thanks bhai meri baat ko sun kar bura na manne ke liye.
Bhai baat yaha unki nahi hai jo like aur comment nahi karrahe.
baat unki hai jo aap ke har ek Update ko dil se padh kar usko like aur comment karte hai iss ummid me ke agla update jaldi hi ayega.
aur jab story acchi ho toh kisi ka bhi dil nahi bharta bhai. Bas dil karta hai aap update dete jao aur hum padhte jaye.
toh mai bas yahi kahraha hoon jo apne hai hi nahi unke barme me sonchna hi kyun jo apne hai unke sath agey badha jaye.
bas itna hi kahna chahta hoon.
ummid hai update jaldi hi ayega.
Pandit bro aap apni story ke views dekho pahle. Agar log aapki is story ko read nahi kar rahe hote to itne views kaise ho jate...just think about it.
Readers ko koi force nahi kar sakta like comment ke liye. Ye readers ki choice pe depend karta hai ki wo kya karte hain. Silent readers jyada hote hain jo silently story read karke nikal jate hain. But jo aapke fan or real readers hain wo like comment jarur karte hain. So aapko tension nahi lena chahiye. Jab aap continue update dene lagoge to readers bhi comment karege. Anyways ye dekh kar achha laga ki story complete karoge aap. Personal life me har koi busy hai bro. Fir bhi log time nikaal kar yaha aate hain and enjoy karte hain. Har koi chahta hai ki koi achhi story mile jisse thoda maja aaye. Ye story unhi achhi stories me se ek hai. So apne achhe readers ko nirash na karo baaki aapki marji bro.
aur pandit ji aapka mood kaise banega .. kya kuch dakshina waghera chahiye kya aapko .. ya 56 bhog lagwane padenge .. aaj kal pandit log bhi bahut demanding ho gaye hai .. he he ...
main bahut dino se dekh raha hu .. aap kuch jyaada he bhaav khane lage ho .. ab aapki dhang se khabar leni padegi .. tabhi aapke nakshtr theek honge .. sharafat se maan jaao .. nahi to hum readers ko apni ungli tedi karni padegi .. waise aapko to isi baat se santosh kar lena chahiye ki kamdev99008 bhiya jaise kukhyaat log bhi aapse sharafat se pesh aa rahe hai .. nahi to ye bahut khatarnaak aadmi hai .. inse bada maha-sant mahapurush iss waqt XF par vidhyamaan nahi hai .. aur aap inki nek-drishti mein ho .. to isse pehle inka dehrya jawaab de jaaye aap apni hatth chhod kar shareef baccho ki tarah kahani ko aage likhna shuru kar do .. nahi to fir ek baar kamdev99008 jo commitment kar lete hai .. phir ye apne aapki bhi nahi sunte ...
Pls continue.
Waiting for update
Pics kahan gayab ho gaye , show kyu nahi ho rahe? Btw nice introSAB KUCH JAYAZ HAI...
UPDATE = 01
Ye story puri tarah kaalpnik hai. Iska kisi ki personal life se koi lena dena nahi hai. Is story ko likhne ka maksad sirf aur sirf manoranjan karna hai....
"Aaahhhh aise hi zor zor sey chodo mujhey...hayeee reee vickyyy...aisi hi chudaai ke liye to taras rahi thi main." Band kamre me ek shandaar bed par ek aurat zor zor sey aahein bhartey huye siskariya le rahi thi.
Bed par is wakt wo puri tarah nangi leti huyi thi. Uski dono taange uske upar lade us ladke ke kandho par thi jo uski choot par apne damdaar land sey jhatke par jhatke diye ja raha tha.
"Le aur le meri raand...aaj teri sari garmi nikaal dooga." Ladke ne zor ka jhatka maarte hute kaha aur fir sey uski choot ko bajane laga.
"Aaahhh bahut maza aa raha hai vickyy...sach kahti hu in do saalo me ek din bhi itna maza nahi aaya mujhey. Us saale hijde me itna dam bhi nahi hai ki meri choot ki aag ko bujha sake...aaahhhhh uffff...uska lund to tumhare lund ka adha hi hai vicky....aaahhhh....badi mushkil se ye do saal kaate hain maine." Aurat maze se aahe bharte huye bole ja rahi thi.
"To apne pati ke paas se chale aana tha na meri raand....dubai me saale ko akela rahne deti...main bhi to teri is mast choot ke liye yaha tadap raha tha." Vicky naam ke ladke ne ek hath se aurat ke right boob par zor se thappad mara jisse uska wo boob buri tarah hichkole kha gaya.
"Aahhhhh kaise aa jati meri jaan...wo namard sala mujhe chhodta hi nahi tha...kah raha tha ki do saal baad sath me hi chalege ghar...lekin tum kyo yaha tadap rahe the...kya meri maa ne tumhe maza nahi diya??" Aurat ne apne neeche wale hoth ko daanto me dabate huye kaha aur muskura uthi.
