Incest SAAJAN

[Zas23]

SAAJAN
UPDATE-198​

Vo jor se chillate cheekhte huye piche ki taraf bhagi lekin darr aur khauf se thar thar kampte uske pair bhagne me uska sath nahi de paye jisse vo piche ki taraf dhadam se gir gayi…..niche girte hi uska sir kisi nukili cheez se takra gaya….ek baar phir se vo dard aur khauf se cheekh uthi.

Neha (dard se cheekhte huye)—aaaaaaaaaaaaa……..marrrrr…..gayiiiiiii…….raaaajjjjjjj……bachaooooooo

Usne turant apne hath ko sir me dard wali jagah par lagaya….aur dard se phir chilla uthi…..dard se karahte huye usne apna hath aage kiya to uska hath khoon se sana hua tha.

Neha ne dard bhare chehre se darte darte apni nazar ko utha kar samne dekha to chounk gayi...kyon ki kuch der pahle jaha ek bhayanak aurat khadi thi, ab vaha par koi nahi tha.

Idhar main sabhi ko awaz lagata hua har jagah qile me talash karne laga ki tabhi meri ankho ne kuch aisa dekha ki main usko dekhte hi chounk gaya.

Ab Aage…….

Meri ankho ke samne vaisa hi ek kamra dikhayi diya jaisa ki maine behosh hone ke dauran dekha tha….main ab iss asmanjas me fas gaya ki pahle iss kamre ko check karu ya phir sab ko talash karne ka kaam karu…?

Raj (chounk kar mann me)—Ye kamra to bilkul vaisa hi hai…..akhir ye kamra mujhe behosh hone ke baad kyo dikhayi diya tha….? Kuch na kuch raaz to avashya hi hai iss kamre ke andar…..to kya vo sabhi drishya jo bhi mujhe behosh hone ke baad dikhayi diye hain, unn sabhi ka kuch rahasya hai….? Kya vo sabhi iss tilismi jagah se hi sambandhit hain….? Vo ajib sa dikhne wala bhayanak jeev koun tha…..? kya usne mujhe sirf yahi dikhane ke liye hi behosh kiya tha ya phir ye sab koi tilism ka mayajaal hai…..? kya karu, pahle iss kamre ki talashi le kar iska raaz janne ki koshish karu ya phir sab ki khoj karu……? Pahle sab ko dekh leta hu…kahi kisi badi musibat me na phans gayi ho…?

Maine sabko pahle bachane ka faisla kar ke unki talash karne me jut gaya…..uss kamre ko ek nazar dekhte huye main aage badh gaya….main ghum phir kar ussi sidhi ke paas pahuch gaya jaha par uss kamre se mujhe kuch tamra patra mile the aur niche utarne par hum shisha lagi khidki wale room me pahuch gaye the.

Iss baar main yaha vaha mudne ki bajaye sidhe unn sidhyo se hote huye niche utarta gaya….lagbhag 50 sidhiya utarne ke pashchat mujhe ek kund dikhayi diya.

Dhyan se dekhne par maine jana ki isme bhi niche jane ke liye sidhiya bani huyi hain….main savdhani se uss kund ki sidhiya utarne laga.

Mera khyal tha ki yaha bhi vaise hi badbu bhara vatavaran hoga, garmi aur har oor dhool ki parat jama hogi aur ho sakta hai ki vo jagah kide makodo se bhi bhari padi ho.... ?

Magar mere iss khyal ke vipreet jaise hi niche pahucha to vaha ek dam saaf safayi thi, jaise ki uss jagah par koi rahta ho, dhool ka kahi namo nishan tak nahi tha aur na hi hawa band jaan padti thi....haa, andhakar jarur itna gahra tha ki vaha ki kisi bhi cheez ka dikhayi dena lagbhag namumkin tha...lekin meri kundalini jagrit hone ki vajah se koi dikkat pesh nahi aa rahi thi kuch bhi dekhne me...vaha ka farsh ek dam saman aur bilkul saaf suthra tha.

Vaha bana ek kamra jo niche se upar tak chikne pattharo se bana hua tha, aur jiski lambayi choudayi bahut kam thi upar mile kamro ki tulna me.

Main charo taraf ghum ghum kar dekhne laga ki vaha kaha kya hai.... ? purab taraf ke kone me pahucha to vaha chhat ke sath latakti huyi ek zanjeer dikhayi di, jiske sath lal kapde me bandhi huyi ek gathri latak rahi thi…..uttar ki taraf lakdi ke bane do bade bade box rakhe dikhayi diye....pashchim taraf ke kone me kamre ki satah me kuye ki tarah ka ek gaddha sa nazar aaya, jiske upar jaal pada hua tha.

Aur dakshin ki taraf ghum kar deekha to deewar ke sath safed patthar ka ek singhasan nazar aaya, jis par baithi aadam kad ki murti ko gaur se dekhne ke liye jaise hi uske karib pahucha to chounk gaya.

Kyon ki jisko maine murti samjha tha vo koi patthar ki murat nahi balki ek jeeti jagti nazuk aurat thi, jo apni badi badi ankho se ek tak mujhe hi dekhe ja rahi thi.

Aisi sunsan,sab taraf se band, shapit aur tilismi jagah me kisi aurat ki moujudgi hairat aur choukane wali baat to thi hi jabki iss jagah to koi darr aur khauf se kabhi aata jata bhi nahi hai.

Raj—ye, tum koun ho..... ?

Ek gamgeen hasi uske patle hotho par doud gayi...kintu usne mere sawal ka koi jawab nahi diya.....balki jawab dene ki jagah ulta apna sawal daag diya.

Vo—kahiye saajan, kya aap ko mujhse kuch kahna hai..... ?

Mera to dimag hi chakra gaya....iss vichitra jagah me koi aurat dekhne ko milegi, pahle to yahi asha nahi ho sakti thi… upar se vah meri jani pahchani hogi ya mera naam le kar pukaregi, ye aur bhi achambhit karne wali baat thi...main itna tajjub me dooba hua tha ki muh se koi awaz hi nahi nikal rahi thi lekin phir kisi tarah se khud ko sambhala maine.

Raj—tum koun ho aur kis liye yaha baithi ho.... ? aur tumne mera naam kaise jana..... ?

Mere sawal par Vo pahle ki hi tarah sookhi sookhi hasi hasne lagi….mujhe to ab ye pagal lagne lagi thi ya phir mujhe banane ki koshish kar rahi hai, yahi sochne laga main.

Vo—main chahe koi bhi hu....aap meri fikra chhod dijiye saajan aur aap ko yaha jo kaam hai, usko jaldi hi poora kar daliye...kyon ki agar der karenge to vah kam phir nahi ho sakega jiske liye aap yaha aaye hain.

Raj (shocked)—kya tum janti ho ki hum yaha koun se kaam ke liye aaye hain...... ?

Vo—hmmmm....bahut achchi tarah.

Aur phir vo iss tarah upar ki oor dekhne lagi jaise ki usko upar se kisi tarah ki koi aahat mili ho…..aur tabhi sach much mujhe bhi upar aati huyi kuch awaz sunayi padi.

Maine aati huyi unn awazo par gaur kiya to aisa mahsoos hua jaise ki kayi log aapas me baatcheet kar rahe hain... mujhe ashcharya hua to thoda piche hat kar sidhi ke paas ja kar main upar ki oor dekhne laga.

Magar siway kuch logo ke chalne phirne ki aahat ke aur kuch bhi sunayi nahi diya...ye dekh mera ashcharya aur bhi badha aur kuch ashanka bhi hone lagi to maine uss aurat ki fikra chhod kar sidhiyo par chadhte huye upar ki oor badh gaya.

Jis samay akhiri sidhi tay kar ke maine kund ke bahar apna sir nikala to yeh dekh mujhe ashcharya hua ki vaha to koi bhi nahi tha.

Raj (mann me)—kahi vo payal didi vagairah to nahi thi jo mujhe khojte huye yaha tak aayi ho.... ? itna jaldi vo awaze kaha gayab ho gayi.... ? lekin itne andhere me didi vagairah ka yaha tak aana lagbhag namumkin hi lagta hai... ? ab pahle iss aurat ko hi dekh leta hu ki ye vastav me hai koun…..?

Jab upar aane par mujhe koi dikhayi nahi diya to main vapis pahle ki tarah sidhya utar kar kund ke andar aa gaya jaha singhasan par baithi uss aurat ne mujhe tajjub me daal diya tha.

Magar yaha aa kar to mera ashcharya aur badh gaya, kyon ki ab vo singhasan khali tha…..aur uss aurat ka vaha koi naamo nishan tak nahi tha.

Raj (mann me)—iss charo taraf se band jagah se koi admi kis tarah aur kaha gayab ho sakta hai... ? kahi yaha par koi chhipi huyi surang ya phir koi gupt rasta to nahi hai....jisse vo aurat yaha se bhag gayi ho.... ?

Ye khyal mann me panapte hi maine har taraf dhyan se dekhna shuru kar diya....aur mera ye khyal sahi nikla bhi... uss singhasan ki bagal ki deewar me mujhe ek bahut hi chhoti surang ka nicha sa muhana nazar aaya jo iss tarah se bana hua tha ki singhasan par baithne wala vyakti sahaj hi uss raste se utar kar ja sakta tha.

Patthar ki ek silli (tiles jaisi) apni jagah se hat kar niche ki taraf jhooli huyi thi.....aur vaha ek tang (sankra) rasta dikhayi pad raha tha.

Raj (mann me)—iss surang me ghus kar dekhu kya ki andar ab kya naya tamasha yaha dekhne ko milta hai….? Lekin pahle apni sab dilrubao ki khoj khabar to le lu…pata nahi kaha bhatak rahi hain ye….? Ye qila waqayi me bahut rahasyamayi hai.

Issi tarah ki baate mann me sochte vicharte huye main palat kar kund ki sidhiya chadhte huye upar ki oor chal diya… magar akhiri sidhi par pahuchne se pahle hi mujhe punah ruk jana pada…..kisi ki chhaya mujhe uss kund par dikhayi di thi aisa jaise ki koi jhuk kar niche ki taraf dekh raha ho.

Waqt jaise jaise badh raha tha, vaha ka vatavaran utni hi tezi se badal raha tha….qile ke bahar aas maan me jor jor se bijli kadak rahi thi…’’kadddd-kadddddd……..kaddd-kadddddd’’…

Aapas me milte badal raat ke andhere me roshni bichhate huye yahi darsha rahe the ki jald hi koi toofan yaha kadam rakhne wala hai.

Vahi ek andhere kamre me neha idhar se udhar bhatak rahi thi….kisi bachche ki tarah ro rahi thi vo….tabhi usse raj ki yaad aate hi vo aur bhi jor jor se phoot phoot ke rone lagi….ankho me aaye anshu ko kisi tarah se saaf karte huye vo khadi huyi

Neha (rote huye)—raaajjjjjjjj………..raaaajjjjjjjjjj

Neha cheekhti rahi lekin uss band andhere kamre me uski ye awaz goonjti rahi …..jise sunne ke liye raj vaha tha hi nahi……lekin neha ko ye kaha pata tha ki uske theek piche koi khada hua hai….jise neha ke dil me aisa darr aur khauf dekh kar behad khushi ho rahi thi.

Neha besudh hoti huyi poori ankhe khol kar anjne me hi uski taraf palat kar aage badhne lagi aur phir uske kano me kisi ke fusfusane ki awaze sunayi dene lagi.

Kisi ki awaz sunte hi uske dil me darr aur badh gaya…..tabhi vo awaz itni nazdeek aa gayi ki usko aisa lagne laga ki koi uske kaan me kuch kah raha hai.

Chalte chalte vo phir se kisi cheez se takra kar niche uske upar gir gayi….tabhi ek baar phir se kamre me roshni phail gayi aur jaise hi neha ki nazar apne samne padi cheez par gayi to uski ruh kaamp gayi.

Kyon ki vo iss samay jiske upar giri huyi thi vo ek taza kshat vikshat laash thi kisi ki….jiski ek ankh, aadhi naak, ek kaan, ek hath aur ek pair kata hua vahi pada tha….pet ka maans poora bahar nikla hua tha….jise ki kisi ne usko abhi abhi noch noch ke khaya ho.

Neha (cheekh kar)—aaaaaaaaa,,,nahiiiiiiiiii……raaaajjjjjjjjjjjjj

Neha uske upar se uth kar haal behaal ho kar bahar ki taraf bhagi aur idhar uss laash ne apni ankhe khol di..aur uth kar neha ke piche chal diya ek pair se hi.

Vahi hospital me doctor ne veer ko dubara se dawayi ki parchi likh kar diya aur sath hi unn medicines ko jo mrinal samet layi thi unko vapis counter par loutane ko kaha.

Veer—ok thanks doctor…main abhi aaya

Mrinal—ye balatkari, ruk main bhi chalti hu….tera kya bharosa vaha pahuchte hi kisi ka balatkar karne lag gaya to…?

Veer—nahi koi jarurat nahi hai tumhe jane ki…yahi ruko..main lata hu

Lekin mrinal kaha manne wali thi…vo veer ke piche piche chal di….sanyog se vahi doctor raste me dikh gaya aur shayad usne bhi dono ko dekh liya tha….dekhte hi vo turant palat ke andar cabin me ghus gaya.

Mrinal (mann me)—maine itni mehnat se achchi achchi dawayi layi thi aur ye dok ghar ne unko vapis kar diya…khud ko bahut hoshiyar samajhti hai ye…..isko maza chakhana padega.

Counter par pahuchte hi veer ne unn dawayi lo return kar diya aur naya parcha pakda diya…lekin jaise hi dukan wale ne veer ke sath mrinal ko dekha to turant chair se uth kar hath jod liya.

Vo—madam jo bhi chahiye…aap nikal lo….aap ke liye sab free hai.

Mrinal (ankhe dikhate huye)—kya kaha tune….? Mujhe farri (free) hai ….? Gaali deta hai…ruk abhi batati hu tujhe.

Veer (sir pakad ke)—hey bhagwan…ye ladki bhi na….! ye…mrinallll nahiii..rukkk jaa….nahiii

Mrinal turant counter kud kar andar ghus gayi aur veer ke mana karte karte usne dukan wale ki gardan pakad ke ghasit liya….vo usko kaan ke niche bajane hi wali thi ki tabhi veer ne jaldi se usko pakad liya aur ek kaand hote hote rah gaya.

Mrinal (kuch utha kar)—ye kya hai….?

Vo—ye fevi quick hai.

Mrinal—achcha achcha, samajh gayi…..ye fuyi quyi hai….

Veer—chal ab yaha se..

Mrinal—thoda ruk na.....ye kabutar.....ye fuyi quyi ko kaise khate hain.... ?

Vo (shocked)—ye kuch bhi chipkane ke kaam me aata hai.

Mrinal—isse sab kuch chipak jayega na….?

Vo (picha chhudane ke liye)—bilkul

Mrinal—to phir theek hai…..chal balatkari….(mann me)—ab batati hu uss dok tarrrr ko.

Vahi mandir me chanchal abhi bhi rote huye bhagwan se vinti karne me lagi huyi thi jabki vidhya band kamre me akeli baithi anshu baha rahi thi...

Achanak uski nazar samne rakhe dressing table ke kaanch par gayi to uski dhadkan hi jaise rukne ko ho gayi…kaanch par kuch dhundhla dhundhla sa jhil mila raha tha…..aur bhi achanak uss mirror me ek chehra ubharne laga dhire dhire……..jaise hi vo chehra spast naar aaya jo ki bahut hi bayanak chehra nazar aa raha tha…..usko dekhte hi vidhya ki jor se dahshat ke maare cheekh nikal gayi…..vo jo bhi tha shayad iss samay uske piche khada tha.

Ye ehsaas hote hi uski ruh andar tak kaamp gayi…..vidhya ke poore jism me darr aur khauf se sihran doud gayi…uske hath pair thar tharane lage.

Darte darte usne kisi tarah himmat kar ke apni gardan ko piche ghumane lagi…….

Friends, Tilism ek makdi ke jaal ki tarah hota hai, ki agar uss jaal me koi jeev fas gaya to itni jaldi nahi nikal sakta...vo agar ek jaal se niklega to turant dusre jaal me fas jayega...aise hi karte huye vo faste nikalte, faste nikalte huye hi uss jaal se bahar aa sakta hai..ek dam se bahar nahi nikal sakta.

Jaisa ki aap sabhi jante hain ki ye Qila Tilismi hone ke sath hi sath abhishapit bhi hai..qile se sambandhit nagar aur uss nagar ke aas paas tak insan aur janwar to kya koi ped poudha tak jivit nahi hain...Sadiyo se vo nagar veeran hai...jaha koi jane ki sochta bhi nahi, uss nagar ke paas se bhi nahi gujarta....agar aise me hero is tilism ko itna jaldi tod dega to qile ke baare me kahi gayi baate galat sabit ho jayengi....vo ek dusre ko charitarth nahi karengi. aisa lagega jaise ki tilism bahut kamjor tha jisko raj ne ek jhatke me hi tod diya...agar aisa ho jata hai tab to qila aur vo nagar aaj tak veeran nahi hona chahiye tha.

