Bahut hi badhiya update diya hai bhai...UPDATE 69
“Kyun Nahi” maine sona ko bahut hi sankshipt sa uttar diya.
Sona...chehre par shaitani bhari muskurahat liye….bhai yeh bhi koi baat hui. Itna chhota sa reply? Sahi se jawab do meri baat ka.
Main ab uljhan mein fans chuka tha aur ab maine wo karne ka faisla kiya jo aksar main is mauke par karta hun...yani prasthitiyon se mukabla to maine sona se kaha.
Main...achha sona sahi batao tum kehna kya chahti ho...thodi der pehle tum mera aur riya ka koi connection bithane ki koshish kar rahi thi. Aur abhi tum yeh behuda sawal kar rahi ho. Cigarette pina koi badi baat nahi hai aur yeh koi gunah nahi hai. Par yeh sehat ke liye bahut jyada hanikarak hai. Isliye sab log smoking na karne ki salah dete hain aur nasha koi bhi ho wo hamara sab kuchh barbad kar deta hai. Hamari jawani, hamara career samaj mein hamari izzar.
Main bole hi ja raha tha. Kyunki ab maine soch liya tha ke jo bhi hoga dekhi jayegi. Jyada se jyada mujhe wo accept karna pad jayega. To kya hua. Ek na ek din to wo samne aana hi hai. Aa jaane do. Fir maine continue kiya….gunah kuchh aur chij hai, jaise chori karna, kisi ka dil dukhana, kisi ka katl karna, bahut kuchh aata hai gunah mein to. Tum kya puchhna chahti ho wo mujhse kaho. Ab main ekdam sidha ho gaya tha.
Sona ke chehre par muskurahat barkarar thi. Meri baat sunkar usne bolna shuru kiya.
Sona...bhai suno main to bas yeh kehna chahti thi ke thik hai didi apni jagah sahi hain. Unhone mere bhale ke liye mujhe smoking ke baare mein bahut bura bhala kaha. Par kya unhone kabhi koi galat kaam nahi kiya hoga.
Main...ab ekdam shant tha. Kyunki maine thaan liya tha ke kisi bhi baat ke liye apne ko taiyar rakhun...haan kiya hoga. Har insaan karta hai. To riya ne bhi kiya hoga. Par uski galtiyon ke liye use bhugatana hoga aur tumhari galtiyon ke liye tumhe. Use apne career ki parwah hai. Tum abhi utni mature nahi ho ke apna bura bhala samajh sako.
Sona...ab gambhir ho chuki thi….main manti hun bhai ke main abhi utni mature nahi hui ke apna bhala bura samajh sakun. Par kya aapki nigah mein didi utni mature ho chuki hai.
Ab to mujhe sidha puchhna hi padna tha.
Main...sona sidhe sidhe bolo ke tum kya kehna chahti ho. Kyunki riya ki baten to riya jane na. Usne kya galti ki. Wo mature hai ya nahi. Use pata hoga na. Tum uske baare mein mujhe kyun tatol rahi ho.
Sona...itna bhole bhi na bano bhai….aur jor se hans di. Aur mere pet mein gudgudi si nikal di. Halanki main kafi gambhir tha par uske aisa karne par mere chehre par muskurahat aa gayi.
Main...muskurate hue...ab bata bhi do meri maa. Kya kehna chah rahi ho tum. Adhe ghante se dimag kharab karke rakha hai tumne mera.
Sona...bhai agar aap mera saath na dete aur aap bhi mujhe galat bolte na us wakt jaise didi bol rahi thi to aaj jo hangama hona tha wo aapko nahi pata. Sona fir se gambhir ho gayi thi.
Main...to fir...galti to kisi se bhi ho sakti hai na. Main kaun hota hun tumhe galat sabit karne wala. Main to khud galtiyon ka putla hun.
Sona...bhai aapki inhi baton ne to mujhe samanaya bana ke rakha hai. Aap sach mein bahut achhe ho...kehte hue sona mujhse lipat gayi aur mere kandhe par apna sar rakh diya.
