• If you are trying to reset your account password then don't forget to check spam folder in your mailbox. Also Mark it as "not spam" or you won't be able to click on the link.

Fantasy RUDRADIP- The God And Devil

RD193

Active Member
564
2,103
123
Bhai aap updates padhte ho ya robot ki trh copy karte ho
Ye starting waali ladki to mind mein door door tak nhi thi
Aapki is review se yaad aaya

U r a brilliant writer
Isme koi shaq nhi
Lekin aap ek brilliant reader bhi h
Or brilliant reviewer bhi :)
:congrats: 4 passing 100
Nice update
bohat hi acha update bro. and congrates to completing 100 pages.
Bas bhai pehle main reader hi tha.. or vo ladki achanak hi yaad aa gayi..
Uska charecter vakai kabil e tareef tha, par uski aakhiri mulakaat bohot zyada Emotional thi... Kasam se us update ko padhkar mere aakhon me aansu aa gaye the . Us wakht...
.
Thanks for the admiration dear.
Thanks Bhailog..
 

King

𝕿𝖍𝖊 𝕺𝖓𝖊 & 𝕺𝖓𝖑𝖞 𝕿𝖗𝖚𝖊 𝕶𝖎𝖓𝖌
3,951
6,980
159

PrinceDevil

New Member
38
66
33
SONYA naam tha us
Thanks Bhailog....
Aur itne deep me Mujhe khud ko batane ke liye... Aur wo Ladki bhi age ane wali hai.. uska naam to vaha ane ke baad hi bataunga...
Aur aap bol rahe ho us dialogue ke bare me to jab wo kaam ho jayega Tab Aap Sab ko khud hi Pata chal jayega....
larki ka Bro...
 
  • Like
Reactions: Baba__Bhai

PrinceDevil

New Member
38
66
33
Ittu Sa Update :ball:
But
Shandaar & Awesome
:adore::hspin:balle:


Sabse pehle to Congratulations for 100 pages...
Bhai se baaten ho gayin,
Geeta ke baare me, chalo achchha hai, ki use bhi hero ne set kar diya
.
Kya hoga jab bhai cheeka se milenge, kyonki jaisa ki aapne bataya tha, chika ka colour blue ya green tha shayad, matlab fully alian lagta hai...
To (Jadu) ko dekhkar bhai ka reaction kaisa hoga?
Ye dekhna baaki hai.
.
√ Dialog -
"Bhai- waise Rudra Mai Kya kahta hu....

Mai-Mai samaj Gaya Bhai "

Bhai hero to samajh gaya, par apun ke kuchh samajh na aaya, ho sake to plzz reply me samjha dena, varna aage ke update me..
.
Bhai Jahan tak mujhe yaad hai, sonam to pehle hero ki itni deevani hua karti thi,
ki aisi situations ke bahane dhundha karti thi,
ki kaise vo hero ke kareeb aa jaye,
Or usne ye baat jab bhi kahi thi,
Jab hero ne sonam ko haraya tha,
Tabh sonam ne kaha tha- "Aaj se main aapki patni hun or ab main aapka pichha nahin chhodungi".
To phir ab sonam ko kya ho gaya,
Jo vo itne nakhre kar rahi hai,
Apun ko to sonam par gussa aa raha hai, or last me hero ne jab uska hath pakda to tirchhi nazron se dekh rahi thi... Sonammmmm Teri to :angrywife:
.
Shayad ab sonam sabke minds ko copy karegi, tabh jakar papa ke sath bussiness karegi.
.
Bhai aap se ek request hai,
Jo ladki bachpan me R.D se pyaar karti thi, jab hero divya ko pyaar karta tha, tabh us ladki ne R.D ko apne birthday par bulakar proposed kiya tha,
or phir uske mom-dad shift ho gaye the, matlab shaher chhod kar chale gaye the,
Uska naam to yaad nahin aa raha,
Par uska charecter mujhe bohot pasand aaya tha, vahi thi, jisne hero ko kiss karna sikhaya tha,

Jo last me hero se ye bolkar gayi thi ki vo hero ko kabhi nahin bhulegi.
Bhai request ye hai ki ek baar usse or milva do..
:yourock::yourock::yourock:

KEEP POSTING :checkpm:
. & .
KEEP SMILING :smile::wink:

Arre Bhai us larki ka Naam SONYA tha ...

Maine socha tha k mai thorra pagal hun lekin app se mil kar acha laga... Koi hamari thara bhi hai....


SO SOOOOOORY ...
agar bura laga ho tho....
 

PrinceDevil

New Member
38
66
33
RD Bhai app se ek request hai .... RD jab Gaon gaya tha tho waha use ek larki ne Propose kiya tha..
Us ka bhi dekh Loo.... Naaa
 
Top