Thriller Safar ek rahsya (secret of journey)~ Completed

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[Geralt of Rivia]

Hello everyone.

We are Happy to present to you The annual story contest of XForum

"The Ultimate Story Contest" (USC).

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"Chance to win cash prize up to Rs 8000"
Jaisa ki aap sabko maloom hai abhi pichhle hafte hi humne USC ki announcement ki hai or abhi kuch time pehle Rules and Queries thread bhi open kiya hai or Chit Chat thread toh pehle se hi Hindi section mein khula hai.

Well iske baare mein thoda aapko bata dun ye ek short story contest hai jisme aap kisi bhi prefix ki short story post kar sakte ho, jo minimum 700 words and maximum 7000 words ke bich honi chahiye (Story ke words count karne ke liye is tool ka use kare — Characters Tool) . Isliye main aapko invitation deta hun ki aap is contest mein apne khayaalon ko shabdon kaa roop dekar isme apni stories daalein jisko poora XForum dekhega, Ye ek bahot accha kadam hoga aapke or aapki stories ke liye kyunki USC ki stories ko poore XForum ke readers read karte hain.. Aap XForum ke sarvashreshth lekhakon mein se ek hain. aur aapki kahani bhi bahut acchi chal rahi hai. Isliye hum aapse USC ke liye ek chhoti kahani likhne ka anurodh karte hain. hum jaante hain ki aapke paas samay ki kami hai lekin iske bawajood hum ye bhi jaante hain ki aapke liye kuch bhi asambhav nahi hai.

Aur jo readers likhna nahi chahte woh bhi is contest mein participate kar sakte hain "Best Readers Award" ke liye. Aapko bas karna ye hoga ki contest mein posted stories ko read karke unke upar apne views dene honge.

Winning Writer's ko well deserved Cash Awards milenge, uske alawa aapko apna thread apne section mein sticky karne ka mouka bhi milega taaki aapka thread top par rahe uss dauraan. Isliye aapsab ke liye ye ek behtareen mouka hai XForum ke sabhi readers ke upar apni chhaap chhodne ka or apni reach badhaane kaa.. Ye aap sabhi ke liye ek bahut hi sunehra avsar hai apni kalpanao ko shabdon ka raasta dikha ke yahan pesh karne ka. Isliye aage badhe aur apni kalpanao ko shabdon mein likhkar duniya ko dikha de.

Entry thread 15th February ko open ho chuka matlab aap apni story daalna shuru kar sakte hain or woh thread 5th March 2024 tak open rahega is dauraan aap apni story post kar sakte hain. Isliye aap abhi se apni Kahaani likhna shuru kardein toh aapke liye better rahega.

Aur haan! Kahani ko sirf ek hi post mein post kiya jaana chahiye. Kyunki ye ek short story contest hai jiska matlab hai ki hum kewal chhoti kahaniyon ki ummeed kar rahe hain. Isliye apni kahani ko kayi post / bhaagon mein post karne ki anumati nahi hai. Agar koi bhi issue ho toh aap kisi bhi staff member ko Message kar sakte hain.


Story se related koi doubt hai to iske liye is thread ka use kare — Chit Chat Thread

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Prizes

Position	Benifits
Winner	4000 Rupees + Award + 5000 Likes + 30 days sticky Thread (Stories)
1st Runner-Up	1500 Rupees + Award + 3500 Likes + 15 day Sticky thread (Stories)
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Best Supporting Reader	750 Rupees + Award + 1000 Likes
Members reporting CnP Stories with Valid Proof	200 Likes for each report

Regards :- XForum Staff

 

[Shetan]

Update 8

Kisi ek bhayanak mahal me jaha kafi andhera chaya huwa tha jaha pe insani sarir sad gal gayi the ek bhaut hi dam ghotu badbu aa rahi thi
jaha ek pal bhi koi ruk jaye r
To badbu se hi mar jata wahi us wiran mahal me chirag Aur massale jal rahi thi jisse us biavan mahal ke andhkar ko dur kar raha tha
andar mahal me kafi chal pahal thi jaha bhaut hi bhadhe aur kurup prani thahal rahe the jisse dekh ke kisi bhi insan ki peesab nikal jaye

Aage ek tahkhana bana huwa tha jaha kai log bandi bane huwe the
aur ek taraf kuch haywan ek wakti ko baandh ke mar rahe the uski halat bhahut hi kharab thi jo dekhne se hi pta chalta tha ki use salo se aise hi torcher kiya ja raha tha
uski dardnak chikho se pura mahal dahal jata tha jis chikh ko sun ke koi bhi dahal jaye
aadmi ke face pe ek tez dikhayi de raha tha
aadmi dard se tadpte huwe beta kaha h mujhe in hayono se bacha kab aayega tu betaaaaaa aur uski lambi chitakar se wo behos ho Gaya

