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Incest SAB KUCH JAYAZ HAI...

Bhai log ye story kaisi lag rahi hai....?

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Bilal jan

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Bhai plz update jaldi dia kary plz aaj kal to waisy carona virus ki waja sy sab free hy.
 

Mr. Pandit

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Bhai log....

Main dil se chaahta tha ki apni is story ko complete karu aur iske liye maine koshish bhi ki magar main ye achhi tarah samajh gaya hu ki yaha par readers writer ko mentally torture karte hain aur ek din aisa aa jata hai jab writer story ko bich me hi chhod kar chala jata hai....

Ye sach hai ki writer bina likhe nahi rah sakta. Uska dil o dimaag aur uske hath machalne lagte hain likhte ke liye. Ham mehnat karte hain magar uska uchit roop se fal nahi milta. Dhairya saahas ka path padhana bahut asaan hota hai. Khair koi baat nahi....

Kamdev bhai, is baar aap kuch nahi kahege mujhe. Kyo ki is baar aisa kuch hua hai jisse mujhe aapki baat samajh me nahi aayegi. Gussa sabko aata hai chaahe reader ho ya writer bas wahi baat hai....

Maine ye dusri id bana kar yaha ek nayi story is liye start ki thi ki shayad is baar halaat achhe honge aur readers writers ki mehnat ka uchit fal dege magar mera ye sochna shayad galat tha. Kuch likhne ke liye hath machalte the aur dilo dimaag baghawat karne lagta tha. Is liye dusre naam se aaya. Magar har baar ki tarah is baar bhi wahi haal dekhne ko mila....

Main apne dost bhaiyo se sirf yahi kahna chaahta hu ki kab samjhoge bhaya. Kab ahsaas hoga aap logo ko. Aap to apna rona dikha dete hain magar ham kise dikhaye aur use kaun samjhe.??? Main maanta hu ki yaha writers aur stories ki kami nahi hai magar dosto nyaay annyaay ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai....

Ab kabhi bhi kisi bhi id ya naam se story likhne nahi aauga yaha. Aapko jo achha lage wo kijiye. Mere dil ne jo kaha wo main kar raha hu. Gaali dena ho to wo bhi de dena. Magar ab bas alvida....!! :ciao:

Siraj Patel bhaya, sorry aapko fir se taklif de raha hu magar ye aapki marzi par hai. Thread chahe to close kar dijiye ya rahne dijiye. Your choice.... :dazed:
 

firefox420

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Bhai log....

Main dil se chaahta tha ki apni is story ko complete karu aur iske liye maine koshish bhi ki magar main ye achhi tarah samajh gaya hu ki yaha par readers writer ko mentally torture karte hain aur ek din aisa aa jata hai jab writer story ko bich me hi chhod kar chala jata hai....

Ye sach hai ki writer bina likhe nahi rah sakta. Uska dil o dimaag aur uske hath machalne lagte hain likhte ke liye. Ham mehnat karte hain magar uska uchit roop se fal nahi milta. Dhairya saahas ka path padhana bahut asaan hota hai. Khair koi baat nahi....

Kamdev bhai, is baar aap kuch nahi kahege mujhe. Kyo ki is baar aisa kuch hua hai jisse mujhe aapki baat samajh me nahi aayegi. Gussa sabko aata hai chaahe reader ho ya writer bas wahi baat hai....

Maine ye dusri id bana kar yaha ek nayi story is liye start ki thi ki shayad is baar halaat achhe honge aur readers writers ki mehnat ka uchit fal dege magar mera ye sochna shayad galat tha. Kuch likhne ke liye hath machalte the aur dilo dimaag baghawat karne lagta tha. Is liye dusre naam se aaya. Magar har baar ki tarah is baar bhi wahi haal dekhne ko mila....

Main apne dost bhaiyo se sirf yahi kahna chaahta hu ki kab samjhoge bhaya. Kab ahsaas hoga aap logo ko. Aap to apna rona dikha dete hain magar ham kise dikhaye aur use kaun samjhe.??? Main maanta hu ki yaha writers aur stories ki kami nahi hai magar dosto nyaay annyaay ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai....

Ab kabhi bhi kisi bhi id ya naam se story likhne nahi aauga yaha. Aapko jo achha lage wo kijiye. Mere dil ne jo kaha wo main kar raha hu. Gaali dena ho to wo bhi de dena. Magar ab bas alvida....!! :ciao:

Siraj Patel bhaya, sorry aapko fir se taklif de raha hu magar ye aapki marzi par hai. Thread chahe to close kar dijiye ya rahne dijiye. Your choice.... :dazed:


Dekho bhai .. Agar aapko story aage nahi badahani to wo aapki personal choice hai .. Na he uske liye koi aapko force kar sakta hai .. Aur sabse main baat kamdev99008 bhai to bilkul bhi nahi kahenge aapse iss baar .. Kyon ki jo writer bina baat ke bhaav khaate rehte hai .. Unki taraf to kamdev bhiya dekhte bhi nahi hai ...

Aur ye sach hai ki .. Koi bhi kaam karo usme criticize aur tarafdaari karne waale sab milenge .. Ab aage ki samajhdaari aapki ki aapko maturely act karna hai ya fir 5 saal ke bacche ki tarah drame dikhane hai .. Update doge to likes aur comment milenge .. Nahi to ghar par corona lockdown ke maje lo ...

Aur ye sab baate likhne waale aap pehle writer nahi ho .. Koi na koi writer ye alaap japta he rehta hai aaye din .. To bhai seedi baat hai kahani likhni hai to likho .. Nahi to apne ghar baitho .. Kyon ki hum readers bhi chutiya nahi hai .. Jo roz roz kisi na kisi ke chuttad chaat-te rahe .. Gudbye ...
 

kamdev99008

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Bhai log....

Main dil se chaahta tha ki apni is story ko complete karu aur iske liye maine koshish bhi ki magar main ye achhi tarah samajh gaya hu ki yaha par readers writer ko mentally torture karte hain aur ek din aisa aa jata hai jab writer story ko bich me hi chhod kar chala jata hai....

Ye sach hai ki writer bina likhe nahi rah sakta. Uska dil o dimaag aur uske hath machalne lagte hain likhte ke liye. Ham mehnat karte hain magar uska uchit roop se fal nahi milta. Dhairya saahas ka path padhana bahut asaan hota hai. Khair koi baat nahi....

Kamdev bhai, is baar aap kuch nahi kahege mujhe. Kyo ki is baar aisa kuch hua hai jisse mujhe aapki baat samajh me nahi aayegi. Gussa sabko aata hai chaahe reader ho ya writer bas wahi baat hai....

Maine ye dusri id bana kar yaha ek nayi story is liye start ki thi ki shayad is baar halaat achhe honge aur readers writers ki mehnat ka uchit fal dege magar mera ye sochna shayad galat tha. Kuch likhne ke liye hath machalte the aur dilo dimaag baghawat karne lagta tha. Is liye dusre naam se aaya. Magar har baar ki tarah is baar bhi wahi haal dekhne ko mila....

Main apne dost bhaiyo se sirf yahi kahna chaahta hu ki kab samjhoge bhaya. Kab ahsaas hoga aap logo ko. Aap to apna rona dikha dete hain magar ham kise dikhaye aur use kaun samjhe.??? Main maanta hu ki yaha writers aur stories ki kami nahi hai magar dosto nyaay annyaay ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai....

Ab kabhi bhi kisi bhi id ya naam se story likhne nahi aauga yaha. Aapko jo achha lage wo kijiye. Mere dil ne jo kaha wo main kar raha hu. Gaali dena ho to wo bhi de dena. Magar ab bas alvida....!! :ciao:

Siraj Patel bhaya, sorry aapko fir se taklif de raha hu magar ye aapki marzi par hai. Thread chahe to close kar dijiye ya rahne dijiye. Your choice.... :dazed:
Dekho bhai .. Agar aapko story aage nahi badahani to wo aapki personal choice hai .. Na he uske liye koi aapko force kar sakta hai .. Aur sabse main baat kamdev99008 bhai to bilkul bhi nahi kahenge aapse iss baar .. Kyon ki jo writer bina baat ke bhaav khaate rehte hai .. Unki taraf to kamdev bhiya dekhte bhi nahi hai ...

Aur ye sach hai ki .. Koi bhi kaam karo usme criticize aur tarafdaari karne waale sab milenge .. Ab aage ki samajhdaari aapki ki aapko maturely act karna hai ya fir 5 saal ke bacche ki tarah drame dikhane hai .. Update doge to likes aur comment milenge .. Nahi to ghar par corona lockdown ke maje lo ...

