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What an update !
Anand bhai you are the Virat kohli of xf.
How can u write such an amazing updates daily?

Again a fantastic update.
I love twists in your story.Yumraj's scene was awesome.This scene was little bit scary.The dialogue of yumraj was amazing.
Mala and Sheekha was saved by the yumraj.Mrinal's character had added a new dimension to the story.Loved it very much.I almost forget about Chanchal I thought that it would be Paridhi who had come.Paridhi's entry was very dramatic.Just love these type of excitement.

Very good update.
Great work man.....
Keep it up.......
Take care....
 
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sayed ish panchbi tbm ka paap ka ghada bhar chuka tha, isliye usne, apni dardnaak mout khud hi chun liya tha yamraj hatho. ab sirf chaar tbm bache hai
Oh to mala aur shikha ki help karne wali ush aurat ka naam munni hai...
ye chanchal, sabhi ko apni ashliyat batake, mafi kyun nahi mang leti? jo apne pariwar ki nafrat ko jhel rahi hai itne dino se. haan mafi milne me waqt lagegi. Jaise bhi ho woh sab to apne hai... ek na ek din, dil se ushe maaf kar hi denge.
hmm... paridhi ko dekh ab sabhi ka kya reaction hoga? sayed khushi aur hairani.
Brilliant update Anand ji.....
 
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anandsngh12 said:
SAAJAN
UPDATE-183​

Tabhi kamre ki light band ho gayi.....phir jal uthi....aur phir bar bar band chalu...band chalu hone lagi...jaldi jaldi...TBM soch me pad gaya...tabhi usko laga ki koi uske piche khada hai.

Jaldi se usne palat ke dekha lekin vaha koi nahi tha....usne isse apna vaham samajh kar phir se shikha ki taraf dhyan diya lekin phir se light on off honi shuru ho gayi.

Tabhi usko phir se laga ki koi uske piche khada hai...usne iss bar dhire dhire apni gardan piche ghumayi lekin agle hi pal ek cheekh goonj gayi vaha jo ki TBM ki hi thi

Hua ye ki jaise hi usne gardan piche ki to vaha khade shakhs ko dekhte hi uski cheekh nikal gayi.....usne shayad koi bhayanak se bahut bhayanak shakal dekh li thi.

TBM—kkkkk......koun ho..tum........ ?

Aur phir vaha ek bhayanak awaz goonj uthi.........

Y.....A.....M.....R.....A.....J

Ab Aage.......

Samne ek bahut hi bhayanak shakal ka admi ....nahi..nahi admi kahna to usko sahi nahi hoga kyon ki itni bhayanak shakal to kisi admi ki to ho hi nahi sakti...lagbhag 10 se 12 feet ooncha kad, ankhe ek dam surkh lal vo bhi kisi football jitni badi badi...chehra poora koyle se bhi adhik kala, hath barabar lambe lambe daant jo bahar ko nikle huye the.....sir ke baal jamin tak latak rahe the jisse uske chehre ka kuch bhag hi dikhayi pad raha tha.

Krurta uske chehre se hi jhalak rahi thi....agar koi insan galti se bhi uska ye roop dekh le to nissandeh agar uski mrityu nahi huyi to bhi heart attack to avashya hi aa jayega.

Uski aisi bhayanak shakal dekh kar TBM ke hosh ud gaye....hawas aur vasna ka nasha chhu mantar ho gaya... darr ke maare uski ghigghi bandh gayi....kuch der pahle tak jo apne aap ko tees maar khan bata raha tha ab uski halat sher ke samne hiran jaisi ho gayi.

TBM (haklate huye)—kkk...koun Yamrajjj..... ? Aur tum andarrr aaye kaiseee... ?

