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Nice update
Awesome

Khoob maza aaya bhai dadi ko aise hi chid diya bina kuch bole sahi me saand bana diya bahi raj ko

lakin ye bat samajh nahi aai ki sheetal apni bimari ke bare me raj se kiu chipa rahi hai

Or ye rajasthan pe kya mission ho sakta hai abhay ko le ke directly use marne to jay gi nahi

Chalo dekhte hai what's next

All the best for next update
 

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UPDATE- 241

Laxmi—to phir kya baat hai…? Batao mujhe beta…?

Raj—main aap ko bata to nahi sakta..haan, aap kahe to dikha sakta hu…lekin agar aap shanti se chupchap rah kar dekhne ka vada kare to…?

Laxmi (tension)—theek hai beta..chalo..

Main laxmi ko le kar bagal wale room ke darwaje par aa gaya aur unko key hole se andar dekhne ka ishara kiya…laxmi ne jaise hi key hole se andar ka nazara dekha to uske pairo tale jamin hi khisak gayi.

Ab aage….

Andar ka scene hi kuch aisa tha ki laxmi ko shocked lagna hi tha…andar dayachand aur salma poore nagn halat me 69 ki position me ek dusre ke guptango ke sath mukh chodan kriya me vyast the…ye dekh kar laxmi ka dimag hi kharab ho gaya….usne ab tak sirf apne pati ke salma ke sath avaidh sambandh ke baare me suna hua tha lekin use iss baat par yakin nahi tha, use aisa lagta tha ki ye baat unko phansane ke liye dushmano ki koi chaal ya afvah hai..kintu aaj apni ankho se ye sab pratyaksh dekh kar uska mood upset ho gaya…uska rom rom gusse se fadakne laga.

Usne gusse me darwaja knock kar diya…darwaja khatkhataye jane se dono ke program me vyavdhan pad gaya..lekin unhone yahi samjha khas kar dayachand ne ki koi waiter hoga isliye salma aise hi nangi bathroom me ghus gayi jabki dayachand ne towel lapet kar darwaja khol diya.

Darwaja khol kar jaise hi usne apne samne apni patni laxmi ko dekha to uske hosh ud gaye…usne laxmi ke yaha hone ke baare me socha hi nahi tha…halanki salma ko sab pata tha ki koun hai kyon ki use maine pahle hi samjha diya tha sab kuch.

Dayachand (shocked)—llll…laxmii…tummmm..‼

Laxmi (gusse me)—kyo mujhe yaha dekh kar achcha nahi laga…?

Dayachand—nnn..nahii…vo baat nahi hai..lekin aise achanak…kam se kam bata to diya hota…

Laxmi (gusse me)—bata deti to tumhari asliyat kaise samne aati…?

Dayachand (hadbada kar)—kkk…kaisi asliyat…..? ye tum kaisi bahki bahki baate kar rahi ho laxmi…?

Laxmi (gusse me)—vahi asliyat jo main dekh chuki hu…ab tak mujhe dusro ki baato par vishwash nahi tha…main use dushmano ki chaal samajhti thi..lekin nahi, main hi galat thi…

Dayachand (tension)—ye..tum kya kah rahi ho laxmi…? Main kuch samjha nahi..aisa kya kar diya maine..

Laxmi (gusse me)—achcha, samajh nahi aa raha hai ya na samajhne ka natak kar rahe ho…? Khair abhi sab samjahti hu.. kinare hato..

Ye bol kar laxmi dayachand ko ek taraf hata kar sidhe bathroom ki taraf badh gayi aur ek jhatke me bathroom ka darwaja khol diya jaha salma poori nangi khadi thi ab bhi…ye dekh kar dayachand ke pasine chhutne lage..uski to bolti hi band ho gayi apni chori pakde jane se…uske paas ab apni safayi me kahne ko kuch bacha hi nahi tha.

Laxmi (gusse me)—aur bhi kuch kahna hai tumhe…? Ya ab bhi koi bahana banana hai... ?

Dayachand—mujhe maaf kar do laxmi..mujhse galti ho gayi..

Laxmi—tumhe maaf kar du…? Main vaha tumhari salamati ke liye vrat, upvaas aur na jane kya kya karti rahi aur tum yaha mere pith piche rang raliya manate rahe...apne pati ko kisi dusri aurat ke sath rang raliya manate dekh kar uski patni ke dil par kya gujarti hai ye tumhe tabhi pata chalega jab tum khud apni ankho se apni patni ko kisi dusre mard ki baaho me dekhoge...

Dayachand—nahi laxmi, mujhe maaf kar do..

Laxmi—mere dard ka ehsaas tumhe tabhi hoga jab tum khud apni biwi ke upar kisi dusre ko dekhoge…aaj tumhe main apne dard ka ehsaas karati hu…

Dayachand—aisa mat kaho laxmi..ye paap hai..

Laxmi—achcha, jo tum kar rahe the vo kya punya tha…? (meri taraf dekh kar)..rajj beta, darwaja band kar do..

Maine mann hi mann khush hote huye darwaja band kar ke bahar jane laga ki tabhi laxmi ne mujhe pakad kar bhitar khich liya aur darwaja andar se lock kar diya.

Laxmi—rajj beta, kar do mujhe mere hi pati ke samne bilkul nangi..aaj main iss insan ko dikhati ki dard kya hota hai..?

Dayachand (thoda jor se)—laxmii..ye tum kaisi baate kar rahi ho vo bhi damad ji se…?

Laxmi (gusse me)—kyo, tumhari tarah kisi bazar me to muh nahi maarne ja rahi…? Raj koi gair to nahi hai..ghar ki baat ghar me hi rahegi…rajjj beta dekh kya rahe ho…? Utar do mere kapde aur kar do mujhe poori nangi…aur aaj mere pati ke hi samne mujhe ragad ragad kar chod dalo apne lund se…

Laxmi ke muh se aisi ashleelatapoorn baate sun kar dayachand ko to apne kano par jaise vishwash hi nahi hua ki uski sati savitri biwi jisne apne pati ke samne kabhi aise shabd nahi bole the vo itne gande shabd bhi kabhi bol sakti hai..aur vo bhi kisi dusre mard ke samne,..dayachand ke liye ye ek bahut bada jhatka tha.

Dayachand (chillate huye)—laxmiii..tum pagal to nahi ho gayi ho…?

