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[Raj Singh]

Nice update

 

[Raj Singh]

Nice update

 

[Carry Minati]

sorry jaisi story chal rahi hai waisi hi chaleg mai kuch change nahi kar sakta aur na hi writer ko suggest karunga changes updates dene se pehle mai ek post ki thi wo padh le

Pdh liya h Bhai


Thik hai Mt change kro .... Aapn continue likhte rho bs

 

[Xabhi]

Wao Bhai ek or sandar update padh kr anand aa gya...

 

[Rocky 4]

Awesome

 

[Ajay kori]

Koi jawab nhi bhai apki story ka..ek dam hila dala h Anand bhai ek dam dhansu ek dam faad update h bs aapki yahi story ke liye alag se time nikalta hu me bahut hi shandaar chal rha h story me aap ese hi likhte rho bhai faltu logo ki baton pr dhyaan mat dena ye wala update bhut mst tha or shocking krne wala maza aa gya...

 

[Last benchers]

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Pujari bhai story bearing ho gai ab kyoki sadhna sheetal ko bina matlab ko ghuma rahe ho aur itna chehara lana bina matlab ka sAmajh nahi aata story ko because ab sadhna sheetal me na koi aisa mistry la rahe ho na kuch bina matlab ka nekab nekab khel rahe ho mai kabhi nahi Likha hu coment but ab bearing ker rahe ho ya to sadhna and sheetal character ko waha se nikalo bina matlab ka yAra mat ghumao



Pichla 7 update sheetal and sadhna wala boaring and bina matlab ka laga jaha confusion wo bhi faltu ka kyo ki kaun chehra kabhi bhi badal raha hai jiska yAha jarurat hi nahi hai kya bina matlab ka update dal rahe ho



Ha raj jaha waha ka update mast hai but bina matlab and bina hath pair ke sheetal and sadhna ka abhi story chala rahe hooo





And sorryyyyyy bolta hu sabse aisa Likhne ka but yar realy kitna achha chal raha tha story sabse boaring part abhi chal raha hai sheetal and sadhna character ka

To Mt padho. ..Kon bolta hai padhne me liye. Ab writer ko tum btaoge.. kaise likhna hai ya nhi .story aise nhi bnti.. life Mai jaise utar chadaw aate hai ..waise hi story hoti hai kuch part boring jrur krte hai but writer wo scenes dikhna v utha important hota hai.

 

[Hondacreta]

Waiting bro

 

[Naik]

Bahot shaandaar lajawab mazedaar update dost

 

[Fighter]

Super duper hit & Mast & Very nice update bro

ab abhay ki ab fategi sale ko bura marna



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