Fantasy Saim(Love,Thrill,Romance) (completed)

[CG]

Kidhar gayab Ho Gaye dost aajkal dikh nahi rahe

 

[Stone cold]

UPDATE NO.89
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Next Day Subha Meri Ankh khuli to Kamre mein Soraj ki kirnay mooh py aa rahi thi Main Kuch smajh nahi paa rha tha q k mujhy kal raat ka Suhaag raat k bad ka Kuch bhi Yaad nahi tha.

Main ny Idr Udr dekha To Koi nahi tha.

Main Uth K beth gya tabhi Darwaza khul aur Tanisha Andr i.

Mujhy dekhty hi mery pass i.

Tanisha:- Are Uth gaye ap.? Apki tabiyat kesi hy.?

Main(heran hokay):- Meri Tabiyat ko kya huwa main Bilkul theek hun.? Aur Raat ko kya huwa tha?

Mery gaal py Hath sehla k.

Tanisha:- Meri jaan us baat ko 2 din beet gaue hain Ap 2 din sy Soo rahy thy.

Main Bohat Shocked tha. Us time.

Phir Tanisha Ny Saab ko Awaz di.

Saab Bhaag k kamre mein aye Aur Mera haal chal poch rahy thy.

Main:- Maa Lekin huwa kya tha mujhy to kuch yaad nahi.

Maa:- Beta Tumhary papa Saab bata dy gy Tumhy.

Main:- Mujhy Abi papa sy baat krni hy.

B'bua:- Are Abi to hosh mein aya hy Aram kr Bad mein baat kr lena.

Main:- Nahi Abi krni hy.

Tabhi Kiran Boli.

Kiran:- Nahi Bilkul nahi Abi Aram kro Main Khana lati hu.

Main:- Are Baap ry itna gussa.?

Maa:- Han ji Beta Ab Sabhi teri biwiyan tujhpy Gussa kry Us sy pehly Hi chup hoja.

Rashmi:- To gya beta.

Saab Hasny laag gaye.

Main Uthny laga To mery jism mein Jesy jaan hi nahi thi nain girnay laga tha Tabhi Komal Aur Tanisha Ny Mujhy Pakr liya.

Ayesha:- Dhyaan sy.

Main bohat Pareshan tha Mujhy huwa kya hy.

Phir Tanisha Mujhy Bathroom tk chorkay i.

Main Fresh hokay Naha k bahir nikla to Ab Kuch better tha Ab main sahi chal phir rha tha Lekin koi bhi power nahi Kam kr rahi thi meri. Aur papa Bhi Mujhsy milnay Nahi aye thy.

Main Yeh saab soch hi rha tha Aur saab kery pass hi thy Aur Noor Aur Ratna Khana Khilla rahi thi.

Kuch der baad Papa Finally Kamre mein aye Aur saab Ko Bahir janay ka kaha.

Saab bahir chaly gaye thy.

Main:- Papa yeh saab kya ho rha hy Mujhy kya huwa tha Aur Na hi meri koi power....

Papa:- Mujhy pata hy Beta Tumhry sary sawal main janta hun Aur Unka ek hi jawab hy Aur woh Hy Tumhari shaktiyaan.

Main:- Matlab.?

Papa:- Beta Ab tumhari sari powers puri ho chuki hain Aur Unko sehaan krny k liye tumhara Jism Abhi tyar nahi hy.

Main:- Lekin Agr jism tyaar nahi to Milli q.?

Papa:- Unko Adjust Honay k liye Tumhary jism ko tyaar krna hoga Jismy Kuch waqat lagy ga taab tk tum Shakti heen raho gy.

Main:- Ohh Ab samajh aya.

Papa:- Han isi liye Yeh jagah Safe nahi hy Tumhy Aj Hi gaon chalna hoga.

Main:- woh q.?

Papa:- Q k Koi Bhi buri takat Udhr nahi aa sakti Jb tk tumhy Shaktiyaan Nahi wapis aa jati.

