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Sheetal (sisakte huye)—nahi rajj, main hi tumhari badnaseeb sheetal didi hu mere bhai…
Raj—main nahi maan sakta..
Sheetal (rote huye)—tumhe sach pata nahi hai, isliye tum aisa bol rahe ho...
Raj (hairan)—kaisa sach pata nahi hai…? Tum kis sach ki baat kar rahi ho…?
Sheetal (sisakte huye)—aisa sach jisse tum aaj tak anjaan ho…
Ab aage……..
Raj (hairan)—matlab…? aaaahh
Sheetal—matlab ye ki …..(chounk kar)…arrey ye kya…? Tumhari pith se to khoon nikal raha hai..
Sheetal baaho me chipki huyi kuch aage bolne hi ja rahi thi ki tabhi uska hath mere jakhm par lag gaya aur mere muh se dard bhari karaah nikal gayi..usne jaldi se apne hath alag kiye to apne hatho me khoon laga dekh kar vo ghabra gayi.
Sheetal (sisakte huye)—raj, abhi jaldi yaha se nikal chalo..tumhari pith se bahut khoon bah raha hai…pahle doctor ke paas chalo…warna phir se vo aadiwasi hame pakad lenge..
Raj—hmmm..chalo..
Mujhe pith me dard ho raha tha..main sheetal didi ka hath pakad kar vapis jane ke liye muda hi tha ki samne se vahi budhiya unn aadiwasiyo ke sath meri taraf aati huyi dikhayi padi…uske hath me kuch tha…Paas me aate hi ek aadiwasi ne mujhse kuch kaha jo ki meri samajh me nahi aaya…uss aurat ne mujhe piche palatne ka ishara kiya..uske hath me ek bade patte par lep jaisa kuch tha.
Aurat—burchoda, palat jao..
Uska ishara samajh kar hichkichate huye main palat gaya…usne meri shirt upar kar ke pith me vahi lep lagane lagi…jisse mujhe behad jalan mahsoos huyi..lekin agle hi pal jaise chamatkar ho gaya…mushkil se 5 minute me hi mera sara dard gayab ho gaya…halanki jakhm to nahi bhare the kintu ab dard bilkul bhi nahi ho raha tha..ye ehsaas hote hi main hairan rah gaya.
Aurat—ab kaisa lag raha hai burchoda…?
Raj—madarchod, ye..kya..tumne burchoda..burchoda laga rakha hai…? Aur ye kya lagaya tumne meri pith par ki itna jaldi poora dard gayab ho gaya... ?
Aurat—ye jakhm me lagane ke liye ped ki jad ka lep hai..isse dard turant khatam ho jata hai aur ghaav bhi jaldi bharta hai.. ab aap yaha ke mukhiya hain burchoda..
Raj—good..(kaan me)..tumne mujhe burchoda kaha hai na….yaha sab ladkiyo aur aurto ko samjha dena ki ab yaha kisi ko chodne aur gabhin karne ka haq sirf iss burchoda saand ko hai…agar kisi ne apni biwi ko bhi choda to uss madarchod ka lund uski hi gaand me daal dunga..sab ko samjha dena….
Aurat—theek hai main bol dungi..
Sheetal (shocked)—rajj..tumne ek baat par gaur kiya... ?
Raj—kya…?
Sheetal (hairan)—inn aadiwasiyo ki taraf dekho..
Sheetal didi ke kahne par maine unn aadiwasiyo ki taraf dekha to kuch samajh me nahi aaya lekin jab gaur kiya to achanak hi chounk gaya…baat hairani wali thi hi…kyon ki vaha sabhi ke hum shakal the..
Raj (shocked)—sala ye kya lafda hai…? Yaha to hum shakal hi hum shakal hain…
Raj—ye burchodi..ye bata ki ye sab hum shakal ka kya chakkar hai…? Itne saare hum shakal kaise hain…?
Aurat—ye sab aap ka hi pratap hai burchoda…yaha sab ke judwa hum shakal bachche hi paida hote hain..ye parampara to yaha kayi saalo se chali aa rahi hai..
Raj (shocked)—kyaaa…?
Aurat—haan
Raj (shocked)—ajib baat hai…
Sheetal (hairan)—lekin aisa kyo hota hai…?
Aurat—pata nahi..
(Duniya me bahut se aise rahasya hain jinse parda abhi tak nahi utha hai…ye judwa bachcho ka bhi aisa hi ek rahasya hai.. india me keral me mallappuram ke paas ek gaon hai kodhinhi, jo ki ek world ka behad rahasyamayi gaon hai, iss gaon me sirf judwa bachche hi paida hote hain..america, japan, china, london, russia aadi duniya ke kayi desho ke scientist aur doctor’s iss rahasya ka pata lagane me saalo se lage huye hain kintu abhi tak yaha judwa hum shakal bachche hi paida hone ki vajah pata nahi laga paye hain…iss gaon ko govt. ne twins & twins village ka naam diya hai…google par bhi iss gaon ke baare me asani se pata kiya ja sakta hai.)
Sheetal—raj ab hame yaha se chalna chahiye…
Raj—hmmm
Aurat—aap ab hamare burchoda hain…aap kaise ja sakte hain…? Aap chale jayenge to hamara kya hoga…?
Raj—main phir aunga…tab tak tum (dhire se)..yaha ki burchodi ho..
Aurat (mushkura kar)—theek hai..
Maine usse vida le kar sheetal didi ke sath vapis chal pada…sabhi aadiwasi ek bar phir se jamin me lot kar burchoda.. burchoda chillane lage….chalte samay uss aurat ne mere hath me chupke se ek lakdi ka tukda pakda diya.
Maine gaur se uske chehre ki taraf dekha..uska chehra hamesha ki taraf bhaav heen tha…maine ulat palat kar lakdi ke uss tukde to dekha to paya ki vo ek majbut lakdi ka vargakar tukda tha jiski lambayi aur choudayi lagbhag six inch thi…vah ek taraf se khurdara aur ek taraf se samtal tha.
