva tha...

Jitna Pahle huva tha ab iska Karan Kya hai Wo to Maine Apko Bata Diya hai.. bas Ab age chalte hai ..

Yaha par wo Aghori ek Jinn aur Ek Dragon ki Shaktiya Pakar Bahut hi ShaktiShali aur Khatarnaak ho Gaya tha...

Uska in Shaktiyo ke Karan Uska Roop bhi Puri Tarah se Change ho Gaya tha...

aur wo ek haiwaniyat ke Roop me ek Saitan ki Tarah Unke Samne Khada ho Gaya tha...

Dragon ki Shakti pane ki bajah se uska Roop kuch kuch Dragon ki Tarah hi Dikh Raha tha Par jinn ki Taqade to use Andar se mil gayi thi...

Aur Yaha Rasika aur Sonam ki Taqad Jane ki Bajah se wo Dono kuch der ke liye Behosh ho gayi thi..

Kyu ki Unki Shaktiya Jane ki Bajah se unhe Bahut kamjori feel ho rahi thi...

Vahi Wo Aghori Ab is mile huye Naye Shakti se Bahut hi Khush ho raha tha..

usne isi Khushi me Apne Dono Par Jo Dragon ki Shaktiyo se mile huye the wo Phalilaye huye the..

Aur Apne Muh se Aag nikalte huye wo Charo aur ke Ped Jala raha tha...

Un Ped ki Aag ki bajah se vaha Par ab Sab bahut hibSaaf Dikhayi de Raha tha...

Usne Apni Taqad ajmane ke liye vaha Par bahut kuch kiya.. Jiski bajah se wo Jagah Charo aur se Jal Kal Khak ho gayi thi..

Dharti bich me se Phat gayi thi.. Aur Bahut kuch Ho Gaya tha Vaha par Jo shabdo me Baya karna Asambhav lag raha hai Mujhe...

Aur ek baat ho gayi thi Jab us Aghori Tantrik ne Rasika aur Sonam ki Shakti le li thi..

uske baad wo Tantrik kuch Young Dikh Raha tha Tha Jaise Kuch 40 ke Karib...

Uske Baad wo Itna Khush huva ki usne Apne Shaktiyo ki madad se vaha par...

Karib Dus Hazar ke Karib Sena Khadi Kar di. Kyu ki agar uske is age ke Karya me agar koi aye...

to ye Sab use Maar Dale aur uska Ye Karya Badi Asani se hi Pura ho jaye...

Ye Sab karte huye wo Bahut hi Khush ho Gaya tha aur Ab Akhir wo Waqt aa hi Gaya...

jab wo Aghori Rasika aur Sonam ki Bali dekar Saitan ko Khush karna chahata tha..

aur wo bhi aisi waisi Bali nahi jaise Pahle Di thi Thik waise hi Ab ye to Apko Pata hi hai na....

Ye Sab hone Tak Rasika aur Sonam Dono ko hosh to AA Gaya tha Par wo Kuch Nahi pa rahi thi..

Kyu ki Aghori Tantrik ne Apni Shaktiyo se unhe Abhi bhi Hilne nahi de raha tha Matlab wo Apna Hath pair Sir kuch bhi nahi hila pa rahi thi...

Aur Ritika ki to Aisi Halat ho gayi thi ki wo Chahakar bhi kuch nahi Kar Pa rahi thi..

Bas Jo ha raha hai Wo Bas bebas hokar Dekh rahi thi...

Tantrik- Chalo Ab waqt Aa Gaya hai (Jor se Chillate huye) Kantra.... Un do Ladkiyo ko mere Samne Lao aur unhe Jald se Jald Mere Samne Nanga Karo..

Ab Mai bhi Un Dono ki Khubsurati Dekhkar niyantran nahi kar pa raha hu...

Itna Sunte hi Kantra Rasika aur Sonam ki taraf Apni Kamini hasi haste huye ja raha tha...

Kyu ki use Apne Malik Apne Guru ki bajah se un Do Dragon Rajkumari aur Jinn Rajkumari ko Nanga karne ka aur unhe aisi Halat me dekhne ka awasar Jo Prapt huva tha...

Kantra ko Apne Pass aata Dekh Chilla to wo dono rahi thi ki Aisa Mat Karo.. unhe Nanga mat Karo.. Unki Ijjat mat Utaro...

Un Dono ki ye Sochkar hi Ankho me Ansu aa Gaye the.. Bahut Dardnaak aur Kabhi na Socha huva Pal tha Unke liye...

Kantra ab Bahut hi Pass Chala Gaya tha un Dono ke..aur ab wo Hath Badakar Dono ke Kapde ko Hath lagane hi Wala tha ki Tabhi...

