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Fantasy Sameer urf Sam Hero or Vilian {devil &angel}

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Zas23

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Update 53

Main ok mom.fresh hony k lye jesy hi bathroom k andar gya to .komal di mjy kench lya apny pass
Main is tarha achanak howy hamly sy Dar gya
Komal .ny mery face py ungli rakh k boli k kia howa babu

Main .di apny to mjy dara hi day hy


Komal .Hans k heheh itny choti si bat sy Dar gye


Main .aap yahan kia krhi ho mery bathroom main Han


Komal .w/o main tum ko dekhny ayi thi andar .

Main.Acha dekh lya ab jao n.a. bathroom sy .

Komal meri bat sun sad ho k jany lgti hy

Main ny jb us ka face dekha mjy bhot hansi mery hasny sy di naraz hogyi abhi w/o mery room sy bahr niklny wali thi k main bhag kr gya di ka hath pakr lya aur galy lga lya .


Komal .di k ankho main anso thy .

Main ny jb di k ankho main aanso dekhy to mjy bhot bura lga . pirh main ny di k face sy aanso saf kye

Komal.di abhi bhi ro rhi thi
Main. di plzz chp kr jao n.a. main mazaq kr rha tha as k sath di k gal py girny waly anso chatny lgta hn

Komal ny .phly to thori meri pakr sy azad hony k zoor lgaya jb UN k Gusa thora cool howa to pirh di ny meri kamar py mukoon ki barsaat kr di aur boli pirh aesa kro gy mera sath Han .


Main.dard ka natak krty howy ahha ni meri maan meri aesi majaal kahan k kuch kro ab main ap k sath .


Komal di aesa sochna bhi Mat Han

Main ny apna face di k face k qareeb laya us k honth py apny honth rakh k chosny lga bhot mazy Dar ahsas mjy horha tha aesy LG rha tha k main har wqt di k hont chosta rhn .mery kiss krny sy di bhi mera sath deny lgi kiss main .

Komal ny apny hath mery hair py gumhany lgi kbhi meri kamar py hath gumhati.
Main to aesi dunya main ghom rha tha k kia btao main .

Komal .ny jb dekha k Sam kiss ko tb tak ni chory ga tb tak w/o khd n.a. chory kiss to us k dimAgh main aik sharart ayi di mjy kiss krty howy door k pass agyi

Main ny ankhien bnd ki thi aur kiss ko mhsos kr rha tha mjy kuch pta ni tha di mery sath kia krna chati hy .


Komal ny achanak mjy pechy dakha dya aur kudh bagh k mery room sy bahr bhag gyi

Main jb tak kuch smjta di door sy niklny wali mjy apni zuban dikha k cherny lgi. jb main di pakrny k lye bhaga to w/o jildi sy room sy bahr nikl gyi.


Phly to mjy di k aesy jany sy Gusa aya liken pirh di ka Masoom face agya jiski waja sy muskra para aur bathroom gya fresh hony k lye





Nice update
 

Zas23

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Update 5

fresh ho k bahr ata hn .nechy sb bethy hoty Hein .

Ghr main aj bhot pyara LG rha (naina) ki waja sy W/o apni totli zuban sy sb ko hansa rhi thi .jesy hi us ny mjy dekha bhagh kr mery pass ayi.

Main kesi ho meri gudiya

Naina .slow vice main Thek hn dad but ap sy naraz hn.

Main .Kia howa mery bachy ko kyn naraz ho mery sy.

Naina.ap ny mjy aj chocolate bhi ni di aj .


Main oh to ya bat hy apni pocket sy chocolat nikal k di.

Naina chocolat dekh kr bhoot kush howi mery gall py kiss kr di.


Sab ghr waly hamari aur dekh k muskra rhy thy.avni to mjy Gusa sy ghoor rhi thi samj ni ayi kia waja hy. aesy ghoor rhi mjy.

Mom ny bola k ao ab khana khao beta.


Main .gudiya ko otha kr table k pass aagya.


Teble py har jaga py koe n.a. koe betha howa sirf avni k pass jaga thi .mom ny gudiya ko apny pass betha dia .
Main avni k pass Beth gya .

Avni. Ny mjy apny pass bethy howy dekh kr apna hath meri chair py rakh dia
Main us ka hath ni dekha sedha chair py betha liken jild hi us ny meri gand py chtki kaat li jis ki waja sy mery mnh sy dard ki awaz nikl gyi ahaha




Mom kia howa beta .


Avni ny bhi mjy dekh k Kaha kia howa babu.

Main avni ko ghoor k bola mjy lgta hy kisi cheez ny kaaat lya hy.

Avni. Katal muskan k sath boli hoshayar betho pirh koe chez kaat n.a. ly pirh aik martaba sakht chtkii kaat li.

Main ab ki uchal k khara hogya aur jidar avni ny chtki Kati us ko zoor zor sy maslny lga .


Avni Hans k kia howa ab.


Main avni ko dekh k bola kuch ni.

Ab avni ny bhi kuch harkat ni ki araam sy khana khany lgi

Main ny thora easy feel kia khana khany lga.


Khana k bad jb main othny lga to avni ny bola k Sam thori Der bad mery room main Ana .


Main .ny slow voice main bola k main ni any wala tumhary room main samji Han.



Avni.ny jesy meri bat suni yukdum Gusa agya us k face py boli 15 mint bAd mery room main mojood hona samjy.

Jistarha os ny bola main bhi Dar gya aur bola Han ajao ga .tumhary sath to main mazaq krrha tha.


Avni meri bat sun k thori muskra k boli k mazaq main ni kr rhi hn samjy oth k chli gyi.

Hamari batien Sun rhy thy jesy main ny sb ki tarf dekha to sb mjy aesy ghoor rhy. jesy main kisi aur duniya sy aya hn .main UN k samny bola k main kisi sy ni darta hn main ni jany wala avni k passs.



Komal.meri bat sun muskra k boli tum ni darty ho avni sy.


Main bilkul ni darta.



Komal .aesi bat hy too zorr sy boli avni Sam kia bol rha bahr ao.


Main Han Han ajaye main kisi sy ni darta hn jesy hi main ny ya bola k pechy sy avni ki awaz ayi kia howa di .


Komal di w/o tum Sam sy pucho kia bol rha hy.

Main .haqla k bola kuch bhi to ni bola main .


Sab log meri halat dekh k zor sy hasny lgy.

Avni. Ny bola koe mjy bhi btaye kyn Hans rhy ho Sab log.

Komal.kuch ni yaar abhi yahan py aik sher aya tha liken bhot jild geedar bn gya zoor zoor sy hasny lgi.

Main ny apna popat bnty howy dekha to jildi sy oth k apny room ki tarf bhaga pechy sb k hansny ki awaz thi



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Nice update
 

JigsRock

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Is tarh chalta raha to story me age kya hua kya scene the sab dimag se nikal gaya ab kya kare????
 
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