Aur ye sab baate likhne waale aap pehle writer nahi ho .. Koi na koi writer ye alaap japta he rehta hai aaye din .. To bhai seedi baat hai kahani likhni hai to likho .. Nahi to apne ghar baitho .. Kyon ki hum readers bhi chutiya nahi hai .. Jo roz roz kisi na kisi ke chuttad chaat-te rahe .. Gudbye ...
pandit ji aur Firefox bhai..... Apas me man maila mat karo..... Dosti aur pyar bar-bar nahi milte.... Jo mile use umr bhar banaye rakho

kahaniyan likhna padhna to ek jariya hai. ..lekhak apne man ki likhta hai...
pathak apne man ki padhte hain
lekin hamari apki mitrta isse badi hai

so cool down.... Kisi par jabardasti nahin... Jo man ko achchha lage... Karo
lekin... Pyar se
 

Harshit

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Bhai bahut gajab
Dekho bhai .. Agar aapko story aage nahi badahani to wo aapki personal choice hai .. Na he uske liye koi aapko force kar sakta hai .. Aur sabse main baat kamdev99008 bhai to bilkul bhi nahi kahenge aapse iss baar .. Kyon ki jo writer bina baat ke bhaav khaate rehte hai .. Unki taraf to kamdev bhiya dekhte bhi nahi hai ...

Aur ye sach hai ki .. Koi bhi kaam karo usme criticize aur tarafdaari karne waale sab milenge .. Ab aage ki samajhdaari aapki ki aapko maturely act karna hai ya fir 5 saal ke bacche ki tarah drame dikhane hai .. Update doge to likes aur comment milenge .. Nahi to ghar par corona lockdown ke maje lo ...

Aur ye sab baate likhne waale aap pehle writer nahi ho .. Koi na koi writer ye alaap japta he rehta hai aaye din .. To bhai seedi baat hai kahani likhni hai to likho .. Nahi to apne ghar baitho .. Kyon ki hum readers bhi chutiya nahi hai .. Jo roz roz kisi na kisi ke chuttad chaat-te rahe .. Gudbye ...
Bhai bahut gajab jawab diya bilkul mere man ki baat kah di aapne mai likhta to bahut jyada galat shabdon ka istemal karta pr aapne bilkul sahi kaha bhai readers sirf taarif hi kr sakte hain writers ki unhe shahad laga ke chatenge nhi. Writer kahani likhna shuru karte hain readers padhte hain pasand aati hai to tarif karte hain aur kabhi kabhi pasand nhi bhi aati tab bhi writer ki khushi ke liye unki tarif karte hain iska matlab ye thode na hai ki writer sir pe hi chadh jaenge.
 

Mr. Perfect

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Waahh Mr. Pandit bhai fantastic update______

Rachna ke sath bhi muh mitha kar liya vicky ne. Achha huwa maa ne rachna ko vicky ke sath hi kamre me rahne ki ijajat de di thi. Rachna ko apni maa ki chinta hai. Vicky bhi pata karna hai ki gaav me kya situation hai______

Kiran ko bhi ab sab kuch pata chal gaya hai. Idhar kusum ko bhi dakshina se sab kuch detail me janne ki jigyasa hai. Shayad ab flashback ka number aa gaya hai. Isi me kusum ko kiran ke relation ka bhi pata chal jayega. Main bas yahi kahuga pandit bhai ki flashback ko lamba mat khichna aur story ko jald hi present me le aana________

Waiting for the next update_______


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"Tum aise hi hasti muskurati raha karo kusum. Yakeen maano tumhe is tarah haste muskurate dekh kar meri rooh ko bada sukoon milta hai." Maine ye kaha to kusum ne meri taraf dhyaan se dekha fir aahista se mere seene me aa kar chhupak gayi. Ye to sone par suhaga wali baat thi. Duniya me sabse zyada jise main pyaar karta hu wo mere seene se lagi huyi thi. Isse badi khushi aur kya ho sakti thi mere liye.?

Tabhi baahar se kisi ne kamre ke darwaze ko halke se khatkhataya to kusum jaldi se mere seene se uthi aur apna huliya sahi karte huye darwaze ki taraf jane lagi to maine peeche se use halki awaaz de kar kaha.

"Aree ye kya baat huyi.? Kam se kam achhe se mera muh to meetha kar do." Maine ye kaha to kusum ekdam se palti aur muskurate huye meri taraf dekha uske baad usne ajeeb harkat ki. Wo mujhe jeebh dikha kar waapas palat gayi aur fir darwaza khol kar baahar nikal gayi. Main uski is harkat se pahle to hairaan hua uske baad muskura kar rah gaya.

Ab aage padhiye....
Ksum ke jane ke baad main abhi bhi is baat se hairaan tha ki kusum ne aisa kiya tha mere sath, yaani ki usne achanak hi uske hotho par kiss kar diya tha. Ye baat soch kar main andar se khush bhi ho raha tha ki kusum ne is silsile me kadam badha diya hai. Main to iske liye khud himmat hi nahi juta sakta tha.

Kamre me bed par leta main yahi sab soch raha tha aur man hi man khushi se muskuraye bhi ja raha tha. Abhi main muskura hi raha tha ki tabhi kamre me maa aa gayi. Unke peeche priya pooja aur rachna bhi thi. Maine dekha maa ke hatho me thaali thi. Main samajh gaya ki maa mere liye khana le kar aayi hain.

"Kya baat hai beta.? Kya soch kar itna muskura raha hai tu.?" Maa ne ye kaha to main ekdam se hadbada gaya aur fir khud ko samhaalte huye bola.
"Nahi to...kuch bhi to nahi maa. Main kaha muskura raha hu.?" Maine hadbadate huye ye kaha to maa ne muskurate huye kaha.

"Zyada mat soch beta. Ab chal tu bhi kuch kha le. Uske baad ham log bhi khayege." Maa ne ye kaha to maine hairaani se kaha.
"Kya aap logo ne khana nahi khaya abhi.?" Maine ye kaha to maa ne kaha.

"Maine to is liye nahi khaya kyo ki mera beta is haalat me bhukha leta hua tha. Jabki maine in logo se kaha bhi ki ye log dakshina bahan kiran aur kusum ke sath hi baith kar kha le magar in logo ne bhi tumhari vajah se hi nahi khaya. Khair chhod ab chal kha le." Maa ne ye sab kaha aur fir mujhe apne hatho se khilane lagi.

Meri dono bahne aur rachna mere paas hi khadi thi. Un teeno ke chehre khile huye the. Priya Pooja ki nazar jab bhi mujhse takrati to wo halke se muskura deti thi jabki rachna chup chaap hi khadi thi. Khair khana khilane ke baad maa ne thaali ko Pooja ke hath me pakda diya jise le kar wo kamre se baahar chali gayi. Idhar maa ne mujhe pani pilaya uske baad meri taraf dekhte huye kaha.

"Beta maine to socha tha ki raat me main tere paas hi kamre me rahugi taaki tera khayaal rakh saku. Magar rachna ne kaha ki wo khud tumhare sath kamre me rah jayegi aur tumhara khayaal rakhegi." Maa ne ye kaha to maine hairaani se rachna ki taraf dekha to usne halke se muskura kar apni nazre jhuka li. Tabhi meri nazar priya pooja par padi to wo mujhe aise muskurati nazar aayi jaise mujhse aankho ke isharo se puch rahi ho ki ab to aapke maze ho gaye Ji.

Mujhe samajh nahi aaya ki rachna ne iske liye maa se kaise kaha hoga aur maa ne bhi use kaise haan kah diya hoga. Khair jo bhi ho magar main to man hi man is baat se behad khush ho gaya tha. Mere andar ye soch kar hi romanch bhar gaya tha ki aaj raat rachna mere sath hi rahegi. Ham dono akele ek kamre me ek hi bed par soyenge. Tabhi mere man me khayaal aaya ki mujhe apne chehre ke bhaavo ko daba lena chahiye warna maa galat soch baithengi.

"Rachna tujhe dawa khila degi uske baad tu araam se jana. Ye nahi ki raat bhar tu is bechari ko baate kar kar ke pareshan karta rah jaye." Maa ne ye kaha to maine badi masoom si shakal bana kar halke se haan me apna sir hila diya. Uske baad maa sabko le kar kamre se baahar chali gayi. Unke jane ke baad main yahi sochne laga ki rachna aaj raat mere paas hi rahegi to kya hamare beech kuch aisa waisa ho sakta hai ya fir maa ke kahe anusaar mujhe dawa kha kar so jana padega.? Khair dekhte hain kya hota hai. Main rachna ke aane ka besabri se intzaar karne laga tha.

