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Raj ne time Diya lakin karega kaise aur ye to abhi bhi but ke piche h
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Raj ne time Diya lakin karega kaise aur ye to abhi bhi but ke piche h
Keep posting
Asli Vibhishan ke baare me jo kaha hai apne....is baat se to mere kheyal se ragini reshmi pushpa buaSach puchiye to main khud bhi uss update se satisfied nahi hu...naqli sadhana ke upar to vo sabhi points fit baithte hain kyon ki kahani taiyar hi usko dhyan me rakh kar ki thi..lekin jab kahani me changes kiya to iss sadhana (real sheetal) me vo points fit nahi baith rahe the..uss update ne mere dimag ka dahi kar diya..14-15 bar kayi tarah se update likha aur delete kiya lekin points set hi nahi ho rahe the...3 din tak usme hi pareshan raha..samajh me hi nahi aa raha tha ki koun sa update post karu..? sadhana ko naqli dikhau ya asli..? yahi chakkar me 3 din lag gaye aur update late ho gaya.
Halanki dusri site par jaha post kar raha hu, vaha par ye changes nahi dikhaunga, jaisa socha tha, vaisa hi post karunga...ab asli vibhisan ka naam last me hi black star ke sath ayega..ye bhi ho sakta hai ki vo ghar se juda hua ho lekin ghar ka member na ho..
Thakurain ka role aage abhi aur bhi powerful dekhne ko milega...ab ye soch raha hu ki kinke sex scenes 270,280,290 aur 300 updates me rakhu..? baki jo bachenge, unko saand 2nd part me transfer kar dunga...baki updates me story chalegi.
Behatareen update brother.......SAAND
UPDATE-267
Main chillata raha, rota raha lekin sheetal didi bina meri taraf dekhe gusse me gadi start kar ke chali gayi..main vahi apna sir pakad kar baithe huye rota raha…sir ka dard itna adhik ho gaya ki meri bardast ke bahar ho gaya aur main na jane kab behosh ho kar vahi road par ludhak gaya.
Jane kitni der tak main vaha aise hi behosh pada raha…tabhi vaha se ek gadi gujri aur kuch aage ja kar usme achanak hi brake lag gaye…
Ab aage……
Raj ke aise gayab hone se tanu aur uski friends kafi pareshan thi…badi mushkil se ek din unhone apni dost ke yaha bitaya.. dusre din vo ek bar phir se tanu ke jor dene par nalda check point pahuch kar yaha vaha talash karne lagi iss ummid me ki shayad raj raat me vapis aa gaya ho uss manhoos jungle se, kintu uske baare me kuch pata nahi chala..
Akhir nirash ho kar tanu sab ke sath vapis ghar ke liye nikal gayi…tanu drive karte huye gahri soch me doobi huyi thi..kal se hi vah behad udas thi…gadi chalate huye uski nazar achanak hi side mirror ki taraf chali gayi..jisme usne kuch aisa dekha ki turant hi chounk kar brake laga diye.
Gadi rukte hi vo niche utar kar piche ki taraf tezi se daud laga di…uske achanak aise iss sunsan jagah me gadi rokne aur utar kar piche bhagne se sabhi chounk gayi.
Suraj’s gf (aditi)—aaaahhh…sir phod diya iss ladki ne..
Saheli 1 (Kshama)—(chounk kar),,ye aise kaha bhag rahi hai…? Tanuuu,,,rukk jaa..kya huaa…?
Saheli 2 (Bhavna)—(hairan)..aao dekhte hain..
Vastav me hua ye tha ki tanu apne hi dhyan me gadi chalate huye ja rahi thi…tabhi samne se aati huyi gadi ki tez roshni ki vajah se kuch pal ke liye uski nazar bahar ki taraf ghum gayi..nazar ghumte hi apne side mirror me use piche road me koi admi behosh pada hua dikhayi diya…tanu ne uss par koi khas dhyan nahi diya aur vo apni nazre phir se samne karne hi wali thi lekin tabhi samne wali car ke light ka focus uss niche pade huye admi par pada jisse kuch pal ke liye uska chehra dikh gaya…uss admi ke chehre ki ek jhalak dekhte hi vo chounk gayi aur turant brake laga diye.
Tanu (chounkte huye)—raajjjj..!
Bhagte huye tanu uss behosh pade huye admi ke paas pahuch gayi…road me aise bhagte huye vo kayi bar vaha se gujar rahi gadiyo se takrate huye bachi…pahuchte hi tanu ne jaise hi karib se uss ladke ka chehra dekha to akasmat hi uski ankhe dabdaba gayi…niche baith kar tanu ne fauran uska sir apni god me rakh liya.