Anyway, ye sab maine isliye kaha hai kyon ki kayi mitro ka sochna hai ki main qile ke matter ko lamba khich raha hu...lekin aisa karna kahani aur uss vishay me kahe gaye vaktavya ko charitarth karne ke uddeshya se hai.

Agle do teen updates me Qile se jude sabhi rahasyo se parda uth jayega...Tab tak mera sabhi se anurodh hai ki vo apne antah sthal me dhairya aur dheeraj banaye rakhe.

"Dhanyawad...Shubh Ratri"

Nice update

 

[Zas23]

SAAJAN
UPDATE-199​

Achanak uski nazar samne rakhe dressing table ke kaanch par gayi to uski dhadkan hi jaise rukne ko ho gayi…kaanch par kuch dhundhla dhundhla sa jhil mila raha tha…..aur bhi achanak uss mirror me ek chehra ubharne laga dhire dhire……..jaise hi vo chehra spast naar aaya jo ki bahut hi bayanak chehra nazar aa raha tha…..usko dekhte hi vidhya ki jor se dahshat ke maare cheekh nikal gayi…..vo jo bhi tha shayad iss samay uske piche khada tha.

Ye ehsaas hote hi uski ruh andar tak kaamp gayi…..vidhya ke poore jism me darr aur khauf se sihran doud gayi…uske hath pair thar tharane lage.

Darte darte usne kisi tarah himmat kar ke apni gardan ko piche ghumane lagi…….

Ab aage......

Vidhya ne jaise hi kampte huye palti to ye dekh kar hairan ho gayi ki vaha koi nahi tha.....uske saanso ki speed rajdhani express ki tarah tez chal rahi thi....poora sharir darr aur khauf ki vajah se pasine se tar batar ho gaya tha.

Vidhya (hairani se)—Yaha to koi nahi hai... ! Lagta hai mera vaham tha...din me bhi baithe baithe sapne dekhne lagi hu main.....omg...kitna darawana aur bhayanak dikhta tha uska chehra....abhi tak darr se mere hath pair kaamp rahe hain. Shukra hai ki ye sirf ek khwab tha warna main to dahshat me hi marr jati aaj.

Vidhya ek lambi saans khich kar sari se chehre par aaye pasine ko pochte huye jaise hi samne ki oor mudi to uske dill ka khauf jo uske khwab samajhne se kuch kam ho gaya tha achanak vo khauf aur darr pahle ki tulna me duguna ho gaya.

Uske samne vahi dressing table tha, vo bhi apni jagah par kintu usme laga hua mirror gayab tha….ek baar phir se uske hath paon phool gaye...

Usne turant piche palat ke dekha to phir chounk gayi..kyon ki vo mirror piche ki deewar par latak raha tha…usne phir se samne palat ke dekha to ab ki bar mirror dressing table me apni jagah par laga dikha.

Usne ye dekh kar jaldi se palat ke deewar ki taraf dekha to vaha ab vo shisha nahi tha….turant samne palti to phir se chounk gayi kyon ki iss baar to vo dressing table hi apni jagah se gayab ho chuka tha…..vidhya ki halat dekhne layak ho gati thi….jis ghatna ko vo kuch der pahle tak apni jeeti jagti ankho ka ek bahut hi bura khwab samajh rahi thi, ab uska vahi khwab haqiqat ka roop le kar phir se uske samne aa kar khada ho gaya tha.

Vidhya ke jism me darr aur dahshat iss kadar haavi ho gaya ki ab uska dimag hi karna band kar diya tha…room ki khidki aur darwaje par lage huye parde jor jor se hilne lage…..jab hamare dil aur dimag ke andar darr apna darr ghar kar leta hai, uss samay hone wali kisi ped ke toote huye patte ki aahat bhi chati huyi dhadkano ko band karne ke liye paryapt hoti hai.

Yahi manodasha iss samay vidhya ki ho chuki thi….darr ki vajah se uska poora jism pasine se bhig chuka tha…ki tabhi vo dressing table apne khisak kar uski taraf aane laga….vidhya turant piche ki taraf gir gayi, mud kar vaha se bhagne ke chakkar me.

Lekin phir jaldi hi khadi ho kar darwaje tak pahuch ke room se bahar nikalne ke liye usko kholne ki koshish karne lagi par jaise aaj vo darwaja bhi uski jaan ka dushman ban gaya tha, usne bhi khulne se inkar kar diya aur lakh koshish karne ke bavjud bhi vo nahi khula to vidhya jor jor se cheekhne aur chillane lagi apni madad ke liye, magar uski madad karne ke liye aata bhi to koun…? Ghar me to uske khud ke akele ke alawa sabhi to hospital gaye huye the.

Vidhya (cheekhte huye)—koi darwaja kholo…….koi bachaooooo……..arey koiii tooooo darwaja khollll doooooo….

Akhir pareshan ho kar usne doudte huye apni pistol utha li aur charo taraf ghum ghum kar jorr jor se chillane lagi shayad vo pistol ko hi iss samay apna asli madadgar samajh rahi thi….ho bhi kyo na, akhir pistol aur khanjar ne hi to aaj tak uske manshubo ko poora karne me uski madad ki thi.

Vidhya (chillate huye)—kkkkkkkk…..kounnnn haiiiii yahaaa…..? dekhoooo tummmm jo bhiii hoooo….samne aa jaoooo, warna main goli chala dungiiii.

Aur bhi vo hua jiske baad to vidhya ki saanse hi halak me atak gayi…..uska pistol hatho se chhut kar door ja gira… kyon ki uske goli maarne ki dhamki dete hi ek chehra vaha achanak uss mirror se nikal kar bahar aa gaya…poora sharir ekdam kala, sir ke baal charo taraf se jamin tak latak rahe the, ek ek hath jitne lambe hath aur pairo ke nakhun the…aur ankhe bilkul ugte huye suraj ki tarah lal thi.

Ye bhayanak chehra dekhte hi vidhya ka poora sharir kaampne laga…..uski jeevan bhar ki sathi pistol ne uska sath chhod diya…..darr aur khauf ne usko poori tarah se apni giraft me le liya….uske muh se shabd nahi phoot rahe the… uski saanso ki gati rukne lagi aur vo dhammm se niche gir gayi, badi mushkil se uske muh se kuch yhar thare bol nikle aur phir dhire dhire uski ankhe band hoti chali gayi..

Vidhya (kaampte huye)—kkkkkkkkk…kounnnnnn hoooooo tummmmmm……..?

Y…..A…..M…..R…..A…..J

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Udhar hospital me veer, mrinal ka hath pakad kar counter se bahar nikal ke vapis aa gaya sab ke paas…mamta ko bhi hosh aa gaya tha phir se, lekin usne apni ankhe band kar rakhi thi.

Uski dono ankho ki core se ris ris kar aanshu ab bhi bah rahe the….shayad vo abhi bhi apne dil me ho rahi pida ko sahaj nahi kar payi thi…ruchi unke bagal me baith kar bahte un anshuo ko pochh rahi thi halanki ankhe to uski khud ki bhi nam thi.

Veer ne vaha aate hi vo medicines doctor ko check kara kar mrinal ko pakda di….doctor ne unn medicines ko kab aur kaise khana hai, ye bhi bata diya.

Jab doctor usko medicines ke baare me bata rahi thi to mrinal uski chair se bilkul chipak kar khadi ho gayi…aur jaldi se fevi quick uski chair aur sari par gira diya dhakkan nikal ke….choonki doctor samne ki taraf jhuki huyi thi jisse poora fevi stick uski hips me chipak gaya baki jo bacha vo chair par lag gaya.

Doctor jaise hi sidhi huyi to uski hips ki sari chair se chipak gayi…..mrinal ne sab ki oor dekha ki kisi ne usko dekha to nahi aisa karte huye…..aur phir jaldi se fevi stick ko veer ko pakda diya…veer ko to kuch samajh aaya nahi lekin phir bhi usne bina kuch kahe pakad liya….mrinal ne to ye suna hi nahi tha ki doctor ne medicines kab khane ko kaha hai uska dhyan to apni nayi shararat ko anzam dene me laga hua tha….veer ko fevi stick thamane ke baad vo ja ke priyadarshini ke bagal me khadi ho gayi.

Doctor (haste huye)—maine jaisa bataya hai vaise hi medicine khana….kasam se tum bhi na kamal ki ladki ho…..hihihi…?

Mrinal—Jyada hihihihi mat karo….tumhare Jhaant (daant) dikh rahe hain sab ko.

Mrinal ki baat se sab chounk gaye….Doctor to ekdam se sakpaka gayi…..uska hasta hua chehra yakayak sikud kar tension me ho gaya….aur vo turant jhatke se khadi ho gayi….aur tabhi

Charrrrrrrrrrrrr…….ki awaz ke sath hi uske hips ke upar ka kapda bhi phat kar chair me hi chipak kar rah gaya….uska poora pichhwada bina kapdo ke sab ke samne aa gaya…..sabhi ki ankhe shock se aur choudi ho gayi….sab se jyada buri halat to veer ki huyi iss samay kyon ki vo doctor ke theek piche hi khada tha…uski ankho ne to ye scene dikhte hi palak jhapkna hi bhul gayi thi….jabki mrinal tali maar maar ke hasne lagi.

Doctor ne jaldi se apna hath piche le ja kar tatola to abhi kya hua sara mazra uski samajh me aa gaya….vo fatafat turant chair par baith gayi….usne apna coat utar ke kamar me lapet liya aur gusse se sab ko dekhne lagi.

Doctor (gusse se)—ye behuda harkat kis ki hai…..?

Mrinal (haste huye)—arey…veer tumhare hath me kya hai ye…..?

Doctor aur baki sab palat ke veer ko dekhne lage…veer ne chounk kar jab apne hath me fevi stick dekhi to jaldi se phenk diya jise sab ne dekh liya.

Doctor (gusse me)—apko sharam aani chahiye mr. veer, aisi giri huyi harkat karte huye…..agar mujhe raj sir ki izzat ka khyal nahi hota to main police complain karti apke khilaf.

Veer (gusse se mrinal ko ghurte huye)—apko kuch galat fahmi huyi hai doctor…..maine aisa kuch bhi nahi kiya hai.

Sab ne mil kar doctor ko kisi tarah samjhaya….vo bhi samajh chuke the ki ye harkat bhi jarur mrinal ne hi ki hogi doctor, kisi aur doctor ko bhejne ko bol kar apne coat hips me lapete vaha se bhag gayi.

Sabne mrinal ko khub sunaya, lekin priyadarshini ne kisi tarah aage aa kar mamla shant kiya….vaise bhi kisi ne raat me dinner tak nahi kiya tha paridhi ki tabiyat jyada kharab ho jane ki vajah se.

Veer—main sab ke liye kuch nasta le kar aata hu.

Ruchi—mere liye mat lana, baki jisko jo khana hai puch lo aur le aao.

Kajal—aise kaise nahi khayegi, veer tu sab ke liye le aa.

Mrinal—ruk...ruk..main bhi chalti hu sath me, teri madad ke liye

Veer—tu kaisi madad karti hai...vo main achchi tarah se dekh chuka hu....jab se aayi hai tab se meri izzat do koudi ki kar di hai tune....tujhe fasane ke liye main hi milta hu hamesha.....main tere aage hath jodta hu, mujhe baksh de... pata nahi raj ne africa ke kis jungle se tujhe yaha pakad laya hai.

Veer ne usko mana kar ke bahar nikal gaya….mrinal bhi uske piche piche bhagi….lekin tab tak veer gadi le kar chal diya tha….mrinal nirash ho kar loutne hi wali thi ki tabhi uski ankho ne kuch aisa dekha ki vo chounk gayi…vo tezi se bhagne lagi veer ki taraf….shayad usne kuch apratyashit bahut bada khatra bhamp liya tha.

Mrinal (chillate huye)—nahii…veerrrrr…vapis lout aaoooo…..matttt jaooooooo

Lekin veer to uski pahuch se door nikal chuka tha….akhir me mrinal adrishya ho kar tezi se veer ki taraf badhne lagi…. Idhar veer iss baat se anjan tha ki ek bahut bada khatra badi tezi se uski taraf badh raha hai.

Veer apni hi dhun me gadi chala raha tha ki tabhi uss road ko ek bahut bade sher ki parchhayi ne gher liya…

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Vahi dusri taraf uss grah me uss rajya ke rajguru dhyan mudra me baith kar apne guru ka dhyan laga rahe the kuch der baad hi unke guru samne prakat ho gaye aur yaad karne ka karan pucha.

Guru—kaho vats, kaise yaad kiya mujhe….?

Rajguru (RG)—gurudev….mere mann me ek shanka uttapann ho rahi thi, jiske nivaran hetu main apka marg darshan chahta hu.

Guru—kaisi shanka putra….?

RG—gurudev, jaisa ki aapne kaha tha ki uss talwar ko vahi hasil kar sakta hai jiski vo talwar hai ya phir koi maha parakrami yoddha….aaj huyi uss khooni prati yogita me maine aise hi ek maha parakrami yoddha ko dekha hai..usne na kewal uss pratiyogita ko jita hai balki uss taqatwar jeev ko parajit kar ke uss talwar ko bhi hasil kar liya.

Guru—ye to bahut hi achchi baat hai….phir tumhe shanka kis baat se hai…?

RG—meri shanka ka karan hai vahi ladka….na jane kyo mujhe uski veerta dekh kar aisa lagta hai jaise ki vo saajan ho aapne mujhe jaisi veerta saajan ke vishay me batayi thi, vaise hi gun mujhe uss ladke raj ke andar nazar aaye hain to kya raj hi saajan hai…..? aap ne ek baar kaha bhi tha ki vo phir se janam lega aur yaha jarur ayega, usko abhi yaha ke bahut se adhure kaam poore karne hain.

Guru—tumhari shanka niradhar nahi hai vats, saajan hi raj hai.

RG—iska matlab ab iss rajya me chhaye dukh aur taklif ke badal hat jayenge….har oor khushi aur ullas ka vatavaran hoga…..kya vrihadpur aur uska qila bhi shrap aur tilism se azad ho payega gurudev….? Akhir kya raaz hai vrihadpur aur uske qile ka….? Maine jab bhi raj ke baare me janne ke liye dhyan me baitha to kamyabi nahi mili, aisa kyo…?

Guru—tumhare sawal ka jawab to mere paas bhi nahi hai putra….isko samay ke upar chhod do….raj ke vishay me ya to khud raj janta hai ya phir uski guru maa….isliye kitna bhi dhyan lagaoge uske vishay me janne ke liye, kamyabi nahi milegi…ataiv uss baare me mat socho.

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Idhar qile me vo laash ek pair ke sahare kud kud kar neha ke piche bhagne lagi….bechari ki halat adhmari jaisi ho chuki thi darr ki vajah se…uski saanse phool chuki thi aur sharir me itni bhi jaan nahi bachi thi ki vo chilla bhi sake, bhaga tak nahi ja raha tha usse.

Akhir me thak haar kar vo baith gayi aur rone lagi…uske sir se khoon bhi nikal raha tha jisse dard ho raha tha… neha lagbhag behosh hone ki kagar par pahuch chuki thi….tab tak vo laash bhi uske paas pahuch ke khadi ho gayi aur uski halat par usko hasi aane lagi….uss laash ne vahi pada hua ek bada sa patthar hawa me utha liya aur uska nishana neha ke sir ki oor mod diya.

Vo patthar neha ke sir se takrata ki uske pahle hi achanak uski disha badal gayi aur vo vapis tezi se palat kar uss laash se ja takraya….laash uchhal kar door ja giri…lekin turant khadi ho kar usne udhar dekha to use apne samne saloni khadi dikhi.

Ye saloni hi thi jisne uss patthar ki disha ko mod diya tha aur neha ki jaan jate jate bach gayi thi….idhar main yaha se vaha ghumte huye akhir me phir se ussi kamre me pahuch gaya jaha vo shisha ki khidki lagi thi.

Raj—ye kaisa chakra vyuh hai….? Kahi se bhi jata hu lekin ghum phir kar issi kamre me pahuch jata hu…aise kaam nahi banega…..ab mujhe pahle iss tilism ko todne ki koshish karni padegi…isko tode bina kuch bhi maqsad poora nahi hone wala

Main vahi khade ho kar uss murti ko dhyan se dekhne laga aur phir uss kamre se nikal kar aage badhne ke liye kadam uthaya hi tha ki jaise mujhe kuch yaad aaya aur main vapis uss kamre me aa gaya.

Maine ek baar phir se dhyan de kar uss murti ko dekhna chalu kiya…..aur achanak ek jagah par ja kar meri nazar tham gayi aur main kuch sochne par vivash ho gaya.

Maine dekha ki uss murti ke baki sabhi saat hatho me koi na koi hathiyar avashya tha sirf ek hath aisa tha jo ki bilkul khali tha…lekin uss hath ki ungliya mudi huyi thi.

Raj (mann me)—ye murti khandit kyo hai….? Baki sabhi hatho me kuch na kuch hathiyar hain to ye khali kyo hai…? Koun sa hathiyar hona chahiye iss hath me…..? chakra bhi hai, trishul, gada, dhanush, chabuk, khopdi, khappar, ye sabhi hain…..haan talwar nahi hai……

Maine turant uss talwar ko yaad kiya aur agle hi pal vo mere hatho me aa gayi…..maine mata rani ko pranam kar ke vo talwar unke uss khali hath me pakda di……aur phir tabhi….

