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Shukriya bhai..Nice and emotional update bro. Age ka intejr
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Shukriya bhai..Nice and emotional update bro. Age ka intejr
Bohat bohat shukriya bhaiBhai maine aapki story kal se hi pahna start ki hai aur ab tak maine puri padh li hai . Bahut hi interesting story hai. Story padhkar main comment karne se khud ko rok nahi paaya Xform par ye mera pahla comment hai.
Jabardast update bhaiUPDATE NO.39Subha Meri Ankh khuli To Tanisha abi b mert sinay sy lagi hoi Thi aj pata nahi q mujhy Kuch Theek nahi lag rha tha Jesy Kuch to galat honay wala hy Mainy Tanisha ko thora side kiya fresh bokay Dhyaan lga k Kitchen mein gya maa wahi thi...
Main:- Good Morning maa..
Maa:- Good Morning... Kesi ht tanisha ab.?
Main:- Woh theek hy...
Mainy Maa aur Tanisha K liye Coffee bnai Aur maa ko dy k kamre mein agya Tanisha Ko jaga k Coffee di Aur Anjili Aur Ayesha Ko uthaya Aur Komal ko phone kiya us sy baat krny k bad main gudiya ko School chor k aya Phir ghr aa k Tanisha K pass gya...
Main:- Kesi ho meri jaan...
Tanisha:- Apky hoty mujhy Kuch Hoga kya.?
Main:- Honay b nahi dun ga...
Main Uskay Dimple py Kiss kr k Bike ly k Nikal gya college Akshra ka oppienment aj ka krwa liya tha sham ka...
Hum College pohanchy To Gate py hi Rohan mill gya... Mainy usky pass ja k bike roki
Rohan:- Hi Saim And..?
Main:- Ratna...
Rohan:- Hi ratna...
Ratna:- Hi Main chalti hun saim...
Main:- O.k Bye...
Woh Chali gai Rohan Usko hi ghoory ja rha tha...
Main:- Ohhh hello...
Rohan:- Bhai kya woh teri behen hy.?
Main:- Nahi Meri dost hy woh....
Rohan:- Bhai Sacha pyaar hogya mujhy...
Main:- Aby pehli baar dekha hy usko tonnay...
Rohan:- Abey Pagal hy kya Usky liye main Roz Bus stand jata tha Lekin bhai himmat nahi jutta paya bolny ki bolna to door naam b aj pata chala 2 saal bad...
Main:- Usko pata hy.?
Rohan:- Maloom nahi....Chal chor ander chalte hain Wesy Bohat Khusbsoorat naam hy Ratna How cute...
Woh aisy hi Acting krta rha aur main b muskura K uski batein sunta rha Hum Class mein chale gaye Wahan Sarita madam Pehly sy hi Mojood thi...
Main:- Mam Kya hum ander aa sakty hain.?
Sarita:- Aiye Apka hi college hy...
Main:- Sorry mam woh...
Sarita:- Kya woh Koi disiplane naam ki cheez hy k nahi Tum logo k liye...
Tabhi Afat ki poriya Wahan i yani Ishika..
Woh Mam k Bs Hi bol k Apni jagah py ja k beth gai...
Main:- Sary Disiplane hmary liye hi hain.?
Sarita:- What do you mean.?
Main:- Mam abi apky samny woh Bina pochy ja k beth gai Apny to Kuch Nahi bola usko.?
Tabhi ishika Khari hoi...
Ishika:- Tum mujhsy mukabla kro gy.?
Main:- Main mam sy baat kr rha hun na k apsy...
Sarita:- Shutup And ja k apni jagah Py betho...
Main:- Ji mam...
Main aur rohan ja k pichy beth gaye...
Sarita Mam Lecture deny lagi main bary goor sy sun rha tha Mera poora dhyaan board py tha lekin kisi aur ka dhyaan meri taraf tha Aur gussa saf saf dikh rha tha Kuch der mein ek katil muskaan k sath usny mooh pher liya...
Aisy hi Teacher aa k parhaty Rahy aur jaty rahy...
Break Mein Hum log canteen janay lagy...
Main:- Rohan to ja khana yahi Garden mein ly aa main yahi betha hun...
Main ja k Per k pass beth gya Aur Sochny laga...
Mery samny 2 task hain abi mujhy Devanad ko sabak sikhana hy aur 16 oct mystery Ko solve krna hy....
Abi yeh hi soch rha tha k mery samny kuch Log aa k khary hogaye...
A1:- Kya by hero Filmi kaliya khilla rha hy.?
Main khra Hogya...
Main:- Ap kon.?
A1:- Seniors sy bat krny ki tameez nahi hy kya.?
Main:- Ohh to Ragging krny aye ho.?
A2:- Han Chal hum jesa boly wesa kr...
