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Shukriya Bhai ji jo aapne itna maan diya hai
Mene aapki lagbhag saari rachnaye padhi hai. Aapki jo kalpnashakti hai vo kahi nahi mili. Aaap vakai me shabdo ke jadugar ho.
Bahut samay ke baad maa bharti ko ek kavyakar mila hai. Aap ki rachnaye mene sabse pehle dusri sight per padhi thi. Jab aapne sajan,chamtkar,sand likhni suru ki thi tab se kai versho se aapki kritiyan padhta chla aa raha hun. Aapke har shabd motiyo ki mala ban kar shobhayaman hote hai har privesh me har drishy me. Aap mane na mane per aap har shabd se nayay karte ho. Bhai ji hum to aapki kala ke kadardan hai. Koi galti ho to mafi chaunga bhai ji. Mujhe ish plateform per aapki rachnao ki mahek kheech lai jo har woqt man ko parphulit rakhti hai.
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Mayne ye nahi rakhta ki aap likh kya rahe ho, balki mayne ye rakhta hai ki aapki shabdo par pakad kaisi hai, vo shabd kitne asar karak hain..agar ye khubi aa jaye to phir aap koi bhi, kisi bhi prakar ka sahitya likh sakte hain...khubi kisi kahani ya sahitya me nahi hoti hai balki usme likhe gaye shabdo ke andar hoti hai jo padhne wale ke mastisk ko sammohit kar leti hai.

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Tuldidas, kalidas, devki nandan khatri, premchand aise kayi vidwan ho chuke hain jinki rachnaye padhne ke baad unn rachnao me likhit shabd sidhe dil aur dimag par gahra asar dalte hain..to khubi unke sahitya me likhe gaye shabdo me thi.

main to abhi sirf seekhne ka prayas kar raha hu...vaise saajan naam ka novel bhi likh raha hu..uski kahani iss site me chal rahi kahani se alag hai, usme incest, sex scenes nahi hain..ho sakta hai ki sambhavtah agle saal tak vo prakashit bhi ho jaye agar lekhan karya paripurn ho gaya to.
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SAAND Vs SAAND

Udhar saand ne khud ko azad paya to apne aage ke pairo se jamin ki mitti khod khod kar udane laga…main ek tak sheetal didi ko hi dekh raha tha aur vo mujhe..tabhi..

Sheetal (jor se chillate huye)—raaajjjjjj…

Sheetal didi ke aise jor se chillane se mera dhyan unki taraf se bhang hua…lekin jab tak main kuch samajh pata tab tak vo saand meri taraf daud laga chuka tha.

Ab aage……

Saand ko aise achanak apni taarf tezi se bahgta dekh mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aaya, vo bilkul mere paas me daudte huye pahuch chuka tha..jab kuch samajh me nahi aaya to usse bachne ke liye main jaldi se ek taraf koond gaya..

Sirf ek pal ki der ho jati to uski seengo me phans kar main sidha hawa me gole ke paar hota, bina bhaalo se bindhe huye.. iss saand ka kad galiyo me ghumne wale sadharan saando se bahut adhik tha.

Vah kuch aage badha aur phir palat gaya…uski bhaav bhangima se jahir tha ki vo turant mujh par hamla karne ke liye dubara daud lagane wala hai.

Bachte rahne ke siwa kuch nahi kiya ja sakta tha…saand ka kad itna bada tha ki usko kabu karna behad mushkil kaam tha.. vo dekhne me hi bahut khatarnak lag raha tha..uski dono seeng ekdam nuklili aur upar ko khadi thi..agar galti se bhi uski seeng pet me lag gayi to pakka pet phad kar aar paar ho jayegi.

Usne apne agle pairo se vaha ki jamin ko kureda aur phir meri taraf daud pada…usko tezi se aate dekh main jaldi se uth kar khada ho gaya.

Raj (chillate huye)—abe..madarchod..ruk ja…kya kar raha hai…? Bhosdi ke, maine teri koun si maa chodi hai jo tu hath pair dho kar mere piche pada hua hai..?

Lekin uss madarchod ne meri baat ko ansuna karte huye mujhe maarne ke liye karib aa gaya..mujhe ek bar phir se dusri taraf koond kar kisi tarah khud ko bachana pada..