Main...uske sar par hath ferte hue...achha ab bol de meri chhoti si gudia..tu kehna kya chah rahi hai...kehne ko to main use chhoti si gudia bol raha tha. Par uske mere seene se lagne aur body poori tarah se touch karne par mere lund ne harkat karni shuru kar di.
Sona...bhai hamare room ki khidki mein ek bahut bada chhed hai..aapne logon ne notice nahi kiya shayad.
Main...kuchh samajh nahi paya tha to bola...to fir...khidki mein chhed hai to kya?
Sona...hanste hue...arey bhai..tum itne bhi budhu nahi ho..wo abhi bhi mere seene se lagi hui thi, bolte wakt shayad sharm ke maare mujhse nazren nahi mila pa rahi thi.
Abki baar main samajh gaya aur maanne mein hi meri bhalai thi to maine kaha…
Main….achha to iska matlab tune sab kuchh dekh liya.
Sona..bhai awaz itni tez thi ke shayad niche walon ko bhi sab kuchh sun gaya hoga.
Main...oh shit!!! Oh shit!!! Oh shit!!! Mere muh se teen baar yeh shabd nikle...mujhe ab bahut jyada sharm aa rahi thi.
Sona ne apna muh upar kiya. Apne dono hathon se mere chehre ko thama aur boli.
Sona...jo ho gaya so ho gaya bhai. Ab pachhtao nahi. Waise bhai aisa kabhi hota hai kya? Ek bhai apni behan ke saath aise.
Main...ab accept to kar chuka tha. To bola...haan sona hota hai.tum riya ki boss simran ko to janti hogi...she is also incest.
Sona...haan bhai unhe janti hun...arey wo to bala ki khubsurat hain. Shayad aapki classmate thi. To kya wo bhi apne bhai ke saath yeh sab kar chuki hain.
Main...haan sona yeh sach hai. Maine jor dete he kaha.
Sona..bhai aapko kuchh explain karne ki jarurat nahi hai...main dekh rahi thi ke khud riya di bhi chahti thi aapke saath wo sab to isme kisi ki galti nahi hai aur jo bhi hua dono ki rajamandi se hua...waise meri ek friend hai apne sage bhai se lip kiss karti hai. Mujhe to abhi tak yeh bahut ajib lagta tha. Par ab to maine sab kuchh dekh liya bhai behan mein.
Main...tumhe main ek ajib insaan lag raha hunga na. Satewan ajuba.
Sona...kuchh ajib nahi lag raha. Aapne kuchh galat nahi kiya..
Main...chalo thank god. Mujhe is baat ki badi tension thi ke tumhara kya reaction rahgea.
Sona...agar mere saath aaj galat hota to mera reaction bahut bhayankar hota bhai. Yeh kehte hue usne mujhe ankh maar di aur fir se boli...bhai bolun ya jiju...aur fir se hans di..hahahaha.
Main muskura raha tha aur bola...ke chahe bhai bol do ya jiju koi fark nahi ab to.
Sona...arey waise is lihaj se to main aaki saali hui...to aapka thoda hak to mujh par bhi hai...sona abhi tak mere kafi close khadi thi.
Main...arey thoda kyun poora hak hai...kehte hue maine use chutdon se pakda aur apni taraf khinch liya. Aur uske mathe par kiss kar diya.
Sona ko pata nahi kya hua wo boli...bhai wahan aana...usne ek taraf ishara kiya. Main us disha mein chal diya jis disha mein sona ne aane ko bola tha. Waise sona ke sparsh ki wajah se mera lund ab poora khada tha.
Sona mujhe ek car ke side mein lejakar boli….bhai mujhse kiss kar sakte ho aap?
Main...pagal ho kya? Tum abhi kafi chhoti ho. Fir maine socha ke chhoti to vini bhi hai par main usse sab kuchh karna chahta hun..
Sona...dekh lo bhai..ghar pe sabko bata dungi ke bhai ne riya ke saath sex kiya hai. Sona ab poori tarah se shararat par utaru thi aur shayad thodi masti bhi chadhi thi use.
