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UPDATE- 147
Sadhna apni kuch saheliyo aur ganga mousi ke sath bus me safar karte huye jaipur pahuch kar ek hotel me raat gujarne ke liye ruk gaye…sadhna apne sapno ke dhyan me khoyi huyi apne room me ja hi rahi thi ki tabhi vo kisi se takra gayi… sadhna to uss shakhs ka chehra nahi dekh payi jisse vo takrayi thi, vo sorry bol kar sidhe aage badh gayi kintu vo shakhs sadhna ko dekhte hi buri tarah chounk gaya.
Ab aage……..
Vo sadhna ko jate huye hairani se dekhta raha….phir Usne jaldi se apna mobile nikal kar usme kisi ka number dial karne laga…kuch der tak ring jane ke baad kisi ne call pick kiya.
Caller—guru..vo mil gayi…?
“Koun..mil gayi…?” phone me dusri taraf se awaz aayi.
Caller—vahi..ladki mil gayi…jiski aap ko talash hai…
“Kya..? kaha hai vo…?” samne wale ne kaha.
Caller—yahi jaipur ke ek hotel me hai..iss samay….aap kaho to sath me leta aau..?
“Very good….bahut bach ke bhag rahi thi jaicky dada se…..ab bach kar kaha jayegi….tu bas uske upar nazar rakh…main aa raha hu… uske par katarne” dusri taraf se kaha gaya.
Caller—theek hai guru..
Sadhna apne room me pahuch kar kapde change karne ke liye apne bag se kapde nikalne lagi..tabhi kapdo ke sath me ek diary bahar nikal aayi…uss diary ko dekhte hi vo kuch pareshan ho kar sochne lagi ……kal raat ki ghatna yaad aayi jab vo uss kale kamre me gayi thi aur kisi cheez se takra kar gir gayi thi…tab use vaha ek diary mili thi…usne dairy ko utha kar jaise hi piche palat kar torch ki roshni focus ki to vaha vahi langde admi ko baithe mushkurate dekh kar vah buri tarah se chounk gayi thi..phir ghabra kar jaldi se apne room me bhag gayi thi.
Akhir ye sab kya rahasya tha…? Sadhna ki jindagi me vaise hi bahut rahasya the…uski jindagi kisi paheli se kan nahi thi charo taraf ishare hi ishare the…aur inn isharo ka koi hal nahi tha….kuch samajh me nahi aata tha…kuch kog use sheetal kyo kahte the…? Divangat pujari dada ne bhi uska asli naam sheetal bataya tha…sheetal apne aap me ek rahasyapurn naam tha.
Phir vah rahasyamay vyakti black star…usne bhi use sheetal hi kaha tha…sadhna nahi janti thi ki uska sheetal naam kisne rakha….? Use sab ke muh se apna naam sadhna hi suna tha jitna bhi yaad hai.
Uski jindagi se juda ek rahasya ye bhi to tha ki jis ghar me vah pali badhi thi aur jinko apne maa baap samajhti thi..vo uske maa baap nahi nikle…..use ganga mousi ke paas bhejne ki asli vajah vo gunda jaicky dada hi tha ya phir kuch aur hi karan tha…?
Phir vah rahasyamay sapna….pujari dada ka lifafa….vo kala rahasyamay kamra…ek silsila tha sawalo ka…sawal hi sawal the lekin jawab kisi ke paas na tha.
Sadhna ke dil me ek hook si uthi…kaash..! koi aisa hota jo iss raaz se parda utha sake…jo bata sake ki vo koun hai..? uske maa pita koun hain…? Kya hua tha uske sath…? Kaash koi bata sakta…inn sab baato ko janne ki badi tivra ichcha thi sadhna ki aur inn sab baato ke bare me usne aaj tak nahi socha tha.
Kaha se payegi vo apni ‘paheli zindagi’ ka hal…? Koun batayega ye sab use... ? vah ye sab sochte huye bechaini si mahsoos karne lagi….ajib mansik halat ho gayi thi uski...usne uss diary ko nikal kar dekhne lagi..
Vo diary ko khol kar uske page palatne lagi..lekin jaise hi uski nazar diary ke page par kuch likha hua dekha to vah padhte hi chounk gayi.