Tanu (nam ankhe)—rajjj…kya hua..? kya hua tumhe..? ankhe kholo rajj..
Haan, ye koi nahi balki raj hi tha jise sheetal behoshi ki halat me road par chhod kar chali gayi thi…tanu bar bar pukarte huye use hosh me lane ki koshish kar rahi thi…tab tak baki sab bhi gadi se utar kar uske paas pahuch gaye aur raj ko dekhte hi shocked ho kar rah gaye.
Teeno (shocked)—rajj aur yaha vo bhi iss halat me…!
Tanu (nam ankhe)—rajj ankhe kholo..dekho main tanu hu..
Aditi—lagta hai ki behosh hai...kshama jaldi se gadi me se pani ki bottle le kar aao..
Kshama bhagti huyi pani ki bottle utha layi...aur phir raj ke chehre par pani chhidakne lagi...kuch der me uske jism me hulchul hote dekh sabhi ke chehro par chhaye chinta ke ghane badal kuch kam huye.
Raj (hosh me aate huye)—(ankhe band)..aaa...didi..mujhe akele chhod kar mat jaoo...
Tanu (nam ankhe)—(chumte huye)….main yahi hu raj..dekho..tumhari tanu didi tumhare paas hai…mujhe kuch nahi hua..main bilkul theek hu..ankhe kholo raj..
Behoshi me bhi raj ke muh se didi sun kar tanu ka dil khushi se jhum utha..usne yahi samjha ki raj behoshi me bhi use hi yaad kar raha hai..raj ke dil me apne liye itna pyar dekh kar vo bhi uss pyar ke sagar me doob gayi. Aur vo uske poore chehre ko jaldi jaldi chumne lagi.
Raj (ankhe khol kar)—(shocked)..tanu didi..aap…!
Tanu (sisak kar)—haan, rajj..kaha chala gaya tha apni tanu ko chhod kar…? Kitna talash kiya tujhe..ab kahi nahi jane dungi tujhe..
Raj (mann me)—sheetal didi, aap mujhe chhod kar chali gayi..koi baat nahi..aap ko mujh par bharosa nahi hai to na sahi, lekin jis kamine ne aap ko chhune ki koshish ki hai, uss madarchod abhay aur uske bete ki jindagi nark bana dunga main.. black star tu bhi 12 din maze kar le tab tak main iss madarchod abhay ki bahu, beti aur biwi ke bur ke chhed ko apne hathiyar se khod khod kar aur chouda karta hu..uske baad teri gaand ko gubbara banaunga….iske liye mujhe yaad dast jane ka natak karna padega..ab main sab ki bur chodne ka kaam karunga, burchoda ban kar..
Aditi—kya hua raj..? tum kaha chale gaye the…? Hamne bahut dhoonda tumhe…
Bhavna—haan, aur tum yaha kaise pahuche aur behosh kaise ho gaye…?
Tanu—abhi use pareshan mat karo…vaise hi uski tabiyat theek nahi hai aur tum log apne sawal shuru kar di..
Kshama—raj se jyada bimar to mujhe tum dikh rahi ho..
Bhavna—haan, raj, pata hai, isne kal se kuch khaya bhi nahi..
Aditi (mushkura kar)—lagta hai ki tanu ko apne hi bhai se pyar ho gaya hai..
Tanu—raj, tum gadi me chalo..inki baato par dhyan mat do..
Main tanu ke sath gadi me aa kar baith gaya…iss bar driving aditi kar rahi thi jabki tanu mere sath piche baithi huyi thi mere kandhe par apna sir rakh kar…
Raj (jhuth)—vo main uss gunde ko maar kar vapis lout raha tha tabhi maine dekha ki vaha ek ladki akeli baith kar susu kar rahi thi, use akeli susu karte dekh kar mujhe uske upar daya aa gayi kyon ki uske sath me mootne wala koi nahi tha, isliye main bhi uske samne khada ho kar mootne laga…mujhe dekh kar vo jor jor se chillane lagi..madarchod, kisi ke sath achcha karne ka jamana hi nahi raha, uski chillane ki awaz sun kar na jane kaha se 100-150 adiwasi hatho me bhala le kar aa gaye aur madarchodo ne mujhe pakad liya…
Sabhi (shocked)—kyaaaa…?
Aditi—phir tum vaha se bahar kaise nikle aur yaha behosh kaise huye…?
