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Bhai nahi dena ha kya update aap itna late kr dete ho ki padne ka maja hi chala jata ha
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Update to main bhi dena chahta hu bhai par kya karu,
Poora din office me nikal jata hai kewal raat ke 3-4 ghante ka samay milta hai kuch likhne ke liye
Bcoz subah phir uth kar office jana hota hai to kuch samay sona bhi jaruri hai.
Saajan ka har update lagbhag 3000 word ke upar hi hota hai.
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Kyon ki dost ye bahut hi uljhi huyi kahani hai, bahut se pending suspenses hain.
Kuch bhi likhne se pahle unn suspenses ko dhyan me rakhna hota hai, sath me kuch readers ke jo sawal hote hain unko bhi update ke madhyam se clear karna hota hai, to isme samay lag jata hai.
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Aap sab ko daily 2000 words se upar ka update dene ki koshish karunga saajan me.
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Ok Anand bhai
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OK bhai thank you but me bhi ek reader ke hisab se bol rha tha mind mt krna
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Unn dono ki baat sun kar bahar khade shakhs ke seene me jaise bijli hi toot padi......uske hriday me gahra aaghat laga ki vidhya bhi..... ? uska poora chehra anshuo ke sailab se tar batar ho gaya.
Aur agle hi pal inn anshuo ne bhisan jwalamukhi ka roop ikhtiyar kar liya......usne jor se darwaja ko dhakka de kar khol diya....achanak darwaja khulne se chanchal aur vidhya dono hi chounk kar udhar palat gaye.
Darwaje par nazar jate hi dono ke niche se jamin khisak gayi......vidhya ke hath se khanjar chhut kar niche gir gaya aur chehre par anjana bhay sama gaya.....dono ke hath pair khade khade thar thar kampne lage.
Ab Aage.......
Chanchal aur vidhya ne jaise hi darwaje par mamta aur ruchi ko jhade dekha to unko dekhte hi unki avastha aisi ho gayi jaisi ki unke sharir me khoon ka ek katra bhi na ho, poora khoon jam gaya ho. Aur dono ki juban ko lakwa maar gaya ho...muh se kuch shabd hi nahi phoot rahe the ki ab aage kya bole aur kya nahi bole... ?
Nani ki sachchayi janne ke baad mamta buri tarah se andar se toot gayi thi...uska hriday asahniya dard se chhatpata raha tha...isliye ruchi unko lekar unke room me ja rahi thi.
Kintu vidhya ke room ke bahar se gujarte huye jaise hi unke kano me raj ko khanjar maarne ki baat sunayi padi to dono ke aage badhte pair jaha ke taha jadwat ho gaye...aage ek kadam bhi nahi badh sake...poora sharir shithil pad gaya aur dono andar se aa rahi awazo ko dhyan se sunne lagi.
Jaise jaise chanchal aur vidhya ki baato ne nok jhok ke beech me sara sach ugalna shuru kiya to unki sachchayi sunte hi ruchi aur mamta ke dil ko bahut gahra aaghat pahucha.
Dono bechari abhi nani ki sachchayi jaan kar hi sadme se ubar bhi nahi payi thi ki ek aur sazish unke samne khul kar aa khadi huyi....unki seene se dard ka athah sagar ek baar phir se umad pada aur vo ankho ke raste bahar chhalakne lag gaya.
Vidhya ne jaise hi raj ke seene me khanjar maarne ki ghatna chanchal se kahi to usko sunte hi mamta ke hriday me itni tez pida huyi ki jaise ye khanjar raj ke seene me nahi balki uske khud ke seene me ghopa gaya ho....uske hriday me uth rahe dard ka aanklan to shayad iss samay bhagwan bhi nahi kar pate.
Ruchi ko to iss paristhiti me ye samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha ki vo iss samay apne aap ko sambhale ya phir maa ko....par kaise sambhale... ? dono ki halat to lagbhag ek jaisi ho rahi thi.
Dono hi dard ke iss sagar me doob rahi thi aur unhe sahara de kar iss sagar me doobne se bachane wala koi nahi tha.....dono vahi khade khade behosh hone ki kagar par aa gayi thi....dono ka chehra anshuo me bhig chuka tha.
Vidhya ne jaise hi raj ke seene me phir se khanjar utarne ki baat ki to....uske iss vakya se ruchi aur mamta dono ke sabra ka baandh toot gaya....ankho se bahte huye anshuo ne bhisan ugra roop dharan kar liya....unki ankho se bahte pani ka ye sailab jwalamukhi ban gaya aur uska garam lava agni ki bhanti dahakte huye bahar aane ko machal utha.
Ruchi ka chehra gusse se tamtama utha aur usne jor se dhakka dekar darwaja khol diya....vo ek trained bahadur police officer thi to uske liye ye koi badi baat nahi thi.
