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Nice update bhaiAwnish minakshi ko ly k sheher1 chala jata hy
(Us sheher koi sheher1 likhun ga)
Usy kuch nae pta tha woh kiya kry ga wahan ja lekin usny waha ja k mehnat ki or ek bariya office main kam shuru kiya aisy e kuch sal or nikal gai lekin is doran us ny apni biwi ka ilaj or bohat sy mandir masjid phira or ek din aisy e woh minakshi ko ly k ek jagah ly k gya unhy wahan ja k pta chala k koi sadhu himaliya sy tapsya kr k us jagah aya unhon ny us k pass jany ka faisla kiya eoh us k pass gae or us ko prnam kiya
Awnish:- Namaste baba
Baba:- Ao Awnish putra maim tumhari e rah dekh rha tha
(Awnish or minakshi yeh sun k bohat e shocked hogy)
Awnish;- Baba ap ko mera namm kesy malom
Baba(Muskura kr):- Beta mujhy tum dono k yaha any ka karan b malom hy..
(Is bat py woh or b zyada shocked hogaye)
Awnish:- Baba agr ap ko pta hy to ap hmari is samsya ka hal b bta di jiye
Baba:- Zaror beta yeh vidhi ka vidhan hy ab samy aa chuka hy duniya k kalyan ka tumhari samsya ka hal kud upr waly ni nikal diya hu
Awnish(gambhirta sy):- Matlab.?
Baba:- Putra tum nishchant ho k jao agr upar waly ny chaha to bohat jald tumhy khushkhabri mily gi
Mina:-Baba agr aisa howa to main ap ki sari zindgi gulam rahun gi
Baba:- Beti zindgi koi khelny ki chizz nahi main to nokar hun jo logon ka unky rasty dikhata hun or nokron k gulam nahi hoty ab tum log jao or jald e tum sy dobara mulaqat hogi
Awnish:- Shukriyq baba ap ki dakshna.?
Baba:- Beta yeh duniya to moh hy kya ly k aye or kya ly k jana ab tum log ja sakty ho
Awnish&mina:- parnam baba.
Dono wqhan sy nikal jaty hain or baba ki baty un k dimag main chal rahi thin
Aisy e kuch mahine or nikal jaty hain lekin ek din mina ko ultiyan ati hain to woh doctor k pass jati hy to doctor kehti hy k
Doctor:- congrats mr Awnish she is pregnant
Woh dono yeh sun k to jaisy pagal e ho jaty hain yeh sunany k liye unky kan trass gy thy
Awnish pory office main mithai banta hy or woh yeh khabar gaon bhejta hy to sab ki khushi ka koi thikana e nae hota rajendr bina pal gwaye yeshwand k pass jata hy
Rajendr:- Dost main tujhy e bohat khushi ki khbr sunany aya hun to Nana banany wala hy
(Yeshwand yeh sun k bohat kgush hota hy or agly e pal usko mina ki baty yad aa jati hain woh gussay main ag bagola ho jata hy)
Yeshwendr:- Meri koi bhi beti maa nahi banany wali meri dono betiyon main sy koi bhi
Rajender ko yeh sun k bohat gussa ata hy or woh yeshwendr sy kehta hy
Rajender:- Dost teri sab sy bari beti woh maa banany wali hy
Yeshwender:- Pehli bat mera koi dost nahi or na e meri koi tessri beti hy
Rajender yeh sun k bukhla jata hy or yeshwendr ga giryban pakar leta hy
Rajender:- Mera doat itna gira howa nahi hosakta k apni beti ko manany sy inkar kr dy
Yeshwender:- Teri himmat kesy hoi mujhy hat lgany ki chala ja yaha sy werna main kuch kr bethon ga
Rajender b ek pal wahan nae rukta or gussay main ghr puhanchta hy ja sab yeh dekhty hain to darr jaty hain
Rajeshweri:- Kya huwa bhai saab ny kya kaha
Rajender(gussay main):- Mare gya woh mery liye aj k bat koi b rishta nae hmara us ghr sy or aj k bad koi b uska nam tk nae ly is ghr main
Yeh keh k woh apny kamre main chala jata hy sab yeh su kr shocked ho jaty hain lekin rajendr k faisly k khilaf koi b nae ja sakta tha isliye sab chup rahy
Idhr Awnish mina ka bohat achy sy khyal rakh rha tha or kuch dino main gaon sy Rajeshwei Rajender apni bahoon k satha ata hy woh sab mina ka khyal rakhty hain aur isi bich maloom hota hy k manu b maa banany wali hy sab bohat khush hoty haun or aisy e woh din aa jata hy jis ka sab ko bohat besabri sy intzar tha mina ko pain shuru hoti hy us ko hospital ly k aya jata hy sab k sab log hospital main mojood thy thakur hony ki wajah sy koi b un ko kuch nae keh sakta tha awnish bohat bechain tha woh ek pal k liyr b nae betha tha sab us ko hossla rakhny k liye kehty hain
Laghbhag koi 2:3 ghanty bad doctor bahir ati hy sab us ki taraf jaty hain
Doctor:- Congratulations Apko beta huwa hy
Sab yeh sun k bohat khush hoty hain awnish ek jagah beth jata hy usko samajh nae ata ki woh kesy react kry woh bs itna e bol pata hy k mina kesi hy.?