Raj—unn madarchodo ne mujhe le kar asli saand se kushti ladwa diya…uss saand ne mujhe bahut mara lekin akhir me maine bhi usko patak patak kar maine maar diya…uske marte hi sab adiwasi mujhe burchoda..burchoda kahte huye mere aage jamin par let gaye..bas main tabhi vaha se bhag nikla…
Kshama (shocked)—kyaa tumne asli saand ko maar diya….? (pith dikhate huye)..ye dekho, uss saand se ladayi ke chot ke nishan..
Raj—aur nahi to kya..main jhuth thodi na bolta hu…bahar nikal kar main tanu didi ko kal raat bhar aur aaj din bhar sab jagah dhoondta raha…phir paidal hi tanu didi ke paas jane ke liye chal pada…lekin chot ke karan dard bahut ho raha tha aur bhukh bhi lagi thi to chalte chalte yaha pahuch kar gir gaya, phir mujhe kuch yaad nahi..
Tanu (bhigi palke)—kya jarurat thi tumhe uss gunde ke piche piche uss jungle me jane ki…? Vo to vaise hi darr kar bhag raha tha….tumne kitni berahmi se ek gunde ke hath ukhad diye..
Raj—uss madarchod ne tumhe hath kaise lagaya…? Unki himmat kaise huyi tumhe chodne ki baat karne ki…? Jo bhi tumhe hath lagayega, main use aise hi dauda dauda ke maarunga..
Tanu—tumne duniya ka theka le rakha hai..? ye gunde mawali hain, inka yahi kaam hai, ladkiyo ko chhedna..tum nahi jante nahi, vo black star ke admi the...jo bahut khatarnak hai..
Raj—black star ki maa ka bhosda...main nahi darta kisi black star se aur na hi kisi se...jo bhi tumhare sath gandi harkat karega, uska main yahi haal karunga..
Tanu (chumte huye)—itna chahta hai apni tanu didi ko... ?
Raj—isse bhi jyada..lekin aap meri koi baat nahi manti ho..
Bhavna—sorry raj, hamne tumhe galat samjha aur na jane kya kya bolti rahi tumhe lekin tumne hamari jaan aur izzat bacha kar hame hamari galti ka ehsaas kara diya..mujhe maaf kar dena..
Kshama—haan raj, mujhe bhi maaf kar do..ye sab iss tanu ki vajah se hua hai..isne hi hame tumhare khilaf bhadkaya tha.
Tanu (nam ankhe)—I’m sorry raj, main tumhe galat samajhti rahi..hamesha sab ke samne tumhe jalil karti rahi…yaha tak ki maine tum par hath bhi uthaya….iske baad bhi tumne apni jaan ki parwah na kar ke meri jaan bachayi…mujhe to mafi mangne ka bhi haq nahi hai phir bhi ho sake to mujhe maaf kar dena..
Raj (gale se laga kar)—kaisi baat karti ho didi…? Aap meri didi ho..aap ko poora haq hai, mujhe daantne ka, maarne ka..
Kshama—iska matlab ki tumne hame maaf kar diya...(hath badha kar)..aaj se main tumhari dost hu..
Aditi—main bhi..
Bhavna—main bhi..
Raj—ok, ok, maine sab ko maaf kar diya..lekin dosti nahi karunga...main tum sab se naraz hu..
Kshama—kyo... ?
Raj—kyo kya... ? maine bola tha ki aao sath me susu karenge to koi mere sath susu karne nahi aayi..
Meri baat sun ke sab shocked ho gayi…unki samajh me nahi aaya ki ab kya jawab de…? Bas hairani se ek dusre ka muh dekh rahi thi lekin sab ke samne kuch bolne me hichkicha rahi thi.
Bhavna—theek hai, main tumhare sath susu karne chalungi lekin ek shart par..
Tanu (ghur kar)—bhavna..
Raj—tum mere sath sach me susu karne chalogi…? Vo kya hai na ki mujhe akele akele susu karna achcha nahi lagta..
Bhavna—maine kaha na ki main chalungi tumhare sath susu karne …agar meri shart manoge to..
Raj—kaisi shart…? Jaldi bolo..kyon ki ab mera susu karne ka mann ho raha hai..
Bhavna—tum mujhe apni gf bana lo..phir sath me susu to kya, tum jo bologe, vo karungi..
Kshama—ise nahi, mujhe bana lo apni gf..
Raj—aapas me lado mat…aaj se tum dono meri gf ho..
Tanu (ghur kar)—tum shant nahi baith sakti… ek bf pahle se hi hai, usse mann nahi bhara kya..?…raj ke upar buri nazar dalna bhi mat.. samajh gayi..
Raj—kya didi, aap to mere sath susu karne jati nahi ho..aur dusri koi mere sath susu karne ko taiyar hai to unhe bhi mana kar rahi ho….main tumse sabse jyada naraz hu didi..