Laxmi (gusse me)—chillao mat..apne pati ko kisi bazaru aurat ki baaho me dekhne ke baad kaisa lagta hai..abhi tumhe pata lag jayega jab khud tum apni biwi ko dusre admi ke niche nangi dekhoge…? Rajj betaaa, kar do mujhe poori nangi.

Raj (sharif bante huye)—lekin maa ji…ye kaise mumkin hai…?

Laxmi—aaj meri baat maan lo rajj..tumhe meri sadhana beti ki kasam…

Raj—ye kya maa ji…? Aapne mujhe sadhana ki kasam de di…mujhe maaf kijiye dayachand ji main sadhana ki kasam nahi tod sakta..main vivash hu..

Main aage badh kar laxmi ki saree utarne laga…dayachand phadphadata raha lekin kuch hi samay me maine laxmi ke jism se poore kapde alag kar diye…ab vo apne hi pati ke samne poori nangi avastha me khadi thi…ye dekh kar dayachand ne apni ankhe band kar li.

Laxmi—ruk kyo gaye rajj…? Aage badho rajj,,mere pair phaila kar aaj mujhe mere hi pati ke samne meri bur ko khoob chod dalo…tumhe sadhana ki kasam hai rajj…chod dalo mujhe…

Raj—theek hai maa ji…jaisi aap ki marzi..

Laxmi gusse me pagal ho chuki thi…main bhi ab sharafat dikhana chhod kar laxmi ko baho me bhar liya aur bistar me lita kar uske hoth chusne laga..sath me dono doodh pakad kar jor jor se dabane laga…

Laxmi—aaaahhhh…rajjjj..aise hi dabao meri chuchi ko…khoob kas kas ke maslo..aaaahhhhh…aise hi….dikhao mere pati ko ki chuchiya kaise dabayi jati hain…aaaahhhhhh

Dayachand (minnat)—ruk jao laxmi aisa mat karo…meri galti ki itni badi saza mat do…rajj beta tum hi maan jao na.. laxmi tumhari saas hai..saas bhi maa hi hoti hai..tum apni maa ke sath aisa kaise kar sakte ho…?

Main uske hoth chuste huye tab tak uski chuchiyo ko masalta raha jab tak ki vo lal nahi pad gayi..dayachand bar bar laxmi se rukne ki minnat karta raha lekin ab to laxmi chudasi ho chuki thi..use saand ke lund ka chaska lag chuka tha..iss sex virus ki khasiyat theek vaisi hi thi jaisi ki kisi darukhor ko jab tak daru na mile to vah daru ke liye pagal rahta hai, drugs lene wala bina drugs ke pagal rahta hai, iske liye vo kuch bhi karne ko taiyar rahta hai…gutkha khane wala gutkha ke liye bechain rahta hai..vaise hi saand ke lund se ek bar chudne wali saand ke lund ke liye pagal rahti hai..saand ka lund apni bur me lene ke liye vo kisi bhi hadh se gujarne ko taiyar rahti hai..yahi halat ab laxmi ki ho chuki thi.

Laxmi ne uth kar mere kapde nikal diye..aur jaise hi mera lund uchhal kar samne aaya to laxmi ka sara josh ek pal me hi thanda pad gaya..usne pahli bar itna bada aur mota lund jo dekha tha..kyon ki uss din to raat ke andhere me vo chudi thi isliye lund dekh nahi payi thi, par samajh jarur gayi thi..usse buri halat to dayachand ki ho gayi lund dekh kar..

Dayachand (ghabra kar)—ab to maan jao laxmi…dekho damad ji ka bahut bada hai..iske ghuste hi tum mar jaogi..nahi jhel paogi tum…meri baat maan lo..

Dayachand ki iss baat ne jaise aag me ghee ka kaam kar diya….laxmi ke gusse ko aur badha diya..halanki vo pahle hi mere lund se chud chuki thi isliye chudne me marne ka koi darr hi nahi tha usko….usne ek bar gusse se dayachand ki ytaraf dekha air phir mera lund hath me pakad kar use apne muh me lene ki koshish karne lagi..ye dekh kar to main bhi hairan ho gaya, dayachand ko shock to lagna hi tha…jabki dayachand ke lund ko muh me lena to door usne kabhi hath me bhi nahi pakda tha.

Dayachand (shocked)—laxmi..ye kya kar rahi ho tum…?

Laxmi—kya kar rahi hu matlab..? dekh nahi rahe ki apne damad ji ka lund choos rahi hu…jab tum apna mariyal sa lund iss randi ko chusa sakte ho to main apne damad ji ka itna mast lund kyo nahi chus sakti…?

Laxmi jee jaan laga kar lund ko chusne lagi..maine usko apne upar 69 pose me kar liya aur uski bur ko chusne laga..vo mere lund ko pine me lagi rahi…aur tab tak chusti rahi jab tak ki mera maal nahi nikal aaya..jise usne poora pi liya.. vo khud do bar jhad chuki thi.

Skhalit hone ke baad bhi hum aise hi 69 position me lage rahe aur garam hote hi maine laxmi ko apne niche le kar uske dono pair apne kandhe par rakh liye aur phir lund ko uski bur ke chhed me tuka kar ek tagda takatwar dhakka laga diya.

Lund laxmi ki bur ko cheerta hua teen inch andar ghus gaya..laxmi ke muh se cheekh nikal padi aur vo dard se chhat patane lagi…maine jaldi jaldi teen dhakke aur laga kar poora lund uski bur ke ghused diya..vo ek bar phir se jor se cheekhi aur behosh ho gayi…ye dekh kar dayachand ghabra gaya.

Dayachand (ghabrate huye)—rajj betaa..ruk jao..meri laxmi mar jayegi….tumhara bahut bada hai..vo nahi jhel payegi..phat jayegi uski..

Salma—dont worry darling..kuch nahi hoga….aisa lund to badi kismat waliyo ko hi nasib hota hai..

Raj—chinta mat kijiye, maa ji mari nahi hain sirf behosh huyi hain…aap thoda unke chehre par pani daliye..

Dayachand jaldi se utha aur laxmi ke chehre par pani dalne laga…hosh me aate hi vo rone lagi dard se lekin jaise hi use ehsaas hua ki dayachand uske sir ke paas baitha hai to vah mujhse jor se lipat gayi aur chumne lagi..main bhi uski chuchiyo ko dabate huye dhire dhire chodne laga.

