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Incest SAAJAN

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Harry rocks

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Awesome update bhai,
bhai aapne apne iss update se sab ko mantramugdha kar diya,
aapni jitni shudhh hindi ka prayog iss update me kiya hai vo atulniya hai,
iss update ka har ek bhag apne aap me sampoorn hai,
aapne jis drisya ka varnan kiya hai vo itna ramaniya hai ki update padhte hue mujhe aisi anubhuti ho rhi thi ki mai pratyaksh roop se vaha upasthit hoon,
ruchi ne itne samay se saahas jutane ke baad aakhir kar apne pyar ka ijahar kar hi diya,
ruchi aur Raj ka first kiss lajawab tha,
vahi dusri taraf hospital me mrinal ne to tahalka macha kar rakha hai,
mrinal ke bolne ki shaili itni lajawab hai ki haste haste pet me dard ho gaya,
vahi priyadarshani ke prem ki virah agni ko aapne itne adbhut shabdo me varnit kiya hai ki mai bata nhi sakta,
Doctor ne Raj ko call karke bula liya hai,
ab dekhte hai ki priyadarshani jab Raj ko dekhegi to vo kaisa mahsus karegi,
Waiting for next update
Kya shandar review diya h jitu bhai aapse ek request h aap meri story bhi jarur padhe or apne valuable review jarur dijiye please
Meri story ka naam h pyare rishte
 

Harry rocks

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ना भूतो ना भविष्यति, ऐसा तो नहीं कहूँगा लेकिन कम से कम इंटरनेट की दुनिया में ये सच है कि ऐसी प्रेमगाथा शायद कहीं और नहीं मिलेगी।
पिछला अपडेट निस्संदेह अतुलनीय रहा अब तक के, इस महागाथा के सभी अपडेट्स में।
Keep it up bro...
Meri story pe bhi ek baar visit kijiye bhai please and apna review dijiye
 

shahnaz123

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Mind Blowing update
Shabdo ke chayan karne me apki adbhut pratibha ko darshata hai ye update

Aisi Premgatha kahi nahi milegi
Har update apne aap me atulniya hai
Ruchi ne akhir izhar kar hi diya
Raj ne ye achcha kiya ki realty ruchi ko bata di
Shayari hamesha ki tarah Lajawab
Izhar aur Romance ki place aur style sabse nirali aur different
I Like it

Priyadarshini ka character dino din dil me utarta ja raha h
Virah vedna ka behad adbhut charitra chitran kiya h
Thats Fantastic writing skill

Mrinal ka to jawab nahi
Jabardast turn le rahi hai story
Raj ko paridhi ka pata chal gaya
Kya priyadarshini pahchan payegi saajan ko
interesting mod h
Over all Unbelieveable update
 

shahnaz123

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Dost...Apki nazar me romance ka matlab kya hai.....sirf sex....?
Kya bina sex ke romance possible nahi hai...?
Bhai ye ek Love story hai Saajan aur Divya ki....... na ki koi sex story
Maine front page me hi bataya hai ki is kahani me hawas janit sex ke liye koi jagah nahi hai
Sex hoga jarur magar jab true love hoga tab
Aur abhi to story sirf 25% hi huyi hai 75% kahani baki hai dost
Sex hoga aur sab ke sath hoga aur itna ki aap hilate hilate thak jaoge
Maine front page par kahani ka concept diya hua hai jisse pata lag jayega ki kab kya hoga
Ab agar apko story me action adventure ki jagah kewal sex hi chahiye to mai kyo apna daily ka 8-9 ghante jo iska ek update likhne me barbad karta hu..kyo karu...?
Apki story bahut hi master class level ki hai
Tabhi apki dono stories top par hain Kyon ki apki writing skill bejod h
Story me koi kami nahi h
Har cheez bilkul perfect h
Chahe vo story ki speed ho ya koi incident sab bemisal h
Story vahi padhne me achchi lagti h jisme thahrav ho
Aap aise hi likhte raho dear
Hum hamesha apki story k sath h
 

Story Collector

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:applause:wow super duper update bhai bahot Jabardast likh rahe ho
एक एक बात इतनी डिटेल में लिखी गयी है जैसे कहानी न होकर जैसे सब कुछ असलियत में घटित हो रा हो।
आपकी मेहनत और imagination ने इस कहानी में चार चाँद लगा दिए।
मज़ा आ गया। आगे पढ़ने के लिए बेसब्री से इन्तेजार।

Keep going
We will wait for next update.....
:yourock:
 

Abhi

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Super update
Bahut dino ke baad apne khas ruchi ke liye ek special update likha hai.
Raj ne Ruchi ko prakirti ke adbhut jagah le gaya.
Jahan ruchi dekhkar khush ho gayi.
Aakhir ruchi ne apne pyar ka ijhaar kar diya.
Raj ne use sabhi reality bata diya.
Or dono ke bich pahli kiss jabardast thi.
Udher priyadarshni apne sajjan ki virah me jal rhi hai.
Nirmal uska kahna hi kya vo
Uska naak par gussa rahat hai.
Dono adrishya hokar paridhi par najar rakh rahi hai.
Raj ko paridhi ke hospital se call aa gaya.
 

Rana1101

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Anand Bhai Aap Toh Naraaz Ho Gaye.
Mere Kehne Ka Matlab Tha Ke Sex Ko Bhi Saath Lekar Chalne Mein Kya Bura Hai.

Aur Anand Bhai Aap Kah Rahe Hain Ke Kahani Abhi 75% Baaqi Hai Toh Aap Hi Sochye Kahani Ke Last 10% Mein Agar Sirf Sex,Sex Aur Sex Hoga Toh Kiya Achha Lagega.


Agar Bura Laga Hai Toh Next Time Sirf "Nice Update" lekhunga.
 
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