Darwaje par mamta aur ruchi ko khade dekh kar chanchal aur vidhya dono ke hath pair thar thar kampne lag gaye dono ko kuch samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha ki vo aage kya bole aur kya na bole... ? vidhya ke hath se khanjar chhut kar niche gir gaya.
Vidhya (ladkhadati juban)—di....didi.....aaaap....yahaaa... ? vooo...mainnnnn....
Mamta (hath ke ishare se rokte huye)—tadaakkkk……aage kuch bhi bolne ki avashyakta nahi hai….maine sab sunn liya hai…wah…! Kya kya sazish hoti rahi mere bete ke liye….aur main pagal aaj tak samajhti rahi ki sab mere raj ko pyar karte hain main payal ko hi galat samajhti rahi….lekin mujhe kya pata tha ki mere ghar me to charo taraf nagphani hi nagphani ke poudhe lage hain…? Mujhe pata nahi tha ki meri aastin me saanp hi saanp hain.
Mamta (dard bhare gale se)—har koi mere raj ki jaan ka dushman hai…koi bhi bharosa karne layak nahi raha….aur tum tum to mousi ho uski….mousi ka matlab bhi pata hai tumhe…maa…si…..arey mousi to maa ke saman hoti hai…lekin tum bhi, unn logo me hi shamil ho gayi.
Ruchi (rote huye gusse me)—hame pahle hi samajh jana chahiye tha…jo mousi kabhi hamare paida hone ke baad khabar tak lene nahi aayi vo achanak itne saalo baad kaise hamare paas aa gayi…?
Mamta (tadapte huye)—maine to kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki meri bahan bhi aisi niklegi..lekin tumhara kasoor bhi nahi hai, jaisi maa vaisi beti…tum logo ke hath bhi nahi kaampe ek masum ki jaan lene ki baat sochte huye…..? lanat hai tum par…..agar aaj iss samay yaha payal hoti to shayad tum itni der tak jinda khadi nahi rah pati, ye baat pata chalte hi tumhari gardan kab ki tumhare sharir se alag ho chuki hoti…..aaj to shayad khud raj bhi usko teri jaan lene se nahi rok pata.
Mamta—akhir uss masum ne kya bigada tha tum logo ka jo sab ke sab uski jaan lene par amada ho gaye…..? ye khanjar tumneuske seene par nahi balki ek maa ke seene par mara hai….main kal hi apne bete ko le kar tum logo se kahi door chali jaungi…bahut bardast kar chuki lekin ab nahi…..apne bete ki hifajat aaj se main khud karungi.
Mamta ki baat se dono chupchap sir jhukaye khadi rahi….kahti bhi to kya….? Dono ki sachchayi samne jo aa gayi thi… iss shor sharabe ki awaz sun kar baki sab bhi vaha ekattha ho gaye….sab ko sach jaan kar dukh hua….lekin unme sabse jyada jhatka to avni ko laga, sach jaan kar.
Priyadarshini ne apni ankhe band kar rakhi thi….shayad uske dimag me kuch chal raha tha….kahi uski ye shanti kisi aane wale bahut bade toofan ka sanket to nahi hai…..? kintu uski chhalakti huyi ankhe uske dard ko bayan kar rahi thi.
Avni—maaaaa….aap ne aisa kiya, raj ke sath…..lekin kyo…..? kya dushmani thi apki raj se….? Vo to tab ek chhota bachcha tha...phir kyo kiya aap ne aisa.... ? bolo maa…bolo…..akhir aap bologi bhi to kya….aaj mujhe aap se aur khud se nafrat ho gayi hai, ki main aap jaisi aurat ki beti hu….aaj se meri koi maa nahi hai…aap meri maa nahi ho aaj se sun liya aap ne….
Vidhya—aisa mat bol beti….main teri maa hu...pahle veer aur ab tu...tum dono mujhse nafrat karoge to main to jeete ji mar hi jaungi beti...mujhse nafrat mat kar.
Avni (dard me)—aap kisi ki maa nahi ho sakti….jo ek maa ki god sooni kar de vo bhala kaise kisi ki maa ho sakti hai veer bhaiya ne theek hi kiya hai…aap sirf nafrat ke hi kabil ho.
Vidhya (rote huye)—aisa mat bol beti…main tum dono ki nafrat bardast nahi kar sakti….didi aap hi samjhao inhe ki mujhse nafrat na kare….chahe to aap mujhe jail bhijwa do..main apna jurm kubul karne ko taiyyar hu…didi aap inse kaho ki mujhse nafrat na kare.
Vidhya avni ke paas ja kar usko apni baho me lena chaha to avni ne uska hath jhatak diya aur door khadi ho gayividhya vahi niche jamin par baith kar rone lagi.