Udhar amilpur me damini duty se loutne ke baad bhi behad pareshan thi…shaam ko hi use apna transfer letter mil chuka tha….use samajh me nahi aa raha tha ki vo kya kare…? Kyon ki jis area ke police thane me uska transfer order usko mila tha, vo jagah isse bhi jyada khatarnak thi..ek tarah se vo area hi poora ka poora black star ke do number ke kaamo ka garh tha…. Vaha aaye din rape aur kidnapping ki ghatnaye hoti rahti hain…Tension ke chalte usne dinner bhi nahi kiya…
Revti (damini aur shashi ki maa)—kya baat hai beti..tum aaj bahut pareshan ho…? Kya phir se vidhayak ne kuch harkat ki..?
Damini—kuch nahi maa…bas aise hi..thoda sir me dard tha.
Revti—ab kis baat ki tension le rahi ho...maine to suna hai ki naye sp sahab bahut achche aur bahadur hain.
Damini—aapko kisne bataya…?
Revti—tum bhul rahi ho ki hamare bagal me hi pahle wale sp sahab ki family rahti hai…vo sab to naye sp sahab ki tarif karte nahi thakte…aur vaise bhi isme kisi ke batane ki jarurat hi kaha hai…unhone hi to tumhe uss nark se nikal kar khud apne bunglow me rahne ki jagah di hai…unhone hum sab ki hifajat ke liye apni team tak tumhare thane me laga di.. agar unki team nahi hoti to kal shashi ke sath kya kya nahi ho gaya hota…yaha koi uss kamine vidhayak ke khilaf sir uthane ko taiyar nahi hota, vahi unhone apni jaan ki parwah kiye bina hi usse dushmani mol le li…kya ye kam hai uski bahaduri ko batane ke liye…?
Shashi (room me aate huye)—mummy bilkul theek kah rahi hain didi….avinash sir bahut achche hain…main ek bar jarur unse milna chahungi..
Revti—aur beti unki team ke jin logo ne kal shashi ki izzat bachayi thi, unhe ek bar yaha khane par jarur invite karna.. main unka shukriya ada karna chahti hu..
Damini (kuch sochte huye)—theek hai mummy….main kal hi unhe invite karungi..aur sath me sp sir ko bhi..
Shashi—thanks didi..(mann me)..aap sab ko shukriya karne ki padi hai par meri to raato ki neend hi gayab ho gayi hai kal se…jisne mera dil churaya hai, badle me mujhe bhi uska dil chahiye..
Idhar maine maa ko aise sote huye dekh kar khud ko nahi rok paya...mere mann me maa ki bur dekhne ki ichcha badhti ja rahi thi....maine ek nazar ke chehre ki taraf dali to paya ki vo gahri neend me soyi huyi thi...phir bhi na jane kyo mujhe darr lag raha tha.
Maa ki saree unke ghutne se thoda upar tak sarki huyi thi…jisse maa ke gore gore pair behad khubsurat dikh rahe the jin par ki baalo ka ek resha bhi nahi tha..ekdam chikne pair the maa ke.
Sote huye maa ke pair thoda phaile huye the…maine jhuk kar unki saree ke andar jhankne ki koshish ki magar kuch nahi dikhayi diya….to maine apne kampte hatho ko maa ki saree ke bhitar ghusa diya.
Zindagi me mujhe kabhi kisi ladki se kuch bhi bolne me kabhi kisi tarah ki jhijhak mahsoos nahi huyi aur na hi kuch karne me..lekin pata nahi kyo aaj mera poora jism kaamp raha tha jaise ki kadake ki thand me badan thandi se kaampne lagta hai…vaisa hi haal mera tha uss samay.
Mera poora jism kampkapa raha tha…maine darte darte apna kampta hath maa ki saree ke bhitar dhire dhire iss tarah sarkata raha jisse ki dono pairo me hath touch na ho paye…kahi aisa na ho ki hath touch hote hi maa ki neend khul jaye isliye dono pairo ke beech me hath ko aage badhata gaya aur sath me maa ke chehre ki taraf bhi dekhta gaya.