Main:- Chal Done Jo krna hy mery sath krna Kisi aur k sath nahi..Bol mazoor.?
A1:- Manzoor....
Tabi Wahan Kuch larkiyan b unky sath aa khri hogai dekhty Dekhty Sabi wahan aa gaye Ishika aur Tara b aa gai wahan apni apni paltan k sath...
A1:- Chal bol Kya kry ga.?
Main:- Woh tum log decide kro...
Mainy ghari ki taraf dekha aur bola...
Main:- Sirf 15 min hain Jo boly gy karun ga...
L1:- Mtlab 15 min bad nahi kry ga.?
Main:- Nahi krun ga Tik tik 14 min 50 sec...
A1:- Chal Apni shirt uttar Mainy Shirt k button Khola Start kiye Ander shukr hy Ek Sleve less shir thi...
Sabhi Boady dekh k Hooting krny lafy Larkiyan to sab sy zyada Is sy saloon ki Jaal gai...
A1:- Chal Ja Aur Ek phool ly k Vice principle ko dy k aa...
Mainy shirt pehni Ek gulaab poory style mein toor k Madam jo Side Kisi sy Phone py baat rahi thi unki taraf barhaya...
Main:- Hello mam Yeh phool mujhy wahan gira milla Socha apko dy dun...
V.p:- O.k lao do...
Woh abi shayad busy thi Isi liye jaldi sy phool liya aur mujhy chalta kiya...
Main Wapis moora Aur Style sy chalta huwa Unky pass agya...
Sab ki saloon ki jaal gai...
A2:- Chal Ab Kisi larki kiss kr...
Main:- Nahi krun ga...
A1:- Q nahi kry ga?
Ghari dikhaty huway...
Main:- Time Up....
L1:- Krny ko bola to kr...
Main:- Bola na time up Ab chalo shaba kato....
A1 Ny mery collar py hath daal diya Saaly Ki zindagi Ki sab sy bari galti thi mainy Usko pakr k Per sy lga aur ek moka uski kamr mein mara aur usky kaan mrin Bola...
Main:- Jisny b Tujhy yahan bheja ho Agr tujhu zindagi pyari hy to chala ja Warna Tujhy Duniya Dhoond b na paye aisa jagah Ghusaon ga tujhy....
Usko chor diya Woh itna ghbra gya tha Woh apny sathiyoun ko ly k chala Gya mainy Ishika ki taraf Nighaa Dali Woh b Gusse mein chali gai sab Bari bari chale gaye Hmary Rohan bhaiya b Khana ly aye...
Tabhi koi wahan phir agya...
Tara:- Hi kya main b Khaa salti hun tumhary sath.?
Rohan:- Sorry 2 hi logo ka khana hy...
Mainy usky sir py halko si tapli mari..
Main:- Ao na Tara Kha lo...
Tara:- O.k
Woh hmary sath beth gai mujhy Yeh baat ajeeb lagi K jo larki Ek Ankh nahi dekh sakti thi woh mery sath khana kha rahi hy Lekin mainy Is baat ki ignore kiya Aur Khana kha k class mein chala gya Ishika wahan nahi thi Main College k bad ghr aya Gudiya ko school Sy ghr laya akshra ko hospital ly k gya aur Shadi ki tyariya Zor shoor sy Hony lagi
1 week Later....
Kal Subha Abhi ki shadi hy Sari tyaariyan Poori hain Lekin mujhy Tension Isis baat ki thi k Shadi Main koi Aar na aye isi liye ek hafta Agy krwai thi shadi q k Mujhu Mystery 16 Oct solve krni thi...
Sab Aj bohat khush thy Sab Abhi sy mill k Bohat khush thy Komal Aur Avni nahi aa saki shadi k liye q k Unka Koi Test tha Aur mainy hi mana kr diya tha Shadi mein any k liye..
Subha Uth k main Sab kuch dekhny laga Poora Sheher invted tha shadi mein Main Marriage place ja k sab intazam krwa diya Sabhi ladies Parlour gai thi....
Sham Ko Guest ana shuru hogaye Tabhi Ek gari aa k ruki Aur sath hi mera mobile baj para main phone recive krny side hogya Aur ishika Ander baridal Room mein chali gai Sab mehman aa gaye siwaye hmari Rollu k..
Mainy usko call kiya...
Main:- Hello Rollu kahan hy yr kb sy wait kr rha hun...
Heera:- Bs pohach hi gai Media to nahi hy na.?
Main:- Nahi to aja bs...
Thori der mein Heera b aa gai main Uskk sab k pasa chor aya...
Sabhi Ladies Bridal room mein thin...
Tabhi wahan Heera Kamre mein enter hoi...
Shikha:- Didi ap aa gaye main kb sy wait kr rahi hun...
Heera:- Awww sorry gudiya Tjora late hogai...