Laxmi—aaaahhhhh…raajjj beta..aur chodo….tum asli mard ho….aaj maine jana ki asli lund kya hota hai…? Warna ab tak to lulli se hi chudi thi….aaaahhhh…aise hi meri chuchiyo ko dabate huye chodte raho meri bur…aaahhhhh….aur jor se…

Dayachand—bas karo laxmi….tumhari phat jayegi bahut..tum samajhti kyo nahi…

Laxmi—chup karo…asli mard vahi hai jo phati huyi bur ko bhi phad de….bina phati ko to lulli bhi phad deti hai…aur jor jor se chodo rajjj…aaj bahut maza aa raha hai…aaahhhhh…phad dalo meri bur ko….apne saand jaise lund se chod chod kar khoob choudi kar do meri bur ko…aaaahhhhh….mujhe apni rakhail bana lo raaajjjj….aise hi mujhe roj chodna nangi kar ke.. mujhe chod chod ke apne bachcho ki maa bana do…aaahhhhhhh

Dayachand (shocked)—ye kya anaap shanap bak rahi ho laxmi….?

Laxmi—aaahhhh..tum kya jano ki chodna kise kahte hain…? Chodo raj kas kas ke chodte raho mujhe…aaahhh..bahut maza aa raha hai….aaahhhhhh

Raj—sasur ji, ek kijiye, aap meri sasu maa ke pair jitna ho sakta hai khade ho kar phaila kar rakhiye..isse main sasu maa ji ko jor jor se chod bhi paunga aur unhe maza bhi bahut ayega aise chudwane me..sath me dard bhi kam hoga..jaldi kijiye.. salma ek pair tum phaila ke rakho..

Dayachand—hey ram, ye kaisa din dekhna pad raha hai mujhe…? Mujhe apni hi biwi ke pair phaila kar use apne hi damad se chudwana pad raha hai..

Dayachand ne khade ho kar laxmi ke sir ke paas se ek pair apni taraf phaila liya jabki aisi hi dusri taraf se salma ne kiya, vo bhi nangi hi thi, uski bur se bhi pani tapak raha tha…laxmi ke pair vipreet disha me ab khoob phail chuke the to maine dono hatho se uski chuchiyo ko aate ki tarah goonthte huye dandanadan takatwar dhakke uski bur me lagane laga.

Poora kamra phachch..phachch..phachch.thapp..thapp ki madhur dwani se goonjne laga…laxmi bhi niche se apni gaand utha utha kar mera sath dene lagi….aadha ghanta tak aise hi jam kar chodne ke baad maine usko ghodi bana diya…itne me hi laxmi do bar jhad gayi thi.

Raj—salma, lund jyada geela ho gaya hai..thoda chus kar sukha kar do…

Salma ne jhuk kar mera lund pakad liya aur chusne lagi..dayachand ne use rokna chaha lekin vo nahi ruki…phir maine laxmi ke piche aa kar uski mast gaand ko dono hatho se dabate huye bur me lund ghused diya aur tezi se chodne laga.. laxmi ka jism bhi kamaal ka tha..ekdam gora aur bhara hua..gaand khoob phooli huyi thi.

Raj—maa ji bahut mast gaand hai aap ki..sasur ji ne to bahut mari hogi aap ki gaand….?

Laxmi—jo bur nahi chod sakta dhang se vo apni lulli se gaand kya maarega meri…? Aaaaahhhh…. Tum hi udghatan karna beta meri gaand ka….khoob maarna gaand bhi meri…..roj nangi karna mujhe aur phir khoob meri bur aur gaand maarna daily…dono time…..aaahahhhhh….

Dayachand—beta, kam se kam apna pani to andar mat chhodna..nahi to gajab ho jayega…

Laxmi—andar hi gira do raj beta…mere paas tumhare sasur ka licence hai..chinta ki koi baat nahi hai…bana do tum mujhe apne bachche ki maa….aaaahahhhh

Maine ab prachand speed se laxmi ko chodne laga…uske phir se jhadte hi maine usko sidha lita diya aur ek bar phir se uske dono pair uske pati aur soutan ko pakad kar phailane pade…aadha ghanta aur jam kar chodne ke baad main unki bur ke andar hi pichkari chhodne laga…dayachand ka to haal behaal ho chuka tha…

Jhadne ke baad main laxmi ke upar hi pasar gaya…kuch der sustane ke baad main unke upar se uth kar unhe god me utha ke bathroom le gaya aur saaf kar ke vapis bistar me lita diya..main apne kapde pahanne hi ja raha tha ki laxmi ne mera hath pakad liya.

Laxmi—raj beta, gaand nahi maroge apni sasu maa ki…? Meri kuwari gaand ko meri taraf se apne janam din ka tohfa samajh kar le lo, beta..

Dayachand (shocked)—laxmi…

Raj—kya aap sach me chahti hain maa ji..?

Laxmi—haan raj beta, main sach me tumhe apni kori gaand dena chahti hu…mera bhi bahut mann hai ki tum aaj meri gaand bhi maar kar phad do..

Raj—theek hai maa ji..sasur ji aap jab tak maa ji ki gaand me tel laga kar mere lund ke liye taiyar kar dijiye nahi to sukah sukha ghusedne me unhe jyada taklif hogi.

Laxmi—rajj beta..tab tak tum iss kutiya ko batao ki asli lund kya hota hai aur bur chodi kaise jati hai…? Isko bhi to pata chale ki lulli aur lund me kya fark hota hai..?

Raj—theek hai maa ji..aao salma..tumhari bur chod ke dekhta hu..

Phir maine laxmi ko ghodi bana kar sasur ji ko unki gaand me tel lagane ko kah kar main salma ke upar aa gaya aur usko patak kar humach humach kar chodne laga...ye dekh kar dayachand ki gaand hi phat gayi lekin salma to chudasi ho chuki thi to usne khud hi apne pair phaila diye..sasur ji bechare apna sir pakad ke sasu maa ki gaand ko tel se mere liye taiyar karne lage.

Salma ke jhadte hi maine lund laxmi ki gaand me ghused diya aur jor jor se unki gaand maarne laga…vo bar bar behosh ho ja rahi thi aur dayachand har bar unko pani daal kar hosh me lata raha…ek ghante tak tabiyat se gaand maarne ke baad main laxmi ki gaand me hi jhad gaya..vo bhi past ho chuki thi.