Akhir mera hath ghuste huye ghane balo se ja takraya to main samajh gaya ki ye maa ki bur ki jhaante hain…apne kaampte hath ko maine bur par ek baar upar se niche tak phera hi tha ki tabhi maa thoda sa hili jisse maine ghabra kar jaldi se apna hath saree se bahar khich liya aur turant hi bagal me let gaya.
Karib dus minute tak jab maa ki taraf se koi prati kriya nahi huyi to ek bar phir se maine ye koshish karne ki soch kar apne mobile ke torch ko on kiya aur ek bar phir se maa ke chehre ko dekhne ke baad jhuk kar maa ki saree ko darte huye thoda sa utha kar mobile ki light andar flash karne laga.
Mobile ke Torch ki roshni me maa ki dono jaangho ke beech me sirf badi badi jhaanto ke siwa kuch nahi dikhayi de raha tha..maa ki jaanghe behad khubsurat aur maansal thi..jaise ki kisi 25-26 saal ki jaanghe gadarayi huyi hoti hain…torch ki roshni me maine himmat kar ke phir hath ko saree ke andar ghusaya aur bur ke upar rakh diya.
Jhaanto ko sahlate huye main maa ki bur ko chodne wale chhed ko dekhna chahta tha …bur ko kampte hatho se tatol hi raha tha ki tabhi maa phir se kasmasayi to main dar kar apna hath bahar khich liya aur chupchap let gaya…iske baad dubara meri himmat nahi huyi…bas apne uss hath me lagi uss khushbu ko soongh kar mahsoos karne laga jis hath ne maa ki bur ko chhuwa tha….pata nahi hath ko sunghte huye kab neend ki agosh me sama gaya.
Agle din roopa chachi ke uthane se meri neend khuli to dekha ki maa naha dho kar ready ho chuki thi..main bhi fresh hone ke baad ready ho gaya….maine radha kaki ke ghar ja kar unko unki jamin ke paper aur kuch paise diye phir thakurain se milne chala gaya haweli….thakurain ko ek round pelne ke baad maine usko apni family ka dhyan rakhne ko kaha..ek bar haweli me sab se mil kar vapis ghar aa gaya.
Ghar pahuchte hi damini ka call aaya..usne mujhe lunch par invite kiya tha lekin maine mana kar diya..apne room me ja hi raha tha ki kitchen se chudiyo ke khanakne ki awaz sunayi di.
Kitchen me seema chachi hamare liye khana bana rahi thi to unhe akeli dekh kar maine unko piche se apni baho me jakad liya…chachi iss harkat se kasmasa gayi.
Seema—rajj, chhodo..ye kya kar rahe ho..koi dekh lega…?
Raj—to dekhne do na…koun sa main apki bur me lund pel raha hu abhi chachi…? Agar kisi ne dekh bhi liya to kya hoga… vo to yahi samjhega na ki main apni chachi ko pyar kar raha hu..
Seema—achcha…hihihi..ek raaz ki baat kahu…?
Raj—hmmm
Seema (kaan me)—tumhari ye chachi..ab tumhare bachche ki maa banne wali hai..
Raj (dhire se)—maiya chud gayi..
Seema—kyaaa kaha... kya ho gayi...?
Raj—kuch nahi…main to ye kah raha tha ki ye to badi hi khushi ki baat hai…iss khushi me jaldi se ek bar apni bur de do mujhe chachi..
Seema—lekin mujhe to badi tension ho rahi hai..
Raj—kya aap mere bachche ki maa ban kar khush nahi ho chachi…?
Seema—aisi baat nahi hai raj…main to bahut khush hu..lekin..
Raj—lekin kya…?
Seema—meri chinta ka karan tere chacha hain…vo mere sath do teen mahino se soye nahi hain…jab unhe mere maa banne ki baat malum hogi to vo kya kahenge….?
Raj—(kuch soch kar)..aap tension mat lo….rajasthan se lout kar main sab theek kar dunga…aur haan, mujhe apne khoon me kisi tarah ki milawat nahi chahiye…ye dhyan rakhna aap..
Seema—theek hai…jaisa tum kaho…ab to bas tera hi bharosa hai..warna main to kahi ki nahi rahungi..
