Incest Saanjh ki Dulhan

[rusty blade]

 

[rusty blade]

Nice concept

Thanks bro....

Dear me ne "Poll" bhi dal diya he to us me zaroor bhag li jiye... kyun ke ap ke votes ke adhar par me us rishte ke beech sex ko zayada tafseel se likhun ga....
Dhanewaad....

 

[rusty blade]

Thanks bro....

Dear me ne "Poll" bhi dal diya he to us me zaroor bhag li jiye... kyun ke ap ke votes ke adhar par me us rishte ke beech sex ko zayada tafseel se likhun ga....
Dhanewaad....

 

[rusty blade]

Plz carry on.eagerly waiting for the next

I have started writing first update... will post it as soon as it is completed...

Dear me ne "Poll" bhi dal diya he to us me zaroor bhag li jiye... kyun ke ap ke votes ke adhar par me us rishte ke beech sex ko zayada tafseel se likhun ga....

Dhanewaad....

 

[Golu_nd]

Good Title.....

 

[Golu_nd]

Dosto aik aur story post kar raha hun….

Koi kotahi ya ghalti ho to maaf kijiye ga…

Kalpanaik story he….. kissi jeewat ya murda insaan se koi smbandh ya link nahe….

Yeh amar bhi samjhna zaroori he ke agar real life main incest hota he to open nhe he… gupt he aur time lagta he rishton ke parde uthne mein… jhijhak door hone mein… to please start se hi insist mat kijiye ga ke bhai behan sex Karen…

Sab se important dosto… abhe meri real life mein sangharsh he aur new job he jis ke liye zayada effort karni parti he to spare time itna nhe hota…. Isliye update weekly 1 ya 2 se zayada nhe honge….

Please bardasht kijiye ga aur apne comments, appreciation ya phir criticism zaroor post kijiye ga ta ke kahani ko improve kar sakoon….

Thanks….

Congratulations New Thread.....

 

[Golu_nd]

PROLOGUE​

Dosto meri ye kahani, forum ke aik mitr dwara di gayee aik theme ya plot par adharit he… is me aik social issue ko ujagar karne ki koshish he… me nhe janta ke us mitr ka apna ya us ke kissi nazdeeki vyakti ka koi is tarah ka anubhav he ya nhe… me bas apne is mitr ki khawhish ka palan karte hue… ye kahani likh raha hu… to is liye ye kahani bhi usi mitr ko dedicate karta hu…

Dosto same ya waqt ya time insan ki zindagi me bohat mahattav aur aparihaary ansh ya purn rakhta he aur same ya waqt agar din ka ho to zindagi ki taraf sanket karta he aur phir jesse jesse din dhalta he to zindagi ki sare vaibhav madham hone lagte he aur is tarah sham ya “saanjh” ka waqt ya same zindagi ki aik aisi stithi ki taraf sanket hota jesse kuch adhoora pan reh gaya ho… wo jo din nikalne ke sath zondagi ka aghaz hua tha wo ab madham par kar zindagi ko ya us ke vaibhav ko apriy bana chukka he aur zindagi ko jeene ki chahat us tarah se nhe rahi jis tarah se din ke aghaz me ya zinagi ke aghaz me thi…

Dosto… issi tarah Zindagi me Jawani aik aesa waqt he insan ke jeewan me jis me us ki har tarah ki khawahish ya tamana apne urooj par hoti he aur sab se zayada us kaam Shakti ya yun kahe ke sex ke liye urge maximum level pe hoti he aur us waqt aik larki agar us se mehroom reh jye aur khas tour par wo bayahta… married bhi ho to phir ban jati he… “Saanjh ki Dulhan...”

Dosto me ne koshish ki ke ap ko apni story ke title ke hawale se apni pravishtiyon ko pesh karun ke aesa title kyun rakha… ab dosto aate he social issue ki taraf to wo ye he ke aik larki jis ka nikaah kar diya jata he aur phir wo jab jawan hoti he aur us ka shohar ka agar koi ata pata na ho to wo nojawan larki aik undekhi dour se na sirf bandhi hoti he jesa ke kissi vyakti ko aik zanjeer se bandh kar us ki freedom ko rok liya jye… aur phir us ke samne us ki bhavnaye aur jismani zaroorate na poori ho to wo larki mehroomi ke aik daldal me dhansti chali jati he aur us ko rescue hone ke liye koi sahara bhi nazar nhe aata… ab wo larki kya kare… to wo larki aik “Saanjh ki Dulhan” ban kar apni zindagi ke Rajkumar ka ya to sari umar intezzar karti rahe… ya phir koi aur raah khoje…

