Incest SAAJAN

[Spiltvilla]

Waiting

 

[Ameer Khan Khan]

wonderful update bhai.lagta hai aik aur tbm agaya hai.

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Divya or Sajan ka pyar to atulniya h or sath hi vismaraniy.
Ise dekh chandni ne o kadam utha liyya jo use nahi karna chahiye tha.
Pahla to mitali se bahas or fir ghar chhodna.
Or fans gyi bechari musibat me .
Dekhe ki kaise kya hota hai ??

Or isilye ,
Aage ka intjar

 

[sonukale]

Waiting for next update

 

[Story Collector]

wow super duper update bhai bahut Jabardast likh rahe ho,
Your update was awesome hat's off to you bro keep rocking we love your story and your writing skills,
Keep going on
We will wait for next update.....

 

[Jitu kumar]

Awesome update bhai,
aapke update hamesha hi itne lajawab rahte hai ki use padhne ke baad man
harsh se vibhor ho jata hai,
aakhir kar divya 6th janam ki yaado se bahar aa hi gayi,
raj aur divya ke vartalaap ko aapne
shandaar tarike se prastut kiya hai,
chandani raj ka divya ke prati pyar ko flirt samajhane ki bhool kar gayi,
aur mithali ne use jor daar thappad lga diya aur hostel jane ko kah diya,
"krodh vivek ko nasht kar deta hai" - yahi
chandani ke sath hua , ussne apne krodh ke vasibhoot hokar mithali ki baat nhi suni aur akele hi station ke liye nikal gayi,
aur khud hi musibat ko nyota de diya,
ye taxi driver TBM hi hai,
bhai aapne TBM ka language atyant
hi shandaar rakha hai,
usske bolne ka lahja jabardast hai,
ussne chandani ko kidnap kar liya hai aur
kisi shunshan jagah par le aaya hai,
vahi dusri or jo ladki saajan ko yaad kar rhi hai mujhe lagta hai ki vo ratna hi hai,
dekhte hai ab aage kya hota hai,
Waiting for next update bhai

 

[agyant]

First of all very very sorry for the belated review... Kuch din busy tha to xf se dur raha... Now review time....
Update 137
Best part of update was divya aur sajan ka pyar... Donon ka pyar itna gehra hai ki dono dur se hi ek dushre ki taklif ko mehsus kar lete hain.... Divya ki tyag aur samarpan ke badolat hi Agyant jivit wapas aa paya.......
Wahin Trikal bhi bahut shaktishali maya jal bichhaya tha jse akele Agyant ke liye todna mushkil tha.... Par divya ke pyar aur mata rani ki kripa ke prakop se Agyant ne trikal ko haraya aur ratna aur meenakshi ko sakushal wapas laya..... Trikal ko apahij bana kar accha sabak bhi sikhaya.... Par agar Agyant trikal ko mar nahi sakta to trikal ka mot kaise hoga....?

Mujhe pehle se hi sadhu maharaj par doubt tha.... Par jo bhi ho Yamraj, sher ki parchhai, aur Sadhu maharaj apas men linked jarur hai..
Par kuchh baten samajh me nehi aya specially saitan ki murti ka nast hona.... Aisi konsi bat yad a gaya Agyant ko ki wo dhyan lagakar murti ko nasht kar diya....
Ye kam to pehle bhi kar sakta tha...

Present..
Jahan ek aur chanchal ka nafrat pyar men badalti ja rahi hai, wahin sandhya ka pyar nafrat me badal raha hai.....

Excellent fight between veer and Ninja group...... Present mai first time Sher wala prchayi dikhai diya.... Parchhai ne to fad ke rakh diya bechare ninjas ki, wahin veer ka bhi halat kharab ho gaya hai...

 

[agyant]

Update 138
Excellent update...

Ratna aur minakshi sakushal ghar pahunch gaye..... Ratna to divya ko dekhkar hi sara majra samajh gai... Wahin meenakshi aur vaishali ke dil men bhi Agyant ke liye pyar ka ankur phut raha hai... Aur charon deewani chali gai Agyant se milne uske kamre me ... Par wahan to...

Drishya hi kuch aisa tha….andar agyant tamboo me bamboo lagaye so raha tha….

Superb narration.. Mujhe to do bar padhna padha ki kya likh diya aapne..... Khair jo bhi ho par Agyant aur divya ko ek sath dekh kar pratigya ki pari mode active ho gaya aur usne to lagbhag attack kar hi diya tha....
Present..
Chandini ko sahi salamat dekhkar uday to shock hi ho gaya.... Par apni feelings dikhaye bhi to kisko..
Chandni ko bhi raj ke upar bharosa nahi hai... Hoga bhi kaise... Uske jagah koi aur hota to usko bhi bharosa nahi hota..

Wahin veer ki phati padi hai asali yamraj ko dekhkar Par lagta hai Uday ka ab time up hone wala hai.....

 

[sonukale]

Waiting for next update

 

[agyant]

Update 139
Like your other readers i am also bit disappointed with this update.... Disappointed in the sense ki aapka jo natutal style hai cheejon ko bariki se likhne ki wo dekhne ko nahi mila ..... Par aap apane stance already clear kar chuke ho so no issues with that....

Commig to the update part.....
Pura update sar ke upar se nikal gaya.... Aap to bullet train ke speed se sare incidents explain kar diye....
Update ke first part... Agyant aur divya ke pyar bhare pal... Donon hi ek dusre ke paripurak hain... Meenakshi aur Vaishali bhi apni Izhar e mohabbat kar diye... Ratna ki chir yauvana hone ka raz bhi pata chal gaya..., Wahin in sabke bich pratigya agyant se dur hoti chali gai...

Bich men to shocking twist dal diya ki divya aur agyant sage bhai bahan nikle.... Aur sushant anuj ka beta aur pratigya uski behan..... par janm ke samay aisa kya shadyantra hua tha ki ye sab aise bichhad gaye ye pata nahi chala...

Bahut sari baten ankahi rah gayi.... Jaise ki Trikal ne aisa kya mayajal racha tha ki sab uske lapet me agaye..... Pratigya kaise apni palne wale mata pita ke pas pahunchi.... Vaishali ke mata pita kon hai....
Alexander ka chota bhai to pura suspense me rah gaya.....
Vidya ki bhi koi ata pata nahi..
Neel mani bhi us aurat ke pas kaise pahunci ye pata nahi chal paya.... Aur agyant ke marne ke bad trikal ka kya hua....?
Aur ratna ki story abhi end nahi hui hai.... Raj aur ratna ki punah milan kaise hoga dekhna dilchasp hoga....

Par is update ke bad pari ke nafrat wali feelings a raha hai... Aur pratigya.. bhale hi sajan kisi janm me uske sath kuchh bhi kiya ho..... Par iss janm me to agyant ne uski jan aur ijjat dono bachayi hai na to wo agyant se itni nafrat kaise kar sakti hai ki uski jan hi le liya.... Ye to ehsan faramosh, viswas ghat wali bat hai...
Itni bhi kya nafrat....
Anyway excellent update....