Main:- Hmmm.

Papa:- Aur haan Woh waqat Bohat Nazdeek hy jb woh wapis aye ga Q k jesy hi tumhari takat Pori hoi hy Woh bhi azad ho chuka hy. Lekin Usko Apni takat Ikatha krny k liye Usy waqat lagy ga Kitna Waqat yeh Mujhy bhi nahi pata Woh kabhi bhi B.E. pr Attack Kr sakta hy Tumhy tyaar rhan hoga.

Main:- Theek hy papa Main Tyaar rahun ga.

Papa:- Mujhy Tumsy yeh hi umeed thi. Hum sham Ko gaon jaa rahy hain.

Main:- Ok papa.

Phir papa Mery Ek baar galy lag k chala gya Aur Usnkay jaty hi phir saab Andr agai Aur Pochny lagi papa ny kya kaha.?

Phir main ny sari baat bata di Aur hum Janay ki tyaari krny lagy.

Sham Ko Hum Nikal gaye Indoo Aur Bua Bohat Roo rahi thi Lekin saab ko milty rehnay ka keh hum nikal gaye.

Kuch ghantoon k Saafar k bad hum Gao pohanch gaye Aur Haveli main Jakay Apnay Apnay Kamre Decide kiye Saab Ny jodi mein Room liya tha Aur mery sath Kiran Aur Komal Soti thi

Main Ny Apni Sehat ka dhyaan rakha Aur bs Office ka kam dekhta tha Aur Raat ko Bari bari saab ki Khoob bjata tha.

Shaadi k baad Bs Apni patniyoun k Illawa bs Maa k sath sex kiya tha Main ny Aisy hi waqat guzar rha tha hassi khushi. Itnay Mein Bua Aur Aunty dono ny Nanhi pariyoun ko janam diya. Aur Meri sabhi patniya Garbwati hogai Ek ek kr k.

Aisy Hi 1.5 saal Guzar gya.

To Be continue.

Note:- Next Update Will Be Finall.

Hmmm kya bolu Bhai itne din busy tha is liye Xf se offline ho liya tha magar Jaise hi Yaha Yaha aur story pada kya bolu I am totally shocked

Pehle to story Achi ja rahi thi phir Kiran ki Entry I really loved that scene there past was heart touching phir India Mai jab wo ayi to in dono Ka Amna samna and then her kidnap by Raka... Aur Raka Ka Beta hi Shakti nikla wo action bhi jabardast tha...

Magar update 88 and 89 mujhe bilkul Pasand Nahi ayi..
Aisa bhi hota hai kya ek hi update Mai Shadi phir shuhagraat wo bhi 9 Apsarao ke sath no sex scene chalo sex scene Gaya Tel lene magar yar Uske agle hi update Mai Bache bhi paida ho Gaye aur ab is story Ka last update ayega

Kya bolu Yaar ek to pehle hi bohot se characters missing hai
Example Ishika Jiske sath US Mai competition hua tha.. itna Acha buildup Diya usse magar wo to ab ek Mystery ban gayi
Phir Avni personal mujhe laga tha wo bhi is story Mai acha role play karegi mar wo to Mr.India nikli
Aur wo Pari Lok ki Priti uska bhi scene Nahi dikhaya
Aur wo Raka ki Beti wo bhi Kuch deserve Karti hai magar Nahi sabko gayab kardiya...
Blue Empire Mai bhi bohot Kuch ho Sakta hai.. Itna power full opponent hai
Bolne jau to ab bhi is kahani Mai bohot Kuch Baki hai magar aap to story ko End Kar wale ho..

Bro mere is comment ko negative way Mai na Lena Mai samajh Sakta hu tum abhi Busy honge personal life Mai and you don't want to leave this Story Incomplete.. I really appreciate your Thoughts...
Aur aaj ya kal iska final update bhi aa hi Jayega... I really don't mind that because ab tak itna Raita to Fail Gaya aur Sahi..