Laxmi ke upar se jaise hi utra to salma turant kutiya ban gayi aur mujhe apni gaand par chadhne ka ishara kiya to main bhi uski baat maan kar ek bar uski bhi gaand thonk li…salma ki gaand maarne ke baad ab mera dimag apni sahi jagah par aa gaya tha.

Maine uth kar apne kapde pahan liye..sath me laxmi ko pain killer khila kar kapde pahnne me help ki…dayachand ab bhi hairan pareshan apna sir pakad kar baitha tha.

Laxmi (gusse me)—suno ji, aaj se mujhe tumse aur iss salma se koi aitaraz nahi hai…dono chaho to shadi kar lo ya aise hi raho.. main kuch nahi kahungi…lekin ek baat ka dhyan rakhna, ki aaj ke baad tum sirf naam ke hi mere pati ho, mujhe kabhi chhune ki koshish bhi mat karna…mera jism ab se sirf raj ke bhogne ke liye hai…agar kabhi galti se bhi mujhe hath lagane ki koshish ki to main ye bhul jaungi ki tumhare aur mere beech kabhi koi rishta tha....yaad rakhna…isliye agar apni betiyo aur sab ki nazar me girna nahi chahte to mujhe kabhi hath mat lagana aur na hi mere karib aane ki kabhi sochna.

Uske baad main dusre room me aa kar chodu gang se baat karne laga…tab tak salma mere paas aa gayi aur mujhse lipat gayi chumte huye.

Salma—thanks raj…tumne aaj dayachand ko hamesha ke liye mera bana diya…ab hame chhup chhup kar nahi milna padega..

Raj—so to hai..lekin mera kya hoga…?

Salma (mushkura kar)—tum jab chaho, jaha chaho mujhe chod liya karna..aaj se main dayachand ki biwi aur tumhari rakhail ban ke rahungi….isliye tum ko mujhe jee bhar ke chodne ka haq hai..

Raj—achcha ab chalo..aur haan, tum aur dayachand dono burka pahan lo…warna sab ko pata chal jayega ki tum dono jinda ho aur isse jaan ka khatra bhi ho sakta hai..

Salma—theek hai..

Phir main unko le kar ghar ke liye rawana ho gaya…laxmi aage mere paas baithi thi jabki dayachand aur salma piche ki seat par burka pahne baithe the….chodne ke baad ab mujhe kuch theek lag raha tha to main phir se black star ke baare me sochne laga.

Ghar pahuchte hi jab sabne mere sath burka pahni do ladies ko dekha to sab chounk gayi…maine dhire se unhe sab bata diya..sadhana apne papa ko dekh kar bahut khush huyi aur unke gale lag gayi..yahi chinky aur twinkle ne bhi kiya.

Phir main sheetal didi, sadhana aur rashmi ko le kar city beauty parlour le kar chala gaya kyon ki aaj meri sadhana se engagement jo thi…make up ke baad to main teeno ko dekhta hi rah gaya…teeno behad khubsurat lag rahi thi..jinme se sadhana aur sheetal didi ko to pahchan pana hi mushkil tha…dono ki manmohini surat dekh kar mujhe bahut pyar aane laga unn par…nazar thi ki hatne ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi.

Sashana—raj, aaj engagement ke baad tum sadhana (present sheetal) ko le kar mandir chale jana aur vahi shadi kar lena.. ghar me main sambhal lungi..

Raj—theek hai..lekin aap ko aur rashmi didi ko bhi chalna padega..

Rashmi—agar hum chale gaye to mehmano ko koun dekhega..isliye sheetal aur mujhe ghar me rahna padega..

Raj—theek hai..

Uske baad main sab ko le kar ghar aa gaya….party ki taiyari chal rahi thi..shaam ho chuki thi…,main apne room me aa kar aaraam karne ke liye let gaya aur kuch sochne laga..tabhi jaise achanak hi kuch dimag me aaya to main fauran uth kar ghar ke bahar nikal kar badi me baith kar chala gaya.

Meri gadi sidha haweli me hi ja kar ruki…andar jane par pata chala ki thakurain market gayi huyi hai…mujhe dekhte hi arti khushi se chahakte huye mujhse lipat gayi.

Arti—hum sabhi taiyar hi ho rahe the..tumhare birthday me aane ke liye…janam din mubarak ho rajj.

Raj (hoth chum kar)—thanks my sweat heart…

Main arti ke sath uske room me aa kar baith gaya…thodi der me thakurain bhi aa gayi..mujhe dekh kar uske chehre par bhi khushi chha gayi…aaj thakurain bhi bijli gira rahi thi…halanki sundar to vah pahle se hi thi, lekin aaj qayamat dhane par utaru thi….kuch hi der me shanti bhi vahi mere paas aa kar baith gayi.

Raj—kya baat hai, chetna, mandakini, aur unki betiya neelam aur vandana nahi dikh rahi hain…?

Thakurain—chetna aur mandakini bhabhi america gayi hain nilesh ko dekhne..jabki neelam aur vandana beauty parlour gayi hain…make up karwane..tumhari party me aane ke liye…

Raj—ooohhhh..

Shanti—rajj, main tumhare liye coffee le kar aati hu…

Main thakurain aur arti ke sath baate karne laga…thodi der me shanti mere liye coffee bana kar le aayi to maine coffee le liya aur phir….

“Chaaattttaaakkkkkk…”

Raj (gusse me)--Kyo kiya aisa tune mere sath....? chatttaaaakkkk..sidhi tarah se bata warna jaan se maar dungaaa...


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Shandar update hai bro maza aa gya

Laxmi ji apne pati ke samne chud gai kahatar nak dhyanchand ka dhyan bhang ho gya

Lakin ab ye chatnta kise pada bhai

Thakurain ko jiske bhaio ko raj ne mara

Shanti ko jiska raj ne kuch nahi bigada ya phir

Arti ko jiske pati ko raj ne mara

Chalo dekhte hai aage kya hoga

All the best for next update
 

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UPDATE- 241

Laxmi—to phir kya baat hai…? Batao mujhe beta…?

Raj—main aap ko bata to nahi sakta..haan, aap kahe to dikha sakta hu…lekin agar aap shanti se chupchap rah kar dekhne ka vada kare to…?

Laxmi (tension)—theek hai beta..chalo..