Main...achha to black male karke meri izzat lutna chahti ho saali sahiba.
Sona...aur kya..sidhi tarah kabu aate ho aap ke lagaun papa ko phone.
Main...achha baba tu jiti main hara. Main to khud hi chahta tha usse kiss karna..maine uske chehre ke pakda aur uske honthon par honth rakh diye. Sona diwar ke saath sati hui thi to mera sharir poori tarah se us par dabav bana raha tha. Sona lagbhag meri hi height ki thi to uski chut par mera khada hua lund baar baar prahar kar raha tha.
Maine uske honth chusne shuru kiye. Uske honthon ka swad ekdam se vini ke honthon jaisa tha. Ekdam kache kache raseele honth. Itne naram ke mujhe laga kahin muh se alag hi na ho jayen kyunki main josh mein kaafi jor se chus raha tha. Usne bhi chusna shuru kar diya aur masti mein mujhe apni or khinche ja rahi thi.
Kuchh der baad usne khud hi mujhe chhod diya. Khair meri yeh kiss bhi bahut bhayankar thi. Maine usse shararat bhare lehje mein apne khade lund par hath rakhte hue use dikhate hue kaha.
Main….yahi tak ichha thi ya kuchh aur karne ka bhi irada hai.
Sona...bhai ise aap apne underwear mein hi rehne do. Meri jitni ichha thi utna maine kar liya...us din jab aap riya didi ko passionately kiss kar rahe the to meri ichha hui aapse kiss karne ki.
Main...to kaisa laga mujhse kiss karke…
Sona...bahut achha laga bhai...aap sach mein bahut achhi kiss karte ho..ham kiya karenge kiss.
Main...jarur kiya karenge sona...achha ek baat suno.
Sona...haan bhai bolo.
Main...tum abhi riya se clear na karna ke tumhe ham dono ke baare mein pata hai.
Sona...par wo kyun bhai...mujhe sach mein koi aitraz nahi hai.
Main...arey pagal wo main janta hun...par mujhe thodi masti karni hai uske saath. Ek din jab tum ghar pe hogi..to mere aane se pehle bathroom mein chale jana. Ham message mein contact kar lenge. Fir main use jaake pakad lunga. Wo bolegi ke sona hai. To main bolunga ke main sona ki parwah nahi karta hone do. Itne mein tum nikal aana. Main usi mode mein rahunga. Tum over react karna. Aur ham dono par chillana. Fir dekhte hain riya ka reaction.
Sona...rehne do na bhai di dar jayegi.
Main...arey karne do na thodi der ki to baat hai. Fir ham sab bata denge use.
Sona...thik hai bhai..sach mein maza ayega…
Fir use pata nahi kya hua...usne mujhe pakda aur mere honthon par fir se honth rakh ke buri tarah se chusne lagi. Main bhi mast ho gaya. Ab maine ek hath se apne lund ko pakad liya aur use hilane laga.
Sona mujhe aisa karne hue dekh rahi thi. Mera lund buri tarah se uski chut par ragad kha raha tha. Use bhi shayad ab achha lag raha tha. Mujhe mehsus ho raha tha ke lagta hai sona jald hi mere neeche hogi ab.
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Vini ne incest ki or pehla kadam to badha diya tha. Par wo ladki kisi aur hi nature ki thi. Use to mujhse wahi bhai behan wala pyar jyada pasand tha to ham us din jab ghar wapis aaye to maine vini ki ankhon mein pachhtava dekha.
Wo mujhse nazren chura rahi thi. Even uske baad kitne hi din tak usne mujhse baat hi nahi ki. Main samajh nahi pa raha tha ke ise akhir ho kya gaya. Main to ek kadam aur aage badhne ki soch raha tha par vini ne to mujhe dekhna aur yahan tak bolna bhi band kar diya.