Raj (jor se)—madarchod, mujhe kyo maar raha hai…? Dekh, hum dono to bhai bhai hain na…tu bhi saand aur main bhi saand…tu bada bhai, main tera chota bhai….bhosdi ke..ab bhi samajh me nahi aaya tere, jo meri taarf lund hilate dauda chala aa raha hai…? Madarchod…inn jungaliyo ki gaand me apni seeng ghused de….ye madarchod to sun hi nahi raha hai. Kuch na kuch koshish to karni padegi nahi to ye mera kalyan kar dega..

Magar use koi farak nahi pada..iss baar uske paas aate hi maine uski seengo se bachte huye uska kubad pakadne ki koshish ki lekin nakaam raha..kewal mere hath uski pith se ragad kha kar rah gaye.

Vo bhosdi ka saand phir palta…iss baar uski seeng meri pakad me aa gayi..lekin tabhi usne ne apni seeng ko jor se jhatka diya..aur main saand ke upar se hote huye gole ki rekha ke paas ja kar gira..agar main thodi aur tezi se udte huye aaya hota to sidha unn aadiwasiyo ke bhaale ki nok ke upar girta aur meri aisi taisi ho gayi hoti.

Phir bhi tezi se girne se sharir me bahut tez dard hua ..aisa laga jaise ko pith me reedh ki hadi hi toot gayi ho…mere girte hi sabhi aadiwasi jor jor se tali bajate huye chillane lage…lekin uss saand ko mujhe patakne ke baad bhi santosh nahi hua, vo dubara palat kar daudte huye aa gaya…madarchod mujhe sambhalne ka mouka hi nahi de raha tha..turant hi palat padta tha agle hamle ke liye.

Maine jaldi se khade ho kar phir se uski seeng pakadne ki koshish ki to usne jor se mujhe apni nukili seengo me phansa kar door uchhal diya..iss baar main bhaale ki nok ke itne karib ja kar gira ki do teen nok meri pith me halki si chubh gayi jaha se khoon bahne laga aur unki nok chubhne se sath me dard bhi ho raha tha ..

Raj (mann me)—ye madarchod to hath pair dho kar mere piche hi pad gaya hai…? Gole se bahar nikal nahi sakta kyon ki madarchod aadiwasi bhaala ki muh idhar hi kiye huye hain…kyo na, main khud hi kinare par unn bhaale ki nok se tik kar khada ho jaau, jyada se jyada madarchod meri pith me bhaala hi chhedenge na…? Iss tarah se ek samasya se dusri samasya ka nivaran ho sakta hai shayad..

Mera irada ye tha ki jaise hi saand mujh par hamla karne ke liye daud lagata hua tezi ayega vaise hi uske paas pahuchte hi main jaldi se samne se hat jaunga aur vo saand madarchod inke bhaalo ki nok se bindh jayega.

Ye soch kar main unn aadiwasiyo ke bhaalo ki nok se apni pith chipka kar ek jagah khada ho gaya…vo saale meri pith me nok ghusane lage…maine daant kaste huye apni mutthiya bheench li.

Saand meri taraf daud laga chuka tha…apne shikar ko ek jagah par sthir dekh kar vah double speed se bhag raha tha… jaisa ki mera irada tha ki saand ko bhaalo se bindhwane ka, uske paas pahuchte hi jaise vo mujh par seeng maarne wala tha, ussi pal me samne se hat gaya.

Magar vo saand bhi madarchod savdhan tha..aen mouke par vo bhosdi ka ruk gaya, lekin rukte rukte bhi uske chehre aur gardan ke kuch hisso par bhaale lag gaye..iss baat se uska gussa aur bhadak gaya

Main abhi uske bagal me hi tha…usne apni seeng se uchhal kar mujhe gole ke beech me phenk diya…uske baad usne phir se meri taraf daud laga di…iss bar girne se mera left hath mud gaya…mere hatho me bhayanak moch aa gayi thi…dard ki ek tez lahar mere sharir me daud gayi.

Sheetal (chillate huye)—raajjjj..

Uthna bahut mushkil tha…Iss baar bhi uss saand ne mujhe sambhalne ka koi mouka diye bina hi palat kar hamla kar diya ….shhhetal didi ke chillane se mera dhyan uss saand ki taraf gaya…..main abhi dhang se khada bhi nahi ho paya tha ki tab tak vo madarchod apna aand hilate huye pahuch gaya..

