Incest SAAJAN

[shahnaz123]

• Update-160
• Superb & Fantastic update
• Divya aur Priyadarshini ki khubsurti ka behad akarshak varnan kiya hai
• Update ki kya tarif karu, shabd kosh me shabd bhi kam padne lage hain
• Sachche prem ki bilkul sahi vyakhya ki hai divya ne
• Heera mani aur divya ka conversation bahut shandar dikhaya hai
• Shayad ye Parrot hi saajan aur divya ke milan ka madhyam bane
• Priyadarshini mata ki tapasya me leen ho gayi
• Sarovar me sakhiyo ki bate ati uttam hain aur sahi bhi
• Ek mature writer ki tarah likhte hain aap
• Mrinal ka ek alag hi nirala andaz hai
• Priyadarshini ne shayad saajan ki vahi bachpan ki photo dekh li hai jiski vajah se uski bechaini badh gayi hai
• Overall Marvelous update
• Great writing skills

 

[shahnaz123]

• Update-161
• Divya ke soundarya ka aisa adbhut varnan dil ko mantra mugdh kar gaya
• Incredible, I don't have any words, ki kin shabdo me aisi bemishal upma ki tarif kar saku
• Har update ke sath kahani bahut hi dil ke karib hoti ja rahi hai
• Apki lekhan shaily aur shabd chayan ki kabiliyat bemishal hai
• Agar kahani se incest aur sex scenes hata kar isko print karke market me ye kahani aa jaye to poore desh me tahalka macha degi
• Is kahani ke upar banne wali film ke aage bahu bali bhi fail hai
• Heeramani ahankar me mouka dekh kar bhag gaya aur vaha shikari ke changul me phans gaya
• Lagta hai ab saajan ki entry ka samay aa gaya hai kahani me
• Raj ke raste me bhediya manav aa gaya
• Paridhi ki halat behad chinta janak hai
• Bhediya manav ne raj ke hath me apne daant gada diye hain, ab kya hoga....? kya wo bhi bhediya me badal jayega....ya ...kuch aur hoga...?
• Priyadarshini ko akhir uske saajan ka pata chal hi gaya, lekin uski halat is samay par kate pankshi jaisi ho gayi hai
• Excellent update, You are a Great writer
• Update char part me tha lekin sab ka end suspense ke sath
• waiting next eagerly

 

[Viraj Raj]

Sundar , Super fantastic , Mind Blowing update Bhai

To aapne hero ki entry kara hi di wo bhi Yamraj ke roop me interesting.

Ab lagta he do premiyon ke milan ka samay aa gya hai pr mujhe lagta aap kuch to dhamaal jajur karege.

Aakhir hum hum sabko bhi pata chal hi gaya paridhi ka ab to sab ki bend bajayega raj .

Intzaar rahega update ka...

 

[Viraj Raj]

Dankal—hahahahaha......ab tu ya to mere jahar se mar jayega ya meri hi tarah bhediya manav ban jayega...hahahaha


Bhai yaha pe kuch to karna cuahiye ta aise confuse hojaye fir bediya manav se ladte hue nahane kaise chala gaya ha..... ha..... ha.......
Any way update mast tha


Idhar mai jaise hi nahane ke liye upar wale bathroom me gaya to vaha ka nazara dekhte hi meri ankhe choundhiya gayi.....bathroom me diksha poori nangi shower ke niche khadi hokar naha rahi thi

Bhai shayad aap bhul rhe hai ki Raj ne apne aap ko teen bhago me baata tha , Unmese se ek dark lok me lad rha hai or dusra gar par he jo udhar bathroom me gya tha...Ok bro

 

[ʜeisenberg]

badiaya

 

[Mr.X796]

Mast mast update

 

[Mr. Perfect]

Superrrr story.....

Awesome plot.....

Great writing skill...

Fantastic imaginations....

Heart touching love......

Bheja faad suspences.....

Everything is mind blowing

 

[Dhaneshwar Singh]

Waiting

 

[shahnaz123]

Waiting Next update very Eagerly

 

[luv4sale696969]

Superrrr story.....

Awesome plot.....

Great writing skill...

Fantastic imaginations....

Heart touching love......

Bheja faad suspences.....

Everything is mind blowing

Ditto....