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Mujhe Story k liye pics search karne main kafi problem rehti hai, aur tab bhi pics update k according nhi ho pati hai,

aur mera kafi time esi wajah se waste ho jata hai,

that's why, maine decide kiya hai ki ab se main pics pe jada Focus nhi karunga, balki wo time story ko likhne main invest karunga

but bich bich main kabhi kabhi pics aati rahegi, puri tarah band nahi karunga

i hope aap sabhi ko mera ye decision pasand aaye

new update thodi dair main Post karne wala hu
 

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Update #20

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#11 Raaz - Part 01


Hi friends, myself Ram

Sab 'chudengi bari bari' main humne ab tak
Ravi ki wife Deepti,
Kaveri Kaki ki beti aur Sameer ki girlfriend Mohini,
pandit ji ki bahu Meera,
Gardai hui salma chachi
aur ek bar phir se pandit ji ki bahu Meera ki damakedar chudai dekhi

Sath hi sath hume jana ki talab pe mili lash bade thakur sahab ki thi, jaha inquiry karte time Inspector Roma ko ek locket milta tha,

Baad main Roma ko bhoomi (Bhoomi- Thakur Sahab ki naukari) se pata chalta hai ki aisa locket bade thakur apni paltu ko diya karte thay

Paltu yani 'Rakhel'

Bus bade thakur ki ek hi shart hoti thi, ki unki paltu unke alawa aur kisi se nahi chud sakti

Baki eska alawa kahani main aur kafi kuch mazedar hua hai, jo aap sab ne pada hi hoga,

Aur agar nahi pada toh pad le, lund k khade hone aur chut se geele hone ki puri garanty hai

Aur time waste na karte hue, chaliye dekhte hai kahani main aage kiya hone wala hai

So, let's start 🌟

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Din k karib 1 baj chuke thay,

Salma bazar se ghar aa k naha chuki thi, puri tarah pani se bheegi hui gadrai Salma husn ki Malika malum pad rahi hai,

Badi badi moti moti chuchiyon se behta hua pani chut main aise sama raha tha maano koi nadi sagar main sama rahi ho,

Pure jism pe pani ki nanhi nanhi bunden kisi moti ki bhati pratit ho rahi thi

Apne sarir ki kamuk khubsu ko pure ghar main failati hui salma esi tarah nangi halat main kapde pehne k liye room main jati hai

wo kapde pehnne k liye kapde nikalne lagti hai toh use apna laal wala suit kahi nahi dikhta, wo kafi dhudnti hai par wo kahi nahi dikhta

Har k wo usi halat main nangi hi bheegi hui salman k pass jati hai

Salman es time charpai pe laita hua tha, aaj din main tabele pe Meera ki chut ka tabla bajane ki wajah se wo kafi khus dikh raha tha

Salma- aapne mera laal wala suit dekha hai

Salma ki aawaz sunke salman jab use dekhta hai toh bus dekhta hi reh jata hai,

Bheegi hui gadrai Salma ko dekh k Aisa lag raha tha maano koi jalpari prithvi pe chalne lagi ho

Salma abhi abhi naha k aayi thi, jis wajah se wo bahut hi khubsurat lag rahi thi,

Uske geele baalon se pani ki bunden behti hui uski chuchiyon ka safar tay karti hui uski gulabi chut main sama rahi thi

Aisa hasin nazara dekh k Salman k lund ne ek bar phir se bagawat karni suru kar di thi

Salman toh jaise sab kuch bhul hi gaya tha, wo kabhi salma ki badi badi chuchiyon ko dekhta toh kabhi uski gulabi chut ko

Uska lund dhire dhire tambu banane laga tha

Ye baat salma bhi dekh leti hai,

Wo hasti hui kehti hai

"Es nawab sahab ko kahiye, baithe hi rahe inhe aaj kuch nahi milne wala"

Salman apne lund ko lungi k uper se hi pakad k masalte hue kehta hai

"Ye nawab toh aapki chut main jake hi aaram karega"