Mamta—aaj pata chala tujhe ki aulad ka dard kaisa hota hai…? Tere bachche to sirf tujhse baat karna chhod diye to tujhe itna dard ho raha hai to soch jab tune ek maa ki god hi sooni kar di tab mujhe kitna dard hua hoga…?
Vidhya (rote huye)—mujhe maaf kar do didi….main swarth aur nafrat me itni andhi ho gayi thi ki apko apna sabse bada dushman samajhne lagi thi…mujhe maaf kar do didi..veer aur avni se kahiye ki vo bhi apni maa ko maaf kar de.
Mamta—tune jindagi bhar dusro ke raste par kaante hi bichhaye hain aur ab khud kaanto par chalne se darr lagta hai main aaj apne aap ko kuch samajhne aur samjhaane ki halat me nahi hu to unko kya samjhaungi…? Meri aap sabse vinti hai ki aaj ki kisi ghatna ka jikra koi bhi nahi karega..jab tak ki main apne bachcho ko le kar kahi door na chali jau….main nahi chahti ki ye baat payal ko pata chale…warna iss baar usko khoon ki holi khelne se koi nahi rok payega.
Veer (tezi se)—aap kahi nahi jaogi maa….jo yaha iss pyar ke mandir me rahne layak nahi hain kewal vo jayenge bahar.
Mamta (rote huye)—nahi veer…ab main nahi rahungi…mujhe hamesha darr laga rahega.
Veer—raj ki hifajat ke liye abhi uska ye dost jinda hai maa…..khud Yamraj ko bhi raj tak pahuchne se pahle mera samna karna hoga…kya aap ko mujh par bhi bharosa nahi raha maa….? Kya aap mujhe apna beta nahi manti…? Kya main iss kabil bhi nahi raha ab….?
Mamta (veer ko apne gale se laga kar)—main tujh par koi sandeh nahi kar rahi veer beta….mujhe to tum par naaz hai ki raj ko tum jaisa dost mila…main jaise raj ki maa hu vaise hi teri bhi maa hu pagle.
Veer—phir aap kahi nahi jaogi…aur agar jaogi to main bhi aap ke sath hi jaunga…vaise bhi raj ke alawa mera ab iss duniya me koi bhi nahi hai.
Veer ki aisi kadwi baato ne vidhya ko andar tak jhakjhor diya….usko ab apne kiye paapo par pashchatap hone laga tha kintu ab kiya hi kya ja sakta tha….gujra hua samay to lout ke nahi aa sakta na.
Mamta (chanchal ki oor dekh)—aur tum…..! tumse to main jyada kuch kahna hi nahi chahti….kyon ki raj ne tumhe party me bulaya tha aur usne ham sabse hath jod ke vinti ki thi…..lekin miss chanchal ab party khatam ho chuki hai…. Meri tumse vinti hai ki apne ghar prasthan karo.
Ruchi (gusse me)—suna nahi tumne….? Apne ghar prasthan karo, miss chanchal....isse pahle ki mehman nawazi me hamse koi galti ho jaye yaha se chali jao.....gande khoon ki gandi paidaeesh.
Ruchi ki ye baat chanchal ke seene me kisi teer ki bhanti lagi....uski antar aatma tak hil gayi uske dard me...kisi ne sach hi kaha hai ki shabdo ki maar goli aur talwar ki maar se bhi jyada tez hoti hai....kisi hathiyar se lagi chot to waqt ke sath bhar jati hai kintu shabdo ki chot ka ghaav jeevan paryant nahi bharta hai.
Chanchal (chillate huye)—nahi hai ganda khoon mera.....samjhi....(dhire se anshu bahate)—mera khoon ganda nahi haiii
Ek dusri jagah ek band kamre me do log baith kar sharab pine me mashroof the…..unme se ek to TBM tha aur dusra uska shagird hariya.
Hariya—sarkar ek baat hamre samajh me nahi aayi….?
TBM (pite huye)—ka re budbak….?
Hariya—aaj aap police se kaise bache…? Main to dekhte hi bhag gaya tha.
TBM—vo sab tohre samajh me nahi ayega….arey hamka to saat saat loko ke bade bade maharathi saat janam se dhoond rahe hain lekin aaj tak hamka pakadna to door pata tak nahi laga sake to yee police sasuri koun sa khet ka muli hai re.
Hariya—ham kuch samjha nahi sarkar….?
TBM—tu sasur ka budbak vo sab chhod aur jo ham kahta hu vo dhyan se sun.
Hariya—sun raha hu..boliye sarkar..
TBM—hariyaaa….loha garam hai hathoda maar do.
Hariya—kis par hathoda marna hai sarkar…..? main kuch samjha nahi.... ?
TBM—tu sasur ka budbak hai aur hamesha budbak hi rahega.....ham veer ki baat kar raha hu....tapkaye do sasur ke nati ka....