"Aree teri maa to mujhe maza dene ki puri koshish karti hai kiran...magar tu to jaanti hai ki ek jawaan aurat me aur ek buddhi aurat me fark hota hai...uski choot to ab chud chud ke bhosda ban gayi hai is liye ab mujhe itna maza nahi aata...waise ek baat to hai ki teri maa ne mujhe khush rakhne ke liye apni gaand bhi maarne ko deti hai magar ab to uska bhi bhosda ban gaya hai." Vicky ne kaha aur aurat ki choot se apna lund nikaal kar aurat ko palta diya. Uske paltate hi wo aurat kutiya ke pose me aa gayi.
Kutiya ke pose me jaise hi wo aayi to vicky ne peechhe se uski choot me fir se apna lund ek hi jhatke me daal diya. Jisse kiran naam ki us aurat ki siski nikal gayi. Vicky ne ek hath badha kar uske baalo ko mutthi me jakad liya aur kisi ghode ki tarah sawari sa karne laga.
"Aaahhhhhh aise hi vickyyy hyee reee bahut maza aa raha hai...kaash tum mere pati hote vickyy...sach me din raat tumse chudwaati main." Kiran maze se siskariya bharte huye boli.
"Main to tera pati jaisa hi hu meri raand. Do saal pahle tak tere baap ka dar rahta tha. Is liye chhup chhup ke tujhe chodta tha. Tera baap sala sharaabi mujhe naukar hi samajhta tha. Bhala wo kaise ye chaahta ki uski beti ki shadi uske ek maamuli naukar se ho jaye.?" Vicky ne kiran ke baalo ko zor se jhatka diya to kiran ko dard ka ahsaas hua magar ye dard bhi mano maza hi de raha tha use.
"Mera baap aisa nahi tha vicky ye tum bhi jante ho...wo to ek shareef insaan tha jo kabhi sharaab ki taraf dekhta bhi nahi tha. Aaahhhhhh ufffff....magar fir bura wakt aaya aur usne galat logo ki sangat kar li. Un logo ne mere shareef baap ko sharaab pine ka aisa chaska lagaya ki mera baap din raat sharaab me hi dooba rahne laga...aaaahhh vicky mera hone wala hai...aahhhh aur tej tej chodo mujhe. Apne lund ka paani aaj bhar do meri choot me." Kiran ki saanse bahut tez ho gai thi.
Pure kamre me sex se bhari aahe aur siskariyo ka tufaan chaalu tha. Vickyy ne dhakko ki raftaar pahle kafi tez kar di thi. Achanak hi kiran maze ke saatwe aasmaan me pahuch gayi. Uska jism ekdam se ainth sa gaya. Zor zor ke jhatke khaate huye wo ekdam se shaant ho gayi. Idhar vicky taabadtod dhakke lagaye ja raha tha. Uske mukh se ajeeb si hunkaar nikal rahi thi. Shayad wo bhi jhadne wala tha.
"Ahhhhh main bhi ab jhadne wala hu kiran. Teri choot me mere lund ka pani andar tak jayega." Vickyy haafte huye bola.
"Jane do na vicky...mujhe apne bache ki maa bana do. Us hijde me itna dam nahi hai ki wo mujhe kabhi maa bana sake." Kiran ne pichhe mud ke dekhte huye kaha. Uski ye baat sun kar vicky shock sa ho gaya. Uske dhakke do pal ko ruke uske baad wo fir se shuru ho gaya.
"Soch le agar use pata chal gaya to wo tujhe talaak bhi de sakta hai." Vicky ne maano use chetaya.
"Kuchh nahi hoga meri jaan. Main kal hi ja rahi hu apne sasuraal. Is liye tum is baat ki fikar mat karo. Main sab samhaal loogi. Tum apna pani meri choot me hi chhod do vicky." Kiran ne kaha.
Kiran ki baat sun kar vicky ne dhakke tez kar diye. Kuchh hi der me uske lund se pichkaariya nikalne lagi jo kiran ki choot me andar tak ja rahi thi. Dher sara pani kiran ki choot me labalab bhar gaya. Vicky jhadne ke baad kiran ke upar hi jhuk kar zor zor se haafne laga tha. Kuchh der tak dono aise hi rahe fir vicky ne kiran ki choot se apna murjhaya huwa lund nikaal liya aur bed par ek taraf let gaya. Kiran bhi pet ke pal let gayi thi. Uski choot se safed pani risne laga tha.
Raat me vicky ne kiran ko ek baar aur choda uske baad dono ek dusre se lipat kar so gaye. Kamre ke darwaje ke baahar khadi kiran ki maa andar ka tufaan shaant hote hi apne kamre ki taraf chal di thi. Uske chehre par ajeeb si khumaari chhaayi thi.