Rasika aur Sonam Dono ek Sath ek hi Naam se Apni Ankhe band karke Chillati hai...

Dono-(Ek Sath) Rruudraaaddiiippppp.................................

Aur Tabhi Charo aur Bahut hi Tej Hawaye Chalne lagi..Badal bhi bahut jor jor se Garajne lage the...

Bijaliya to Jaise jor jor se Shor karte huye Chamak hi rahi thi...

Jaise Koi Bhuchal aa Gaya ho Koi Andhi aa gayi ho... Is Achanak badalte huye Vatavaran ko dekh...

Kantra bhi kuch Do Pal Ruk sa Gaya tha aur wo kuch Pal Piche hat Gaya tha...

vaha par khade Sabhi logo ne Apni Ankhe Band Kar di thi Kyu ki Unhe side Andhi Tufan me dekhna Asambhav tha...

Vahi par Jab Us Aghori Tantrik ne Rudradip ka Naam suna to ek Pal ke liye uske Chehare ke expression jarur Change ho Gaye the...

Par uski Bajah Kya thi wo to age hi Pata chalega..aur is Badalate huye Vatavaran ka bhi..

Aur Tabhi Upar se Ek Bijali ke Raftaar se bhi Jyada Tej Lekin bijli ke sath hi koi Ek Aisa Shaksh niche Aya..

wo Shaksh itne Teji se niche Aya tha ki use koi bhi Dekh bhi na saka aur nahi uske sath ane wale khatre ko Mahsus Kar saka...

Aur Bijali ke Raftaar ke Sath hi Us Shaksh ne Rasika aur Sonam ke Samne Khade Kantra Ko uske Sath aye huye Bijali se hi Jalkar Khak Kar Diya...

Kantra Ko to Uff.. karne ka Mauka tak nahi Diya us Shaksh ne.. ek Jhatke me hi Kantra jaise Hawa me Gayab ho gaya...

Aur wo Shaksh Sidha vaha Khada ho Gaya Jaha par kuch der Pahle Kantra Khada tha..

Lekin Us Shaksh ki Pith Abhi bhi Us Aghori Tantrik ke Taraf thi Isliye usko Ab Tak Kisi ne nahi dekha tha Rasika aur Sonam ne bhi nahi..

Aur upar se us Shaksh ka muh Pahle to kisi Mask ke Sath Dhaka huva tha jisse koi uska Chehara Dekh nahi pa raha tha...

Us Andhi Tufan me Sabko dekhna Asambhav ho Gaya tha Vahi par wo Aghori bhi Aram se to nahi...

par jitna tha utna Jarur Dekh pa raha tha Aur wo bhi is Achanak badalte huye Vatavaran se Dar to nahi...

lekin Shock Jarur ho Gaya tha aur Jab Usne Dekha ki Ek Bijali ke Raftaar ka Waar uske Shishya Kantra Par huva...

Aur Uske Shishya kahi Gayab sa ho Gaya aur uske Jagah Bijali ke Raftaar se bhi Jyada Tej vaha par koi aur Khada hai...

ye Jankar aur kuch der Pahle sune Shaksh ka Naam ye Dono usse wo kuch Dar sa Gaya tha...

Ye Sab Itne Jaldi huva ki use Kuch Samnajne aur Sochne ka waqt bhi nahi Mila..

Lekin Kantra Ko Dhuye me parivartit hota vaha Khade har ek Shaksh ne dekha tha...

Jo ye Najara Dekh Bahut hi Jyada Dar aur Khauf me Chala Gaya tha..

Aur uski Jagah Ab ek Aisa Shaksh Khada hai Jiske bare me kisi ko bhi Kuch nahi Pata tha...

aur use Kisi ne bhi nahi dekha Ab Tak.. wo Hai Kon kaha se Aya hai ye bhi kisi ko nahi Pata Chala...

Aur ye Sab Itna Achanak se hoga ye bhi kisi ne Socha Tak nahi tha...

Lekin Ek baat thi Kuch der Pahle kahi Rasika ki baat ab Us Aghori Tantrik ke Dimag me jarur Ghum rahi thi ki....

Agar Tumne Hame Chune ki bhi Koshish ki to Tu Hume chu to nahi Payega lekin Tera Kaal aur Teri Mrutyu Jarur Tere Samne aa Jayegi..

Aur ye us Jinn ki kahi huyi baat use Sach hote huye dikhayi de rahi thi. Par wo Aise hi haar manne Wala nahi tha...