Uske baad sabhi aadiwasi vapis chale gaye..ye dekh kar hame yakin ho gaya ki ab hum azad hain..isliye hum jungle se bahar nikalne ke liye chal pade…
Raj (mann me)—Sali ne ye lakdi ka tukda kyo diya hai mujhe…? Iska main kya karunga... ? kisi ki gaand me bhi to nahi daal sakta…
Philhal maine lakdi ke uss tukde ko jeb me rakh liya..aur sheetal didi ka hath pakad kar jungle ke bhitar chalne laga.. mere mann me abhi bhi kayi sawal umad rahe the.
Raj—haan, ab batao ki aap koun se sach ki baat kar rahi thi…? Kya matlab tha aap ka…?
Sheetal—mera matlab tha ki…tum jise sheetal samajh rahe the aaj tak..asal me sheetal nahi hai balki vo sadhana hai..aur main sheetal hu..
Raj (shocked)—ye kya bakwas hai…?
Sheetal—yahi sach hai…vahi tumhari vo sadhana hai jise tum be-intaha mohabbat karte ho….yakin nahi ho raha hai to khud usse hi puch lena ki vo sheetal hai ya sadhana…
Raj (shocked)—lekin ye kaise ho sakta hai…? Agar ye sach hota to vo mujhe jarur batati…? Aur phir sadhana bhi khud vahi thi….Tum jhuth bol rahi ho… Koun ho tum…?
Sheetal—vo sab kuch jante huye bhi majbur bhi..
Raj—kaise majbur….?
Sheetal (nam ankhe)—kyon ki sheetal aur sadhana dono tumhari sagi badi judwa bahan hain..
Raj (shocked)—whattttt…!
Uski ye baate mere liye bahut bada apratyashit jhatka se kam nahi tha…ye sun kar to jaise meri ankhe ashcharya se khuli hi rah gayi…magar abhi to kayi jhatke lagne baki the.
Sheetal—haan…jinhe janam lete lete hi papa ne sadhana ko sab ki chori se apne dost ki god me soump diya tha..iss tarah se ye raj ek raaz hi ban kar rah gaya..sadhana ko sab akash ki beti samajhte rahe lekin vo bhi sheetal ki hi tarah tumhari bahan hai….sheetal ne ek bar papa ko apne dost ke sath baat karte samay ye raaz jaan liya..phir bhi vo tumse pyar karti rahi..papa ko ye baat pata chal gayi ki tum dono ek dusre ko chahte ho, unhone ye baat apne dost ko batayi…isliye tum dono ko alag karne ke liye unhone gaon chhodne ka faisla kiya kyon ki tum dono sage bhai bahan the aur ye rishta tum dono ke beech jayaz nahi tha….gaon me rahte to unhe sab ko iss rishte ko nakarne ki vajah batani padti…jis din unhone gaon chhoda usi din thakur ne unhe sadhana ke sath kidnap karwa liya..(phir poori ghatna batate huye)…aur iss tarah sadhana pahuch gayi sheetal ki jagah aur jo ghatna sadhana ke sath hone wali thi uski shikar sheetal ho gayi…isliye sab kuch jante huye bhi sadhana ko apne pariwar ki izzat ki khatir apne pyar ka gala dabana pada jisme vo kamyab nahi huyi. Usne bahut koshish ki tujhse door hone ki, sirf ek bahan ban kar rahne ki magar vo aisa nahi kar payi..vo tumhare pyar aur rishto ke bhanwar jaal me ulajh kar rah gayi…Yahi vajah hai ki tumhe hamesha apni sheetal didi ko dekhte hi sadhana ki feelings mahsoos hoti thi kyon ki vo tumhari sadhana hi thi to uski feelings kaise nahi aati…?…Baki asli sheetal jise tum sadhana samajhte ho, uske sath kya hua..? ye tumhe pata hi hai..
Raj (shocked)—omg…kyaaa…jise main sheetal didi samajhta tha, vahi meri sadhana hai…? Main jis pyar ke liye tadapta raha, dar dar bhatakta raha, roj ghut ghut ke marta raha..vo meri vahi sadhana hai..vo meri bahan hai..itna bada sach chhupaya mujhse..?
Sheetal—hmmmm..lekin use galat mat samjho..use dar tha ki kahi sach jaanne ke baad tum use pyar karna na chhod do.. vo pagli aaj bhi tumhe bahut pyar karti hai..
Sheetal (gale se lagte huye)—rajjj
Raj (nam ankhe)—agar ye sach hai to phir aap yaha kaise pahuchi…?
Ye sab sunte hi meri ankhe chhalak aayi..sath me sheetal didi ki bhi…main vahi ek jagah ghutno par baith gaya…ankhe anayas hi bah chali thi..dil me ek dard sa umad pada tha…main ankhe band kar ke vahi baith gaya aur sheetal didi meri baat ka kuch jawab deti ki tabhi…
“Chal Chal Chal Chal.
Chal Mere Yaar...Chal Mere Yaar
Aa Ja Le Chalu Main Tujhe Nadiya Ke Paar
Nadiya Ke Paar Basa Ek Sansar...Ek Sansar
Vahi Pe Karenge Dil Khol Kar Pyar.”
Vahi dusri taraf thakurain ko jaise hi pinky ke batane par ye pata chala ki radha aaj school gayi hi nahi to vah turant hi bahar nikal kar apne ek admi ko phone laga kar baat karne lagi…ye vahi admi the jinhe thakurain ne raj ke family ki hifazat ke liye charo taraf gaon ke aas paas rah kar gaon par nazar rakhne ke liye bol rakha tha.
Thakurain—tum ek kaam karo main tumhare mobile par radha ki photo send karti hu…raj ke ghar se le kar school tak jane wale raste par jitne bhi logo ke ghar ya dukane hain, unse pata karo aur mujhe turant batao..iss kaam me apne aur admi laga do…mujhe result chahiye turant….