Usne jaise hi mujhe maarne ke liye gardan jhukayi vaise hi maine uski dono seeng pakad kar niche dabane laga…lekin usne ulta mujhe dhakelte huye le aaya…jaha vo aadiwasi pahle se hi apna bhaala gole ki taraf kiye huye the…piche khisakte huye main sidha unke bhaalo ki nok se tik gaya.

Main bahut buri halat me phans gaya tha…aage se vo madarchod mujhe piche dhakel raha tha jabki piche se aadiwasi meri pith me bhaala chhed chhed kar aage ko dhakka de rahe the..main unke bhaalo aur saand ke beech phans kar rah gaya tha…jitni taqat se saand mujhe piche dhakel raha tha, utni hi tezi se 25-30 aadiwasi ek sath meri pith me bhaala laga kar aage ko daba rahe the….meri poori pith khoon se lathpath ho chuki thi.

Unke bhaale ki nok gadne ke karan mujhe asahneey dard ho raha tha lekin phir bhi himmat kar ke main saand ko gardan upar nahi uthane de raha tha..uski dono seeng pakad kar jitna ho sakta tha niche hi dabaye huye tha…lekin pith me lagatar bhaalo ke nok ki chubhan se ho rahe dard ke karan meri mere hatho ki pakad saand ki seeng par se kamjor padti ja rahi thi…idhar sabhi log saans thaame iss saand fight ko ankhe phad phad kar dekhe ja rahe the.

Aur phir jaise hi meri pakad thodi dheeli huyi vaise hi aadiwasiyo ne mujhe bhaalo se aage ko dhakel diya jisse main aage ko jhuk gaya…itne me uss saand ne jor se apni gardan ko upar uthaya aur mujhe apni seeng me uljha kar piche tezi se uchhal diya…iss baar main bahut tezi se uss budhiya ke paas ja kar niche gira.

Raj (dard)—aaaaahhh…madarchoddd…..ne..sach much me maar diyaaa…aaaaa

Niche girte hi mera sir jor se jamin se takra gaya jisse dard ki vajah se meri karaah nikal gayi..din me taare nazar aane lage…dimag ekdam se sunn sa ho gaya…main apna sir dono hatho se pakad kar let gaya..sab kuch ghumta hua sa dikhayi de raha tha..dhire dhire sir ka dard badhne laga aur meri ankhe band hone lagi.

Mere gir kar ankhe band karte hi sabhi aadiwasi khushi se jhum uthe…vo sabhi ek sur me chillane lage..unka shor kaan ke parde phad dene wala tha…dhire dhire mujhe unka ye shor bhi sunayi dena band ho gaya…agar mere kaano me kuch sunayi de rahi thi to bas vahi kisi ke gaane ki madhur awaz..


“Chal Chal Chal Chal.


Chal Mere Yaar...Chal Mere Yaar

Aa Ja Le Chalu Main Tujhe Nadiya Ke Paar

Nadiya Ke Paar Basa Ek Sansar...Ek Sansar


Vahi Pe Karenge Dil Khol Kar Pyar.”

Main chetna shunya avastha me lagbhag pahuch chuka tha…mere kano me uss geet ki madhur dwani ke alawa kuch bhi sunayi nahi de raha tha..ek tarah se bahri duniya se mera sampark poori tarah se toot chuka tha.. agle hi kshan uss mishri jaisi meethi geet ki awaz ke sath sath kuch drishya ubharne lage…charo taraf ghana kohra chhaya hua tha..uss ghane kohre ke bhitar se hi ye geet ki madhur surmayi awaz chhan chhan kar aa rahi thi kintu kisi ka chehra nazar nahi aa raha tha.

Bahar kya ho raha hai..? mujhe to kuch hosh hi nahi tha…par tabhi vo geet gaane wali ki awaz achanak hi band ho gayi aur mere kaano me sheetal didi ke chillane ki awaz goonj uthi…sheetal didi ki awaz kano me padte hi meri ankhe khul gayi.

“Rajjjjjjjj..”