(Friends...aap sab log soch rahe honge ki bina koi intro diye maine ye kya garma garam scene chipka diya hai. So don't worry about it. Chalo intro diye deta hu)
MAHESH PANDEY......(Mere pita, inki age 48 saal hai. Zameeno me kheti baadi karte hain. Hamare paas lagbhag 20 ekad zameen hai jisme kheti baadi hoti hai aur usi se hamara kharcha chalta hai. Aay ka saadhan bhi yahi hai.
RENUKA PANDEY......(Meri maa, Inki age 45 saal hai. Ye ek gharelu mahila hain. Thoda bahut silaayi bhi karti hain. Dikhne me kafi sundar hain. Rangat gori hai aur jism par jyada motapa wali koi baat nahi hai.)
KUSUM PANDEY......(Meri badi bahan, inki age 27 saal hai. Inki abhi tak shadi nahi huyi hai. Study sirf 12th tak hi ki hai. Iske aage pita ji ne padhaya hi nahi tha. Ye bilkul meri maa par gayi hain. Swabhaav me thodi gambheerta hai. Mujhse bahut lagaav rakhti hain.)
VIKAS PANDEY(Vicky)........(Main 25 saal ka ek achha khasa jawaan ladka hu aur main present me delhi me rah raha hu. Delhi mera hometown nahi hai balki main yaha par naukari karta hu. Naukari karne ke liye mujhe mere pita ji ne kaha nahi hai balki iske peechhe ek bahut khaas kaaran hai jo story me hi aage bataauga. Study me maine BSC kiya hai.)
PRIYA PANDEY......(Meri dusri bahan, ye mujhse chhoti hai. Iski age 23 saal hai. Ye bhi dekhne me meri maa ki tarah hi sundar hai. Isne bhi 12th tak study ki hai.)
POOJA PANDEY......(Meri sabse chhoti bahan. Ye aur priya dono hi judwa hain. Ye priya se sirf 10 minute chhoti hai. Isne bhi 12th tak study ki hai. Dikhne me dono judwa bahne same hi lagti hain. Dono me bada gajab ka taal mel rahta hai. Dono ka har kaam sath me hi hota hai. In dono ka hi swabhaav thoda chulbulapan wala hai. Mere liye ye dono meri pariyaan hain.)
BHARAT BENIWAL.......(Mera maalik, present me main inhi ke yaha rahta hu. Bharat beniwal 50 saal ki age ka aadmi tha. Delhi ke karol bagh me iska achha khasa business tha aur property bhi kafi thi. Magar sharab ki lat ne maano sab kuch barbaad kar diya. Ek din isi sharab ki vajah se ye shakhs bhagwan ko pyara ho gaya.)
DAKSHIDA BENIWAL.......(Mere maalik ki biwi. 47 saal ki maaldaar aurat. Dekhne me sundar hai aur Figure bhi shaandaar hai. Isko ek beti hai. Ek bachcha aur huwa tha magar wo zinda na rah saka tha. Uske baad koi aur bachcha nahi hua iske. Pati ki sharab ki lat ki vajah se behad pareshan aur dukhi rahti thi. Har roz iska pati sharab pi kar ise aur iski beti ko buri tarah maarta tha. Us wakt agar main yaha na hota to shayad story kuch aur hi hoti. Ye kissa bhi aage bataauga.)
KIRAN BENIWAL........(Mere maalik/Maalkin ki iklauti beti. Age 27 saal..madmast kar dene wala jism. Shuru se hi dilfenk thi ye. Magar jab se baap ko sharaab ki lat lagi thi tab se maano dono maa beti ka jeena muhaal ho gaya tha. Do saal pahle iski shaadi huyi thi. Iska pati dubai me rahta hai. Uska naam Amit Bansal hai. Mere sath in dono maa betiyo ka sex relation kaise shuru hua ye story me aage bataauga.)
(So friends....ye tha intro. Baaki ke jo bhi character aayege unka intro usi time dooga)
Friends ye meri first story hai and mujhe likhne ka koi anubhav nahi hai so aap sab bhai log mujhe guide karte rahna.....
Maq bhaya main aapki baat samajh gaya hu. Isi liye to bola tha ki story zarur complete karuga but uske liye time to mile. Main chaahta hu ki jab start karu to fir ruku na. Bcoz rukne se flow bigad jata hai aur readers bhi naraaz hote hain. Time aisa ho jisse hapte me do ya teen update to zarur post ho. Is time to is tarah ka time hi nahi mil raha yara. Main bhi chaahta hu dil se ki story ko jaldi se complete karu....
Itni achhi story ko stop mat kijiye. Plz continueNeelam ji thanks for reading my story....
Story zarur continue karuga. Bas ek busy time guzar gaye....