Thakurain ne call cut kar ke uske mobile par radha ki ek photo jo ki thakurain ne raj ke birthday ki party wale din khichi thi, usko send karne ke baad gadi me baith kar haweli ke liye nikal gayi.
Haweli pahuchte pahuchte hi uske mobile par uss admi ka return call aa gaya….to thakurain ne uska call turant pick kar liya aur baat karne me lag gayi.
Thakurain (tension)—haan, bolo..kya pata chala….?
Caller—madam, yaha gaon ke bahar main road par jaha bus rukti hai…vaha par paan ki dukan wale ne photo dekhne ke baad bataya ki ye ladki din me yahi bus stand par bus ke intazar me khadi thi..tabhi ek BMW me kuch log aaye aur iss ladki ko jabardasti usme baitha kar kahi le gaye…usne bataya ki unme se do admi vahi the jinke sath party wale din maar peet huyi thi.
Thakurain—kaha le kar gaye hain vo radha ko...iska kuch pata chala...?
Caller—gadi ka colour aur number ke aadhar par puchne par ye pata chala hai ki vo log city se bahar ki taraf gaye hain..
Thakurain (tension)—hmmm..tum kuch hathiyar band admiyo ko sath le kar vahi par ruko, main aa rahi hu…
Caller—ok madam
Thakurain ne call cut kiya…aur gusse me tamtamate huye turant haweli me ghus kar apni bandook uthayi aur phir tezi se vapis palat kar gadi me baith kar haweli se bahar nikal gayi…..kuch hi minutes me vo apne admiyo ke paas pahuch gayi.
Thakurain (gusse me)—kidhar le kar gaye hain vo log…..?
Admi (hath ke ishare se batate huye)—madam, iss taraf gaye hain..
Sunte hi thakurain ne toofan ki raftaar me gadi ko aage dauda diya…uske piche piche lagbhag 10 hathiyar band admi bhi chal rahe the…do admiyo ko usne pahle hi aage bhej diya tha, radha ko kidnap kar ke jis gadi me le gaye the, uske jane ke raste ka direction pata karne ke liye..
Aaj subah ka scene….
Radha school jane ke liye ghar se nikal kar bus stand pahuch kar bus ke aane ka intazar karne lagi…yu to radha school hamesha pinky ke sath hi aati jati thi…lekin uss din birthday ki party wali ghatna ke baad se radha ne pinky se bolna band kar diya tha…use pimky ki uss din ki harkat se kafi narazagi thi…tab se radha akele hi school jane lagi thi..halanki dono ki mulaqat bus stand par ho hi jati thi, lekin radha use ignore kar deti thi….aaj pinky kuch late ghar se nikli thi isliye school bhi late hi pahuchi thi.
Abhi radha bus ke aane ka intazar kar hi rahi thi ki tabhi ek BMW vaha se gujri aur kuch kadam aage jane ke baad vapis piche aa gayi..gadi rukte hi usme se do admi bahar nikle aur radha ko gadi me school chhodne ko bolne lage..jab usne mana kiya to jabardasti pakad kar ghasitne lage.
Ye vahi do log the jinhone uss din party me sheetal, sadhana aur richa par gande comments kiye the jiske baad chodu gang ne inki pitayi ki thi…radha ko jabaran gadi me baithane ke baad vo gadi aage badh gayi.
Ek ka building constructions ka kaam tha to dusra city ka jane mane udyog pati ka ladka tha…radha chillati rahi lekin unhone uska muh kapda baandh kar band kar diya….phir bhi jab radha ne virodh karna nahi chhoda to unhone usko jabaran cold drink me kuch mila kar pila diya jiske pine ke kuch der baad hi vah behosh ho gayi.
City ke thoda bahar jaha uska construction ka kaam chal raha tha, , uss taraf unhone gadi ko ghuma diya….abhi din me vaha kaam chal raha tha isliye vo sab ke samne radha ke sath kuch kar nahi sakte the isliye unhone gadi ko andar ekant jagah par park kar ke radha ke hath, pair aur muh kapde se baandhne ke baad gadi ko lock kar diya aur kaam khatam kar ke majduro ke ghar jane ka intazar karte huye vahi construction ka kaam dekhne lage. ..gadi ke andar parde lage huye the isliye bahar se kisi ko nazar nahi aaya ki gadi ke andar koun hai…?
Shaam hote hi sabhi labours ke jane ke baad unhone radha ko bahar nikala jo ki hosh me aa chuki thi aur ro rahi thi.. hath pair bandhe hone ke karan vo hil dul bhi nahi pa rahi thi…vo use building ke third floor par le gaye jaha ki ek room complete tha jise vo apne rukne ke liye use karta tha…kabhi kabhi labours me se hi kisi na kisi ladki ya aurat ko iss room me chodne ke liye use karta tha.
Dono radha ko vahi le gaye aur vaha padi huyi khatiya par batak diya…radha chillane ki bahut koshish kar rahi thi lekin ankho se anshu bahane ke alawa kuch nahi kar pa rahi thi.
Admi 1—bahut chhat pata rahi hai..abhi teri sari chhat patahat door karte hain..
Admi 2—haan yaar….iske bhai ki party me hamara bahut apman hua hai..aaj uss apman ka badla hum iski jawani loot kar vasool karenge…iss kachchi kali ki bur chodne me bahut maza ayega..
Admi 1—chodne me nahi balki phadne me bol yaar…hahahaha
Admi 2—sahi kaha dost…chal pahle thoda sa sharab ka maza le le phir iski jawani ka maza bhi chakhte hain..
Admi 1—vaise ye vahi ladki hai na, jiski vajah se iske bhai ne judge aur collector ke ladke ko mara tha…?