Maine ankhe khol kar dekha to mujhe apne aas paas sab kuch dheemi raftaar me dikhayi de raha tha, bilkul slow motion me…mere charo taraf aadiwasiyo ka jamawada laga hua tha..vo sabhi ajib si awaz me chilla rahe the..phir maine dusri taraf nazre ghuma kar dekha to vaha ek bada sa machaan bana hua tha jisme ek admi sir me pattiyo ka mukut pahne baitha hua tha..tabhi mere kaano me ek baar phir se awaz goonj padi chillane ki…

“Raaaaaajjjjjjj…”

Maine awaz ki disha me lete lete hi nazar ghumayi to vaha ek lamba chouda admi,ek ladki ke baal pakad kar ghasit raha tha aur vo jor jor se mera naam chillaye ja rahi thi…achanak hi mujhe uss ladki ka chehra nazar aaya jise dekhte hi mera dimag ghum gaya…gusse se ankhe lal ho gayi..

Raj (chillate huye)—maadarchoddddddd…..chhod meri didi ko…teri maa ko chodu…Ab Koi Gaandu Gaand Nahi Hilayega.

Vo lamba chouda admi sheetal didi ko gole ke beecho beech patak kar gole se bahar nikal gaya…sabhi aadiwasi ek baar phir se taaliya bajate huye shor machane lage..sheetal didi ko bachane ke liye main uthne ki koshish karne laga..udhar..

“Baan…baan” saand ne jor se awaz nikalte huye hunkar bhari.

Saand ki iss tez hunkar bhari awaz ke sath mera dhyan uski taraf gaya…..aur main apni soch se bahar nikal kar vastavikta me lout aaya…. lekin tab tak uss madarchod ne phir se palat kar daud laga chuka tha..lekin iss bar uska nishana sheetal didi thi.

Saand ko sheetal didi ki taraf daudte dekh kar main thoda ghabra gaya aur jaldi se uthne ko hua to dard ki vajah se vahi gir gaya…maine dubara jamin par hath tek kar kisi tarah khada hone laga…saand jab tak didi ke kafi nazdik aa gaya tha aur unke paas pahuchte hi jaise usne didi ko maarne ke liye apni seeng niche jhukayi vaise hi maine vaha pahuch kar uski dono seeng pakad li.

Raj (gusse me )—madarchoddd….maine kaha na ki Koi gaandu gaand nahi hilayega…phir bhi tune hila di gaand apni…tu meri sheetal didi ko maarega..madarchodd….ab tujhe batata hu ki asli saand kya hota hai…?

Maine jor se uski dono seend pakad kar use piche ko dhakelne laga…dono saand ki ankho me iss samay gussa tha…uske shikar ke beech me mere achanak aa jane se vyavdhan aa gaya tha jisse vo matwala saand bahut kroadhit tha…to vahi meri zindahi meri sheetal didi ko maarne ki koshish karne ke karan ye chudakkad saand ki ankhe bhi gusse se lal thi.

Hum dono hi ek dusre ko pachhadne ki koshish me lage huye the….usko dhakelte huye main 15-20 kadam piche tak le gaya…phir usne bhi mujhe dhakelna shuru kar diya aur khiskate huye kinare tak le aaya…jaha meri pith me phir se aadiwasiyo ke bhaalo ki chubhan mahsoos hone lagi..kintu dimag me gussa bhara hone ke karan uss chubhan ka dard jyada mahsoos nahi ho raha tha..dimag me bas ek hi khyal tha ki isne meri sheetal didi ko maarne ki koshish ki.

Unn bhaalo ke nok ki chubhan se meri pith to pahle se hi lahu luhan thi, ab usme aur izafa hone laga tha…maine iss sab ki parwah na karte huye phir se apni taqat ko ekattha kiya aur saand ko piche dhakelte huye dusre end tak le gaya.. ab to logo ki saanse hi jaise tham gayi thi…unke chehre par chhayi khushi aur uss khushi ke unmaad me ho rahe shor par ankush lag chuka tha…sabhi apni apni shwaansh roke iss saand malla yuddh ko dekh rahe the.

Kabhi main saand ko dhakelte huye dusre end tak le jata to kabhi vah mujh par bhari padta….yahi kram lagbhag ghante bhar chalta raha..dono me se koi bhi apni haar swikar karne ko taiyar nahi tha.

Raj (gusse me)—bhosdi ke…tune to ek hi gaay ka doodh pi kar, aur baki gaayo ki bur chat ke aur chod ke saand bana hai lekin ye saand na jane ab tak kitni hi kuwari aur bachche wali gaayo ka doodh pi chuka hai, ki use khud nahi pata..tujhse dus guna jyada chudakkad hu main….chahe to lund nikal kar compare kar le…to soch le madarchod ki jyada taqat kis saand me hogi…?