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Udhar dakshina kiran aur kusum ek hi kamre me bed par baithi baate kar rahi thi. Is beech kiran ko bhi ye pata chal gaya tha ki vicky ki shadi rachna ke sath sath uski khud ki bahno se bhi honi hai. Kiran ye baat jaan kar bahut zyada hairaan huyi thi. Use yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki aisa bhi ho sakta hai. Dakshina ne use pyaar se aur bade tarike se sab kuch bataya aur samjhaya bhi tha. Sab kuch jaanne samajhne ke baad kiran ko bhi kusum ke rishte aur uski apne hi bhai ke sath shadi hone ki baat achhi bhi lagi.

Kusum ne mauka dekh kar dakshina se kaha ki wo use apne aur vicky ke bare me wo sab kuch bataye jo batane ke liye usne wada kiya tha. Kusum ki is baat se dakshina ne usse kaha ki wo use zarur batayegi lekin
aaj nahi. Aaj use thakaan ki vajah se neend aa rahi hai. Wo use kal se sab kuch thoda thoda karke batana shuru karegi. Dakshina ki is baat se kusum ne kaha thik hai. Uske baad kusum ek alag kamre me sone chali gayi. Jabki kiran apni maa ke sath hi uske kamre me rahi.

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Mujhe zyada der intzaar nahi karna pada. Rachna jald hi khana kha kar mere kamre me aa gayi. Uske hath me paani se bhara ek mug tha jise usne kamre me rakhe ek chhote se table par rakh diya. Uske baad usne mujhe dawa di jise maine chup chaap kha li. Kamre me ek hi bed tha. Bed lamba chauda tha. Jisme do kya teen log bhi bade araam se let sakte the. Maine socha ki ek aisa bed banwana padega jisme paanch log araam se let sake. Aakhir shadi ke baad meri chaaro biwiya bhi to mere sath hi bed par letengi. :hehe:

Dawa kha ke jaise hi main fursat hua to kamre me maa aur priya pooja fir se aa gayi. Maa ne rachna se puchha ki usne mujhe dawa khila di ki nahi to usne bataya ki haan abhi abhi wo mujhe dawa de ke fursat huyi hai. Rachna ki baat sun kar maa ne ek baar fir mujhe araam se so jane ki hidayat di aur fir priya pooja ko le ke kamre se baahar chali gayi. Unke jane ke baad rachna ne kamre ka darwaza andar se band kar diya.

Mere dil ki dhadkane fir se badhne lagi thi ye soch kar ki ab kamre me main aur rachna akele hi hain. Mere man me kayi sare khayaal aane lage the. Main sochne laga ki kya sach me hamare bich kuch ho sakta hai ya fir maa ki hidayat ke anusaar hame so jana hoga. Udhar darwaza band karne ke baad rachna palti aur meri taraf dekhne lagi. Uske chehre par sharm ki halki si surkhi dikhi mujhe. Shayad uske man me bhi meri tarah kuch aise hi khayaal ubhare honge. Khair jab maine dekha ki wo chup chaap mujhe hi dekh rahi hai to maine kaha.

"Kya hua sona nahi hai kya tumhe.? Tumne suna nahi kya maa kya kah kar gayi hain hame.?" Maine ye kaha to rachna ke hotho par muskaan fail gayi aur wo dhire dhire chal kar bed ke dusri taraf aayi aur aahista se bed ke kinare par baith gayi.

"Aapko pata hai jiwan me pahli baar main kisi mard ke sath kamre me is tarah akeli raat bhar rahne wali hu." Rachna ne meri taraf dekh kar halke se sharmate huye ye kaha to maine kaha.

"Haan main samajh sakta hu magar jiwan me har kaam pahli baar se hi shuru hota hai aur waise bhi main koi gair mard to hu nahi. Tumhara hone wala pati hi hu. Is liye mere sath yaha par tumhe koi problem nahi hogi." Maine ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.

"Haan main janti hu magar hone wale pati ke sath bhi to shadi ke pahle is tarah koi hone wali biwi nahi rahti na." Rachna ne muskura kar ye kaha to main bhi muskurate aur fir bola.

"Aaj kal sab chalta yaar aur ye to achhi baat hai na ki shadi ke pahle hi hame ek dusre ke sath sone ka mauka mil raha hai. Ab ham jo chaahe wo kar sakte hain." Maine muskurate huye ye kaha to rachna ki aankhe fail gayi. Fir wo muskurate huye boli.

"Jo chaahe wo kar sakte hain se kya matlab hai aapka.?" Rachna ne hairani se ye puchha to maine kaha.
"Aree mera matlab hai ki ham ek dusre se jaisi chaahe waisi baat kar sakte hain. Sabke rahte ham kaha koi baat kar pa rahe the.?" Maine baat ko samhaalte huye ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.

"Achha Ji...baate banana koi aapse sikhe. Main sab samajhti hu aapki baate. Mujhe aap ullu mat samajhiye." Rachna ne muskurate huye ye kaha to maine haste huye kaha.

"Chalo fir to ye achhi baat hi hai ki tum sab samajhti ho. Ab kam se kam mujhe koi baat tumhe samjhani to nahi padegi." Maine ye kaha to rachna sharma ke boli.
"Zyada baate na banaiye aur chup chaap so jaiye. Suna hai na aapne maa ne kya kaha tha.?" Rachna ne ye kaha to maine aah si bharte huye kaha.

"Haan suna hai yaar. Magar ab bhala hone wali biwi ke sath ek hi bed par neend kaise aa jayegi mujhe.? Mere man me to bade bade aur meethe meethe laddu foot rahe hain. Pata nahi kitni der lagegi unhe khane me." Maine ye kaha to rachna khilkhila kar hasne lagi, fir boli.

"Man ke laddu man me hi kha lijiye janaab. Aap ye mat bhuliye ki abhi hamari shadi nahi huyi hai aur ye bhi
bhuliye ki ham teeno bahno ki ichchha kya hai." Rachna ne muskurate huye ye kaha to maine kaha.

"Yaar ye to mujh masoom par atyachaar karne wali baat ho gayi." Maine bura sa muh banate huye ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.
"Aisa nahi hai pati dev. Bas wakt ka intzaar kijiye. Uske baad jitne chaahe utne laddu sach much me kha lijiyega." Rachna ne ye kaha to main kuch der uski taraf dekhta raha fir bola.

"Shadi ke baad jo hota hai uski baat nahi kar raha hu main, balki main to muh mitha karne wale laddu ki baat kar raha hu. Tumne kaha tha ki jab tak main kusum se muh mitha nahi karuga tab tak tum me se koi shuruaat nahi karega. Is liye maine aaj kusum se muh mitha kar liya hai. Haan ye alag baat hai ki usme mera apna koi hath nahi tha balki waisa kusum ne hi kiya tha, wo bhi achanak se. Mujhe to kuch samajh hi nahi aaya tha ki ye ek hi pal me kya ho gaya hai." Maine ye sab kaha to rachna ne hairani se meri taraf dekhte huye kaha.

"Kya sach kah rahe hain aap.?" Rachna ne ye kaha to maine kaha.
"Aur kya main jhuth bol raha hu.?" Maine ye kaha to rachna kuch pal mujhe dekhti rahi fir muskurate huye boli.

"Matlab didi ne khud kiya tha aisa.?" Rachna ko shayad abhi bhi yakeen nahi ho raha tha.
"Tum bhi had karti ho dear. Agar yakeen nahi hai to kal khud hi apni didi se puchh lena." Maine ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.

"Didi to badi tez nikli. Waise maine to aapse pahle hi kaha tha ki wo ab kuch nahi kahengi. Agar aap pahal karenge to wo virodh nahi balki aapka sath hi dengi." Rachna ne ye kaha to maine kaha.

"Ab baate band karo aur jaldi se mera muh mitha karaao. Haye bahut wakt ho gaya tumhare hotho ka shahad chakhe huye. Main us ahsaas ko fir se taro taza karna chahta hu meri jaan. Main dekhna chaahta hu ki kya aaj bhi tumhare hotho me wahi shahad jaisi mithaas hai ya wakt ke sath usme aur bhi zyada mithapan aa gaya hai.?" Maine ye kaha to rachna buri tarah sharma gayi. Sharm se uske kaan tak laal pad gaye.