Main laxmi ko le kar bagal wale room ke darwaje par aa gaya aur unko key hole se andar dekhne ka ishara kiya…laxmi ne jaise hi key hole se andar ka nazara dekha to uske pairo tale jamin hi khisak gayi.

Ab aage….

Andar ka scene hi kuch aisa tha ki laxmi ko shocked lagna hi tha…andar dayachand aur salma poore nagn halat me 69 ki position me ek dusre ke guptango ke sath mukh chodan kriya me vyast the…ye dekh kar laxmi ka dimag hi kharab ho gaya….usne ab tak sirf apne pati ke salma ke sath avaidh sambandh ke baare me suna hua tha lekin use iss baat par yakin nahi tha, use aisa lagta tha ki ye baat unko phansane ke liye dushmano ki koi chaal ya afvah hai..kintu aaj apni ankho se ye sab pratyaksh dekh kar uska mood upset ho gaya…uska rom rom gusse se fadakne laga.

Usne gusse me darwaja knock kar diya…darwaja khatkhataye jane se dono ke program me vyavdhan pad gaya..lekin unhone yahi samjha khas kar dayachand ne ki koi waiter hoga isliye salma aise hi nangi bathroom me ghus gayi jabki dayachand ne towel lapet kar darwaja khol diya.

Darwaja khol kar jaise hi usne apne samne apni patni laxmi ko dekha to uske hosh ud gaye…usne laxmi ke yaha hone ke baare me socha hi nahi tha…halanki salma ko sab pata tha ki koun hai kyon ki use maine pahle hi samjha diya tha sab kuch.

Dayachand (shocked)—llll…laxmii…tummmm..‼

Laxmi (gusse me)—kyo mujhe yaha dekh kar achcha nahi laga…?

Dayachand—nnn..nahii…vo baat nahi hai..lekin aise achanak…kam se kam bata to diya hota…

Laxmi (gusse me)—bata deti to tumhari asliyat kaise samne aati…?

Dayachand (hadbada kar)—kkk…kaisi asliyat…..? ye tum kaisi bahki bahki baate kar rahi ho laxmi…?

Laxmi (gusse me)—vahi asliyat jo main dekh chuki hu…ab tak mujhe dusro ki baato par vishwash nahi tha…main use dushmano ki chaal samajhti thi..lekin nahi, main hi galat thi…

Dayachand (tension)—ye..tum kya kah rahi ho laxmi…? Main kuch samjha nahi..aisa kya kar diya maine..

Laxmi (gusse me)—achcha, samajh nahi aa raha hai ya na samajhne ka natak kar rahe ho…? Khair abhi sab samjahti hu.. kinare hato..

Ye bol kar laxmi dayachand ko ek taraf hata kar sidhe bathroom ki taraf badh gayi aur ek jhatke me bathroom ka darwaja khol diya jaha salma poori nangi khadi thi ab bhi…ye dekh kar dayachand ke pasine chhutne lage..uski to bolti hi band ho gayi apni chori pakde jane se…uske paas ab apni safayi me kahne ko kuch bacha hi nahi tha.

Laxmi (gusse me)—aur bhi kuch kahna hai tumhe…? Ya ab bhi koi bahana banana hai... ?

Dayachand—mujhe maaf kar do laxmi..mujhse galti ho gayi..

Laxmi—tumhe maaf kar du…? Main vaha tumhari salamati ke liye vrat, upvaas aur na jane kya kya karti rahi aur tum yaha mere pith piche rang raliya manate rahe...apne pati ko kisi dusri aurat ke sath rang raliya manate dekh kar uski patni ke dil par kya gujarti hai ye tumhe tabhi pata chalega jab tum khud apni ankho se apni patni ko kisi dusre mard ki baaho me dekhoge...

Dayachand—nahi laxmi, mujhe maaf kar do..

Laxmi—mere dard ka ehsaas tumhe tabhi hoga jab tum khud apni biwi ke upar kisi dusre ko dekhoge…aaj tumhe main apne dard ka ehsaas karati hu…

Dayachand—aisa mat kaho laxmi..ye paap hai..

Laxmi—achcha, jo tum kar rahe the vo kya punya tha…? (meri taraf dekh kar)..rajj beta, darwaja band kar do..

Maine mann hi mann khush hote huye darwaja band kar ke bahar jane laga ki tabhi laxmi ne mujhe pakad kar bhitar khich liya aur darwaja andar se lock kar diya.

Laxmi—rajj beta, kar do mujhe mere hi pati ke samne bilkul nangi..aaj main iss insan ko dikhati ki dard kya hota hai..?

Dayachand (thoda jor se)—laxmii..ye tum kaisi baate kar rahi ho vo bhi damad ji se…?

Laxmi (gusse me)—kyo, tumhari tarah kisi bazar me to muh nahi maarne ja rahi…? Raj koi gair to nahi hai..ghar ki baat ghar me hi rahegi…rajjj beta dekh kya rahe ho…? Utar do mere kapde aur kar do mujhe poori nangi…aur aaj mere pati ke hi samne mujhe ragad ragad kar chod dalo apne lund se…

Laxmi ke muh se aisi ashleelatapoorn baate sun kar dayachand ko to apne kano par jaise vishwash hi nahi hua ki uski sati savitri biwi jisne apne pati ke samne kabhi aise shabd nahi bole the vo itne gande shabd bhi kabhi bol sakti hai..aur vo bhi kisi dusre mard ke samne,..dayachand ke liye ye ek bahut bada jhatka tha.

Dayachand (chillate huye)—laxmiii..tum pagal to nahi ho gayi ho…?

Laxmi (gusse me)—chillao mat..apne pati ko kisi bazaru aurat ki baaho me dekhne ke baad kaisa lagta hai..abhi tumhe pata lag jayega jab khud tum apni biwi ko dusre admi ke niche nangi dekhoge…? Rajj betaaa, kar do mujhe poori nangi.

Raj (sharif bante huye)—lekin maa ji…ye kaise mumkin hai…?

Laxmi—aaj meri baat maan lo rajj..tumhe meri sadhana beti ki kasam…

Raj—ye kya maa ji…? Aapne mujhe sadhana ki kasam de di…mujhe maaf kijiye dayachand ji main sadhana ki kasam nahi tod sakta..main vivash hu..

