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Prince babu

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Main aapki baat nahi kar raha bhai..
Vo abhi abhi aaya hai aur aisi baate kisi ko bhi hurt karti hain..
Aisa comment unn stories par karni chahiye jaha update aate hi nahi hain ya jo saalo se adhuri padi hain...
Anand Bhai sch bolun main apki ISI liye padhta Hun ki ap regular update dete ho wo bhi kum se kum 3000 word Ka or apke page pe ek bnde be Bola uski story Ka review krun Bhai last 11 days ho gye hai abhi tak koi update nhi or jab update bhi deta hai 700-800 word Ka ki 5 mint main khtm thanks Anand bhai
 
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Black water

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Nice update bhai
 
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Sabhi91

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Superb anand bhai.....
Shayed raaj pe sach mai koi musibat aane wala hai jiska aabhas sadhna or sheetal dono ko ho gaya. Pata nhi ye kitni badi musibat hogi or raaj is se kaise niklega......
Waiting for next update.....
 
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Mathur

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awesome one bhai ji

sorry for pate review nya senestee hai issliye mere sath bakchodi ho rhi hai :tongue:

jo bhi ho teeno update ek se badh kar ei they halanki mujhe vo mall ke gundo vale update mai kuch kami lagi halanki kya yeh pta nhi par aapne puri koshish ki issliye jyada acha lga REAL SHEETAL(RS) ki tareef gajab thi aur SAAND ki haivaniyat lajavab thi aur ab confusion bhi shuru ho chuki hai REAL SADHNA(RSA) bhi confuse hai ki RS khud ko SADHNA kyun bol rhi hai well vo toh apne aur RAJ ko lekar bhi confuse hai usse yeh nhi pta ki RAJ ke sath aage bhade yan uss se dur rhi halanki dur rehna uske bas mai nhi hai aur vo kisi aur ko RAJ ke sath dekh bhi nhi skti vakai LADKI/AURTON ko samajhna aasan na hai:DD:
well abhi RSA ki baat hi karunga
RSA ka yeh pehla charamsukh tha shayad RAJ ke sath jo bhi usse kaafi galat mehsus hua baad mai well vo kya karegi yeh vo khud nhi jaanti hai aurab RAJ ke liye pareshan hai magar uski pareshaani MALTI samjh skti hai kyunki ek MAA se jyada uski beti ki pareshani koi aur samjh nhi skta hai aisa mera maan na hai aur story mai suit bui krta hai kyunki aap story ko jitna original ho ske utna original karne ki koshish karte hain jo mujhe bahut shi lgta hai
RSA khud soch nhi pa rhi hai abhi saaf saaf kyunki RS ke aane se usse ab daar bhi hai ki kahin RAJ usse SADHNA samjh kar uske piche na jaye aur vo khud usse apne pass aane bhi nhi dena chahti well dono kaam vo nhi chahti par aisa hoga jarur

well dekhna hoga jab RS pure parivaar ke samne aayegi toh unka kya reaction hoga kaafi juada confusion hogi story mai but readers mai na hogi kyunki aapki writing ka level hi alag hai BC B-)

RAJ ab gaya hai sidha vahan jahan RS ko lga vo hoga jaise usse uss sketch mai mila aur sapno mai mila par sochne vali baat yehi hai ki kaise BLACKSTAR iss kaand ke piche hoga yan aisa bhi ho skta hai ki yeh saari paristhiti iss time uske favor mai chal rhi ho aur vo iska pura fayda utha rha ho kyunki RS ko sapna aaya tha uss jagah ka well dekhte hain kya hota hai
but yeh ullu ki gaand mai khunta dunga BC bahut confusion chod rkhi hai sale ne :angry:
umeed hai RAJ ko yahan RS mil jaye jisse vo apni SADHNA samjh rha hai