"Ye meri bebasi hai ki main khud kuch kar nahi sakta warna agar main sahi salamat hota to is wakt tumhe apni baaho me le chuka hota." Maine ye kaha to rachna ne muskurate huye kaha.

"Achha Ji...bade utaawle ho rahe hain aap." Rachna ne ye kaha to maine kaha.
"Jiski itni sundar sundar aur Mithi Mithi biwiya ho wo sala utawla kaise na hoga. Ab chhodo bhi ye baate aur ab aa jaao na." Maine ye kaha to rachna sharam se laal chehra liye dekhti rahi meri taraf.

Main sach me ab bahut zyada utaawla ho raha tha. Agar mere hath pair sahi salamat hote to is wakt main rachna ko apne neeche leta chuka hota aur use pyaar kar raha hota. Khair maine dekha ki rachna mujhe kuch der tak aise hi dekhti rahi aur fir jab maine fir se use apni taraf aane ko kaha to wo sabse pahle bed par thik se aayi aur sharmate huye meri taraf khisakne lagi.

Meri dhadkane badh chali thi. Main chaah raha tha ki rachna jaldi se mere kareeb aa jaye aur apne hotho ko mere hotho se sata de. Aakhir kuch hi palo me wo mere ekdam paas aa gayi. Main usi ki taraf dekh raha tha. Is wakt uske chehre par gajab ka noor tha jo sharm ki halki chaadar se doobta ja raha tha.

"Achha ek baat bataiye. Didi ne kaise kiya tha.?" Rachna ne sharmate huye dhire se ye puchha to maine kaha.
"Bataya to tha tumhe ki mujhe kuch samajh hi nahi aaya tha. Usne achanak se hi kiya tha aur jab tak mujhe kuch samajh aata wo door ho gayi thi." Maine ye kaha to rachna muskura padi.

"To fir thik hai. Main bhi waisa hi karugi." Rachna ne ye kaha to maine kaha.
"Yaar tum kya ab meri jaan lene par tul gayi ho.? Kaisi biwi ho yaar jo apne hone wale pati ko itna tadpa rahi ho." Maine ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.

"Aapne to itne par hi gila kar diya jabki sochiye main to pichhle paanch saalo se aapke liye tadap rahi thi. Mujhe to koi ummid hi nahi rah gayi thi ki aap mujhe miloge kabhi." Rachna ne sahsa gambheer hoke ye kaha to maine pyaar se kaha.

"Haan main samajhta hu dear magar isme mera bhi to koi dosh nahi hai. Mujhe bhala kaha pata tha ki mere liye tumhare man me kya ho sakta hai. Khair ab to ham mil
gaye hain na to pichhli sab buri yaade bhula do aur ek naye sire se naya itihaas khud apne hath se likho." Maine ye kaha to rachna meri taraf dekhti rahi.

Main khud bhi uski gahri aankho me dekh raha tha. Tabhi wo mere chehre ki taraf jhukne lagi. Main samajh gaya ki ab muh mitha karne ka wakt aane wala hai. Thodi hi der me rachna ne apne rasile hotho ko mere hotho par aahista se rakh diya. Ham dono ke hi jismo me ek mithi si jhurjhuri daudti chali gayi.

Rachna ke aisa karte hi meri aankhe maze ke ahsaas se band ho gayi thi. Tabhi rachna ne mere hotho par kiss kiya aur fir mere nichle hoth ko apne hotho me daba liya. Meri rango me daudte huye lahu me ekdam se ubaal aane laga. Mere pure jisam me romanch ki lahar daudne lagi. Rachna ko apni aagosh me lene ke liye mere dono hath fadak uthe magar dono me plaster chadha hua tha is liye main kuch kar nahi sakta tha. Mera hath upar to uth jata magar main use apni baaho me jakad nahi sakta tha.

Udhar rachna dhire dhire mere nichle hoth ko apne hotho me dabaye use chusne lagi thi. Uski naak se nikalti garm garm saanse mere muh aur naak ke sath sath chehre par bhi garmi ka ahsaas Kara rahi thi. Mujhse bardaast na hua to maine bhi muh khol kar rachna ke nichle hoth ko apne hotho me daba liya aur use chusne laga. Mere jisam me daudti huyi maze ki lahar sansanaati huyi seedha mere neeche mere lund aur andkosho par pahuch gayi. Mere nichle bhaag me badi tezi se jhurjhuri hone lagi aur fir kuch hi palo me chhote nawaab apne asal roop me aa gaye.

Main to leta hua tha magar rachna mere upar jhuki huyi thi is liye uski saanse jald hi bhaari ho gayi. Tez tez aati garm saanse mere chehre se takra rahi thi. Main Puri shiddat se rachna ke nichle hoth ko choos raha tha. Mera dil chahta tha ki main use isse bhi achhe tarike se pyaar karu magar main aur kuch kar nahi sakta tha.

Kuch hi der me rachna ki saanse jab ukhadne lagi to wo aahista se mere upar se hat kar thoda door ho gayi aur tez tez saanse lene lagi. Uska chehra ekdam se laal surkh pad gaya tha. Jaise hi ham dono ki nazre ek dusre se mili to rachna ne sharma kar apni nazre jhuka li. Mujhe us par bahut pyaar aa raha tha magar main khud kuch kar pane me asmarth tha.

"Sach me dear. Tumhare hoth to pahle se bhi zyada mithe ho gaye hain. Aisa lagta hai jaise bas chusta hi rahu." Maine muskurate huye ye kaha to rachna ne sharmate huye kaha.
"Aapke hoth bhi to pahle se zyada mithe ho gaye hain." Rachna ne ye kaha to maine kaha.

"Bas ek hi baat ka malaal hai dear ki mere hath kuch kar sakne me asmarth hain." Maine ye kaha to rachna ne muskurate huye kaha.
"Kyo aapko hatho se ab kya kaam karna hai.?" Rachna ne ye puchha to maine muskurate huye kaha.

"Wahi jo is situation me sab karte hain. Kya tumhe pata nahi hai.?" Maine muskurate huye ye kaha to rachna ne sharmate huye kaha.
"Sach me yaha rah kar bahut bigad gaye hain aap." Rachna ne ye kaha to maine kaha.

"Yaha rahne se hi to sudhra hu yaar. Warna tumhe to pata hai ki main khud kuch karne ya kuch kahne ki pahal karne se bahut sharmata tha pahle." Maine ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.

"To iska matlab yaha kuch aisa hua hai jiski vajah se aap pahle jaise sharmile nahi rahe.?" Rachna ne ye kaha to meri aankho ke saamne ekdam se dakshina aur kiran ka chehra naach gaya. Itni hi nahi un dono ke sath bitaya hua sab kuch naach gaya. Idhar mujhe socho me gum hote dekh rachna ne kaha.

"Kya hua kaha kho gaye aap.? Kya sach me yaha aisa kuch hua hai.?" Rachna ne muskurate huye ye kaha to maine kaha.
"Aur agar main ye kahu ki haan hua hai to kya kahogi tum.?" Maine ye kaha to rachna mujhe kuch palo tak dekhti rahi uske baad boli.

"Main yahi kahugi ki mujhe usse koi fark nahi padta." Rachna ne sapaat lahje me ye kaha to maine hairaani se kaha.
"Kya sach me.? Magar kyo dear.?" Maine ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.

"Kya aapko lagta hai dusri koi bhi baat isse bhi badi ho sakti hai ki aapki shadi aapki hi sagi bahno ke sath honi hai.? Is liye agar aapne yaha par pichhle paanch saalo me kisi ke sath
kuch aisa waisa kiya bhi hai to kam se kam mujhe aapki is baat se koi fark nahi padna chahiye. Main to bas isi baat se behad khush hu ki jise maine toot kar chaha aur jiske milne ki mujhe zara bhi ummid nahi rah gayi thi wo mujhe hamesha ke liye mil gaya hai. Aaj mere paas aap hain didi hain..meri do pyari pyari bahne hain aur sabse badi baat maa hain jo mujhe apni hi betiyo ki tarah pyaar karti hain. Itna kuch mere paas hone ke baad bhi agar mujhe kisi baat se fark pad jaye to ye mere liye murkhta wali baat hogi na pati dev.?" Rachna ne ye sab kaha to main uski taraf aashcharya se dekhta rah gaya.