Seema chachi ko samjha kar main apne room me aa gaya…thodi der me sonam aayi aur usne bhi yahi news sunayi ki vo bhi gabhin ho gayi hai..maine apna sir peet kar usko bhi samjha bujha kar ek bar sheetal didi se mila..unhone ek bar phir mujhe rokne ki koshish ki ..lekin maine unko mana kar diya…dophar ko main aur maa rajasthan ke liye nikal gaye.
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UPDATE—144
Sadhna apni saheliyo aur ganga mousi ke sath picnic par jate huye bus me apne hi dhyan me khoyi huyi thi..rah rah kar use pichli raat ki sab baate yaad aa rahi thi.
Pichli Raat……
Sadhna ne jab ganga mousi ki sari baate suni to uska dil bhar aaya ye jaan kar ki dayachand uska saga baap nahi hai balki vo kisi aur ki aulad hai..uski ankhe anshuo se bheeg gayi.
Ganga—beti, ye baat kisi se mat batana..main tere hath jodti hu...aur dukhi mat ho beti... bhale hi dayachand jiju ne tujhe janam na diya ho lekin usne tumhe apni beti hi samjha hai hamesha..
Sadhna (nam ankhe)—mujhe papa se abhi baat karni hai..
Ganga—beti, tumhare papa iss samay police ki hirasat me hain….unn par salma ke pati aslam khan ke khoon ka ilzam hai.
Sadhna (shocked)—kyaaaa…? Kab hua ye sab…aur mujhe kisi ne kuch bataya kyo nahi….?
Ganga—didi aur jija ji ne mana kiya tha…vo tumhe dukh nahi dena chahte the…
Sadhna—main unse milne jail me jaungi…unhe koun si jail me rakha gaya hai…?
Ganga—ye bhi koi nahi janta beti...bas itna pata hai ki vo kisi avinash rathod ki gupt nigrani me hain...bas itna suna hai ki log use saand kahte hain...lekin kyo..pata nahi... ?
Sadhna (roti huyi)—main uss avinash rathod se milungi...aur usse apne papa se milne dene ki gujarish karungi...
Ganga—main bhi tumhare sath chalungi beti..
Sadhna—ab aap jao...mujhe akeli chhod do...
Ganga mousi ke jate hi sadhna bed par let gayi aur rone lagi...uske mann me apne asli maa baap ke baare me janne ki utsukta badhne lagi...phir use apna khwab yaad aane laga...uske baad abhi kuch der pahle jo kuch usne dekha vo yaad aaya.
Usne ab tak jab jab bhi iss kamre ke baare me socha tha to yahi socha tha ki iss kamre me koi rahasya nahi hai…aur isse mahaj vaham aur andh vishwasho ke karan hi band kar diya gaya hai...lekin ab dhire dhire iss kamre ke rahasya dhire dhire uske samne khulte ja rahe the.
Sadhna (mann me)—iss kamre me to mousi apni rasleela karti hain...phir mere sapno se iss kamre ka kya sambandh ho sakta hai....pujari dada ne iss kamre ki tasveer kyo banayi... ? unka iss kamre ka sketch banane ka uddeshya ganga mousi ki rasleela dikhana to kadaapi nahi ho sakta...kuch na kuch rahasya to jarur hai iss kaale kamre ke andar jiska sambandh mere sapno se hai..unhone apni tasveer me saaf ishara kiya hai ki mere bhayanak sapno ka hal iss kamre me hi hai.... mujhe phir se ek baar kamre me ja kar dekhna chahiye..shayad mere sapno se juda koi rahasya samne aa jaye..
Akash andhakarmay tha aur gahre kale badlo se dhaka hua tha...do baj chuke the…ek ullu iss bunglow ke upar se kayi baar gujar chuka tha..aur jab vo gujarta tha to ek tez cheekh marta aur uske pankho ki fadfadahat door tak goonj jati..iss bunglow ke saat chakkar lagane ke baad vah sadhna ke room ki chhat par baith gaya.
