Update 01
South Atlantic Ocean me apni manzil ki or badh raha Harmony Of The Seas nami ship, us ship ke antim floor ki chhat par khada hua Thakur Daksh Singh.
apne desh se hazaron mile door, apnu se 6 saal se door ek marine life ji raha tha daksh. sab uske liye mar chuke the aur wo sab ke liye..
6 years.....
6 saalon se daksh thakur ne kisi ki koi bhi khabar nahi li thi. wahan se nikale jaane ke baad (dhutkar kar, zaleel karke nikaale jaane ke baad) kon is dunya me aaya aur kon is dunya se gaya. daksh thakur nahi janta tha.
dada, dadi, maa, papa, bhai behen, chacha chachi, unke bachhe aur dusre sab abhi bhi ji rahe han ya mar gaye han. daksh thakur nahi janta tha. aur na hi jaanna chahta tha. daksh thakur kisi ke baare me jaanne ki zarurat bhi nahi samjhta thi.
everyone hated him and he hated everyone
saalon se sabse door tha daksh fir bhi.. wo awazen, wo cheekhen, wo alfaz, wo nafrat wo dhutkaar, usay aaj bhi yaad thi. jab bhi un awazon ki goonj uske andar goonjti thi to wo pagal sa hone lagta hon.
zindagi......
zinda rehne ko dil nahi chahta tha daksh ka. par mar bhi nahi sakta tha.. itna dard bhar dia gaya tha uske andar. apne sharir ke andar se aatma tak ko nikaal bahar karne ke liye daksh thakur kya kuch nahi kar jaya karta tha. dunya ka konsa aisa khatarnaak kaam tha, jo daksh thakur ne na kiya ho. samudra ki us gehraai tak wo ja pohnchaa tha, jahan tak pohnch paana shayad kisi ke liye mumkin na raha ho..
par daksh thakur.....
daksh thakur bina kisi darr khauf ke har khatarnaak gehraai me utar jaya karta tha. suicide karne ki koshish kabhi nahi ki thi daksh thakur ne. haan jis kaam me uski jaan jaane ke 80%-90% bhi chances karte to wo zarur kar jaya karta tha.
dunya me koi bhi kaam 100% dangerous nahi tha daksh thakur ke liye.. agar hota to wo kab ka mar chuka hota.. usay mila dard usay is dunya ko chhod kar jaane bhi nahi deta tha.
Diksh became a multi-talented man because of the dangers he faced.
shayad wo marna bhi nahi chahta tha. agar mar jata to fir wo usay kaise hasil kar pata. ek wahi to thi jiske liye wo marna nahi chahta tha.. wo bhi daksh se nafrat karti thi..
she hated him immensely.....
wahi thi jiski waja se daksh ki zindagi barbad ho gai thi, wahi thi jiski waja se daksh thakur ko maut nahi aa rahi thi. wahi thi jiske milne ki aas liye daksh thakur hamesha hi khatron se lad jaya karta tha. jahan yakeeni maut hua karti thi, daksh thakur wahan se bhi bach jaya karta tha.
wahi thi jisne daksh thakur ko barbad kar dia tha.. wahi thi jise paane ke liye daksh thakur hamesha se betaab raha tha. wahi thi, jo shayad kabhi badal kar daksh thakur ki zindagi me firse bhi aa jaaye to daksh thakur kabhi bhi usay na apna sakun..
kuch aise hi vichar daksh thakur ke the.
kaisi ajeeb baat thi, jise daksh thakur beinteha chahta tha, jise paane ke liye daksh thakur marna bhi nahi chahta tha. jise paane ke liye daksh thakur zinda tha. agar kabhi wo daksh thakur ki zindagi me aa bhi jaati to daksh thakur usay paaye bina side se nikal jata..
jis tarha se daksh thakur ko dhutkaar dia gaya tha. shayad wo bhi kabhi moka milne par usay dhutkaar deta..
"mujhe nafrat ha tumse shadeed nafrat... i hate you daksh.. i hate you.. And I will always hate you.. mar jana par kabhi mujhse apni surat matt dikhana thuuuuuuuuuu.."
"tumm.. tumm.. mere bhai nahi ho sakte daksh.. nahi.. nahi.. tum mere bhai nahi ho sakte.. aisi neech harkat karne wala kabhi mera bhai ho hi nahi sakta.. dafa ho jaao hamari zindagi se hamesha hamesha ke liye.. kabhi apni ghattiya surat leke mere saamne bhi matt aana"
"tu meri kokh me hi kyun nahi mar gaya paapi.. kaash mujhe pata hota tu aisa nikle ga. toh main khud tujhe apne hathon se apni kokh me hi maar deti.. agar aisa kiya hota to aaj aisa din dekhna naseeb nahi hota"
"kitna chah thi mujhe ek waris ki.. kitni khushiyan manaai thi hum sab ne tere janam din par.. par tum.. tum to hamara khun kehlwane layak nahi ho. dafa ho jaao meri haveli se.. fir kabhi yahan matt aana"
"hamesha hi main khud par garv kiya karta tha tujhe apna beta paa kar.. par tu.. par tu hi mere aur mere khandan ki izzat ko mitti me mila gaya.. apne hi ghar ki bahu betiyon ki izzat ke sath khelne laga.. thuuuuuu ha tujh par.. nikalllll jaaa mere ghar se.. nikal ja hum sab ki zindgiyon se..