Saanjh ki Dulhan apne Piya ko Suraj ki tarah khojti rehti he…. Na Subh ka suraj Saanjh se mil pata he aur na hi Saanjh ki Dulhan apne Piya se…

Dosto… aik aur bat zaroor samajh lijiye ke social issues me stereotype thinking hamesha theek nhe hoti… insano ke apne perspectives hote he jo ke un ke apne cultures ya phir individual experiences ke hisab se un ko theek lagte hein… problems ka solution sirf us waqt nikal sakta he ya phir yun kahe ke aik logical understanding tab hi develop ho sakti he jab constructive dialogue ho…

Interesting

 

[Golu_nd]

INTRODUCTION OF CHARACTERS /
SUMMARY OF STORY​

Ye kahani aik aesi larki ki bebasi ki dastan he jis ke ghar walo ne us ka nikaah kar ke aese bandhan se bandh diya jis aik sire pe wo khud he aur doosre sire par koi nhe he… bas aik naam he aik mard ka aur aik na khatam hone wala intezaar he…

Afghanistan me war shuroo hone ke baad wo larki apni family ke sath Mumbai aa jati he aur phir wo jab jawan hoti he to apne shohar ke intezaar me us ki na mitne wali kasak aik aesi dastan ka agahaz kar deti he jis me wo aakhir kar incest ki taraf na chahte hue bhi chal parti he….

To dosto “Pashmeena” naam he is larki ka… ye kahani first person, matlab, Pashmeena ki apni zabani ho gi… Kahani me kirdar kuch zayada nhe… family based story he… ghar se bahar na koi zikr he na koi zaroorat… is kahani me agar koi villain he to wo he samaj ki reet aur rawaj….

Pashmeena ki family me aik andekha sadasya he “Akbar Khan”… “Pashmeena” ka shohar jo ke laapata he… Afghanistan me war ke baad se… Pashmeena ko sab ghar wale pyar se Pashmee kehte he… aur hum bhi pyar karte he is se to hum bhi Pashmee hi kahen ge…

Pashmeena ki family me baqi logo ki tafseel yun he:

Baap… Dilawar Khan

Maa… Nafeesa Khatoon

Bhai… Shahmeer Khan

Bhabhi… Zarmeena

Kahani ke aage barhte… kuch aur kirdar bhi juren ge… un ki tafseel un ke zikar ke sath hogi….

Kahani ke sab kirdaro ki umar 18 sal se oopar he…

Dosto ye koi zayada lambi kahani nhi hogi bas 10 se 15 updates me khatam ho jye gi…

Superb Intro.....

 

[Luffy]

Dosto aik aur story post kar raha hun….

Koi kotahi ya ghalti ho to maaf kijiye ga…

Kalpanaik story he….. kissi jeewat ya murda insaan se koi smbandh ya link nahe….

Yeh amar bhi samjhna zaroori he ke agar real life main incest hota he to open nhe he… gupt he aur time lagta he rishton ke parde uthne mein… jhijhak door hone mein… to please start se hi insist mat kijiye ga ke bhai behan sex Karen…

Sab se important dosto… abhe meri real life mein sangharsh he aur new job he jis ke liye zayada effort karni parti he to spare time itna nhe hota…. Isliye update weekly 1 ya 2 se zayada nhe honge….

Please bardasht kijiye ga aur apne comments, appreciation ya phir criticism zaroor post kijiye ga ta ke kahani ko improve kar sakoon….

Thanks….

Congratulations for new thread

 

[Golu_nd]

Dosto... ap ko story ka concept ya phir intro kessa laga...??

apne views dijiye... dhanewaad

Bhut Jabardast.....

 

[Golu_nd]

Thanks bro....

Dear me ne "Poll" bhi dal diya he to us me zaroor bhag li jiye... kyun ke ap ke votes ke adhar par me us rishte ke beech sex ko zayada tafseel se likhun ga....
Dhanewaad....

Sab se phele mene poll me hi apna vote kiya h bro.....