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SAAJAN
UPDATE- 200​

Maine dekha ki uss murti ke baki sabhi saat hatho me koi na koi hathiyar avashya tha sirf ek hath aisa tha jo ki bilkul khali tha…lekin uss hath ki ungliya mudi huyi thi.

Raj (mann me)—ye murti khandit kyo hai….? Baki sabhi hatho me kuch na kuch hathiyar hain to ye khali kyo hai…? Koun sa hathiyar hona chahiye iss hath me…..? chakra bhi hai, trishul, gada, dhanush, chabuk, khopdi, khappar, ye sabhi hain…..haan talwar nahi hai……

Maine turant uss talwar ko yaad kiya aur agle hi pal vo mere hatho me aa gayi…..maine mata rani ko pranam kar ke vo talwar unke uss khali hath me pakda di……aur phir tabhi….

Ab aage…….

Murti ke khali hath me talwar pakdate hi vo talwar roshni se chamakne lagi….uski chamak samne khidki me lage shishe par padne lagi aur paravartit hone lagi shishe me takrane ke baad……(theek vaise hi jaise ki surya ki roshni me agar kisi kaanch ko rakh diya jaye to vo bhi roshni bikherne lagta hai) ….shishe me se roshni ke paravartit hote hi murti apni jagah se ghumne lagi.

Murti ke ghumte hi mujhe mata rani ke pairo ke paas jo jagah murti hatne se khali huyi vaha par kuch nazar aaya… maine paas ja kar dekha to vaha se kisi tahkhane ka rasta dikhayi diya…..maine uth kar ek nazar uss khidki me lage shishe aur phir uss murti ki taraf dekha…aur talwar ko nikal liya murti ke hath se.

Talwar nikalte hi jaise uss shishe ki roshni uss jagah par padni band huyi vaise hi vo murti ghum kar phir se pahle jaisi position me aa gayi aur vo tahkhane ka rasta murti ke pairo ke niche band ho gaya.

Maine ek bar phir se talwar murti ke hatho me thama di aur phir vaise hi hua jaise pahle hua tha….main jyada der na karte huye uss tahkhane me andar ghus gaya….andar jate hi mujhe ek button dikhi jise press karte hi murti phir se ghum kar yathavat avastha me aa gayi aur tahkhane ka dwar band ho gaya.

Andar bahut andhera tha lekin mujhe vaha dekhne me koi pareshani pesh nahi ho rahi thi….niche utarne ke liye sidhiya bani huyi thi….main unke sahare niche utarta chala gaya.

Jaise hi main jamin par pahucha to vaha par mujhe ek surang nazar aayi….main uske andar ghus gaya….mujhe ab tak koi nahi mila tha….shayad tahkhana band hone ki vajah se yaha koi aa hi nahi paya, kyon ki tahkhane ko kholne ki chabi matlab vo talwar kisi ke hath lagi hi nahi thi.

Khair maine inn vicharo ko tyag kar nirantar uss surang ke andar badhta chala gaya….na jane kitni der chalne ke baad mujhe vaha do raste nazar aaye…kuch pal ruk kar main yahi sochta raha ki pahle koun se raste par jau…kya pata koun sa rasta kitna lamba hai….?

Phir mann me nirnay kar ke ek raste me chal pada…..kuch door jane par hi mujhe ek kamra mila…..maine usko kholne ki koshish ki lekin vo nahi khula…..akhir me maine usko tod diya.

Lekin jaise hi kamre ke andar kadam rakha to vaise hi kisi ne mujhe lapet liya……maine dekha to ye ek vishal paanch fano wala naag tha, jisne darwaje ke andar aate hi mujh par hamla kar diya tha….main lagatar khud ko uske changul se chhudane ki koshish me laga hua tha aur vo dhire dhire apna muh philata ja raha tha mujhe dasne ke liye.

Usne jaise hi jor se fufkar marte huye mere sir me hamla kiya to maine apne sir ko tirchha kar liya….isliye uska vaar khali gaya…lekin vo gussa ho kar apne paancho muh se hamla karne laga…mere hath pair usne jakad rakhe the jiski vajah se main kewal apna sir hilane ke siwa kuch bhi nahi kar pa raha tha.

Magar sir bhi kab tak idhar udhar karta jabi vo jaldi jaldi apne sabhi fano se lagatar hamle kar raha tha….lihaja maine apni ankhe band kar li aur shant ho kar sidha khada ho gaya….vo lagatar hamle karta raha par ab uske vaar ka mujh par koi asar nahi ho raha tha….dhire dhire mera sharir badhne aur phailne laga jisse uski pakad dheeli hoti gayi. Aur phir mere jism se aag ki lapte nikalne lagi.

Aag ki lapte jaise hi mere jism se nikalna shuru huyi to vo jaldi se mujhe chhod kar door ho gaya lekin ye aag itni tez ho chuki thi ki uski lapte poore kamre me har kone tak ja rahi thi...vo iss aag me jhulasne laga aur bachne ke liye idhar udhar bhagne laga kintu ab uske yaha se bhagne ka koi marg shesh nahi tha kyon ki darwaje ke paas to main hi khada hua tha.....antatah vo iss aag me jal kar bhasm ho gaya aur uske jalte hi ek roshni uske andar se nikal kar mere jism me sama gayi aur vo jalkar rakh ka dher ban gaya.

Uske bhasm hote hi maine apne sharir ko normal kar liya.....ab vo kamra anekanek ratnabhusno se prakashit ho raha tha....akoot khazana bhara pada tha uss kamre me.....heere, jawahraat, sona, chandi, mani, manikya aur bhi na jane kitne hi prakar ke ratna aur abhusan ka bhandar laga hua tha.

Maine ek bar phir se ankhe band kar ke apna ek hath aage kiya to mere hath se roshni nikalne lagi jo uss khazane ke upar ja kar padne lagi aur phir vapis mere hatho me sama gayi.....ab vaha koi bhi khazana nahi tha...maine usko apne andar samahit kar liya tha.

Ab mera uss kamre ka kaam khatam ho chuka tha to vapis vaha se lout kar dusri surang me ghus gaya.....kafi door tak jane ke baad vaha mujhe ek darwaja nazar aaya...jo mere hath lagate hu khul gaya....lekin uske andar mujhe kuch nahi dikha to main vapis loutne ke liye palta hi tha ki tabhi meri nazar kisi aisi cheez par padi ki main bhi dekh kar chounk gaya.

Maine uske karib ja kar dhyan se dekha to vo ek bahut chota locket tha….shayad dhool mitti me vo daba hua tha lekin mera pair padne se uske upar ki parat hat gayi hogi jisse vo thoda thoda chamakne laga tha…bilkul jugnu ki tarah.

Maine usko hath me utha liya aur jab khola to dang rah gaya....kuch der tak main vaha vaise hi ankhe band kiye khada raha aur phir vapis lout aaya...surang se bahar nikal maine tahkhane me hi lage deewar me se ek jagah ke patthar ko khiskaya to vaha ek khidki dikhne lagi...maine uske andar ghus kar uss khidki ko band kar diya.

Idhar saloni ne jaise hi uss laash ko door phenka to vo bhayanak ladki phir se saloni ke samne aa gayi aur kuch budbudane lagi...magar isse pahle hi saloni ne ek maha pret ko uske upar chhod diya jisne uss ladki ko utha kar patak diya...apne samne maha pret ko dekh kar vo bhayanak ladki adrishya ho gayi...uske adrishya hote hi maha pret bhi gayab ho gaya.

Lekin agle hi pal vo ladki phir se aa gayi, shayad uska mantra poora ho chuka tha aur agle hi kshan ek maha pishash ne saloni ko piche se aa kar daboch liya..saloni uski pakad se bebas ho chuki thi..vo pishach uska bhakshan karne hi wala tha ki tabhi ek thappad uske gaalo par jor se pada aur vo udte huye deewar se ja takraya...saloni aur uss ladki ne chounk kar udhar dekha to vaha mujhe khade huye paya.

Vo ladki—oohhhh..tummm...lekin tummm jindaa kaisee hoo sakte ho.... ? aur yaha tak pahuche kaise... ?

Raj—mujhse bhidne se pahle mere baare me jaan lete to achcha hota.....koi baat nahiii, ab achche se jaan jaogee

Saloni—rajjjjj tumm aa gaye...shukra hai.

Ladki (gusse me)—achcha hua ki tum khud hi yaha aa gaye....ab tumhe koi nahi bacha sakta.

Raj—theek hai...lekin jara jaldi karna..mere paas time nahi haai teri inn bakwash baato ke liye...isliye tere paas jitni bhi shaktiya hain unhe ek baar me hi jagrit kar le.....main tujhse vada karta hu, jab tak tu vaar karte karte thak nahi jayegi main tujh par koi vaar nahi karunga..aur jab karunga to kewal ek hi vaar karunga dusra nahi.

Ladki (jor se)—maha pishach utho...apne lakshya ko poora karo...jao..khatam kar do usko

Raj—vo ab kabhi nahi uthega...pret yoni se mukt ho gaya hai vo ab..kewal haddiyo ka dhancha bacha hai...kisi aur ko bula jo isse bhi jyada taqatwar ho.

Ladki—ab dekh tu tera kya haal karti hu main...

Agle hi pal usne ek brahma rakshash ka smaran kiya aur vo kuch hi der hi attahas karta hua vaha prakat ho gaya.. usne usko meri taraf jane ka ishara kar diya...vo ishara milte hi tezi se meri oor aaya aur phir beech raste se hi jitni tezi se aaya tha uski double tezi se vapis lout kar gayab ho gaya....ye dekh kar vo hairan rah gayi ki aisa kaise ho sakta hai kyon ki kisi brahma rakshash ko siddh karna aur usko harana bahut badi baat hai.

Uske paas jitni bhi shaktiya thi lagbhag sabhi ka usne aahvahan kar liya lekin koi kuch nahi kar saka...bhoot, pret, chudail, dakini, shakini, betal, pishach, maha pret, mashan, brahma betal.aadi.....aadhe se jyada se mujhe dekhte hi vapis bhag gaye aur jo paas aaye vo mere thappad ki maar kha kar uss yoni se mukt ho ke yamlok pahuch gaye.

Raj—bas ab tera kaam khatam.....ab vaar karne ki bari meri.

Ladki (ghabra kar)—kkk...koun ho tummm..... ? meri koi bhi shakti tumhe nuksan kyo nahi pahucha saki….? Mujhe maaf kar do... ?

Raj—maine tumhe pahle bhi kaha tha ki mere baare me jaan lete to achcha hota.....ab der ho chuki hai.

Saloni—saajannn…hum isse yaha ke bare me jankari hasil kar sakte hain.

Raj—koi jarurat nahi hai…….iska samay khatam hota hai ab.

Vo ladki (shocked)—kyaaaaaa…? Tummmm saaajjjjjaaann hoooo…..?

Aur maine apna hath aage kar diya aur agle hi pal mere hatho se aag nikalne lagi jisne uss ladki ko apne ghere me le liya aur phir uski dardnak cheekhe vaha goonjne lagi…..in cheekho ki awaz sun kar neha bhi hosh me aa gayi aur jaise hi usne uss aag ki roshni me mujhe dekha to uth kar turant mujhse chipak kar rone lagi.

Neha (rote huye)—rajjj…isne mujhe bahut mara….dekh khoon bhi bah raha hai.

Raj—koi baat nahi…ab vo khatam ho chuki hai….sab theek ho jayega.

Maine apna ek hath unke sir par rakh diya aur agle hi pal unka ghaav bharne laga tezi se aur kuch hi kshan me vo poori tarah se theek ho gayi.

Neha (hairan)—arey…ye itna jaldi kaise theek ho gaya….?

Raj—vo sab chhodo aur chalo yaha se ab

Saloni—lekin baki logo ko hum kaha talash karenge.... ?

Raj—chalo...mujhe pata hai vo kaha milenge.

Main dono ko sath lekar ussi kund ke paas aa gaya.....jaha mujhe kisi ki parchhayi dikhi thi....main vaha ek disha me chalne laga...dono mera hath pakad kar chal rahi thi..kuch door chalne ke baad hame kisi ke aane ki aahat sunayi di to main udhar mud gaya....tabhi mujhe dusri taraf se divya aati huyi dikhi...mere awaz dete hi vo bhag kar aayi aur mujhse amarbel ki tarah lipat gayi.

Divya (sisakte huye)—mujhe laga tha ki kahi phir se na kho du tumhe.... ? kya karu doodh ka jala chhachh ko bhi phoonk phoonk kar pita hai na.

Raj—tumhare rahte bhala mujhe koi maar sakta hai....chalo aao

Neha—payal aur paridhi jane kaha hongi.... ?

Raj—samne wale tahkhane me...chalo dono vahi milengi

Hum chalte huye samne ek chote se tahkhane jaise kamre me aa gaye…jaha dono ek kone me behosh padi thi…bandhi huyi….maine dono ko jaldi se khol kar seene se lagaya….mere seene se lagte hi dono ko hosh aa gaya..maine roshni phaila rakhi thi jisse vo turant mujhe dekhte hi chipak ke rone lagi..badi mushkil se dono ko samjha kar shant kiya maine.

Raj—tum dono yaha kaise….?

Payal (sisakte huye)—pata nahi kisi ne hame yaha la kar patak diya andhere me.....hamne ek bar yaha se bhagne ki koshish ki to kisi ne phir se hame ghasit kar baandh diya aur phir pata nahi kaise hum behosh ho gayi.

Raj (mann me)—ohhh..to inn dono ki parchhayi dikhi thi mujhe uss kund se upar aate samay.

Raj—khair ab main aa gaya hu...chinta ki koi baat nahi hai.

Payal (sisakte huye)—tu kaha chala gaya tha, mujhe chhod kar...agar tujhe kuch ho jata to..ab hum yaha nahi rukenge

Raj—bina iss tilism ko tode hum yaha se bahar nahi nikal sakte.

Payal—kyo nahi nikal sakte....vo darwaja ya phir uss khidki se bahar ja sakte hain.

Raj—tilism me kewal andar aane ka rasta hota hai, usko tode bina bahar jane ka koi rasta nahi hota...sab raste band hote chale jate hain, jaise jaise hum andar jate jate hain uske.

Neha—to phir kaise tootega ye tilism….?

Raj—chalo mere sath….mujhe pata hai ki ye kaise tootega…..? lekin usse pahle mujhe minakshi tak pahuchna hoga.

Divya—minakshi kaha hai….?

Raj—chalo dekhte hain usko bhi…

Main sab ko lekar uss kund me dhire dhire utarne laga……jaise hum niche pahuche to sab hairan rah gayi….main singhasan ke karib pahuch kar niche bane tahkhane me sab ke sath jane laga ab.

Neha—iss qile me kitne tahkhane hain baap re….?

Andar utarte huye akhir hum niche pahuch hi gaye…..tabhi meri nazar ek kamre par gayi…ye vahi kamra tha jisko maine behoshi ke dauran dekha tha kintu iske andar kya hai ye dikhayi dene se pahle hi mujhe hosh aa gaya tha.

Main jaise hi uss kamre ke karib pahucha to…achanak vahi madhur geet phir se mujhe sunayi dene laga

Upar Ambar Niche Dharti, Beech Me Hain Dil Ke Afsaane
Afsaano Dard Hai Kitna, Pyar Ke Dushman Ye Kya Jaane

Payal—ye to phir se aa gayi yaha bhi gana gaate…picha hi nahi chhod rahi hai, kalmuhi…. meri kulhadi ghar me bhool gayi warna isko batati…..mujhe ghasit rahi thi, tabhi gardan kaat deti iss karamjali ki

Maine ankhe band kiya to ek hath me mombatti aur dusre hath me machis aa gayi……maine usko jalakar divya ko pakda diya….vo geet vaha goonjta raha.

Raj (jor se)—Rajlaxmi samne aa jaooo

Neha (shocked)—ye rajlaxmi koun hai..... ?

Raj—vahi jo payal chhankate huye gaana ga rahi hai…..Rani Rajlaxmi

Aur phir payal ki chhan…chhan karti awaz paas me aane lagi……aur phir vo hamare samne aa gayi…ye vahi aurat hai jisko maine singhasan par baithe dekha tha.

Rajlaxmi—to aapne mujhe akhir pahchan hi liya saajan

Payal—tum isko kaise jante ho….? Kab mile the tum isse….? Kya rishta hai tumhara iss kalmuhi se…?

Raj—didi..shantt…..sab samajh jaogi……aur vo sirf ek aatma hai

Neha (shocked)—kyaaaa…? Ye chudail hai…..?

Raj—ab aap shuru mat ho jana….yaha jis kaam ke liye aaye hain pahle vo karne do mujhe

Maine dhire se uss kamre ka darwaja khol diya…aur aage badhne laga…..kuch door jane par ek karagar dikhayi diya.. jaise hi main karagar ke karib pahucha to meri nazar salakho ke andar qaid bediyo se jakdi huyi ek ladki par padi jo apna sir jhukaye huye baithi thi…..karagar ke charo taraf mombatti jal rahi thi….charo deewar aur jamin par bas ek hi baat likhi huyi thi…vahi geet ke bol….jo shayad minakshi ne hi likhe the.