Heera sab sy bari bari milli 2 logon ki anljein to jesy Jhapkna ji bhol gai hon....
Yeh Aur koi nahi Dono beheny yani Ishika Aur Abira thin....
Ishika:- Mam Ap yahan Main bohat bari fan ho apki Infact hum dono Bohat bari fan hain apki Aj apko mill k Bohat khushi hoi....
Heera:- Thaks But Abira Kon hy ap dono mein sy...
Abira:- Ap mera naam janti hain.? Wow...
Heera:- Apky bhai Ny bta bta k kaan bhar diye apky bary mein....
Heera Abira k galy lagi...
Abir:- Ap bhai Ko janti hain.?
Tanisha:- Yeh to bachpan k dost hain....
Phir idhr udhr ki batein krny lagy Ishika Abira k bhai Ki parsenality sy Kagi impress hogai thi woh usi k bary mein soch rahi thi kesa Hoga woh kahan hoga Abi tk q nahi milli us sy...
Idhr Main abhi ko Mandaap mein ly aya tha Tabhi mera phone baja mainy dekha to Ratna ka phone tha...
Main:- Hello Tum ai q nahi abi tk.?
Ratna(Rote huwye):- Saim baba ko pata nahi kya hogya hy woh behosh hogaye hain please aa jao...
Main:- Tum roo nahi main abi aya....
Main Sidha maa ko pass gya Woh Abi A'maa k pass bethi thi..
Main:- Maa ek sec idhr aiye....
Maa:- Kya huwa bol na...
Main:- Please maa Ek sec...
Maa uth k aa gai mainy maa ko sab btaya...
Maa:- Main chalti hun tery sath...
Main:- Ap yahan dekho main jaldi aon ga....
Main abhi k pass gya...
Main:- Bhai Ek bohat bari emergecy hogai hy main ata hun agr late hogya to ghr py milta hun....
Abhi:- Sab theek main chalun kya sath.?
Maim:- Nahi Main ja rha hun details bad mein deta hun...
Main wahan sy sidha Gari nikali Aur Ghr ki taraf nikal gya rasty mein Recent py Heera ka num tha usi ko call kia mainy...
Heera:- ji boliye mr Rode...
Main:- Rollu Yr problem hogai hy ek Abi Tanisha pass mein hy to phone dy please...
Tanisha:- Hello.?
Mainy usko bta diya sab
Tanisha:- Ap khud boldijiye...
Tanisha ny phone Abira ko dy diya...
Main:- Hello
Abira:- Hello Bhai kya huwa.?
Main:- Princees Ek emegency k kaaran mujhy kahin jana par rha hy main please To nazarz mat hona...
Abira:- Its o.k bhaiya Jaldi anay ka try krna...
Main:- O.k bye....
Main Ghr pohach Gya sidha quaters mein gya..
Wahan Kaka behosh pary thy ratna Pass beth k roo rahi thi..
Main:- Ratna kya huwa Chalo jaldi hospital...
Woh mujhy dekh K khari hogai Aur mery galy lag gai Mujhy ek Ajeeb si feelling ai Jesa k Mujhy bs tab ji ati hy jb main maa ya apni kiso b biwi ko haly lagta hun ek ajeeb sa ehsass hota hy Us waqat Lekin main is waqat tension mein tha isi liye mainy ignore kr k kaka ko Gari mein bitha k Hospital ly Aya Wahan doctor Unko emergency mein ly gai Ratna mery kandhy py rakh k beth gai..
Karib 1 ya 1:30ghanty k baad doctor bahir aye...
Doctor:- Patient k sath jo hy Woh Mery cabin mein aye...
Main Ratna k sath Cabin mein chala gya...
Main:- kya huwa doctor.?
Doc:- Dekhiye Patient ko Blood cancer hy Last stage...
Main:- Whaat.? Lekin woh Pehly to theek thy...
Ratna aur ronay lagi mainy usko Sahara diya..
Doc:- dekhiye sir Unky lass zyada samy nahi hy zyada sy zyada 12 ghanty...
Ratna to jesy toot gai..
Mainy Usko Sambhala huwa tha Woh zor zor sy ronay lagi..
Main:- Kya hum mill sakty hain.?
Doc:- Zaror..
Hum dono bahir aye mainy Maan mein adi ko yaad kiya...
Main:- Adi kya tum kuch kr sakty ho.?
Adi:- Bhai Unki zindagi ka chakra khtam hony ko unky akhri kariye ki wajah sy Unko maholat mili hy...
Main:- Woh kya hy.?
Adi:- Apko khud pata chal jaye ga...
Mainy Maa aur papa ko phone kr diya..
Idhr shadi poori ho chuki thi ishika ki ankhein Abira k bhai ko djoond rahi thin lekin woh usko Nahi dikhi Bidai K waqat Ka mahool Thora emotional hogya...