Admi 2—haan, lekin vo dono to jail me hain..warna unko bhi iski bur ka maza dilwa dete..khair, hum to hain hi iski jawani bhogne ke liye..
Admi 1—sahi hai…jee bhar ke iski jawani lootne ke baad isko kothe par baitha denge jaha Sali roj naye naye lund apni bur aur gaand me dalwaye padi rahegi..tab iske bhai ko pata chalega ki hamse dushmani ka kya anzam hota hai…?
Admi 2—bahut khoob socha hai yaar..main abhi dhanraj seth se baat kar ke iska souda pakka karta hu..
Dono iss baat par jor jor se hasne lage…uss admi ne dhanraj naam ke kisi admi ko call laga kar baat karne laga…dharaj seth, black star ka hi ek admi hai jo ki yaha ka vaishyalay ka dhandha sambhalta hai, iske sath hi sath vo ek bada businessman bhi hai…
Admi 2—lo bhai iss bulbul ki kimat 5 lakh me final ho gayi…isko lene ke liye uske admi paise le kar aate hi honge..
Admi 1—good, chal ab pahle sharab ka shurur chadha le phir shabab ka nasha chakhte hain..
Admi 2—yaar, main to iss kamsin kali ki kamsin bur se sharab piyunga…kachchi kali ki kamsin bur ka nasha hi kuch aur hota hai…
Admi 1 (hotho par jeebh pherte huye)—to phir der kis baat ki hai..chal Sali ko nangi kar dete hain..dekhe to nangi hone par ye dikhti kaisi hai…?
Admi 2—haan yaar..tune to mere mann ki baat bol di..chalo Sali ko nangi kar ke maza lete hain..tu iski bur me daal kar sharab pina aur main iski chuchiyo se…
Dono ki baate sun kar radha buri tarah se darr gayi…ankho se anshu tezi se bahne lage….kapde utarne ke liye jaise hi unhone uske hath pair aur muh ke bandhan khole, vaise hi rote huye jor jor se chillane lagi…jisse unhone turant hi uska muh daba diya.
Admi 1—chataaakkk….Sali chillayegi to berahmi se chodenge…aur shant rahegi to pyar se pelenge…isliye tere liye yahi achcha hai ki chupchap araam se chudwa le..
Radha (rote huye)—mujhe chhod do..mujhe jane do..main tumhare hath jodti hu..
Admi 2—chataakkk….tere bhai ne apni party me jo hamari be-izzati ki thi, uska badla hum teri bur chod kar lenge.. tujhe to ab hum awwal number ki randi banayenge…Sali..chupchap nangi karne de, mood kharab mat kar..
Admi 1—hihihihihi….tera bhai bahut bada chudakkad hai na…? ab tu sabse badi chudakkad bahan banegi uski..sabse chudne wali chudakkad…hahahahaha
Radha (rote huye)—nahiii…chhod do mujhe…nahiii…..aaaaaahhhh…..mere bhaiya tum dono ko jinda nahi chhodenge.. aaaahhhhh….bhaiyaaaaaaaaa…bachaoooooo……nahiiiiiii…aaaaaaahhhhhhhh……bhaiyyyyaaaaaaaaaaa
Dono jabardasti radha ke kapde utarne aur phadne ki koshish me lag gaye lekin vo lagatar chillate huye virodh kiye ja rahi thi..to ek ne uske hotho par hoth lagane chahe to rasha ne jor se uske muh par thook diya ..
Admi 2—chataakkk…chattaaakkkk..Sali thukti hai…abhi batata hu…ye aise nahi manegi, phad do iske kapde…
Ek ne uske hath pakad kar pairo ke upar baith gaya to dusre ne uski dress utarne ki koshish ki..jab kurte ki button nahi khuli to usne jor se khich kar use phad diya…halanki radha ne kurte ke andar samiz aur phir samiz ke niche bra pahan rakhi thi.
Radha (jor se)—chhod do…nahiiiiii….bachaaaaooo….raaajjjjj bhaiyaaaaaa….aaaaaaaaaaaaa….nahhhiiiiiiii
Abhi thakurain gadi ka pata lagate lagate vaha se gujar hi rahi thi ki tabhi uske kano me kisi ladki ke jor se chillane ki awaz sunayi padi..awaz sunte hi usne turant apni gadi uss building ki taraf turn kar di….building ke paas pahuchte hi use vahi colour ki BMW khadi dikh gayi.
Usne turant hi gadi se bahar nikal kar hatho me bandook liye daudte huye building ke bhitar ghus gayi..aur ground floor ke har room me ja ja kar dekhne lagi..tabhi ek bar phir se uske kano me ladki ke chillane ki awaz sunayi di jo ki upar ke floor se aayi thi.
Awaz upar ke floor se aayi sunte hi thakurain second floor par bhagi…lekin use vaha kuch nahi mila to vah third floor ki taraf chal padi…vaha baki sabhi room to khule huye the kewal ek ko chhod kar jisme darwaja band tha..vo daudte huye uss room tak pahuchi to use andar se kisi ke rone ki awaz sunayi di.
Thakurain ne turant darwaja knock kar diya…darwaja knock hone par andar dono ne samjha ki dhanraj ke admi aa gaye honge paisa le kar to ek ne darwaja thoda sa khol kar jhankne ki koshish ki par itne me thakurain ne laat maar kar poora darwaja khol diya.
Phir andar ka scene dekhte hi uski ankho me khoon utar aaya…..radha ke jism par se uski salwar aur kurta alag pade huye the aur ek admi uske hath pair dabaye huye tha..vo bas roye ja rahi thi….thakurain ko dekhte hi dono shocked ho gaye jabki radha ko ummid ki ek kiran nazar aa gayi aur uski rulayi jor se phut padi..
Radha (rote huye jor se)—thakurain jiii..mujhe bacha lijiye…
Admi 1(shocked)—thakurainnn..! aaaaaaaaaaaa
Admi 2 (shocked, mann me)—thakurain..! ye ranchandi yaha kaise aa gayi…?