Raj (dard)—Minakshiiiiiiiiii

Meri awaz sunte hi vo turant apna sir upar ki aur phir vo mujhe dekhte hi chounk gayi….idhar ye sab bhi buri tarah se chounk gayi minakshi ko dekh kar (divya aur saloni ko chhod) kyon ki uski shakal aur paridhi ki ek jaisi thi.

Neha (shocked)—ye to paridhi ki hamshakal hai

Paridhi (hairan)—ye to mainnn hii huuu

Divya—haa didi…aap hi minakshi ho…lekin apne pichhle janam me

Minakshi kuch der tak aise hi mujhe ghurti rahi aur phir jor se cheekh maar kar rone lagi aur uth kar bhagne ki koshish ki to zanzeer me bandhi hone ke karan vahi dhadam se gir gayi.

Minakshi (cheekhte huye)—saajannnnnnnnnnn

Raj—minakshiiiii

Main jaise hi uss karagar ko kholne ke liye hath lagaya to kisi adrishya shakti ne mujhe piche dhakel diya..maine teen char baar prayas kiya lekin har baar asafal hi raha.

Raj (jor se)—koun hai …samne aao….?

"Hahahaha.....swagat hai saajannnn....akhirrr tummm aa hi gayeeee....mujheee ish din ki kab se pratiksha thiii..hahaha" aur phir vahi bhayanak sadhu hamare samne aa gaya jisko payal didi ne dekha tha.

Payal (bhag kar mujhse chipak ke)—rajjjj...ye....ye....ye...to vahiii sadhuuu haiii...jisko..maine uss bachche ki hatya karte huye dekha thaa.

"Haaaaa...vo main hi thaaaa....abbbb mainnn tummm sabkiiii baliii dungaaaa....hahahahaha .... aaj meraaa intazarrr khatam huaaa"

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Nice update

 

[Sanju]

Waiting bhai

 

[Zas23]

SAAJAN
UPDATE- 201​

Main jaise hi uss karagar ko kholne ke liye hath lagaya to kisi adrishya shakti ne mujhe piche dhakel diya..maine teen char baar prayas kiya lekin har baar asafal hi raha.

Raj (jor se)—koun hai …samne aao….?

"Hahahaha.....swagat hai saajannnn....akhirrr tummm aa hi gayeeee....mujheee ish din ki kab se pratiksha thiii..hahaha" aur phir vahi bhayanak sadhu hamare samne aa gaya jisko payal didi ne dekha tha.

Payal (bhag kar mujhse chipak ke)—rajjjj...ye....ye....ye...to vahiii sadhuuu haiii...jisko..maine uss bachche ki hatya karte huye dekha thaa.

"Haaaaa...vo main hi thaaaa....abbbb mainnn tummm sabkiiii baliii dungaaaa....hahahahaha....aaj meraaa intazarrr khatam huaaa"

Ab aage....

Raj—tum apni koshish kar ke dekh lo....

“Tum mujhe….maha tantrik batuk nath ko chunouti de rahe ho….bachche…hahahaha….mere samne tum abhi bachche ho..saajannn,….hahahahaha” usne ghamand me haste huye apna naam bataya.

Raj—mujhe maarne se pahle ye to bata ki tum mera intazar kyo kar rahe the….?

Batuk—tumhe aur iss ladki ko maar kar main vo mani hasil karunga…aur phir poori duniya par meri huqumat chalegi hahahahaha

Raj—ye ladki to tumhari hi qaid me thi…phir ab tak kyo nahi mara isko…..?

Batuk—kyon ki vo mani mujhe tabhi mil sakti hai jab main tum dono ki bali ussi talwar se dunga….main iss vrihadpur qile se bahar nahi ja sakta…tilism me qaid ho kar rah gaya hu…..aur mujhe malum tha ki tum vo talwar le kar isko bachane yaha jarur aaoge….isliye tumhara intazar tha mujhe….sath me ye divya aur vo talwar bhi meri hogi..hahahaha

Raj—jab mujhe yahi maar doge to meri bali kaise doge phir…..?

Batuk—mujhe pagal samjha hai…..main abhi tumhe apni shaktiyo se kewal apne vash me karunga.

Raj—jab tum yaha se bahar nikal hi nahi sakte to qaid kaise kiya iss ladki ko….?

Batuk—ye kaam maine apni shaktiyo ke dum par kiya hai…..bas ab bahut hua…ab marne ke liye taiyar ho ja…

Raj—mere baare me jaan lete to tumhare liye achcha hota…khair koi baat nahi ab tumne ye mouka kho diya hai

Batuk nath (jor se)—mujhse takrayega….ye dekh….

Aur phir usne bhi vahi prahar karne shuru kar diye…jo vo ladki kar rahi thi…aur yaha bhi unka vahi anzam hua….ye dekh kar batuk nath soch me pad gaya…ab uska ghamand me hasta hua chehra gambhir ho chuka tha.

Raj—kyaaa huaa…jhandu baam….tera tarkash khali ho gaya kya…..?

Batuk (gusse me)—meri beijjati karta hai…..mere naam ka uphaas udata hai….? Tujhe kya lagta hai ki tune kuch tantra mantra sikh liye to batuk nath ka bhi muqabla kar lega….? Ab dekh tu meri asli shaktiya…

Vo ankhe band kar ke mantra jaap karne laga…..main vaise hi khada raha chup chap…maine sab ke charo oor pahle hi suraksha kawach bana diya tha jisse unko koi nuksan na ho sake.

Mantra jaap uska poora hote hi usne meri taraf phoonk diya aur mere sharir me achanak aag lag gayi, jise dekh kar vo jor jor se hasne laga, par agle hi pal vo aag gayab ho gayi..mujhe sahi salamat dekh vo chounk gaya.

Agli baar usne apne mantra se hamari taraf hazaro ki sankha me saanp paida kar diye lekin jaise hi vo hamare kawach ke karib aaye vaise hi vo aag me jhulasane lage aur rakh ka dher ban gaye.

Raj—koi badi shakti ho to prahar kar ye kya bachcho ki tarah khel raha hai….?

Batuk—ab tujhe koi nahi bacha sakta…..hahaha

Usne phir se ek vishesh mudra me baith kar mantra jaap karne laga…main samajh gaya ki ab ye kisi maha shakti ka aahvahan kar raha hai…aur phir vaha joro ki hawa chalne lagi…kankad patthar yaha waha udne lage…akhir batuk nath ne kisi vikral shakti ka aahvahan kar hi liya tha.

Uska mantra jaap samapt hone ke kuch hi kshan me vaha jor ka attahas goonjne laga….aur agle hi pal vaha ek maha bhayanak dikhne wali shakti prakat ho gayi…uska bhayanak aur vikral roop dekh kar sabhi darr ke maare mujhse chipak gayi aur ankhe band kar li.

Uska poor sharir ekdam kala tha….badi badi lal ankhe….bade nakhun…lal badi si ghutne tak jhulti jeebh..aisi ki agar sapne me bhi koi dekh le to phir dubara uski ankh na khule, sidhe swarg sidhar jaye.

main samajh gaya ki ye Kapaal Malini hai….maha shakti maa maha kali ki ganika hai kapaal malini…. karodo me koi virla hi inko siddh kar pata hai..inki sadhna karne me 99% mrityu nishchit hoti hai…sadhna me jara si bhi chook matlab mout pakki…jisne kapaal malini ko siddh kar liya vo vastav me maha tantrik kahlane ke yogya hai.

Kapaal malini (gusse me)—meraaaa aahvahannnnn kisssss liye kiyaaaa haiiii murkhhhhhh….? Jaldiiiii bataaaa warnaaa tujheeeee kachchaaaaaa chabaaaaaa jaungiiiiiiii.

Batuk (hath jod kar darr se kaampte huye)—main vivash tha mahadevi…mujhe kshama kare….ab aap hi meri sahayta kar sakti hain.

Kapaal Malini (gusse me)—bataaaa kiskiiii mouttttt ke liyeeeee mujheeeee bulayaaaaa haiiiiiii……?

Batuk (meri taraf ishara karte huye)—uskiiiii maha shakti……uskiiiii mouttttt keeee liyeeeeee

Ishara milte hi vo maha shakti badi tezi se meri taraf lapki….unhe apni taraf aate dekh maine dono hath jod kar unhe pranam kiya……vo mere karib aa kar mujhe dekha aur phir ussi tezi se vapis lout gayi.

Kapal malini (kroadh me)—murkhhhh..tuneeee mujheee kiseee maarneeee kee liyeee bulayaaathaaa, uskoooo jiskoo kiii naa koiii devtaaa, naa danavvv, naa manavvvv…naaa hiii koiii aurrr maarrrr saktaaa haiiii…vo apniiii moutttt khuddd haii tune mujheee bula karrr meraaa samayyy barbadddd kiyaaa haiiii…..abbb mainnn tujheee marungiiiii.

Batuk (darr aur khauf se)—nahiiiiiiiii....mujhe mat maro

Batuk kapal malini ki baat sunte hi darr ke maare thar thar kaampne laga….aur apni jaan bachane ke liye idhar udhar bhagne laga....lekin tabhi kapal malini ne uski taang pakad ke apni taraf khich liya aur ek pair uske pairo ke upar rakh diya....vo hath jod kar kshama ki bheekh maangne laga.

Agle hi pal kapaal malini ne uske baal pakad ke apna bade bade nakhuno wala hath batuk nath ke muh me ghusa diya aur hath ko andar le ja kar uske pet ko phad diya....pet ko phad ke uska garam garam khoon pine lagi...phir uski gardan ukhad kar football ki tarah door phenk di aur uska dusra pair pakad ke beech se uske sharir ko cheer diya aur uske sharir ka poora maans khane ke jab kewal haddiya bachi to vahi phenk kar vo gayab ho gayi aur phir sab kuch shant ho gaya.

Kapaal malini ke vaha se jate hi maine chain ki saans li....aur phir sab ko ankhe kholne ko kaha..sab darte huye dhire dhire apni ankhe kholi..jab vaha koi nahi dikha tab kahi unki jaan me jaan aayi jo ki halak me atki huyi thi.

Payal—baap re...koun thi ye...itni maha bhayanak.... ?

Raj—aisa nahi bolte...vo ek devi thi....vo kewal dushto ka sanghar karti hain.

Maine uske baad karagar ke gate ko ukhad ke alag kar diya kyon ki batuk ke ant ke sath hi uska tantrik mayajal jo yaha phaila hua tha vo ab toot gaya tha.

Maine minakshi ki zanjeero ko tod ke alag kiya to vo meri baaho me jhul gayi....badi mushkil se uske muh se shabd nikal rahe the.

Raj—minakshii ankhe kholo..dekho main aa gaya huu..ankhe kholooooo

Minakshi (dhire se)—tummm……… aa gaye saajannnn......ab ...mainnnnn.....tumhariiiiii bahoooooo meinnnn chainnnn se marrrr sakungiiiiii…..dekho inn logo…ne..mujhe…kitnaaa…maraaa..haiii

Minakshi ke poore jism me chot ke nishan the….jagah jagah se khoon bah raha tha….uski ye halat dekh kar meri ankhe bhar aayi aur bakiyo ki bhi.

Raj—kisne kiya hai ye…aur tumhe yaha koun laya….?

Minakshi (rote huye)—ddd….devillllll…..usne …mujhe…bahutttt…maraaa…..chabukkkk se

Raj—chinta mat karo minakshi…jisne bhi tumhare upar hath uthane ki dhristata ki hai…usko saza jarur milegi

Divya—tumhe kuch nahi hoga minakshi…sab theek ho jayega

Minakshi (rote huye)—nahiiiii…divyaaaa……ab mujheee janaaa hogaaa….mainnn to beeta huaaa…kalll hu…aaj to samnee haiiiii…..saajannn mujhe bhi vahi par le chalo.

Raj—rajlaxmi…vo jagah kaha par hai…?

Rajlaxmi—chaliye main batati hu.

Phir rajlaxmi ke sath chalte huye hum uss kamre tak aa gaye jisko maine dekha tha…uss kund me ghusne se pahle maine divya ko meri jeb se vo locket nikalne ko kaha to usne jaise hi uss locket ko nikal kar dekha to vo buri tarah se chounk gayi aur meri oor dekhne lagi.

Raj—darwaja kholo divya.

Divya ki ankho me anshu the aur mere bhi...shayad hum dono hi ye samajh gaye the ki andar kya hai.... ? usne darwaje me bane saanche par uss locket ko fit kar diya aur phir dhire se darwaja khol diya.

Kamre ke andar full roshni phaili huyi thi.....kamre ke beecho beech ek chabutara (samadhi type ka) bana hua tha aur uss chabutare ke upar ek bahut badi mom batti lagi huyi jal rahi thi....chabutare ke nichle hisse me bade bade shabdo me likha hua tha....

“Upar Ambar Niche Dharti, Beech Mein Hain Dil Ke Afsaane..
Afsaano Mein Dard Hai Kitna, Pyar Ke Dushman Ye Kya Jaane..”

(Saajan – Divya)
Kaliyug, Year 340

Rajlaxmi—ye mombatti tabhi se jal rahi hai bina bujhe…iss kamre me andhera kabhi nahi hota

Minakshi—saajannn…mujhe bhi…aaj….apne….iss pyar …me…shamil…kar lo….divya ke sath….bas ..yahi ek..vinti hai…mere mahboob…..aaaaa..divya..main tumhare aage hath..jodti hu.

Divya—saajan ne tumhe swikar kar liya hai minakshi iss janam me bhi…aur jaldi hi tumhe tumhara haq bhi mil jayega.

Minakshi—aaa…tummm sach me…dhanya ho..divyaa….jabki uss haq ke..ke…liye…tum..khud hi sadiyo..se.intazar…kar..rahi ho lekin apna haq tumne..dusro ko diya hai

Divya—mera prem itna kamjor nahi hai minakshi ki ye mrityu mere pyar ko mere hriday se mita sake…. main hamesha se saajan ki thi..saajan ki hu..aur har janam me saajan ki hi rahungi….chahe mujhe kitni hi baar kyo na janam lena pade…..kabhi to uss bhagwan ko mere prem par taras ayega aur hum ek honge.

Raj—divya theek kahti hai…maine tumhe shamil to kar liya hai minakshi…iss janam me bhi maine tumhe swikar kar liya hai aur uska haq bhi jaldi hi dunga.

Minakshi—ab mujhe..koi gum nahi….aaaa…saajannnnn

Aur phir thodi der baad hi usne meri baaho me apna dum tod diya……uske marte hi minakshi ke jism se do jyoti nikli unme se ek to paridhi me sama gayi jabki dusri ja kar pari me vileen ho gayi.

Maine qile ke andar se hi lakdiya ekatthi karne ke baad ussi jagah par minakshi ka antim sanskar kiya….uske jalte hi uski chita ki bhasm chamakne lagi aur vo ekatthi ho kar ek mani me badal gayi…uski roshni lagatar tez hoti chali gayi sabko apni ankhe band karni pad gayi aur phir vo roshni mere andar sama gayi.

Uss roshni ke mere andar samate hi meri aur divya ki ankho ke samne ek drishya dikhayi dene laga….

5th Janam Ki Love Story

"Upar Ambar Niche Dharti, Beech Mein Hain Dil Ke Afsaane
Afsaano Mein Dard Hai Kitna, Pyar Ke Dushman Ye Kya Jaane"
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Ranga rang jashn ki raat ka mahaul tha.

Mouka hi kuch aisa tha….Vrihadpur rajya ke rajkumar Jitendra Kumar Singh jinhe ki sab pyar se Jitu kahte the, ko yuvraj banaye jane ka din nazdik aaya tha.

Pichhle hafte bhar se rajya me jagah jagah tarah tarah ke ranga ranga karyakramo ki dhoom machi thi…kahi bedaniyo (tawayaf) ke naach ho rahe the. To kahi talwar bazi ke kartab dikhaye ja rahe the.

Kahi masti bhari mahfile saji thi, to kahi malla yuddh ke muqable ho rahe the….kahi saanp newle ki ladayi chal rahi thi, to kahi murgo ki muthbhed ho rahi thi.

Mandiro par nayi patakaye aur naye parcham fahra rahe the......raj kumar Jitu ko sabhi aas mani ashirwad hasil ho, iske liye rajya ka koi mandir aisa nahi tha, jisme aartiya na ho rahi ho aur bhog na lag raha ho.

Chhawni me shama hi alag tha….madmast hathiyo ko jaise jung ke liye sajaya gaya tha…ghodo ki jeene aur lagame mom ki polish se chamkayi gayi thi….unki kalangi ke liye rangeen pankho ke guldaste banaye gaye the.

Vrihadpur me jalte chirag deeye aur mashale ussi tarah gini nahi ja sakti thi jaise aas maan ke taare nahi gine ja sakte hain…..darbar ke mantriyo aur sabhi darbariyo ki haweliyo me sugandhit drivya ke chhidkav ke liye shaam se hi mashkachi utar pade the.

Raj Mahal ki sidhiyo par to khaas taur se gulab jal aur kewde ka chhidkav kiya gaya tha…aas paas ke chote bade rajyo ke raja aur prati nidhi log ek din pahle hi rajya ki rajdhani me pahuch chuke the.

