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Raj—theek vaise hi jaise ki paridhi ki ek dead body ka pahle antim sanskar ho chuka hai

Saloni—to kya vo paridhi ki body thi….? To phir ye koun hai….?

Raj—na to vo paridhi thi aur na hi ye paridhi didi ki body hai

Saloni (shocked)—kyaaaa….? To paridhi kaha hai….?

Raj—baat asal me ye hai ki…….

Ab aage…….

Raj—ye to mai bhi nahi janta ki kaha hai lekin thoda thoda andaza jarur hai

Saloni—agar ye paridhi nahi hai to iski body ka antim sanskar kar dena chahiye…..bewajah dead body ko rakhna theek nahi hai

Raj—ye bewajah body nahi hai…..ye bhi paridhi hi hai

Saloni (shocked)—ohhhhhh…..tumne to mera dimag hi kharab kar diya hai…..kabhi kahte ho ye paridhi nahi hai aur ab bolte ho ki ye paridhi hi hai…..ya to tum paridhi ki mout se pagal ho gaye ho ya mujhe pagal bana kar rahoge

Raj—dono hi bate sahi hain

Saloni—saf saf kaho akhir matlab kya hai tumhare kahne ka……?

Raj—actual me ye Minakshi hai……aur paridhi minakshi ka hi punarjanam hai isliye dono ki body ka roop rang same hai

Saloni (shock)—whattttt…….? Par ye kaise possible hai….? Minakshi to us aag me khatam ho gayi thi…..aur agar kisi tarah maan lo bach bhi gayi to itne samay tak jinda kaise rahi…..? aur jinda bhi thi to yaha tak kaise pahuchi….? Agar yaha tak pahuch bhi gayi to tum tak kaise pahuchi…..? sabse badi baat agar tum tak bhi pahuch gayi to usne tumhe pahchana kyo nahi…..? and at last paridhi kaha gayi…….?

Raj—baap re …itne sare sawal vo bhi ek sath……..simple si baat hai dono ki adla badli huyi hai….chunki dono ek hi hain to asani se dono ki yaade ek dusre me interchange ho gayi ya kar di gayi

Saloni—koun kar sakta hai aisa……..? paridhi ka kya hua..... ?

Raj—ye kaam kewal ek hi shakhs kar sakta hai...aur vo hai...... Pari

Saloni—pari..... ? par vo to qaid ho gayi thi na..... ? tum par jab usne humla kiya tha to tumne uski shaktiya hi khatam ho gayi thi to phir vo kaise kar sakti hai..... ?

Raj—minakshi ki tabiyat kal achanak kharab ratna ke payal me samahit hone ke turant baad huyi.....ratna Pari ka hi ek prati roop thi isliye jaise hi ratna ko maine payal me samahit karne ke liye kriya ki to ratna ki yaade to payal didi me samahit ho gayi kintu uske sharir se nikli dusri jyoti pari me sama gayi kyon ki vo uska hi pratiroop thi....Jiske karan pari ki shaktiya vapis aa gayi aur vo azad ho gayi

Saloni (hairan)—ohhhhh....to ratna ke payal me samahit hone aur pari ke azad hone se minakshi ka kya sambandh hai…..?

Raj—minakshi bhi to pari ka hi prati roop hai na....jahir hai ye usne shaktiya vapis pane aur azad hone ke liye kiya hai

Saloni—ratna ke khatam hote hi uski shaktiya to mil gayi na phir..... ?

Raj—shayad utni shakti azad hone ke liye paryapt nahi thi isliye usne minakshi ko apna nishana banaya

Saloni—magar minakshi us aag se bachi kaise…uske baad na to vo kabhi ratna ko mili aur na hi tumse koi contact hua…..kyo….?

Raj—yahi sab to mujhe pata lagana hai…..ki asli sach kya hai paridhi didi ki mout ke piche….? Minakshi ka bhi abhi kuch kahna jaldbazi hogi jab tak sach samne na aa jaye …isliye maine is body ko safe rakhne ko kaha hai

Saloni—ek paridhi ki body jo pahle mili thi vo koun thi phir…..?