Idhar main saand se ladne me laga hua tha udhar jab mukhiya ne dekha ki unke saand ka iss maha chudakkad saand ko maar pana bahut mushkil lag raha hai, kyon ki itne mast saand ke samne koi do chaar minute bhi nahi tik sakta tha, jis saand ko pkad kar rasse se thaamne ke liye 20-30 hatte katte aadiwasi lagte the, vahi saand ko ek ladka dedh ghante se akele naako chana chabaye huye tha..halanki vo saand apni gardan ko jhatak kar upar karne ki bahut koshish kar raha tha kintu vo apni gardan ko upar ki taraf tas se mas nahi kar pa raha tha ..main uski dono seeng majbuti se pakde niche dabaye huye tha…ye sab dekh kar vaha moujud sabhi aadiwasi to hairan the hi sath me mukhiya bhi chinta me grast dikhayi de raha tha….usne pahle wale ussi lambe choude pahalwan jaise dikhne wale aadiwasi ko ishare se paas bula kar usse apni bhasa me kuch kaha, jise sun kar vo turant haste huye vaha se chala gaya.

Dono saand ek dusre ko pachhadne ke liye edi choti ka jor laga rahe the…akhir maine uski dono seeng ko poora jor laga kar jamin ki taraf gadi ke stearing ki tarah ek disha me bend karne laga…jisse uski seeng niche aur muh upar ki taraf hone laga.

Aur phir ek taqatwar jhatka dete huye maine uski gardan ghuma di…gardan ghumte hi uska santulan bigad gaya aur vo dhadam se pachhad khate huye niche palat gaya….niche girte hi maine uski seengo ke sahare gardan ko jamain se dabaye rakha…vo uthne ke liye buri tarah se chhat patane laga lekin gardan jamin se chipki hone ki vajah se uski sari koshishe bekar ja rahi thi.

Uss bhari bharkam saand ke patkani khate hi sabhi aadiwasi stabdh rah gaye….vo budhiya aurat hairani aur bade gaur se mujhe aur mere chehre ko dekhne lagi….aur phir bheed me se nikal kar jor jor se ‘burchoda….burchoda’…chillate huye uss machaan ki taraf bhagi jaha mukhiya baitha hua tha..

‘’burchoda…burchoda’’ abhi aadiwasi bhi ek sur me chillate huye dono hath aage kar ke jamin me dandwat let gaye.. iss samay unn sab ki ankho me ek alag hi bhaav tha…samman aur ashcharya ka mila jula bhaav.

Mera dhyan uss budhiya ke chillane ki taraf nahi tha balki saand par tha…Main saand ko uthne ka koi mouka de hi nahi raha tha..vo bas niche jamin me pada chhat pata raha tha…tabhi mere kaano me ek baar phir se sheetal didi ke cheekhne ki awaz sunayi padi jisse mera dhyan saand par se hat kar udhar chala gaya.

Sheetal (chillate huye)—raaaajjjjjjj……aaaaaaa….kamine chhod mujhe….ek baar meri rassi khol de..phir dekh main tera kya haal karti hu…? Aaaaaaaaaaaaaa……raaaajjjjjjjj

Jaise hi maine didi ki taraf dekha to dekhte hi main turant saand ko chhod kar tezi se daud pada…kyon ki vahi lamba chouda rakshas jaisi deel doul wala admi didi ko baal pakad kar ghasitte huye mukhiya ke paas le ja raha tha aur mukhiya madarchod vaha baithe baithe apna lund sahla raha tha...ye dekhte hi mere andar ka jwalamukhi phat pada.

Raj (gusse me chillate huye)—vahi ruk ja madarchod…agar jara bhi tune ya kisi ne bhi gaand hilaya to samajh le ki vo aaj apni gaand se gaya.

Saand ko chhod kar main jaise hi didi ko bachane ke liye bhaga..vaise hi khud ko azad pa kar vo saand phir se khada ho gaya aur meri taraf hunkar bharte huye daud laga diya…vo piche se mujhe maarne hi wala tha ki tabhi mujhe uski parchhayi dikh gayi aur main turant thoda ho kar palat gaya…aur uske maarne se pahle hi uski ek seeng meri pakad me aa gayi…aur phir dusre hath ki mutthi baandh kar uski gardan ke nichle hisse me ek jor dar ghoonsa kas ke maar diya.