Salma hasti hui

"Abhi koi chut gand nahi.. abhi aap pehle ye batao ki kiya mera laal wala suit dekha hai, kahi mil nahi raha hai"

Suit ki baat sunke salman ko yaad aata hai ki wo suit toh Meera pehen k gayi hai, qki uska blouse aur petticoat toh khud uske hi Josh main aake phad diya tha

Salma- bolo bhi kuch

Salman- nahi nahi nahi... Mujhe nahi pata hoga yahi kahi... Are tum koi aur pehen lo

Salma- ha wo toh thik hai.. par gaya kaha

Phir wo wapas andar jake dusre kapde pehen leti hai, aur salman bhi rahat ki saans leta hai


Edhar Roma, gaon main chakkar laga k kuch logo se Meera k bare main pata karti hai

Sabka yahi kehna tha ki wo bahut achi sanskari aurat hai, pandit pariwar gaon ka kafi sammanit pariwar hai

Par Bhoomi k hisab se wo bade thakur ki paltu thi, aakhir main Roma waha se nikal k sidha pandit ji k ghar ki taraf chal padti hai

Pandit ji ka ghar gaon k dusre kone pe bana hua tha, jaha pass main hi javed k angur k baag thay,

Pandit ji ko ye jamin usko uske kul k purkhon se mili hui thi

Kehte hai ye jamin uske purvajo ko us time ki maharani Avantika ne taufe main di thi

Par kis liye di thi ye toh kisi ko nahi pata

Roma darwaje pe dastak deti hai, karib 5 min baad pandit ji darwaja kholte hai

Es time unhone bus ek dhoti pehni hui thi, aur uper se wo pure nange thay uska bada sa matke jaisa pait aage nikla hua tha

Darwaje pe itni khubsurat aurat ko dekh k pandit ji toh bus usi main kho gaye thay

Roma- nasmate pandit ji

Pandit ji maano nind se jage ho

"Ji namaste... Namaste.. aap kon ?"

Roma- inspector Roma, bade thakur ki maut ki inquiry k liye aayi hu

Bade thakur ki maut ki inquiry ki baat sunke ek pal k liye toh pandit ji thoda ghabra sa jaate hai phir khub ko sambhalte hue

Pandit ji- par uske liye mujhse kiya kaam aapko

Roma- kaam aapse nahi aapki bahu Meera se hai.. kiya main usse mil sakti hu

Gaon k bade thakur ki maut main apni bahu ka naam aata dekh, pandit ji buri tarah dar jate hai

"Par meri bahu ne kiya kara hai"

Roma- mujhe saq hai ki bade thakur ki maut main Meera ka hath hai

Pandit ji k toh maano pasine hi chut jate hai

"Nahi nahi inspector sahiba aapse jarur kuch galti hui hai, hum sidhe sadhe sammanit log hai, hamare ghar ki bahu betiyan ye sab nahi karti"

Roma- dekhiye kisne kiya kara hai ye toh aane wala time hi batayega, phil haal aap use bula do

Pandit ji apne hathon se apna pasina pochte hue

"Meera subha se hi ghar pe nahi hai, wo Deepti bahu k yaha jane k liye keh rahi thi, abhi tak toh aayi nahi hai"

Roma- ye deepti kon hai ?

Pandit ji- ji esi gaon ki ek aurat hai, wo aur Meera kafi achi saheliya hai

Roma- aisa konsa kaam hai use ki ab tak wapas nahi aayi ?

Pandit ji- pata nahi inspector sahiba, main khud pareshan hu.. mansi bhi ro k so gayi hai

Roma- Mansi ?