Raj—vo to TBM ka tikdam hai

Saloni—asli paridhi ka kya hua….? Kaha ho sakti hai vo....kahi pari ne usko bhi to..... ?

Raj—nahi vo jinda hai....agar nahi hoti to minakshi ke sath aisa nahi karti vo.......aur jahir hai ki vo earth me nahi hai kyon ki ye mrityu lok hai.....yaha ek myan me do talwar nahi rah sakti....isiliye paridhi ko yaha se hatakar minakshi ko paridhi ki jagah shift kiya gaya

Saloni—par minakshi to paridhi ke bare me itna kuch kaise janti hai

Raj—simple hai minakshi paridhi ka purva janam hai....apne pichle janam ka yaha kisko dhyan rahta hai....minakshi ki ruh ko jab paridhi ki body me shift karoge to vo paridhi hi ban gayi na...use to isi janam ka yaad rahega body me pravesh karte hi

Saloni—abhi to bol rahe the ki ye body paridhi ki nahi hai..... ?

Raj—haan….kyon ki dono ki body same hi hai to ye bhi sambhav hai ki kewal ruh badli gayi ho…mai abhi sure nahi hu anyway is body ka khyal rakhna…..sambhav hai ki Pari isko khatam karne ki koshish bhi kar sakti hai…isliye apko alert rahne ki jarurat hai

Saloni—don’t worry…..mere hote pari kuch nahi kar sakti

Raj—ye mat bhulna ki pari aapse kahi jyada powerful hai

Saloni—mai dhyan rakhungi….

Raj—theek hai mai chalta hu....

Mai vaha se nikal kar chanchal ke ghar chala gaya.....mujhe dekhte hi uske chehre par sare jahan ka noor utar aaya uske chehre par aayi khushi dekh kar mai apna gum bhul gaya

Idhar ghum kar aane ke baad se neha apne room ko lock karke bistar me gir gayi...aur roti rahi...use rah rah kar raj ki baate yaad aa rahi thi.....kabhi paridhi ke bare me jo raj ne kaha use yaad kar uske mann me garv mahsus hota to agle pal uday ke bare me jo bataya use soch kar raj ke upar gussa aane lagta

Bahut der tak vo aise hi bed par pade roti rahi...udhar jab raj abhi tak ghar nahi aaya to payal pareshan hone lagi usne raj ko contact karne ka prayas kiya kintu uska phone coverage area ke bahar bata raha tha

Use jab malum hua ki neha bahut der pahle hi aa gayi hai to usse nahi raha gaya....pareshan hokar neha ke room me knock karne pahuch gayi

Payal—chachi...darwaja kholo

Neha (kuch der baad)—kya hai...payal.... ?

Payal—chachi...aap to raj ke sath gayi thi na....vo kaha gaya hai..abhi tak aaya kyo nahi..... ?

Neha—mujhe kya malum.... ? mujhe to kuch nahi bataya usne....aaya to mere sath hi tha

Payal (badbadate huye)—bina bataye kaha chala gaya ye……? Aane do batati hu aaj isko…bahut apne mann ki karne laga hai….gate me guard se pata karti hu

Payal (main gate me phone kar)—hello…kaka…raj aaya tha kya….?

Guard—mem sb…..raj sb to neha madam ko chhod kar turant hi vapis chale gaye the….lekin kuch pareshan the ya gusse me the kuch samajh me nahi aaya

Payal—achcha theek hai…jab vo aaye to mujhe bata dena

Payal (mann me)—kaha gaya hoga ye….pareshan kyo tha…..? kaise pata karu….? Gudiya ko puchti hu

Lekin divya ne bhi raj ke bare me apni anbhigyata jahir kar di….raj ke abhi tak na aane se sab dinner ke liye baithne ke baad dining table se bina khaye hi uth gaye

Payal (gusse me)—aaj use chhodungi nahi….aa bhar jaye…bahut bigad gaya hai

Roopa—ye hai kaha ab tak…..?

Nani—aane do aaj main usko jam ke daantungi….? Bahut bigad gaya hai

Payal (thoda jor se)—nahiii…..use sirf mai daantungi aur koi nahi samjhe aap sab….aur aapne ye kaise kah diya ki mera raj bigad gaya hai….?