Raj (gusse me)—dhishoommmm….madarchodd….ek bar me samajh nahi aata kya tere…?

Ghoonsa itni jor ka pada ki vo turant hi dhadam se niche gir kar charo khaane chitt ho gaya…uske do pair jamin par to do pair upar hawa me hi uthe rah gaye( ek pair aage ka aur dusra piche ka)…uski ankhe bahar ko nikal aayi aur muh se jhaag nikalne laga…niche pade huye vo bas hichkiya le raha tha.

( Koi bhi sajeev prani ho, chahe vo manushya ho ya phir koi bhi taqatwar se taqatwar janwar…uski body me gale ke niche ka hissa bahut weak point hota hai kyon ki vaha par saans nali hoti hai jiske sahare saans le kar vo jinda rahta hai… agar uski iss jagah par koi tagda prahar ho jaye to bas chhat pata kar hi rah jata hai…saans nali se saans lena mushkil hone lagta hai..kabhi kabhi to uski jaan bhi ja sakti hai…It’s fact.)

Mera mukka saand ki theek saans nali par hi ja kar tezi se laga tha jisse vo ek pal me dharashayi ho kar gir gaya aur apni zindagi ki akhiri saanse ginne laga.

Saand ko chhod kar main turant didi ki taraf phir se daud pada…iss bar kisi ne mera rasta rokne ki koshish nahi ki balki mere samne bas jamin par let kar ‘burchoda…burchoda’ ki mala japte rahe.

Main daudte huye turant uss lambe choude admi ke paas pahuch gaya ..jaise hi uske paas pahucha to usne meri gardan pakadne ke liye hath aage kiya vaise hi maine usko dhakka de kar door gira diya…achanak huye iss hamle se vo boukhla gaya….usne uth kar mujhe maarne ki koshish kiya to maine uska hath pakad kar tezi se jhatka de kar phir use niche gira diya.

“Aaaaaaaaa..a…aaaaaaaa.”

Raj (gusse me)—madarchoddd….tune hath kaise lagaya meri didi ko…? Tadddaaakkkk…..tadaaakkkk….isi hath se pakda tune meri didi ko..teri maa ko chodu..chataaakkkkkk

“Aaaaaaaaaaaaa…….aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa” vo jor jor se cheekhne laga.

Raj (gusse me)—madarchodd..chattaaakkkk….
” 10 Kadam Raand Se, 2 Kadam Bawli Gaand Se Aur 100 Kadam Chudakkad Saand Se Hamesha Door Hi Rahna Chahiye.”

Maine uske pet me pair rakh kar uska hath pakad ke jor se khichne laga…vo dard me chhat patate huye chillata raha lekin mujh par to ab khoon sawar ho chuka tha..agle hi pal uska hath uske jism se alag ho gaya…

“Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa……aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa”

Hath ukhadte hi uske sharir se khoon ka favvara nikal kar mere upar aane laga…ye dekh kar vaha sabhi aadiwasi dahshat me aa gaye aur jaise hi maine unki taraf ghum kar dekha to vah kaampte huye turant dubara jamin me let gaye.

Vo dard se cheekhte huye kuch der tadapne ke baad behosh ho gaya..lekin mera gussa itne me thanda nahi hua to maine uski gardan pakad kar ek jhatke me tod di..uske gale se ek dardnak cheekh nikli aur phir vo hamesha ke liye shant ho gaya.

Uss admi ke marte hi meri nazar mukhiya par gayi, jise ki uss budhiya ne abhi abhi kaan me kuch bataya tha aur jise sunne ke baad vo meri taraf dekhte huye darr se thar thar kaamp raha tha…mukhiya par nazar padte hi main gusse me uski taraf badhne laga, mujhe apni taraf gusse me aata dekh kar usne turant hi apne hath jod liye aur ajib si bhasa me kuch budbudane laga….

Raj (gusse me)—madarchodd…tu kya bol raha tha ki kya karega meri didi ke sath…? Teri maa ko chodu..

Mukhiya (hath jod kar)—burchoda…burchoda..