Yamraj—hahahahaha…..koun Yamraj….? Hahahahahaha……mujhe andar aane ke liye kisi ki ijajat ki jarurat nahi hai aur na hi koi deewar mujhe rok sakti hai…..mera kaam hi logo ke pran lena hai..aur aaj teri bari hai marne ki….hahahahaha apne aap ko bacha sakta hai to bacha le….hahahaha

Yamraj ko apni taraf badhta dekh kar TBM badi tezi se paas me drawer me rakhi pistol nikal kar uske upar andhadundh fire karne laga….lekin ye kya ek bhi goli yamraj ka kuch bhi nahi bigad saki…usne pistol se nikalne wali sabhi goliyo ko apne hatho me pakad rakha tha aur agle hi pal dekhte hi dekhte usne unn sabhi goliyo ko apne muh me daal kar chaba ke kha gaya.

Ye dekh TBM ki halat aur bhi kharab ho gayi…..usne turant kamre se bahar bhagne ke liye darwaje ki taraf doud lagayi….par jab tak vo darwaje tak pahuch pata uske pahle hi Yamraj ke sir ke baal jamin tak latak rahe the……. Vo achanak hawa me uchhale aur tezi se TBM ko buri tarah se lapet liya.

TBM (chillate)—arey koi hamka bachaoooo.....yee janwar hamka maar dalega.......arey koi to hamka bachai lo...hamka chhod do...hum tumhre aage hath jodta hu.....hamra sab paisa laeee lo par hamka jane do....koi bachaoooo

Yamraj—hahahahaha......aur chillaa....abhi jab vo ladki tujhse chhodne ki bheekh maang rahi thi tab tujhe uss abla par daya aayi thi kya.... ? teri doulat mere liye kankad patthar se adhik kuch nahi hai, main unka kya karunga..

Yamraj ke daanto ka aakaar achanak badhne laga....ab to TBM ki dahshat ke maare bahut buri halat ho gayi....kampte huye usne apni pant hi geeli kar di...aur apne bachao me jor jor se chillane laga kintu uski awaz ab uske gale ke andar hi dum tod de rahi thi.

TBM (gidgidate huye))—hamka chhod do...aaaaa...hamka jane do....hum asli TBM naahi hu.....asli TBM jab samne ayega tumhre to tumhri bhi pant geeli huyi jayegi.....humko jane do...pls....are koi to bacha lo re hamka....ye sasura hamka aaj maar dalega re......

TBM unn baalo me lipta hua khud ko chhod dene ki gujarish kiye ja raha tha....aur uske sharir par unn baalo ki pakad aur bhi shakht hoti ja rahi thi...ab to uska hilna dulna tak mushkil ho gaya tha.

Achanak ek baar phir se baal hawa me uchhale aur kamre ki charo deewaro par TBM ko bari bari se patakne lage jaldi jaldi 10-15 baar usne patkani lagayi...itne me hi vo adhmara ho chuka tha.....iss baar unn baalo ne usko upar le jakar patka aur chhod diya...dhadam se niche fursh par gira,,uske hath aur pairo ki haddiya toot gayi.

Phir bhi usne sarakte huye hi bhagne ki koshish ki......lekin agle hi pal Yamraj ke baalo ne uske dono pairo ko jakad kar phir se piche ghasit liya.

Yamraj—apni mout se bach kar bhagna chahta hai kayar.....har kisi se bacha ja sakta hai iss brahmand me, uski aaradhna kar ke, usko prasann kar ke...yaha tak ki shani dev ki bhi aaradhna kar ke unki kudrishti se bacha ja sakta hai.....kintu kisi ki bhi pooja aaradhna kar lo koi mout se nahi bach sakta.....yahi har yug ka antim satya hai.

Aur phir Yamraj ke unn baalo ne TBM ke dono pairo ko vipareet disha me phailane lage...vaha TBM ki dard bhari cheekhe goonjane lagi lekin unn cheekho ko sunne wala koi nahi tha jo uski madad karne aa sakta... yamraj ne apne nakhuno se uski dono ankhe nikal li aur ek kagaz par uska hath pakad ke kuch likhne laga....vo aise hi dard me chillata raha aur antatah uske sharir ke do tukde ho gaye.....aur uski jeevan yatra ka bhi yahi ant ho gaya.