Main hairaan tha ki rachna itna kuch sochti hai aur kisi bhi dusri badi baat ko wo itni asaani se jazb karne ki koovat rakhti hai. Ye uski samajhdaari thi ya uska sachcha prem.? Mere man me sawaal ubhra ki kya mujhe rachna se dakshina aur uski beti ke sath apne rishte ke bare me bata dena chahiye.? Is bare me pata chalne se jisse mujhe sabse zyada dar tha use bhi ab pata hai aur dakshina use aaj ya kal me sab kuch batane bhi wali hai.

Rachna ek samajhdaari ladki hai aur jis tarah se usne abhi ye sab kaha to usse mujhe yahi uchit laga ki use apne kisi bhi raaz se mahroom nahi rakhna chahiye. Aakhir wo meri hone wali biwi hai. Pati patni ke beech kisi aise raaz ko raaz nahi rahna chahiye jiske bare me baad me pata chalne par rishto me khatarnaak roop se daraar aa jaye. Halaaki is bare me maa ko pata chalna bhi zaruri hai magar maa se is baare me batane ki kisi me bhi himmat nahi ho sakti. Abhi main ye sab soch hi raha tha ki tabhi rachna ki awaaz mere kaano se takraayi to main hakikat ki duniya me aa gaya.

"Khair jane dijiye. Achha aapse ek baat karni hai." Rachna ne ye kaha to maine kaha.
"Haan kaho." Maine ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.
"Ham yaha jab se aaye hain tab se maine ek hi baar phone par apni maa se baat ki hai. Pata nahi ab wo kaisi hongi.? Pita ji kaise honge.? Bhaiya bhabhi kaise honge.? Us baar maa ne bas yahi kaha tha ki pita ji hospital me hain aur gaav me unke bare me kayi tarah ki log baate karte hain. Magar ab to shayad pita Ji ghar aa gaye honge. Mujhe is baat ki chinta hai ki jab unhe mere bare me ye pata chala hoga ki main ghar chhod kar aapke sath kahi chali gayi hu to unhone kya kiya hoga.? Mujhe yakeen hai ki unhone mere sath sath aap sabki khoj me apne aadmiyo ko laga diya hoga. Aur agar unhe kahi se ye pata chal gaya hoga ki mujhe ghar se nikaal kar aapke sath bhejne me maa ka hath tha to wo jane maa ke sath kaisa bartaav kiye honge.? Main do teen din se yahi sab sach soch kar pareshaan ho rahi hu. Pahle bhi socha tha magar aapki haalat aisi hone ki vajah se maine is bare me aapse ya maa se baat karna uchit nahi samjha tha." Rachna ne ye sab kaha to mujhe bhi gaav me sabka dhyaan aaya.

"Tum bhi had karti ho dear. Tumhe apni maa se baat kar lena chahiye tha. Iske liye tumhe kisi se puchne ki ya ijazat lene ki zarurat hi nahi hai. Chalo abhi maa Ji ko phone lagaao aur unse baat karo." Maine ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.

"Ab to raat ke gyaarah se bhi upar ka time ho gaya hai. Aap to jante hain gaav me sab log aath nau baje tak kha pi kar sone lag jate hain. Ab kal din me hi kisi wakt maa se baat karugi." Rachna ne ye kaha to maine kaha.

"Thik hai magar baat zarur kar lena. Khair ab aage ka kya irada hai.?" Maine halke se muskura kar ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.
"Matlab.?" Rachna ko shayad samajh nahi aaya to maine kaha.
"Aree bhai abhi aur muh mitha karna hai ya chup chaap so jana hai.?" Maine ye kaha to rachna ne sharm se muskurate huye kaha.

"Aaj ke liye kya itna kafi nahi hai.? Waise bhi is haalat me na aapko achhe se maza aayega aur na hi...." Rachna bolte bolte ruk gayi to maine muskurate huye kaha.
"Ohh ye to sahi kaha yaar tumne. Iske liye zaruri hai ki mere dono hath sahi salamat ho." Maine ye kaha to rachna has padi.

Khair uske baad hamne ek baar fir se ek dusre ke hotho ko chuma chusa aur fir sone lage. Rachna mere se sat kar hi leti huyi thi. Uske hotho par muskaan khili huyi thi. Shayad wo kamre
me akele mere sath ek hi bed par letne se khushi mahoos kar rahi thi.


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Ab ye kya hai pandit bhai. Is sab ka kya matlab hai. Bhai ham sab support kar to rahe hain. Jise story pasand aati hai wo like kar raha hai. Rahi baat comment ya review ki to iske liye koi kisi ko force nahi kar sakta______

Chalo is baat se ye to pata chal gaya ki ek aur writer un writers ki tarah hataash ho kar khud ko shaheed kar baitha jo ye samajhte hain ki incomplete story ke peeche sirf readers responsible hain. Aur ye baat puri tarah bhale hi nahi lekin kuch to sach hai hi________

Pandit bhai mood badle to laut aana baaki ye aapki choice ki baat hai. Take care______


Bhai log....

Main dil se chaahta tha ki apni is story ko complete karu aur iske liye maine koshish bhi ki magar main ye achhi tarah samajh gaya hu ki yaha par readers writer ko mentally torture karte hain aur ek din aisa aa jata hai jab writer story ko bich me hi chhod kar chala jata hai....

Ye sach hai ki writer bina likhe nahi rah sakta. Uska dil o dimaag aur uske hath machalne lagte hain likhte ke liye. Ham mehnat karte hain magar uska uchit roop se fal nahi milta. Dhairya saahas ka path padhana bahut asaan hota hai. Khair koi baat nahi....

Kamdev bhai, is baar aap kuch nahi kahege mujhe. Kyo ki is baar aisa kuch hua hai jisse mujhe aapki baat samajh me nahi aayegi. Gussa sabko aata hai chaahe reader ho ya writer bas wahi baat hai....

Maine ye dusri id bana kar yaha ek nayi story is liye start ki thi ki shayad is baar halaat achhe honge aur readers writers ki mehnat ka uchit fal dege magar mera ye sochna shayad galat tha. Kuch likhne ke liye hath machalte the aur dilo dimaag baghawat karne lagta tha. Is liye dusre naam se aaya. Magar har baar ki tarah is baar bhi wahi haal dekhne ko mila....

Main apne dost bhaiyo se sirf yahi kahna chaahta hu ki kab samjhoge bhaya. Kab ahsaas hoga aap logo ko. Aap to apna rona dikha dete hain magar ham kise dikhaye aur use kaun samjhe.??? Main maanta hu ki yaha writers aur stories ki kami nahi hai magar dosto nyaay annyaay ki bhi koi cheez hoti hai....

Ab kabhi bhi kisi bhi id ya naam se story likhne nahi aauga yaha. Aapko jo achha lage wo kijiye. Mere dil ne jo kaha wo main kar raha hu. Gaali dena ho to wo bhi de dena. Magar ab bas alvida....!! :ciao:

Siraj Patel bhaya, sorry aapko fir se taklif de raha hu magar ye aapki marzi par hai. Thread chahe to close kar dijiye ya rahne dijiye. Your choice.... :dazed:
 

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"Tum aise hi hasti muskurati raha karo kusum. Yakeen maano tumhe is tarah haste muskurate dekh kar meri rooh ko bada sukoon milta hai." Maine ye kaha to kusum ne meri taraf dhyaan se dekha fir aahista se mere seene me aa kar chhupak gayi. Ye to sone par suhaga wali baat thi. Duniya me sabse zyada jise main pyaar karta hu wo mere seene se lagi huyi thi. Isse badi khushi aur kya ho sakti thi mere liye.?

Tabhi baahar se kisi ne kamre ke darwaze ko halke se khatkhataya to kusum jaldi se mere seene se uthi aur apna huliya sahi karte huye darwaze ki taraf jane lagi to maine peeche se use halki awaaz de kar kaha.

"Aree ye kya baat huyi.? Kam se kam achhe se mera muh to meetha kar do." Maine ye kaha to kusum ekdam se palti aur muskurate huye meri taraf dekha uske baad usne ajeeb harkat ki. Wo mujhe jeebh dikha kar waapas palat gayi aur fir darwaza khol kar baahar nikal gayi. Main uski is harkat se pahle to hairaan hua uske baad muskura kar rah gaya.

Ab aage padhiye....
Ksum ke jane ke baad main abhi bhi is baat se hairaan tha ki kusum ne aisa kiya tha mere sath, yaani ki usne achanak hi uske hotho par kiss kar diya tha. Ye baat soch kar main andar se khush bhi ho raha tha ki kusum ne is silsile me kadam badha diya hai. Main to iske liye khud himmat hi nahi juta sakta tha.