Hariya—par sarkar veer ko tapkane se hame kya fayda milega..... ?
TBM—tu sach much ka lund bijaaur hai re hariya......veer vidhya se nafrat karat hai…..aur vidhya raj se…..isse pahle ki vu vidhya apni nafrat ki aag thandi kare hum ookha aur bhadka denge…..vidhya samjhegi ki raj ne badla lene ki khatir veer ko tapka diya…aur phir ye nafrat ki aag aur jyada khatarnak ho kayegi re budbak..samajh aawa tohre dimag ma kachhu ki naahi re.
Hariya—samajh gaya sarkar
TBM—to ja aur vo veer ko kaise bhi kar ke marwa do sasure ko…..vaise ye kaam me ham ek apne taqatwar admi ko laga diya hu.
Vahi mangal grah me paridhi ki halat ab pahle se kahi behtar thi....neha ke chehre par ab vishwash ki jhalak aane lagi thi...sab ko paridhi ke ankhe kholne ka intazar tha.
Raj—main khane ke liye kuch le aata hu....mujhe pata hai ki kisi ne bhi kuch khaya nahi hai iss tension ki vajah se.
Payal—lekin yaha ghar me khane ko kya milega... ? yaha to koi rahta bhi nahi hai.
Raj—yaha se nahi....bahar jungle me bahut se phal ke ped hain....main abhi le kar aata hu.
Payal—kya tu pagal ho gaya hai.... ? itni raat me jungle me jayega....nahi..nahi...rahne de..koi kuch nahi khayega.. aise hi theek hain sab.
Neha—payal sahi kahti hai beta...iss jungle me kitne khatarnak janwar hain, ye pahle hi dekh chuke hain hum.
Divya—mujhe bhi bhookh nahi hai ab.
Saloni—raat me jungle me jana khatre se khali nahi hai….subah dekh lenge.
Payal—subah bhi nahi…jo bhi jisko bhi khana hai ghar chal ke khayenge….ye jungle bahut khatarnak hai….yaha bahut bade bade dynasour rahte hain…..tu kahi nahi jayega, samajh gaya…chupchap yaha mere paas aa kar baith ja.
Raj—didi…yaha ke sabhi janwar mere dost hain..aap chinta mat karo…mujhe kuch nahi hoga.
Payal (jor se)—tujhe ek baar me samajh me nahi aata kya….? Chupchap baith yaha…agar yaha se utha to teri taange tod dungi.
Raj—arey baap re itna gussa…apni taange tudwane se achcha hai ki main baith hi jata hu….
Neha—tere liye yahi theek hai.
Raj—didi…aap ko lagta hai jarur bhukh lagi hai..tabhi itna chilla rahi ho.
Payal (chillate huye)—mujhe koi bhukh vookh nahi lagi hai samjha….aur jyada hoshiyar banne ki jarurat nahi hai.. tu bahar nahi jayega matlab ki nahi jayega.
Raj—main to baitha hu…kaha ja raha hu kahi….? Vaise mujhe jarur bhukh lagi hai thodi thodi.
Raj ki baat sun kar payal uth ke kitchen me chali gayi aur kuch khane pine ka saman talashne lagi….usko vaha chawal aur daal mil hi gaya to aag jala kar vahi pakne rakh diya…uski madad ko neha bhi aa gayi..thodi hi der me khana ready ho gaya to sabne baith ke khaya….
Payal apne hath se raj ko khilane lagi aur khud bhi khane lagi….lekin vo khud khati kam aur raj ko khilati jyada thi..neha aur divya ye dekh kar mushkuraye bina na rah saki.
Neha—doctor meri beti ko kab tak hosh aa jayega….?
Raj—subah tak hosh aa jayega.
Saloni—raj is right.
Main vahi baithe baithe need ki jhapki lene laga…jab ki neha paridhi ke paas baith kar uska sir sahlane lagi..meri need lage abhi kuch hi minutes huye the ki tabhi…
“Agyanttttttt…..mujhe bacha lo……tum kaha ho…agyanttttt…aaaaaaaaaa…..agyantttttttt…..mujhe iss taklif se kab mukti milegi… tum kab aaoge……..kahi tumhari pratiksha karte karte meri ye saanse hi na sath chhod de….aaaaa…agyanttttttt…..apni minakshi ko bacha lo agyanttt….ye log mujhe maar dalenge….nahiiiiiiiiiiiii…agyanttttttttt”
Meri need minakshi ki iss dard bhari cheekh sunte hi toot gayi…..udhar neha paridhi ka sar sahlane me lagi thi… kintu uska sir sahlate huye achanak neha ka dhyan paridhi ki bhari huyi maang aur uske gale me latak rahe mangal sutra ki taraf chala gaya…ye dekhte hi vo buri tarah se chounk gayi.
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