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Ab kya hoga yar story me, ek naya twist
Thanks for your lovely comment....
Next update posted on page no. 235....
Read & Enjoy....
Next update posted on page no. 235....
Read & Enjoy....
Ab kya hoga yar story me, ek naya twist
Story me dushman ki entry karwa rhe ho pandit ji
Magar romance ko gayab mat hone dena
Lovely emotional update.
Lagtaa hai Thakur ka Kutta piche lage gaya hai. Twist se jaldi hi pardaa uthana.....
waiting
Ab ye kaun aa gya........
Kahin se sarpanch k aadmi to nhi hai???
Bhai jaldi hii update de do ye phone pe bat kon kar raha hai kahi dukan hathiyane ki kosis to nahi kar rahe
Nice Update but Last me Suspense Chhod diya... Ab to bas Wait for Next Update
Bhai update kab aye ga
Greattt pandit bro. Such a mimd blowing update & your writing skills.
Dakshina ne apne dil ka haal vicky se kah diya. Usne sach hi to kaha ki uske bare me vicky ke family wale kya sochege. Sari situation ke bare me bata dene ke baad bhi un logo ke man me kahi na kahi ye baat bani hi rahegi and mujhe lagta hai ki agar is story me maa ke sath bhi relation dikhaya jayega to uski vajah yahi ho sakti hai ki wo dakshina ke bare me sochegi ki kaise uski umar ki aurat ne apni khushi ke liye vicky se relation bana liya. Anyways dekhte hain pandit ji kya karte hain.
Dakshina aur uski beti kiran se vicky ke kaise relation bane ye jaanne ki utsukta hai so flashback ka besabri se intjar hai bro.
Oh no ab ye last me kaun aa gaya. Ye kaun hai jo phone par baat kar raha tha andhere me and kiske bare me baat kar raha tha. Lagta hai ki story me khalnayak ki entry ho gai hai. Ye ek naya twist hai and iske bare me jaanne ki badi utsukta hai. Kaun ho sakta hai ye aadmi.
Agle update ka besabri se intjar hai pandit bro.
Waiting bhai