Doctor:- woh bilkul theek hain ap 2 ghanty main un sy mil sakty hain
2 ghanty bad nurse ati hy or kehti hy ki ap un sy mill sakty hain
Sab sy pehly Awnish andr jata hy mina bed py lenti hoi thi uski ankhy band thi or bacha sath jholy py hy.
Awnish mina k sar py kiss krta hy or bachy ko apni god main leta or uski sundarta main kho jata hai isi dura mina b ankhy kholti hy or awnish ko bachy ki taraf dekhty hoye ankohn main anosson k sath uski b ankh chalak jati hy
Mina:- Mujhy nae dikhai gy mery bete ko
Awnish mina ki awaz sy hosh main ata hy or nam ankhon k sath bachy ko ly k us k pass beth jata hy dono uski sundrta main kho jaty hain thori der main sabb andr ajaty hain or bari bari sab bachy do dekhty hain or pya krty hain
Anjli:- Bari maa yeh mela betu hai na main ish k shat khelon gi
Sab anjli ki is massomiyat pr muskura dety hain
Mina:- Han meri gudiya yeh apka betu hy ap isky sath khoob khelo
Anjili ek minute k liye b usko nahi chorti bari mushkil k usko bhula phisla k bahir laty hain mina bachy ko doodh pilati hy
Or wahi dusri or usi din manu b ek bohat e pyari beti ko janam deti hai.
Dono k janam k wakt asman pora badlon sy bhar jata hy aisa lagta hy k woh apni khushi zahir krny k koshish kr rha hy
Dono hospital sy ghr ati hain hain aisy kuch mahine guzqr jaty hain namm karan dono ka ek sath hoga yeh rajendr ka faisla tha isi liye manu ku tabiya thori sahi hony ka intzar kr k namm karan ka din ty hota hai
Sara khandan gaon jata hy or Awnish baba ji ko bolata hy namm karan k liye sabb bohat khush thy haveli ko kisi dulhan ki tarhan sjaya jata hy
Baba ji aty hain sab un ko parnam kry hain dono bachon ko laya jata hy baba ji dono ko hath main lety hain or muskura dety(ab woh q muskuraye un ko maloom)
Baba:- Dono k chehery ka tej dekh kr lagta hy upar waly ny apny hathon sy inki taqdeer likhi hy
Rajender:- Matlab.?
Baba:- putra vidhi k vidhan ko kon rok sakta hai inki kismat main jo hoga ap sab ko qabool krna hoga..
Rajender:- Main kuch samjha nahi.
Baba:- Waqat bohat bari cheez hy putra sab samajh jao gy barhal inka namm karan krty hain
Baba:- Beta bohat hy gooni hy apky liye bohat e khushkismat sabit hoga iska nam SAIM
Baba:- beti bohat e nazook or bhageshali hogi iska nam KOMAL
Usky bad babajji jo kehty hain woh sun k sab ghbra jaty hain
Baba:- putra tumhara beta bohat khushkismat hy lekin 5 saal ki umar k bad is py mrityu ka saya hy
(Sab yeh sun k ghabra jaty hain)
Awnish:- Baba yeh kesy hosakta hy iska koi haal.?
