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Fantastic & Masttt update bro

Payal or nani ki nok-jok mast h achhe se dikhya h

Kya khatarnak jhol dikhya h

Esi dangerous situation m b masti y to Gajab h

To pahadi mil hi gyi aakhir pr rahasya abi b bna huaa h

Ohhh " mout ka ghar " nice name & description

Koyi bhot dekh liya kya ?


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Behad hi shandar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Kya likhun samajh me hi nahi aa raha h.
Itna behtareen update tha bhai.
Har ek chij kamal ki har ek scene perfect.
Lajawab fantastic mindblowing.

Or ab ,
Aage ka intjaar

 

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SAAJAN
UPDATE—173 ​

Rajgarh Ka Raaz Continues…………
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Hamne ghum kar dekha to ek baar phir se jhatka kha gaye…..vo khidki bhi gayab ho chuki thi…..ab charo taraf sirf deewar thi….andar hawa tak aane ke liye koi surakh bhi nahi bacha tha.

Payal (jor se)—Rajj…hamare sath dhokha hua hai.

Raj—aap sahi kah rahi ho didi….hame dhokhe se phasaya gaya hai.

Abhi hum issi udhed bun me pareshan the ki ab bahar kaise nikle ki tabhi hamare kano me kisi ki bhayanak hasi ki awaz goonjne lagi.

‘Hahahahahahahaha……..Phas gaye sab ke sab….hahahahaha’’

Nani (ghabrate huye)—ye koun has raha hai….? Ab yahi marr jayenge hum sab…hey bhagwan..mujhe aana hi nahi chahiye tha inke sath…ab kya karu…?

Payal—oyeee budhiya chup kar……ek to vaise hi dimag kharab hai, upar se tera ye prapanch……ab agar jyada chabad chabad ki to pahle teri hi gardan kategi.

Neha—raj…hum to buri tarah phas gaye…ab kaise niklenge is mayajaal se.

Payal (dhire se)—raj…apni power ka use kar ke ye deewar tod de.

Raj—didi….ye tilism hai,….tilism kisi power se nahi balkitilism todne ke liye isme buddhi ka prayog karna padta hai

Payal—to kuch kar na…mera dum ghutne laga hai abhi se…..aur paridhi ki tabiyat pahle se hi kharab hai….uski halat ka to kuch soch, kitni taklif jhel rahi hai bechari phir bhi sab bardast kiye ja rahi hai.

Maine paridhi didi ki taraf dekha unki halat vastav me behad chinta janak thi…..vo badi mushkil se khud ko theek thaak dikhane ki koshish kar rahi thi…..mujhe unki iss halat par taras aane laga.

Raj (mann me)—mujhe jaldi hi kuch na kuch karna hoga…warna jyada der tak iss ghutan bhare band kamre me sab ki saanse rukne lagengi…..tilism me power kaam karegi nahi warna ab tak kaam poora ho gaya hota….mujhe kamre ki bariki se talashi leni hogi….koi na koi clue to avashya hona chahiye yaha se bahar nikalne ka.

Payal—kya soch raha hai…?

Raj—soch raha hu…ki koi na koi clue to yaha hona chahiye jisse bahar nikla ja sake….sab log bariki se kamre ko check karo har jagah…yaha tak ki deewwaro par bhi…shayad kuch sanket mil jaye

Sabhi aanan faanan me turant iss kaam me jut gaye.....magar kisi ko vaha siway farsh aur deewar ke kuch bhi nahi dikh raha tha….kayi chakkar sab ne dekh liya magar kuch bhi nahi mila.

Nani—kuch nahi hai yaha….ye to tihad se bhi khatarnak jail me qaid ho gaye hain hum.

Raj—aisa kaise ho sakta hai….? Kuch na kuch sanket to hona chahiye.

Payal—rajjj….idhar aana jara.

Payal didi ki baat sun kar main aur baki log unki paas aa gaye…jaha didi ne hath se ek taraf dekhne ka ishara kiya main didi ki batayi jagah ko gaur se dekhne laga.