Main aage badh kar laxmi ki saree utarne laga…dayachand phadphadata raha lekin kuch hi samay me maine laxmi ke jism se poore kapde alag kar diye…ab vo apne hi pati ke samne poori nangi avastha me khadi thi…ye dekh kar dayachand ne apni ankhe band kar li.

Laxmi—ruk kyo gaye rajj…? Aage badho rajj,,mere pair phaila kar aaj mujhe mere hi pati ke samne meri bur ko khoob chod dalo…tumhe sadhana ki kasam hai rajj…chod dalo mujhe…

Raj—theek hai maa ji…jaisi aap ki marzi..

Laxmi gusse me pagal ho chuki thi…main bhi ab sharafat dikhana chhod kar laxmi ko baho me bhar liya aur bistar me lita kar uske hoth chusne laga..sath me dono doodh pakad kar jor jor se dabane laga…

Laxmi—aaaahhhh…rajjjj..aise hi dabao meri chuchi ko…khoob kas kas ke maslo..aaaahhhhh…aise hi….dikhao mere pati ko ki chuchiya kaise dabayi jati hain…aaaahhhhhh

Dayachand (minnat)—ruk jao laxmi aisa mat karo…meri galti ki itni badi saza mat do…rajj beta tum hi maan jao na.. laxmi tumhari saas hai..saas bhi maa hi hoti hai..tum apni maa ke sath aisa kaise kar sakte ho…?

Main uske hoth chuste huye tab tak uski chuchiyo ko masalta raha jab tak ki vo lal nahi pad gayi..dayachand bar bar laxmi se rukne ki minnat karta raha lekin ab to laxmi chudasi ho chuki thi..use saand ke lund ka chaska lag chuka tha..iss sex virus ki khasiyat theek vaisi hi thi jaisi ki kisi darukhor ko jab tak daru na mile to vah daru ke liye pagal rahta hai, drugs lene wala bina drugs ke pagal rahta hai, iske liye vo kuch bhi karne ko taiyar rahta hai…gutkha khane wala gutkha ke liye bechain rahta hai..vaise hi saand ke lund se ek bar chudne wali saand ke lund ke liye pagal rahti hai..saand ka lund apni bur me lene ke liye vo kisi bhi hadh se gujarne ko taiyar rahti hai..yahi halat ab laxmi ki ho chuki thi.

Laxmi ne uth kar mere kapde nikal diye..aur jaise hi mera lund uchhal kar samne aaya to laxmi ka sara josh ek pal me hi thanda pad gaya..usne pahli bar itna bada aur mota lund jo dekha tha..kyon ki uss din to raat ke andhere me vo chudi thi isliye lund dekh nahi payi thi, par samajh jarur gayi thi..usse buri halat to dayachand ki ho gayi lund dekh kar..

Dayachand (ghabra kar)—ab to maan jao laxmi…dekho damad ji ka bahut bada hai..iske ghuste hi tum mar jaogi..nahi jhel paogi tum…meri baat maan lo..

Dayachand ki iss baat ne jaise aag me ghee ka kaam kar diya….laxmi ke gusse ko aur badha diya..halanki vo pahle hi mere lund se chud chuki thi isliye chudne me marne ka koi darr hi nahi tha usko….usne ek bar gusse se dayachand ki ytaraf dekha air phir mera lund hath me pakad kar use apne muh me lene ki koshish karne lagi..ye dekh kar to main bhi hairan ho gaya, dayachand ko shock to lagna hi tha…jabki dayachand ke lund ko muh me lena to door usne kabhi hath me bhi nahi pakda tha.

Dayachand (shocked)—laxmi..ye kya kar rahi ho tum…?

Laxmi—kya kar rahi hu matlab..? dekh nahi rahe ki apne damad ji ka lund choos rahi hu…jab tum apna mariyal sa lund iss randi ko chusa sakte ho to main apne damad ji ka itna mast lund kyo nahi chus sakti…?

Laxmi jee jaan laga kar lund ko chusne lagi..maine usko apne upar 69 pose me kar liya aur uski bur ko chusne laga..vo mere lund ko pine me lagi rahi…aur tab tak chusti rahi jab tak ki mera maal nahi nikal aaya..jise usne poora pi liya.. vo khud do bar jhad chuki thi.

Skhalit hone ke baad bhi hum aise hi 69 position me lage rahe aur garam hote hi maine laxmi ko apne niche le kar uske dono pair apne kandhe par rakh liye aur phir lund ko uski bur ke chhed me tuka kar ek tagda takatwar dhakka laga diya.

Lund laxmi ki bur ko cheerta hua teen inch andar ghus gaya..laxmi ke muh se cheekh nikal padi aur vo dard se chhat patane lagi…maine jaldi jaldi teen dhakke aur laga kar poora lund uski bur ke ghused diya..vo ek bar phir se jor se cheekhi aur behosh ho gayi…ye dekh kar dayachand ghabra gaya.

Dayachand (ghabrate huye)—rajj betaa..ruk jao..meri laxmi mar jayegi….tumhara bahut bada hai..vo nahi jhel payegi..phat jayegi uski..

Salma—dont worry darling..kuch nahi hoga….aisa lund to badi kismat waliyo ko hi nasib hota hai..

Raj—chinta mat kijiye, maa ji mari nahi hain sirf behosh huyi hain…aap thoda unke chehre par pani daliye..

Dayachand jaldi se utha aur laxmi ke chehre par pani dalne laga…hosh me aate hi vo rone lagi dard se lekin jaise hi use ehsaas hua ki dayachand uske sir ke paas baitha hai to vah mujhse jor se lipat gayi aur chumne lagi..main bhi uski chuchiyo ko dabate huye dhire dhire chodne laga.

Laxmi—aaaahhhhh…raajjj beta..aur chodo….tum asli mard ho….aaj maine jana ki asli lund kya hota hai…? Warna ab tak to lulli se hi chudi thi….aaaahhhh…aise hi meri chuchiyo ko dabate huye chodte raho meri bur…aaahhhhh….aur jor se…

Dayachand—bas karo laxmi….tumhari phat jayegi bahut..tum samajhti kyo nahi…

Laxmi—chup karo…asli mard vahi hai jo phati huyi bur ko bhi phad de….bina phati ko to lulli bhi phad deti hai…aur jor jor se chodo rajjj…aaj bahut maza aa raha hai…aaahhhhh…phad dalo meri bur ko….apne saand jaise lund se chod chod kar khoob choudi kar do meri bur ko…aaaahhhhh….mujhe apni rakhail bana lo raaajjjj….aise hi mujhe roj chodna nangi kar ke.. mujhe chod chod ke apne bachcho ki maa bana do…aaahhhhhhh

Dayachand (shocked)—ye kya anaap shanap bak rahi ho laxmi….?