Maa (dhire se)—chup chap yaha se nikal lo warna ye raj ka gussa hum sab par utar degi abhi

Jab kafi raat ho gayi to payal ke sath sath neha bhi pareshan hone lagi….uske mann me bhi kayi tarah ke sawal aur ashanka paida hone lagi

Neha (mann me)—abhi tak aaya kyo nahi….? Kahi kuch kar na baithe….to mai didi aur sabko kya jawab dungi… payal ka samna kaise karungi….raj me to uski jaan basti hai…..payal hi kya hum sabki jaan raj me hi to atki hai….use bachane ke liye meri beti ne apni qurbani de di to kya main uske liye apne pati ki qurbani nahi de sakti….?

Neha (mann me)—lekin raj ne aisa kyo kiya…..? kya usne jo kaha vo sach hai.... ? kya uday ne sach me itna neech kaam kiya ki jiske chalte raj ko use maarna pada…….? Raj ne kaha tha ki mitali aur chandni ke sath sath veer ko bhi ye baat malum hai..to aaj tak kisi ne mujhe bataya kyo nahi…?

Neha (mann me)—mujhe mitali se ye baat pata karni hogi…..lekin kahi raj ki ye baat sahi nikli to mai raj ko kya muh dikhaungi…..? jiske liye hamne itni kathor yaatnaye sahi, itni minnate mangi, jo hamari ankh ka tara hai aur aaj maine us par hi hath uthaya…..mai sab ki nazaro me gir jaungi……isse achcha to mera mar jana hi theek rahega

Kuch ghante chanchal ke sath gujarne ke baad mai ghar aa gaya…sabse pahle divya ke room me gaya....jaha vo aaiye ke samne baith kar baal bana rahi thi....mai chupke se jakar use piche se apni baho me bhar liya

Divya—saajan......aa gaye

Raj—kaise malum ki mai hu

Divya—ye dil apne aap pahchan leta hai....kuch kahne ya sochne ki jarurat nahi padti use apne saajan ko pahchanne me

Raj—hum kal raat me ghumne chalenge

Divya—theek hai

Raj—puchogi nahi ki kaha….?

Divya—huuunn…na….mujhe to bas in baho ka sahara chahiye…yahi mere liye baikunth dham hai….jaha bhi le chalo mai to apne saajan ki parchhayi hu sath chalungi…..parchhayi ya to usme hi sama kar vilupt ho jayegi ya sath chalegi kintu alag nahi ho sakti

Raj—maine avashya kabhi punya karm kiye honge jiske phal swaroop mujhe tumhara pyar mila…..mai to dhanya ho gaya divya

Divya—sssshhhh….aisa nahi kahte….ye saubhagya to mera hai mujhe apke prem ka ashray mila….mere sare janam safal ho gaye

Raj—hum guru maa se milne chalenge aaj raat

Divya (khush hokar)—sach me...

Raj—koi apni antar aatma se jhuth bol sakta hai kya.... ? tum to meri aatma ho divya

Divya (sine se lag kar)—ohhh……saajan…..kabhi mujhse door mat hona….nahi to meri halat pani bin machhli ke jaise ho jati hai

Raj—yahi dasha to meri bhi hai jaanu

Divya—payal didi bahut der se khoj rahi hain….behad pareshan bhi hain aur gussa bhi…..kisi ne abhi tak dinner nahi kiya..sabko aise pyar me tadpana kya achchi baat hai…..?

Tab tak guard ne didi ko intercom se mere aane ka bata diya….unhone sab ke kamro me dekh liya phir divya ke room ko knock karne lagi

Payal—gudiya raj ko bahar bhej jaldii se

Divya—lo didi khud hi aa gayi

Raj—ooohh shit……aaj to khair nahi phir

Divya ne jakar darwaja khola…..main tab tak bed ke niche ghus gaya…..didi andar har jagah dekhne lagi….thak haar kar vo divya ki oor nirasha bhari nazaro se dekhne lagi

Payal (udas hokar)—kaha gaya….mujhe bhukh lagi hai lekin uske bina kha bhi to nahi sakti….upar wale ne ye dil kyo banaya hai aur banaya bhi to use dhadakna kyo sikhaya kisi ke liye…?