Pahle to mujhe kuch nahi dikha lekin jab bariki se gaur kiya…..deewar par kuch chhote chhote aksharo me likha hua tha…..jo itni asani se samajh nahi aa raha tha.

Raj—didi, isko apne mobile me photo khich lo aur phir iski image ko maximize karo…aise kuch samajh nahi ayega ki kya likha hai….?

Payal—ok

Payal didi ne mobile se uss likhawat ko click karne ke baad jab usko maximize kiya to usme ek mathsmatical equation likha hua tha.

Payal—Ye to koi maths ka sawal hai..raj.

Raj—kya likha hai…..?

Payal—8 ko jodo 8 baar, chahe jodo jis prakar, lekin jod aaye ek hazar…aur bracket me likha hai eent (bricks).

Nani—bhala ye kaisa sawal hai….? 8 ko 8 baar jodne par 1000 thodi aa sakta hai…..kisi ne logo ko bewaqoof banane ke liye likh diya hoga ye sab…..hey ram ab main kaise azad houngi yaha se….?

Payal—Jyada bak bak ki na to iss kulhadi se tumhari gardan kaat ke abhi ke abhi tujhe parmanent azad kar dungi iss duniya se.

Neha—payal beti…abhi in sab baato ka samay nahi hai…hame iss sawal ke vishay me sochna chahiye……raj tum kyo chup ho….?

Raj—kuch nahi iss sawal ke bare me soch raha hu.

Nani—isme sochna kya hai…? Iss kamre me eent, gitti,ret, cement hai kaha jo eent jodne ka kaam karenge... ?

Payal—tum chup nahi baith sakti….?

Raj—baat eent jodne ki nahi hai, baat eent todne ki hai

Paridhi—todne ki, par kaise…..?

Neha—main kuch samjhi nahi.... ?

Raj—agar iss sawal ko gaur se dekha jaye to ye deewar tilismi eent se bani hogi....isme eent jodne ka abhipray ye ho sakta hai ki pahle sawal solve karo phir uske anusar deewar ki eent todo....lekin kewal utni hi jitni ki sawal me hain.

Payal—pahli baat 8 bricks ko 8 baar jodne se 1000 kaise ayega... ? dusra agar sawal solve bhi ho gaya to hum deewar ki bricks todenge kaise.... ?

Raj—sawal to koi kathin nahi hai….aur jaha tak todne ki baat hai to apki ye kulhadi kab kaam ayegi.

Neha—saf saf batao…akhir karna kya chahte ho…?

Raj—dekhiye..aise hal karna hai….

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Ab in sabhi 8 ko eent samajh kar deewar me marking kar do aur phir un eento ko kulhadi ke handle se dhakka dekar gira do…bas.

Neha—kya isse kaam ban jayega….?

Raj—koshish karne me kya harz hai….?

Maine deewar par kulhadi se bricks ke size ke nishan bana diye bilkul uss mathsmatical eqation ke mutabik…..phir kulhadi ke handle se unn nishan par thokar marne laga.

Ek ek thokar me hi vo bricks apni jagah se nikal kar bahar girne lagi…..ye dekh kar sabhi ke chehro par khushi chha gayi…..Sab aise khush ho gaye jaise registan me phanse kisi pyase ko pani ki boond nazar aa gayi ho.

Uss jagah ki 8 eent nikalne ke baad bhi itni jagah khali nahi huyi thi ki koi usme se aar paar nikal sake….maine aur bhi bricks todne ke liye kulhadi ke handle se prahar kiye magar koi bhi bricks apni jagah se tas se mas nahi huyi.

Payal—ab kya kare….? Itni choti jagah me se to bahar nikal pana mushkil hal…..isse jyada bricks bhi nahi nikal pa rahi hain.

Nani—main nikalne ki koshish karti hu pahle……aaaaaahhhhh…..rajjjjjj…mera hath…marrr….gayiiiiii

Payal—Ye budhiya bhi na..!

