thanks a lot broNice and superb update...
thanks a lot broNice and superb update...
thanks a lot bro samajhne ke liye. dekhikiye main har reader ka comment padhta hun aur use tarjih bhi deta hun. sahi hai na bhai. regular type ki stories to kitni chal rahi hain forum par. kuchh to leek se hatkar hona hi chahiye na bro...aap ek writer ki problem samajhiye...waise main kayi jagah par likhta raha hun aur meri har kahani pasand ki gayi hai abhi tak (means erotic ke ilawa normal stories ki baat kar raha hun bhai) peshe se main ek CA hun. lekin yeh story writing ka shauk mujhe bachpan se hi hai...par main likhta hamesha apne man mutabik hi hun. isliye yeh story bhi apne hisab se likhunga. aap sabhi se hath jod ke vinti hai. jaisi bhi hai aap sweekar karen please....Mehak ke behaviour ko thoda achhe se dikhate.. eka ek woh apne papa ke itne close ho gayi, ye hazam nahi hota, kyonki apne suru se hi uske character ko alag hi tarah se pesh kiya hai.. ye role riya play kar sakti thi...
Baaki apka kehna bilkul sahi hai,. sabhi ladki ek hi ladke ki nhi mil sakta, isay story boring ho jata hai.. aise dhero story pahle se hi maujood hi iss forum par..
Baaki aap badhiya writer hain, isliye iss forum par pahla comment apke hi story par kiya.
Agle update ka intezaar rahega
thanks a lot broSuperb Update...
bhai sab kuchh hoga is story mein...aap fikar mat karo...bas story mujhe apne hisab se likhne do..aapko maza aayega...aapke liye maine mehak wala ek special episode taiyar kiya hai. dekhna aap kahoge ke haan kuchh to hai...but please let mein write according to my imaginations...Story ab tk full superb, Vini ki seal bhai ne finally khol di ab bachi uski GAND.
lagay rho dam k chodo choti gurya ko
2nd. Vini ki opening k bad sex ab ek baar ho ya 10 sex o hoagya ab bari hy mehak ki ,
mehak or manav bro sis incest se baap pr kaha lagaa diya usko jawan khoon pr jawan khon chary budday baap se garmi niklway pr lagay ho.
thanks a lot bro...aise msgs dekhta hun to maza aa jata hai aur lagta hai ke mera likhna safal ho gaya haiSuch a wonderful update mja agya
Waiting for next
thanks a lot bro...Nice update...
abhi thodi der mein bhai...manikmittalme07 bhai next update kab tak aayega?
thodi der mein broWaiting for next update
thanks a lot bro for showing such love...I am not going to close it right now. but when a lot of person don't like my writing or my plot I think why I am doing so hard work on such things...Bulkul bhi nahi bhai aap ke updates ke liye roj 5 to 6 times thread par aata hun. Pl is kahani ko band karna ka sonchiye bhi mat. Thanks