Vahi Rasika aur Sonam Un Dono ne To Apni Ankhe pahle hi band karke rakhi thi..

to Unhone ye Sab dekhne ka Sawal hi nahi uthta specially Us Shaksh ka Chehara...

Aur rahi Baat Ritika ki to Wo Pahle se hi itni Bebas thi ki kuch Kar hi nahi pa rahi thi...

aur is Andhi Tufan me to use Khud ki Ankhe bhi Khol Pana asambhav lag raha tha...

Wo Aghori Tantrik Apne Sabse Pyaare aur Najdik Shishya ko is Tarah jaan jate Dekh...

Bahut hi Gusse me aa Gaya tha use kuch bhi nahi sujh raha tha.. Wo Usi Gusse ke Chalte us Shaksh se Kahta hai...

Aghori- Kon ho Tum... Aur Yaha kaise Aye... Tumhe Pata hai na Ye Mera Ilaka hai..

Aur Yaha mere Marji ke Khilaf koi nahi aa sakta aur Tumne Ate hi mere Sabse Priya Shishya ko Aise hi Maar dala...

Ye karke Tune Apne Maut ko Dawat Di hai. Iski Saja to Tumhe milni hi Chahiye...

Ye kahkar us Tantrik ne Apne Muh se Ek Aag nikali Jo Sidha us Shaksh ki taraf badh rahi thi...

Us Shaksh ne Us Aghori ki baat ko ansuna kar Diya usi Tarah wo uske Piche se ate huye Khatre se bhi Anjaan tha...

Ya Aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki wo Jaankar bhi us khatre se Anjaan bankar rahna chahata ho...

Par Jyada der wo Shaksh Chup nahi rah Saka wo Apne Full Josh me Apna Right Hath Upar Kiye aur Jor se Chillaya.....

Shaksh- Veeeeeerrrrrrrrrrr...........................

Ye kahte hi Us Shaksh ke upar Akash se Ek bahut hi Jor ki Bijali Giri Jo Sidha Jakar us Shaksh ke Hath par hi...

Par jaise hi wo Bijli Giri usi me se Ek Bijali ki Tarah chamakate huye hi Ek Talwaar Uske Hath me aa gayi...

Aur jaise hi wo Talwaar Uske Hath me aa gayi us Tantrik ke muh se nikalti Aag ki bajah se wo Achanak ek Dhaal me change ho gayi...

Aur us Tantrik ke muh se Aag ko rokkar use Apne Andar samane lagi.. aur kuch hi Der me wo Sari Aag us Dhal me sama Gayi...

Aur uske baad phir se wo usi Talwaar me change ho gayi Jaise us Shaksh ke hath me ayi thi...

Lekin is Baar wo Talwaar us Aag me jal jarur rahi thi aur Lagta hai Wo Talwaar bhi Charo aur ke Najaro ke Dekh...

Bahut Gusse me hai aur Apni Garmi dikhakar Jatana chahati ho ki wo bhi Ab tayar hai har hamle ke liye...

Ye Dekhkar to wo Tantrik ke Sath Sath Vaha par Khade uske Sabhi Shishya bhi Ye Dekhkar Bahut hi dar Gaye...

Kyu ki Unhone Aisa socha Tak Kya kabhi dekha tak nahi tha Unke Guru se Bhi Taqadwar koi yaha par aise aa jayega...

Aur wo bhi uski sirf Talwaar hi aisi Shaktishali ki wo waqt ke najakat ko Dhyan rakhte huye Apna Roop change Kar ke Apne Malik ki raksha karti hai...

Aur Phir Apne mul Roop me laut ati hai ye dekhkar to us Aghori ko bhi Bahut bada Shock laga tha...

Vahi Tantrik ne bhi nahi socha tha ki Aisa bhi ye Shaksh Bina uski Taraf dekhe ya Bina uske muh se Pheke huye Aag ko dekhe side Rok sakta hai...

Aur uski ye Talwaar Aise uske Waar ko Apne Andar itne Asani se le sakti hai..

Ye Sab usne dekha is par use vishwas rakhna Bahut hi Hard tha...

Par ye to kuch bhi nahi tha Abhi ye to Shuruwat bhi nahi huyi hai iske Age Aisa kuch hone Wala tha...

Jo uske Soch ke aur uske Samaj se bhi Bahar ka tha.. Kyu ki uski Soch vaha Tak pahuch hi nahi sakti thi chahe wo kitni bhi Badi Shaktiya hasil kyu na Kar le...

Ab Yaha par Rasika aur Sonam ko ye to Mahsus ho Gaya tha ki Yaha par Charo aur Andhi Tufan chal raha hai...