Sadhna hadbada kar uth baithi...use yu mahsoos hua jaise ki koi vishal pakshi uske seene me aa kar baith gaya ho..usne ghadi par nazar dali aur phir ek hath me torch le kar room ka darwaja khol kar ussi rahasyamay kamre ke darwaje par aa khadi huyi...phir tabiz ko touch kiye bina hi darwaje ke handle ko dhire se ghumaya to vah khatt ki awaz ke sath thoda sa khul gaya.
Vah fauran hi darwaja khol kar bhitar sama gayi...usne torch jala kar pahle poore kamre me ek sansani nigah daudayi ki kahi vo langda admi chhupa to nahi hai...magar vo kahi nahi dikha...to vah torch ki roshni me poore kamre ko achchi tarah se dekhne lagi...halanki uske andar darr ab bhi samaya hua tha kintu utna nahi jitna ki pahle tha.
Chalte chalte achanak uska pair kisi cheez se phans gaya aur vo dhadam se niche gir padi...hath se torch chhut kar door ja giri...usne kisi tarah apne pair ko uss cheez se chhuda kar jaldi se torch uthayi to samne kuch cheez kitab jaisi dikhayi di..usne usko hath badha kar uthaya aur uss cheez par torch ki roshni focus ki jisme uska pair takaraya tha, jaise hi uss par roshni padi to dekhte hi sadhna bahut buri tarah se darr gayi aur fauran hi room ka darwaja khol kar vaha se bhag gayi apne room me....phir dubara vaha jane ki uski himmat hi nahi huyi.
Badi mushkil se jagte huye usne poori raat bita di aur phir agle din picnic par nikal gayi...raat bhar jagne ki vajah se bus me hi uski neend lag gayi thi.
Udhar Amilpur se nikalne ke baad ghar jate huye maine phone par jyoti, kumkum, gayatri, arushi, dimple, vandana, arti, anuradha, shilpa aur thakurain sabhi se baate ki…baate karte karte kab ghar pahuch gaya samay ka kuch pata hi nahi chala.
Aaj mujhe jaldi ghar aaya dekh kar sheetal didi behad khush ho gayi lekin agle hi pal shadi wali baat yaad aate hi unke chehre ki chamak achanak hi gayab ho gayi….kuch der ghar me rahne ke baad main apne kheto ki taraf ghumne nikal gaya.
Main abhi apne kheto ki taraf ja hi raha tha ki tabhi meri nazar ek khet ke kinare par ghaas kaat rahi radha kaki aur uski badi beti neetu par pad gayi to mera lund akadne lag gaya do do bur wali dekh kar.
Raj (mann me)—aaj to radha kaki ke sath neetu didi bhi hai…vaise bhi kaki ne mujhse vada kiya tha ki vo apni beti neetu ki bur mujhse chudwayengi…kya karu…? Sheetal didi ne apni kasam de rakhi hai…kuch samajh me nahi aa raha hai.. aaj ek bhi bur ke darshan nahi huye ab tak…mouka achcha hai..kaki ko bahla fusla kar dono maa beti ki bur me lund pel deta hu..yahi theek rahega…koun sa sheetal didi yaha dekhne aane wali hain….haan, yahi theek rahega.
Mann hi mann ye soch kar main chalte huye radha kaki ke paas pahuch gaya…mujhe vaha dekh kar radha sakpaka gayi lekin phir apne aap ko sambhal liya…neetu usse thoda door ghaas kaat rahi thi.
Raj—kaisi ho kaki…?
Radha—arey raj, tum…tumhara to aaj kal pata hi nahi rahta hai…pata nahi kaha rahte ho…?
Raj--Jaha Dikhe Choot Ka Gaddha...Vahi Bane Saand Ka Adda....aaj to neetu didi bhi ghaas kaat rahi hain..
Radha--tere paas to bas raat din gaand aur bur ke alawa koi kaam hi nahi hai...jab dekho bur ki talash me ghumta rahta hai....Ab shadi vadi to ho nahi rahi hai to ghaas nahi kategi to kya karegi..
Raj (dhire se)—kaki chalo na khet ke andar…bahut mann hai bur lene ka..
Radha (dhire se)—pagal hai kya…abhi neetu ke baapu ghaas lene aane wale hain..
