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Very very suspensional update
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Sabhi apne apne sapne ke bare me soch rahe the.
Pari sandhya me sama gayi.
Chandini raj ke bare me soch rahi thi.
Kis tarah vo aakar uski jaan bachai.
Vo bhi ab raj se pyar karne lagi.
Ruchi roj sone se pahle raj ki tasvir se baate karti hai.
Divya uska to 24 ghante apne saajan ki yaad me rahti hai.
Priyadarshini saajan ki yaad me tadap rahi hai.
Vo dusri divya banti ja rahi hai.
Raj paridhi ke raj kholne je liye roj ghar ke ek sadsaya ko ghumne le jayega.
Raj ne neha chachi ko paridhi ke bare me sab bata diya.
Or usne uday ke bare me sab bata diya.
Apne pati ke bare me sunkar neha chachi ne raj ko jhoota sabit karne lagi or uske bare me galat bolne lagi.
Miranl ke apne andaj me dikhi.
Usne apni boli se teacher ko bhi bhaga diya.
Tum humlog ki soch se bhi khatarnaak nikla.
Trikal ko marne and pari ko ajaad krne ka plan uska hi tha.
Kanhi vo shaitan to nhi hai.
Raj ne paridhi ki body aachi tarh dekhne ke baad kaha ki ye paridhi nhi hai.
To paridhi aakhir kanha gayi.
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Superb suspense created
Bilkul ek mahir writer ki tarah update ki shuruwat me jhatka
Ye koun hai jo sandhya me sama gaya....?
Uske baad sabke bare unki sock ka varnan behad sanjida tarike se kiya
Chandni bhi ab raj ki taraf attract hone lagi hai
Divya to main heroine hi hai is story ki uska to kahna hi kya
Ruchi ne to apna izhar kar hi diya hai
Priyadarshini ka virah varnan bahut umda dikhaya hai
Ek achcha kavi bhi shayad utne achche se na dikha pata jitna sanjidgi se aapne uski virah vedna aur uske pyar ko dikhaya hai vo adbhut hai.
Isse apki Great writing skill ka pata chalta hai...jo maine abhi tak to is forum ke kisi writer me nahi dekhi
Raj ne neha chachi ko paridhi ka sach aur uday ki mout se avgat kara diya
Paridhi ke kaam se jaha neha ko garv mahsus huwa to vahi uday ki mout ne uske dimag me raj ke liye nafrat ka darwaja khol diya
Aur wo bina sach ko samjhe raj ko galat samajh baithi
Kya hoga iska anjam....? jab neha ko sach malum chalega to...?
Mrinal ki to apni alag hi duniya hai wo bhi bilkul nirali
Usne to teacher ko hi apna gyan dekar ulta bhaga diya
Agar college jane lagi tab kya hoga.....?
TBM ek badi mystry ban gaya hai ab
Kabhi socha nahi tha ki vo yaha tak khel sakta hai
Uska makad jaal ab haqiqat me khatarnak lagne laga hai
Apki shayari ka koi jawab nahi hai
Bilkul sahi jagah aur situation par depend hoti hai
Last me phir se Paridhi ka case aa gaya
Paridhi bhi ek mystry ban chuki hai ab
Akhir hua kya uske sath....? kaha hai wo...?
Overall marvelous update
Apka har shabd dil me utar jata hai
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Thanks for Reading & SupportingKai saare raaz ek baar phir se aa gaye jaisay sandhaya ke andar saaye ka aana. Kaun thaa woh saaya aur phir aakhir me ek dam se ek aur raaz pe rok liya ab dekhna hoga ki saloni se kia kaha raj ne.
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