awesome one bhai ji
sorry for pate review nya senestee hai issliye mere sath bakchodi ho rhi hai
jo bhi ho teeno update ek se badh kar ei they halanki mujhe vo mall ke gundo vale update mai kuch kami lagi halanki kya yeh pta nhi par aapne puri koshish ki issliye jyada acha lga REAL SHEETAL(RS) ki tareef gajab thi aur SAAND ki haivaniyat lajavab thi aur ab confusion bhi shuru ho chuki hai REAL SADHNA(RSA) bhi confuse hai ki RS khud ko SADHNA kyun bol rhi hai well vo toh apne aur RAJ ko lekar bhi confuse hai usse yeh nhi pta ki RAJ ke sath aage bhade yan uss se dur rhi halanki dur rehna uske bas mai nhi hai aur vo kisi aur ko RAJ ke sath dekh bhi nhi skti vakai LADKI/AURTON ko samajhna aasan na hai

well abhi RSA ki baat hi karunga
RSA ka yeh pehla charamsukh tha shayad RAJ ke sath jo bhi usse kaafi galat mehsus hua baad mai well vo kya karegi yeh vo khud nhi jaanti hai aurab RAJ ke liye pareshan hai magar uski pareshaani MALTI samjh skti hai kyunki ek MAA se jyada uski beti ki pareshani koi aur samjh nhi skta hai aisa mera maan na hai aur story mai suit bui krta hai kyunki aap story ko jitna original ho ske utna original karne ki koshish karte hain jo mujhe bahut shi lgta hai
RSA khud soch nhi pa rhi hai abhi saaf saaf kyunki RS ke aane se usse ab daar bhi hai ki kahin RAJ usse SADHNA samjh kar uske piche na jaye aur vo khud usse apne pass aane bhi nhi dena chahti well dono kaam vo nhi chahti par aisa hoga jarur
well dekhna hoga jab RS pure parivaar ke samne aayegi toh unka kya reaction hoga kaafi juada confusion hogi story mai but readers mai na hogi kyunki aapki writing ka level hi alag hai BC
RAJ ab gaya hai sidha vahan jahan RS ko lga vo hoga jaise usse uss sketch mai mila aur sapno mai mila par sochne vali baat yehi hai ki kaise BLACKSTAR iss kaand ke piche hoga yan aisa bhi ho skta hai ki yeh saari paristhiti iss time uske favor mai chal rhi ho aur vo iska pura fayda utha rha ho kyunki RS ko sapna aaya tha uss jagah ka well dekhte hain kya hota hai
but yeh ullu ki gaand mai khunta dunga BC bahut confusion chod rkhi hai sale ne
umeed hai RAJ ko yahan RS mil jaye jisse vo apni SADHNA samjh rha hai
vahin RS ko ek aur nya sapna aaya jo usse pareshan kar gya hai well dekhte hain ki vo kaise RAJ se milegi kyunki RAJ nashe mai jarur JAISALMAIR pahunch gya hai aur registan mai shayad kyunki uski gaadi samne reit hone ki vajah se ruki hai aur vo apne hosh mai nhi hai toh pakka RS apna mann behlane ke chakkar mai yan sapne vali jagah ka pta lagane mai lagi hogi jab usse RAJ dikh jaye yaan kissi aur ko RAJ mil jaye jo bhi ho kaafi jyada mja aane vala hai story mai
aur buai aap ki shayeri bahut hi gajab hai mja aa gya
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