Nani ne bina kuch soche samjhe hi jaldbazi me uss jagah se nikalne ke prayas me jaise hi apna hath uske andar dala....vaha phir se deewar ban gayi aur unka hath bhi usme dab gaya.

Nani—raj…mujhe bachaooo….haye mera hath

Raj—apko kya jarurat thi aisi jaldbazi karne ki….? Main already koshish to kar raha tha na….? ab bina tilism toote apka hath bahar nahi naiklega.

Maine phir se nishan bana kar unn eento ko gira kar jagah khali ki…aur dhyan se usko dekhne laga…..tabhi ek bricks par meri nazar gayi jis par khoon laga hua tha.

Paridhi—ye khoon kaisa….?

Raj—iska matlab hai ki Tum mujhe khoon do main tumhe azadi dunga…..shayad isko hamara khoon chahiye.

Payal—chalo sab log thoda thoda apna khoon iske upar girao.

Nani—nahi…nahi..main apna khoon nahi dungi….main kamjor ho jaungi.

Payal—tu vaise bhi ab ek hath deewar me chunwaye yahi padi rah….tumhari yahi saza hai.

Raj—chachi apni alpin dena jara.

Maine neha chachi se alpin lekar uski madad se sabhi ka blood thoda thoda nikal kar uss jagah par girane laga.... nani ne badi mushkil se blood diya.

Blood donate karne ke agle pal hi vaha par phir se vahi darwaja aur khidki nazar aane lage....main sab ko pakad kar turant uss room se bahar nikal gaya.

Nani—shukriya bhagwan...main bach gayi.

Payal didi phir se nani ko kuch bolne hi wali thi ki maine unhe rok diya….ussi samay ek darawani cheekh phir se sunayi padi….hum sab bhag kar makan ke piche ki taraf gaye to vaha vohi bhayanak laash, haddiyo ka dhancha , jo hum logo ko kamre me ghuste samay khidki ke paas dikha tha, iss samay bahar khada hai aur ussi ko dekh ke vo bhayanak surat wala admi jor jor se darr se cheekh raha tha…jo uss sadhu ki ladki ko pakde huye uss bhediya se lad raha tha.

Vo laash sachmuch ek darawani cheez thi aur usko dekh kar har ek admi ghabra sakta tha….astu uss bhayanak admi ne uss laash ko dekhte hi kangana ko chhod diya aur do kadam piche hat gaya.

Phir bhi shayad vo kuch karta lekin iske pahle hi uss nar kankal ke muh se aag ka ek bhayanak favvara nikla jise dekhte hi vo buri tarah se darr gaya aur piche hat kar bhagte huye nazaro se ojhal ho gaya.

Jab hum logo ne dusri baar dekha to vo nar kankal bhi gayab ho chuka tha….kangana hame dekh kar thithak gayi aur apna sir jhuka liya.

Raj—Ye sab kya khel tha…..? hame tum logo ne dhokha kyo diya…..?

Kangana—pahle aap chal kar mere pita ji ki dekh rekh kijiye, vo hi sab kuch apko batayenge.

Maine dekha ki vo sadhu niche behosh pada hua hai…usko utha kar main aangan me le aaya aur unke chehre par pani ke chheente marte hi vo hosh me aa gaye.

Payal—vo bhediya kaha gaya jise hamne uss kamre se bahar nikalte dekha tha aur jo uss bhayanak admi se lad raha tha….?

Lekin sadhu ne iss baat ka koi jawab nahi diya…aur vo bhediya bhi hame kahi nazar nahi aaya….mujhe bhi aisa lag raha tha ki uss bhediya aur sadhu me koi na koi sambandh to avashya hi hai…shayad vo sadhu hi uss bhediya ka roop badal kar uss bhayanak shakal wale admi se lad raha tha jo kangana ko apne sath le jana chahta tha…lekin ye kaise sambhav hai, ye meri samajh me nahi aaya.

Hosh me aate hi sadhu ne apne jhole ko talash kiya aur usse dekhne laga…phir achanak hi jor se cheekh utha..hum phir hairan ho gaye.