Akhir raj kumar Jitu kumar ko kal yuvraj ki padwi ur rajya ke senapati ka ohada milne wala hai….to phir raat rangeen kyo na ho…? Vishesh mehmano ke liye vrihadpur ke qile ke rang mahal me shandar intazam kiya gaya tha.

Vaha ka shama to dekhte hi banta tha shabab aur surur ki mahfil ka apna rang tha…..Jaydev ka sitar, ustad munna ki sarangi, bhola pandit ka tabla aur raj nartaki keshar ke ghungharuo ki jhankar se rang mahal goonj raha tha.

Raj mahal ke naukar daud bhag rahe the aur jaam chhalak rahe the….tarah tarah ke misthann aur gola kabab ki mahak se rang mahal gamak raha tha.

Mor pankhi pankho se heena ki fuhare baras rahi thi aur tamam rajya ki hardil aziz kamsin nrityangna keshar bade hi purjosh andaz me nritya kar rahi thi….aur nachne ke sath uske gaane aur dilkash adaaon ka daur jari tha.. vo jhoom jhoom ke ga rahi thi……

Mori Gagri ko Neer Raja Chhalak na jaye...
Sari bheegi, Chunri bheegi, Choli bheegi jaye..
Main Mari Jaoon Sharam ke Maare, Mora Joban bheego jaye...
Mori Gagri ko Neer Raja, Chhalak na Jaye

Rang Mahal me waah..waaho aur dil ki kachot se nikli aago ne to mahfil ka rang hi badal diya…. ghungharuon ki jhankar ke sath hi sone ke sikko aur abhusano ki bauchhar hone lagi….to keshar ne apni ankho ke teer chalate huye sabhi mehmano ko ghayal karte huye apne ghungharuon, ko madhyam gati par la kar geet ki dusri kadi ko pesh kiya.

Joban Ko Hi Bojh Bahut Hai……

Munna ustad ki sarangi ne taaro ko sambhal keshar ki baat ki waah waahi ki aur bhola pandit ke table ne gamak ke sath phir keshar ko pukara…..to thirakti, chamakti keshar ne phir waar kiya…

Joban Ko Hi Bojh Bahut Hai…..

Tabhi kisi diljale mehman rajkumar ki awaz aayi thi—Jalim…! Yeh to jahir hai….hum ye bojh utha lenge.

To keshar ne usko jhuk kar baar baar salaam karte huye raj kumar Jitu Singh ko dekha tha jo apne gale ki dasvi mala ko utar rahe the…keshar ki adaaon me ijafa hua aur vah ek thumka lekar gaane lagi….

Joban Ko Hi Bojh Bahut Hai, Pani Bharne Kaise Jaoon..
Mori Gagri Uthye Na Mo Pe..
Pag Pag Thokar Khauun..
Mori Patli Kamar Raja Lachak Na Jaye....

Iss baar kartik ki harmonium ne mouke ko pakda....harmonium par kartik ki ungliya thirak uthi aur uske parde saanse khich khich haafne lage....ustad munna ki sarangi, bhola pandit ka tabla, kartik ka harmonium, jaydev ka sitar vadan aur keshar ke ghungharuon ne vah shama baandh diya tha ki mehman tadap tadap uthe.

Aisa jashn to aas paas ke pachaso rajyo me kabhi nahi manaya gaya...sab log surur me the aur keshar ki adaaon par nichhaawar huye ja rahe the....sarangi, table, harmonium aur ghungharoon ka madmata sangeet sari mahfil par haavi ho chuka tha.

Heena ki fuhar karte pankhe madhoshi ko badhawa de rahe the aur mithaiya apna alag hi rang dikha rahi thi.

Nritya sangeet aur shabab ke sath madira ne poore mahaul me unmaad bhar diya tha....log apne apko bhool gaye the dil ki har dhadkan keshar ke madak geet ka bol ban gayi thi.

Rajkumar Jitu Singh ne sura, sundari aur sangeet ke unmaad me jhumte mehmano par ek nazar daali aur phir samne thaal me rakhe heere jewarat keshar ke thirakte pairo ki taraf uchhal diya aur uth khade huye...geet ke bol aur sangeet ke sur dhire dhire dhime hote chale gaye.

Raat aadhi se adhik beet chuki thi....nagar ki attalikao, haweliyo aur rajprasado parjag magati battiya bujh chuki thi aur tab tak akash ke seema heen vistar ko roundti umadti ghumadti kali kajrari ghataon ne amavas ki raat ki kaalima ko aur bhi gahra tatha bhayanak bana diya tha....iss chhor se uss chhor tak aas maan par ek nanha sa tara bhi dikhayi nahi de raha tha.

Vrihadpur rajya ke niwasi din bhar ke raag-rang, nritya-sangeet aur aamod-pramod se thak kar apne gharo me gahri need so chuke the....vrihadpur ke vishal durg me bhi gahri khamoshi aur khumari chha gayi thi, jise kabhi kabhi pahredaro ke kadmo ki aahte rah rah kar bhang kar deti thi.

Aaj se theek ek din baad vrihadpur ke maharaja shailendra singh apne ekloute putra rajkumar Jitendra Singh ko yuvraj ke pad aasin karne wale the....isliye pichhle ek saptah se vrihadpur ke raj mahal aur rajdhani hi nahi balki poora rajya tarah tarah ke utsavo aur samaroho me sarobar tha.

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Udhar dusri taraf dharti lok me vidhya ke behosh hote hi yamraj uske charo taraf chakkar kaatne laga, iss pratiksha me ki kab usko hosh aaye aur vo apna shikar kare.

Yamraj—Ye to behoshhhh ho gayiiiii.....mareee…huyeee ko..kyaaa maarnaaa……aise me mera khauf logo ke dil se kam ho jayega.....mujhe logo ki ankho me mout ka darr dekhne me bahut maza aata hai.....hoshhh me aane ke baaddd phirr aunga.. tab takkk koiii dusraa shikar dekhta huu.

Yamraj vaha se gayab ho gaya....vahi veer lagatar apni dhun me gadi chalaye ja raha tha....tab tak uss sher ki parchhayi ne uss jagah ko apni giraft me le liya.

Veer ki gaadi jaise hi narmada nadi ke ek lambe pul ke upar pahuchi...tabhi uss sher ki parchhayi ne apna vishal muh khola aur ussi samay samne se tezi se aa rahe tuck ke driver ko usne side se hi khich liya aur vo uske muh me hath pair maarte chillate huye samata chala gaya....uss parchhayi ne usko nigal liya.

Ye dekh kar veer ke hath pair phool gaye....veer kuch samajh pata ki tabhi vo bina driver ka truck badi tezi se veer ki car se takra gaya……takrane ke baad car kafi upar tak uchhali aur phir BOOOOMMMM kar ke hawa me hi blast ho gayi….vo truck nadi me ja gira….tabhi….

"Veerrrrrrrrrrrrrrr"

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Note : Sorry Friends, Raat 11 baje se likhna shuru kiya to subah 8 baje update complete ho paya mushkil se....abhi office me khali samay mila to post kar raha hu.

From Update 201 to 250 will be reserved for 5th Janam ki Love Story.
Present ki story chalu rahegi kintu update 251 se...present ki kahani disturb na ho isliye din me present ki kahani chalegi aur raat me 5th janam ki love story.

Matlab ek update present ka hoga to dusra 5th janam ki story ka...Index updated hai aur aage bhi rahega, isse series barkarar rahegi.

Nice update

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Waah kya special update diya h aapne.
Man prasann ho gya.
Kya khoobsurt andaz h aapke.
Veer ko bacha hi liya or uski yaddasht bhi laut aayi.
Main nahi likh sakta bhai is update ki tariff ke bare me.
Lekin fir last me suspense ??
Hamesha yahi karo aap.
Fantastic or Kamal ka update bhai.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

SAAJAN
UPDATE- 253
Friendship Day, Naag Panchmi & Raksha Bandhan Special​

Iske aage usne padhna band kar diya aur diary ko band kar ke phir se bed ke niche chhupa diya….ab tak unki ankhe gusse se ekdam lal ho chuki thi.

Payal didi ne ek baar mujhe check kiya aur phir dhire se bed ke niche hath daal ke apni kulhadi nikal kar chupchap kamre se bahar nikal ke darwaja band kar diya aur ek kamre ki taraf badh gayi.

Agle hi pal haweli me kuch dardnak jordar cheekhe goonj uthi jisne poori haweli ko hila kar rakh diya……….

Ab aage……

Cheekh sunte hi meri aur baki sab ki need turant khul gayi….maine jaise hi bagal me dekha to vaha payal didi ko na pa kar fatatat kisi anhoni ki ashanka se darwaje ki taraf tezi se bhaga….lekin ye kya darwaja to bahar se band tha

Maine adrishya ho kar usko bahar se khol diya aur bhaga vidhya ke room ki oor….tab tak baki sab bhi jaag chuke the main jaise hi vidhya ke room me pahucha to dekhte hi dang rah gaya…..vaha ka scene dekhte hi sab ki ruh kaamp gayi.

Mamta (jor se)—vidhyaaaaaaaa

Avni (chillate huye)—mummyyyyyyyy

Samne farsh par vidhya khoon se lathpath halat me padi thi….uske dono hath aadhe kate huye alag pade the aur jeebh kati huyi jamin par padi thi…..vidhya dard se chhatpata rahi thi.

Abhi hum kuch samajh pate ki tabhi ek aur cheekh ne hame dusri taraf bhagne ko vivash kar diya….iss baar awaz nani ke room se aayi thi….sab tezi se unke kamre ki oor bhage magar tab tak jo hona vo ho chuka tha.

Yahi dasha nani ki bhi thi….fark sirf itna tha ki unka ek hath salamat tha,…baki ek hath aur jeebh ke kate huye tukde door pade huye the……unka haal bhi dard se behal tha.

Mamta (jor se rote huye)—maaaaaaa…

Rupaly—maaaaa jiiiiiiii

Sab bahut darr chuke the….kisi ko kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki ye kya achanak ho gaya…aise me sab ka dhyan sidhe payal didi par gaya….ki ho na ho ye uska hi kaam hai.

Madhu (rote huye)—ye sab payal ne hi kiya hai……hame aana hi nahi chahiye tha yaha par.

Geeta (rote)—hum to raj ko apna hi beta mante the isliye uske ek baar kahne par sab kuch chhod kar yaha uske paas aa gaye….magar hame kya malum tha ki yaha aisa kuch hoga….?

Rupaly (rote)—akhir apna khoon apna hi hota hai….ye baat hame aaj samajh me aa gayi….payal ye tumne theek nahi kiya.

Ruchi—lekin payal hai kaha…..?

“Main yaha hu…..itna jor jor se kyon payal payal chilla rahe ho….” Tabhi payal ne apne room se bahar aate huye kaha.

Raj (shocked)—abhi to didi room me nahi thi jab main utha tha tab…phir….?

Avni (rote huye)—lo aa gayi…isne hi mara hai meri mummy ko…..mummyyy

Madhu (rote huye)—akhir tumhe kya mila…maa ji ko maar kar….? Akhir unhone to sab ke samne apni galti maan kar mafi bhi maang li thi.

Payal (shocked)—kyaaaaa…..teri mummyyy aur nani marr gayiii….? (muh banate huye)--Chalo achcha hi hua...lekin ye dono to abhi bhi hil dul rahi hain.....yaha koi bada sa patthar nahi hai...? dono ke sir me patak deti hu to dhang se marr hi jaye.

Ruchi (jor se)—payalllllll……ye kya tarika hai baat karne ka….? Itni bhi akal nahi hai tere me…..?

Payal (jor se)—ssssshhhhhhhh……awaz niche kar ke baat kijiye didi….mujhe oonchi awaz me baat sunna bilkul pasand nahi hai phir chahe vo meri sagi badi bahan hi kyo na ho….samajh gayi aap…(ungli dikhate huye)….isliye aayinda dhyan rakhna.

Raj (chillate huye)—payal dididiii

Payal (jor se)—haaaa…tu bhi chilla mere hi uparrr….aur kisi ko kuch kahne ke liye to tere paas juban hi nahi rahti….. puch jara apni iss badi bahan se ye tab kaha thi jab itne sare log mil ke ek masum ko khanjar se maar maar ke uske seene ko chhalni kar diya tha….? Kaha thi vo bahan jab hospital me sab ke samne uske bhai ko ye vidhya jaan se maarne ki dhamki de rahi thi….? Tab inko gussa nahi aaya…lyo…?

Payal (chillate huye)—aur tumne kya kaha mami abhi abhi….? Raj ko tum logo ne apna beta samjha tha…? To mujhe bataogi jara ki tab vo maa kaha gayi thi….jab uske iss bete ko jaan se maarne ki baate ho rahi thi….? Tab to jara bhi gussa nahi aaya hoga…agar aaya hota to aaj ye nahi kahti ki apna khoon apna hi hota hai….aapne bilkul sahi kaha hai..ki apna khoon apna hi hota hai…tabhi to jis nani ne apke ussi bete ko jaan se maarne ke liye sazish rachi tab apko gussa nahi aaya lekin jab aaj usko apne kiye ki saza mili to aap logo ko gussa aa gaya kyo….? Agar samay par bechari paridhi ne apni jaan ki parwah kiye bina raj ki jaan na bachayi hoti to shayad aaj vo jinda bhi nahi hota….Kyon ki vo apki apni sagi saas hai isliye na aur raj kisi aur ka beta hai isliye…..tum logo ne ye sabit kar hi diya ki akhir apna khoon apna hi hota hai.

Payal (rote huye)--Aur kya kaha aapne ki unhone mafi maang li hai…? Maafi maang li hai to kya koi ehsaan kar diya tha kya uss budhiya ne….? apni ankho ke samne apni mout ko dekh kar usne mafi mangi thi kisi pashchatap me nahi.. samjhi. Aur uss budhiya ke mafi maang lene se uska gunah kam nahi ho jayega…..uske mafi maangne se kya vo samay phir se lout sakta hai…? Inn dono ke gunahoki vajah se ham apne bhai ka bachpan nahi dekh sake…uska jimmedar koun hai..? agar vo samay vapis nahi aa sakta to phir inko mafi milne ka bhi koi haq nahi hai…? Tum sab ne bhale hi maaf kar diya ho lekin main kabhi maf nahi karungi..kyon ki raj hi mera sab kuch hai….uske bina maine kaise jindagi gujari hai ye sirf main hi janti hu….

Payal (rote huye jor se)—sab ke sab matlabi hain….tum me se har koi sirf apne swarth aur matlab ke liye yaha rahne aaye the…isliye mujhe aaj tak nafrat rahi hai sabse….yahi vajah hai ki mujhe kisi ka bhi raj ke aas paas aana tak pasand nahi hai……aur haan…agar sab ko lagta hai ki maine inn dono ko mara hai…to theek hai….main kubul karti hu ki haa…maine hi inn dono ko mara hai….bhijwa do mujhe jail..mujhe koi gum nahi….lekin jo bhi mere raj ki taraf buri nazar uthayega uska yahi anzam hoga……

Payal didi ki baato ne sab ko jhak jhor kar rakh diya andar tak…..gusse me rote rote vo bahut kuch kadwa sach bol gayi…..ab koi bhi kuch aage nahi bol raha tha….tabhi vidhya phir se dard se karah uthi.

Payal (gusse se)—ye chudail abhi tak jinda haiii…..ruk abhi kulhadi lati hu…..jab tak iski gardan nahi kategi ye aise hi hilti dulti rahegi.

Payal tezi se apne room ki oor kulhadi lene bhagi to maine doud kar jaldi se usko pakad liya…..naina ne hospital saloni ko call kar diya…thodi hi der me ambulance aa gayi to dono ko hospital bhej diya…baki sab bhi apni apni gadiyo se hospital chale gaye.

Kewal ruchi didi, divya, chanchal, sandhya, paridhi, diksha, mala, shikha, munni, mrinal, priyadarshani aur maa hi rah gaye ghar me mujhe aur payal didi ko chhod kar…..maa ko maine hi rok ditha jane se unki tabiyat theek na hone ke karan…..ruchi didi ko payal ki baato se kafi dukh laga tha to vo sidhe apne room ke ghus gayi andar se band kar ke….sab ke sab mere sath mere hi room me aa gaye.

Maa (sisakte huye)—beta jo kuch hua vo theek nahi hua…..aisa nahi hona chahiye tha.

Raj—aap tension mat lo maa…sab theek ho jayega….main hu na

Maa (sisakte huye)—ab kya theek hoga beta…..jo anhoni honi thi vo to ho hi gayi…..dono lakh buri sahi lekin thi to vo meri maa aur bahan hi….

Maa ki iss baat par payal didi phir se kuch bolne hi wali thi kyon ki gussa to unka abhi thanda hua nahi tha…..lekin tabhi maine unko naa me ishara kar ke rok diya to vo chupchap ja ke bistar me chadar taan kar let gayi….maa baar baar hospital jane ki jid par adi thi to mujhe bhi ok kahna pada.