Mai unki aisi udasi bhari baate sun kar tadap utha aur turant shararat chhod kar bahar nikal unhe apni baho me lekar unke hotho par chumban ki mohar lagane laga

Pahle to vo achanak aise karne se chounk gayi par jab ehsaas hua ki mai hu to shant ho gayi aur apni ankhe band kar li…is chhote pyar mishrit chumban ke baad maine unhe apni baho ki qaid se riha kar diya

Kiss khatam hote hi vo jaise hi hosh me aayi to bhadak kar apne tatha kathit sawalo ki phul jhadiya chhodne lagi main koi jawab dene ki bajaye unhe phir se apni baho me bhar liya….mujhe pata tha ki meri agosh me aate hi vo bilkul shant pad jati hain…unke gusse ko shant karne ka yahi mera sabse kargar hathiyar sabit hota hai

Raj—mujhe abhi joro ki bhukh lagi hai phir apke sawalo ke jawab bhi de dunga

Udhar priyadarshini saajan ki us balyawashtha ki tasveer ko dekhte huye milan ki aas me doobi huyi thi….jab usse is vairh ki aag ko bardast karna mushkil ho gaya to vo dhyan me baith gayi

Dhyan me hi usne Mata Parvati ka aavahan karte huye vinti karne lagi....

Priyadarshini (dhyan me)—"hey maa….akhir kab tak mainis virah ki aag me jalti rahungi….maa ab mujhse ye virah ki jwala sahan nahi hoti hai...ye virah naag bankar mere sir me chadha hua hai aur har pal mujhe dasta rahta hai...ab to chandan ka lep bhi mere liye daah karak ho gaya hai....mere yauvan pakshi ke liye ye virah vyadh ho gaya hai..... vidhata ne mujhe ye kanak varna ka yauvan kyo diya aur uske sath hi ye virah ka dukh bhi kyo mila... ?

Maa...saajan ko mai apni aatma me basa chuki hu..jo ab nikalna sambhav nahi hai....mere prem ki itni kathin pariksha kyo mata... ? kya itne hazaro sadiyo ki pariksha kam hai jo abhi tak chal rahi hai.... ? Jab aapne mujhe saajan ko mere pati hone ka bataya to Mera Yauvan jab chaand ke jaisa udit hua to usme ye virah rahu ban kar aa gaya.....is karan ye yauvan chandra ghatate huye kshin hokar shaktiheen ho gaya hai"

Tabhi Priyadarshini ke antaraatma ki karun pukar sun kar Maa Bhagwati Parvati uske dhyan me ek tez jyoti punj ke sath sher par sawar hokar prakat ho gayi...Priyadarshini ki ankhe us chamak se choundhiyane lagi to mata ke hatho se ek roshni nikal kar priyadarshini ki ankho me sama gayi jisse use saf saf dikhne laga

Maa Parvati—"Putri...mera vardan kabhi mithya nahi ho sakta....yadi prem uttapann hua hai to satya se apne bhari mann ko bandh lo....jiske mann me satya ka pahredar hota hai uske upar sankato ka pahad bhi gire to uska baal banka nahi hota hai.....Yauvan yadi chaturdashi ka chaand hai to chandrama bhi to virah ki chingari se jalta hai..... pawan ko bandhne wala yogi-yati hota hai to kaam ko bandhne wali kamini-sati hoti hai...’’

Priyadarshini—mai kya karu maa...saajan ke milan ki aas me ek ek din ek ek yug ki bhanti lag raha hai....din aur raat ki bhookh aur nidra dono chale gaye hain....saajan se virah me aisa lag raha hai jaise koi mere hriday me aari chala raha ho....mera marg darshan karo mata...mujhe mere saajan se mila do

Mata Parvati—jab Prem kiya hai to apne prem par vishwash karna bhi sikho putri.....agar aise me tumhara saajan tumhare samne bhi aa jayega to tum use nahi pahchan sakogi kyon ki kewal sadiyo ka intazar hi kafi nahi hota hai balki apne prem par atoot vishwash bhi hona chahiye

Chalo mai tumhe ek amar prem gatha sunati hu....phir tum khud hi nirnay karna ki tum uski tulna me khud ko kaha pati ho........