Kamre me bed par leta main yahi sab soch raha tha aur man hi man khushi se muskuraye bhi ja raha tha. Abhi main muskura hi raha tha ki tabhi kamre me maa aa gayi. Unke peeche priya pooja aur rachna bhi thi. Maine dekha maa ke hatho me thaali thi. Main samajh gaya ki maa mere liye khana le kar aayi hain.

"Kya baat hai beta.? Kya soch kar itna muskura raha hai tu.?" Maa ne ye kaha to main ekdam se hadbada gaya aur fir khud ko samhaalte huye bola.
"Nahi to...kuch bhi to nahi maa. Main kaha muskura raha hu.?" Maine hadbadate huye ye kaha to maa ne muskurate huye kaha.

"Zyada mat soch beta. Ab chal tu bhi kuch kha le. Uske baad ham log bhi khayege." Maa ne ye kaha to maine hairaani se kaha.
"Kya aap logo ne khana nahi khaya abhi.?" Maine ye kaha to maa ne kaha.

"Maine to is liye nahi khaya kyo ki mera beta is haalat me bhukha leta hua tha. Jabki maine in logo se kaha bhi ki ye log dakshina bahan kiran aur kusum ke sath hi baith kar kha le magar in logo ne bhi tumhari vajah se hi nahi khaya. Khair chhod ab chal kha le." Maa ne ye sab kaha aur fir mujhe apne hatho se khilane lagi.

Meri dono bahne aur rachna mere paas hi khadi thi. Un teeno ke chehre khile huye the. Priya Pooja ki nazar jab bhi mujhse takrati to wo halke se muskura deti thi jabki rachna chup chaap hi khadi thi. Khair khana khilane ke baad maa ne thaali ko Pooja ke hath me pakda diya jise le kar wo kamre se baahar chali gayi. Idhar maa ne mujhe pani pilaya uske baad meri taraf dekhte huye kaha.

"Beta maine to socha tha ki raat me main tere paas hi kamre me rahugi taaki tera khayaal rakh saku. Magar rachna ne kaha ki wo khud tumhare sath kamre me rah jayegi aur tumhara khayaal rakhegi." Maa ne ye kaha to maine hairaani se rachna ki taraf dekha to usne halke se muskura kar apni nazre jhuka li. Tabhi meri nazar priya pooja par padi to wo mujhe aise muskurati nazar aayi jaise mujhse aankho ke isharo se puch rahi ho ki ab to aapke maze ho gaye Ji.

Mujhe samajh nahi aaya ki rachna ne iske liye maa se kaise kaha hoga aur maa ne bhi use kaise haan kah diya hoga. Khair jo bhi ho magar main to man hi man is baat se behad khush ho gaya tha. Mere andar ye soch kar hi romanch bhar gaya tha ki aaj raat rachna mere sath hi rahegi. Ham dono akele ek kamre me ek hi bed par soyenge. Tabhi mere man me khayaal aaya ki mujhe apne chehre ke bhaavo ko daba lena chahiye warna maa galat soch baithengi.

"Rachna tujhe dawa khila degi uske baad tu araam se jana. Ye nahi ki raat bhar tu is bechari ko baate kar kar ke pareshan karta rah jaye." Maa ne ye kaha to maine badi masoom si shakal bana kar halke se haan me apna sir hila diya. Uske baad maa sabko le kar kamre se baahar chali gayi. Unke jane ke baad main yahi sochne laga ki rachna aaj raat mere paas hi rahegi to kya hamare beech kuch aisa waisa ho sakta hai ya fir maa ke kahe anusaar mujhe dawa kha kar so jana padega.? Khair dekhte hain kya hota hai. Main rachna ke aane ka besabri se intzaar karne laga tha.

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Udhar dakshina kiran aur kusum ek hi kamre me bed par baithi baate kar rahi thi. Is beech kiran ko bhi ye pata chal gaya tha ki vicky ki shadi rachna ke sath sath uski khud ki bahno se bhi honi hai. Kiran ye baat jaan kar bahut zyada hairaan huyi thi. Use yakeen nahi ho raha tha ki aisa bhi ho sakta hai. Dakshina ne use pyaar se aur bade tarike se sab kuch bataya aur samjhaya bhi tha. Sab kuch jaanne samajhne ke baad kiran ko bhi kusum ke rishte aur uski apne hi bhai ke sath shadi hone ki baat achhi bhi lagi.

Kusum ne mauka dekh kar dakshina se kaha ki wo use apne aur vicky ke bare me wo sab kuch bataye jo batane ke liye usne wada kiya tha. Kusum ki is baat se dakshina ne usse kaha ki wo use zarur batayegi lekin
aaj nahi. Aaj use thakaan ki vajah se neend aa rahi hai. Wo use kal se sab kuch thoda thoda karke batana shuru karegi. Dakshina ki is baat se kusum ne kaha thik hai. Uske baad kusum ek alag kamre me sone chali gayi. Jabki kiran apni maa ke sath hi uske kamre me rahi.

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Mujhe zyada der intzaar nahi karna pada. Rachna jald hi khana kha kar mere kamre me aa gayi. Uske hath me paani se bhara ek mug tha jise usne kamre me rakhe ek chhote se table par rakh diya. Uske baad usne mujhe dawa di jise maine chup chaap kha li. Kamre me ek hi bed tha. Bed lamba chauda tha. Jisme do kya teen log bhi bade araam se let sakte the. Maine socha ki ek aisa bed banwana padega jisme paanch log araam se let sake. Aakhir shadi ke baad meri chaaro biwiya bhi to mere sath hi bed par letengi. :hehe:

Dawa kha ke jaise hi main fursat hua to kamre me maa aur priya pooja fir se aa gayi. Maa ne rachna se puchha ki usne mujhe dawa khila di ki nahi to usne bataya ki haan abhi abhi wo mujhe dawa de ke fursat huyi hai. Rachna ki baat sun kar maa ne ek baar fir mujhe araam se so jane ki hidayat di aur fir priya pooja ko le ke kamre se baahar chali gayi. Unke jane ke baad rachna ne kamre ka darwaza andar se band kar diya.

Mere dil ki dhadkane fir se badhne lagi thi ye soch kar ki ab kamre me main aur rachna akele hi hain. Mere man me kayi sare khayaal aane lage the. Main sochne laga ki kya sach me hamare bich kuch ho sakta hai ya fir maa ki hidayat ke anusaar hame so jana hoga. Udhar darwaza band karne ke baad rachna palti aur meri taraf dekhne lagi. Uske chehre par sharm ki halki si surkhi dikhi mujhe. Shayad uske man me bhi meri tarah kuch aise hi khayaal ubhare honge. Khair jab maine dekha ki wo chup chaap mujhe hi dekh rahi hai to maine kaha.

"Kya hua sona nahi hai kya tumhe.? Tumne suna nahi kya maa kya kah kar gayi hain hame.?" Maine ye kaha to rachna ke hotho par muskaan fail gayi aur wo dhire dhire chal kar bed ke dusri taraf aayi aur aahista se bed ke kinare par baith gayi.

"Aapko pata hai jiwan me pahli baar main kisi mard ke sath kamre me is tarah akeli raat bhar rahne wali hu." Rachna ne meri taraf dekh kar halke se sharmate huye ye kaha to maine kaha.

"Haan main samajh sakta hu magar jiwan me har kaam pahli baar se hi shuru hota hai aur waise bhi main koi gair mard to hu nahi. Tumhara hone wala pati hi hu. Is liye mere sath yaha par tumhe koi problem nahi hogi." Maine ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.

"Haan main janti hu magar hone wale pati ke sath bhi to shadi ke pahle is tarah koi hone wali biwi nahi rahti na." Rachna ne muskura kar ye kaha to main bhi muskurate aur fir bola.

"Aaj kal sab chalta yaar aur ye to achhi baat hai na ki shadi ke pahle hi hame ek dusre ke sath sone ka mauka mil raha hai. Ab ham jo chaahe wo kar sakte hain." Maine muskurate huye ye kaha to rachna ki aankhe fail gayi. Fir wo muskurate huye boli.

"Jo chaahe wo kar sakte hain se kya matlab hai aapka.?" Rachna ne hairani se ye puchha to maine kaha.
"Aree mera matlab hai ki ham ek dusre se jaisi chaahe waisi baat kar sakte hain. Sabke rahte ham kaha koi baat kar pa rahe the.?" Maine baat ko samhaalte huye ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.