Raj (bhadak kar)—tadaaakkkkkkk……madarchodddd…gaali deta hai….ruk, teri maa ko chodu…

Mukhiya ki kanpati me thappad itni jor ka pada ki vo machaan se ludhak kar sidhe niche jamin me ja gira…uske niche girte hi main gusse me uski taraf jane laga.

“Vo gaali nahi de raha tha..hamare yaha sabse taqatwar saand ko burchoda kahte hain..aur vahi sab gaayo par chadhta hai.” Mujhe gusse me mukhiya ki taraf jate dekh kar uss budhiya ne darte darte kaha.

Raj (chilla kar)—chuppp...agar tune apni jyada gaand hilayi to yahi teri gaand maar maar ke maha pondari bana dunga..

Main phir se mukhiya ki taraf badhne laga...mujhe apni taraf aate dekh kar vo bahut ghabra gaya...Usne apni madad ke liye apni bhasa me chillane laga lekin jab uski nazar apne aadiwasi bhaiyo par gayi jo ki jamin par lete huye the to uski gaand phat gayi….maine daud kar ek admi ka bhaala utha liya

Raj (gusse me)—madarchodd…meri didi ke baal pakad kar ghasitwa raha tha na..? tadaaakkkk…..meri didi ko dekh dekh kar lund hila raha tha, bhosdi ke…tadaaakkk…maine kaha tha na ki gaand mat hilana, nahi to gaand se jayega…ab bhugat .. ,teri maa ko chodu..

Maine laat maar kar usko palta diya aur ek pair pith me rakh kar dono hath se bhaala pakad kar upar uthaya aur phir tezi se uski gaand me thoons diya….bhaala uski gaand se aar paar nikal kar uske lund ko beech se cheerte huye aadha jamin me ghus gaya..

Mukhiya ke halak se ek darnak cheekh nikal kar jungle ki unn vadiyo me kho gayi…uske marte hi main sheetal didi ke paas gaya jinki rassiya aadiwasi khol rahe the…rassi khulte hi vo ladkhadate huye khadi hone ki koshish karne lagi to maine daud kar unhe apne seene se chipka liya.

Maine unki ankho se bahte anshuo ko jeebh se chat liya aur khoon ko poh kar saaf karne ke baad phir se didi ko apni baho me kas ke samet liya…Lekin unko apne seene se lagate hi mujhe ek alag hi ehsaas hua..main chounk kar unki ankho me dekhne laga…shayad vo bhi ye samajh gayi thi ki main kya soch raha hu…?

Raj (vismit)—tum meri sheetal didi nahi ho…? Koun ho tum…?

Sheetal (bhigi palke)—mujhe aise shanka ki nazar se mat dekho raj…? Main hi tumhari sheetal didi hu..

Raj (ankho me dekhte huye)—main apni sheetal didi ko seene se lagate hi mahsoos kar leta hu..tum meri sheetal didi nahi ho sakti..

Sheetal (sisakte huye)—nahi rajj, main hi tumhari badnaseeb sheetal didi hu mere bhai…

Raj—main nahi maan sakta..

Sheetal (rote huye)—tumhe sach pata nahi hai, isliye tum aisa bol rahe ho...

Raj (hairan)—kaisa sach pata nahi hai…? Tum kis sach ki baat kar rahi ho…?

Sheetal (sisakte huye)—aisa sach jisse tum aaj tak anjaan ho…


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Wahhh maja aa gya apne desi chudakad saand ki fight dekh k kamaal kr diya isne to hahahaha
bich bich action k sath majak b mast tha fir us mukhiya ki gaand ko faadna mast h

Burchoda ...y b mast tha hahaha

To aakhir ab jak asli sheetal samne aa hi gyi vese samne kya y to raj ki baho m aa gyi

Ab dekhna majedar hoga ki aage y saand kya krta h or sheetal k sath itne saalo se kya huaa




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Gazab hi kar diya bhai.

1. toh saand vs saand ek dum awsome.

2. ab saand ke chodne ke liye pure ka pura ek aur gaav.

3.ek dum nayi kahani ke saath ek aur nayi sheetal.

4.thakrain ka jabajast action.

5.pura ka pura gajab ka update.

Bhai matalb kya kahu kahi koi kami hi nahi chodi har jagah perfection saaf dikh raha hai.


Aapke update ke liye samne toh mere jaise log sahi se tarif ke comments bhi nahi soch sakte.
 
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