Maine baki sab ko ghar me rahne aur sone ko bol diya….maa divya, aur priyadarshani ke apne room me chali gayi… main bhi ready hone ke liye kapde nikalne laga tabhi…mujhe almari ke piche se khoon bahta hua dikhayi diya… to maine jhuk kar dhyan se dekha to vaha payal didi ki kulhadi rakhi huyi thi jis par taza khoon laga hua tha jo bahte huye bahar farsh tak aa gaya tha.

Khair maine apni rumal se farsh ko saf kiya aur khoon ke vo dhabbe mita diye….meri nazar didi par gayi to vo mere apni taraf palatate hi apna muh ghuma li dusri taraf turant…..

Raj—didi….didi…chalo utho…main hospital ja raha hu….taiyar ho jao…chalna nahi hai kya…..?

Payal (sisakte huye)—nahi tu ja….mujhe need aa rahi hai.

Raj—didi…aapne aisa kyo kiya….?

Payal (sisakte huye)—maine kuch nahi kiya

Raj—to phir apki iss kulhadi par khoon kis ka hai….?

Payal (sisakte huye)—unhi dono randiyo ka

Raj—phir bhi kahti ho ki aapne nahi kiya….?

Payal (sisakte huye)—jo sach hai vo maine bata diya….baki teri marzi hai jo manna hai maan…….tere chahne wale to bahut log hain…mere jane ya na jane se tujhe kya farak padega….? Lekin mera to tere siwa koi bhi nahi hai…main kya karu….tu hi bata de….?

Raj (baho me le kar)—phir kabhi aisi baat mat karna....aap ke aur divya ke bina mere jeevan ka koi arth, koi wajood hi nahi hai....baki sab se to mere ek ya do hi rishte hain kintu aapse mere kayi rishte hain...aap meri maa bhi ho aur pahli guru bhi, meri bahan bhi ho aur kal ko meri biwi bhi banogi....itne sare rishto se nata nahi toot sakta.

Payal (rote huye)—to phir tune mujhe kyo daanta...... ? duniya mujhe kuch bhi kahe mujhe koi parwah nahi hai…lekin jab tune bhi unn sab ka paksh liya to jarur mujhe bura laga.

Raj—bhala main apni jaan ko kabhi daant sakta hu……ummmmmmm…ab ready ho jao.

Payal—nahi…tu ja…mujhe kuch kaam hai…..

Raj—ok…aram karo

Payal (sisakte huye)—aur haan.....uss chanchal ko bhi le jana....nahi to phir kahoge ki aisa kyo kiya.... ? aur haa.. maine unn dono ko nahi mara….samajh gaya

Maine unko baho me thaam kar samjhata raha…jab vo kuch shant ho gayi to mujhe ruchi didi ka khyal aaya ki vo ab tak andar hi hain apne room me.

Raj (mann me)—pakka ro rahi hongi didi andar….?

Main vaha se sidhe ruchi didi ke room ke paas ja kar darwaja knock karne laga….lekin koi prati kriya nahi huyi…to maine naam le kar pukarne laga….tab kahi unhone jawab diya

Raj—ruchi didii…..darwaja kholiye.

Ruchi—betu…abhi mujhe need aa rahi hai….subah baat karungi..pls

Raj—theek hai didi….lekin mujhe ek baar aap ke gale lagna hai pls..didi

Ruchi—uffff betu jid mat kar…subah mil lena mujhse..abhi ja yaha se.

Raj—nahi..main aap se mile bina nahi jaunga….aap abhi mujhse nahi milna chahti to theek hai…main tab tak yahi darwaje ke bahar hi jamin par let kar subah hone ka intazar karunga.

Ruchi (turant darwaja kholte huye)—uffff…betu..tu bhi na…! arey ye niche kyo let gaya….? chal uth, aa ja andar

Raj—aap darwaja nahi khol rahi thi to main kya karta…..?

Ruchi (muh dusri taraf ghuma ke)—mujhse kya kaam hai tujhe….? Ja apni ussi payal ke paas…..main to teri dushman hu na.

Maine unko pakad ke apni taraf ghumaya…unka poora chehra anshuo se bhiga hua tha….mujhe pata hai ki mere jane ke baad iss pariwar ko tootne se bachane ke liye unhone kitni qurbaniya di hain….unhone apne apko kathor tak bana liya…..ruchi didi ki ankho me anshu mujhe bilkul bhi pasand nahi hain…maine apne hotho se unke anshuo ko pine laga.

Raj—didi….mere liye jaisi payal didi hain vaisi hi aap ho.....payal didi ki taraf se main aap se kshama mangta hu... unka swabhav to apko pata hi hai ki kaisa hai.

Ruchi (sisakte huye)—usne theek hi to kaha mere baare me….phir mujhe itna bura kyo lag raha hai…?

Raj—kyon ki vo aap se chhoti hai…isliye unki baat buri lagi…..unko maaf kar do didi…kya meri baat bhi nahi manogi aap…?

Ruchi (sisakte huye)—main bhi tujhe utna hi chahti hu betu…jitna ki payal……..lekin uska pyar sab ko dikhta hai aur main nahi dikha pati sab ko.

Raj—main janta hu didi….main jab sabse door tha aur tanhayi me rota tha to…apki bahut yaad aati thi.

“Jab Bhi Pochhe Hain Hatho Se Ye Anshoo Apne
Aapke Daaman Ke Kinaro Ki Bahut Yaad Aayi.”

Ruchi didi mujhse lipat gayi…..hum ek dusre ko samjhate rahe….tab tak maa ready ho gayi thi….maine didi ko bhi ready hone ko kaha aur sath me chanchal ko bhi…..kyon ki main ab koi naya lafda nahi chahta tha.​

Raj—divya tum aur priyadarshini jara dhyan rakhna sab ka.

Mrinal—main aap ke sath chalu khatfataal (aspatal)….?

Raj—theek hai chalo….aur usko khatfataal nahi balki aspatal ya hospital kahte hain…matlab ki dawakhana.

Mrinal—ohhhhhh…ab samjhi…..daba ke khana……lekin main to khana kha chuki hu….ab daba ke kaise khaungi…..?

Mamta (apna sir pakad ke)—raj iss akal ki dushman ko tu apne hi sath le kar aana…..main chanchal aur ruchi ke sath ja rahi hu.

Maa ke jate hi main bhi piche piche nikal pada…mrinal meri gadi me baith gayi….gadi me baithte hi uski bakbak phir chalu ho gayi aur mera bhi bheja khane lagi.

Raj—arey yaar ab mera bheja to mat khao…

Mrinal—lekin aap ne abhi kuch bheja hi kaha hai jo main kuch khaungi……? Kya bheja hai aap ne khane ko….?

Raj—ohhhh….mera sir

Mrinal—chheeee….vo main nahi khati…..main poor (pure) bajetarian (vegetarian) hu.

Raj—achcha vo sab chhodo..aur ye batao ki kya kahna chahti thi tum mujhse….?

Mrinal (serious)—asal me rajj..vo meri saheli hai na..vo priyadarshini…vo bahut achchi ladki hai….vo na..aap se..matlab saajan..se..

Raj—hmmm…. bolti jao main sun raha hu

Mrinal—asal me vo priyadarshini hai na vo asal me……kaise kahu….? Kya pata aap meri baat par yakin karenge ki nahi..? aap bhi mujhe pagal samajhne lagenge….lekin uski halat ab mujhse dekhi nahi jati…

Raj—kyo kya hua priyadarshini ko….theek to thi abhi…?

Mrinal—ab apko kaise samjhau apni baat ko…ki priyadarshini asal me,,,,,vo…vo…

Raj—yahi kahna chahti ho na ki priyadarshini ek dev kanya hai aur tum ek yaksh kanya……dono swarg lok se yaha mujhe dhoondte huye aayi ho…kyon ki tumhari saheli priyadarshini, saajan se prem karti hai.

Mrinal (shocked)—aap…ko…ye sab….kaise pata chala…..? jarur kisi ne hamari jasusi ki hai aur meri aur priyadarshini ki chhup kar baate suni hongi aur aap ko bata diya hoga usne….?

Raj—vo sab chhodo…..vaise yahi kahna tha na tumhe….?

Mrinal (shocked)—hmmmmm…….priyadarshini sadiyo se apki hi talash me iss lok se uss lok bechari dar dar ki mari bhatak rahi thi…..aur jab usko uska saajan mil gaya to bechari apne prem ka izhar bhi nahi kar pa rahi hai…aap se prem ka rasta usko mata gouri ne dikhaya tha….hame ab swarg lok bhi jaldi loutna hai…vaha sab hamari talash kar rahe hain……maharaj ne uska swayambar aayojit kar rahe hain……apne prem ka izhar na kar pane se aur aap se door jane ke darr se vo bahut dukhi hai…..akele me har samay roti hi rahti hai……meri yahi vinti hai ki meri saheli ke prem ki laaz rakh lijiye saajan ji.

Raj—hmmmmm….main ek baat saaf bata du..ki saajan ke hriday aur jism ke rom rom me kewal aur kewal divya hai.. divya meri ruh hai…aatma hai vo meri…..isliye apni saheli se kahna ki vo pahle divya ke samne apne prem ka izhar kare….aur agar divya ne haan kar di aur priyadarshini ka prem sachcha hai to usko kahna ki vo meri pratiksha kare main uske swayambar me avashya aaunga usko lene…

Mrinal—lekin koi manav jivit swarg nahi ja sakta….? To phir aap kaise ayenge vaha.... ?

Raj—vo sab tum mere upar chhod do…..agar mujh par yakin nahi to kam se kam maa bhagwati gouri maa par to vishwash banaye rakho apna.......jab unhone khud priyadarshini ke liye mujhe chuna hai to kyo aur kaise ka hal bhi vahi dikhayengi.

Tab tak hospital aa gaya to hamne apni baato ko vahi viram de kar gadi park kar ke andar chale gaye...... vidhya aur nani ko andar VIP cabin me rakha gaya tha jaha dono ka treatment chal raha tha…to main sidha veer ke paas aa gaya jaha soniya aur naina ke sath sath dono bua bhi thi…..aur vahi takla doctor veer ko check kar raha tha….uske takle ko dekhte hi mrinal ke hatho me phir se khujli chalu ho gayi.

Mrinal—chattttttttt......takle...tune to kaha tha ki subah tak isko hosh aa jayega.....abhi tak ye hosh me aaya kyo nahi... ?

Mrinal ne uske bina baalo ke sir par itne jor ka hath mara ki vo bechara doctor muh ke bal sidha jamin me gir pada.. aur vo doctor apne sir par huye iss hamle se gusse me tezi se sidha khada hua lekin jaise hi mrinal ko dekha to vaha se bhagne laga ye dekh kar mrinal ne paas ki table me rakhe lock ko utha kar jaldi se darwaje ke samne bhag ke khadi ho gayi.

Mrinal (jor se)—takle dhokk tarrrrr…bhagta kaha hai….? Jaldi se usko hosh me la nahi to ye loha maar maar ke tera takla phod dungi.

Raj—mrinal shant raho…..doctor aap apna ilaz jari rakhiye.

Doctor (hath jod ke)—mujhe yaha se jane dijiye raj sir…..lagta hai ki apke pariwar me sab ke sab WWF wale log hi rahte hain…..pahle ye ladka mere sir ke piche pada tha….phir iss ladki ne medical store wale ladke ko mara, phir iss ladki ne uss ladies doctor ke sath ….bechari vo aaj hospital hi nahi aayi, phir dusri ladki vo kya naam tha..haa..payal ne kal ek ka sir patak ke cabin ka kaanch tod diya, ghar jate hi kisi ne aaj do ladies ke hath pair kaat diye aur ab ye ladki mere sir ke piche padi hai……mujhe maaf kariye…main aaj se balki abhi se hi chhutti par ja raha hu.

Raj—doctor…suniye to sahi…..rukiye to sahi...

Lekin vo phir vaha nahi ruka aur bhag gaya….sab ne apna sir pakad liya mrinal ko phir se yaha dekh kar…..maine dusre doctor’s se baat ki lekin sab vaha aane se darr rahe the…..vo to achcha hua ki tab tak saloni aa gayi…

Aur vo veer ko check karne lagi….tabhi ek nurse vaha se nikli kuch marizo ka khana le kar….jis par mrinal ki nigah pad gayi to usne usko rok kar trolly me rakhi sabhi 8-10 khane ki thali utha kar chair par baith gayi.

Nurse—ye tum kya kar rahi ho…..?

Mrinal—ye chup ….ye khana mere liye bheja hai raj ne…..usne kaha tha mujhse daba ke khane ko….chupchap yahi khadi rah

Ruchi (jor se)—ye pagal ye kya kar rahi hai….?

Sab usko ankhe phade dekhte rahe….chair me baith kar usne jaldi jaldi khana shuru kar diya .aur usne paanch minute me sabhi thaliyo ka khana chatt kar diya.

Mrinal—abhi daba ke khana nahi hua…..ye moti aur hai kya….?

Itna sunte hi vo nurse trolly ko vahi chhod ke aise bhagi jaise usne koi bhoot dekh liya ho……sab hairat se mrinal ko hi dekhne me lage the.

Meera—veer sahi kahta tha ki raj pata nahi koun se jungle se isko pakad laya hai.

Raj—ab kya batau..? khair chhodo…doctor ab unn dono ki halat kaisi hai….?

Saloni—unn dono ki bhi bahut buri halat hai…….jisne bhi ye kiya hai usne bahut hi buri tarike se hath aur jeebh kaati hai dono ki…..vo jo bhi hai bahut hi khatarnak hai…..anyway maine dono ka treatment to kar ke dono ki jaan to bacha li hai…recover hone me samay lagega dono ko…..bina jeebh aur hath ke pata nahi ab kaisi zindagi hogi dono ki….?

Aise hi baato baato me raat gujar gayi…kisi ne palak tak nahi jhapkaya….aaj itni ghatnaye ho chuki thi ki need aati bhi to kaha se….? aur tabhiiiii…….

“Rajjjjjjjjjjjjj…..” naina didi ne chillate huye kaha

Unke chillane se hum sabhi chounk gaye.....dekha to veer ke muh aur sir se khoon bah raha tha.....uski halat phir se bigad gayi thi.

Raj—doctorrrr

Saloni—nurse jaldi se inhe OT me le chalo

Veer ko phir se jaldi jaldi operation theatre me le jaya gaya.....yaha ek baar phir hum sab behad pareshani me idhar se udhar ghum rahe the...kuch hi der me saloni bahar aayi....

Saloni—rajjj.....veer ki halat bahut critical hoti ja rahi hai....agar jaldi hi kuch na kiya gaya to phir uska bachna namumkin hai.

Raj (jor se)—doctorrrr....hoshhhh me rah kar baat karooo.....veer sirf mera dost hi nahi hai....vo mere jism me bahta hua lahoo hai voo.....usse kuch bhi hona nahi chahiyeee.....kuch bhi karooo...lekin usse bachaoooo

Saloni—main ek injection likh kar de rahi hu....isko jaldi se kahi se bhi le aao....yaha hospital me ye nahi hai...hamne lagbhag har jagah pata kar liya, par kahi nahi hai...kewal ye injection hi ab veer ki jaan bacha sakta hai....

Raj—jaldi se do mujhe.....

Saloni—ye lo...

Mrinal—main bhi sath me chalti hu...

Saloni ne mujhe ek injection ka naam likh kar diya to main tezi se bahar nikal gaya.....mrinal bhi mere hi sath aa gayi ….abhi itni subah subah...lagbhag sabhi medical store band hi the....main ek ghante tak sab jagah bhatakta raha lekin vo injection mujhe kahi nahi mila idhar veer ki saanse ab rukne lagi thi kyon ki uska khoon bahna hi band nahi ho raha tha.

Mrinal—ab kya kare…?

Raj—pata nahi

Main nirash ho kar ek jagah railway station ke bahar paan ki dukan ke paas rakhi chair par baith gaya… samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki kya karu.... ?

"Arey sir aap yaha...." ek aurat ne mujhe dekh kar nazdik aate huye kaha.

Raj—kya aap mujhe janti hain..... ?

Vo—kaisi baat karte hain sir.... ? bhala apko koun nahi janta.... ? sir main vahi nurse hu jisne apke ghar me rah kar mamta madam ka ilaz kiya tha jab vo coma se bahar aayi thi.....meri ladki ki padhayi ke liye aap ne hi to paisa diya tha...kyon ki uss samay mere paas uski fees jama karne ke liye paise hi nahi the....main bhala kaise apko bhul sakti hu.

Raj—ohhh..sorry mujhe dhyan hi nahi tha.

Vo—koi baat nahi sir.....lekin aap yaha road ke kinare kyo baithe hain..... ?

Raj—ye injection dhoond raha hu kahi mil hi nahi raha hai……

Vo (slip dekhte huye)—hmmmm....iss injection banane wali company me pichle dino aag lag gayi thi…jisse poori company hi jal ke rakh ho gayi….kafi log maare bhi gaye….iska production band ho jane se ye injection bhi milna band ho gaya......vaise mere paas ek injection rakha hua hai agar uski date expire nahi huyi hogi to usko le lijiye aap

Raj—chalo jaldi chalo phir....