Main preshan ho utha ke isse to achha tab tha jab hamare beech kuchh hua nahi tha. Kam se kam hamme relation to bahut achha tha. Darasal main apni chhutki ke bina ek pal bhi nahi reh sakta. Itna to aap log abhi tak samajh hi gaye hone.
Waise reh to chhutki bhi mere bina nahi sakti. Par wo kuchh ajib sa react kar rahi thi. Aur mujhe yeh bhi pata hai ke mujhse door hone ki wajah se woh ander hi ander tadap bhi rahi hogi. Par main kar bhi kya sakta tha.
Lagbhag ek hafte baad jab had ho gayi aur usne school jaate wakt mujhe ignore sa kiya to mujhe achha nahi laga aur maine socha ke main isse baat karunga. Kyunki bina baat kiye to yeh masla hal nahi ho sakta tha.
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Nice update...UPDATE 69
“Kyun Nahi” maine sona ko bahut hi sankshipt sa uttar diya.
Sona...chehre par shaitani bhari muskurahat liye….bhai yeh bhi koi baat hui. Itna chhota sa reply? Sahi se jawab do meri baat ka.
Main ab uljhan mein fans chuka tha aur ab maine wo karne ka faisla kiya jo aksar main is mauke par karta hun...yani prasthitiyon se mukabla to maine sona se kaha.
Main...achha sona sahi batao tum kehna kya chahti ho...thodi der pehle tum mera aur riya ka koi connection bithane ki koshish kar rahi thi. Aur abhi tum yeh behuda sawal kar rahi ho. Cigarette pina koi badi baat nahi hai aur yeh koi gunah nahi hai. Par yeh sehat ke liye bahut jyada hanikarak hai. Isliye sab log smoking na karne ki salah dete hain aur nasha koi bhi ho wo hamara sab kuchh barbad kar deta hai. Hamari jawani, hamara career samaj mein hamari izzar.
Main bole hi ja raha tha. Kyunki ab maine soch liya tha ke jo bhi hoga dekhi jayegi. Jyada se jyada mujhe wo accept karna pad jayega. To kya hua. Ek na ek din to wo samne aana hi hai. Aa jaane do. Fir maine continue kiya….gunah kuchh aur chij hai, jaise chori karna, kisi ka dil dukhana, kisi ka katl karna, bahut kuchh aata hai gunah mein to. Tum kya puchhna chahti ho wo mujhse kaho. Ab main ekdam sidha ho gaya tha.
Sona ke chehre par muskurahat barkarar thi. Meri baat sunkar usne bolna shuru kiya.
Sona...bhai suno main to bas yeh kehna chahti thi ke thik hai didi apni jagah sahi hain. Unhone mere bhale ke liye mujhe smoking ke baare mein bahut bura bhala kaha. Par kya unhone kabhi koi galat kaam nahi kiya hoga.
Main...ab ekdam shant tha. Kyunki maine thaan liya tha ke kisi bhi baat ke liye apne ko taiyar rakhun...haan kiya hoga. Har insaan karta hai. To riya ne bhi kiya hoga. Par uski galtiyon ke liye use bhugatana hoga aur tumhari galtiyon ke liye tumhe. Use apne career ki parwah hai. Tum abhi utni mature nahi ho ke apna bura bhala samajh sako.
Sona...ab gambhir ho chuki thi….main manti hun bhai ke main abhi utni mature nahi hui ke apna bhala bura samajh sakun. Par kya aapki nigah mein didi utni mature ho chuki hai.
Ab to mujhe sidha puchhna hi padna tha.
Main...sona sidhe sidhe bolo ke tum kya kehna chahti ho. Kyunki riya ki baten to riya jane na. Usne kya galti ki. Wo mature hai ya nahi. Use pata hoga na. Tum uske baare mein mujhe kyun tatol rahi ho.
Sona...itna bhole bhi na bano bhai….aur jor se hans di. Aur mere pet mein gudgudi si nikal di. Halanki main kafi gambhir tha par uske aisa karne par mere chehre par muskurahat aa gayi.