Laxmi—aaahhhh..tum kya jano ki chodna kise kahte hain…? Chodo raj kas kas ke chodte raho mujhe…aaahhh..bahut maza aa raha hai….aaahhhhhh

Raj—sasur ji, ek kijiye, aap meri sasu maa ke pair jitna ho sakta hai khade ho kar phaila kar rakhiye..isse main sasu maa ji ko jor jor se chod bhi paunga aur unhe maza bhi bahut ayega aise chudwane me..sath me dard bhi kam hoga..jaldi kijiye.. salma ek pair tum phaila ke rakho..

Dayachand—hey ram, ye kaisa din dekhna pad raha hai mujhe…? Mujhe apni hi biwi ke pair phaila kar use apne hi damad se chudwana pad raha hai..

Dayachand ne khade ho kar laxmi ke sir ke paas se ek pair apni taraf phaila liya jabki aisi hi dusri taraf se salma ne kiya, vo bhi nangi hi thi, uski bur se bhi pani tapak raha tha…laxmi ke pair vipreet disha me ab khoob phail chuke the to maine dono hatho se uski chuchiyo ko aate ki tarah goonthte huye dandanadan takatwar dhakke uski bur me lagane laga.

Poora kamra phachch..phachch..phachch.thapp..thapp ki madhur dwani se goonjne laga…laxmi bhi niche se apni gaand utha utha kar mera sath dene lagi….aadha ghanta tak aise hi jam kar chodne ke baad maine usko ghodi bana diya…itne me hi laxmi do bar jhad gayi thi.

Raj—salma, lund jyada geela ho gaya hai..thoda chus kar sukha kar do…

Salma ne jhuk kar mera lund pakad liya aur chusne lagi..dayachand ne use rokna chaha lekin vo nahi ruki…phir maine laxmi ke piche aa kar uski mast gaand ko dono hatho se dabate huye bur me lund ghused diya aur tezi se chodne laga.. laxmi ka jism bhi kamaal ka tha..ekdam gora aur bhara hua..gaand khoob phooli huyi thi.

Raj—maa ji bahut mast gaand hai aap ki..sasur ji ne to bahut mari hogi aap ki gaand….?

Laxmi—jo bur nahi chod sakta dhang se vo apni lulli se gaand kya maarega meri…? Aaaaahhhh…. Tum hi udghatan karna beta meri gaand ka….khoob maarna gaand bhi meri…..roj nangi karna mujhe aur phir khoob meri bur aur gaand maarna daily…dono time…..aaahahhhhh….

Dayachand—beta, kam se kam apna pani to andar mat chhodna..nahi to gajab ho jayega…

Laxmi—andar hi gira do raj beta…mere paas tumhare sasur ka licence hai..chinta ki koi baat nahi hai…bana do tum mujhe apne bachche ki maa….aaaahahhhh

Maine ab prachand speed se laxmi ko chodne laga…uske phir se jhadte hi maine usko sidha lita diya aur ek bar phir se uske dono pair uske pati aur soutan ko pakad kar phailane pade…aadha ghanta aur jam kar chodne ke baad main unki bur ke andar hi pichkari chhodne laga…dayachand ka to haal behaal ho chuka tha…

Jhadne ke baad main laxmi ke upar hi pasar gaya…kuch der sustane ke baad main unke upar se uth kar unhe god me utha ke bathroom le gaya aur saaf kar ke vapis bistar me lita diya..main apne kapde pahanne hi ja raha tha ki laxmi ne mera hath pakad liya.

Laxmi—raj beta, gaand nahi maroge apni sasu maa ki…? Meri kuwari gaand ko meri taraf se apne janam din ka tohfa samajh kar le lo, beta..

Dayachand (shocked)—laxmi…

Raj—kya aap sach me chahti hain maa ji..?

Laxmi—haan raj beta, main sach me tumhe apni kori gaand dena chahti hu…mera bhi bahut mann hai ki tum aaj meri gaand bhi maar kar phad do..

Raj—theek hai maa ji..sasur ji aap jab tak maa ji ki gaand me tel laga kar mere lund ke liye taiyar kar dijiye nahi to sukah sukha ghusedne me unhe jyada taklif hogi.

Laxmi—rajj beta..tab tak tum iss kutiya ko batao ki asli lund kya hota hai aur bur chodi kaise jati hai…? Isko bhi to pata chale ki lulli aur lund me kya fark hota hai..?

Raj—theek hai maa ji..aao salma..tumhari bur chod ke dekhta hu..

Phir maine laxmi ko ghodi bana kar sasur ji ko unki gaand me tel lagane ko kah kar main salma ke upar aa gaya aur usko patak kar humach humach kar chodne laga...ye dekh kar dayachand ki gaand hi phat gayi lekin salma to chudasi ho chuki thi to usne khud hi apne pair phaila diye..sasur ji bechare apna sir pakad ke sasu maa ki gaand ko tel se mere liye taiyar karne lage.

Salma ke jhadte hi maine lund laxmi ki gaand me ghused diya aur jor jor se unki gaand maarne laga…vo bar bar behosh ho ja rahi thi aur dayachand har bar unko pani daal kar hosh me lata raha…ek ghante tak tabiyat se gaand maarne ke baad main laxmi ki gaand me hi jhad gaya..vo bhi past ho chuki thi.

Laxmi ke upar se jaise hi utra to salma turant kutiya ban gayi aur mujhe apni gaand par chadhne ka ishara kiya to main bhi uski baat maan kar ek bar uski bhi gaand thonk li…salma ki gaand maarne ke baad ab mera dimag apni sahi jagah par aa gaya tha.

Maine uth kar apne kapde pahan liye..sath me laxmi ko pain killer khila kar kapde pahnne me help ki…dayachand ab bhi hairan pareshan apna sir pakad kar baitha tha.