"Achha Ji...baate banana koi aapse sikhe. Main sab samajhti hu aapki baate. Mujhe aap ullu mat samajhiye." Rachna ne muskurate huye ye kaha to maine haste huye kaha.

"Chalo fir to ye achhi baat hi hai ki tum sab samajhti ho. Ab kam se kam mujhe koi baat tumhe samjhani to nahi padegi." Maine ye kaha to rachna sharma ke boli.
"Zyada baate na banaiye aur chup chaap so jaiye. Suna hai na aapne maa ne kya kaha tha.?" Rachna ne ye kaha to maine aah si bharte huye kaha.

"Haan suna hai yaar. Magar ab bhala hone wali biwi ke sath ek hi bed par neend kaise aa jayegi mujhe.? Mere man me to bade bade aur meethe meethe laddu foot rahe hain. Pata nahi kitni der lagegi unhe khane me." Maine ye kaha to rachna khilkhila kar hasne lagi, fir boli.

"Man ke laddu man me hi kha lijiye janaab. Aap ye mat bhuliye ki abhi hamari shadi nahi huyi hai aur ye bhi
bhuliye ki ham teeno bahno ki ichchha kya hai." Rachna ne muskurate huye ye kaha to maine kaha.

"Yaar ye to mujh masoom par atyachaar karne wali baat ho gayi." Maine bura sa muh banate huye ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.
"Aisa nahi hai pati dev. Bas wakt ka intzaar kijiye. Uske baad jitne chaahe utne laddu sach much me kha lijiyega." Rachna ne ye kaha to main kuch der uski taraf dekhta raha fir bola.

"Shadi ke baad jo hota hai uski baat nahi kar raha hu main, balki main to muh mitha karne wale laddu ki baat kar raha hu. Tumne kaha tha ki jab tak main kusum se muh mitha nahi karuga tab tak tum me se koi shuruaat nahi karega. Is liye maine aaj kusum se muh mitha kar liya hai. Haan ye alag baat hai ki usme mera apna koi hath nahi tha balki waisa kusum ne hi kiya tha, wo bhi achanak se. Mujhe to kuch samajh hi nahi aaya tha ki ye ek hi pal me kya ho gaya hai." Maine ye sab kaha to rachna ne hairani se meri taraf dekhte huye kaha.

"Kya sach kah rahe hain aap.?" Rachna ne ye kaha to maine kaha.
"Aur kya main jhuth bol raha hu.?" Maine ye kaha to rachna kuch pal mujhe dekhti rahi fir muskurate huye boli.

"Matlab didi ne khud kiya tha aisa.?" Rachna ko shayad abhi bhi yakeen nahi ho raha tha.
"Tum bhi had karti ho dear. Agar yakeen nahi hai to kal khud hi apni didi se puchh lena." Maine ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.

"Didi to badi tez nikli. Waise maine to aapse pahle hi kaha tha ki wo ab kuch nahi kahengi. Agar aap pahal karenge to wo virodh nahi balki aapka sath hi dengi." Rachna ne ye kaha to maine kaha.

"Ab baate band karo aur jaldi se mera muh mitha karaao. Haye bahut wakt ho gaya tumhare hotho ka shahad chakhe huye. Main us ahsaas ko fir se taro taza karna chahta hu meri jaan. Main dekhna chaahta hu ki kya aaj bhi tumhare hotho me wahi shahad jaisi mithaas hai ya wakt ke sath usme aur bhi zyada mithapan aa gaya hai.?" Maine ye kaha to rachna buri tarah sharma gayi. Sharm se uske kaan tak laal pad gaye.

"Ye meri bebasi hai ki main khud kuch kar nahi sakta warna agar main sahi salamat hota to is wakt tumhe apni baaho me le chuka hota." Maine ye kaha to rachna ne muskurate huye kaha.

"Achha Ji...bade utaawle ho rahe hain aap." Rachna ne ye kaha to maine kaha.
"Jiski itni sundar sundar aur Mithi Mithi biwiya ho wo sala utawla kaise na hoga. Ab chhodo bhi ye baate aur ab aa jaao na." Maine ye kaha to rachna sharam se laal chehra liye dekhti rahi meri taraf.

Main sach me ab bahut zyada utaawla ho raha tha. Agar mere hath pair sahi salamat hote to is wakt main rachna ko apne neeche leta chuka hota aur use pyaar kar raha hota. Khair maine dekha ki rachna mujhe kuch der tak aise hi dekhti rahi aur fir jab maine fir se use apni taraf aane ko kaha to wo sabse pahle bed par thik se aayi aur sharmate huye meri taraf khisakne lagi.

Meri dhadkane badh chali thi. Main chaah raha tha ki rachna jaldi se mere kareeb aa jaye aur apne hotho ko mere hotho se sata de. Aakhir kuch hi palo me wo mere ekdam paas aa gayi. Main usi ki taraf dekh raha tha. Is wakt uske chehre par gajab ka noor tha jo sharm ki halki chaadar se doobta ja raha tha.

"Achha ek baat bataiye. Didi ne kaise kiya tha.?" Rachna ne sharmate huye dhire se ye puchha to maine kaha.
"Bataya to tha tumhe ki mujhe kuch samajh hi nahi aaya tha. Usne achanak se hi kiya tha aur jab tak mujhe kuch samajh aata wo door ho gayi thi." Maine ye kaha to rachna muskura padi.

"To fir thik hai. Main bhi waisa hi karugi." Rachna ne ye kaha to maine kaha.
"Yaar tum kya ab meri jaan lene par tul gayi ho.? Kaisi biwi ho yaar jo apne hone wale pati ko itna tadpa rahi ho." Maine ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.

"Aapne to itne par hi gila kar diya jabki sochiye main to pichhle paanch saalo se aapke liye tadap rahi thi. Mujhe to koi ummid hi nahi rah gayi thi ki aap mujhe miloge kabhi." Rachna ne sahsa gambheer hoke ye kaha to maine pyaar se kaha.

"Haan main samajhta hu dear magar isme mera bhi to koi dosh nahi hai. Mujhe bhala kaha pata tha ki mere liye tumhare man me kya ho sakta hai. Khair ab to ham mil
gaye hain na to pichhli sab buri yaade bhula do aur ek naye sire se naya itihaas khud apne hath se likho." Maine ye kaha to rachna meri taraf dekhti rahi.

Main khud bhi uski gahri aankho me dekh raha tha. Tabhi wo mere chehre ki taraf jhukne lagi. Main samajh gaya ki ab muh mitha karne ka wakt aane wala hai. Thodi hi der me rachna ne apne rasile hotho ko mere hotho par aahista se rakh diya. Ham dono ke hi jismo me ek mithi si jhurjhuri daudti chali gayi.

Rachna ke aisa karte hi meri aankhe maze ke ahsaas se band ho gayi thi. Tabhi rachna ne mere hotho par kiss kiya aur fir mere nichle hoth ko apne hotho me daba liya. Meri rango me daudte huye lahu me ekdam se ubaal aane laga. Mere pure jisam me romanch ki lahar daudne lagi. Rachna ko apni aagosh me lene ke liye mere dono hath fadak uthe magar dono me plaster chadha hua tha is liye main kuch kar nahi sakta tha. Mera hath upar to uth jata magar main use apni baaho me jakad nahi sakta tha.

Udhar rachna dhire dhire mere nichle hoth ko apne hotho me dabaye use chusne lagi thi. Uski naak se nikalti garm garm saanse mere muh aur naak ke sath sath chehre par bhi garmi ka ahsaas Kara rahi thi. Mujhse bardaast na hua to maine bhi muh khol kar rachna ke nichle hoth ko apne hotho me daba liya aur use chusne laga. Mere jisam me daudti huyi maze ki lahar sansanaati huyi seedha mere neeche mere lund aur andkosho par pahuch gayi. Mere nichle bhaag me badi tezi se jhurjhuri hone lagi aur fir kuch hi palo me chhote nawaab apne asal roop me aa gaye.

Main to leta hua tha magar rachna mere upar jhuki huyi thi is liye uski saanse jald hi bhaari ho gayi. Tez tez aati garm saanse mere chehre se takra rahi thi. Main Puri shiddat se rachna ke nichle hoth ko choos raha tha. Mera dil chahta tha ki main use isse bhi achhe tarike se pyaar karu magar main aur kuch kar nahi sakta tha.