Main...muskurate hue...ab bata bhi do meri maa. Kya kehna chah rahi ho tum. Adhe ghante se dimag kharab karke rakha hai tumne mera.
Sona...bhai agar aap mera saath na dete aur aap bhi mujhe galat bolte na us wakt jaise didi bol rahi thi to aaj jo hangama hona tha wo aapko nahi pata. Sona fir se gambhir ho gayi thi.
Main...to fir...galti to kisi se bhi ho sakti hai na. Main kaun hota hun tumhe galat sabit karne wala. Main to khud galtiyon ka putla hun.
Sona...bhai aapki inhi baton ne to mujhe samanaya bana ke rakha hai. Aap sach mein bahut achhe ho...kehte hue sona mujhse lipat gayi aur mere kandhe par apna sar rakh diya.
Main...uske sar par hath ferte hue...achha ab bol de meri chhoti si gudia..tu kehna kya chah rahi hai...kehne ko to main use chhoti si gudia bol raha tha. Par uske mere seene se lagne aur body poori tarah se touch karne par mere lund ne harkat karni shuru kar di.
Sona...bhai hamare room ki khidki mein ek bahut bada chhed hai..aapne logon ne notice nahi kiya shayad.
Main...kuchh samajh nahi paya tha to bola...to fir...khidki mein chhed hai to kya?
Sona...hanste hue...arey bhai..tum itne bhi budhu nahi ho..wo abhi bhi mere seene se lagi hui thi, bolte wakt shayad sharm ke maare mujhse nazren nahi mila pa rahi thi.
Abki baar main samajh gaya aur maanne mein hi meri bhalai thi to maine kaha…
Main….achha to iska matlab tune sab kuchh dekh liya.
Sona..bhai awaz itni tez thi ke shayad niche walon ko bhi sab kuchh sun gaya hoga.
Main...oh shit!!! Oh shit!!! Oh shit!!! Mere muh se teen baar yeh shabd nikle...mujhe ab bahut jyada sharm aa rahi thi.
Sona ne apna muh upar kiya. Apne dono hathon se mere chehre ko thama aur boli.
Sona...jo ho gaya so ho gaya bhai. Ab pachhtao nahi. Waise bhai aisa kabhi hota hai kya? Ek bhai apni behan ke saath aise.
Main...ab accept to kar chuka tha. To bola...haan sona hota hai.tum riya ki boss simran ko to janti hogi...she is also incest.
Sona...haan bhai unhe janti hun...arey wo to bala ki khubsurat hain. Shayad aapki classmate thi. To kya wo bhi apne bhai ke saath yeh sab kar chuki hain.
Main...haan sona yeh sach hai. Maine jor dete he kaha.
Sona..bhai aapko kuchh explain karne ki jarurat nahi hai...main dekh rahi thi ke khud riya di bhi chahti thi aapke saath wo sab to isme kisi ki galti nahi hai aur jo bhi hua dono ki rajamandi se hua...waise meri ek friend hai apne sage bhai se lip kiss karti hai. Mujhe to abhi tak yeh bahut ajib lagta tha. Par ab to maine sab kuchh dekh liya bhai behan mein.
Main...tumhe main ek ajib insaan lag raha hunga na. Satewan ajuba.
Sona...kuchh ajib nahi lag raha. Aapne kuchh galat nahi kiya..
Main...chalo thank god. Mujhe is baat ki badi tension thi ke tumhara kya reaction rahgea.
Sona...agar mere saath aaj galat hota to mera reaction bahut bhayankar hota bhai. Yeh kehte hue usne mujhe ankh maar di aur fir se boli...bhai bolun ya jiju...aur fir se hans di..hahahaha.
Main muskura raha tha aur bola...ke chahe bhai bol do ya jiju koi fark nahi ab to.
Sona...arey waise is lihaj se to main aaki saali hui...to aapka thoda hak to mujh par bhi hai...sona abhi tak mere kafi close khadi thi.
Main...arey thoda kyun poora hak hai...kehte hue maine use chutdon se pakda aur apni taraf khinch liya. Aur uske mathe par kiss kar diya.
