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anandsngh12

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Fantastic update anand sir
Ashwamedh ka ashwa ratnesh ne pakad liya
Sath me poori sena aur gandharv sen ko bhi hara diya
Pari ne mahakali ki aradhna shuru kar di ratnesh ko pane ke liye
Chitra sen ne dono ke vivah ka prastav ayodhya bhej diya
Pari aur ratnesh ka vivah sampann ho gaya
Ratnesh pari ke roop jaal me hi ulajh gaya jisse pari me ahankar ne janam le liya
Usne heera mani ko marwana chaha lekin vo bach gaya
Heera mani ne ratnesh ke samne padmini ke roop ka bakhan bach chadh ke sunaya
Jiske karan ratnesh jogi ban kar singhal garh pahuch gaya
Aapne saato samudra ke jo naam hindi me bataye hain thats great, marvelous
Vahi heera mani padmini ke paas pahuch kar ratnesh ke bare me jamkar tarif ki
Jiske parinam swaroop dono ke dil me prem ki lahre uthane lagi hain
Aur ab dono basant panchmi ke din milne wale hain
Dono ka reaction dekhne layak hoga

Paridhi aur minakshi ke chakkar me raj poori tarah se confuse ho chuka hai
Pari ne minakshi ko kyo bachaya.....?
Minakshi ko dark lok koun aur kyon le gaya....?
Raj ko vaha se loutne me kisi ne roka kyo nahi matlab koi bhi samne kyo nahi aaya...?
Ab iska faisla guru maa hi karengi

Mrinal ne college me bhookamp la diya
Principal tak ko lapet diya...hahahaha
Very funny character

Raj nani ko ghumane le gaya hai
Lagta hai raj ke dono gaal lal peele hone wale hain

Overall Great update, superb writing skill
Agle update ka intazar
Thanks for Reading & Supporting
Keep stay with us
Thanks Dear for such a awesome lovely review
Shukriya Shahnaz ji for liking the update
Paridhi ka suspense lagbhag khul hi gaya hai
Padmini ke milan me abhi kuch adchane hain
Mrinal ka dhamal hone wala hai

Today's update is on page......711
 

anandsngh12

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Bahut sundar or rochak lekhani hai aapki bhai

Kya update tha yaha se story ka ek naya arambh ho choka hai

Mujhe lagta hai aapko bhi meri tarh purani book or sastras ye sabhi padhne ka soak hai...

Ratnesh ke baare me bhi yehi kahunga ki ye shuruwat wala ek sutra ban rha hai . Aapki yaha likhane wali bhasha Superb hai.


Raj
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Thanks for Reading & Supporting
Keep stay with us
Thanks bhai for such a wonderful review
Kabhi kabhi padh leta hu bhai
Mann ko achcha lagta hai

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