Kuch hi der me rachna ki saanse jab ukhadne lagi to wo aahista se mere upar se hat kar thoda door ho gayi aur tez tez saanse lene lagi. Uska chehra ekdam se laal surkh pad gaya tha. Jaise hi ham dono ki nazre ek dusre se mili to rachna ne sharma kar apni nazre jhuka li. Mujhe us par bahut pyaar aa raha tha magar main khud kuch kar pane me asmarth tha.

"Sach me dear. Tumhare hoth to pahle se bhi zyada mithe ho gaye hain. Aisa lagta hai jaise bas chusta hi rahu." Maine muskurate huye ye kaha to rachna ne sharmate huye kaha.
"Aapke hoth bhi to pahle se zyada mithe ho gaye hain." Rachna ne ye kaha to maine kaha.

"Bas ek hi baat ka malaal hai dear ki mere hath kuch kar sakne me asmarth hain." Maine ye kaha to rachna ne muskurate huye kaha.
"Kyo aapko hatho se ab kya kaam karna hai.?" Rachna ne ye puchha to maine muskurate huye kaha.

"Wahi jo is situation me sab karte hain. Kya tumhe pata nahi hai.?" Maine muskurate huye ye kaha to rachna ne sharmate huye kaha.
"Sach me yaha rah kar bahut bigad gaye hain aap." Rachna ne ye kaha to maine kaha.

"Yaha rahne se hi to sudhra hu yaar. Warna tumhe to pata hai ki main khud kuch karne ya kuch kahne ki pahal karne se bahut sharmata tha pahle." Maine ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.

"To iska matlab yaha kuch aisa hua hai jiski vajah se aap pahle jaise sharmile nahi rahe.?" Rachna ne ye kaha to meri aankho ke saamne ekdam se dakshina aur kiran ka chehra naach gaya. Itni hi nahi un dono ke sath bitaya hua sab kuch naach gaya. Idhar mujhe socho me gum hote dekh rachna ne kaha.

"Kya hua kaha kho gaye aap.? Kya sach me yaha aisa kuch hua hai.?" Rachna ne muskurate huye ye kaha to maine kaha.
"Aur agar main ye kahu ki haan hua hai to kya kahogi tum.?" Maine ye kaha to rachna mujhe kuch palo tak dekhti rahi uske baad boli.

"Main yahi kahugi ki mujhe usse koi fark nahi padta." Rachna ne sapaat lahje me ye kaha to maine hairaani se kaha.
"Kya sach me.? Magar kyo dear.?" Maine ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.

"Kya aapko lagta hai dusri koi bhi baat isse bhi badi ho sakti hai ki aapki shadi aapki hi sagi bahno ke sath honi hai.? Is liye agar aapne yaha par pichhle paanch saalo me kisi ke sath
kuch aisa waisa kiya bhi hai to kam se kam mujhe aapki is baat se koi fark nahi padna chahiye. Main to bas isi baat se behad khush hu ki jise maine toot kar chaha aur jiske milne ki mujhe zara bhi ummid nahi rah gayi thi wo mujhe hamesha ke liye mil gaya hai. Aaj mere paas aap hain didi hain..meri do pyari pyari bahne hain aur sabse badi baat maa hain jo mujhe apni hi betiyo ki tarah pyaar karti hain. Itna kuch mere paas hone ke baad bhi agar mujhe kisi baat se fark pad jaye to ye mere liye murkhta wali baat hogi na pati dev.?" Rachna ne ye sab kaha to main uski taraf aashcharya se dekhta rah gaya.

Main hairaan tha ki rachna itna kuch sochti hai aur kisi bhi dusri badi baat ko wo itni asaani se jazb karne ki koovat rakhti hai. Ye uski samajhdaari thi ya uska sachcha prem.? Mere man me sawaal ubhra ki kya mujhe rachna se dakshina aur uski beti ke sath apne rishte ke bare me bata dena chahiye.? Is bare me pata chalne se jisse mujhe sabse zyada dar tha use bhi ab pata hai aur dakshina use aaj ya kal me sab kuch batane bhi wali hai.

Rachna ek samajhdaari ladki hai aur jis tarah se usne abhi ye sab kaha to usse mujhe yahi uchit laga ki use apne kisi bhi raaz se mahroom nahi rakhna chahiye. Aakhir wo meri hone wali biwi hai. Pati patni ke beech kisi aise raaz ko raaz nahi rahna chahiye jiske bare me baad me pata chalne par rishto me khatarnaak roop se daraar aa jaye. Halaaki is bare me maa ko pata chalna bhi zaruri hai magar maa se is baare me batane ki kisi me bhi himmat nahi ho sakti. Abhi main ye sab soch hi raha tha ki tabhi rachna ki awaaz mere kaano se takraayi to main hakikat ki duniya me aa gaya.

"Khair jane dijiye. Achha aapse ek baat karni hai." Rachna ne ye kaha to maine kaha.
"Haan kaho." Maine ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.
"Ham yaha jab se aaye hain tab se maine ek hi baar phone par apni maa se baat ki hai. Pata nahi ab wo kaisi hongi.? Pita ji kaise honge.? Bhaiya bhabhi kaise honge.? Us baar maa ne bas yahi kaha tha ki pita ji hospital me hain aur gaav me unke bare me kayi tarah ki log baate karte hain. Magar ab to shayad pita Ji ghar aa gaye honge. Mujhe is baat ki chinta hai ki jab unhe mere bare me ye pata chala hoga ki main ghar chhod kar aapke sath kahi chali gayi hu to unhone kya kiya hoga.? Mujhe yakeen hai ki unhone mere sath sath aap sabki khoj me apne aadmiyo ko laga diya hoga. Aur agar unhe kahi se ye pata chal gaya hoga ki mujhe ghar se nikaal kar aapke sath bhejne me maa ka hath tha to wo jane maa ke sath kaisa bartaav kiye honge.? Main do teen din se yahi sab sach soch kar pareshaan ho rahi hu. Pahle bhi socha tha magar aapki haalat aisi hone ki vajah se maine is bare me aapse ya maa se baat karna uchit nahi samjha tha." Rachna ne ye sab kaha to mujhe bhi gaav me sabka dhyaan aaya.

"Tum bhi had karti ho dear. Tumhe apni maa se baat kar lena chahiye tha. Iske liye tumhe kisi se puchne ki ya ijazat lene ki zarurat hi nahi hai. Chalo abhi maa Ji ko phone lagaao aur unse baat karo." Maine ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.

"Ab to raat ke gyaarah se bhi upar ka time ho gaya hai. Aap to jante hain gaav me sab log aath nau baje tak kha pi kar sone lag jate hain. Ab kal din me hi kisi wakt maa se baat karugi." Rachna ne ye kaha to maine kaha.

"Thik hai magar baat zarur kar lena. Khair ab aage ka kya irada hai.?" Maine halke se muskura kar ye kaha to rachna ne kaha.
"Matlab.?" Rachna ko shayad samajh nahi aaya to maine kaha.
"Aree bhai abhi aur muh mitha karna hai ya chup chaap so jana hai.?" Maine ye kaha to rachna ne sharm se muskurate huye kaha.

"Aaj ke liye kya itna kafi nahi hai.? Waise bhi is haalat me na aapko achhe se maza aayega aur na hi...." Rachna bolte bolte ruk gayi to maine muskurate huye kaha.
"Ohh ye to sahi kaha yaar tumne. Iske liye zaruri hai ki mere dono hath sahi salamat ho." Maine ye kaha to rachna has padi.

Khair uske baad hamne ek baar fir se ek dusre ke hotho ko chuma chusa aur fir sone lage. Rachna mere se sat kar hi leti huyi thi. Uske hotho par muskaan khili huyi thi. Shayad wo kamre
me akele mere sath ek hi bed par letne se khushi mahoos kar rahi thi.


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:thankyou:
Greattt bro. Such a mind blowing update & your writing skills. :applause: :applause: :applause:

Baaki sab to ab thik ho gaya hai bro. But ab story ko aur bhi jyada speed ki jarurat hai. Vicky ko jald se jald thik hona chahiye and kiran ke husband ke sath inspector wala matter bhi jald finish hona chahiye. baahri activities main story ki speed ko slow kar deti hai. :coffeepc:

Second dakshina abhi apne and vicky ke bare me flashback ke dwara story batayegi. So is flashack ko bhi jald finish karna hoga. Uske baad story ko thoda speed se aage badhana chahiye. Anyways dekhte hain pandit bro kya karte hain.
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Agle update ka intjaar rahega bro. :bsanta:

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