Sona ko pata nahi kya hua wo boli...bhai wahan aana...usne ek taraf ishara kiya. Main us disha mein chal diya jis disha mein sona ne aane ko bola tha. Waise sona ke sparsh ki wajah se mera lund ab poora khada tha.
Sona mujhe ek car ke side mein lejakar boli….bhai mujhse kiss kar sakte ho aap?
Main...pagal ho kya? Tum abhi kafi chhoti ho. Fir maine socha ke chhoti to vini bhi hai par main usse sab kuchh karna chahta hun..
Sona...dekh lo bhai..ghar pe sabko bata dungi ke bhai ne riya ke saath sex kiya hai. Sona ab poori tarah se shararat par utaru thi aur shayad thodi masti bhi chadhi thi use.
Main...achha to black male karke meri izzat lutna chahti ho saali sahiba.
Sona...aur kya..sidhi tarah kabu aate ho aap ke lagaun papa ko phone.
Main...achha baba tu jiti main hara. Main to khud hi chahta tha usse kiss karna..maine uske chehre ke pakda aur uske honthon par honth rakh diye. Sona diwar ke saath sati hui thi to mera sharir poori tarah se us par dabav bana raha tha. Sona lagbhag meri hi height ki thi to uski chut par mera khada hua lund baar baar prahar kar raha tha.
Maine uske honth chusne shuru kiye. Uske honthon ka swad ekdam se vini ke honthon jaisa tha. Ekdam kache kache raseele honth. Itne naram ke mujhe laga kahin muh se alag hi na ho jayen kyunki main josh mein kaafi jor se chus raha tha. Usne bhi chusna shuru kar diya aur masti mein mujhe apni or khinche ja rahi thi.
Kuchh der baad usne khud hi mujhe chhod diya. Khair meri yeh kiss bhi bahut bhayankar thi. Maine usse shararat bhare lehje mein apne khade lund par hath rakhte hue use dikhate hue kaha.
Main….yahi tak ichha thi ya kuchh aur karne ka bhi irada hai.
Sona...bhai ise aap apne underwear mein hi rehne do. Meri jitni ichha thi utna maine kar liya...us din jab aap riya didi ko passionately kiss kar rahe the to meri ichha hui aapse kiss karne ki.
Main...to kaisa laga mujhse kiss karke…
Sona...bahut achha laga bhai...aap sach mein bahut achhi kiss karte ho..ham kiya karenge kiss.
Main...jarur kiya karenge sona...achha ek baat suno.
Sona...haan bhai bolo.
Main...tum abhi riya se clear na karna ke tumhe ham dono ke baare mein pata hai.
Sona...par wo kyun bhai...mujhe sach mein koi aitraz nahi hai.
Main...arey pagal wo main janta hun...par mujhe thodi masti karni hai uske saath. Ek din jab tum ghar pe hogi..to mere aane se pehle bathroom mein chale jana. Ham message mein contact kar lenge. Fir main use jaake pakad lunga. Wo bolegi ke sona hai. To main bolunga ke main sona ki parwah nahi karta hone do. Itne mein tum nikal aana. Main usi mode mein rahunga. Tum over react karna. Aur ham dono par chillana. Fir dekhte hain riya ka reaction.
Sona...rehne do na bhai di dar jayegi.
Main...arey karne do na thodi der ki to baat hai. Fir ham sab bata denge use.
Sona...thik hai bhai..sach mein maza ayega…
Fir use pata nahi kya hua...usne mujhe pakda aur mere honthon par fir se honth rakh ke buri tarah se chusne lagi. Main bhi mast ho gaya. Ab maine ek hath se apne lund ko pakad liya aur use hilane laga.
Sona mujhe aisa karne hue dekh rahi thi. Mera lund buri tarah se uski chut par ragad kha raha tha. Use bhi shayad ab achha lag raha tha. Mujhe mehsus ho raha tha ke lagta hai sona jald hi mere neeche hogi ab.
