Incest SAAJAN

[anandsngh12]

Asia mat karna ki raj Bala payel hi tbm Ho........ Must update

SHUKRIYA BHAI

 

[anandsngh12]

bhai bohat hi bariya story ja rahi hai...aj hi baki k sare update read kiya hain...bohat hi mast likh rahe ho...avani to raj ki hi czn sis nikli...or veer avani ki family rak kese pohancha ye kahin mention nahi hua abhi tak...rajgarh pohach hi gaye raj or diviya...or avani or veer bhi wohin par mil gaye...​

jab jungle jane ka plan bana tha to muje pehle se hi laga tha k ho nah ho zroor kuch garbar hone wali hai...ye to pehle se hi zehan mein tha k diviya ko jo pari sapno mein dikhai deti hai us ka suspense khule ga...jungle mein but ye maloom nahi tha k TBM ka scene bhi a jaye ga...saly ne to raj ki puri family ko hi kidnap karwa liya...or ye YAMRAAJ kahan se a geya...ho nah ho is ka bhi raj k sath zroor koi nah koi link hai...jo ye raj ki family ko bacha rha hai...may be ye raj hi ho...​

chlo ye to acha ho geya k jo payal di raj se nahi keh pa rahin thi wo aj anjane mein hi ho geya...raj ko maloom to par geya k payal di kis had tak us se pyar karti hain...itni jaldi kuch zeyada hi romance kar dala inho ne to...​

ruchi k sath to bohat bara dhoka ho geya hai...kahin comissinor bhi to nahi mila hua TBM k sath jo kisi ko kano kaan khabar bhi nahi hui or puri team hi TBM ki a gai ruchi k sath...​

pari ki kahani sune k bad bohat dukh hua...bohat bura hua pari k sath...or ye shakti(saajan) ne bohat bura kiya tha us  k sath...ab dekhna hai k pari apna badla kis had tak leti hai...or diviya raj ko bachane kameyab hoti hai k nahi...or jo pari ne ye keh kar tension mein dal diya hai k wo raj k ghar mein ki janam le khuki hia...wo kon ho sakti hai...jin par muje shak hai...1:payal(jo k raj se had se zeyada pyar karti hai...pari bhi raj se bohat pyar karti thi...ye ek reason ho sakta hai)...2:ruchi di(ruchi di bhi payal di k tarha raj se bohat pyar karti hain)...3:pridhi(jo k raj se shuru mein thori ukhri ukhri rehti thi...ye bhi ho sakti hai)...baatein to bohat dimag mein ghoom rahi hai...jaldi se bhai ye suspense khatam karo kahin humari jaan hi nah le le ye suspense...​

over all superb bro...​

waiting for next update
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WELCOME BHAI

AND THANKS FOR SUCH A VERY ENCOURAGING AND MOTIVATING REVIEW

MAI BAS ITNA HI KAH SAKTA HU KI AAPNE BAHUT HAD TAK SAHI GUESS KIYA HAI STORY ME AANE WALI  GHATNAO KA

PARI KOUN HAI...VAISE MAINE PREVIOUS UPDATES ME KAYI BAAR KUCH LOGO PAR CLUE DIYE HAIN

PARI UNME SE HI KOI HOGI ....AB KOUN YE TO MAINE BHI ABHI NAHI SOCHA HAI

READERS KA RUJHAN KIDHAR JATA HAI ..USKE BAAD DEKHTA HU

YAMRAJ KA BHI AADHA SACH JALDI HI SAMNE AYEGA...BAKI KA POORA CHAPTER 9 ME AYEGA..TAB TAK US PAR SUSPENSE....

KAYI CHEEZE HAIN PAHLE KI JINKA CLEAR HONA ABHI BAKI HAI....KUCH TO SAMAY KE SATH HOTI JA RAHI HAIN AUR KUCH RAJGARH KA CHAPTER OPEN HONE PAR KHUL JAYENGI

SIVAY RAJ SE RELATED KUCH ISSUE CHHODKAR....

AGAIN VERY VERY THANKS FOR VERY NICE REVIEW

 

[anandsngh12]

Bhai kya baat he maza aa gya padkar is update ko. Ruchi aur Payal to bach gay
Lekin PARIDHI ki izzat ko khatra he aur to aur Raj ki family ko bhi. Ab agle update me
Unhe bhi bacha lo bhai plzzzz.
Waiting 4 next update.

SHUKRIYA BHAI

AB DEKHTE HAIN TBM KA JAAL AUR PLAN HAI KYA

 

[anandsngh12]

Fantastic Update

Ye TBM to bada harami nikla

Poori Police hi nakli hai

Kahi commissioner bhi to TBM ka admi hi na ho...?

Pakka Paridhi hi hogi...khatre me...do din se gayab bhi hai

Kyon ki Payal to Raj ke sath hai

Pari to TBM se bhi badi wali hai...vo uski nani hai....ulta TBM ka kaan kaat legi aur usko pata bhi nahi chalega...hahaha

Ab do hi bachti hain....Paridhi aur Pooja..

Jyada doubt Paridhi ka hi hai

Anyway superb se bhi upar ka update

Agle update ka besabri se intazar...

THANKS SHAHNAZ DEAR FOR A BEAUTIFUL COMMENT

AB DEKHTE HAIN KYA HOTA HAI

TILL THEN WAIT

 

[Reza]

superb update bro...
waiting for next

 

[Prince sarkash]

Awesome update bro

Keep going

Will wait for next update

 

[aks 21]

Awesome one bhai........full of suspense.........!

 

[sonukale]

Nice update

 

[RAJIV SHAW]

Super update hai bhai waiting for next update

 

[Veer thakur]

Badiya update