"nikallll jaa"
"nikallll jaa"
"nikallll jaa"
"nikallll jaa"
aakash me badal nahi the, chandni raat thi, stars chamak rahe the. thandi thandi hawa chal rahi thi. mausam suhana tha, toofan ke aane ka koi amkaan nahi tha.. par jo tofaan baar baar daksh thakur ke andar aane lagta tha. wo samudri toofan se kahin badh kar tha..
kuch bhi to nahi bhula tha daksh thakur.. sab kuch aise yaad tha daksh thakur ko, jaise kuch samay pehle ki baat ho.. firse sab yaad aane laga to uske andar ki aag firse badhne lagi. aise samay me koi kam hi uske saamne aaya karta tha.. wehshi ban jaya karta tha daksh thakur. wo pagal to nahi hota tha. lekin pagal pan ki hadd se bhi kahin badh jaya karta tha.
daksh thakur ship par pichhle 3 saal se as a engineer kaam kar raha tha. is kaam me bhi daksh thakur slefmade tha. dekh kar sab sekh gaya tha. bina degree ke hi wo ship par as a negineer kaam kar raha tha...
daksh thakur ke andar ki ghutan badhne lagi to chhat chhat par maujud intercom se neeche call karke batane laga
"main samudra me utarna chahta hon"
daksh thakur ki baat ka dhayan hamesha hi rakha jata tha. kuch der me ship dheere hokar samudra me hi ruk gaya..
raat ka akhri pehr tha. toh ship ke staf ke siva sare passengers so rahe the.. apne kapdee utaar kar, ek underwear me chhat par rehte hue hi ek long jump lagaya daksh thakur ne aur dono hath aage karte hue seedha samudra ke paani me ja pohnchaa..
paani ko cheerte hue wo bohut neeche tak gaya... fir wapis upar ki or uthne laga.. jald hi wo paani ki satah par tha. daksh thakur firse paani me jane hi wala tha keh upar asmaan se ek tez roshni ki lakeer si chamakti hui neeche apni or aate hue daksh ko dikhi..
roshni ki us lakeer ki speed bohut zayada thi. daksh heran hota usse pehle hi wo roshni ki lakeer niche aate hi usse takra gai..
roshni ke takrane se daksh thakur ko 440 volt ka jhatka laga.. daksh bina tadpe hi paani me bohut neeche jaa kar behosh ho gaya... high voltage se lagne wala jhatka wo sehn nahi kar paya tha.
hosh aane par daskh ne ankh khol kar pehle right fir left dekha.. khud ko sahil par lete hue paya to firse ankhen band kar leen.. first to daksh ko yaad hi nahi raha tha raat wo ship par tha aur samudra me naha raha tha..
jaise hi usay sab yaad aaya woh ek jhatke me uth baitha.. uthtte hi wo firse sahil ki dhadam se let gaya..
daksh khud se.. ye mujhe itni weekness kyun feel ho rahi ha. aise jaise main saalon se bhuka hon. jaise maine apne andar ki sari ka upayug kar liya ho. daksh jaise bhi karke khud ke andar bachi khushi shakti ko ikatha karne laga.. wo ladkhadata hua uth khada hua. daksh aas paas dekhne laga.. dekhne par paya keh wo to ek mini island par tha.
what is this.. how is this possible.. main to ship ke paas naha raha tha. yahan kaise aa gaya..
daksh samudra kinare khada island ko dekhne lagta toh kabhi samudra me.. door door tak usay wo ship nazar nahi aa raha tha.. uske aas paas island ke siva kuch bhi nahi tha. kuch tha toh charon or samudra ka paani tha.
"tum bhul gaye daksh, tum samudra me naha rahe the.. main asmaan se girte hue tumse takra gai thi..tumse takrate hi main tumme samati chali gai thi.. tum meri power ko sehn nahi kar paaye aur behosh ho gaye"
awaz sunkar daksh ladkhada gaya.. woh charon dishaon me dekhne laga.. but body here and there.