Mai ek bahut hi tez awaj ke sath chilya papaaaa
Aur isi ke sath mai uth ke baithi gaya maa bhi daudh ke mere kamre me aayi
maa ne dekha ki mai bhaut hi gabrya aur is thadhi ke mausam me bhi mere mathe se passina tapak raha tha

maa - kya huwa beta itna tez se chikha kyu koi bura sapna dekha kya

Tab tak mai sambhal chuka tha aur maine sari baat maa ko bata diya
is samay subha hone wali thi
jisse maa ke face pe ek chinta ki lakir aa gayi
Mai maa se bola

Mai - maa maine suna h bhor ka sapna sach ho jata h

Maa - gHabra kar apne aap ko sambhalte huwe nahi beta ye sab sirf kahawte h kabhi sapna bhi sach hotha h kya tu itna mat soch

Maa - man me lagta h mujhe baba se milna padega

hamri bate ho rahi thi dekha shruti bhi aa gayi mere kamre me

Shruti - maa aap itni subha bhaiya ke kamre me kaise aa gayi

Maa - kya mai apne beta ke kamre me itni subha nahi aa sakti kya

Shruti - hadada kar n na nahi maa aisi baat nahi h

Maa - haste Huwe Shruti ke dekh ke achha chalo ab subha bhi ho gayi h jao sab fresh ho jao

Mai utha aur fresh hUwa maa ne pahle maa ne mujhe kasarat karwya aur uske baad hamne mil ke nashta kiya nasta kar ke Shruti boli

Shruti - bhaiya aapne wada kiya tha ki aaj aap apne birthday pe ghumane le chalenge

Mai - ha ha bola tha jao tayar ho jao ham chalte h
shruti Tayar hone chali gayi aur mai bhi naye kapde pahan liya aur maa boli jaldi aana beta
Aur ham nikal liye raaste me Shruti ne bataya ki Kajal bhi chalegi hamare sath aur ham usko bhi sath le ke sair pe nikal liye

Aur maa bhi ghar me tala laga ke Baba se milne nikal padi aur baba ke kutiya me pahuch gayi waha ja ke baba ko prnam ki aur mere sapne ke bare me batai jise sun ke baba ne meri kundali manga
aur use kafi dyan se padhe aur jo baba ne bataya
meri kundali dekhne ke baad kuch der baad bole

Baba - ye ladka kisi khas karya ko pura karne ke liye is manav yoni me jnam liya h
jld hi duniya iske dwara kiye gaye karyon ko yugo tak yaad rakhegi

Maa - baba par mera beta to ek aam insan h to phir kaise

Baba - beti ye wakt hi to sab kuch nirdharit karta h ab tumhare bete ka wakt ghum gaya h jld hi wah ek unsuljhe rahse ke sagar me pravesh karne wala h

Maa - prantu baba abhi mere bete ko is duniya ke bare me bhi achhe se nahi pta ki duniya kya hoti h

Baba - beti sab wakt pe chod do kuch baate wakt ke pahle kisi ko na pta chle to hi behtar hota h nahi to is sristi pe asar padta

Aur use is rahsye ke banwar se nikalna hoga

Isi tarah baba ne bahut baate maa ko mere jivan ke bare me bataye aur uske baad baba se vida le ke ghar aa gayi

Idhar

Ham sab ghumte huwe gaon ke bahar nikal aaye aur kajal mujhse boli

Kajal - are ajay jab se mai aai hu mai tumhare hi karname sun rahi h kya baat h ek hi baar me hero ban gaye

Mai - kaha ye to bas gaon wale ki itni choti baat ko badha chadha kr batane ki aadat h

Kajal - mere baaju ko daba kar chek karte huwe ha wo to mai dekh hi rahi hu

Yu hi baate karte huwe ham nadi pe aa gaye

Shruti - bhaiya chalo na ham nadi me nahate h

Mai - kaise nahaogi dushre kapde bhi nahi laayi ho

Kajal - ha Shruti ajay sahi kah raha h

Shruti - theek h udas hote huwe

Mai - Shruti ko udas hote dekh ke are gudiya tu udas kyu hoti h ham phir khabhi aayenge ye sun ke Shruti kafi khush ho gayi

Mai - chalo us ped ke niche baithe h pas me ek kadam ka ped tha jo kafi purana lag raha tha jo kabfi ghana tha
aur ham uske niche aa ke ped ki ot leke baith gaye
Shruti waha idhar udhar se chidiyon ko udane lagi aur ek khargosh bhi mil gaya jise wo paresan karne lagi

Tabhi kajal mujhse boli

Kajal - ajay

Mai - hmmm

Kajal - dekho kitna suhana mausam h aur kitni santi hai yaha

Mai - Hmm

Kajal - yaha aa ke dil ko kitna sukun mila raha h man kar raha h yahi pe puri jindagi hi rah jaUn