Laxmi (gusse me)—suno ji, aaj se mujhe tumse aur iss salma se koi aitaraz nahi hai…dono chaho to shadi kar lo ya aise hi raho.. main kuch nahi kahungi…lekin ek baat ka dhyan rakhna, ki aaj ke baad tum sirf naam ke hi mere pati ho, mujhe kabhi chhune ki koshish bhi mat karna…mera jism ab se sirf raj ke bhogne ke liye hai…agar kabhi galti se bhi mujhe hath lagane ki koshish ki to main ye bhul jaungi ki tumhare aur mere beech kabhi koi rishta tha....yaad rakhna…isliye agar apni betiyo aur sab ki nazar me girna nahi chahte to mujhe kabhi hath mat lagana aur na hi mere karib aane ki kabhi sochna.

Uske baad main dusre room me aa kar chodu gang se baat karne laga…tab tak salma mere paas aa gayi aur mujhse lipat gayi chumte huye.

Salma—thanks raj…tumne aaj dayachand ko hamesha ke liye mera bana diya…ab hame chhup chhup kar nahi milna padega..

Raj—so to hai..lekin mera kya hoga…?

Salma (mushkura kar)—tum jab chaho, jaha chaho mujhe chod liya karna..aaj se main dayachand ki biwi aur tumhari rakhail ban ke rahungi….isliye tum ko mujhe jee bhar ke chodne ka haq hai..

Raj—achcha ab chalo..aur haan, tum aur dayachand dono burka pahan lo…warna sab ko pata chal jayega ki tum dono jinda ho aur isse jaan ka khatra bhi ho sakta hai..

Salma—theek hai..

Phir main unko le kar ghar ke liye rawana ho gaya…laxmi aage mere paas baithi thi jabki dayachand aur salma piche ki seat par burka pahne baithe the….chodne ke baad ab mujhe kuch theek lag raha tha to main phir se black star ke baare me sochne laga.

Ghar pahuchte hi jab sabne mere sath burka pahni do ladies ko dekha to sab chounk gayi…maine dhire se unhe sab bata diya..sadhana apne papa ko dekh kar bahut khush huyi aur unke gale lag gayi..yahi chinky aur twinkle ne bhi kiya.

Phir main sheetal didi, sadhana aur rashmi ko le kar city beauty parlour le kar chala gaya kyon ki aaj meri sadhana se engagement jo thi…make up ke baad to main teeno ko dekhta hi rah gaya…teeno behad khubsurat lag rahi thi..jinme se sadhana aur sheetal didi ko to pahchan pana hi mushkil tha…dono ki manmohini surat dekh kar mujhe bahut pyar aane laga unn par…nazar thi ki hatne ka naam hi nahi le rahi thi.

Sashana—raj, aaj engagement ke baad tum sadhana (present sheetal) ko le kar mandir chale jana aur vahi shadi kar lena.. ghar me main sambhal lungi..

Raj—theek hai..lekin aap ko aur rashmi didi ko bhi chalna padega..

Rashmi—agar hum chale gaye to mehmano ko koun dekhega..isliye sheetal aur mujhe ghar me rahna padega..

Raj—theek hai..

Uske baad main sab ko le kar ghar aa gaya….party ki taiyari chal rahi thi..shaam ho chuki thi…,main apne room me aa kar aaraam karne ke liye let gaya aur kuch sochne laga..tabhi jaise achanak hi kuch dimag me aaya to main fauran uth kar ghar ke bahar nikal kar badi me baith kar chala gaya.

Meri gadi sidha haweli me hi ja kar ruki…andar jane par pata chala ki thakurain market gayi huyi hai…mujhe dekhte hi arti khushi se chahakte huye mujhse lipat gayi.

Arti—hum sabhi taiyar hi ho rahe the..tumhare birthday me aane ke liye…janam din mubarak ho rajj.

Raj (hoth chum kar)—thanks my sweat heart…

Main arti ke sath uske room me aa kar baith gaya…thodi der me thakurain bhi aa gayi..mujhe dekh kar uske chehre par bhi khushi chha gayi…aaj thakurain bhi bijli gira rahi thi…halanki sundar to vah pahle se hi thi, lekin aaj qayamat dhane par utaru thi….kuch hi der me shanti bhi vahi mere paas aa kar baith gayi.

Raj—kya baat hai, chetna, mandakini, aur unki betiya neelam aur vandana nahi dikh rahi hain…?

Thakurain—chetna aur mandakini bhabhi america gayi hain nilesh ko dekhne..jabki neelam aur vandana beauty parlour gayi hain…make up karwane..tumhari party me aane ke liye…

Raj—ooohhhh..

Shanti—rajj, main tumhare liye coffee le kar aati hu…

Main thakurain aur arti ke sath baate karne laga…thodi der me shanti mere liye coffee bana kar le aayi to maine coffee le liya aur phir….


“Chaaattttaaakkkkkk…”

Raj (gusse me)--Kyo kiya aisa tune mere sath....? chatttaaaakkkk..sidhi tarah se bata warna jaan se maar dungaaa...


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LUXMI NE DAYACHAND SE BADLA TOH LIYA HI LIYA .SATH HI SATH APNE LIYE AAGE KA RASTA BHI SAAF KAR LIYA KI AB SE WOH CHUDEGI TOH RAJ SE HI AUR BACHCHE BHI PAIDA KAREGI AUR NAAM HOGA DAYACHAND KA.
PAR BACHCHE JAB PAIDA HONGE TOH SABKO PATA TOH CHAL HI JAYEGA KI BACHCHE DYACHAND KE NAHI RAJ KE HAIN.
SADHNA NE SHEETAL KI SHADI KI PURI TAIYARI KAR LI HAI .
AB THAKURAIN KE GHAR ME KOUN HAI JO RAJ KO DHOKHA DE RAHI HAI .
SHAYAD SHANTI HAI JISKO RAJ NE THAPPAD MARA HAI .
KHAIR AAGE DEKHATE HAIN KYA HOTA HAI
 

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Bhai apki story wakayi lajwab hai, main suru se ab tak chupchap isko read karta gaya kahani bahut majedaar dhang se se aage badh rahi hai, apse bas ek hi reqvest hai ki sheetal ya sadhna ko marne mat dena ye dono hi raaj ki asli takat hai, Baki writer ke hath me hai aap jaisa bhi likhenge hame achchha hi lagega,
Jitni feeling se aap likhte hain utni hi feeling se ham reader padhte bhi jab writer aur reader ki imotion ek ho jati hai tab ek alag hi duniya banne lagti hai aur hame asha hai ki aap hamari feeling ko samjhenge
So keep writeing with our blleshing
 

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