Sadhu—nahi…ye nahi ho sakta.

Raj—kya hua sadhu baba…? Kya nahi ho sakta….?

Sadhu (ghabrahat me)—beti kya tumne vo dibba kahi dekha hai mere jhole me jo rakha hua tha…?

Kangana—nahi baba

Raj—koun sa dibba…?

Sadhu—vo hi dibba...jiske andar ek tilismi kitab rakhi thi....usme iss tilism ke baare me sab likha hua tha aur usko todne ka tarika bhi.

Payal—kyaa... ?

Sadhu (sir me hath rakh)—akhir vohi hua jiska mujhe darr tha....vo dushman uss kitab ko le gaya…shayad vo isliye hi aaya tha.

Raj—aisi kya adbhut baat thi uss kitab me ki aap itna ghabra rahe hain.... ? kitab gayab huyi hai aap to nahi na... ? apko to iss tilism ke baare me sab pata hoga hi... ?

Sadhu—uss tilismi kitab ko sirf vahi padh sakta hai jiske liye vo likhi gayi ho…..kintu jab tum uss raaz tak pahuchoge tab vaha iss kitab ke bina jo janna chahte ho vo kabhi nahi jaan paoge….jab iss tilism ke tootne ka waqt aaya tab uska gayab hona apshagun hai…avashya hi tum par ya tumhare pariwar ke upar koi bahut bada sankat aane wala hai.

Payal—kaisa sankat….?

Sadhu—iss tilism ko todne ke liye sadiyo se kayi taqte koshish me lagi hain….ab tumhe yaha se jana chahiye.. apni ankhe band karo sab

Maine unse uss kamre ke rahasya aur bhediya ke bare me janne ki bahut koshish ki lekin unhone kisi ka bhi jawab nahi diya aur uth kar ussi kamre me chale gaye aur agle hi pal kangana aur sadhu dono hi gayab ho gaye… ab vaha par koi makan nahi tha balki hum sab ek vichitra si dikhne wali jagah me aa gaye the.

Payal—arey vo sadhu to phir se gayab ho gaya….‼

Nani—ab hame aage chalna chahiye…magar ye kaisi jagah hai….?

Hamare samne aag ka ek dariya tha lekin dusri taraf jane ka koi marg nahi tha...siway lakdi ki ek patti ke jo ki dono chhor ko jod rahi thi...kintu vo bahut barik aur patli hone ke sath sath bahut jyada chiknayi yukt thi jiske upar se chalna behad khatarnak tha.

Neha—hum dusri taraf kaise jayenge.... ?

Nani—uss sadhu ne to kaha tha ki ....

Raj—uss sadhu ki baat chhodo...ye bhi to sambhav hai ki vo koi dagabaz ho aur hamare jariye apna koi maqsad siddh karna chahta ho....hame apni manzil khud hi talash karni hogi.

Payal—lekin iss aag ko paar kaise karenge hum.... ?

Raj—aap aur paridhi didi mere kandhe par baith jao….chachi aap meri peeth par aa jao.

Neha—pagal hai kya…? Tu koi ghoda gadi hai…?

Raj—aaj gadha banna padega..jaldi karo

Nani—mera kya hoga...mai kaise uss paar jaungi.... ?

Payal—tum dariya tair kar aa jana.

Raj—aap meri kamar me pair lapet kar chipak jao

Maine payal aur paridhi didi ko dono kandho par aur chachi ko peeth me aur nani ko samne se chhati se chipka kar uss lakdi par chalne ko taiyar ho gaya.

Maine apni shakti ki madad se sab ka vajan bilkul phool ki tarah kar diya jisse chalne me vo toot na sake vajan ke karan…lekin isme ek dikkat aa gayi.

Nani samne se meri kamar me dono taraf pair lapet kar chipki huyi thi….jisse unki sari aur petikot khisak kar unki kamar tak aa gaya tha…chalne me unki choot mere lund par ragad khane lagi…natiza ye hua ki sikandar gusse se aag babula hokar uth kar khada ho gaya aur nani ki choot ke sath dhakka mukki karne laga.