Tanu (udas)—mujhe maaf nahi karega….?
Raj—ek shart par ki tumhe bhi meri girl friend banna hoga aur mere sath susu bhi karogi aur mujhe apni…
Main aage kuch kahta ki usse pahle hi tanu didi ne jaldi se apna hath mere muh par rakh diya..shayad vo samajh gayi thi ki main kya kahne wala hu..
Aditi—raj ne to khule aam offer bhi kar diya tanu ko gf banne ka…lekin raj tanu tumhari bahan hai aur dusra, vo tumse badi hai…vo tumhari gf kaise ban sakti hai…?
Raj—Ladki Chahe Jitni Badi Ho Jaye, Mootegi To Baith Kar Hi Na..main tumhe bhi apni gf banane ko taiyar hu, agar tum chaho to..
Aditi—mujhe manzur hai…main bhi aaj se tumhari gf hu..ok..
Tanu—gadi ko kisi bade hotel me le chalo...raj ne kuch khaya bhi nahi hai aur use chot bhi lagi hai...to aaj hum kisi hotel me hi ruk jate hain..
Aditi—ok..
Raj—vo sab to theek hai lekin mujhe abhi tak ye samajh me nahi aaya ki vo adiwasi log mujhe burchoda burchoda kyo bol rahe the... ? didi, ye burchoda ka matlab kya hota hai... ?
Aditi (mann me)—iski sach much me yaad dast chali gayi hai ya natak kar raha hai... ? jis tarah se raj ne unn gundo ko mara, use dekh kar to nahi lagta ki yaad dast gayi hogi..magar phir iski aisi baate sun kar lagta hai ki sach hi ho..pata nahi kya hai..? lekin jo bhi ho, hai ekdam mast..
Tanu (dhire se)—vo..vo..mujhe nahi malum..bhul jao use..hoga kuch..kya karna hai..
Uske baad aditi ne gadi ko city ke ek aalishan hotel ki taraf turn kar diya...vaha pahuch kar tanu ne do rooms book kiye.. ek me main aur tanu to dusre me baki teeno..halanki tanu ke iss faisle se teeno khush nahi thi, vo sath me rahna chahti thi lekin tanu ne mana kar diya.
Room me pahuch kar sabse pahle hamne khana khaya…tanu mujhe khila rahi thi…aaj pahli bar tanu ne apne hatho se kisi ko khana khilaya tha, to maine bhi use khila diya…khana khane ke baad sabhi vahi baith kar TV dekhte huye baate karne lage….main kshama, bhavna aur aditi se has has ke baate kar raha tha, sath me vo bhi, ye dekh kar tanu ko achcha nahi lag raha tha..vo mann hi mann me unn teeno ko gaaliya de rahi thi.
Tanu (mann me)—Sali randiya kahi ki…teeno ke paas bf hain phir bhi mere raj par dore daal rahi hain..badi aayi raj jo bf banane wali…raj ko inke paas bhi nahi aane dungi ab se...inki gaand me bade bade kide pade..ye raj bhi kuch kam nahi hai, dekho kaise inn kutiyo se hans ke baat kar raha hai..
Tanu (daant kar)—tum teeno ko sona nahi hai kya..? raj thaka hua hai aur uski tabiyat bhi theek nahi hai..kam se kam use to sone do..jao apne room me..mujhe bhi neend aa rahi hai..
Raj—khana ho gaya, ab susu time….koun chal rahi hai mere sath susu karne…?
Charo ek bar phir se ek dusre ka muh dekhne lagi…unhe asmanjas me phansi dekh kar mere hotho par mushkurahat aa gayi..
Raj—aise sochne ki jarurat nahi hai..ek kaam karo..aaj sab ek sath susu karenge…chalo utho..
Sab (chounk kar)—kyaaa..sab ek sathhh…?
Tanu—raj, ye gandi baat hai..aisa nahi bolte…tum kar ke aa jao..
Raj—sab apni baat se palat gayi...main bhi ab kisi se baat nahi karunga..
Main muh bana kar bathroom chala gaya...mere jane ke baad bhavna uth kar bathroom ki taraf jane lagi to ye dekh kar tanu ki jhaante sulag gayi.
Tanu—kaha ja rahi hai... ?
Bhavna—uss bechare ka dil toot jayega...usne hamare liye itna kiya to kya main uski ek choti si khwahish bhi poori nahi kar sakti…? Main to ja rahi hu bathroom..
