Meri bahoot samajh to nahi kahungaa par itani kahunga ki kahani likhte waqut kitne updates honge isko dhyaan mein na rakhte hue content based story ho jo samay aur jaroorat ke hisaab se likha jaay to ise se aapke reader aise jude rahenge jis se unhein boriyat na feel ho.... Quantitative ki jagah qualitative story updates likhi jaay to yahan readers aapko hamesha yaad rakhna chaahenge aur fir kahna chaahungaa aapki story ko khatm hone ke baad bhi ek baar fir padhna chaahenge wahi agar yahi lengthy(extreme long) ho jaay to shaayad hi koi isko padhna chaahega..... Pichle kuch updates se aapki story aisi chal rahi hai jaise updates khatam ho rahe ho par story ki position wahi ke wahi slow motion mein chal rahi hai
Waise ye aapka decision hai aur mehnat bhi lag rahi hai to mein kahne waala kaun hota hoon..... Par mujhe jaisa laga meine aapse share karna sahi samjha because I am one of the story fans of yours..... Baaki agar kuch galat laga ho to sorry ?

kahna chaahunga.
Thank you
Aapko sorry bolne ki koi avashyakta nahi hai bhai, aapne to sirf apne mann ke bhaavo ko hi abhivyakt kiya hai, jo ki aapka swatantra adhikar hai.
Jaisa ki aapne kaha ki story ke kewal updates hi badh rahe hain, lekin story vahi ki vahi hai to iske jawab mein main sirf ek hi sawal puchunga bhai..Ek bahti huyi badi nadi ka pani kisi sthan par behad tezi se pravahit hota hua mahsoos hota hai to kahi par vah ekdam shant, bilkul sthir ho jata hai, aise jaise ki nadi ka pani bahna hi band ho gaya ho...Kintu kya haqiqat me shant aur sthir dikhayi dene wala nadi ka vo pani uss ek jagah par ruk gaya hai...? kya nadi ke uss sthir pani ka koi mahatva nahi hai....? Nadi agar badi hai to kya uska mahatva kam ho jayega badi hone ke karan...?
Dusri baat, hum sabhi dharti par rahte hain, lekin kya yaha rahte huye hame ye dharti ghumti huyi dikhayi deti hai...? nahi na, ekdam ek jagah sthir jaan padti hai..kintu kya dharti ke sthir dikhayi dene se vo sthir ho jayegi ya hai...? kya iska koi mahatva nahi hai...? vastav me iss sthirta ke piche hi to sara rahasya chhupa hua hai.
Kabhi kabhi kuch cheeze hame jaisi nazar aati hain, vastav me vo vaisi nahi hoti hain. aapka kahna hai ki kahani agar lambi ho to log padhna pasand nahi karte..Jabki novels to sabhi bade hi hote hain, to kya log unhe nahi padhte...?
Dost, ye zindagi saat rangi Indra dhanush ki tarah hai, isliye isme saat din (sunday to saturday) hote hain..har din ka apna ek alag mahatva hai. kabhi koi din bahut jaldi beet jata hai, samay ka pata hi nahi chalta, to kabhi kabhi to koi ghadi me time dekhte dekhte badi mushkil se beetta hai, kintu vaha samay ruk to nahi gaya tha na bhai, vah to nirantar hi gatiman tha, hai aur hamesha rahega. koi din hame dher sari khushiya de jata hai to koi dhero gum, matlab ki sabhi din ki dincharya ek jaisi nahi rahti, jaise hath ki paancho ungliya.
Makaan banane wala shilpi hi janta hai ki vo uss makaan ko kitne din me behtar dhang se poora kar sakta hai kyon ki use apni kshamta ka pata hota hai..kintu agar use yahi kaam aur pahle poora karne ko kaha jaye, to vah poora to jarur kar dega lekin usme vo bhavyata, vo sundarta nahi ayegi jaisa chitrankan usne apne dimag me kiya tha.
Bhai, main kabhi ye soch kar nahi likhta, ki kahani koi padhega ya nahi padhega..koi padhe to bhi achcha, na padhe to bhi achcha..Likhna mera kaam hai, vo main karta rahunga..Padhna ya na padhna, reader's ka kaam hai..unhe pasand ayegi to padhenge, nahi ayegi to nahi padhenge. maine na to kabhi pahle hi kisi ko ye kaha ki meri kahani padho ya review do, likes do, review bada do aur na hi kabhi kahunga..ek bhi review nahi ayega tab bhi main update issi tarah deta rahunga...main usse nirash nahi hota..main to sirf itna janta hu agar meri kalam me vo taqat, aur shabdo me vo kashish hogi to padhne wale ka dil khud hi use do shabd likhne ke liye vivash kar dega, anyatha main yahi samjhunga ki mere shabdo me vo kashish nahi hai, mujhme hi kahi koi kami hai jise mujhe dhoond kar usme sudhar karne ki jarurat hai.
Ye sach hai ki kahi kahi koi update jarurat se jyada lamba ho jata hai, aur iski vajah ye hai ki jab dil aur dimag kisi scene me poori tarah se doob jata hai tab uss samay mera kalam par se niyantran kho sa jata hai..uss scene me doobte hi dil se shabd nikal kar dimag me bina ruke ubharte chale jate hain aur unn shabdo ko meri kalam bina ruke likhti chali jati hai..uss samay kuch hosh hi nahi rahta, likhne ke liye kuch sochne ki jarurat hi nahi padti..shabd apne aap nikalte jate hain jinhe kalam rekhankit karti chali jati hai aur iss chakkar me ek hi scene bahut lamba ho jata hai.
Anyway, phir bhi aapki bhavna ko dhyan me rakhte huye main jitna jaldi ho sake iss kahani ko khatam karne ki koshish karunga.