Pandit ji- wo meri poti hai, Meera ki beti

Roma- main wapas aaungi.. par yaad rahe meri marzi k bina Meera es gaon se bahar nahi jani chahiye

Roma ne ye baat kafi sakti se kahi thi, jisse pandit ji bhi buri tarah kaanp se gaye thay

Roma phir waha aur nahi rukti aur sidha apne daak bangle ki taraf chal padti hai


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Roma abhi pidal hi dhup main paido ki chaya main wapas daak bangle ki taraf aa rahi thi ki tabhi use samne se Meera aati Hui dikhti hai

Roma ne aane se pehle bhoomi se Meera k bare main kafi kuch Jaan liya tha ki wo kaisi dikhti hai aur kaise Kapde pehenti hai

Esi wajah se Meera ko dekh k Roma use turant pehchan gayi thi

Roma thik uske aage aake khadi ho jati hai

Meera- (gusse se) aeeee sehri memsahab kiya hai ye ?

Roma- tum Meera ho na

Meera- ha toh

Roma apni jaib se talab pe mila wo locket nikal k meera ki aankhon k samne kar deti hai

Locket dekhte hi Meera buri tarah dar jati hai, wo jaldi se Roma ko dakka deke waha se bhagti hai, par roma ek trained police officer thi

Usne jaldi se Meera ka hath pakad k use ghumaya aur ek jhannatedar tamacha Meera k gore gore mukhade pe jad diya

Ek hi tamanche main Meera sidha jamin pe aake gir padti hai, uske honthon se khoon nikal aata hai,

Meera ko aisa lagta hai maano uski aankhon k samane pura bhammand nach raha ho

Use Aisa laga tha mano uske chehre se koi hathoda takraya ho

Roma- (gusse se) abhi piyar se puch rahi hu.. agar dimag ghum gaya toh mar mar k sari chamdi utar dungi samjhi

Meera buri tarah dar jati hai

Meera- main... Maine kuch nahi kiya...maine kuch...nahi kiya

Roma- agar tune kuch nahi kiya toh bhagne ki kiya jarurat aan padi, pagal samjha hai mujhe

Roma uska ek hath pakad k use uthti hai

Roma- ab sidhe sidhe batao.. ye locket tumhara hai

Meera- ha...ha......mera..... mera hai...

Roma- mujhe bar bar sawal karne ki aadat nahi hai... Puri baat batao

Meera- (karib karib roti hui) ye locket mujhe bade thakur sahab ne diya tha taufe main

Meera ka ye kehna tha ki ek bar phir se roma ka hath ghumta hai aur uska police wala tamacha ek bar phir se Meera k gaal pe padta hai

Meera ghumti hui phir se jamin pe gir padti hai

Es bar uski munh se khoon aa gaya tha, Meera ko aisa lag raha tha maano kisi ne uske sar pe hathoda mar diya ho

Roma- sali chinar ... Taufa tha ya paltu banne ki nishani.. chal uth sali kutiya

Meera buri tarah kanpti hui jaise taise phir se khadi hoti hai

Roma- ab agar ek bar aur jhut kaha toh es bar hath se nahi pairo se teri akal thikane lagaungi

Meera- nahi nahi mem sahab.. mujhe maaf kar de.. maine kuch nahi kiya

Roma- chup chap pehle es locket ka bata

Meera- ji ye bade thakur ne mujhe apni patlu banne pe diya tha...patlu matlab ki ..

Roma- ha pata hai sali.... Tu uski Rakhel thi na

Meera aankhon main aansu liye hua ha main sar hilati hai

Roma- jab tu bade thakur ki rakhel thi toh uska khoon q kiya

Meera- nahi nahi ... Maine nahi mara..

Ek bar phir se Roma ka hathoda wala hth uthata hai aur chatak se Meera k gaal ko laal kar deta hai

Meera ek bar phir se jamin pe padi dhul chatne lagti hai

Roma- sali abhi abhi samjhaya hai.. mujhe jhut nahi pasand

Roma gusse se Meera ki gardan ko pakad k uthane lagti hai ki tabhi ek car thik roma k pass aake rukti hai

Car ka agla darwaja khulta hai, jismain se chote Thakur yani thakur Bhanu Pratap Singh bahar nikalte hai

Chote Thakur- kiye kar rahi hai aap ? Ek masum aurat ko es tarah mar rahi hai.. sharam nahi aati aapko

Roma- main apna kaam kar rahi hu

Chote Thakur- aise jabardasti kisi ko marna aapko kaam lagta hai, choriye use

Itna keh k chote Thakur jaldi se Meera ko uthate hai aur uski saree ka pallu thik karte hai

Chote Thakur- tum jao Meera yaha se

Roma- ye kiya kar rahe hai... Aap jante hai ki ye...