Nani ko bhi shayad mere khade lund ka ehsaas ho gaya tha…jisse vo kuch jyada hi hil dul rahi thi…shayad apni choot ko mere lund ki ragad khane se bachana chahti thi.

Raj—aap ko chup chup nahi rahna ho to utar du niche…itna hil dul kyo rahi ho….?

Payal—ha raj…utar do…utar do

Nani (mann me)—ek to apna musal jabardasti meri choot me pele de raha hai upar se kahta hai ki hil dul kyo rahi ho.. kitna kamina ho gaya hai raj tu....lekin main ab kya karu... ? ye musal to lagta hai uss paar pahuchne se pahle hi meri panty me hole karke meri usme andar ghus jayega....main kuch kar bhi nahi sakti...kaha phas gayi...aaaahh kitna kada kada hai lohe ki rod jaisa.

Main yu hi sab ko lekar chalta raha...aur sikandar nani ki choot se jhagda karta raha....iss jhagde ka natiza ye nikla ki nani apni lakh koshisho ke baad bhi khud ko nahi rok payi aur dhire dhire kamottejit hone lagi.

Yahi haal neha chachi ka bhi tha....uttejit to vo bhi ho chuki thi..iska ek karan iss samay mere sharir me shaktiya active thi jinke sampark me hone ke karan dono garam ho rahi thi.

Mera bhi mann thoda thoda bahakne laga tha….maine ek hath piche le jakar neha chachi ki sari ke andar hath daal ke unke chutad thaam liye to dusre hath ko niche le jakar nani ki ankho me dekhte huye unki panty ek taraf se khiska di aur unki choot me ungli chala kar lund ko unke ras dwar par tika diya.

Nani ki ankhe swatah hi uttejana me band ho gayi aur unhone iss baar kuch nahi kaha…jabki ek hath se maine chachi ki panty ke andar kar diya aur unke nange chutad sahlane laga…chachi madhosh hokar siski lete huye apna muh mere kaan ke paas le aayi.

Neha (kaan me)—aahhhh…rajjj…mat karrrr….mai khud…ko sambhal nahi….paungi….main bahak jaungiii….aahhh

Lekin maine koi jawab nahi diya aur aise hi unke dono chutado ko kas kas ke dabata gaya…beech beech me mere hath ki ungliya unki panty ke kinare se hote huye kabhi kabhi unki ras chhalkati choot se bhi touch ho ja rahi thi jisse vo aur bhi mujhse chipak jati thi.

Jabki samne ki taraf to toofan macha hua tha…sikandar lagatar nani ki choot me unke ras bahate darwaje par andar jane ke liye dabav badhaye ja raha tha.

Nani (mann me)—main aaj khud ko kyo nahi rok pa rahi hu….? Mujhe raj ki ye harkat achchi kyo lag rahi hai…? Mera dil chahta hai ki ye pal yahi tham jaye….itna asim sukh, itna maza mujhe kyo aa raha hai…? Jab kewal meri choot me raj ka lund ragad khane se bhar se itna swargik anand aa raha hai to jab vo apne isko mere andar daal kar mujhe chodega tab to main mare maze ke pagal hi na ho jau kahi…aaahhh

Neha (mann me)—kya raj sach me mujhe chodna chahta hai….? Uski harkat se lag to yahi raha hai…lekin mujhe gussa hone ki bajaye uski harkat jane kyo aaj bahut achchi lag rahi hai…kya main bhi raj se chudna chahti hu….? Pata nahi lekin aaj raj mere sath kuch bhi kare to shayad main usko karne se rok nahi sakungi…ohhhh rajj thoda aur tak sahlao aaj pahli baar kisi mard ke hatho se mere inn ango ne sparsh sukh paya hai…aise hi rajj karte raho.

Maine dono ki choot me ungli daal ke tezi se hilane laga…..Dono apni uttejana ko rok nahi payi aur thodi der baad hi jhadne lagi…..dono ka kayi sadiyo baad ye pahla skhalan tha…aisa anand unhone iss jeevan me pahli baar paya tha aaj.