Mai - ha kajal yaha aane pe mujhe bahut hi sukun milta h

Kajal - yani tum pahle bhi yaha aa chuke ho

Mai - ha mai aksar yaha aata hu

Kajal - agar tumhe kuch ho jata to ham sab ka kya hota tum akele hi unse ladne lage the tumhe dar nahi laga

Mai - are tum sab ka pyar jab tak sath ho tab tak mujhe kuch nahi ho sakta

Mere duniya hi tum sab se suru hoti h aur wahi khatam ho jati h

mai - waise agar mujhe kuch ho jane par tumhe meri kyu fikar h chutki lete huwe

Kajal - man me bewkoof samjhta nahi h kaise batau mai tumse pyar karti hu tumhare bina mai nahi rahi sakti

Mai - tum kuch bol rahi ho kya

Kajal - hadbada kar na nahi mai mai kuch nahi bol rahi hu

Tab tak Shruti aa gayi ar boli bhaiya chaliye ghar chalte h sham ho gayi
kajal chalo jan bachi nahi to abhi peeche h pad jata kuch boli

Mai - ha chalo kafi time bhi ho gaya h
aur ham sab ghar ki taraf nikal liye gaon me pahuchte pahuchte sham ho gyi

Shruti - bhaiya chaliye aaj kajal didi ke ghar chalna h

Mai - are maa kab se intazar kar rahi hogi ghar pe aur raat bhi hone wali h

Shruti - chalo to sahi pahle aap sawal bahut karte h aur mai chap unke sath chal diya

Mai kajal ke ghar ke paas pahucha to dekha ki
Kajal ghar bahut hi sandar tarike se sajaya gaya tha jo dekhne .e bahut hi khubsurat lag raha tha
aur ham andar aa gaye jaha ghar me andhera andhera tha aur pura haAl me bahut hi santi chai huwui thi
mai jaise hi ghuma to dekha Shruti aur kajal bhi gayab ho gayii mai soachne laga ye dono kaha chali gayi aur baki ke ghar wale sab kaha h abhi mai apni soacho me guM tha dekha achanak haal me rosni ho gayi aur mere upar phulo ki barsat hone lagi

Jaha maa chacha chachi aur gaon ke kafi log happy birthday to you ajay ki awaj se haal goonj utha
mai to pura sock ho gaya

Shruti - kyu bhaiya surprise kais raha

Mai - abhi bhi muh faade ye sab dekh raha tha achanak Shruti ki awaj sun ke hadbada gaya
jisse sabhi log hasne lage mai jhep gaya

Iske baad mai ne cake kata jispe mera naam likha gaya tha aur pahle maa ko khillaya aur phir Shruti aur kajal ko
iske baad sabhi jo mere liye gift laye the mijhe de diye
aise hi sabka khana peena ho gaya
aur kajal sab se najar bacha ke mujhe kichte huwe chat pe le gayi

Mai - ,ye kya h tu mujhe yaha kyu le aayi koi dekh liya to kya soachega

Kajal - kyu tumhe mere sath rahna pasand nahi h

Mai - nahi aisi baat nahi h agar koi dekhta to kya soachta

Kajal - dekhne do koi kya soache ga

Mai - achha theek h ye batao tum mujhe yaha kyu lai

Kajal - ha ha ma... mai.. mai
Haklate huwe

Mai - ye kya mai mai laga rakhi ho jaldi bolo nahi to mai ja raha hu

Kajal - man me kaise bolu mai tumse pyar karti Hu

Mai - are kha kho gayi mai jao kya

Kajal - jaldi se ajay mai tumse bahut pyar karti hu aur mai tumhare bina nahi ji sakti

Mai - gussa hone ka nakat karte huwe Tez se kya
Kajal mujhe guss e me dekh ke thodha dar gayi aur sar neeche kar li aur siskne lagi

Mai ye dekh ke
Natak khatam karte hue

use kheech ke gale laga liya aur bola mai bhi tumse pyar karta hu kajal agar tumhare papa ko pata chala to kya soachenge

Kajal mere gale lagte hi siskana band kar di aur kas ke mere gale lag gayi aur boli kuch nahi bolenge kaha dungi mai ki ajay se pyar karti hu mai

Mai - achha

Aur kajal sarma ke aur tej se mere gale lag gayi
yu hi ham aise hi kafj der tak pade rahe jisse dil ko kafi sukun mil raha THa

Mai bola chalo neeche chalte h kafi time ho gaya aaye huwe aur ham neeche aa gaye
jaha lagbhag sab ja chuke the
aur hamne khana khya aur wahi so gaye

Superb....

 

[Golu]

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