Bahut gajab likha hai lekin aap bahut jaldi me rahate ho isko aur bada likhana chaiye tha donon ke bich kuch ashlil bate hoti ma sharamati beta aggressive hota aur koi 15 min ki batchit ke bad ma bhaag jati, aap situation creat bahut achhi karte ho magar uska pura use nhi krte ho , ekdam se use chhod dete ho jab ki use exploit karne ka waqt aata hai, pata nhin aapko us samay kuchh aage ka sujhata nhin hai aur aapko lagata hai ki yeh sufficient hai,ya isase aage ka aap sochte hi nhin to likhenge kya? But iske aage hi real maza shuru hota hai, aap jyada aage Tak likha kijiye jaldi se action ya baat karwana band kar ke update end na kiya kare, jb tak maza aana shuru hota hai aapka end ho jata hai abruptly