Thakurain (gusse me)—ladki ko chhod….(chillate huye jor se laat maar kar)..suna nahi…chhod ladki ko…
Uss admi ko radha ke upar baithe dekh kar thakurain apne aape se bahar ho gayi..vo dono abhi shocked ho kar thakurain ko dekh hi rahe the ki itne me thakurain ne tezi se aage badh kar uss admi ke muh par ek jor ki laat maar kar use radha ke upar se gira diya…dono admi apne samne thakurain ko gusse me dekh kar kaampne lage…unka khada lund murjha kar chuha ban gaya…kyon ki thakurain apne gussail, nidar aur dabang mizaz ke liye 50-50 km door tak vikhyat thi..ekdam sholay film ke daku gabbar singh ki tarah..har jagah thakurain ke naam ki dahshat bhari huyi thi logo ke dilo me….jab vo shant hoti thi tab bhi uss samay me bhi govt. ke bade bade adhikari tak usse baat karne me ghabrate the phir jab vo gusse me ho tab, vo kya karegi, ye to vah khud bhi nahi janti thi..
Thakurain (gusse me)—saale randi ki auladd…teri himmat kaise huyi, iss ladki ko hath lagane ki….
Admi 1(ghabrate huye)—mujhe maaf kar do thakurain..hamse galti ho gayi…
Thakurain (gusse me)—galti ho gayiii…..to uss galti ki saza bhi bhugat ab…bahut khada hota hai na tera…? Aaj ke baad na to tera khada hoga aur na hi aisi galti hogi….dhaaannnyyyyy…dhaaannnyyyy
Admi 1 (dard me)—aaaaaaaaaaa…..aaaaaaaaaaaaa
Thakurain ne gusse me pahli goli uske lund par mari aur dusri goli se uske aand phod diye…vo dard se chhat patate huye vahi dher ho gaya….dusra admi apne sathi ki ye halat dekh kar vaha se bhagne me hi apni bhalayi samjhi…vo room se bahar nikal kar bhag hi raha tha ki bahar khade thakurain ke admiyo ne use pakad liya…jo ki abhi abhi pahuche the aur upar hi aa rahe the….kyon ki thakurain bahut speed me gadi chalate huye aayi thi isliye baki sab usse piche rah gaye the.
Ek ka kalyan karne ke baad thakurain ka dhyan dusre admi par gaya..jab vo vaha nahi dikha to vah tezi se room se bahar nikal kar use dekhne lagi gusse me….tabhi uski nazar apne admiyo par padi jinhone use pakad kar rakah tha aur uski hazamat karne me lage huye the.
Thakurain (gusse me)—ye dusra kutiya ka pilla kaha gaya…? Bhagta kaha hai saale hinjde…? Main thakurain hu… thakurainnn,,mujhse bhaag kar kaha jayega…?
Thakurain turant use dekhte hi sherni ki tarah dahadte huye bhag kar uske paas pahuch gayi aur ek kas ki laat uske dono pairo ke beech me jama di..vo dard se tadapte huye apna lund pakad kar vahi lot pot hone laga…thakurain ne ek admi ko turant market se radha ke liye kapde lene bhej diya. Kyon ki uske kapde kayi jagah se phat chuke the..aur phir uss admi ki khatirdari karne me lag gayi..
Admi 2 (tadapte huye)—aaaaaaaaaaaa……mujheee…..maaf..kar do…thakurainnn…aaaaaaaaa….
Thakurain (dahadte huye)—tujhe maaf kar du….? Phatttaaaakkkk…maaf kar du…? Phataaakkkkk
Thakurain ne gusse me apni oonchi heel wali sandle pahne pairo se uske muh par laato ki baarish karne lagi…uss admi ke muh aur naak se khoon bahne laga…lekin thakurain ko uss par jara bhi taras nahi aaya, vo vaise hi uski laato se pitayi karne me tab tak lagi rahi jab tak ki uska admi radha ke liye kapde le kar nahi aa gaya..uske baad uske sath bhi vahi kiya jo pahle wale ke sath kiya tha..use bhi goli maar di.
Phir kapde le kar radha ke paas chali gayi…..radha usse lipat kar rone lagi..thakurain ne use samjha kar kapde pahnaye aur phir radha ko le kar bahar aa gayi.
Abhi vo radha ko le kar ground floor par pahuchi hi thi ki tabhi ek maruti van vaha aa kar ruki..aur usme se kuch admi hatho me hathiyar liye bahar aa gaye…lekin thakurain par nazar padte hi vo thithak kar ruk gaye.
Thakurain—koun ho tum log….?
Gunda 1—thakurain, iss ladki ko hamare hawale kar do aur aap yaha se jao….
Thakurain (gusse me)—tum kis ke samne khade ho kar baat kar rahe ho, tumhe pata hai…? Main thakurain hu..itna jaan lo…itna hi kafi hai..
Gunda 1—main to janta hu ki aap thakurain ho..isliye to aapse izzat se baat kar raha hu..lekin shayad aap nahi janti ki iss ladki ka souda 5 lakh me ho chuka hai….ab ye dhanraj seth ke kothe ki amanat hai…aur ye aap achchi tarah se jaan le ki uss kothe ka asli malik black star hai….aur black star ke baare me to sari duniya janti hai ki vo kya kar sakta hai…? (apne admiyo se)..jao re..ladki ko le aao..
Uski baat sun kar jaha ek bar phir se thakurain ke tevar garam ho gaye to vahi bechari radha black star ka naam sunte hi phir se ghabra kar thakurain ke liche khud ko chhipane ki koshish karne lagi..
Thakurain (chilla kar)—jaha vo vahi khade raho….agar ek kadam bhi kisi ne aage badhaya to vah thakurain ke qahar ka shikar ho jayega..
Gunda 1—black star se dushmani lene ka anzam janti ho thakurain…? Poori duniya me black star ka raaz chalta hai..