Yamraj—kitna bhi samjhao lekin koi samajhta hi nahi hai....aur ant me sab jeevan ki bheekh mangne lagte hain...maine kitni baar samjhaya hai.....

Usne vaha se jane se pahle kamre ki deewar par khoon se likhta gaya......

"Mout Se Bhi Bhala Koi Bacha Hai Aaj Tak"​

Usko maarne ke baad Yamraj ne ek nazar shikha ki oor dali jo ki behosh ho gayi thi ya phir kar di gayi thi....uske baad vo achanak hawa ke ek jhonke ki tarah kaha gayab ho gaya kuch pata nahi.

Kuch der baad vahi plane wali aurat vaha police ke sath pahuch gayi....police ko achanak vaha dekh kuch log vaha se bhagne me safal ho gaye to kuch unke hatthe chadh gaye.

Uss aurat ko vaha dekh kar mala buri tarah se chounk gayi....lekin uss aurat ne ishare se usse shant rahne ko kaha....police walo ne tab tak shikha ko bhi khoj nikala lekin TBM ki itni buri tarike se mout dekh aur deewar par khoon ki likhawat dekh kar unke bhi rongte khade ho gaye.

Inspector—ohhhh...ek aur khoon... ! iss Yamraj ne to naak me dum kar diya hai….pahle hi uss TBM se pareshan the, ab ye bhi pareshan karne yaha aa gaya…..aaj tak pata nahi chal paya ki ye Yamraj aur TBM hain koun….?

Tabhi unki nazar bistar me pade ek kagaz par gayi jo ki khoon se likha hua....

"Meri Ankhe mere marne ke baad iss ladki ko transplant kar di jaye...yahi meri antim ichcha hai…Jo ki iss chhote se box me main nikal kar rakh raha hu."

Mala (chikh kar)—didiiiiii

Inspector—kya ye apki bahan hai.... ?

Mala—ha sir...ye meri didi hai....ye admi meri bahan ko ankh lagane ke liye yaha laya tha....lekin kisi ne usko bhi maar diya...koun hai ye.... ?

Inspector—ye bahut bada mujrim hai....achcha hua iss aurat ne jinka naam munni hai hamare paas pahuch kar report likhayi ki tum dono ko isne kidnap kar liya hai aur hum yaha tak pahuch gaye.

Mala—lekin vo to meri bahan ko ankh lagane ke liye yaha lekar aaya tha...phir isne kaise kaha ki hamara kidnap hua hai... ?

Munni—kyon ki main pahle bhi uss admi ko kahi dekh chuki thi...lekin yaad nahi....jab maine usko tumhe apne sath le jate dekha to mujhe uske upar sandeh hua aur main picha karte huye yaha tak pahuch gayi....uske ek admi ko apne jism ke jaal me phasaya to usne sari kahani bata di ki yaha kya hone wala hai....aur phir maine police ko call kar diya

Mala (shocked)—omg....itna bada dhokha....

Inspector—hawaldar…forensik team ko call karo aur inn logo ko Raj sahab ke yaha chhod aao….vaise maine unko call kar diya hai.

Uske baad unhone shikha ke upar pani chhidak kar hosh me laya aur uska bayan lekar police jeep me raj ke yaha bhej diya.

Idhar main aaj ke birthday program ka shubhaarambh karne ja hi raha tha ki tabhi vaha ek gadi enter huyi jisse sab ka dhyan uss aagantuk shakhs ki taraf mud gaya.

Jaise hi usne gadi se bahar kadam rakha to uske chehra dekhte hi sabhi ghar wale chounk gaye….unke chehro par nafrat aur gusse ke bhaav janam lene lage.

Ye aagantuk shakhs aur koi nahi balki Chanchal thi, jise maine bulaya tha…..vo kas masate huye dhire dhire aage badhne lagi….usko aage aate dekh kar payal didi ka gussa satve aas maan par pahuch gaya aur vo aage badhne hi vali thi ki maine unki mansha samajh kar turant unka hath pakad liya aur na me ishara kiya.