Raj—jab tak kaka ayenge tab tak to main apki le bhi chuka hounga kaki..chalo na…
Radha—unko kahi se aana nahi hai…vo yahi khet me pani laga rahe hain….mujhe to aaj maaf hi kar tu..
Raj (dhire se)—to phir apni beti neetu didi ki bur dilwao aaj aur abhi..
Radha—apni beti ki dilwao..! hunhh dhokhebaaz kahi ka..
Raj—kyo..kya dhokha kiya hai maine…?
Radha—kyo..tune kaha nahi tha ki main teri jamin vapis karwa dunga jo thakurain ke paas girwi rakhi hai…? Bhul gaya sab…?
Raj—main kuch nahi bhula hu,..mujhe sab yaad hai….lekin shayad aap bhul gayi ho kaki ki aapne kya kaha tha…? Aapne jamin ke badle me apni dono betiyo ki bur mujhse chudwane ka vada kiya tha…
Radha—dono ki nahi ..maine sirf neetu ki baat ki thi….aur maine apna vada nibhaya bhi tha..
Raj—ghanta nibhaya tha vada..
Radha—ye sach hai…maine tere kahne ke anusar hi dusre din subah subah hi neetu ko tujhse milne ke liye tere ghar bheja tha…khet ke kagaz laane ke liye..
Raj—mere ghar…? To phir vo aayi kyo nahi…?
Radha—neetu gayi thi tere ghar lekin tere ghar me ek jo Jhansi ki Rani hai na…
Raj—Jhansi Ki Rani..! koun..... sheetal didi…?
Radha—haan, aur koun ho sakti hai...jaise hi neetu ne kaha ki use raj se milna hai to ye sunte hi teri uss jhansi ki rani sheetal ne meri beti ko gaali de kar darwaje se hi bhaga diya....randi, chhinar, kutiya..aur pata nahi kya kya galiya di teri sheetal didi ne meri beti ko....aur yaha tak kaha ki agar kabhi raj ke aas paas bhi nazar aayi to teri gaand me lal mirchi bhar kar usme moosal thok dungi....hum garib hain to jaise hamari koi izzat hi nahi hai...meri beti rote huye vapis lout aayi.
Raj—ohhh shit.. ! ye sheetal didi bhi na.....aur aap ko bhi kya jarurat thi neetu didi ko mere ghar bhejne ki... ?
Radha—tune hi to kaha tha ki tujhe subah hi chahiye meri beti ki...yahi soch kar maine bhej diya tha ki dono kaam ho jayenge...khet ke kagaz bhi mil jayenge aur tu bhi neetu ki le lega.
Raj—theek hai...main shaam ko khet ke paper le kar aapke ghar khud hi pahucha dunga...
Radha—shaam ko 8 pm ke baad aana....tab tak ravi ke baapu khet me aa jayenge raat me sone ke liye...ravi bhi aaj kal apne mama ke yaha gaya hua hai..to tujhe meri lene ka mouka bhi mil jayega...lekin agar kahi sheetal ko malum chala ki tu mere ghar aaya tha to vah meri beti ka jeena mushkil kar degi.
Raj—didi ki tension mat lo..vo main dekh lunga....aap ab jaldi se mera kuch jugad karo..... aap abhi apni nahi dena chahti to kam se kam apni beti ki hi dilwa do...
Radha—tu na marwayega mujhe....maine kaha na raat me mere ghar me hi le lena uski bhi..
Raj—pyas mujhe abhi lagi hai...aur aap chahti ho ki tab tak pyasa hi rahu... ? mujhe abhi chahiye...agar khet ke paper chahiye to jaldi se apni beti ki bur dilwao mujhe..
Radha—tu samajhta kyo nahi...kaise kahu main apni hi beti se ki ja beti raj se apni bur pelwa le..
Raj—main kuch nahi janta..agar khet vapis chahiye to apni dono betiyo ki bur mujhse chudwani hogi..vo bhi daily dono time...Saand Ko Jo Ladki Jach Gayi...Samajh Lo Ki Uski Bur Phat Gayi
Radha--theek hai ja...main thodi der me kisi bahane se neetu ko samne wale khet me bhejti hu tere paas