Thakurain (gusse me)—tu ye baar baar black star ka naam le kar kise dara raha hai..? mujhe..? thakurain ko..? thakurain jaisi sherni ka shikar karne ke liye black star ne kutto ko bheja hai…? Chupchap yaha se nikal jao, warna aisi jagah goli marungi ki, na to tumhari mardo me ginti hogi aur na hi hinjdo me..
Gunda 1—(chilla kar)..dekh kya rahe ho..? le aao ladki ko…
Thakurain (chillate huye)—aa ja..aa..dhaannnyyyyy
Jaise hi ek admi radha ko pakadne ke liye aage badha vaise hi thakurain ki bandook se nikli goli ne uska bheja fry kar diya.. thakurain ke sath aaye huye admi bhi apni apni bandook nikaal kar samne aa gaye….ye dekh kar unhone yaha se nikalna hi behtar samjha.
Gunda 1—abhi to main ja raha hu thakurain…lekin black star se dushmani le kar aapne achcha nahi kiya…iss ladki ko kab tak aap bachaogi...?
Thakurain (gusse me)—ruk..jata kaha hai…? Harami Dhamki kise de raha hai, thakurain ko... ?…dhaannnyyyy..maar do sab ko…dushman ko jinda chhodna meri fitrat nahi..
Vo gunda jane ke liye muda hi tha ki thakurain ne use goli maar di…sath me thakurain ke admiyo ne bhi unhe charo taraf se gher liya..apne bhagne ka rasta band hote dekh unhone bhi apne hathiyar nikaal liye…kuch hi der me unke sabhi admi maare gaye..sath me thakurain ke bhi 2 admi ghayal huye….
Thakurain—inke paas ka sara paisa tum log aapas me baant lo….aur inn dono ko hospital le jao..
Thakurain apne sath radha ko le kar chali gayi..abhi vo kuch hi door pahuchi thi ki tabhi radha jor se cheekh padi..
‘’Thakurainnnnn..’’
Vahi jab raj uss gunde ke piche piche fencing paar kar ke dusri taraf chala gaya to tanu pareshan ho gayi..use bahut tension hone lagi…upar se udhar se sunayi de rahi dardbhari cheekh uski chinta me aur bhi badhottari kiye ja rahi thi.
Tanu (chillate huye)—rajjj..lout aao..vapis aa jao….vaha khatra hai…aage mat jao..
Magar bahut chillane ke baad bhi raj vapis nahi louta…uske vapis loutne ki raah dekhte dekhte shaam ho gayi to sabhi vaha se vapis lout dono ladko ke lekar doctor ke paas chali gayi.
Saheli 1—ohh godd…agar aaj raj nahi hota to vo log to ab tak hamari izzat loot chuke hote..
Saheli 2—haan, uss din bhi to raj ne hi hame bachaya tha..
Suraj’s gf—kuch bhi kaho, raj bada himmat wala hai…dil jeet liya usne aaj mera..tumne apne iss bhai se meri mulaqat pahle kyo nahi karwayi tanu…? Kaash ki raj mujhe pahle mil gaya hota…? Lagta hai ki raj, apni bahan tanu se bahut pyar karta hai..
Saheli 2—kuch bhi kaho bhabhi..raj ne tanu ke liye apni jaan ki parwah tak nahi ki aur akele hi unn sab se bhid gaya.. aur to aur kitni buri tarah se mara unko…
Suraj gf—haan yaar…handsome bhi bahut hai
Saheli 1—bhabhi, uska vo bhai kya bol raha tha, aapne suna nahi…? Kitna chilla chilla kar bol raha tha ki hum charo uske chodne ke liye hain…hame bola, ye to samajh me aata hai lekin usne to apni bahan tanu ko bhi bola ki ye bhi uske chodne ke liye hai..
Suraj gf—lagta hai ki raj ko apni hi bahan se ishq ho gaya hai…tabhi to usne tanu ko bachane ke liye apni jaan ki bhi parwah nahi ki..
Saheli 1—haan, tanu ko uss gunde ne jaise hi ulta sidha bola to raj ko kitna gussa aa gaya tha..uss gunde ka to hath hi ukhad diya raj ne…aur ek ye tanu hai ki use hamesha be-izzat karti rahti hai..
Saheli 2—mujhe bhi lagta hai ki raj ko tanu se sachcha pyar ho gaya hai…aisa pyar karne wala kismat walo ko hi milta hai.
Suraj gf—kyo nanad rani…chupke chupke apne chote bhai ko hi dil de baithi aur hame bataya tak nahi…?
Saheli 2—tanu ka to already boy friend hai..aur vaise bhi tanu uski bahan hai..to sochti hu ki kyo na main hi raj ko propose kar du…? Agar raj mujhe mil gaya to meri to kismat hi khul jayegi..tanu meri help karegi na raj ko patane me..?
Tanu jo ab tak unki baate chupchap sun rahi thi…apni saheli ki baat use na jane kyo jahar ki tarah jahreeli lagi, vo ghur kar uski taraf dekhne lagi magar boli kuch nahi.
Saheli 1—kyo tera bf nahi hai kya..? raj ko to main pataungi..main yaha se jate hi apni mummy se apne aur raj ke baare me baat karungi..
Saheli 2—arrey, ye bhi koi bf hai..sala hinjda..jo apni gf ki izzat na bacha sake..lanat hai aise mard par…maine faisla kar liya hai ki ab shadi karungi to sirf raj se….agar vo kahega to main shadi se pahle hi use apna sab kuch de dungi..
Saheli 1—kyo, tere paas bhar hi bur hai, main nahi de sakti usko..? tujhse pahle main use apni bur chodne ko de dungi.. aur sath me apni gaand bhi..
Suraj gf—tum dono lado mat..vo mera eklouta devar hai....lekin ab sochti hu ki suraj ko cancle kar ke raj ko pata lu.. vaise bhi main tum dono se jyada sundar hu..ek bar mujhe chod lega to mera deewana ho jayega..