Lekin Bro Personally ek baat kehna chahuga Jab bhi tum Free hoge and you want to write something... To is story ko ek naye Sire se shuru karna... I would be glad to Read that

Waiting for last update

 

[Khanji]

Hmmm kya bolu Bhai itne din busy tha is liye Xf se offline ho liya tha magar Jaise hi Yaha Yaha aur story pada kya bolu I am totally shocked

Pehle to story Achi ja rahi thi phir Kiran ki Entry I really loved that scene there past was heart touching phir India Mai jab wo ayi to in dono Ka Amna samna and then her kidnap by Raka... Aur Raka Ka Beta hi Shakti nikla wo action bhi jabardast tha...

Magar update 88 and 89 mujhe bilkul Pasand Nahi ayi..
Aisa bhi hota hai kya ek hi update Mai Shadi phir shuhagraat wo bhi 9 Apsarao ke sath no sex scene chalo sex scene Gaya Tel lene magar yar Uske agle hi update Mai Bache bhi paida ho Gaye aur ab is story Ka last update ayega

Kya bolu Yaar ek to pehle hi bohot se characters missing hai
Example Ishika Jiske sath US Mai competition hua tha.. itna Acha buildup Diya usse magar wo to ab ek Mystery ban gayi
Phir Avni personal mujhe laga tha wo bhi is story Mai acha role play karegi mar wo to Mr.India nikli
Aur wo Pari Lok ki Priti uska bhi scene Nahi dikhaya
Aur wo Raka ki Beti wo bhi Kuch deserve Karti hai magar Nahi sabko gayab kardiya...
Blue Empire Mai bhi bohot Kuch ho Sakta hai.. Itna power full opponent hai
Bolne jau to ab bhi is kahani Mai bohot Kuch Baki hai magar aap to story ko End Kar wale ho..

Bro mere is comment ko negative way Mai na Lena Mai samajh Sakta hu tum abhi Busy honge personal life Mai and you don't want to leave this Story Incomplete.. I really appreciate your Thoughts...
Aur aaj ya kal iska final update bhi aa hi Jayega... I really don't mind that because ab tak itna Raita to Fail Gaya aur Sahi..

Lekin Bro Personally ek baat kehna chahuga Jab bhi tum Free hoge and you want to write something... To is story ko ek naye Sire se shuru karna... I would be glad to Read that

Waiting for last update

First Of All welcome back on XF I Really Miss your Reviews.
Aur Rahi baat story End krny ki To uski bhi wajah hy bhai mujhy Bohat ideas hain Agy main bohat kuch likh sakta hun lekin bhai Is story ko Us tariky sy pura krna jesa main chahta tha usky liye bilkul Time Nahi hy Life Bohat Busy ho gai hy Aur Rahi baat Chracters ki To woh Last Update Mein Clear kr dun ga Hope You Understand

 

[Pta nhi]

Sath bany rahiye Bilkul Abi bohat Role hy bhai

And u end this story without this..

 

[Pta nhi]

Without any Shikha role

 

[Nadan Dill]

First Of All welcome back on XF I Really Miss your Reviews.
Aur Rahi baat story End krny ki To uski bhi wajah hy bhai mujhy Bohat ideas hain Agy main bohat kuch likh sakta hun lekin bhai Is story ko Us tariky sy pura krna jesa main chahta tha usky liye bilkul Time Nahi hy Life Bohat Busy ho gai hy Aur Rahi baat Chracters ki To woh Last Update Mein Clear kr dun ga Hope You Understand

bhaii Agar bzy ho to ap kuch din ka liea story ko chor doo jb free ho gaa to shuro kar dana

 

[urc4me]

Dhamakedar antim update ka intejar.

 

[tpk]

waiting for next update

 

[Akil]

Intazaar

 

[Naik]

इन्तजार कर रहे है दोस्त अपडेट का