Chanchal hath me gift liye huye sab ke beech me se hote huye mere paas tak akhir pahuch hi gayi….lekin yaha tak ka safar tay karne me hi uski saanse bhari ho chuki thi…..main uske dil ki halat samajh sakta tha….leki bakiyo ke chehre par gussa aur nafrat hi dikhayi de rahi thi uske prati.

Chanchal—hi raj….kaise ho…?

Raj—fine and welcome here to join us.

Kuch hi der me mala aur shikha bhi pahuch gayi munni bai ke sath police van me…..maine dono ko apne paas bula kar unka welcome kiya….bheed bhad dekh kar mala to saham kar rah gayi kintu shikha to dekh nahi sakti thi to mera sparsh pate hi vo mujhse lipat kar rone lagi.

Shikha (rote huye)—aaj ye duniya itni jalim kyo hai raj…? Log kyo mujh andhi ke piche pade hain….?

Usko mujhse lipate dekh payal didi usko khich kar door karne hi wali thi ki maine unhe rok diya….sab sawaliya nazaro se mujhe ghure ja rahe the.

Raj—chalo koi baat nahi….ab sab theek ho jayega….aao yaha baitho…..and thanks munni ki tumne inn dono ko bacha liya.

Munni—maine inko nahi balki khud ko bachaya hai….agar nahi bachati to tumhari nazaro me aur bhi niche gir jati vaise maine ab vo dhandha chhod diya hai.

Raj—achcha kiya….aao baitho tum bhi…..ye veer kaha rah gaya.

Ruchi—veer ko yaha rukne layak mrinal ne chhoda kaha hai….bechara apni izzat bachaye room me chhupa hoga.

Mrinal—main abhi lekar aati hu usko…..pakka kamre me kisi na kisi par balatkar kar raha hoga vo balatkari…main abhi aayi.

Payal (dhire se)—raj..ye chanchal yaha kyo aayi hai…? Tune mujhe roka kyo... ? aaj main isko nahi chhodungi... main ye kabhi nahi bhool sakti ki ek nanhi si jaan ki jaan lene me koi kasar nahi chhodi isne.

Raj—didi....aap aisa kuch bhi nahi karogi....iss samay vo hamari guest hai....philhal aap aur neha chachi ready raho.

Payal—hmmmm

Raj—ladies and gentlemen...sorry...for some delay....kintu ab koi delay na karte huye aaj ke iss karya kram ko aage badhate huye main ek phir se aap sabhi ka hriday se swagat, vandan aur abhinandan karta hu.....jaisa ki maine bataya ki aaj iss ghar ki ladli Paridhi Thakur ka janamdin hai ...so, keep welcome with big hands...Miss Paridhi Thakur

Mere iss udbodhan se sabhi ghar wale chounk gaye....unhone shayad lagne laga ki main paridhi ki yaad me pagal ho gaya hu athwa mera mansik santulan kuch bigad gaya hai jo ek mar chuki ladki ke vaha aane ki ghosna kar raha hu.

Agle hi pal sabhi lights off ho gayi aur focus sidha main gate par hone laga……tabhi ek gadi enter huyi…car ka gate khula aur phir usme se behad sundar kapdo me saji dhaji…kisi dulhan ka shringar kiye huye usme se Paridhi bahar nikli.

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Mazza aagya bhai
Ab ye bhi asli tbm nhi h
To asli tbm khan h
Acha h us ladki ne police bula li or yamraaj whan aagya
Chanchal ko jaldi apnaya jaana chaiye parivar se
Brilliant update
Keep rocking bhai :)
 
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Very nice update
paridhi ko dekh kar ghar walo ka kya reaction hoga dekhne me mza ayega
tbm ka ek bhai aur mara gya yamraj ke hatho
mrinal to sach me veer ka rape karke rahegi
chanchal ko mafi mang leni chahiye bahut dukh dekha h usne bhi
wonderful jabardast update
 
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