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Fantasy Saim(Love,Thrill,Romance) (completed)

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Fantastic awesome superb update bhai, lagta hey ek aur Saim dewani aageye, yar ye Indoo ney to dimag ghuma diya,lagta to hey ki Saim k sath talwar zarna aur murti ki connection hey, lekin uski gaon aur ye gaon to alag alag hey fir bhi ye connection keysey bana dekhtey hey agey
KEEP IT UP AND AS ALWAYS WAITING FOR
 
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Lagtaa hai Indoo ko kuuch aur b maalum hai koi Raz

waiting for awesome update just like this
 
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UPDATE NO.75
Main Indoo Ky Expressions Sy Confuse ho rha tha Woh phir apni baat ko Dohraty huway boli.

Main:- Ho kya gya gy apko Chalo wada chahiye na main krta hu...

Abi is sy pehly main kuch bolta Ek Goli chali Jo k mery Aur Indoo K bich sy guzari Gari ka sheesha Torty huway.

Main Ny Goli ko dekh liya Tha aty huway Main ny Indoo ko pichy ki diya tha.

Indoo ek dam ghbra gai. Tabhi Bohat si golliyan Ek sath chali pori gari golliyon sy chali ho gai main ny Indoo ko apni bahoo mein bhar liya tha.

Kuch der mein firing band hogai. Main ny dekha to indoo behosh ho gai thi Mery liye acha tha ab woh nahi dekh paye gi Mujhy.

Main Sidha huwa ek admi gari check krny aa rha tha k maar gaye k nahi abi woh karib aa hi rha tha K main ny Darwazy ko ek taang mari Woh Jar sy ukhar k sidha us admi ko jaa k laga Woh wahan sy dor ja k gira Aur Usky hath mein Ek machine gun tha Jo k hawa mein ucha gai Jis ko main ny agy hokay pakr liya Aur Uska Pata mery galy mein agya Jo wahan khary tgy uhone phir sy golliyan chalana shuru kr diya 4 taraf sy golliyan chal rahi thi Aur bich mein main khra tha Tabhi main ny Ny Gun Reload ki Ahr Chalna shuru kr di Meray pory bazoo hill rahy thy gun k Recoil sy Lekin main ny Gun Ka triiger nahi chora Aur Andhadhun fairing Krta rha aur agy bharta rha Jo bhi aa rha tha Woh marta ja rha tha Tabhi Goliyan khtam hogai mery wali gun main ny Usko phenka Aur bhag k ek admi k sir py laat mari Aur Aur Usky sir sy flip laga k Uski gun pakr k uski gardan tor di Aur bina deri kiye phir sy golliyan chalana shuru kr di Ab bohat kam log bachy thy jin ki golliyan khatam Hogai thi Lekin main ny Unko bhaagny nahi diya Aur sab ko goliyan maar di lekin dk admi ki taang mein goli mari Jo k bhaag rha tha.

Main Usky pass gya Aur uska gireban pakr liya.

Main:- Bol kisny bheja hy tujhy.

Admi(dard sy chillata huwa):- R..Raka ny Bheja tha.

Main Ny Goli Usky Sir mein maar di Aur Phobe nikal k Comisioner Ko kiya Aur sari baat bata di.

Aur Main Indoo k pass gya jo k wahan behosh pari thi.

Main Ny Mooh py pani dala Jis sy Woh hosh mein i Aur ek dam ghbra gai Aur jb khud ko sahi dekha Aur mujhy dekhty hi Galy lag gai.

Main:- Kuch nahi huwa sab theek hy.

Indoo:- Kon thy woh Aur hum kesy bach gaye.

Main:- Pata nahi kon thy Aur mery hoty huway apko kuch nahi hosakta police waqat py aa gai thi.

Tb tk wahan police bhi aa gai thi Aur kafi bher bhi hogai thi.

Main Ny Comisioner sy keh K ek gari bhi mangwa li thi.

Main:- Chalo pehly Mall ja k kapry lety hain phir Chale gy. Sary kapry khrab hogay hain.

Indoo:- Hmm jesa ap kahy.

Woh abi bhi dari hoi thi ab itna achanak sab kuch hojaye to dar to lagy ga na phir bhi main ny Unko sambhala Aur hum mall chaly gaye Aur wahan sy Aur kaprey liye Aur wahan sy sidha Airport.

Abi bhi mery dill mein wesy hi bechani thi jesy Tab hoti thi.

SOME YEARS BACK AMERICA.

Aj ki shaam bohat ajeeb thi Ek Khali sarak jispy Koi nahi tha Bs khali kisi k hasney ki awaz aa rahi thi.

Yeh Aur koi main tha Aur mery sath 2 log Aur thy. Ek to abhi tha Dosra Amit tha.

NEW CHRACTER

Amit:- Age 24 saal,,,,, jo thory samy pehly America parhny aya hy. Apni behno Aur bua k sath.

Main:- Tum dono hasna baand kro ab.

Abhi(hastey huway):- to Baat ki hassi wali kr rha hy. Hahaha

Amit(hasta huwa):- Matlab full On filmi style Agy batna kya huwa.

Main:- Saloon pehly hasna baand kro warna main ja rha hun.

Amit:- Ruk Ruk... Ham nahi hatey ab.

Abhi:- Han agy bol.

Main:- Kya bolon yr Aj tk Nahi dekha usky bad lekin phir bhi Pyaar hy.

Amit:- Tunay 5 saal ka tha tb dekha tha Mujhy to tb ki apni shakal yaad nahi tujhy uski bhi yaad hy.

Phir hasney lagy dono.

Main:- Ab hy to hy Tum log haso main ja rha hun Subha School bhi jana hy.

Main Yeh keh wahan sy nikal aya woh dono wahin khry hastey rahy.

Agli subha Main School sy ghr aya to Mujhy Amit ka phone aya Usny mujhy apnay ghr bulaya tha.

Main Sham ko tyaar Hokay Uskay ghr ki taraf chala gya Mery sath abhi bhi tha hum dono Usky ghr pohanch gaye. Hum wahan gaye to drwaza knock kiya to Ek Larki ny Darwaza khola.

INTRO:-


Lata(Amit ki bua):- Age 45 Years.

Rashmi(Lata ki beti):-Age 23 Years.

Kiran(Amit ki dusri bua Ki beti):- Age 20 Years.

To be continue.

NOTE:- Agli Update Flashback hoga Koshish kron ga K 1 hi Update mein Flash back pora kr dun lekin Max. 3 Update lagy gy.

Stay Connected Yeh Update Chota hy sorry for that Itna hi likh paya tha.




 
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