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[anil.master]

kardo bhai end bindass darne ka nahi aur bhidu kuch taklif chal reli kya jindgi me agar kuch rahegi to pehle usko khatam karne ka badme story ko kuch madat lagegi to bolo tera bhai jinda he abhi

 

[RAAZ]

update aaj night tak dene ki koshish karunga bhai
Flash back ko ek hi update me End karne ki soch raha hu

Bhai zabardast rocking update aur phir se ek aur jhatka abhi lagta hain shayad bade bade upnyaskar aake aapse salah letay hoge. Lagta hain DEVKI NANADAN KHATRI ji ke shagurd rahe honge aap jo itna dhasu likh dalte hain. Mind blowing maza aa gaya. Jhum barabar jhum kar dia

 

[Rohan008]

update aaj night tak dene ki koshish karunga bhai
Flash back ko ek hi update me End karne ki soch raha hu

Intzaar rhega bhai

 

[Ameer Khan Khan]

Bohat hi zabardast update bro.

OK bro we are waiting for update.

 

[shahnaz123]

Fantastic update anand sir
Ashwamedh ka ashwa ratnesh ne pakad liya
Sath me poori sena aur gandharv sen ko bhi hara diya
Pari ne mahakali ki aradhna shuru kar di ratnesh ko pane ke liye
Chitra sen ne dono ke vivah ka prastav ayodhya bhej diya
Pari aur ratnesh ka vivah sampann ho gaya
Ratnesh pari ke roop jaal me hi ulajh gaya jisse pari me ahankar ne janam le liya
Usne heera mani ko marwana chaha lekin vo bach gaya
Heera mani ne ratnesh ke samne padmini ke roop ka bakhan bach chadh ke sunaya
Jiske karan ratnesh jogi ban kar singhal garh pahuch gaya
Aapne saato samudra ke jo naam hindi me bataye hain thats great, marvelous
Vahi heera mani padmini ke paas pahuch kar ratnesh ke bare me jamkar tarif ki
Jiske parinam swaroop dono ke dil me prem ki lahre uthane lagi hain
Aur ab dono basant panchmi ke din milne wale hain
Dono ka reaction dekhne layak hoga

Paridhi aur minakshi ke chakkar me raj poori tarah se confuse ho chuka hai
Pari ne minakshi ko kyo bachaya.....?
Minakshi ko dark lok koun aur kyon le gaya....?
Raj ko vaha se loutne me kisi ne roka kyo nahi matlab koi bhi samne kyo nahi aaya...?
Ab iska faisla guru maa hi karengi

Mrinal ne college me bhookamp la diya
Principal tak ko lapet diya...hahahaha
Very funny character

Raj nani ko ghumane le gaya hai
Lagta hai raj ke dono gaal lal peele hone wale hain

Overall Great update, superb writing skill
Agle update ka intazar

 

[Viraj Raj]

Bahut sundar or rochak lekhani hai aapki bhai

Kya update tha yaha se story ka ek naya arambh ho choka hai

Mujhe lagta hai aapko bhi meri tarh purani book or sastras ye sabhi padhne ka soak hai...

Ratnesh ke baare me bhi yehi kahunga ki ye shuruwat wala ek sutra ban rha hai . Aapki yaha likhane wali bhasha Superb hai.


Raj
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[King]

waiting

 

[Blade axel]

waiting .

 

[Naughtyrishabh]

Intjar

 

[Raj]

WAITING BHAI