"yahan tumhare aas paas koi nahi ha daksh. jo tumhe nazar aa sake.. yahan is sansan island par tum ho aur ek main hon"
daksh ki hairat kam hi nahi ho rahi thi.
daksh : tum kahan ho, tum mujhe nazar kyun nahi aa rahi.. kya tum invisible ho..
main tumhare andar hon"
daksh : what nonsense.. aisa kaise ho sakta hai. koi kisi ke andar kaise samaa sakta ha. tum zarur invisible ho. aur mujhse jhut bol rahi ha
"i'm not lying daksh.. main sach me hi tumhare andar hon.. raat main seedhe tumse takrate hi tumme samaa gai thi. yahi waja bani jo mere dushman mujhe pa nahi sake"
daksh firse baith gaya.. apne sarr ko dono hathon se thaam kar wo us awaz wali se bola
daksh : are you still kidding me?
"nahi daksh mujhe kya zarurat ha.. tumse mazak karne ki"
daksh : to mujhe bataao, tum... tum kaise mere andar samaa sakti ho aur tum ho kon, asmaan se kaise aa sakti ho tum.. asmaan se aane wala aise to nahi aata. koi aa bhi jaaye to uska zinda bachna mumkin nahi ha.
"Ehehehehe.. ek sath itne sawal"
daksh : to batao mujhe, khud se hi sab bata do..
"universe me itne secrets han, kisi bhi planet par rehne wale pure universe ke secrets nahi jaan sakte.. main bhi aise hi palnet se aai hon"
daksh : This is all nonsense.. aisa kuch bhi nahi ha.. prithvi ke siva kisi aur planet par zindagi mumkin nahi ha. agar ha toh prithvi par uska pohnch pana mumkin nahi ha..
"daksh thakur is universe me sab mumkin ha.. apni dunya ke baare me bataao, hazaron saal pehle rehne wale kisi ek bhi viyakti ko zinda karke aaj ki dunya dikha di jaaye to wo dekh kar yahi kahega asambhav.. ye nahi ho sakta.. daksh everything is possible in this universe.. aise bohut se secrets han, jintak koi nahi pohnch sakta"
uski baaten sunkar daksh ke sarr me dard hone laga tha.
daskh : mujhe bas itna bata do, agar tum sach me hi mere andar ho to mujhe mehsus kya nahi ho raha..
" daksh main tumhe dikh to nahi sakti par tum mujhe mehsus kar sakte ho"
daksh : wo kaise?
"wo aise keh tum apni ankhen band kar apni dono ankhon ke bech me dekho"
daksh uski baat sunkar ankhen band kar gaya.. fir wo usi ke bataye huwe par amal karne laga
daskh : ye kya mujhe to white white dikh raha ha sab
"ab apni ankhon par dono hath rakh kar dekho"
daksh ne apni ankhon me dono hath rakh kar dekah toh
daksh : oh my God tum to mujhe sach me dikh rahi ho.. tumhari surat mujhe puri kyun nahi dikha de rahi
"tum abhi nahi dekh sakte.. uske liye apni brain power badhani hogi.. tumne abhi ghor bhi nahi kiya daksh. tumhari power achanak se kam kaise ho gai"
daksh : haan ye baat to bhul hi gaya tha. tumne to mujhe kuch sochne layak chhoda hi kahan tha.
"tum behosh ho gaye the to main apne dushmano ki pohnch se door hone ke liye apni power ka use karte hue, behoshi me hi tumhe is island par le aai.. ye island us ship se 300 mile door ha.. isi waja se tumhari power down hui ha daksh"
daksh ne apne dono hath apni ankhon se hata kar apni ankhen khol deen..
Imagination Story.. All words are my own thoughts.. kisi jevit ya marit ka is kahani se koi sambandh nahi ha..
all sentences of this story are for only intertainment.. kahani padh kar maza len. There is no need to think anything else..
I have noticed that good writers get good support... toh maine bhi socha kuch apna brainwa me chal rahi story ko words ki suratwa me aap sab ke saamne prastut kar dia jaaye.. kitna achha writer ban sakunga, nahi jaanta. par achha likhne la prayaas jarur karunga.
story earth aur ek dusre planet se judi hui hogi. dusra palnet jiska naam nimoonica ha.. us planet par rehne walun ko nimoon kaha jata tha..
i can give 2 or 3 updates in a week..
Dhanyavaad!!
Aapne concept to bahut hi jabarjast chuna hai dekhte hai Aapki lekhni yha ke readero ko khush kr pati hai ya nhi...
2 planet ke Bich story Chalne vali hai, daksh ke andar ye jo aai hai kya hai vo koi yantra, ladki ya alian... Uska pichha Kon kr rha tha kya vo bhi uske hi Jaise hai ya fir vo kuchh or hi hai, kya uske dushman ne bhi kisi human ke andar ghuskr panah li hai ya vo vatavaran me swatantra rahkr hi kaam karenge... Sawal to bahut hai pr Vo sabhi baad me... Superb update bhai sandar jabarjast