Unke skhalan ke pashchat meri tantdra tab tooti jab payal didi ne jor se mera naam pukara…maine ankhe khol kar dekha to hum kisi adbhut pahadi ke samne khade the…vo dariya to kab ka paar ho chuka tha lekin nani aur neha chachi ki choot se khelte huye iss safar ka pata hi nahi chala ki kab main chalte huye yaha tak aa pahucha.

Payal—kaha dhyan hai tera….? Hum dono kab se awaz lagaye ja rahi hain magar tujhe to jaise kuch sunayi hi deta

Raj—haa vo sorry…main kahi khoya hua tha.

Maine sab ko niche utar kar neha chachi aur nani ki taraf dekha to dono ne apni gardan niche jhuka li…jaise mera samna karne se katra rahi ho.

Payal—ye koun si jagah hai.... ?

Raj—shayad yahi lutiya pahadi hai...jiske andar rajgarh ka sadiyo purana raaz dafan hai.

Sachmuch iss pahadi ka ye naam bilkul theek rakha gaya hai.....aur door se uski gol matol choti dekh ke kisi lutiya ki hi yaad aa jati hai.

Kyon ki anya pahadi chotiyo ki tarah ye chipti ya nukili nahi hai balki golayi liye huye hai aur kam se kam door se to dekhne par yehi nazar aata hai ki iske upar jane ki koi raah nahi ho sakti hai.

Par vastav me ye baat nahi hai ...iss pahadi ki choti par bane purane zamane ke qile jisko ki garhi kahna jyada munasib hoga ya mandir tak jane ke liye ek nahi kayi raste hain jo karib karib sabhi yadhyapi khatarnak to hain par abhi tak kaam me aane layak hain.

Iss pahadi ke niche aur jad ke sath lagi huyi ek choti nadi hai jo ghumti huyi teen taraf se iss pahadi ko gherti huyi door tak nikal jati hai.

Iss nadi ke theek kinare par hi ek makan hai jo kisi samay me jarur hi alishan aur behad hi khubsoorat raha hoga kintu iss samay bemarammat toota phoota hua bhayanak khandahar jaise dikh raha hai.

Hum ussi khandahar ki oor badh chale to dekha ki vo jaisa bahar se toota hua khandahar lag raha tha andar se vaisa nahi hai....andar se iss makan ka ek kafi bhag theek halat me dikh raha tha...

Payal—ye sab kya majra hai raj.... ?

Raj—vo dekho...upar wali uss garhi ko...vaha niche se upar janeke liye jo rasta bana hua hai uska naam shiv garhi likha hua hai.

Hum kuch hi aage gaye honge ki samne ek bada sa darwaja tika hua tha jiske upar bade bade aksharo me likha hua tha.

"Mout Ka Ghar...........Ye sthan Bade bade bhoot, Pret, Pishach aadi ke rahne ki jagah hai.....Yaha jo bhi aaya, vo mar kar inhi me shamil ho gaya.....hame apni tanhayi me khalal bilkul pasand nahi hai"

Paridhi—maine bhi suna hai ki yaha bhoot, pret, pishach raha karte hain jo kabhi kabhi yaha se bahar nikal kar junglo me ghumte hain....yahi karan hai ki raat to kya din me bhi koi iss tilismi jagah ki oor nahi aata hai....yaha hamesha ghor sannata hi chhaya rahta hai hamesha.

Nani—kya bhoot hain yaha.... ?

Payal—chinta mat kar tujhse jyada khartarnak nahi ho sakte vo bhi.

Raj—jana to padega hi....warna yaha aane ka koi fayda nahi niklega.....iske andar se hi hamari manzil ka rasta hai.. jo ab bilkul karib aa gayi hai.

Meri baato se sabhi ne majboori me sahmati jatayi.....hum abhi mushkil se uss darwaje tak hi pahuche honge ki tabhi....hamari ankhe kuch dekh kar buri tarah se chounk gayi.