Baba:- beta isko 5 saal k bat apny sy soor krna hoga isy apny sabh rishty naty toorny hongy porry 14 saal tk
Sab k upar yeh bat boomb ki tarha kam krti hy mina ki to mano jaan e nikal gai jis bete k liye din rat manaat mangi usi ko apny sy dorr krna hoga
Baba yeh bat keh k chaly jaty hain sabb shock main hoty hain par unko is bat ki khushi hoti hy k unky do rehny sy Saim ko jaan bach jaye gi
Waqat apni raftar sy bitata hy is dura Awnish bohat bara admi ban jata hy ab woh sab k sath shaher1 main rehta hy sab ny faisla kiya tha k 5 saal k saab sath rahy gy bua chacha k sary bachy.
Apna hero ab chalta khelta pury ghr k jaan ban chuka tha lekin uski jaan to komal thi woh har waqat usky sath khelta uski har batt ko pra krta sab unky pyar ko dekh k bohat khush hoty..
Akhir woh samy aa e gya aj Saim ka 5 janam din tha saab is bat sy dukhi thy k ab unsko sab sy door jana hoga saab isi chinta main thy isiko kidhr bheja jaye aisy e sabb soch rahy thy k ghr k samny aa k ek car ruki
Mossi intro time
Minali(bari mossi)
Age:-39
Yeh america main rehti hain
Inki ek beti hai
Ruchi
Age 24
Back to story
Gari main sy minali or ruchi or usky papa bahir nikly mina usko dekh k bohat khush hoi or namm ankhon k sath usky galy lag gai
Mina:- Meri behen tu kahan thi mujhy itna praya kr diya k mili tk nahi
Minali:- Nahi didi aisi bat nahi hy main pechly hafty e America sy i hun mujhy jab pta chala k yeh sab hogya main ap ko milny aa gai kidhr hy mera beta
Saim andr sy bhagta howa ata hy maa maa keh k mina ki tango sy lipat jata hy or minali ko dekh k puchta hy k
Saim:- Mama yeh kon hain!Hi aunty Hi didi Hi uncle
Minali yeh sun k bohat khush hoti hy or usko apni god main utha k gal chumti hai
Minali:- Mera bacha main apki mama ki behen hun
Saim:- Ap meri mama ki behen matlab meri mossi! Hi mossi solly main apko nahi pehnchana
Yeh keh k woh apnh kaan pakr leta hy
Minali uski is massoomiyat py muskura deti hy apny galy sy lgati hy
Isi tarha saim Ruchi k satb khelny lagta hy
Minali ko jab pta chalta hy k uski jaan ko khatra hy to kehti hy k
Minali:- Didi main Saim ko apny sath america ly k jaaon gi
Sab yeh sun k khush hojaty hain k woh kisi apny k sath to rahy ga saab apny dill py pathar rakh k Saim ko minali k sath bhejny k liye ready hojaty hain
Jab yeh bat Anjili ko pta chalti hy woh pura ghr sar utha leti hy or usky sath Payal Roopa priya or varsha b yeh e kehti hain k woh apny bhai k kahin nahi jany dy gy sab ko bhula phisla k samjha dety hain Or uski jany ki tyari hoti hai saim ko bs is bat ka dukh hota hy k woh komal sy door jaye ga
Akhir woh din ajata hy saim america ja rha tha sabb roo rahy thy or unsko galy lga kr pyar kr rahy thy sab sy zyada to uski behny roo rahi thi jaty waqat Saim Komal ka hath pakr leta leta hy sab ye dekh kr or dukhi hojaty hain woh uska hath chorny ka nam nahi le rha tha or komal ny b uska hath bohat mazbooti sy pakra howa tha lekin ruchi or Minali usko apny sath ly jaty hain sab ki ankhy nam thi mina to saab sy zyada roo rahi thi jaty waqat k saim ankhin sirf komal par thin lekin woh nikal gya apni zindgi k safar pr jisy khud nahi pta tha woh kahan ly k jaye ga
After 14 Years
Lagta hai SAIM ka god se connection type ka kuch hai as it is Fantasy
Ab SAIM to chala gaya America now it starts dekhna hai ab 14 saal bad kya changes aye hai
Eagerly waiting 4 next update
