Incest SAFAR - MERI BEHNO KI TRISHNA

[manikmittalme07]

Awesome Update bro

thanks a lot bro....

 

[manikmittalme07]

Nice update bhai

thanks a lot bro....

 

[manikmittalme07]

Fantastic update waiting for next

thanks a lot bro....

 

[manikmittalme07]

Likhawat toh badhiya thi bhai. Kaafi hi acche se likha gaya update tha.
But plot mujhe thoda yaha cliche laga.
Dusri bhaasha me kahu toh thoda predictable.
Ab hero apni sis ko bhi wese hi dekhna shuru kar dega, attract hoega. Ye plot toh yu predict ho gaya. Jaha takmeri guessing hai, aage aisa hi hone waala hai. Ye predictibility jitni kam rahe utna accha hai bhai.
Thoda atpata ye bhi laga ki simi ne sex ki harr ek detail share kari.
Baaki likhne ki style mujhe kaafi pasand aayi. Grammatical errors bhi mujhe koi nazar nahi aaye. Uske liye..

thanks a lot bro....bhai maine pehle hi bola tha ke main aap jaisa writer nahi hun. just try to write....waise aise hi likhte likhte thoda likhna aa jayega...thanks for reading bro...

 

[manikmittalme07]

Uski gf tho bohat kush hai. Shayad apni behen par interest nhi hai.

oh but you should try

 

[manikmittalme07]

Bahut hi shaandar update diya hai bhai..
Nice and awesome update..

thanks a lot bro....

 

[manikmittalme07]

Nice update...

thanks a lot bro....

 

[manikmittalme07]

Waiting for next update

thanks a lot bro....

 

[manikmittalme07]

Nice and awesome update...

thanks a lot bro....

 

[Werewolf]

thanks a lot bro....bhai maine pehle hi bola tha ke main aap jaisa writer nahi hun. just try to write....waise aise hi likhte likhte thoda likhna aa jayega...thanks for reading bro...

Arre nahi bro. Mein koi bada writer nahi.
Aap boht behtareen likh rahe ho. Grammatical errors toh na ke baraabar hai. But, mein chaahunga ki aap suspense badhaaye. Ye just mera ek suggestion hai. Aur reviews thode late ho sakte hai kyuki mein apni story bhi likh raha hu...
Keep writing!