Listen bro...i regard your views seriously. But I can't do any compromise with my stories. I don't want to hurt anyone but take it as my helplessness bro. Please be with the story. I don't wanna lose a single reader. Please try to understand that it is very difficult for me to get time to write story. But still I do that. So you guys should cooperate with me. Thanks a lot for your message
Thank you so much bhai. Aapke is pyar ke liye poore hridya se dhanyavaad karta hun. Aapne sahi kaha ke mujhe apne hisab se likhna chahiye aur main likhunga bhi. Aur jab time ayega to maa ko bhi khushiyan milengi. Uska bhi to apne bete par hak hai. Main kisi ke comments ko ignore to nahi kar sakta par unhe samjha to sakta hun. Aapka bahut bahut dhanyavaad is pyar ke liye.
aisa phir se bola to
story ka maza hi isme hai ki lekhak apni soch apni imagination se junoon se likhta rahe ... sujhav aur pratikriya to aati rahengi ... yehi to rason ki vividhta hai ... comments ka maza leejiye au mast maula ki tarah likhte rahiye ... yeh kahani is forum ki acchi kahaniyon me gini jaati hai ...
ab behati ganga mae mai bhi tohda haath dho loun ... yet another faltu suggestion ... waise kahani jzyada behano par kendrit hai par usme maa se sambandh stapith hona ek alag hi romanch lata hai ... uspe zara gaur kijiye ... maa ki sharten bahut strict hain ... khaskar city wali ... usse maa ka hi nuksaan hai ... ussi ki tadap bhadti hai ... aur ek baar to woh apni hi shart ko taar taar kar chuki hai ... vini ko sab pata hai maa kee peeda kae baare mai ... maa yeh bhi jaanti hai ki usse pata hai ... ab jab vini khud hi sambhog ke alaukik anand to khud mehsus kar chuki hai ... usse maa ki tadap ka aur bhi acche sae ehsas hoga ... kyun na aap kuch aisa chakrvuyh chalayen jisme vini hi apne bhai aur maa ke milan ka rasta kuch kam kateela kare ... maa ki city wali shart ko thoda dheela kare ... aur ho sake to usme shamil ho jaye ... aisi trishna bhi to sagi behan mai utpan ho sakti hai ... kyun ??? ... aur yeh sab bina pita ke swabhmaan ko thaes pauncha kar bhi kiya jaa sakta hai ... aur kya pata unhe thaes pahunche gi bhi ki nahi ,,, aakhir woh bhi to apni patni ki atript icchaon se agyaan nahi honge ... unhe bhi pata hai ki unki patni bhi ek jeeti-jaagti aurat hai ... koi patthar ki moorat nahi ... aur agar in halaaton mae unka apna beta hi ... bina unke samman ki avhelna kiye unki priye patni ko ghar ki chaar-diwaari mae hi santusht rakhe ... to isse acchi baat kya ho sakti hai ...
Sorry Brother Meri bAaato ka bura laga apko....
Thank you so much bro. Sahi kaha aapne. Sabke hisab se likhne baitha to khichdi pak jayegi. Ab maine decide kar liya hai ke samjhane ki koshish karunga aur apne hisab se hi likhunga. Thanks again broBhai aapne mehak ke sath audience ko achchi tarah jod diya hai pahle se hi.. isliye sabke emotion bahar aa rahe hain. mehak me eka ek badlav ne heran kar diya hai.
Baki aap update regularly dete hain, story achchi hai, isay roke nahi.
Humare comments ki wajah se aap koi change na kare.. jo apke mann me ho waise hi likhiye, nahi toh ye fixed match jaisa hoga
Humare comments ko positively hi lein