Tabhi Maa aur papa Ny sabko Bta diya...
Tanisha:- Main apky sath chalti hun...
Abhi:- Main bhi...
Tanisha:- Bhaiya Ap Bhabhi k sath gjr jao Hum aty hain...
Abira:- Nahi wahan bhai akely hongy Ap b jaiye...
Tanisha:- Lekin bhabhi.?
Abira:- Tanisha Apni bhabhi ki baat nahi mano gi.?
Wahan sy Abhi tanisha Aur maa papa Hospital k liye nikal aye...
H.m Ny Abira aur baki sab ko Ghr bhejny k liye intazam krwa diya tha...
Idhr Kb Sab aye to Ratna maa k galy lag ronay lagi...
Main Abhi k pass gya...
Main:- Tu q aya Abira kahan hy.?
Abhi:- Woh ghr hy...
Mainy zyada na bola hum sab Ward mein chale gaye Ratna Kaka k sinay py sir rakh Ronay lagi Tanisha ko apni maa k marnay ka manzar yaad agya
Woh ronay lagi Mainu usko Galy lag liya...
Main:- You are my Strong jaan na.?
Tanisha:- Hmmm Bohat Strong lekin jb ap sath hun...
Kaka Hosh mein aye Aur Ratna k sir py hath rakha Aur boly...
Kaka:- Roo nahi meri bachi Mery janay ka samy agya hy lekin tujhsy wada poora kiye bina nahi jaon ga..
Ratna:- Nahi baba apky siwa aur kon hy mera.?
Kaka Ny papa ko taraf dekha...
Kaka:- Sahab Apny Mujhy Hamesha Apnay pariwar ka hissa mana Kya apny jo wada kiya tha Woh poora hosaky ga.?
Papa:- Hamny jo wada kiya usi k liye hum yahan hain...
Kaka:- Beti Teri maang mein sindoor dekh loon phir khushi khushi mar sakoon ga...
Ratna:- Yeh kya bol rahy ho papa.?
Kaka:- Jiski amanat hy uskk somp rha hun meri beti tujhy.?
Ratna:- Ap bachpan sy Aisy hi kehty hain to kisi ki amanat hy Main apki beti hun koi cheez nahi...
Kaka:- Teri khushi K liye hi yeh saab kiya hy beta...
Tabhi papa mery pass aye...
Main:- Papa kis wady ki baat ho rahi hy.?
Papa:- Woh wada jo niyati ny kiya Hy...
Tabhi papa ny Ek Hath mein manglsotar aur Ek hath mein Sindoor ki Dibi nikali...
Main:- Yeh kya.?
Maa:- Yeh teri amant hy...
Main:- Yeh ap kya keh rahi hain maa.?
Mainy Tanisha ki taraf dekha Abhi heeran preshan khra tha...
Tanisha:- Ap Hamesha q bhool jaty hain ap kon hain.?
Main:- Lekin.?
Papa:- Abi adi ny kya btaya.?
Main:- Papa lekin.?
Papa:- Beta Yeh vidji ka vidhan hy Ratna Tumhari dosri biwi hy bhaly hi Tum usko Jb bhi milly lekin Tanisha pehli Aur Ratna dosri biwi hy....
Abhi:- Yeh ho kya rha hy.?
Tanisha:- Kya main bhai ko bta dun.?
Papa:- Han zaror...... Adi.....
Tabhi Ek Roshni k sath Wahan Py adi Agya kaka k Ilawa sab Hill rahy thy baki time stop tha...Ratna Aur abhi to dar gaye...
Abhi:- Yeh kya hy.?
Tabhi Ek ray Adi k hath sy nikal k Abhu aur Ratna k ander chali jati hy...
Undono ki ankhein khud band hojati hain Aur woh Jb ankhein kholty hain sab normal tha...
Abhi:- Itny mahaan insaan hoky b apny....
Woh Mery pairon mein girny laga mainy Usko uthaya....
Main:- Kya kr rha hy.?
Papa:- Baki batein bad mein...
Main:- Papa lekin us sy to poch lo.?
Ratna kuch nahi bolti Bs ankein jhuka leti hy..
Papa Mujhy Mangal sutar dety hain mainy agy bhaar k Uski maag bhari Aur manhlsootar pehna diya...
Humny Kaka k pair chuwye....
Kaka:- Sadha suhagan raho....
Aur Woh parlog sudhar gaye....
Ratna Ronay lagi Sabki ankhein Naam thin...
Tabhi papa ka phone baja wahan sy pata chala Gaon mein koi Maar gya hy sab abhi hi nikal gaye hain...
Humny Ratna Ko sambhala Aur Antim sanskar kr diya subha K 5 bajy hum ghr wapis aye Ayesha Abira Aur anjili ko phone kr k bta diya tha sab air wesy b sab gaon k liye nikal gaye thy..
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