vahin RS ko ek aur nya sapna aaya jo usse pareshan kar gya hai well dekhte hain ki vo kaise RAJ se milegi kyunki RAJ nashe mai jarur JAISALMAIR pahunch gya hai aur registan mai shayad kyunki uski gaadi samne reit hone ki vajah se ruki hai aur vo apne hosh mai nhi hai toh pakka RS apna mann behlane ke chakkar mai yan sapne vali jagah ka pta lagane mai lagi hogi jab usse RAJ dikh jaye yaan kissi aur ko RAJ mil jaye jo bhi ho kaafi jyada mja aane vala hai story mai

aur buai aap ki shayeri bahut hi gajab hai mja aa gya

KEEP WRITING
KEEP UPDATING

YOUR REGULAR READER
...MATHUR
 

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Raj—nahi didi…aisa mat karo…kuch bhi ho, aap meri badi bahan ho…dusra aap kisi aur ko chahti ho…ye aap apni khushi se nahi balki majburi me isliye kar rahi ho taaki main aap ki problem ko solve karne me madad karu…main itna gira hua nahi hu ki kisi ki majburi ka fayda uthau…aur aap to phir bhi meri didi ho…stop this.

Koi aur waqt hota to shayad main ye sunahri mouka kabhi hath se nahi jane deta…kintu iss samay mere dilo dimag par sadhana ka nasha poori tarah se havi tha…minakshi didi ka iss tarah kapde utarna , na jane kyo mujhe achcha nahi laga, isliye maine unhe aisa karne se rok diya.

udi baba .. ye kaise ho sakta hai .. aaj to lagta hai suraj pashim se uga hai .. muzhe to apni aankon par yakeen hee nahi ho raha ki main ye kya padh raha hu .. kisi ne sahi hee kaha hai .. ki pyaar mein acche khaasa aadmi bhi paagal ho jata hai .. aaj uska sabut bhi dekh liya .. magar yaha to Raj ne apni haalat ek khajiyal kutte se bhi buri kar li .. aur ye Firefox bhi gadha hee hai .. bechare Raj ko khaali pet hee daaru pilwa di .. kahye ka dost kam se kam usko kuch khilwa to deta .. ye saale saare launde haram hee hote hai .. bas daaru aur ladki dekh kar .. sab ch***ya ban jaate hai ...

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Anand bhai kya baat hai .. is baar to Mega update diya hai .. sala subha se padhna start kiya tha aur padhte - padhte shaam ho gayi :wink: ...

aur ye ullu abhi tak to Sadhana (sheetal) ke saamne hee aa raha tha .. magar ab to ye Raj ki gaadi par hee aa dhamka ...

kahi Raj daaru ke nashe mein gaadi chalata - chalata Jaiselmer hee to nahi pahuch gaya ...

aur lagta hai iss baar to Sheetal (sadhana) ne bhi apne mann mein dridh nishye kar liya hai .. ki vo kabhi Raj ke aas-pass bhi nahi fatkegi .. magar chahe upar - upar se vo kitna bhi ghussa kar le .. lekin aakhir mein uska dil bhi Raj ke liye paseej hee jata hai .. chahe wo kitni bhi galtiya kare ...

story ne mast turn of events le liya hai .. ab dekhte hai .. next update mein kya nayi anhoni se saamna hota hai ...

by the way .. ye update padh kar maza aa gaya .. update bhi bilkul apne Saand ki tarah hi Saand update tha ... he he :)
 

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Awesome update anand bhai,
Behad hi shandaar, lajawab aur amazing update hai bhai,
raj ne sadhna ki khoj mein poore shahar ki khak chhan diya hai,
aur sharab ke nashe mein vo anjani manjil ki or nikal gaya hai,
idhar sheetal ka gussa apne charam par hai raj ke raat ki harkat ki vajah se,
lekin poora din gujarne ke baad use bhi uski fikr hone lagi hai,
ab dekhte hain ki aage kya hota hai, waiting for next update
 
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