Mrinal—haa...haa..jaldi chaliye....hame vo unjuction (injection) bahut jaruri jai

Andha kya chahe do ankhe.....aur doobte huye ko tinke ka sahara bhi mil jaye to kaffi hota hai.....maine usko gadi me baitha kar turant uske ghar pahuch gaya jo ki adhik door nahi tha.....kafi der tak dhoondne ke baad usko vo injection akhir mil hi gaya....uski date expiry me abhi ek mahine ka samay tha.

Maine uska shukriya ada kar ke jaldi se vo injection le kar hospital ke liye nikal gaya....hospital pahuchte hi main gadi park kar ke jaise hi andar jane ko hua ki tabhi meri nazar deewar ke kinare baith kar roti huyi ek budhiya par chali gayi...uske paas teen char ladkiya bhi baithi ro rahi thi.....na jane mujhe kya sujhi ki mere kadam apne aap hi uski taraf badh gaye.

Raj—kya hua maa ji....aap ro kyo rahi hain..... ?

Aurat (roti huyi)—kya karoge jaan kar beta.... ? main to bas apni kismat par ro rahi hu.....hum garibo ki pukar to bhagwan bhi nahi sunta.

Raj—aap bataye to sahi ki akhir kya hua…shayad main kuch apki madad kar saka to mujhe behad khushi hogi.

Aurat (roti huyi)—ab kya batau beta……meri aur meri 9 jawan betiyo ki zindagi ka ek hi sahara mera beta hai....uski kamayi se hi ghar ka kisi tarah se daal roti chal rahi thi ki bhagwan se vo bhi nahi dekha gaya….aaj vo mera beta bahut bimar hai aur doctor kahte hain ki agar ye injection (parchi dikhate huye) jaldi usko nahi lagaya gaya to vah marr jayega…..maine apna khet girwi rakh ke uska ilaz kara rahi thi…sab jagah dhoond liya lekin ye injection kahi nahi mil raha hai…ab mera beta …mere budhape ka sahara ….ek maa ke liye iss badi dukh ki baat kya hogi ki iss umar me uska jawan beta uski ankho ke samne marr jaye….meri betiyo ka kya hoga ab….mera kya hoga…..? isiliye ro rahi hu aur kar bhi kya sakti hu….?

Ek ladki (roti huyi)—maa ab hamara kya hoga….? Jab bhaiya hi nahi rahenge to hum kis ko rakhi baandhengi… koun hamari har musibat me raksha karega…..?

Unka rona aur taklif sun kar meri bhi ankhe bhar aayi…maine dekha to uss parchi me ussi injection ka naam likha hua tha jo main abhi abhi veer ke liye le kar aaya tha.

Raj—maa ji, bhagwan kabhi kisi ki madad karne khud nahi aate lekin kisi na kisi ke madhyam se vo sachche logo tak apni madad pahucha dete hain….aap rona band kijiye aur ye lijiye vo injection….aur ja kar apne bete ki jaan bachaiye.

Mrinal—ye kya kar rahe hain…? Pagal to nahi ho gaye aap kahi…? Ye unjuction (injection) to veer ki jaan bachane ke liye bahut mushkil se dhoonda hai hamne.

Raj—veer ke marne se kewal ek hi jaan jayegi lekin yaha dus dus jaan ka sawal hai….main ek ki jaan ke liye itne logo ki jaan ki qurbani nahi de sakta.

Aurat (rote huye)—lekin beta main ye kaise le sakti hu.... ? tumne bhi to kisi ki jaan bachane ke liye hi ye laye hoge ek jaan bachane ke liye main kaise kisi aur maa ki god suni kar sakti hu.... ?

Raj—bas itna samajh lijiye ki bhagwan ne shayad apki madad ke liye hi mujhe yaha bheja hai....aur jaha tak rahi dusri maa ke god ujadne ki baat to jis upar wale ne jaise apki madad ke liye mujhe bhej diya vaise hi aage kaise madad karni hai ye sochna bhi uska hi kaam hai.....ye aap rakh lijiye.

Aurat (rote huye)—jug jug jiyo beta.....tum nahi nahi jante ki tumne aaj sirf ek admi ki nahi balki hum dus dus maa betiyo ki jaan bhi bachayi hai ye ehsaan kar ke......agar duniya me sach me koi bhagwan hai to ek dukhiyari maa ke dil se nikli ye dua hai ki zindagi ke kisi bhi yuddh me kabhi tumhari haar na ho.....tumhe hamesha kewal jeet hi nasib ho.

Raj—bas maa ji...aap ne itna kah diya....samajhiye mujhe sara jahan mil gaya....agar ye sch hi ki aatma me hi parmatma ka vaas hota hai to .kisi ke sachche hriday se nikli duao me ussi parmatma ki ichcha shakti shamil hoti hai aur unn duao ki taqat, kisi devi devta ke vardan ki taqat se kam nahi hoti..ab aap jaiye

Dusri ladki—sahab hum apka ye karz kabhi nahi chuka payenge marte dum tak...

Raj—maine koi ehsaan nahi kiya....bhala koi bhai bhi bhi apni bahno par koi ehsaan karta hai....ye lo mera card... kabhi bhi kisi bhi cheez ki jarurat ho mujhe call kar lena....

Teesri ladki (gale lag kar)--bhaiyaaa ...aaj se aap bhi hamare bhaiya ho

Raj—ab jao..der karna theek nahi....aur haa…..isse ek bhai ki taraf se Raksha Bandhan ka gift samajh lena.

Sab ladkiya—ye ab tak ka hamare jeevan ka sabse anmol gift hai, bhaiya

Aurat—jug jug jiyo beta

Mrinal (mann me)—tum sach me mahan ho saajan….aaj mujhe samajh me aa gaya ki kyon maa gouri ne meri saheli ke liye teeno loko me se sirf tumhe uske kabil chuna hai….? Aaj mujhe apni saheli ki taqdir par garv hai….Main tumhe aaj pranam karti hu saajan….

Unn sab ke jate hi main bhi andar ki oor chal diya….mere mann me ab kuch halkapan tha….main tez kadmo se sab ke paas pahuch gaya jaha rona dona chalu tha

Raj—kya hua..aise kyo ro rahe ho sab……?

Ruchi (sisakte huye)—betuuu…vo veer ki halat bahut jyada jharab hai…..doctor ne kaha hai ki ab koi chance nahi hai

Raj (jor se)—aise kaise chance nahi hai…? Doctor koi bhagwan hai kya...ki jo usne kah diya vahi hoga.... ?

Main tezi se operation theatre me gusse se ghus gaya...jaha veer ki halat dekhte hi mera sara gussa ekdam se thanda ho gaya.

Saloni (mayus nam ankhe)—ab der ho chuki hai rajjj.....veer ki saanso ki ulti ginti chal rahi hai ab.

Raj (jor se)—doctor---aise kaise ulti ginti chalu ho jayegi.....abhi main jinda hu......tum apna kaam chalu rakho aur main apnaa

Main tezi se cabin se bahar nikal ke hospital me bane ground ke shiv mandir me aa gaya..aur shiv ji ko pranam kar ke..vahi gade trishul se apne hath ki nas kaat di.....khoon ka favvara nikalne laga.

Raj (mann me)—prabhu...aaj naag panchmi hai.....lekin aaj main apka abhishek doodh se nahi balki apne rakta se karunga.....aur ye rakta tab tak karta rahunga jab tak ki aap mere dost ko jeevan daan nahi de dete....uske badle aap meri jeevan bali swikar kare.

Maine apna hath shiv ling ke upar kar diya….hatho se aviral bahte rakta ki dhara se unka abhishek hone laga…poora shiv ling kuch hi second me rakta ranjit ho gaya.

Udhar ghar me....

Divya (chilla kar)—saajannnnnnnnnnnnnn

Uske aise jor se chillane se sab uth gaye,,,kyon ki sabhi ek hi room me the.....payal bhi apne room se nikal ke aa gayi..divya ki awaz sun kar..

Payal—gudiya kya hua..... ? tune chillaya kyo….?

Divya (pasine se bhiga chehra)—didi kuch to gadbad haiii…..mujhe abhi hospital jana hoga turant…

Iske baad divya kisi ki baat sune bina tezi se bahar nikal kar hospital ke liye nikal gayi…usko aise jate dekh bakiyo ke mann me bhi ashanka paida ho gayi to vo bhi rawana ho gayi.

Aur idhar lakh koshisho ke baad bhi veer ki hriday gati achanak band ho gayi....sab doctors ne nam ankho se uske upar kafan daal kar bujhe mann se bahar jane ke liye mude hi the ki akasmat tabhi veer ki saanse tezi se chalna chalu ho gayi......jiski dhwani computer screen par sunayi dene lagi.

Sabhi doctor’s saloni sahit chounk kar palat gaye aur hairani se kabhi screen to kabhi veer ko dekhne lage...saloni ke murjhaye chehre par to jaise ummid ki kiran jaag uthi...usne turant bhag kar veer ki saanso ki gati ko control kar ke normal karne ki koshish karne lagi...baki doctor bhi kaam me phir se jut gaye.

Divya hospital pahuchte hi bhagte huye sab ke paas pahuchi aur sab baat pata chalte hi turant andar cabin me jabardasti ghus gayi.....jaha saloni ne usko sab bataya...

Itna sunte hi vo phir tezi se hospital ke bahar ki oor bhagi....usko aise bhagte dekh sab chounk kar uske piche bhage divya ko jaise ki pata tha ki main kaha milunga vo sidhe ussi mandir me pahuch gayi.

Divya---saajaannnnn.....ye kya kar rahe ho.... ?

Tab tak sab vaha aa gaye aur samne ka scene dekhte hi sab buri tarah se ghabra gaye…..mandir ka poora farsh mere khoon se lal ho gaya tha….aur main shiv ling ke upar hi hath rakhe chipak ke ankhe band kiye baitha hua tha.

Mamta (jor se)—rajjjjjjj

Payal—rajjjjjjj

Ruchi—betuuuuuuu

Sab meri taraf mujhe pakadne ko doude to maine sab ko hath ke ishare se andar aane se mana kar diya….lekin divya nahi ruki aur vo mujhse aa kar lipat gayi….baki sab bhi nahi maane aur mere paas aane ke liye aage badhe magar tabhi pata nahi kaha se ek bada kala naag vaha aa gaya..jisko dekhte hi sab darr ke piche hat gaye.

Vo naag mere paas se hote huye ja kar shiv ling se lipat gaya…tabhi ek nurse ne aa kar bataya ki veer ab khatre se bahar hai aur doctor saloni ne mujhe bulaya hai.

Ye sunte hi maine bhagwan shiv ke charno me pranam kiya….divya ne apna dupatta phad ke mere hath me baandh diya jaha se khoon nikal raha tha….khoon kafi nikal jane ki vajah se mere hath pair bhi ladkhada rahe the.

Sab ko rote dekh main unke paas aa gaya, divya ki madad se….sabse pahle maine maa ko shant karne ki koshish ki….phir baki sab ko priyadarshini ki ankho me maine ek dard mahsoos kiya…aaj pahli baar maine apni baahe uske aage khol di..vo rote huye mere seene se lag gayi.

Priyadarshini (mann me)—mujhe kab tak tadpate rahoge saajan….? Kab samjhoge mere pyar ko….?

Raj (mann me)—mainto samajhne ko taiyar hu lekin tum samjhati hi kaha ho….?

Priyadarshini chounk kar mujhe dekhne lagi aur main sirf mushkura kar aage badh gaya..apni phoolan devi ke paas jo muh phulaye dusri taraf khadi thi.

Raj—aap mere gale nahi lagogi didi….lagta hai mujhe phir se dusre hath ki nas kaatni padegi ab.

Payal (rote huye)—chattaaakkkk…..muh tod dungi tera…..kya jarurat thi ye sab karne ki….? Agar tujhe kuch ho jata to mera kya hota…..? sab meri hi galti hai, mujhe akele chhodna hi nahi chahiye tha tujhko.

Mamta—isko jaldi andar doctor ke paas le chalo

Ek thappad lagane ke baad payal rote huye mujhse lipat gayi…..lekin unke thappad me bhi pyar chhupa hua tha…unhe chup karane ke baad sab andar aa gaye.

Raj—kahiye doctor…kaisi hai ab veer ki tabiyat….?

Payal—doctor pahle iska ilaz karo….baki sab baad me

Saloni—inhe andar le aao

Andar aate hi sabne pakad ke bed par lita diya…saloni ne jaise hi mere hath par bandha divya ka dupatta khola to sab chounk gaye….kyon ki ab mere hath me koi ghaav nahi tha….yaha tak ki dupatte me bhi khoon ka ek katra tak nahi laga hua tha.

Mamta (shocked)—ye kaise ho sakta hai….?

Ruchi—ghaav kaha gaya…abhi to tha….?

Neha—vo sab jane do…sab bhagwan bhole nath ki maya hai.

Mrinal (mann me)—sakhi tumhara saajan anmol hai.

Main abhi kuch kahne hi wala tha ki tabhi….

“Rajjjjjjjjjjjjjj” OT room se kisi ke chillane ki awaz sunte hi saloni vaha se chali gayi aur thodi der baad hi vo bahar aayi.. usne jo bataya , uske baad mera mann khushi jhum utha.

Saloni—rajjj…veer ko hosh aa gaya haiii…vo tumhe pukar raha hai…

Raj—kyaa sach me….mera yaar theek ho gaya…….

Main turant uske paas aa gaya aur mere piche piche baki sab bhi pahuch gaye….maine turant usko apne gale se laga liya….vo bhi lipat gaya….veer ki bahki bahki baato se sab chounk gaye….

Raj (nam ankho se)—tu theek ho gaya mere dost….tune mujhe pahchan liya….?

Veer (anshu bahate huye)—tu to mere rom rom me basa hai raj….main sab ko bhool sakta hu lekin tujhe aur tere dushmano ko kabhi nahi bhool sakta….marne ke baad bhi nahi…..tu theek to hai na…rajjj……tujhe kuch hua to nahi na….tu chinta mat karna….main ek ek ko maar dunga….jis jis ne bhi tujh par hath uthaya hai na….sab ko dekh lunga main…..

Raj (rote huye)—main janta hu dost….jiska tere jaisa dost mil jaye use aur kya chahiye……hum baar baar paida hote hain aur marte hain, phir paida hote hain….lekin har janam me hame baki sabhi rishte mil jate hain kintu sachcha pyar aur ek sachcha dost lakho baar janam lene ke baad bhi kisi kisi ko hi nasib hota hai.

Veer (shocked)—main to road me bhag raha tha….yaha kaise pahuch gaya….? Aur main itna bada kaise ho gaya…? Tu bhi bada ho gaya….? Ye sab log koun hain, raj……? Aur ye sab ro kyo rahe hain….?

Veer ki baato ne sab ko chounka diya....vo mujhe chhod kar kisi ko nahi pahchan raha tha.....lekin do log aise bhi the jinki ankho ke anshu thamne ka naam hi nahi le rahe the.

Veer—raajj.....meri dono didi ka kuch pata chala.... ? kaha hain vo…..?

“Veerrrrr…mere bhaiiiii” aur phir jor se chillate rote huye soniya aur naina didi bhag kar veer se lipat gayi aur rone lagi… sab ek baar phir se shocked rah gaye.

Raj (nam ankho se)—le mil le apni dono didi se…yahi hain dono ye soniya didi aur vo naina didi.

Veer (rote huye)—tum dono kaha chali gayi thi didi.... ? unn logo ne maa ko bhi maar diya….aur ye kya..tum dono bhi itni badi ho gayi..mere aur raj ki tarah….?

Soniya (rote huye)—haa..mere bhaii….hamne bhi tujhe bahut dhoonda….hame maaf kar de bhai….aaj tak hum dono teri talash me tadapte rahe….jabki tu hamare samne hi tha…par kabhi pahchan hi nahi paye.

Naina (rote huye)—rajj..tumne hame pahle kyo nahi bataya… ki veer hi hamara bhai hai…..?

Raj—bata ke fayda kya hota jabki uski yaad dast hi ja chuki thi…..isliye samay par chhod diya….ye meri taraf se aap dono ke liye Raksha Bandhan ka advance tohfa hai.

Soniya—hum dono iss tohfe ko pa kar bahut khush hain.

Raj—aur tujhe bhi mere dost…Friendship day par apni dono bahan milne ka gift mubarak ho.

Veer—rajj..mere bhaii…main apni khushi bayan nahi kar sakta.

Ruchi (shocked)—kya veer ki yaad dast ab louti hai….?

Raj—hmmmm

Neha (shocked)—iska matlab ki vidhya veer ki maa nahi thi….?

Raj—vo devki to nahi lekin yashoda jarur thi.

Veer—raj..tune bataya nahi ki ye sab koun hain….?

Naina—main batati hu.....ye sab raj ki family hai.

Mamta—raj ki family nahi..balki tum sab ki bhi family hai...aur main tum teeno ki maa hu...samajh gaye

Phir naina di ne veer ka sab se parichay karwaya….veer bhi sab se mil kar bahut khush hua….maa ne usko kah diya ki ab se vo hi teeno ki maa hai .. jisse teeno bhavuk ho gaye.

Veer (bhavuk)—shukriya raj...aaj tune mujhe meri maa se mila diya....sath hi itna bada pariwar aur bahne pa kar main bahut khush hu aaj....shukriya mere bhai.