Teeno ki baate sun sun kar ab tanu ka dimag kharab hone laga tha sath me use gussa bhi aane laga tha..akhir jab bardast karna mushkil ho gaya to uska gussa phut hi pada.
Tanu (gusse me)—band karo apni ye ghatiya bakwas….sharam nahi aati tumhe iss tarah ki baate karte huye…vaha raj ki jaan khatre me hai aur tumhe apni apni pyas bujhane ki padi hai..agar itni hi bhosde me aag lagi hai to jao beech road me nangi ho kar let jao..bahut saare mil jayenge tumhari ye aag bujhane ke liye..
Saheli 1—sorry yaar..gussa kyo hoti hai…tu to vaise bhi yahi chahti thi ki raj se tera kisi tarah picha chhute..ab gussa ho rahi hai..
Tanu (chilla kar)—just shut up…tumhe pata bhi hai ki agar raj nahi mila to dad mujhe jaan se maar denge..
Suraj gf—to ab kya kare…?
Saheli 2—kyo na hum kal jungle me ja kar raj ko talash kare…?
Tanu—pagal hai kya…? Fencing ke uss paar jo bhi gaya..aaj tak jinda nahi louta…
Saheli 1—phir to problem ho gayi…
Tanu—ek idea hai..tum sab ko yahi batana ki vo gunde hamare admiyo ko maar kar jabardasti raj ko utha kar le gaye..tabhi kaam ban sakta hai warna dad mujhe nahi chhodenge..
Saheli 2—ye theek rahega..
Uske baad unhone dono ladko ko bhi yahi bataya …aur phir fight dekhne ki jagah sidhe apni friend ki shadi me shamil hone chali gayi..magar phir bhi aaj tanu ka dil bechain tha…shadi ke program me bhi uska mann nahi lag raha tha..use apni saheli ki baate baar baar yaad aa rahi thi sath me din ka vo drishya bhi jab raj ne use kis tarah se bachaya tha..
Tanu (mann me)—jo sab ne kaha ..kya vo sach hai…? Kya sach me raj mujhe itna pyar karta hai…? Ki meri khatir usne apni jaan tak ki parwah nahi ki…? Aur..aur raj ne jo kaha tha ki main bhi uske ch..chodne ke liye hu..to kya raj sach me mujhe chodna chahta hai…? Ye jante huye bhi ki main uski badi bahan hu, phir bhi vo mujhse pyar karta hai aur mujhe chodna chahta hai….? Usne mujhse bur dikhane ko bola bhi to tha..to ho bhi sakta hai…meri saheli sach hi bol rahi thi ki itna pyar karne wala kisi kismat wali ko hi milta hai….I’m sorry raj, maine tumse hamesha galat bartav kiya hai..ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dena…bas tum ek baar vapis lout aao raj, main tumhe ab se koi shikayat ka mouka nahi dungi …tumhari har baat manungi, pls vapis aa jao….tumhare liye main khud ko poori tarah se badal dungi…tumhare liye sab ko chhod dungi..bas ek bar aa jao raj..vapis aa jao..
Yahi sab soch soch kar tanu pareshan ho rahi thi..aaj jeevan me pahli baar uska dil kisi ki salamti ke liye dua maang raha tha, pahli bar uska dil kisi ke liye dhadak raha tha…halanki boy friend to uska pahle se hi hai lekin jo kuch use aaj mahsoos ho raha tha vaisa aaj se pahle kabhi mahsoos nahi hua tha aur na hi kisi ke liye vo itna bechain huyi thi.
Jaha idhar tanu bechain ho kar kisi ke liye machal rahi thi to vahi dusri taraf chodu gang raj ke jivit hone ki jankari milne ke baad amilpur ke liye chal pade the, apne ek maqsad, ek mission ko anzam dene ke liye…siraj ne control room me phone kar ke kuch mobile number’s ki location batane ko kah diya tha jiske thodi der baad reply bhi aa gaya.
Siraj—lo control room ka massage bhi aa gaya hai..
Jitu (tension)—richa ki location kya hai…? Jaldi batao...mujhe bahut tension ho rahi hai..
Siraj—bata raha hu..sab ki location bata raha hu...
Amtul—jaldi batao...
Siraj—richa ki location aa rahi hai rajasthan me, udaypur ke aas paas ki jagah lag rahi hai..
Jitu (tension)—kyaaa udaypur me... ? madarchod, udaypur le kar pahuch gaya richa ko... ? ok, main nikalta hu..time bahut kam hai..
Siraj—pahle sabhi ki location sun to lo bhai…jisse ek dusre ko contact karne ya help karne me dikkat na ho agar location nazdik hi huyi to..
Sorbobhuk—sahi hai..
Siraj—shraddha bhabhi ki location hai amilpur ke paas koi gaon jaisa hai…baki sabhi ki location abhi ek hi jagah dikha raha hai…rajasthan ke border par..
Amtul—ok, to chalo nikalte hain..ek sath…har dus minute me location update karte rahna..ho sakta hai ki aage location alag alag ho jaye..?
Iron man—ok, main jata hu, shraddha bhabhi ko bachane kyon ki unhe hum charo ke alawa aur koi pahchanta nahi hai aur na hi bhabhi pahchanti hain..
Firefox—haan, yahi theek rahega..
Siraj—main shashi ko bachane jaunga, amtul jayega anamika ke liye, iron, shraddha bhabhi ko, jitu, richa ko…baki ka kya kare,..?
Firefox—unn pahle wali kothe ki ladkiyo ko bachane ka jimma mera..ho sakta hai ki bachane ke baad kuch chodne ko bhi mil jayengi…
MNSHKMR—unn teen ladkiyo ko bachane main jaunga jinhe raj ne bachaya tha..