Mata Parvati—mai tumhe aaj tumhare sawalo ke sandarbh me jo Prem ki maha gatha sunane ja rahi hu....ye kahani hai Rajgarh ki.....Jaha do premiyo ne ek aisa prem ka adarsh sthapit kiya ki unka prem ka prakash teeno lok me phail gaya.....
superb update
 

shahnaz123

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  • Awesome Mind Freezing Update
  • Raj aur Saloni ki baate mere chhote se dimag ke upar se nikal gayi...Kuch samajh aaya lekin bahut kuch samajh nahi aaya
  • Minakshi Jinda thi ya mar chuki thi samajh nahi aaya...?
  • Ye Body Paridhi ki hai ya Minakshi ki.....?
  • Minakshi ki Ruh ko Paridhi ki Body me pravesh karaya gaya tha ya dono ki adal badal huyi thi....?
  • Adal badal tabhi ho sakti hai jab dono jinda ho.....aur agar Minakshi already dead thi aur uski ruh ko shift kiya gaya tha tab bhi paridhi to jinda thi...kisi jinda manav ki ruh kaise nikali ja sakti hai aur kaid kiya ja sakta hai....?
  • Payal ka pyar anokha hai..She is my favourite character of the story..Payal is awesome
  • Neha apne kiye par soch vichar kar rahi hai...apni jagah vo bhi theek hai..Itna bada shocking sach achanak se yakin ke kabil nahi hota
  • Priyadarshini apne intazar aur virah se hatash nazar aayi....Shayad isi nirasha ke chalte usne Mata Parvati se vinti karni shuru kar di
  • Mata ne sahi jawab diya ki jab prem kiya hai to apne prem par vishwash karna bhi sikho..jaise divya apne saajan aur uske prem par atoot vishwash karti hai
  • Shayad yahi vajah hai ki mata priyadarshini ko divya aur saajan ki amar prem gatha sunane ja rahi hain
  • Priyadarshini aur Mata Parvati ka conversation bahut high top class ka hai
  • Aisa Uchch sreni ka conversation to kewal ek mahan top class ka kavi hi kar sakta hai
  • Overall Top Class Update with Highly Writing Skills
 

Naughtyrishabh

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Behad hi shandaar or jabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.

Itna behtareen dhang se aap or Keval aap hi dikha sakte ho.
Mzaaaa aa gya bhai waah.
Kuchh baatein aisi bhi thi jo ki mere chote se Mathe me nahi Sama payin.
Minakshi or Paridhi ??
Payal ka gussa , Neha chachi ki soch Divya ka Prem laajwab.
Sabse jabardast Priyadarshini ka Mata Parvati ke saath batcheet.
Kya dikhya h bhai aapne waah.
Ab baari h is Amar kahani ke jariye Rajgarh ke Raj khulne ki.

Or isilye ,
Aage ka intjar
 

PrinceDevil

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Awesome update
Paridhi abhi jinda hai.
Use pari apne sath kanhi le gayi .
Uski jagah minakshi ki body rakh di.
Saloni or raj ki bich baate acchi rahi.
Ye saloni bhi ek raaj hai use raj ke bare me bahut kuch janti hai.
Jitna mujhe raj ke raaj ke bare me jaane ke utsuk hai utna hi saloni ke bare me bhi.
Uske bare me kuch update likhiye.
Priyadarshini apne saajan ki yaad me jalne lagi.
Vo saajan ke bare me janne ke liye mata parvati ko aahawan ki.
Mata parvati ne use saajan or divya ki prem kahani sunne wali hai.
Ab divya or saajan ki amar prem katha start hone wali hai.
Isme pichli baar ki tarh update ki chota mat kijiyega.

Waise Dost mujay lagta hai ye Saloni wahi budhi aurat hai jo Agyant ko us Jungle mai mili thi.... Mani lene ke baad...
 
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