Chote Thakur- mujhe abhi kuch nahi sunna... (Meera ki tarah dekhte hue) .... Tum jao yaha se

Meera jaldi se karib karib bhagti hui waha se nikal jati hai

Roma- (gusse se) ye kiya pagalpanti hai thakur sahab.. aapko pata bhi hai ki wo aapke pita ki khooni ho sakti hai

Chote Thakur- kiya koi saboot mila hai aapko

Roma- main bina saboot k kabhi kisi pe hath nahi uthati

Chote Thakur- dekhiye mujhe nahi lagta ek aurat ek thakur ko mar sakti hai

Roma- (hasti hui) lagta hai aapko aurat ki Shakti ka andaza nahi.. na jane kitne hi rakshak ko nari ne hi samapt kiya hai.... Lagta hai aapne sastra nahi pade

Chote Thakur- hum thakur hai.. aur ek aurat main itni himmat nahi ho sakti ki wo hume mar sake.... Chaliye ek pal k liye maan bhi lu ki pitaji ko Meera ne mara tha... Toh bhala ye bataiye ki kiya wo akeli mere pita ko mar k uska....... Ling.....kat k unhe talab main fek sakti hai

Chote Thakur ki baat sunke roma ko bhi lagta hai ki akeli Meera ye sab nahi kar sakti

Par use ye bhi yakin ho gaya tha ki in sab main kahi na kahi Meera judi jarur hai

Chote Thakur- choriye ye sab.. chaliye kahi aur baat karte hai .. aise road pe khade hoke baat karna sahi nahi hai

Phir dono hi car main baith k waha se nikal jate hai

Edhar Meera ek paid k piche chupi hui thi, wo roma aur thakur sahab ki sab baaten sun rahi thi

"Mujhe in sab main samil hi nahi hona chahiye tha, pata nahi kaise main uski baaton main aa gayi.. ab ...ab jaldi hi Ye inspector sab pata kar legi.. aur mujhe ....nahi nahi... Mujhe fasi nahi hogi..nahi nahi ....mujhe usse abhi baat karni hogi"

Meera buri tarah kanpti hui chal padti hai, wo ab bhi khud se baaten kar rahi thi

"Wo toh Bhagwan ki daya se mere pass chote Thakur ka wo raaz tha, warna aaj..... Main kaha fas gayi hu... Es lalach me mujhe kaha fasa diya hai....."

Phir waha se Meera apne ghar ki jagah gaon main kahi aur hi chal padi thi

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Kiski baaton main aa gayi hai Meera ?

Kon hai asli khiladi ?

Thakur ka khoon kisne kiya ?

Chote Thakur ka konsa raaz hai Meera k paas ?

Sawal badte ja rahe hai, par jawab apne time se hi milenge


Apne kimti suggestions aur idea bhejte raho, qki jaldi se es kahani se parda uthane wala hai


So, milte hai next update k sath

Till then by

--Ram


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Bhai ya sahil Sameer ki maa Rubina ka bhi thora flashback scene dalo us ka affairs wgara ka ak update main ap bola tha ka us ka boht logo sa chakkr tha to kuch scene dalo mujha to kafi interesting or exciting character laga ya bki ap behtar janta ho sirf is ak character ka liya mana first comment kiya ap ki story pa bki ap ki story ka liya to xf pr ata hu main
New Update post kar diya hai
 
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Extraordinary mujha kya lagta ha is thakur is chote gandu na hi pela ha bki waiting for your next mind blowing update
 
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