Aur wo bhi Bahut Joro shoro se.. Par unhe is Baat ka achrya jarur ho raha tha Abhi Tak Kantra ne unhe Hath bhi nahi Lagaya...

Aur Uske Upar Unhe Aghori ke Muh se aisi Baatein Sunkar Bahut hi Shock laga ki ye aisa kise aur Kyu kah raha hai..

aur Yaha par Kon Aisa Shaksh aa Gaya Jo is Aghori Tantrik ko Lalkar Raha hai..

Wo Dono yahi soch rahi thi ki Tabhi unhone ek Jor Sr Chik suni Jo Veer ke Naam ki thi...

Aur ye Veer Naam ki Chikh sun aur Jisne bhi ye Kaha uski Abaj Sun wo Dono to Usse bhi Jyada Shock ho gayi...

Kyu ki Unhe wo Abaj Kuch Jani Pahchani si lagi..

Jani Pahchani Kya Ye Dono kisi Bhi Halat me ho ye Abaj kabhi nahi Bhul sakti..

Aur us Shaksh ki Abaj sun wo Dono Khushi se aur Anand se Phule nahi sama rahi thi...

Aur unhone us Shaksh ko dekhne ke liye Jhat se ankhe Kholi aur jab in Dono ne us Shaksh ko Dekha...

to Sach me unhe Vishwas nahi ho raha tha ki wo Shaksh vaha aa Jayega...

Par unhe ye Bhi jarur Malum tha ki Unhe aise Sankat me Dekh wo Shaksh Aram se to Kabhi rah hi nahi sakta...

Wo dono us Shaksh ko dekh vaha par dekh Bahut hi Khush ho rahi thi...

jaise unhe Pure Jahan ki Khushi mil gayi ho par Vahi Wo Aghori bhi Bahut Gussa ho Gaya tha us Shaksh ko dekh....

Aur yaha Ritu ne Jab us Aghori ke Muh se vahi Baate aur us Shaksh ke muh se Veer Naam sun...

Ritika bhi us Shaksh ko Pahchan to gayi thi.. Us Shaksh ki Abaj sun uske bhi itne Bejaan pade huye Body me jaise jaan aa gayi ho...

Aur us Halat me Matlab Jab use Hasna bhi Dard lag raha tha us Halat me bhi uske Chehare par ek Khulkar hasi aa gayi..

Halanki usne Ankhe kholkar us Shaksh ko denhne ki Koshish jarur ki Par wo Aise Andhi me dekhne me asafal rahi...

Ab itne Log us Shaksh ko Pahchan Gaye the to Aap bhi Pahchan hi jaoge..

Ki wo Shaksh akhir hai Kon. Agar apko Taklif ho rahi hai to Chalo Mai hi Bata Deta hu...

Us Shaksh ko dekh Rasika aur Sonam itne anandit ho gayi thi ki Khushi ke mare un Dono ke muh se us Shaksh ka naam nikal Gaya...

waise ye vahi Naam hai Jo unhone kuch der Pahle Dar aur Khauf ke Karan aur unhe is Badi Sankat me se Bachane ke liye hi liya tha..

Ab to Aap Sab Pahchan hi Gaye honge...

Dono-(Ek Sath aur Khushi se) Rruudraaaddiiippppp....................

Ji Ha Dosto wo Shaksh koi aur nahi Mai hi Tha Par Mai vaha Pahucha Kaise..

Ye to Janna hi hoga na Apko to Chalo Kuch der Pahle reverse me aur Kisi Dusri Jagah....

Jaha par RD Ditya ko Gale lagakar vahi soch Raha tha Jo Abhi Aap soch rahe ho...................................

Bhai naraz na hona per maony ap ki story main takreban har update mai aik bat note ki hy k ap aik hi bat ko ghuma phira k 4 say 5 bar likh dety ho ya phr aik bat ko lamba kar dety ho aik line k lafz ko ap itna lamba kar dety ho k bore ho jata hy to try kro k aik bat ko zaida say zaida 2 line mai hi explain kr do baki ap ki marzi agr bura laga ho to aorry

 

[Nadan Dill]

Nice update bhaii bhot awala maza aya giea bhaiii ab new upbate ka intazar ha

 

[sam4321]

Aacha update hai......intajar rahega

 

[RD193]

Nice update bhai
Apna hero to uske ansh ka katputli ban gaya . B.ansh jaisa nachayega apna hero waisa nachega . super

Thanks Bhai... Ab Rassi uske Hath me hai... To isiliye Vahi Chala raha hai Jab RD ko Pata chal Jayega ki Usko Control kaise karna hai To.....

 

[RD193]

Awesome update RD bhai

Thanks Bhai