Siraj—lekin vo bhi to aage alag alag location me ho sakti hain…?
Sorbobhuk—to main hu na, bakiyo ko bachane ke liye..
Amtul—theek hai..jaldi chalo..agar koi bachegi to tab tak prem bhi pahuch jayega. Sambhalne ke liye..
Iss tarah sab apna apna target fix kar ke nikal pade…jitu ko ulta direction me jana tha aur uski manzil bhi bakiyo se nazdik thi to vah ek gadi kiraye par le kar nikal gaya….abhi vah kuch door hi pahucha tha ki raste me uski gadi ke samne achanak se ek langda admi aa gaya..jitu ne badi mushkil se brake laga kar gadi ko roka…aur bahar aa kar uss langde ko pakad kar khade hone me help karne laga jo ki ghabra kar beech road me gir gaya tha.
Jitu—baba, aap ko chot to nahi lagi…?
Langda—nahi beta..baal baal bach gaya…kya karu beta ..langda hu na to jaldi road paar nahi kar pata..
Jitu—chalo baba, main aap ko road paar kara deta hu..
Langda—shukriya beta…bhagwan tumhara kalyan kare…vaise beta, itni tez gadi nahi chalani chahiye..
Jitu—bas mujhe kahi jaldi pahuchna hai baba…isliye chala raha tha..
Langda (mushkurate huye)—itni jaldi me to koi ladka tabhi hota hai jab vo apni premika se milne ja raha ho tab..hihihi.. vaise tumhara naam kya hai beta…?
Jitu—ji baba jitu naam hai mera..ab main chalta hu..
Langda (chounk kar)—kya kaha..jitu..!
Jitu (hairan)—kyo, isme chounkne wali kya baat hai baba…?
Langda—nahi beta,..bas ye naam sun kar mujhe abhi kuch ghante pahle ki ghatna yaad aa gayi..vo ladki bhi yahi naam chilla rahi thi..jitu..jitu..
Jitu ke badhte kadam achanak hi uss langde ki baat sun kar ruk gaye….uske mann me kayi shankaye ubhar aayi..vo turant hi vapis palat kar uske paas aa gaya.
Jitu (hairan)—koun si ladki baba..? mujhe batao baba.. ? jaldi batao...
Langda—main use nahi janta beta..main to bas yahi road par chal raha tha tabhi kuch gunde jabardasti ek ladki ko le kar kahi ja rahe the gadi me..vo bar bar jitu..jitu pukaar rahi thi..
Jitu (shocked)—kyaaaa…? (bechain)..baba kaha le kar gaye hain vo uss ladki ko..? batao baba..jaldi batao…
Langda—beta..main jyada to nahi sun paya lekin itna samajh me aaya ki vo log uss ladki ko registan ke beecho beech me le jane ki baat kar rahe the…
Jitu (shocked)—kyaaaa..registannn..! (mann me)..richa didi..main aa raha hu..ghabrana mat…main kisi ko chhodunga nahi..
Iske baad jitu nahi ruka aur badi tezi se gadi me baith kar vaha se registan ke liye nikal gaya…uske jate hi uss langde ke chehre par mushkurahat aa gayi…vo road ki kinare ped ke paas pahuch kar ek pair se nachne laga.
Kuch der tak aise hi nachne ke baad usne road par ek gadi aati dekhi to beech road me khada ho kar gadi riokne ke liye hath hilane laga..paas me aate hi gadi ruk gayi.
Admi (chillate huye)—ye buddhe..marne ka irada hai kya jo beech road me khada hai, chal bhag …?
Langda—beta..main to tumhare bhale ki baat kar raha hu..gussa kyo hote ho…?
Admi—sale, abhi gadi ke niche aa kar mar jata to police mere piche pad jati..aur kahta hai ki mera bhala karna chahta hai..?
Langda—haan beta….abhi thodi der pahle ek admi jiske piche ki police padi huyi thi, usne sone chaandi aur heere ke jwellery se bhara bag mujhe pakda kar bhag gaya..jate jate usne kaha ki isko kahi jaldi se chhupa do..main baad me aa kar le jaunga…
Admi (shocked)—kyaa..tum sach kah rahe ho…?
Langda—haan beta
Admi—kaha hai vo bag…?
Langda (hath ke ishare se)—vo..uss jhaadi ke piche..ab beta, main to thahra langda admi…ye police ka jhanjhat jhelna mere bas ki baat nahi..main bhala langda admi inn heere jawahrat logo ki nazar se kaise chhupa sakunga..mera na to koi ghar hai aur na hi thikana….kya tum iss bag ki hifazat karoge beta…?
Admi (lalach)—haan..haan…tum chinta mat karo..main hifazat me rakhunga uss bag ko..jaldi batao mujhe kaha hai vo bag..?
Langda—uss jhadi ke paas ja kar dekho..mil jayega..
Vo admi jewar ke lalch me aa kar jaldi se bhagte huye uss jhadi ke paas pahuch kar dekhne laga…itne me piche piche vo langda bhi vaha pahuch gaya..usne apni jeb se ek injection nikala aur phir ek hath se uss admi ka muh daba kar vo injection turant uski gardan me bhonk diya.
Vo admi dard me chhat patata raha kuch der tak..bechara muh band hone ke karan cheekh tak nahi saka..uske muh se khoon nikalne laga..aur ankhe bahar ko nikal aayi..shayad vo mar chuka tha…langde ne usko niche lita diya..aur uske kapde utar kar khud pahan liya.
Uske kapde pahanne ke baad usne apne chehre par laga mask nikal kar phenka aur uss jhadi me hath daal kar dusra mask nikal ke pahan liya…iske baad usne apni plastik ki taang pahni, uske upar uss admi ke jutr moje pahanne ke baad road par aa gaya.
Langda—hihihihihihi…sab ke sab chutiya hain…hihihihihi
Phir vo uss admi ki gadi me baith kar drive karte huye kahi chala gaya..
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