Raj (mann me)—mujhe kshama karna mere dost……tum teeno ko milane me mujhe itna waqt lag gaya….maine hamesha hi tere mann me anath hone ki bhavna aur dard ko mahsoos kiya hai…sath hi soniya aur naina didi ke dilo me tujhse milne ki tadap ko mahsoos karta aaya hu…..

“Dost Wo Hi Jo Apko Apna Maan Sake
Apke Har Gum Ko Bin Kahe Jaan Sake
Aap Chal Rahe Hon Tez Barish Mein
Magar Pani Mein Bhi Apke Aanshoo Pahchan Sake..”
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Mrinal—ye balatkari….mujhe bhi nahi pahchanta kya….? (ek doctor ka collar pakad kar)… Ye…baal wale dokk tarrrr…vo takla kaha hai…..? bula usko jaldi se abhi uska takla bajati hu…..sala vo takla kal bol raha tha ki ye subah tak theek ho jayega….? Subah hote hi theek hone ki jagah ulta isne mujhe pahchanna hi band kar diya….! Bulao uss takle ko nahi to main tujhe hi takla kar ke tera takla bajaungi.

Doctor (darte huye)—mujhe maaf kijiye madam…..main baal bachche wala admi hu.

Mrinal—vohi to…..ab se tu baal bhool ja….kewal bachche wala admi rahega.

Veer (hairan)—arey rajjj, ye phuljhadi koun hai….?

Raj—ye vahi hai jisne teri jaan bacha kar tujhe nayi zindagi di hai…..haan, thodi shararti to hai, kintu dil ki bahut achchi hai….bas kabhi kabhi sir vagairah phod deti hai..baki sab theek hai

Veer (shocked)—kyaaaaaa….? Isko tu..thodi si shararat kahta haiiii….?

Mrinal—ye balatkarii…kya bolaaa….?

Veer (saham kar)—nahii…nahii maine kuch nahi kaha….(mann me)—baap re….ye to badi hi khatarnak item lag rahi hai.

Priyadarshini ne mrinal ko pakad liya warna vo sach me uss doctor ko bajane hi wali thi….Tabhi saloni ne mujhe bataya ki police aati hai vidhya aur nani ke case ki jaanch padtal karne to main aur ruchi didi ja kar unse baat karne lage...maine unko kisi tarah taal diya vaha se.

Ruchi (dhire se)—betu…maine ghar me lage sabhi cctv ki footage check ki thi…..unn dono ko payal ne hi mara hai.

Raj (hairan ho kar mann me)—ye kaise ho sakta hai.... ? jabki payal didi ne to mujhse kaha ki unhone inn dono ko nahi mara….aur payal didi mujhse kabhi jhuth nahi bolti……to agar inn dono ko payal didi ne nahi mara to phir mara kisne…..?

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UPDATE- 251​

Udhar dusri taraf dharti lok me vidhya ke behosh hote hi yamraj uske charo taraf chakkar kaatne laga, iss pratiksha me ki kab usko hosh aaye aur vo apna shikar kare.

Yamraj—Ye to behoshhhh ho gayiiiii.....mareee…huyeee ko..kyaaa maarnaaa……aise me mera khauf logo ke dil se kam ho jayega.....mujhe logo ki ankho me mout ka darr dekhne me bahut maza aata hai.....hoshhh me aane ke baaddd phirr aunga.. tab takkk koiii dusraa shikar dekhta huu.

Yamraj vaha se gayab ho gaya....vahi veer lagatar apni dhun me gadi chalaye ja raha tha....tab tak uss sher ki parchhayi ne uss jagah ko apni giraft me le liya.

Veer ki gaadi jaise hi narmada nadi ke ek lambe pul ke upar pahuchi...tabhi uss sher ki parchhayi ne apna vishal muh khola aur ussi samay samne se tezi se aa rahe tuck ke driver ko usne side se hi khich liya aur vo uske muh me hath pair maarte chillate huye samata chala gaya....uss parchhayi ne usko nigal liya.

Ye dekh kar veer ke hath pair phool gaye....veer kuch samajh pata ki tabhi vo bina driver ka truck badi tezi se veer ki car se takra gaya……takrane ke baad car kafi upar tak uchhali aur phir BOOOOMMMM kar ke hawa me hi blast ho gayi….vo truck nadi me ja gira….tabhi….

"Veerrrrrrrrrrrrrrr"

Ab aage.....

Truck se takrate hi jaise hi car hawa me udti huyi upar gayi vaise hi blast hone se pahle side window toot kar niche girne se veer bhi niche girne laga aur ussi kshan car me blast ho gaya.

Jaise hi car me blast hua tabhi mrinal adrishya halat me vaha pahuch gayi aur jor se veeerrrr kah ke cheekh uthi jo ki niche girte huye bas pul ki railing se takrane hi vala tha ki vaise hi mrinal ne jaldi se bhag kar usko pakad liya.

Mrinal ne usko railing me takrane aur nadi me girne se to bacha liya lekin samne se truck ki takkar ki vajah se usko behad gambhir chote aayi thi….veer ke sir se bahut jyada khoon bah raha tha aur vah behoshi ki halat me tha.

Mrinal ko kuch samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki vo kya kare.... ? shaktiya to uski bandhi huyi thi to unka prayog kar ke theek karne me asmarth thi….yaha kshan prati kshan veer ki hriday gati dheemi hoti ja rahi thi….antatah usne adrishya halat me hi turant usko le kar hospital aa gayi aur visible ho kar usko god me uthaye tezi se andar bhagi aur doctor ke cabin me ghus gayi jaha vahi takla doctor baitha tha….uske aise achanak tezi se andar aane aur phir veer ki halat dekhte hi vo bhi chounk gaya.

Mrinal (chillate huye)—ye…takle dok tarrrr…jaldi se ilaz kar nahi to tera ye takla aaj phod dalungi….dekh kya raha hai…vaha khade khade….? Chal jaldi se ilaz kar.

Sabhi veer ko achchi tarah se jante the ki ye maa cement industries ka malik hone ke sath sath raj ka best friend bhi hai..isliye usne turant harkat me aate huye aanan fanan me veer ko Operation theatre me bhijvaya….sath me police ko bhi inform karwa diya, jisse baad me koi problem na ho.

Veer ke accident hone ki khabar aag ki tarah kuch hi minutes ke andar poore city me phail gayi….har news channels ki main head lines ban gayi ye khabar.

Pahle paridhi ki kharab tabiyat, phir raj ko jaan se maarne ki sazish me nani aur vidhya ka hath hone ki sachchayi jaan kar, phir chanchal ka sach samne aana aur inn sab ke karan mamta ki bigadti halat se abhi sabhi khud ko sambhal bhi nahi paye the theek se ki veer ke sath huyi iss durghatna ne sab ke hath pair hi jaise jamin se alag kar diye.

Thakur pariwar ek baar phir se gum ke athaah sagar me doob gaya…..sab ek dusre se lipat kar ro rahe the…sab buri tarah se ab tak ki ghatnao se toot chuke the.

Mamta (rote huye)—ye kis ki buri nazar lag gayi mere pariwar ko….? Kya meri kismat me zindagi bhar apne bachcho ke liye rona hi likha hai….? Isse achcha to ye din dekhne se pahle main marr hi jati to achcha hota.

Ruchi (anshu bahate huye)—maaaa….aisa mat kaho....agar tum bhi aisa kahogi to hame koun sambhalega…? Betu ko koun samjhayega….? Ab to kisi par bharosa bhi nahi rah gaya..maa

Nani (rote huye)—aisa mat bol ruchi beta…..main apne kiye par bahut sharminda hu…aaj jo bhi kuch hua uska mujhe bhi behad dukh hai.

Andar abhi bhi veer ka operation chal raha tha….police bhi aa chuki thi….chunki vo sabhi ruchi ke under me kaam kar chuke hain to kisi ne bhi jyada bahas nahi ki aur sirf formility poori kar ke chale gaye….doctor’s aur nurses ka bar bar O.T, ke andar bahar aana jana laga hua tha….lekin koi bhi kuch bata nahi raha tha ki veer ki condition kaisi hai.

Sabhi pareshan bahar khade ho kar prarthana kar rahe the veer ki salamti ke liye….tabhi ek bar phir se cabin ka darwaja khula aur ek doctor bahar aaya.

Meera—dr. ab kaisi hai veer ki halat….?

Doctor—dekhiye unki halat bahut hi nazuk hai….sir me bahut jyada chot aayi hai unke….khoon bhi bahut bah chuka hai… agar aap me se kisi ka blood group*** hai to pls jaldi se check karwa ke bataiye…..warna bahut der ho jayegi.

Soniya—mera blood group bhi yahi hai doctor….aap mera khoon le lijiye

Doctor—theek hai…aap andar aaiye mere sath.

Soniya ne apna blood veer ko diya….udhar vidhya ko jaise hi hosh aaya to turant uske samne behosh hone se pahle ki vah bhayanak ghatna yaad aa gayi.

Vo jaldi se khadi huyi aur darr se chillate huye darwaja khol kar tezi se bahar bhagi….uske jehan me abhi tak Yamraj ka darr aur uski dahshat buri tarah se haavi thi…vo har kisi ke kamre me ja kar awaz laga kar apni jaan bachane ke liye madad ki bheekh maangne lagi…kintu usko ye kya pata tha ki vo sab to raat se hi hospital me hain…kyon ki vidhya to ussi samay se apne room se bahar hi nahi nikli thi.

Bhagte huye vo gate me gayi jaha guard ne usko sab bataya ki vo sab hospital me hain….to vo bhi ek driver ko le kar turant hospital ke liye nikal gayi.

Hospital pahuchte hi jab usko veer ke baare me malum hua to vo bhi jor jor se rone lagi….idhar chanchal bhi raat bhar mandir me hi rahne ke baad subah bhagwan ke darshan kar ke hospital pahuch gayi….jaha uski maa abhi bhi bistar me hi leti huyi thi…lekin chanchal unme se kisi ke paas nahi gayi aur door se hi chhup kar sab ko dekhti rahi.

Vahi dusri taraf minakshi ka antim sanskar karne ke uparant jaise hi mani mere andar vileen huyi vaise hi meri aur divya ki ankho ke samne pichle janam ki sari baate aur ghatnaye kisi chalchitra ki bhanti tarotaza ho gayi….hum dono ki ankho me pani aa gaya tha…divya rote huye mujhse lipat gayi.

Vahi haal paridhi ka bhi…usko bhi apne 6th janam ki minakshi se judi sabhi yaade smaran ho chuki thi..vo bhi mujhse lipat gayi thi….payal didi 5th janam ke bare me janna chahti thi lekin maine unko ye kah diya ki uss kitab ko raat me ghar jane ke baad padh lena.

Main kuch der tak uss samadhi sthal ko hi dekhta raha …uske baad phir se hum ussi murti vale kamre me aa gaye achanak meri nazar khidki par lage shisha ki oor chali gayi jisme mujhe kuch dikhayi dene laga usko dekhte hi main thoda serious ho gaya.

Payal—kya baat hai raj…? Tum kuch chintit lag rahe ho…..?

Raj—nahi aisa kuch nahi hai…mera khyal hai ki ab hame ghar chalna chahiye.

Neha—hmmmm…vaise bhi yaha ka tilism to ab toot hi gaya hai.

Raj—abhi tilism poori tarah se nahi toota hai….kuch bhag abhi bhi baki hai…haa ab ye qila shapit jarur nahi hai

Paridhi—to kya hum ab yaha se bahar ja sakte hain.... ?

Raj—hmmmm....ye qila shapit isliye tha kyon ki ye murti khandit dasha me thi jab ki ye maa mahakali ki jeevant pratima hai.

Rajlaxmi—to phir mera kya hoga saajan.... ?

Raj—tumhe kuch samay aur intazar karna hoga….main bahut jald vapis aunga….abhi iss qile se judi bahut si mahatvapurna jankariya hasil karni hain mujhe.

Rajlaxmi—theek hai….jaha itne saal intazar kiya hai vahi kuch din aur sahi lekin din ko saal mat banne dena..saajan

Raj—maine kaha na ki jaldi hi aunga.....vaise bhi abhi kisi se purana hisab kitab chukta karna baki jo hai…. Aur phir yaha ki maharani se kiya hua vada bhi to abhi poora karna hai….aana to padega hi mujhe.

Payal—lekin hum yaha se bahar niklenge kaise….?

Raj—iss khidki se….jaise andar aaye the vaise hi….?

Neha—hum kisi darwaje se bhi to bahar ja sakte hain…? Phir khidki hi kyo…?

Divya—kyon ki abhi raj sabha se juda tilism tootna baki hai…vo paheli hal ho jane se hum yaha se bahar ja sakte hain ab aur shayad black hole se bhi.

Raj—hmmmm…sahi hai…chalo ab

Maine uss khidki me lage shisha ko nikal diya aur sab ko uske jariye bahar kar ke vo talwar vapis nikal li aur khidki se bahar kood gaya jaldi se…..sabne palat ke dekha to vo shisha phir se khidki me fit ho chuka tha.

Payal (shocked)—ye shishe ka kya tilism hai….? Ye kyo bar bar apne aap hi fit ho jata hai nikal ke door rakh dene ke baad bhi….? Aur isme se jo maine dekha tha vo sab kya rahasya hai…?

Raj—ye shisha trikal darshi hai.....agar isme bahar se andar dekhoge to bhoot kaal (past) dikhayi dega aur agar andar se bahar ki taraf dekhoge to bhavishya kaal me hone wali ghatnaye dikhengi isme se.

Payal (shocked)—to iska matlab ye hua ki maine shaam ko jo kuch bhi dekha tha vo sab yaha pahle hi ghatit ho chuka tha... ?

Raj--hmmmmm

Neha—lekin mujhe to kuch bhi nahi dikha ek baar bhi..jabki maine bhi to kayi baar uski taraf dekha tha... ?

Raj—ye shisha usko hi kuch dikhata hai jo ki yog sadhna karta ho aur jisne kundalini jagrit ki ho...

Payal—lekin maine to kabhi koi yog sadhna nahi ki to phir ye mujhe kyo dikha…?

Raj—aap ne nahi ki to kya hua par pari ne to ki hai….aur ye shisha kabhi tootega nahi chahe iske upar train bhi chadha do tab bhi nahi tootega.

Paridhi—ye talwar tumne kyo nikal li phir se..isse to vo murti phir khandit ho jayegi….?

Raj—ye talwar maine isliye nikal li kyon ki jisse koi na to andar ja sake aur na hi andar se koi bahar aa sake… bina iss talwar ke qile me koi nahi ja sakta aur na bahar aa sakta hai.

Maine sab ko ek sath ghere me le kar teleport ho gaya aur sidha hospital pahuch gaya…shishe me mujhe veer ka hi accident dikhayi diya tha…jiske karan mujhe qile ka kaam adhura chhod kar beech me hi aana pada.

Mujhe hospital me dekh kar sab chounk gaye…aur sath me paridhi ko sahi salamat dekh kar unki hairani aur bhi badh gayi…maine ek nazar maa ki oor dekha jo ki so gayi thi shayad unko need ka injection diya gaya tha.

Ruchi (mujhe dekh bhagte huye)—betuuu…tu aa gaya…..

Sab bhag kar mujhse lipat gaye….ruchi didi sabse adhik ro rahi thi…maine unko apni baho me samet kar samjhaya tab vo chup huyi….vahi mujhe dekh kar chanchal bhi kuch khush huyi lekin agle hi pal vo phir se udas ho gayi.

Ruchi (rote huye)—betuu...vo..veerrr

Raj—didi…main aa gaya hu..na…kuch nahi hoga veer ko….main hu na….mere jane ke baad kya hua yaha…? Maaki ye halat kyo hai…?

Maine bari bari se sab ko samjhaya….kisi ne kuch bhi nahi bataya ki mere jane ke baad kya hua….? Veer ki halat dekh kar meri bhi ankhe dabdaba uthi….Mujhe mrinal dikhi to main uske samne baith gaya.

Raj (nam ankhe)—tum nahi janti mrinal..ki tumne aaj mere upar kitna bada upkar kiya hai….veer sirf mera dost hi nahi..vo mera bhai…nahii…bhai se badhkar hai…vo meri saans hai….veer mera gurur, mera abhiman hai vo…usko bacha kar aaj tumne apne karz ke bojh se daba diya mujhe….

Vidhya (gusse me jor se)—band karrr apni ye bakwas…..aaj teri hi vajah se mere bete ki ye halat hai….na jane kitno ko kha kar tu marega….bachpan me tere seene me itne khanjar maare maine phir bhi tu bach gaya…..mere bete ki halat ka jimmedar tu aur teri ye maa hai…..tum dono ke dono hi manhoos ho…. dhyan rakhna…agar mere veer ko kuch bhi hua to main teri jaan le lungiiii.

Aur yahi vidhya ne gusse me aa kar bahut hi jyada badi galti kar di…….uski iss teekhi baat se mere paas me hi khade kisi shakhs ke rom rom me gusse ki lahar doud gayi.. jin ankho me abhi kuch der pahle pani tha …ab unme prachand kroadh ki jwala dahak uthi…..hath pair aur naak sab gusse se kaampne lage aur ankho me chingariya nikalne lagi.

Nice update

 

[Blade axel]

Awesomeee update bro...