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Awesome update bhai bahut hi shandar aur lajawab mind blowing aap ki story Mein suspense bahut jyada bhare Pade Hain aur flashback bhi bahut jyada lete ho aap Aise mein main kabhi kabhi confused ho jata hoon aap ki story read Karte Huye varna baaki aap ki story to bahut badiya hai​

 

[Raj]

JBAHUT HI SHAANDAAR DAMAAKEDAAR FANTASTIC EROTIC HOT AND INTERESTING UPDATE BHAI

 

[luv4sale696969]

What an update dear... Pahli baar laga tilism padh rahe hain....
Keep it up...

 

[anandsngh12]

Awesome update bhai bahut hi shandar aur lajawab mind blowing aap ki story Mein suspense bahut jyada bhare Pade Hain aur flashback bhi bahut jyada lete ho aap Aise mein main kabhi kabhi confused ho jata hoon aap ki story read Karte Huye varna baaki aap ki story to bahut badiya hai​

Thanks Siraj Bhai for Reading & Supporting my story.
I also thankful to you for this precious review.

Suspense to jarur hain bhai aur ye end tak chalte rahenge.
Purane suspense clear hote rahenge to naye bante rahenge
Vo suspense hi kya jo asani se samajh a jaye aur dimag ko confuse na kar sake...?
Suspense ka asli matlab hi hota hai ki vo dimag ko poori tarah se uljha de.

Ye kahani ek Saanp Sidhi ke Game ki tarah hai bhai Ya aap ye samajh lo ki ye kahani hi ek tarah ka tilism hai.
Saanp sidhi ke game me starting point aur ending point behad important hota hai..jiska bhi dhyan inme se thoda bhi hata samjho vo beech me bhatak gaya, vo vahi confuse ho jayega.

Maine kahani ke shuruwat me hi clear bataya hua ki iss kahani me aap jo kuch padhenge vo sab kuch naya aur pahli baar hoga
Maine kayi jagah comments reply me kaha hai ki har incident ke pahle main uska clue de deta hu..uss clue ko search karna reader ka kaam hai...bilkul jaisa ki tilism ke andar hota hai.

Halanki Rajgarh ke iss update ke sath hi lagbhag 75% old suspense clear ho jayenge but new a jayenge.
Kewal Raj, TBM aur Yamraj ka suspense abhi nahi khulega, vo story ke end me open hoga.

Jaha tak flashback ki baat hai to bhai story me kewal ek ya do hi flashback hain.
Pichle janam ki story flashback nahi hai balki apne aap me poora ka poora thread hai
Theek bilkul aise jaise ki aapne saajan ka update padha uske baad chamatkar ka update padhne chle gaye, to kya chamatkar ka update saajan ka flashback kahlayega....?
Nahi..na, bilkul vaise hi ye story hai...present ki story aur pichle janam ki story ko do alag alag update samajh kar padhiye
Pichle sabhi janam ki story ka nichod ye present ki story hai, maine pahle bhi kaha hai ki hamara gujra hua kal hamare vartaman ka darpan hota hai.

Kahani me chahe jitne bhi character's ho agar aap sirf Raj, Divya, Pari aur Priyadarshini par focus rakhenge to kahi bhi confuse nahi honge...baki character's ko enjoy kijiye.

Next update mere liye bhi ek chalange hai....ye update main last 15 days se likhne ki koshish kar raha hu but khud satisfied nahi ho pa raha usse, bcoz ye update hi iss saanp sidhi jaisi kahani ka main starting point hai.
Ye update nikalte hi kahani apni purani lay me lout ayegi...iss update ke aage ki story i hope kisi ko bore nahi karegi.

Thanks for your valueable comment bhai.

 

[Naina]

Story me twist laiye, hero ke relatives... jaise.. Mami, chachi, mouisi, Bua,ma sabko mar dijiye..because hero is ou, sakti kapur . So Bas raj ko jinda rahiyega.. Kyu.. Kyunki raj ek raaz hai....

 

[Nkmahakal]

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[Yuvraj singh]

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