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Vini ne incest ki or pehla kadam to badha diya tha. Par wo ladki kisi aur hi nature ki thi. Use to mujhse wahi bhai behan wala pyar jyada pasand tha to ham us din jab ghar wapis aaye to maine vini ki ankhon mein pachhtava dekha.
Wo mujhse nazren chura rahi thi. Even uske baad kitne hi din tak usne mujhse baat hi nahi ki. Main samajh nahi pa raha tha ke ise akhir ho kya gaya. Main to ek kadam aur aage badhne ki soch raha tha par vini ne to mujhe dekhna aur yahan tak bolna bhi band kar diya.
Main preshan ho utha ke isse to achha tab tha jab hamare beech kuchh hua nahi tha. Kam se kam hamme relation to bahut achha tha. Darasal main apni chhutki ke bina ek pal bhi nahi reh sakta. Itna to aap log abhi tak samajh hi gaye hone.
Waise reh to chhutki bhi mere bina nahi sakti. Par wo kuchh ajib sa react kar rahi thi. Aur mujhe yeh bhi pata hai ke mujhse door hone ki wajah se woh ander hi ander tadap bhi rahi hogi. Par main kar bhi kya sakta tha.
Lagbhag ek hafte baad jab had ho gayi aur usne school jaate wakt mujhe ignore sa kiya to mujhe achha nahi laga aur maine socha ke main isse baat karunga. Kyunki bina baat kiye to yeh masla hal nahi ho sakta tha.
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Hello bro,Manik bhai behtareen update diya ... Sona ka sudden pas aana aur Vinni ka nazre churana badiya combo tha.. ab aap ek bat samzo jaha quality hoti hai waha aadmi dam ki perwah nahi kerta.. aap ek acche writer ho aur padne maja bhi aata hai magar reader's ka ek base banne me time lagta hai aur jab banta hai to millions tak jata hai ... Enigma bhai iska ek badiya example hai . Aap ke case me aesa hua ki jese base ban na start ho rha tha ki ap ne kahani me break le liya wo bhi bada lamba wala ... Issey aap ke reader idher udher ho gaye ..lekin wo jarur wapus aa jayenge bus aap apni continuity banaye rakhe . Kyu ki aap ke pas quility hai ... Comment aur like ki itni chinta na kare wo itne aayenge ki aap sambhal nahi payenge .. bus kahani barkrar rakhe aur usme sex ke alawa bhi tarah tarah ke masale ya emotions dalte rahy ...
Ant me yahi kahunga ye update bhi anya updates ki tarah behtareen tha ...
eagerly waiting mahi bhaiHello bro,
Thanks for such a long message. Ya I do agree with you that the readers deserted my story due to my long absence. But bro the things are not always in our hands. I was helpless for not being there. But yeah you are right.
You know what the real wages for a writer are comments and likes, and the smile automatically appeared on my face when I read your line "Comment aur like ki itni chinta na kare wo itne aayenge ki aap sambhal nahi payenge .." thanks a lot brother for your comment and concern. From now onwards I will post the updates thrice in a week, i.e. on Monday Wednesday and Friday...thanks a lot
Well u hv brilliant talent never forget that and u will see that how people ll connect with ur storyHello bro,
Thanks for such a long message. Ya I do agree with you that the readers deserted my story due to my long absence. But bro the things are not always in our hands. I was helpless for not being there. But yeah you are right.
You know what the real wages for a writer are comments and likes, and the smile automatically appeared on my face when I read your line "Comment aur like ki itni chinta na kare wo itne aayenge ki aap sambhal nahi payenge .." thanks a lot brother for your comment and concern. From now onwards I will post the updates thrice in a week, i.e. on Monday Wednesday and Friday...thanks a lot
Lajvab update bhai
Fantastic update waiting for next
Very good updates or Sona ka reaction jabardast lga waiting for next
Behad hi shanadar or zabardast update bhai.
Bahut khoob superb.
Waiting for next update.....
Fantastic Update...
Thanks for your comments guys....I have posted the next updatesuper duper hit update bro
keep it up