Tanu (gusse me)—mujhe pata hai ki tujhe uska kitna khyal hai.. ? ye kyo nahi kahti ki tere bhosde me khujli ho rahi hai… raj ke sath aisa kuch karne ki sochna bhi mat, chupchap apni jagah baith ja..Choot Hai Na Choochi, Baate Oonchi Oonchi…
Bhavna—tera to vo bhai hai, lekin teri kyo sulag rahi hai niche se…? main to uski gf hu, itna to chalta hi hai..(mann me).. kuch bhi ho main raj ko pata ke rahungi…jisko jalna hai jale..
Kshama—Ye sakhi, tujhse kya chori…Tere se jyada to aaj, Farkat mori….maine to soch liya hai ki raj se hi shadi karungi..
Tanu—raj ke sath kuch ulta sidha karne ki sochna bhi mat nahi to main bhul jaungi ki tum meri saheli ho..(mann me).. kamini sab ki sab raj ko phansane me padi hain…mujhe raj ko inse door rakhna hoga..lekin kaise..?
Aditi—lagta hai ki tanu ka bhi mann ho raha hai raj ke sath kuch kuch karne ka..hihihihi
Tanu (ankh dikha kar)—chalo jao ab…use araam karne do…vaise bhi use chot lagi hai aur tumhe matargasti sujh rahi hai aise me bhi..
Bhavna—theek hai, abhi to chhod deti hu…lekin yaad rakhna, raj ko main pata ke hi rahungi…hihihi
Kshama—tera number hi nahi ayega, usse pahle raj mera deewana ho chuka hoga..
Tanu ne teeno ko hath pakad kar room se bahar nikal diya..main bathroom se aaya tab tak teeno vaha se ja chuki thi… main aa kar bistar me let gaya dusri taraf muh kar ke..
Tanu—raj, kya hua…idhar muh karo na…? naraz hai apni tanu didi se…?
Raj—haan, main tumse bahut naraz hu..mujhse baat mat karo..
Tanu—kyo, ab maine kya kar diya... ?
Raj—vo mere sath susu karne ja rahi thi, to tumne use jane kyo nahi diya... ?
Tanu—raj, ladka aur ladki ek sath susu nahi karte hain..ye gandi baat hoti hai..
Raj—lekin mera to ladkiyo ke sath hi susu karne ko mann karta hai..
Tanu—vo achchi ladki nahi hain raj..vo dono tumhe phansana chahti hain..
Raj—(no response)
Tanu—ye to sach me mujhse naraz ho gaya..ab kya karu…? (kuch soch kar kaan me)…mere sath me susu karega…?
Raj—kyaaa…?
Vahi hospital me jab thakurain ko hosh aaya to vo sabse pahle radha ka naam lene lagi..aur ankhe khol kar jab usne khud ko hospital me dekha to use radha ki chinta hone lagi…usne jaldi se uthna chaha to pet me dard ke sath sath halkapan mahsoos hua jisse vo chounk gayi..
Thakurain (hosh me aate huye)—main yaha hospital me…! radha..radha kaha hai…? Radha, main tumhe kuch nahi hone dungi..aaaaaa (chounk kar)..ye mere pet ko kya hua…? Ye itna halka kyo lag raha hai…? (pet me hath pherte huye)..Mera bachcha..mera bachcha kaha hai…? Sisterr…doctorrr…
Thakurain ke chillane ki awaz sun kar nurse daudti huyi aayi..thakurain ko hosh me aati dekh kar vo jaldi se doctor ko bula layi kyon ki thakurain ke sawalo ke jawab dene me vo bhi darti thi.
Thakurain—doctor, mere sath me jo ladki thi, vo kaha hai…? Aur mere pet ko kya hua hai..? tum bolte kyo nahi doctor..? main yaha kaise pahuchi…?
Doctor—sab log bahar hi baithe huye hain…aa ko goli lagi thi pet me..I’m sorry thakurain ji, hum aap ke bachche ko nahi bacha sake..
Thakurain (cheekh kar)—nahiiiiiii..ye nahi ho sakta..kah do ki ye jhuth hai…
Doctor—I am sorry…lekin yahi sach hai..
Thakurain (rote huye gusse me jor se)—nahiii….main tumhe jaan se maar dungi..tune mere bachche ko mara hai…. kamine..aaaaaaa….
Thakurain gusse me doctor ko maarne ke liye uthi to dard ki vajah se uth nahi payi aur bistar me gir gayi…phir se uthne ko huyi to nurses ne usko pakad liya darte darte..
Doctor—thakurain, aap ke bachche ko hamne nahi mara balki aap ko yaha lane se pahle hi uski mout to pet me goli lagne se ho chuki thi..
Thakurain (chillate huye)—chale jao yaha se….mujhe akeli chhod do…jao yaha se sab….mujhe akeli chhod do…
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